WANT MORE~!!
THANK YOU~!!
I want more time to write too...but things don't always work out the way we want it =(
Cool you updated!
I was so afraid things might go wrong but yea it worked out perfectly
especially for Takamina getting a kiss on the cheek by Aachan 
Woah when Haruna gives Yuko the bag she might see the stains and start thinking
hahaha Miichan and Sado arguing is just so funny
I don't mind waiting at all as long as you don't give up on the story! Don't get yourself too stressed!
I don't want Acchan to know yet so Kai/Nami has it easy...in the end...MUAHAHAHAHAHA she's gonna die >=D I'm kidding....
I guess I'm putting too much foreshadowing....
Thanks for waiting =) hope you won't wait too long for the next chapter
i was expecting an angry Gakuran!
hahahahaha!
but its Ok!
Oh, don't you worry, that's coming soon....MAYBE =)
I agree that you agree that I agree that we have great mind 
I was smilling even before read ypur fic when I saw you updated lol
Can't wait for the scene when Torigoya will give the bag to Yuko ^^
Minami & Atsuko moment = win 
Miichan ahahahah this character would always make me smile
LOL I'm smiling just because I saw your reply....
The scene with Torigoya giving the bag to Yuko will come soon...I promise?
Does that mean you'd like more Takacchan moment rather than say....KojiYuu? I dunno man, KojiYuu is like funnier but Takacchan is cute.....mhmm
Miichan....what can I say, she's the best =)
Thank for telling me I'm important...... but stop it, it's embarassing 
I don't think me and this relationship with writing fanfics will last very long......
OOoohhhh.... I don't know why but I just had the urge to quote this and say +1 
Seriously, with me it's always "omg I want to start a fanfic! I'm motivated yeah!" and like 2/3 months later I'm like "Hell why did I decide to start a fic when I freaking don't have idea/time" -.-'
But back to your fic. Thank for updating! I'll do the same soon... ... maybe.
LOL that's what I call being saved, right Kai? 
But seriously, he's stupid to have told her he was Kazuki when he could just have said he was "Kai" -.-' I was expecting Gakuran to come... but maybe he'd rather kill Kazuki/Kai in secret Poor Atsuko... I'm kinda beginning to dislike Minami to lie this way to her best friend 
And can't wait for whatever is going to happen between Yuko and Torigoya ^^
Good luck with your lack of motivation and come back with another chapter as soon as you can! 
EDIT: New page! Yay for you!
But it's so fun making you embarrassed though, taking all my fun away? tsk tsk tsk...
It's like so I dunno, at first I was itching to write but now it's like....meh.....LOL
I guess, in my fanfic, Kai is really lucky....maybe I should make him unlucky soon.....>=D
Gakuran can be very evil...I promise....I already thought of a way of how Gakuran gets back at Kai but that comes later....maybe in like 3-4 chapters later....GAKURAN IS EVIL I TELL YOU.....EVILLLLLLL....that's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Yuko and Torigoya moments are like the easiest and funniest to write for me...so that's coming pretty soon.....
THIS WAS THE CHAPTER THAT I WAS STUCK ON FOR THE LONGEST TIME....so if it sucks I'M SORRY....
They kissed.....they....kissed....they kissed.... OMG they kissed!!!
uh-oh.....Kai vs Gakuran..ITS TO MUCH!!
Please update soon
So you're satisfied with only a kiss on the cheek? Wow, you're easy to please, not that that is a bad thing or anything.....
Kai vs Gakuran= BOXING MATCH?... (Referee: "READY TO FIGHT? GO!" *Audience yells "FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT"*)
Wish granted? Maybe?
I'm really sorry if this chapter sucks but this is the chapter that I was stuck on the whole time.....IT SUCKS....I AGREE....but it's needed to move things on.......
Thanks for reading
Chapter 12
-Next week-
“Mhmm, what happened to them?” Marilyn asked as throughout the week, the three boys were spaced out whenever they had free time and not on screen.
“Something that they weren’t suppose to…” Shachou said as squinted her eyes at them.
“At least there are no bad rumors or anything…and you don’t have to worry that they are running around the place.” Marilyn said as she wanted to ease the kids some pain from the maybe whipping they will get.
“I guess…”
“We will now start soon.” A staff came into their waiting room to warn them that should be entering the filming area.
“Hai.” Riku was the first to snap out of his state of blankness and shook the other two out of their thoughts.
-On set-
MC asked the boys about their first meeting, how they were made into the group Persona, how’d they feel about their new single and all that fun stuff, such that people could be more aware of their existence. As time was nearing to an end, the MC started on a brand new topic.
“Have you guys heard of idols that you can meet on like a daily basis?” The MC asked as the boys looked at each other confused. “Well, in other words, competition. A well known producer, Akimoto Yasushi, is trying to create a new girl group whose goal is normal idols that you can meet. Just like SDN48, but for any type of audience, not just older audience like for SDN48 but for kids your age too.”
“That sounds like a lot of fun.” Kuu commented.
“Well, the main details aren’t confirmed yet but it seems like this is a fresh new concept that hasn’t been touched on. How do you guys feel about competition?” The MC asked as the boys all looked confident.
“As they say, with rivalries one can get better at what they do.” Riku said
“Even if they are girls, I’m not backing down.” Kai added
“Maybe we might be able to become friends. No one can ever have enough friends.” Kuu said as he thought that those girls might share the same interests as her…Lolita clothing….
“Well said. That’s all the time we have today, we’ll end off by showing Persona’s PV for their debut single 3seconds.”
-Off air-
“Good job boys, hopefully I’ll see you guys soon.” The MC person said.
“Thank you very much.” The three boys said in sync and soon afterwards, they excused themselves.
-Waiting room-
“Ahh, so nice…how come they decide to have a massive girl group AFTER we debut as men.” Riku was still displeased with the fact that he had to debut as male instead of who he truly is…a female.
“Hinata also wants to be female.” Kuu said as he went back to referring himself in third person perspective.
“Too late now, what’s done is done.” Kai said as he was thankful that he didn’t debut as female since it would cause a lot more headaches than the ones he has now. But one of the problems that he would be willing to trade away would be the diva. Kai shivered.
‘I just shivered…my inner senses are tingling…RAY.’ Kai thought as his sensors were right on the mark.
“KAI! I missed you so much. Did you miss me?” Ray came running in and latched onto Kai at first instinct.
“Ray-san, were kind of busy…” Kai said as he totally noticed the other two smirk at the predicament that he’s in.
“But you never call or message me… I was thought you were too busy for me...” Ray said as she continued into a more dead panned voice thereafter, “either that, or you’re cheating on me.”
“What?!?! No. No. I'm not cheating on you.” Kai said as he blushed red while his hand unconsciously touched the cheek where Atsuko’s lips brushed past.
“That’s right, Kai would never cheat on me.” Ray said in bliss.
“Wait, what? Cheating on you? But we’re not even going out. Regardless, I couldn’t have been cheating on you.” Kai rephrased his words.
“I thought you said that we’re moving into a relationship.” Ray said as she had a frown on and her eyes were watering to the point where tears would stream down any moment.
“Kai.” Shachou said in a high pitch and did a hand motion of cracking a whip.
‘I can’t…disobey…’
“As I’ve said before, I’ve only met you twice so far, you have to give me time. Start things slowly. Most importantly, friends first.” Kai said
“Well, if you move in with me then you can see me every day.” Ray said with a grin
“Have you ever had friends who you’ve met twice and had them move in with you? I bet you, you have not.”
“But you could be the first.” Ray said as she blushed slightly.
“No Ray, to me, work comes first.” Kai said
“Well, we can duet then work and love will come first.”
“I’m really happy about how you feel about me, but I like the people I’m working with right now.” Kai looked at Riku, Kuu, Marilyn and Shachou.
“More than me?” Ray started to pout and sadly look down to the floor.
“You’re a special case.”
‘Me and my big mouth, it just won’t shut up. Either that or I just don’t think before I speak, do I?’ Kai thought as Ray engulfed him in a hug.
‘You mean a total nut case.’ Riku thought as he started feeling bad for Kai. ‘This is just like Yuko and me but I have it easier, I can push her away…Kai can’t, or he’s not allowed to.’
Ray let Kai off from her hug as she clapped her hands and her body guard came in and placed a box on the table with a couple plates and forks, and a knife.
“Kai, I made you a cake. I hope you like it.” Ray looked shy as she started opening the box. “It’s my first time and I’m sharing that with you. Hopefully, of many first times.” Ray gave a seductive look towards Kai.
Kai’s eyes started twitching as he took a good look at the cake…especially the color of the cake, BLUE. ‘It’s got to be food coloring to spice things up…’ Kai tried to reason to himself.
“Mhmm, tastes good.” Kuu took a taste of the cake’s blue cream.
“Bleh, it’s…something else.” Riku said as he also took a small taste.
“It’s not for you two, it’s all for Kai.” Ray stared at the two boys who defiled her beloved cake for Kai.
Kuu pouted as he really liked the taste of the cake, the cake’s taste is out of this world. Riku just looked happy to be out of the task of eating the cake.
Kai took a fork and forked some cake and shoved it down his throat. The taste made him want to puke out last night’s dinner.
“Kai, I’m going to the washroom. I’ll be right back.” Ray said as she looked happy as Kai ate her cake.
“Quickly, shove the cake behind the coach.” Riku said as Kuu didn’t understand why they had to hide the cake. Kai shoved the cake behind the coach as Kuu pouted.
“Kai, you finished my cake.” Ray came back and saw that the cake was all gone. Ray was really happy that Kai appreciated her cake.
“Yeah…it was different from store bought ones.” Kai said
“Yeah it tasted so much better.” Kuu said
“Thanks, but the cake was for Kai.” Ray glared at Kuu again.
Kai put his hand on Ray’s shoulder to calm her down.
“It’s ok, I like to share.”
“But I made it especially for Kai.” Ray pouted
“And I finished the cake. Don’t worry.” Kai lied, “Don’t you have work?”
“Mhmm, but Kai’s here and not at work with me, so I’d rather stay here.”
The day didn’t end without Kai having to promise Ray out to a date when they were both free. Kai only promised to, one, get the diva out of his hair…literally, Ray loves to feel Kai’s hair though her hands and fingers, two, so that they can get back to work and lastly, three, for her to leave.
-Kamonohashi Office-
“I don’t feel so well.” Nami said as she got changed out of her Persona outfit.
“Here, Pepto-Bismol.” Asahi brought Nami a glass of water and Pepto-Bismol.
‘I think we should be sponsored by Pepto-Bismol…Nami gets poisonous food from Ray and Hinata just eats way too much.’ Asahi thought.
“At least you get to rest tonight and tomorrow, we have school tomorrow.” Hinata said as she was unimpressed that, one, they have to go to school tomorrow even though she hasn’t gotten more than 12 hours of sleep throughout the past 5 days and two, Nami and Asahi threw out the cake Ray made.
“…itai…I’m just going to lie in bed.” Nami slowly made her way to her bed and lied down.
“I want icecream.” Hinata made her way downstairs.
‘I should talk to Yuko, I’ve ignored her for a week.’ Asahi thought.
Yuko, sorry for disappearing for a week, I was really sick. Down with a cold. But during that time, I got you a little something. Hope you’ll like it.
TBC
Topic: Lies - chapter 16 (MendolxMajisuka) 15/11/2011 (Read 50349 times)