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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : Protection
« Reply #20 on: May 16, 2011, 07:53:11 PM »
This is nice LOL.
But the demon thing made me puzzled!
I hope there is more!
It seem Ten is really disliked by the others :B ~ although she's so nice!

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : Protection
« Reply #21 on: May 18, 2011, 01:12:05 AM »
Woooo coming back to comment! Nice OneShot ^^ Always happy to read about Takamina and Acchan ^^ Jealous Acchan is cute :D And lol@ Ookami name or whatever XD

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : Protection
« Reply #22 on: July 14, 2011, 12:54:11 AM »
Thx everyone for reading ^^

@sorakamiya: Yeah it will be another sequel but not for now

@khryz0421: Ten is an angel, is her job to be good ;)

@TakahashiJ: Sorry for the confusion. Ten is good but she's a big teaser too ^^

@bou-j525: Yeah jealousy is always fun ^^ and Ookami because I like the wolf, at the begining I wanted to put Saru xD

So, there is my new short fic. I was enjoying while I wrote this ^^.


AKB48, wrestling and a little girl

“Tadaima!” A tall guy and her sister shouted as they entered in their home.

“Okaeri!” Their mother replied. “So, Nao-chan, how were the AKB?”

“Mama! They are really cute and kind. Ne, you know what?”

“What?”

“They like wrestling.”

“Wrestling?” The mother was really confused.

“Yeah. I'm hungry let's eat mama.”

Flashback

In the AKB theater

“Well, everyone listening me please.” Togasaki said. “There is the winner of the contest 'Spend a whole day in AKB theater', Kanzaki Nao. She's 10.”

“Ohhh kawaiiiiiiiiii!!!” All the girls shouted.

“Ne, Nao-chan, who is your oshimen?” Miichan asked.

“Takamina because she is really kind.”

“Yosha! Thank you Nao-chan” The captain shouted.

Nao spent the day looking at the girls practicing with eyes full of stars. At the end of the day, Nao was looking for Takamina.

“Ano, Akicha, where is Takamina?”

“I think I saw her entered in this room.” Akicha pointed a room.

Nao opened the door. “Takamina, are you here?” Then she saw Takamina and Acchan. The ace was standing in front of a table and the captain was just behind her. Takamina had one hand in Acchan's pants and another on Acchan's chest. Her head was buried in Acchan's neck.

“Ah, Acchan, you are here too. What are you doing?” The little girl asked confusedly.

“Nao-chan!” The 2 members pulled away as they became red like tomato. “Euh... We were... euh... practicing wrestling.” Takamnia said.

“Wrestling?” Nao was confused.

“Yes, Takamina and I were testing a told.” Acchan said.

“Oh, what is the name of this hold?”

Takamina and Acchan exchanged a nervous glance. “The snake.” Acchan said.

“Can I practice with you?”

“Ah no no no.” Takamina shouted. “I mean only AKB members can do it. It's euh AKB wrestling.” Takamina said.

Nao pouted sadly then said. “I'll enter in AKB when I'll grow up and I'll able to practice AKB wrestling.” She said cheerfully.

“Hum Do your best. Now can you let us practice?” Acchan asked.

“Of course. Do your best too.”

“Thank you, I will.” The ace winked as the captain seemed about to explode.

Nao left the room. Then she remembered she saw a beautiful costume and want to see it before leave the theater. So, she decided to go in the costume room. Once within, she didn't find the costume. But she knew there is a little room in the room. 'Maybe, the costume is inside.' She thought. Then she opened the door and saw the Tomo-Tomo. But Tomoomi was laying on the back and Tomochin was astride her. Their hand were joined and most importantly they were naked.

“Ah, the costume is not here neither. Oh, Tomochin and Tomoomi. You are practicing wrestling too?”

“Nao-chan!” Tomochin pulled away, came sit near Tomoomi and put the sheet which was on the floor on both of them. As expected, they were red and embarrased.

“Wrestling? Yeah it was wrestling.” Chiyuu said.

“But why don't you wear anything?” Nao asked.

“We were trying euh... sumo-style.” Chiyuu replied as Tomochin was looked at her with a 'what are you saying?' look.

“Oh and what is the name of the hold.”

“The name? Euh...” Chiyuu was thinking.

“The horse.” Tomochin said as Chiyuu glanced at her with a 'you are not better' look.

“Anyway, you are looking for something?” Chiyuu asked.

“Yeah, did you see the 'yokaze no shiwaza' costume?”

“Ah, I saw Yukirin wearing it.” Tomochin replied.

“Thank you and do your best for the wrestling.”

“Count on me.” Chiyuu said with a evil smirk.

When Nao left the room, she met Nacchan.

“Ano, did you see Yukirin?”

“Oh Nao-chan. Yukirin? She just went in that room.”

“Thank you.”

“You're welcome, bye.”

Nao opened the door and saw Sae sitting on a couch. Yukirin was on Sae's lap with her arms around Sae's neck and her legs around Sae's waist. Sae's hands were on Yukirin's butt.

“Euh sorry for disturbed your wrestling practice but can I take a photo of your dress, Yukirin?”

“Ehh Nao-chan! Wrestling practice?” Sae shouted.

“Of course, Nao.” Yukirin said as she pulled away. Then she posed for Nao.

 “Ne, what was that hold?”

“Hold?” Yukirin asked.

“Yep, for the wrestling.”

“The koala.” Sae said as she facepalmed inside.

“So so so, the koala.” Yukirin added.

“Cute! I'll leave, bye.” Nao left the room.

She went to the bathroom. When she was about to leave, she heard giggle near her. Then she climbed the wall. She saw Kojiharu laying against the wall with her hands on Yuko's hips and Yuko was against with her hands on Kojiharu's chest and her head was buried in Kojiharu's neck.

“You must not do that here.” Nao said.

Kojiharu, surprised pushed Yuko then looked up and saw Nao. “Nao-chan!”

“Itai!” Yuko shouted.

“Sorry, Yuko.” Kojiharu went console Yuko. “Nao-chan, it's not what you think.”

“Oh, yes it's that. You know it's dangerous to practice wrestling in the bathroom.”

“Wrestling? We were not~” Yuko began but Haruna put her hand on Yuko mouth.

“You caught us. We know it can be dangerous but we like wrestling.” Kojiharu blushed.

“What is the hold?”

“The hold? Eto...” Kojiharu began.

“The Squirrel.” Yuko finished.

“I like this name.” Nao said. “I'll go, bye.”

Nao left the bathroom and Togasaki called her.

“Nao-chan, your brother is here to take you home.”

END


Poor Nao, ROFL!!!
It's funny right? What do you thing?
For the hold name it's so random xD

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #23 on: July 14, 2011, 01:20:51 AM »
HAHAHAHA CAUGHT red handed   :rofl:

what a lame escuse but worked   :lol:

wrestling FTW!!!!
Still shipping them early pairs. 1st generation ftw!

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #24 on: July 14, 2011, 01:40:23 AM »
LOL, I'm sure the little girl will work hard to learn wrestling in the future haha

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #25 on: July 14, 2011, 03:40:23 AM »
FOR REAL?! THIS MADE ME SMILE, HAPPY, BLUSH AND GIGGLE!!!

Nao and the Wrestling... land? :]]

I love it!!!

I wanna do The Squirrel with Yuko too! xD

This OS really give me a tease.  :drool:
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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #26 on: July 14, 2011, 04:08:52 AM »
THAT WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!! I WAS LAUGHING THE WHOLE TIME!!!!! THE SNAKE , THE HORSE , THE KOALA & THE SQUIRREL HOLDS....oh god. THEY EVEN HAVE THEIR OWN MAKE OUT ROOM!!!!!DEFINITELY WRESTLING FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS UBER AWESOME FIC!!!! NOW I WANT A SEQUEL, cuz this is just too AWESOME TO be onesot

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #27 on: July 14, 2011, 05:29:38 AM »
That was hilarious. AKB wrestling. :rofl: Well done Takamina, awesome lie (lie, lie). Well, if Nao really gets into wrestling she'll have something in common with Mocchi at least.

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« Reply #28 on: July 14, 2011, 07:45:25 AM »
This was hilarious man!!!  :hiakhiakhiak:

one of the best os ever for me~~~   :on GJ:

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #29 on: July 14, 2011, 09:22:05 AM »
LOLED SO HARD

THAT WAS AWESOME.


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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #30 on: July 14, 2011, 10:28:22 AM »
nao-chan is so cutee!! she's so lucky watching some wrestling  :lol:

btw, name "kanzaki nao" remainds me of my fav series and movie "liar game"
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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : AKB48, wrestling and a little girl
« Reply #31 on: July 14, 2011, 10:49:58 AM »
I wanna do that Koala moves too with Yukirin.  :luvluv2: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

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« Reply #32 on: July 14, 2011, 11:19:40 AM »
haha!!  :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: i want to try the hold! all of them!  :mon crazyinlove: :mon crazyinlove: :mon blood: :mon blood: :mon blood: :mon blood:

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« Reply #33 on: July 14, 2011, 04:46:03 PM »
 :mon sweat: Nao chan is really innocent ! Wrestling ? MORE LIKE THEY WERE HAVING XXX   :on bleed::mon fyeah: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:
Nice update  :on GJ:

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« Reply #34 on: July 14, 2011, 04:59:53 PM »
LOLLLLLL OMG THIS WAS SO XD XD XD
Thank for updating, now excuse me while I try to breathe again...

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« Reply #35 on: July 16, 2011, 12:46:06 AM »
Thx for reading everyone ^^ so, it seems you like wrestling xD

@anoni2: Yeah it's a lame but funny excuse ;)
@immortal_K: Just imagine her future make me laugh lol
@blughise: ha ha I'm glad you like it but I think it would stay one shot since I don't have inspiration for a sequel sorry
@Kuji: Yeah she'll be Mocchi2 xD
@Flean:: Thx best OS? I'll blushe at least it's my funniest OS I think ^^
@Arakawa: ^^ thx
@yukofan: I was inspired by this drama for the name since Nao is naive
@virgo_shaka: I don't think Sae will let you do it xD
@khryz0421: Alone? ^^
@TakahashiJ: Shh shh Nao can hear you lol
@bou-j525: Breathe breathe do you want me to call someone for 'bouche a bouche'? ROFL


Well, this fict is less funny, even not funny at all but not sad. I don't know if you will like it.

I know you love me

Takamina and Acchan entered in the captain's house.

“Your family is not here?” The ace asked.

“Nop, they went to visit my grandparents.”

Oh I see. So what did you want to show me?”

“It's in my room, come on.”

They entered in Takamina's room.

“So, Takamina, will you tell me what~”

*click*

Takamina locked the door.

“Why did you lock the door?”

“Like that, you can't escape.”

“What~” Before Acchan could finish, Takamina pushed her on the bed. She hold the ace's arms to maintain her on the bed and kissed her roughly. Acchan was struggling but the captain was too strong then Takamina broke the kiss.

“What are you doing?!” Acchan asked angrily.

“What I should do long time ago.” Takamina replied then she began kiss Acchan's neck roughly.

“Stop! Stop! Takamina stop!!!” Acchan moaned as she struggled but Takamina didn't stop. Tears began to flow on Acchan's cheeks. “Why do you do that?”

Takamina stopped. “It's not obvious ? I love you and I want you become mine.” She said as she looked at Acchan in the eyes.”

“But I don't love you.” Acchan said as she looked on the side.

“You lie! I saw how you look at me. But each time I try to talked about it, you changed the subject or avoided me. I have enough. You love me but I don't no why you deny it.”

“It's false!” Acchan still not looking at Takamina and crying shouted.

“It true! And you know it” Takamina made Acchan look at her.

“Fine! I love you but I can't! Are you satisfied now?!” The ace shouted.

“Why?” The captain asked but Acchan looked on the side again and didn't answer. “Why?! Tell me why you can't love me!”

“Tomochin loves you.” Acchan whispered.

“What did you say?”

“Tomochin's loves you! She loves you! A long time before me. I can't betray her.” Acchan finally confessed still crying.

“I don't care about Tomochin. It's you who I love!”

“You don't but I care. She's my best friend!”

Takamina took Acchan's cheeks in her hands. ”I'll repeat it, it's YOU who I love.” She kissed her roughly again. The ace struggled again but Takamina had a strong hold on her. Finally, Acchan couldn't resist anymore and kissed Takamina back. The captain released the ace's arms and Acchan put her arms around Takamina neck...

A few hour later

Acchan woke up, looked at the naked body near her, put her hands on her face and began to cry. Takamina was waken by the tears.

“Eh why do you cry?” Takamina asked softy as she hugged Acchan.

“I'm a horrible person. I betrayed her. I betrayed Tomochin by sleeping with you.”

“Shh shh you are not a horrible person. You are just in love. We will talk to Tomochin together tomorrow.” Acchan nodded and Takamina gently kissed her forehead. “I love you Maeda Atsuko.” She said looking at Acchan's eyes.

“I love you too Takahashi Minami.” Acchan hugged her lover tightly and came for a soft kiss.

END


So? I know Takamina would never do something like that but I wanted to write something like that lol
« Last Edit: July 16, 2011, 12:59:39 AM by kahem »

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« Reply #36 on: July 16, 2011, 12:51:32 AM »
I wish Takamina was like that...  :twothumbs :twothumbs

Make Acchan as hers!!! XD nice!! ;)

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« Reply #37 on: July 17, 2011, 09:44:52 AM »
Takamina the dominant one! I somehow like this! Fresh,Awesome! Way To go kahem!

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« Reply #38 on: August 20, 2011, 11:27:16 PM »
@Flean: I wish she is like that too xD
@TakahashiJ: Yeah I think Takamina being the dominant is kinda cool

There is a Tomotomo OS but I think it's kinda lame sorry ^^'

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Tomochin's POV

It's the end of the school. I want to go to the mall for some shopping so, I ask my best friend to come with me.

"Tomoomi, I will go to the mall. Let's go together."

"Today?" She asks as I nod. "Ah sorry chiyuu, I promised to Sae-chan to help her for something. Maybe, another day."

"Sure."

"See you later Tomochin." She leave the classroom.

Ahhhhhhh damn that Miyazawa!!!! I'm Itano Tomomi and the girl earlier was my best friend Kasai Tomomi. We were always together since we were 3. She is so kind, innocent, delicate, cute, adorable, lovable, beautiful, gorgeous, sexy... Mouuuuuu I love her!!! I'm in love with my best friend. Though I never showed it and always played the tsundere. When she holds my hand, when she clings at my arm, when she hugs me or when she kisses me on the cheek, I always stayed calm and acted like it didn't affect me. Sometimes I even showed an annoyed face. But in fact, each time, my heart beat faster and faster and I wanted to hug her and kiss her! But I don't want her to reject me because I know she does those thing in a friendly way, nothing more. But recently she often hangs out with Miyazawa Sae, the school play girl. She is in the basketball club and rumors say that she already have sex with almost all the girls of the school and this a all girls school. People think Tomoomi is one of those girls and one of Sae's girlfriend. It makes me jealous and I hate myself for being a tsundere! And now Tomoomi's innocence was taken by that play girl! It should to be mine!

"Tomochin are you alright?" A voice asks worriedly.

"Yes, I'm fine Acchan why do you ask?" She points what I'm holding : pieces of paper. "Oh shit! My lesson!" I shout as Acchan laughs.

"Tomochin you're so funny." She is still laughing. "Don't worry, I'll lend you mine."

"Thank you." I reply ashamed.

"Jealousy makes people become fool." Miichan smirks at me.

"What are you talking about?" I say nervously.

"Oh come on Tomochin. We all know that you always loved Tomoomi. And now she's with Sae so, you're jealous." Miichan says. It's that oblivious???

"Tomoomi can do what she wants. It's her life and I'm not jealous." Of course, she can't!!! And especially not with that Sae!

“Maa, It's your fault anyway. If you wasn't such a tsundere maybe she would be with you now.” I already know that! Don't need to drive the point home! “Even our chibi student president have the balls to confess to our star and now they are happy together.”

“Eh, I'm not chibi!” Takamina protests.

“Don't compare me to Takamina.” I envy you so much Takamina!

“But you know, Miichan is right. It's your fault so, do something about this. Fight for the person who you love.” Takamina says as she raises her fist in the air.

“If you don't tell her, you will never know how she feels about this.” Acchan adds.

“Arrg shut up!” I shout as I stand up and am about to leave.

“Where are you going?” Miichan asks.

“Home!” I leave them.

At Sae's room

“You still didn't talk to her?” Tomoomi asked.

“How could I! After each training, a bunch of girls jump on me. When I finally escape she is already far away. And it's not all, she seems avoiding me outside training. I can't find her.” Sae whines as she hugs tightly her pillow.

“I think I have no choice.” Tomoomi sighs. “I'll stalk her in order to know where she lives.”

“You would do that for me?” Sae asks with hope in the eyes.

“Of course chiyuu~.”

“By the way, and you, how is it?”

Tomoomi sighs again. “It doesn't progress at all. She even seems more irritated than before.”

“Why do we have to be so unlucky at love?! Arrrg!” Sae shouts in frustation. “I'm sorry, I want to help but I don't know how.”

“Don't worry, at least I can help you.”

Flashback

Tomoomi was walking home as she thought about Tomochin and sighed at the same time. 'She is still that cold when I'm affectionate with her.' Then she raised her head. 'Heeeeee! Where am I???? Oh my god! I am lost!!!' She was looking in all directions.

“Oh you are cute. Come with me, We'll have a good time.” A guy said.

“No thank you, I have to go home.” Tomoomi said scared.

“Don't be fussy and come with me.” He grabbed her arm.

“I said 'no'! Let me go!” Tomoomi slapped him.

“You'll regret it.” He pushed her against a wall and grabbed her by the shoulders.

“Kyaaa!!! Let me go!” She shouted. The guy was about to kiss her but someone kicked him away.

“Don't annoy girls.” A short haired girl said.

“Who the fuck are you?!”

“Someone who will beat you up if you don't leave.”

“Motherfucker!” He tried to punch the girl but she dodged it and elbowed him. He was projected on the floor. “I'll remember it.” He ran away.

“Are you alright?” The girl asked.

“Yes, thank you.”

“My house is not far, come with me. I'll make you some hot chocolate.”

“Eto...”

“Come on, I don't bit.”

“Ok.”

In a dept

“Here, hot chocolate.” The short haired girl hold a mug to Tomoomi.

“Thank you.” Tomoomi accepted the mug. “Did you leave here alone?”

“Yep.“

“Eto... I know already see you but where.”

“Ah sorry, I forgot to introduce myself.” The girl apologized. “I'm Miyazawa Sae and it seems we attend at the same school.” She pointed Tomoomi's uniform. “Yoroshiku~”

“I'm Kasai Tomomi. Yoroshiku. Eto Miyazawa Sae. Hum Sae. Sae. Sae. Hum. Ah! I know you are Sae the playgirl!” Tomoomi exclaimed.

“Mou! I'm not a playgirl! The rumors are false!” Sae complained.

“Ehhh! So, you don't have many girlfriends and have sex with them?!”

“Noooo! I never had sex with anyone!” Sae blushed madly at her confession.

“Impossible! I mean you are handsome like an ikemen and you never got a girl? And there is also the rumors.” Tomoomi was shocked.

“There were a lot of girls who confessed to me but I rejected them. And in order to take revenge they said to everyone that they had sex with me. It's really pissed me off!!! Moreover I reserve my first time for someone really special.”

“Ohh, and who is that person?” Tomoomi smirked.

“No no no nobody.” Sae shuttered as she blushed. 'Oh crap I talked to much.'

“Come on, tell me who it is.”

“No.”

“Please chiyuu~” Tomoomi made puppy eyes.

“No!”

“If you tell me, I'll tell you who is my special person.”

“Ok but you first.” Sae seemed suddenly interested.

“Fine.” Tomoomi sighed. “She is my best friend : Tomochin and at what I remember I always loved her. But each time I tried to be affectionate to her, she was cold to me and seemed annoyed.”

“By Tomochin, you mean Itano Tomomi, the school fashion queen?” Tomoomi nodded. “She seems straight for me.”

“Yeah maybe I should give up.” Tomoomi said sadly.

“Ah I can be wrong, yeah I'm surely wrong so, don't give up ok?” Sae tried to cheer the other girl up but Tomoomi just sighed again. “You know, I have not better luck than you. With those rumors this person must think I'm a big stupid playgirl.” Sae also sighed.

“So who is that person?”

“The captain of basketball team : Akimoto Sayaka.” Sae looked away as she blushed.

“Ehhh!!!! That gorilla?!!!”

“Don't call her like that!” Sae shouted.

“Yeah sorry. But she seems too focused on basketball. I don't think this kind of person have time for love.”

“Don't say that.” It was Sae's turn to be sad.

“Maa maa don't depress, maybe I'm wrong. By the way, how did you fall for her?” Tomoomi asked.

Sae's feedback

“It was my first day in the basketball team. I was in my basketball outfit and ready for the training. But the gymnasium was empty then I saw her. She was there training alone.

“Ano, where is everybody?” I asked.

“At home, there is no training today.”

“Ehhh!!! Seriously?!!!”

“Yeah I gave them a little rest. By the way, I'm the captain Akimoto Sayaka, call me Sayaka yoroshiku. You are a new member?.

“Yes, I'm Miyazawa Sae, call me Sae yoroshiku. But why are you here if there is no training.”

 “I'm the captain, I have to be always on top. You can go home and come back tomorrow.”

“I'm already here in my outfit so, I'll join you.” We were training just he 2 of us. She was so passionate and focused. She was so beautiful like a goddess, yeah the basketball goddess. It was the best training of my life but I forgot to asked her phone number. And after that day she rarely talk to me.

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“So cute!!! You should confess to her.” Tomoomi said excited.

“You think?”

“Hum, you should definitively confess to her.”

“Yosh, it's decided I'll confess to her!” Sae shouted as she raised her fist.

“Yeah!” Tomoomi cheered her on.

“And you too, why don't you confess to her?” Sae asked.

“I already did it but she didn't get it that way and replied 'I love you too, you are my best friend after all'.” Tomoomi said sadly.

“I see but maybe one day she would realize your feelings and accepted it.”

“I hope so.”

“So, don't give up ok?”

“Hum, it's not like I can stop loving her.”

End of flashback

Tomochin's OPV

I'm here in front of Tomoomi's house, I just want to be with her and I hope she's here. I ring the bell and her mother opens the door.

“Oh Tomochin, you come to see Tomoomi?”

“Hai, aunt.”

“Sorry she's at Sae-chan's place. I already told you that you can call me 'mom' since you are like another daughter for me.”

“Hai mom.” I blush. “Jaa, I think I should go home.”

“You can wait for her here if you want.”

“But I don't want to disturb you.”

“You don't disturb me at all. Come on, wait for her in her room.” She pulls me inside before I could refuse. I greet her father and go directly to Tomoomi's room. Her room is still the same as before. There is a lot of photos and one of them catches my attention. It's a photo of both of us, she was kissing my cheeks as I seemed annoyed but in fact I was so happy. I take the photo and lie down on her bed. I can smell her scent, I hold the photo tightly in my arms and fall asleep.

“Tomochin, Tomochin, Tomochin!” I feel someone shaking me. It was Tomoomi's mother. “Sorry for waking you up but Tomoomi called. She said she will spend the night at Sae-chan's place.”

“Ah so. Then I'll go home”

“No, it's too late. Stay here. You can borrow Tomoomi's clothes and bed.”

“But I really don't want to disturb you.”

“I already said that you don't disturb us at all and I already called your parents.”

“Thank you very much.”

“It's nothing. Oh by the way, this photo is nice but you should smile while you are happy.” She winks as I'm blushing. Then she leaves the room. I take a shower, change my clothes and lie on the bed. I'm feeling so good in her clothes and her bed. How I hope she is here laying beside me. But she is not, she is with Sae. Arrrrrrg why?!!!!!!!! They are probably doing it!!! I'm so raging and sad at the same time. I feel asleep with tears falling on my cheeks.

The next day after the class

“Goodbye everybody.” Tomoomi says as she rushes to leave the room.

“I'll go too.” Tomohin says. 'I don't know why but I feel that I have to follow her.'

Tomoomi is waiting Sayaka in front of the school gate as she texts Sae and Tomochin is hiding and observing Tomoomi.

Sae-chan, I'm ready and I'm waiting for her

Nice, do your best

Leave it to me


Then Sayaka passes the gate and begin to walk.

'It's her.' Tomoomi waits a little while then follows Sayaka. 'Yosh, for Sae-chan.'

She's here, I'll follow her

Ok, be discrete

Don't worry I'll


'What is she waiting?' Tomochin wonders. 'Ah this gorilla euh I mean girl is Akimoto Sayaka, the basket ball team captain.' Then she sees Tomoomi beginning to follow Sayaka. 'What is she doing? Why is she following her?' Tomochin follows Tomoomi. They continued the double spinning until Tomoomi loses Sayaka at a corner.

It's bad, I lost her

What?!!! Where are you?

In front of the AK cafe Biscuit, I'll try to find her

Ok, I'm counting on you


Tomoomi decides to go on the left.

When Tomochin arrives at the corner, she doesn't see Tomoomi anymore. 'Crap! Where did she go?' Then she goes on the right.

'I think I took the wrong way.' Tomoomi thinks.

“Hey cutie, we met again.” A man says.

“You, you are the guy of the last time.” Tomoomi says terrified.

“Yeah, and this time, I'm with some friends and we need some entertainment so, be a good girl and come with us.” Tomoomi is surrounded by 10 guys and 2 of them grab Tomoomi's arms and push her against a wall. “Well, let's have a good time.” The man grabs Tomoomi's chin and was about to kiss her but someone hit him and the others 2 with a iron bar.

“Nakama?” The guy asks.

“I'm her wife.” Tomochin says and places herself between Tomoomi and the guys.

“Tomochin.” Tomoomi whispers.

“Wife? But you are both girls. Never mind, now there are 2 cute girls, it means more fun.” The guy smiles. “Catch them.” He orders then the others guys obey. They get Tomoomi and Tomochin trys to defend herself with the iron bar but the guys can disarm her and catch her. “You should not play with that. It's dangerous you know?” The chief smirks but Tomochin spits on his face. “Teme!” He slaps her and her lip was bleeding.

“Tomochin!” Tomoomi shouts. “Are you alright?” She asks worriedly.

“Don't worry I'm fine, it was nothing.”

“We will see if you will be still fine after that.” The chief is about to punch Tomochin but he hers his friends shout.

“Arg! Erg! Kisama! Arg!”

A tall girl just defeated half of the guys. “For attacking defenseless girls, you should be ashamed.” She says.

“Gorilla!” Tomoomi and Tomochin shout.

“We are just playing with them. You better leave if you don't want to be hurt, gorilla girl.” The chief  says.

“Who are you calling gorilla?! And I won't let you hurt my schoolmates!” Sayaka says angrily.

“As you want. Kill her.” He orders and the guys who were holding the Tomomis rush towards Sayaka. But Sayaka defeats all of them and they run away. “Where are you going?! Come back! Kuso!” The chief rushes towards Sayaka bu she sends a high kick in his head and he falls.

“Are you ok?” Sayaka asks the Tomochis.

“Yeah, thank you.” Tomochin replies.

“Look out! Behind!” Tomoomi shouts. The chief is about to hit Sayaka with Tomochin's bar but someone kicks him hard.

“Don't touch at her!” The person shouts.

“Sae-chan!” Tomoomi shouts. Then the chief runs away.

“What a manhood. Tomoomi, are you alright? I was worried when you didn't text me.” Sae approaches Tomoomi.

“Yeah, thank to Tomochin and gorilla euh I mean Sayaka-chan.”

“Well, I guess I can leave now.” Sayaka says and was about to leave but Sae grabs her arm.

“Wait Sayaka, I have something to tell you.”

“What is it?”

Sae looks at the floor. “You know I have a playgirl reputation. But I'm not. The girls made up rumors because I rejected them. I wanted you to know that.”

“Oh, ok” Sayaka is a bit surprised.

“It's not all. I rejected because I love someone else. And what I really want you to know it's.” She paused. “It's...”

“What?” Sayaka asks confusedly.

Sae looks at Sayaka in the eyes. “I love you. Please go out with me.” Then she closes her eyes and bows.

“Ok.”

“Really???”

“Hum, I think you are cute when you are all genki.” Sayaka blushes. “I'm sorry if I was avoiding you but when I'm with you I can't be focused.” She becomes redder then Sae suddenly kisses her. Sayaka is surprised at first but then she put her arms around Sae's neck. They pull away for some air.

“Omedetou chiyuu~ both of you!” Tomoomi says as she applauds.

“Thank you.” The both tall girls say shyly.

“WOW! So, Sae is not a playgirl. She loves gor~ Sayaka. Sayaka loves her too. And now they are together. Oh my god! So much information!” Tomochin says as she is massaging her temples. Then she stops the massage. “Wait, it means you're not Sae's girlfriend?”

“You thought I was with Sae-chan? Tomochin you are so silly.” Tomoomi laughs.

“It's not funny.” Tomochin pouts.

“I see, you were irritated because you were jealous.” Tomoomi teases her.
 
“Nnnnno, why should I be jealous?” Tomochin shutters.

“You said it earlier, because you're my wife, right?” Tomoomi winked as Tomochin blushes.

“About that~” Tomochin is interrupted when Tomoomi kisses her.

“I love you Tomochin, always.” Tomoomi says sincerely.

“I love you too and I really want to become your wife.” Tomochin kisses Tomoomi.

“Yeah! Tomoomi I really happy for you!!!” Sae shouts.

End

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Re: AKB48 OS UPDATED : Rumors and truth
« Reply #39 on: September 06, 2011, 11:37:01 PM »
I was inspired by that OPV



It's a Shibuya/Ookabuki

Fight and love


I heard a chuckle. “Ridiculous.” A voice said then the Yabakune stood on the side revealing their president. I raised up my mask. Impossible it's her... What were you doing here??? I couldn't trust my eyes.

“Shibuya-san, why are you here?” I asked chocked.

“A lot happens in life.” You replied with your usual cheeky tone as she walked towards me.

“It's Yabakune.” I said still chocked as you just chuckled.

“Nice to meet you. I'm a new 3rd year Yabakune student, Shibuya.”

“No way...” Why? How? A lot of question are in my mind right now but I couldn't ask you here.

“Ma, It's the deal” You saluted in a military way with 2 fingers and walked away. I looked at the floor to regain my senses.

“Mou, let's stop it. With this on, we can't see the traitor's face.” I said as I removed my mask. I could see your were annoyed when I called you 'traitor, so why were you there?

“Yes.” Kokabuki nodded.

“Kabuki is better, after all.” Kokabuki and I threw our mask and began to rush towards the Yabakune. Even I was fighting, I always has an eye on you. You were sitting as you watched the fight.

“I'll take the scrap. Aneki, you go get Shibuya.” Kokabuki said.

“Will you be alright?” I asked as I kicked a Yabakune.

“They mostly attack in a straight line for some reason, so if I move in a curve I can evade their attacks.” She replied as she punched a Yabakune.

“As always, too much explanations.” I smiled then I traversed the Yabakune triying to approach you. I was in front of the Barefoot Society then you came from behind them and walked towards me.

“Unforgivable.” I said with anger. Why didn't you talk to me about it?

“Who are you talking to like that?” You asked irritated.

“Myself.” I almost forgot it. We have to act in front of the others.

“So, you 2 are in the queens?” You chuckled as you walked around me drawing a circle. “Majijo is done for.”

“We're protecting the traditions of the Rappappa that you built up.” I looked at you.

“You can't protect shit.” What did you say?! How could you change like that?

“I won't lose. Not to someone who betrayed Majijio to live lazily.” If you didn't like my words, why did you betray us?

“I'm serious. I've become serious the first time in my life.” Why did you said that? You weren't serious with me? “I'll seriously crush you all!” I didn't know if it was my imagination but I thought there was a bit of hesitation in your voice. Then you gestured for me to come. I didn't hesitate and rushed towards you. I sent my right palm into your face but you dodged it. Then I sent my left palm but your dodged again. I tried to hit you with my right palm but you blocked it. I sent my left palm then you stooped down. I tried my right palm again but you blocked again. Our eyes met and we stared at each other for some seconds. Then you sent your right fist, I dodged it.  You sent a right kick, I blocked it. You sent your right fist again, I rotated for avoiding it and send a middle kick but you blocked it. You sent a strong punch into my face but I couldn't avoid it. I touched my lips just being punched and looked at you. “If you are planning on venting your anger on me, you better close those fists.” Yeah, I was here for revenging Bungee but now I'm really angry against you. “Baka.” It's my style and you knew it. I deployed my palms in order to show you that I won't abandon my style. Then I rushed and sent my right palm, you dodged it. I grabbed you and kneed you, you blocked it. I sent my left palm, you dodged it and punched me. You tried to punch me again but I blocked it and sent a palm in your stomach. See I didn't need to close my fist. Irritated, you high kicked me. You sent your left fist and I blocked it but then you sent your right fist directly in my stomach. Then you sent low kick on my legs, left, right, left, right... and you finished with a high kick. I was on the floor. You put your hair behind your ear and smiled. I tried to get up but my view was fuzzy.

“You can't win against Maeda.” I said. I knew it would annoy you but I couldn't help, I was mad at you. You raise up you fist and were about to finish me but you stopped. Why? The Maeda part was not enough?

“Maeda!” You shouted as you sent me an uppercut. Blood came from my mouth as I fell on my back. My last view was your fake smile.

End of POV

“Get them out of here.” Shibuya ordered.

A few days later


Shibuya was in front of a hospital room. She hesitated a bit before knock.

“Come in.”

Flashback

“Get them out of here.” I ordered. The others approached the unconscious Kabuki sisters. “Wait, I'll carry this one.” At pointed at you. The others were confused but agreed.

We found somewhere to let the both of you. My subordinates just threw Kokabuki and I gently put you down. “Go ahead and come back to Yabakune. I'll join you later.” I ordered.

“The 4 of us will stay with you.” Come Back said.

“It's fine just go join Dance.” I said.

“But we can't let you without protection.” Mayuge protested.

“She is right.” Sanshoku agreed.

“Who do you think I am?! I can protect myself.” I shouted angrily.

“But Shibuya-san, we just...”

“Enough leave!” I cut Mariyagi.

“Yes.” The 4 said and left. I waited until they were out of sight and leaned towards you and kissed you softy. “I'm sorry.” I left you.

End of flashback


Shibuya entered in the room.

“YOU! What are you doing here?!” Kokabuki shouted.

“Can we talk?” Shibuya looked at Ookabuki ignoring Kokabuki.

“We don't talk with traitor. Now get out.” Kokabuki said.

“I'm not talking to you.” Shibuya said angrily.

“What~”

“Fine, I'll talk with you. Kokabuki, can you let us alone.” Ookabuki cut her partner.

“But, aneki, she's with Yabakune!”

“We are not wearing our insignia. Please.” Kokabuki begged.

“Ok, I'll wait in the lobby.”

“Thank you, I won't be long.”

“If you do something to aneki, I'll make you pay for it.” Kokabuki glared at Shibuya and left. Shibuya locked the room.

“Why did you lock?” Ookabuki asked.

“I don't want anyone to disturb us.” Shibuya replied.

Flashback

My family and I will spend one week with my dad's friend's family, in his vacation house. We were arrived and  I'm so tired. We took our luggage and knocked. A man opened the door.

“Kasai! It's been a while.” He shouted as he put his arm around my father neck.

“Yeah 5 years, Itano.” My dad also put his arm around his friend neck.

“Maa, those 2 are always happy to see each other.” My mother said.

“Yeah, it's always like that.” A woman added, I assumed she was my dad's friend's wife.

“Oh, it's your daughter?” Mr Itano asked pointing at me. “WOW, she became a pretty young girl. Last time I saw her she was a baby.”

“Thank you.” I said.

“I'll introduce you my daughter too. Oi! Tomomi! Come here, my friends are arrived.” He shouted. Tomomi? I heard a door opening and a silhouette appeared.

“SHIBUYA-SAN?!” I said shocked .

“Ah! You!” You said.

“You already know each other?” Mr Itano asked.

“Kind of, we are in the same school.” You replied.

“Your daughter became a beautiful young girl too.” My dad said.

“Thank you.” You said.

“Ne, Tomomi.” Ms Itano said.

“Hai.” You and I said at the same time and we stared at each other frowning then our parents laughed.

“I forgot that you 2 have the same first name.” Your mother said.

“Yeah, our husband decided it and didn't care about our opinion.” My mother added.

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“Ah, it's true, you 2 don't know. Your father have the same first name too and decided to call their child with the same first name.” My mother replied.

“Baka oyaji.” You said.

“Your so cruel, with you father.” Mr Itano whined.

“Ryuu-chin don't whine.” Ms Itano said.

“She's right, Itano, be a man.” My father said.

“You can talk, Ryuu-chan. When Tomomi don't want to talk with you, you whine too.” My mother added. Your parents laughed as my father was pouting. I face palmed myself as you just seemed annoyed.

“Maa. Tomomi, guide Tomomi to her room.” Your mother ordered. You didn't say anything and started to go upstairs. I grabbed my luggage and followed you.

In the room

“This is our room. You can put your luggage here and take this bed.” You pointed a corner and a bed.

“We will share the room?” I asked.

“Yes, a problem with that?”

“No.” I replied. Then you left.  “Cheeky and unfriendly as usual, the Majijo hotheaded queen : Shibuya.” I said as I sighed.

One week has passed.  During that week, we almost didn't talk to each other, your were in your corner and I was in mine. Although sometime, I felt like your were looking at me but it must be my imagination. Your were still cheeky and unfriendly but I didn't know why but I felt like you were a bit different and I also felt different. It was a strange feeling. That night was the last night in the vacation house and our parents went to a ball. They said they will come back the next morning. So, we were just the 2 of us in the house. I was tired so, I went to bed and quickly fell asleep.

“No! No! Arg! Nnnnn! No!” Those shouts waked me up. They came from your bed. I approached you. It seemed you were doing a nightmare. You were wriggling in all directions. I lied beside you and hugged you.

“Shhh, shhh, everything is alright.” I whispered then you calmed down and I smiled. “I guess I can come back to my bed now.” I was about to get up but I felt your hold maintaining me on the bed.

“Don't go.” Our eyes met and we stared at each other. Your eyes were not like usual, there was not an annoyed or cheeky expression inside. But they were gentle and warm. I couldn't say no at those eyes. Then you slowly leaned and our lips met. You kissed me softly.

“Shibuya-san?” I said when you broke the kiss.

“During this week, I understood something. I don't want you to be away from me.” So it was not my imagination, you were really looking at me. Then you kissed me again and this time I kissed you back. Our kiss was first gentle but it became rough and wild. I knew at this moment what the strange feeling was. I put my arms around your neck. Your arms were first at my waist but then I could felt your hands ascending and touching me. You tried to undress my summer one piece but I stopped your hands with mine and broke the kiss.

“Don't.” I said as I looked at you.

“Please.” Those eyes again. Why couldn't I say no at them? I let go your hands and that night I let you doing what you wanted.

End of flashback


“Tell me why you are here and hurry up. I have to vacate this room.” Ookabuki said with her back facing Shibuya.

“I'm here to visit my hospitalized girlfriend.”

“Oh, because I'm still your girlfriend? You're the one who sent me here, remember?” Ookabuki said annoyed. Shibuya hugged tightly the other from behind.

“I'm sorry.” She whispered in Ookabuki's ear.

“You think I can forgive you that easy? You betrayed Majijo.” Ookabuki tried to free herself but Shibuya's hold was too strong. “Let me go!”

“Please listen to me.” She still maintained her hold tightly. “After Yuko-san die, I was so angry at myself because I couldn't do anything for her.” Shibuya confessed.

“Why didn't you tell me?” Ookabuki calmed down and asked.

“I was also lost, I needed answers and I thought I would find them by beating Maeda.” Shibuya rested her head on Ookabuki's shoulder.

“It can't be helped.” Ookabuki sighed. “It's your way to find the meaning of your life. What an awful girlfriend I have.”

“It means that you are not mad at me anymore?” Shibuya asked hopefully.

“Hum.” Shibuya smiled. “But I don't approve what you did, I won't support you and I won't betray Majijo.” Ookabuki said.

“I understand. It means that we might have to fight against each other again.” Shibuya broke her hug.

“Exactly but whatever will happen, I'll still be your girlfriend.” Ookabuki put her arms around Shibuya's neck and pulled her into a short kiss.

“I'm so lucky for having a kind girlfriend like you.” This time it's Shibuya who kissed Ookabuki. She kissed like an animal which didn't eat during several days. She began biting the bottom lip then she sucked the upper lip and finally her tongue made his way to her girlfriend mouth. The both warm tongue fought for dominance although the result was predictable, Shibuya won. She pushed Ookabuki on her bed and began to unbuttoned her shirt. But Ookabuki stopped her.

“We can't do it now. I already said that I have to vacate this room.” Ookabuki said.

“Please, I can't wait anymore. Nobody would disturb us and the door is locked.” Shibuya begged.

“Naughty girl, you planed to do it since the beginning, didn't you?”

“You got me.” Shibuya smiled.

“It's not like I can say know at those eyes of you. Let's make up, Tomochin.” Ookabuki lied donw completely on her bed and pulled Shibuya towards her...


END

Seriously, currently, I'm so into the Tomotomo lol
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