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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Role Model)
« Reply #40 on: May 20, 2011, 11:32:24 AM »
So Yurina can't help but get drawn to Miya and to Chii becuase she want's to be the big sister to them, to look after them.... I wonder how much of it is that and how much of it could be Yurina wanting to go against her "good girl/role-model" image byn spending time with Miya and Chii.

I wonder too if she likes that Miya does not dote on her as the 'role model' either, someting Yurina has to put up with when talking to others....

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Role Model)
« Reply #41 on: May 20, 2011, 05:37:21 PM »
some rambling thoughts.......the my pace style of yurina vs the rebel without a cause flaming miyabi certainy shows promise. momo cute but sharp as well, and sudou sensei...wanna see more ...... and why is chinami just a sidekick so far, what drives her?

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Role Model)
« Reply #42 on: May 21, 2011, 02:17:45 PM »
I guess if you had to choose a member to be the teacher, Maasa would be it. lol
Happy about the Yurina-centric chapter since Kumaicho is one of my favourites and it was interesting to see things from her POV.
When she was thinking that Miyabi's cute, I was going 'uh oh you don't want to go there' in my head but Yurina's smart enough to figure that out too. haha

The scene with the roleplay was pretty amusing.

Anyway, this chapter I very ENJOY! XD

If cute is what Yurina likes, who could be better than Momo?  Sayu! No one, that's who.

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Role Model)
« Reply #43 on: May 23, 2011, 01:43:07 PM »
of course I'm always around  :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe:
silently stalking ur fics  :on crazygran: since the fact will never change I'm a Miyabi fan  :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:
sooo....  :bingo: a Yurina chapter eh? :hee: I want to see the school delinquent  :on cigar: and role model  :on study: to get along   :nya:  so that the sensei's will be like this  :scared:
and Momochi?  :shock: Yurina and Momochi together?  :on ksweat: it'd be cute  :on lol:

I wonder why i like Miya portrayed as bad ass  :onionwhip: when she's so girly in reality  :bigdeal:
Anyhow, gonna wait for her next badass moves  :kekeke: :kekeke: :kekeke:

ja~ ur sugoi as always author-san!  :on GJ:




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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Role Model)
« Reply #44 on: May 30, 2011, 04:47:24 PM »
Okay, I'm back! And time for some comment replies. :) It wasn't quite as long as last time. :lol:

rndy: People are looking so deeply into this chapter. :lol: That's intriguing. Then again, I suppose the style definitely implied it, huh? ;)

Sudou-sensei is probably something I wouldn't have necessarily come up with either, but I have to go with the Great Miyabi and her ideas for a story. ;) And yes, Kumai may definitely not be the "good girl" she seems. There's a lot of that going around here... ;) She's already made a huge leap by this point in embracing her love for girls, and you know what they say, the first step is always the hardest. ;) Eventually you can't even turn back...

Ok, I'm rambling on a bit much there. ^^;

eruchan: It is refreshing, isn't it? I don't think I've ever even read a Yurina-centric chapter in a fic before. :D So it made me happy. And of course Momo's claiming to be the cutest!! But it's not just a claim, y'know. ;) As for rumors, have you noticed how many other students seem to follow Kuma-chan's every move? :)

mmsuki: Yes, most certainly as in Sudou Maasa :lol: And that may be part of why Kumai-chan identifies with Miya~ Damn cheerleaders... lol. They're always a problem, huh? :P And you want to see Yurina/Miya huh? I'll have to think about it. ;) Sayu syndrome? Sacrilege!!! Momo is the cutest, after all! XD

SarangAi: Glad you liked it. :) Yes, I'm really trying to focus on character here and how everyone interacts with each other. We're still in the introduction phase really, though... I hope you continue to enjoy Berryz fics! :D

Rickker: Hey! I wondered if you were still reading. :D And yes, Miya did inspire this story herself! XD I'm glad to see someone who was there following along! Please continue to Enjoy! :D

oddball: Talking to someone like Miya is certainly different for Kumai-chan, so there's certainly something intriguing there in Kuma-chan World :lol: (for the reference, see Saki's blog from a few days back :D)

muppet: My pace Yurina! Yay! Glad it came through :) And Momo is always sharp. ;) Sharp like a hot pepper... XD lol

Kuji: Hey! :heart: Like I said before, Miya chose the teacher. :lol: I'm just following her wish... Glad you enjoyed the Yurina-centric chapter too! I was wondering about how people would react since it's not done often. :) ENJOY! And good job, you got it right! :D

ayase: This story is gonna be crack for you :lol: And it would be scandalous if Kuma-chan and Miya got along, wouldn't it? Wouldn't KumaMomo be cute too? XD And Miya is still very girly in here!!! Just... bad ass girly. ;) Continue to Enjoy, please :)

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Rival)
« Reply #45 on: May 30, 2011, 04:52:49 PM »
Chapter 4 - Rival


“BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU!”

“Did you take in the full 5k last night?” Miyabi asked in a bored voice.

“Double! You know the manager from Parco from last week? He called again!”

“That’s wonderful!” she praised, shivering inside. Retail managers… She was so glad it had been a long while since she’d had the ‘pleasure’ of one of them. “So the regular thirty percent cut is… three thousand.  I do like things even.”

“…Here you go. You know, I was thinking lately about going on my own. I mean, this is my second call in a week.”

“BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU!”

“Nearing the end of the third quarter the score is tied, 37 all. Kumai gets the ball… Score!”


Since her reply was drowned in the sudden cheer, Miyabi straightened her face and repeated again, “You still have no idea what you’re doing. You can’t even imagine a real customer yet. Or do you want to serve retail managers the rest of your life? You might as well drop out and go work tables at a maid café.”

“Irasshaimase~ Goshujin~sama!” Chinami chimed from beside her, smiling wide and giving a suitably servile bow. Miyabi elbowed her in the rubs, causing the girl to grunt at the lost breath. Her smile only halfway faded though.

Miyabi readjusted the hoodie which hung low past her waist, but not low enough to cover the chain dangling from her sash. It was the only accessory visible on her otherwise standard uniform, though her hair splayed out in a tail from a gold-threaded band behind 10-yen coin-sized golden hoops hanging from her ears. Three additional small rings pierced the back of her left ear as well.

“Retail managers aren’t all that bad…” the first-year said in a quieter voice. “Does the company even matter?”

“Trust me,” Chinami said, wincing slightly as she rose up straight again, “It does. If you trust us, you’ll find out what we mean eventually too.”

“Besides, what’s seven thousand gonna buy you?” Miyabi asked, her head tilted slightly. “And that’s even after working half the night.”

“A-as you say…” the girl stammered. “Natsuyaki-san.”

“BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU! BE-RI-KOU!”

Miyabi resisted the urge to hold her ears as the buzzer sounded.

“And that’s the third quarter! 41-39 is the score as we head into the final period…”

“Don’t you find that announcer annoying sometimes?” Chinami asked, scratching her chin as she watched the girl they just completed business with make her way through the bleacher supports and disappear back into the crowd.

“Why do you say that?” Miyabi replied indifferently, searching the crowds as she carefully counted the cash in her hand before stuffing it into her shirt. “It’s no louder than your normal voice.”

Chinami grimaced, leaning her head forward to scratch the back of it. “You got me there…”

“Oi, Natsuyaki,” came a voice from the crowd, and Miyabi’s eyes darted to see two girls in black, red-threaded seifuku separate themselves from the crowd. One had mid-length, red-streaked bushy brown hair, and two chains hanging from her waist, as well as a white leather jacket that certainly wasn’t part of the uniform. The jacket had colorful designs sewn over each side pocket, and on each shoulder. The other had long black hair tied in a ponytail as well and held her chin up, chewing gum in a fancy red jacket that Miyabi thought must have been Gucci. The skirt of the first hung well past the knees, while the other’s was actually quite short, almost to the thighs.

“You knew they would come, didn’t you?” Chinami asked in a toneless voice at her side, but Miyabi kept her eyes on the newcomers.

“It’s the one time of the year CTG deigns to come play in our gym, even though theirs is no better. Of course they’d come. I didn’t know who it’d be though.”

When they approached, the girl with the red streak slightly in front of the other who almost seemed to prefer to stick to the shadows of the bleachers above, they scrutinized and sized each other up carefully.

“Who’s the whelp?” Miyabi asked, gesturing with her chin at the girl in back.

“Nakajima,” the front one said slowly, “Would you like to introduce yourself to our friends here? We’re guests in their house, after all.”

“You better keep that in mind,” Chinami said, arms now crossed at her chest.

The named girl stepped forward, though still behind the other. “Nakajima Saki,” she said in a somewhat drawling voice. “First year, Cutie Gakuen. Nice to meet you.” Despite the gum-chewing and dumb-sounding tone, Miyabi watched her carefully. First years were never the best actors.

“You brought a first year to us!?” Chinami squawked indignantly, stepping forward, but Miyabi threw out an arm to hold her back. “Might as well serve us a challenge right here and now!”

“Easy, Chii,” Miyabi said. “I’m sure there’s more to the story.” Her head swung back to the girl in front. “Isn’t there, Murakami?”

Murakami Megumi grinned, that puckered smile seeming to imply some private joke she was just on the brink of laughing at, and her eyes sparkled dangerously. Miyabi knew it wasn’t just for show.

“Of course,” she said in a condescending manner. “After all, I wouldn’t want it to look like we were… neglecting you.”

“You could’ve just let us carry on with our business,” Chinami grumbled.

“We couldn’t just pass up the chance to say ‘Hi’ while we’re all gathered here together, now could we?” Murakami said with a flourish at the stands. Miyabi glanced to the side herself and saw the team huddled up with their coach, a tall woman with long black hair and a relaxed disposition. When she spotted Kumai, the girl was gazing directly back at her as she breathed heavily.

What was up with the athlete lately? She seemed to be paying Miyabi an inordinate amount of attention, and there was that day in the bath too… Ah, it wasn’t like she was the only one interested in what she and Chinami were doing down here, even if Miyabi wouldn’t have expected it from the girl. She was sure there were many eyes on them right now, and she wished she knew who they all were.

“She’s right though,” she responded matter-of-factly, “We are just trying to conduct business here.”

“Well you see that’s the problem,” Murakami said with sarcastic regret, “Your business is interfering with our business, which goes on to interfere in the school’s business. We can’t have this school of yours moving up on our turf around here.”

Miyabi felt Chinami light up at that, and she hoped the girl would use some of that wit of hers to try and conceal it as best she could. She felt her own spirits rise at that. So they were taking notice, were they? Well that was the plan after all, and Miyabi Natsuyaki was no longer used to anything but success in projects she put in the effort to plan.

Instead, she responded as expected to the slight. “That’s BeriKou Gakuen,” she stated seriously, and nodded her head toward the other girl again. “Now, are you gonna tell me who the first year really is, or should we just walk away right now?”

Somewhat surprisingly, the younger girl stepped up beside Murakami, peering calculatingly into Miyabi’s eyes. “I represent… a new element in Cutie Gakuen,” she said almost sweetly. “With our Megu-chan here thinking of transferring, and graduation coming up in so very few months, there may be certain… opportunities available for those who seek them.”

Miyabi studied her a moment as the other girl gazed back with eyes that almost seemed to be dancing. The girl had apparently dispensed with the dumbness act. Such a show of confidence worried her more than the acting. “But you aren’t one of those, are you?” she countered astutely, and Miyabi identified a slight quaver in the other’s gaze as at least mild surprise.

Then she looked back to Murakami.  Despite her apparently correct guess about the first year, she also most certainly noticed how familiarly she addressed her senpai. Except for perhaps a slight tightening of lips though, the older girl didn’t react to it.

“You might be transferring?” Miyabi asked the fellow second year, her mood falling slightly at a memory. “Gonna join her?”

The other’s face darkened. “That is none of your business, Natsuyaki.”

Just after she spoke a buzzer sounded, and the referees signaled the beginning to the final quarter. Miyabi glanced through the spectators again, but the teams were already back on the court and resuming play.

“She was my friend too, you know,” she said quietly, still gazing toward the court.

“And mine,” Chinami added from beside her.

“Just watch your step,” Murakami advised. “Remember who runs this district.”

“Oh?” Miyabi asked idly. “I thought we weren’t so competitive any longer.”

“Things change,” Nakajima said quietly, drawing all eyes to her. “People graduate. Others enter. Would think you’d know about that too.” She gazed placidly into Miyabi’s face. “Or maybe you don’t?”

Miyabi shrugged, pulling her red-and-gold-embossed black hoodie tighter around her shoulders. “I’ve never really paid much attention to such troubles except those which have found me.” This time she had even Chinami glancing askance at her.

“That’s a pity,” Nakajima replied. “Maybe you should start to show a bit more school spirit.”

Miyabi glanced at Chinami, who stared back a moment before shrugging with her eyes and turning away. Then suddenly, the girl’s temperament changed.

“Now you listen here,” she said, her ever-present smile only emphasizing her words in its contrast. “Don’t think I’ll just stand by while you tell another student of this school, and coincidentally my close friend, what to do.” Then she pulled out a lollipop from her jacket and began to lick at it, still staring hard at the two rivals. “Unless you’re lookin’ to start something here and now?”

The two Cutie girls looked between the two Berries before glancing at each other, though Murakami lowered her eyes quickly. Miyabi was amazed to see a lone wolf like Megu defer so easily to anyone, much less a junior, and decided that she’d have to look into what was going on down the street after all. She couldn’t have any potential upstarts begin hurting her business.

Then Murakami’s eyes came up, and they suddenly looked hard as stone. “You know as well as me this isn’t the place, Tokunaga. Though maybe we could arrange for something in the park later?”

“Maybe we should!” Chinami shot back, leaning forward and brandishing the lollipop like a weapon, but Miyabi threw out an arm to hold her back.

“Not now, Chii,” she said in a calming voice. Suddenly they heard a loud cheer come up from the crowd, and the PA announcer came through barely over the noise, “51-46 after a dunk by Kumai! I think we might be on our way to victory!” Within all the cheering a perhaps shriller chorus of boos echoed from the other side of the stands as well. The games between the two schools always brought out most of the two student bodies, especially since they were located so close together, and tonight was no different.

“Sounds like we’re gonna beat you tonight,” Miyabi said, a smirk forming on the corner of her lips.

“Don’t get overconfident,” Murakami replied, though she also glanced a bit nervously toward the court, where the Berries had just made another steal.

“So why exactly did you come down here anyway?” Miyabi asked as she peered suspiciously at the two again.

“Ouch, I’m hurt. Can’t friends just catch up with each other from time to time?” Murakami asked with a wicked grin.

Chinami laughed out loud. “Friends!” she burst out. “Last I saw you, Miya had left you under a bridge in the park all bruised and battered.”

Suddenly the other scowled, and took a challenging step toward Chinami before Nakajima reached out and grabbed her wrist, stopping the girl in her tracks. It certainly didn’t stop her scowl from deepening though.

“Natsuyaki’s right,” she said, eyeing both Berries warily. “This isn’t the place.” Then Miyabi noticed her eyes focus on Chinami a moment. She seemed to realize as Miyabi did too that eventually this confrontation would have to happen. She would have to help prepare her friend for it… somehow.

“As for why we came here, it was to let you know that things will be changing soon.” This time the first year looked back at Miyabi. “Yes. By next year things will certainly be changing.” And with that her lips turned up in a smile for the first time, and she broke out in quiet laughter that quickly became a bit wild. As she laughed, she pulled her older companion back the way they came, Murakami glaring daggers back at them for a few steps before finally turning away.

When they disappeared into the crowd again Miyabi did her best not to exhale too loudly. When she glanced at Chinami the other girl’s eyes were still focused where the others had disappeared, and though her smile was still there, it was very tight. After a moment she broke out of her spell and glanced to Miyabi.

“I want to kick her ass soon,” Chinami told her through her beaming smile. “I really, really want to…”

“You will,” Miyabi said absently, patting her friend’s shoulder as she stared off blankly into the crowd. Yes, she had some work to do. But since when would that be something new?

After a time a small cough brought them out of her personal reveries, and Miyabi glanced over to see another girl who had detached herself from the crowd and was looking their way. She wore her BeriKou seifuku very elegantly, without any extra accoutrements aside from a shiny chain necklace, and had long silky black hair braided close to the scalp at the top. She seemed familiar to Miyabi somehow, but she couldn’t think of why.

“Oi,” she called out to her. “Good girls shouldn’t come underneath the bleachers. It’s dirty here.” As if to emphasize her point a PET bottle fell from a bleacher just above the girl, but she cleanly just stepped aside to let it fall to the floor where it gave a small bounce before rolling to a rest. Miyabi squinted harder at the girl, and she felt Chinami do the same. “You’re a first year, aren’t you?”

“That’s right,” the girl said, calmly stepping closer. Miyabi stuck her hands in the pockets of her hoodie to glare as she closed in.

“How are your studies going so far?” Chinami asked, and Miyabi blinked at her smiling friend. Sometimes it was hard even for her to tell if the girl’s smile was as kind as it looked or hiding fangs that might be about to strike. That skill at deception was one of her strengths.

Kind it might have been, but the approaching girl stopped and glanced at Chinami with a look of innocent surprise from which she quickly recovered. “They are well,” she said in what sounded to Miyabi like an uppity voice. She was quickly starting to dislike this girl. “They’re hardly competitive at this school after all, are they not? Although the teachers do try hard.”

“Look, just scram, all right?” Miyabi said with a sour face. “We’re a bit busy here.” They needed to recount the haul they’d taken in over the course of the game, and discuss whether they might need to make any personnel management decisions.

However, Chinami gave her a level look, and she said no more, now pouting slightly as well. “Have you thought about being more active in the school and with your other classmates yet?” her friend asked warmly. Was Chinami actually trying to recruit her?  Miyabi appraised the young girl again. She was certainly pretty. That was, if you could get past the annoying snobbishness. Some guys did like that sort of thing. In fact, you could always find a guy who was into pretty much anything… as long as a young teenaged girl was involved.

“I may be beginning to,” the other said, considering them thoughtfully. “I have been watching you tonight.”

“Have you now?” Miyabi asked, mocking her tone a bit, her voice dangerous. This time Chinami lifted a hand to make a calming gesture toward her.

“Excuse me,” the girl replied, bowing her head slightly. “I haven’t introduced myself. I’m Sugaya Risako.”

“I don’t care…” Miyabi felt like growling before punching the girl’s lights out, but she stayed quiet in consent to Chinami’s wish. If her associate wanted to use her, fine, she had her own girls. Miyabi Natsuyaki would just certainly not manage her.

“Nice to meet you,” Chinami replied with a smile of her own, though without a bow. At least she was firmly establishing who was in charge here. “I’m Chinami.” She gestured to Miyabi. “This is Miyabi.”

“I know who you are,” the girl said mildly. “Most of the school does, or at least those who would care about the things you do.”

Chinami glanced over to Miyabi with an “I told you so,” smile, but she wouldn’t give the girl the pleasure of agreement. “If you’re looking for work, we already have a full complement of girls,” she said instead, “But there’s always a chance we could find new clients.”

Sugaya’s lips puckered in distaste. “Work?” she asked as if it was an unfamiliar word. “Oh no, I don’t need that.”

“Then stop wasting our time,” Miyabi growled.

“I was actually thinking of taking a more active part in your gang.”

Miyabi found herself staring a moment before completely breaking out in laughter. “You?” she asked, almost hysterically. “Join us? That’s a hoot! I’ve barely known you five minutes and already I can’t stand you. What makes you think I’d even consider you as an associate?” This time even Chinami stared in disbelief at the younger girl. She may have been more reasonable to begin with, but a request like this was just absurd.

The other’s cheeks flushed though in what appeared to be a small amount of anger, and she said in a hard voice, “There’s just the two of you now, isn’t there? You were small to begin with, but after that girl transferred I imagine you’re severely limited with just the two of you. All a rival would have to do is split you down the middle. Am I wrong?”

The knowledge she displayed of Maiha transferring made Miyabi stop laughing, and instead she narrowed her eyes at the girl. However, the younger girl didn’t stop there as she appeared decide on something, and her eyes settled on Miyabi. “Natsuyaki Miyabi, daughter of Natsuyaki Satoichi of the Sumiyoshi-kai Yakuza, currently residing above a club in Azabu Juban with your mother and doing your best to make your own way apart from your parents’ legacy.”

Leaving a stunned Miyabi in front of her, she then turned to Chinami, who stared back at her with wide eyes, smile gone. “Tokunaga Chinami…” she began, gazing thoughtfully into her face. “Unremarkable background, your father a middle management salaryman, so I’m guessing you fell in with the wrong group by chance and now are trying to establish your independence and prove yourself to your more… legitimate friends and associates.” It looked like she wanted to say more, but instead closed her lips and left the effect on the two girls across from her.

However, Miyabi didn’t get to this point without being able to deal with a wide variety of surprises such as this, so she recovered quickly. “So you know who we are.” She appraised the girl again; her neat hair and smart uniform. “I’m guessing you didn’t learn all that by beating up informants on the street. Though you know, that is more the type of thing we tend to do.”

“I did mostly learn about it through my family connections,” the girl replied. “They could be helpful to you too, I would imagine.”

“You don’t expect me to believe you’re some secret Yakuza daughter, do you?” Miyabi shot back, with Chinami glancing at her again.

Sugaya giggled at that. “Oh no, of course not,” she replied. “My father is in real business.”

Miyabi glowered. “Tell us again why we’d care to have you around?”

“It’s just something I wanted to give you to think about,” she replied with a warm smile, looking between them. “Three can accomplish more than two, after all.” And with that, and what Miyabi thought was a bit of a lingering glance at Chinami, she turned and walked back into the crowd.

“You know,” Chinami said, staring after, “She might have a point.”

“Say any more and I’ll kill you myself right now,” Miyabi grumbled, and she noticed the crowd seemed to be getting louder. When she glanced up, she saw all the fans on their feet cheering wildly. “I take it the game’s almost over?”

The two girls walked just out of their space below the bleachers so they could actually see the game, and as she thought, there were only seconds left. BeriKou was even actually up by five.

“Five… four… three… two… one…!” the crowd shouted, and the ball flew as the final buzzer sounded to deafening cheers from above them, with almost equally loud boos on the other side.

“Wow, look at that,” Chinami mused beside her. “We actually won.”



As the stands began emptying out, two seniors kept their seats, their long legs stretched out onto the purposefully empty bleacher just below them. “I can’t believe they actually blew it!” the taller one said, pulling her thick trench coat around her and staring at the star member of the BeriKou team who was now being mobbed by other team members and fans.

“It’s just a regular season game,” the other replied, her eyes drifting lazily and seemingly aimlessly across the opposite bleachers as they emptied out below. “The tournament is what’s important.”

“Still, it’s the first time we’ve seen them lose any game, isn’t it?” the first mused. “Although,” she said, glancing with a grin over at her friend. “There’s always the finish to track season as well.”

“Right…” the other said distractedly, as her eyes rested on two girls just emerging from below the bleachers. They were obviously attempting to be discreet, and doing a fairly good job of it, but for those who were looking, they also stood out with decorated uniforms and the hoodie one was just now pulling up over her ponytailed hair.

“Hello~” her companion said, waving a hand in front of her face. “You spacing out already? We’ve still got a busy night tonight, though I’m not sure why you still try. We have a free pass to the college if we want it.”

“Studying is still important,” the other responded, knocking her hand away, though now focusing on other girls still in the stands including a shorter one with a black sash tied as the obi for her skirt. “You can’t get anywhere without knowledge, after all.”

“Yeah, like you need it,” the taller said. “Cmon,” she continued, offering a hand as she stood. “Let’s go. I think this place is gonna get unfriendly soon.” She eyed the crowd gathering on the court. “Or at least, for those of us who aren’t you and have nothing to worry about. Plus,” she continued with suddenly bright eyes, “I want some after-game cake! You know how competition makes me crave sweets…”

“Whatever you say,” came the response, and the girls quickly made their way from the bleachers, smiling and giggling.

It was only a regular season game, but still, the Cutie Gakuen track star who doubled as almost universally respected school leader left the gym with a sour feeling in her stomach. Everyone knew that despite her other significant skills she also had a gift of connection with fate and even fortune telling. The final buzzer had caused something to reverberate within her as if signaling an omen, though she didn’t yet know of what.

Only five months remained until graduation, and despite a fulfilling career something was still missing. The winds were changing, and she just hoped they didn’t bring a typhoon along with them.

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Rival)
« Reply #46 on: May 30, 2011, 11:43:53 PM »
oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. the c-uties makes an appearance!!!  :thumbsup hmmmm.. will other members makes an appearance too??
was that Maimi towards the end??  XD  :? and it looks like magical forces are at play once again in your work..  :P

i didn't think that Miya and Chii were running a business?!.. i thought it was just the two of them... LOL.. so.. they are more than your typical teenage gangster.. XD
well, Miya hates Risako now... i wonder how long that'll last.. :lol:

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Rival)
« Reply #47 on: May 30, 2011, 11:50:37 PM »
Cutie Gakuen showing up looking for action.......Let's Get Ready to Rumble! and thanks for weaving megumi into the story, and for another maiha reference. both nakky and risako starting off nicely.....and chinami now getting some definite character development :thumbsup

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Re: Tsuukai! Berryz Gakuen (Rival)
« Reply #48 on: May 31, 2011, 04:47:22 AM »
Looks like Kumai-chan really cares about Miya.  :)

Why would Risako want to join Miya's gang? Not like I'm against it or anything, but she seems to do fine on her own with her father's business and all. What could it be? :roll:

I wonder who those two girls were at the end. Track star has to be Maimi, but the other... :?

Can't wait to see their 'business'. :D

When will our Captain show up? :roll:

Enough questions for now..lol.. XD Of course you can't answer them now, but I'll still ask. :P Be waiting for your next update. :twothumbs

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« Reply #49 on: May 31, 2011, 01:35:15 PM »
Hmm, so the c-ute girls begin to turn up and it would seem that many of them are on less than friendly tearms with Miya and Chii and I sure Megumi laid down a challenge to Miya, if not  a challenge then definatly a threat....

Seems as though Kumai cares for Miya in some way, though she is in an important game she still has time to look arounf and see where Miya is and what she may be up to..

It's interesting to see Miya/Chii business venture, I assumed they were just working for themselves but they could well be at the heart of thier own little enterprise of, uh, "workers"

Hmm, did we see Maimi and Airi at the end of this chapter too, I assume the track star is Maimi and from that I guess it is Airi who is with her....





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« Reply #50 on: June 01, 2011, 04:49:19 PM »
^I think the same way. The track star is Maimi and the other could be Airi.
Because she mentions about how studying's important.:D

Rii wants to get involved  :O and now Miya hates her. Why does she want to join them?? :?

Nakkii and Megu came to declare a war?? :w00t:

Ohh hurry up next chapter :cow:


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« Reply #51 on: June 01, 2011, 08:28:52 PM »
I had wondered where the idea for this came from, just how in depth did Miya go at Sakura Con? :lol:

Though I guess it makes sense that C-ute would be their rivals.

So, we begin by getting to see Miya and Chii conduct a little business under the bleachers, which is totally badass in a bad kids sort of way. Then they are confronted by Nakki and Megu.

Why is Megu taking orders from a first year? Are they also in the same business as Miya and Co? I guess they would be if they're telling Miya to stay off their turf.

And Yurina seems interested as well. I wonder if that will play out next? I wonder if Yurina won't eventually join the gang?

And then an appearance by Risako, who is already not gaining Miya's favor. Seems, she could be useful, though... Maybe Miya might want to look into that option, what with their apparently dwindling numbers.

And finally, a little appearance from Miami and Airi? Erika? Whoever, along with a visit from some bad omens.

So, what next...?

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« Reply #52 on: June 01, 2011, 10:18:57 PM »
it was in responce to someones question abut what kind of movie/tv show would they like to do.
Miya answered that her and Chii were the bad girls in school and Massa's a teacher there, Rokun's running with that in mind.

@kano-chan, I think we have gotten a glimpse of Captain, I believe the gymnast that got Miya's attention was her. Thats my guess anyway.

Lol C-ute the competition, I was half  expecting AKB girls myself, but realized it was pretty much a H!P show.
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« Reply #53 on: June 02, 2011, 07:14:01 AM »
@Rickker708, yeah, I thought that was Captain too, but I want a conformation and an actual meeting and covo between MiyaSaki. :)

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« Reply #54 on: June 04, 2011, 08:08:59 AM »
I'm assuming Megu and Nakki are in the paid dating/beating up people business too. Is there a gang fight coming up? If so I hope there's someone with a camera and a youtube account :lol:

I wonder if Yuri will get in on this business too. She seems interested in Miyabi's life...Also I wonder what Risako has to offer Miya and Chii? She already seems to know a lot.

And a Maimi and Airi(?) appearance? I can't wait to how this turns out.

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« Reply #55 on: June 04, 2011, 09:41:17 AM »
I haven't read much H!P fanfiction lately... or ever, really. I guess that makes this fic my first one ^^

This is really interesting! Bad girl Miya=awesome! I can't wait to read more about the gymnastics girl! (Captain? lol -my favorite member-)

Keep it up!! >3<

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« Reply #56 on: June 05, 2011, 05:26:38 PM »
Megumi-chan  :nya: :nya::nya: she's like the rival of Miya in C-ute before,ne?  :onionwhip: Mou...kinda missed her  :badluck:
And Riiiiiiiiiii-chan  :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1: why is it that Miya find her annoying, author-san?  :frustrated: i hope the opposite attracts here in ur story :luvluv2: (not Kuma-chan)  :bingo:  I hope Sugaya wants to join since she has a secret crush with the cool delinquent Natsuyaki  :shy2: :shy2: :shy2: (wishful thinking by me) :on ksweat:

And...and..Yajima has powers?  :onionwhip: :onionwhip: :onionwhip: eh, well, I bet Miya has as well, still undiscovered or something?  :dunno:
Likey the update, so update soon author-san!  :kneelbow:

Who is the person with Maimi at the end, Erika?  :on lol: :on lol: :on lol:




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« Reply #57 on: June 11, 2011, 05:06:11 PM »
Yay, finally got around to this.

Oh yeah, Cutie Gakuen! NAKKY NAKKY NAKKY!
Sort of missed Kumai-vision but the last chapter was more than what we usually get anyway. :bow:
Cool to see more people added to the mix and some other issues being stirred up.
Risako hm? lol, she doesn't seem the type so pretty curious about that.

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« Reply #58 on: June 29, 2011, 02:22:52 PM »
mmsuki: We'll have to wait and see who all makes an appearance :lol: Although, this is Cutie Gakuen... so you you can probably make a guess ;) And I don't know if they are "magical forces", but Maimi at least *thinks* they're magical forces. XD (yes, that is Maimi) Japanese girls are really into fortune-telling and such... This might be a kinda yankii spin on that. XD And hell yeah it's a "business" - Miya and Chii gotta make cash for their accessories, yo! :lol: And awww, you don't think Miya will hate Risako for long? ;)

muppet: Glad you're enjoying Nakky and Risako so far. :D More Chinami in this next chapter too ;) ...MUCH more. XD

kano-chan: Kumai-chan is a caring person :heart: And why would Risako indeed? We can only wait and see :) Captain will show up... eventually. XD

oddball: It's yankii friendliness :lol: Though yes, C-ute and Berryz have quite a rivalry here ;) Miya and Chii don't have too many "workers", but they're trying to make their yankii way :) Miya has a history for it, after all...

twintt: Studying is important to anyone :) if you wanna graduate.. And Nakky and Megu aren't exactly declaring a war... more a "We're still around, so stay the f*** outta our business" XD

rndm: Miya didn't really go too in-depth. :lol: Almost everything going on is mine, lol. Isn't under the bleachers the best play to conduct black market business? :lol: Although here it normally seems to be football bleachers... Well, basketball just happens to be big for those schools. ;) And Megu isn't exactly taking "orders" from her, though she has developed some level of deference... which you'll see more of the why for in time :) The sports star joining a yankii club? :o Noooo, scandalous! And yes, I will say without "help", Miya and Chii alone (don't even think about their "workers" being able to help XD) would certainly have trouble against CTG... Bad omens, indeed.

Rick: Thanks for the explanation :) Yay for someone else who was there!! lol. And yeah, not much AKB here. ^^; Atm... lol. Who knows if I keep watching Majisuka Gakuen :P though I hope to keep it to some inspiration at the greatest. XD

slasha: Hey! Haven't heard from you in awhile! Yay H!P youtube gang fight! :lol: And Risako has plenty to offer :) ...of some things, at least. People keep guessing on who's with Maimi :)

KKH: Yay! I'm glad to be your first one :) I hope it isn't too disappointing. :heart: And of course Miya is a bad girl ;)

ayase: Well if you missed Megu, you'll certainly see more of her here :) At least for awhile. Of course you'd be concerned over Miya's outward hatred of Rii XD You actually have some pretty good guesses here ;) I have a few surprises up my sleeve though... And trying to keep the downlow a bit on magical powers here. XD

Kuji: Hi there :) Glad you're reading~ and enjoying the Nakky! :lol: People seem to have liked Kuma-vision... I wondered what the reaction would be since you don't really see it elsewhere... I might have to do more then :) And Risako really is not the "type" XD


Another smiley-filled post, and well... it hasn't been quite a month yet at least!!! XD

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« Reply #59 on: June 29, 2011, 03:21:10 PM »
Chapter 5 – Fly High

Miyabi picked at a boxed meal she’d bought for dinner almost to the rhythm of the bass reverberating through the floor below her. It wasn’t too loud a couple floors up, but those low tones at least could certainly still be felt. The club always wound up the live music by ten or eleven though, causing it to die out to nothing more than a low hum, and even that vanished by one when it closed.

She sat at what was only a small card table in a cramped eat-in kitchen, faded paint peeling on the walls and tile covering the floor which had long lost the ability to boast its original color.  Such structural issues notwithstanding since they couldn’t be helped, Miyabi did her best to keep the place at least clean and tidy since nobody else around here deigned to lift a hand.

The clock ticked past 8:30 as she stuffed a bit more rice in her mouth. She really enjoyed this solitude and semi-silence since it let her unwind a bit after being out for the evening. Sometimes she’d be out later, but mostly it was just for dinner and maybe going to an arcade or something afterward. When she eventually made it back to her house, it was a good way to try and wind down from the high of the dates or having fun with friends.

The silence was even more enjoyable since her younger brother was off who knew where and her mother was not yet back. Of course there was no guarantee she even would be back, though she usually dropped by to freshen up before hitting the clubs. There were many nights the both of them would be out, but there still weren’t too many chances for Miyabi to have the place, for what it was worth, to herself.

Tonight though, she felt rather restless for some reason. The news they heard at the game the other day had been troubling her, her somewhat surprising conversations with Kumai had been troubling her, and there was something more personal she couldn’t quite pinpoint, but that seemed to be somehow related to the other issues as well.

After polishing off the meal, though leaving some garnish, Miyabi stood up and without bothering to clean grabbed her jacket to head out for a walk. The autumn chill hit her right away after she found her way outside and down the rickety metal stairs at the side of the club, and she wondered if the changing weather was also something that’d been bothering her.

After a block or two she decided to walk down by the river, and so after passing through the station, she took the steps at the side of the road down to its concrete banks. She daydreamed a bit while walking and staring into the reflection of the city lights in the dark water, and although she was certainly not the only one walking through such a popular hangout area, when some rough-looking people took notice of her uniform they generally ignored her and went back to their business. If the uniform wasn’t enough for them, once they got close enough to recognize her personally, her nonchalant features certainly were.

She knew some of the boys and girls and sometimes older men, even ones she knew rather “intimately” – those ignored her the most studiously – yet even those she didn’t generally knew of her or at least her family. The girls she looked at most warily, since they were the most dangerous. Guys she’d learned quite well how to handle, but no one was more devious and two-faced than a yankii schoolgirl.

Eventually, while glancing up at the blinking lights of Tokyo Tower which, this close by, could be seen from almost anywhere, she realized she was about halfway to Shiba Park. Briefly debating over whether to head on over there and see if any good tousle was going on tonight, she was distracted by the aroma of a sweet smoke.

Noticing the entrance to a tunnel just ahead which passed under the freeway, she headed curiously toward it. Indeed, the smell was stronger as she got closer, and when she reached the entrance could see through the dark the pinpricks of embers at the ends of the wrapped joints several people seemed to be partaking of.

Conversation had quieted just before she reached the mouth, and when she stopped there a familiar somewhat scratchy voice called out, “Who’s there?”

“You’re not very stealthy, you know,” Miyabi said carelessly, brandishing a lighter from within her jacket. “If I was a cop you’d be gettin’ ready to spend your next year or two in prison.” She flicked the lighter on to illuminate hers as well as several other faces deeper in the tunnel before lighting a cigarette of her own at her lips.

As she expected, those in view were all girls.

“Miya!” Chinami said, flushed in the light, and suddenly broke into a cough. “You nearly gave me a heart attack…”

“Natsuyaki-san,” one of the others said nervously, and looked anxiously around at the others as if not knowing what she should do.

“Do you have the whole badminton club in here?” Miyabi asked.

Recovering from her cough, Chinami replied, “Um, just about. I think Mii-chan was busy with some—”

“Oh, please don’t tell anyone about this!” one of the others said, a bright-cheeked young girl who looked like about as innocent a first year as you could find. “If word got around that we were…”

“What?” Miyabi asked. “Smoking weed? Hanging out with a delinquent?” She grinned at the girl’s wide eyes. Then she sized up Chinami again, who was looking rather guilty herself. “How on earth were you able to find it anyway? I don’t know of anyone at BeriKou who sells the stuff.”

Suddenly Chinami brightened, and the guilty expression turned more into one of pride. “Students from the university,” she beamed. “One of them just graduated CTG last year, and was an acquaintance through the badminton club.”

“Chii was the one who approached them though,” one of the older girls said quickly, defensively. “We would have never known about it if not for her.”

Miyabi’s grin had disappeared, and instead her blank face turned deadly serious. “Cutie girls are dealing pot?” she stated in a flat voice.

“Well… not the schoolgirls,” one of the second-years said uncertainly. “She’s graduated.”

“Yes, but if one of them has found a connection already, it won’t be long before it reaches at least the third years too… if it hasn’t already.”

“But that’s all right, isn’t it?” Chinami asked, her smile only faded slightly. “After all, we don’t do anything like that. We don’t want to do anything like that!”

Carelessly, now completely devoid the desire, Miyabi dropped the cigarette she’d barely puffed and stamped it with her high heel. “Yeah,” she said, taking a moment to think. “We don’t.” Then she glanced at her friend again.

After the initial shock of the revelation about the source of their drug, Miyabi suddenly felt very impressed by Chinami. She was certainly a reliable friend and cohort… in her own way… but finding a connection with a dealer was something that Miyabi herself had hardly even imagined. Her father of course surely knew a bit of such trades, but it was the kind of information she would never be able to uncover herself through those avenues.

Well, this was certainly something to keep in mind, but perhaps they were right. It might still be a good while before schoolgirls managed to get their hands on the source. In any case, it wasn’t really the style of CTG’s current leaders. Of course it was only a few short months until graduation now… Megumi came into her thoughts, and that dangerous girl who’d been with her at the game, but she quickly squashed them.

“Don’t worry,” she said with a bit of a grin, turning back to the rest of the nervous girls. “You certainly don’t have anything to fear about being reported by me.” She could almost feel the relief throughout the dank space. Amateurs… she thought in slight annoyance. They have no idea what they might be getting themselves into.

She glanced back at Chinami, who was now smiling at her again. Despite her idiotically angelic appearance, she had an even stronger feeling now though that her friend did know.

“Um…” Chinami began, “Well, would you like to try it at least?” And she offered her wrap to Miyabi.

Miyabi finally smiled again. “I was wondering if you’d ask.” Before taking it though, she glanced back out toward the river. “Wouldn’t it be better to head a bit deeper into the tunnel? You never know who might pass by here, and I think there’s a subway grate about halfway down.”

“Oh,” the older girl said. Miyabi thought she might be the club’s captain. “That’s a good idea…”


A short while later Miyabi and Chinami were walking the opposite direction back toward her apartment, and they almost couldn’t stop giggling.

“I can see why you dropped out of the club,” Miyabi managed between giggles. “Those girls are just clueless!!”

“I know, right?” Chinami replied through giggles of her own, then suddenly stopped. “Hey!”

Miyabi laughed even harder.

Eventually they made it to the metal stairs leading up to Miyabi’s apartment, and as they were walking up with the music reverberating through the walls, Chinami suddenly stopped and started banging on them.

“Hey you idiots!!” she yelled, which barely outdid the clamor even out here. “People live here, y’know!!!” Then, giggling again, she ran up to grab onto Miyabi’s arm as they made the rest of their way to the door.

“Thanks for that,” Miyabi said dryly. “I’m sure they’ll shut up now ‘cause Chinami Tokunaga told ‘em off!”

Chinami had just opened her mouth to respond when the music actually did stop. The girls stood stock still as if waiting for it to resume, but when it didn’t after almost a minute, Chinami glanced wide-eyed at Miyabi. “You don’t think…?”

“Oh my god!” Miyabi replied after a short hesitation, and the girls recklessly scampered the rest of the way to the door and into the apartment after Miyabi unlocked it, before slamming the door behind them and leaning back against it, breathing heavily.

After a moment they looked at each other, and just held that glance before breaking out into even louder giggles.

“Tokunaga Power!!!” Chinami cried, and Miyabi could hardly regain her voice to disagree… even though she’d glanced at the clock and saw it was past ten, which was the normal time for the too-loud live music to end.

Obviously her brother and mother were still out, likely until into the morning hours by now, so Miyabi pulled her friend after her into her room. They threw aside their jackets and dropped down onto Miyabi’s futon, leaning back against the wall as if they couldn’t support themselves any longer.

“So that’s what it’s like to smoke pot, huh?” Chinami mused after a moment, her eyes half-closed.

“Mhm…” Miyabi replied, glancing sideways toward her. “So you’d never tried it before?”

“Well I never had the opportunity!” Chinami replied in exasperation. “That stuff isn’t easy to come by, after all!!” Then her eyes narrowed again, though this time not from sleep, as she glanced back at her friend. “You saying you have tried it before?”

Miyabi looked forward again, grimacing. She’d thought about it earlier in the evening too, but had been able to ignore the bad memories. “Yes,” she replied simply, and Chinami continued watching her but stayed quiet for the moment.

“No matter what I do, you’re always gonna’ve done more, aren’t you?” Chinami asked, although in less of a jealous tone and more of an awed one. “Whenever I think of it, it’s like, man, Miya’s lived some life…”

Miyabi’s eyes turned sharply on her. “It’s not a life to be envious of,” she told the girl harshly, and Chinami blinked.

Taken aback by her friend’s words, Chinami looked around the room idly. Miyabi had done her best to make the place look as great as possible, but there were still visible patches in the walls that had just been painted over. Some of the drywall also wasn’t completely straight, and there were spots in the corners which looked like part of it had broken apart somewhat. Of course this was also Miyabi’s room. Out in the rest of the house it was easy to tell the differences in effort.

However, in their current state, such serious thoughts quickly flew from their minds and soon the two girls were giggling together again talking about how dumb the boys at their school were.

“It was so awesome that you just kicked his ass, right there in the middle of the gym!!!” Chinami went on, laughing with glazed eyes while she hugged her knees up toward her chest. Her skirt fell down her thighs a bit, and for some reason Miyabi found herself staring at long slim legs that were tinted slightly brown, or at least a bit more than her own.

“Stupid kids,” she replied, her eyes wandering as in a bit of a daze herself. It’d been a long while since she was high, and though it brought back memories like when she’d snapped at her friend earlier, there were definitely enjoyable things about it too. The feeling of freedom, freedom from thought, freedom from inhibitions… It was a bit like being drunk, only without the stomachache that usually came afterward. She really wondered sometimes why it was illegal…

“Give me a nice, handsome, clean-shaven man dressed properly in a suit any day,” Chinami continued, still staring off into nothing. She seemed to be enjoying it as much as Miyabi, and in a way she envied her first time.

“I know that’s what you like,” Miyabi said, grinning, and leaned in toward her face with a sparkle in her eye, finally catching the older girl’s attention. “You like confident men, men who will take charge and tell you what to do and what they want.”

Chinami blinked at her and smiled nervously. “Well I don’t know if I’d really put it that way…”

“But it’s true, isn’t it?” Miyabi pressed, gripping the girl’s shoulders in her hands. “When you date them it’s all about feeling protected… taken care of. I guess they are taking care of you with their money, huh?”

“Well it’s only logical they get what they pay for, isn’t it?” Chinami asked, eyes wide.

“Should I pay you?” Miyabi asked, her grin widening, and Chinami’s brows furrowed in confusion.

“What are you talking about, Miya?”

Miyabi blinked, and her grin faded somewhat. What was she talking about? As she looked into her friend’s face, she realized ever since she’d come across the girls in the tunnel that she’d been getting more and more restless and riled up. That thing that was bothering her earlier, for some reason it seemed to be pulsing in her now. Pulsing as she held her friend in front of her.

Carefully, she lifted her leg over Chinami’s, her skirt brushing atop the other’s, and sat down almost in her lap, straddling her.

“Miya, what are you doing?” Chinami asked, trying to register the situation through her still rather glazed eyes.

“Experimenting,” Miyabi replied with a smile. “Haven’t you ever experimented with a friend before?”

“Experimenting… how?” Chinami asked, peering into her eyes. There was enough focus for Miyabi to tell that Chinami was fully alert to her actions.

In response, Miyabi leaned forward and pressed her lips against her friend’s. Chinami gurgled a bit, but Miyabi held the kiss a short while before pulling back. Chinami’s eyes were almost wide as saucers staring back at her.

“To be honest, I haven’t actually either. So Chinami, you’re always talking about how I’ve done so much more than you… which of course is not really true anyway… but how about both of us try something else out?”

“You… you kissed me,” Chinami said dreamily, and after a second she giggled.

Now it was Miyabi’s turn for surprise. “What? What is it?”

“Miyabi Natsuyaki kissed me,” Chinami replied through her soft giggles. “I feel like that makes me… special or something.”

With that, Miyabi narrowed her eyes. “Does it now?” she said flatly. “Well this should make you feel real special then.” And she moved her hand to the girl’s stomach and her untucked shirt to slip it beneath the waistline of her skirt.

“Miya,” Chinami breathed, and her eyes glazed over again, though this time because of what Miyabi was doing to her. Instead of resisting though, her arms slipped around Miyabi’s back to pull her closer. “Make love to me, Miya,” the girl whispered at her ear, and Miyabi’s thoughts skidded to a halt in surprise until Chinami’s lips met hers once again. After that, she had no thoughts for much anything for a good while.



It took a minute for her eyes to open to the early morning light seeping in between her window blinds, and when she did she immediately recognized the familiar sensation of not being alone beneath her sheets. Her cotton-filled brain scrambled almost in a panic to remember what happened, who might have taken her to his home this time, until she realized fully that she was in her own room in her own house.

That was funny. She didn’t usually come here, despite its convenience to the lounge. Then she remembered it had been quite a while since she would have had anyone to bring back anyway, and panicked again wondering if she got too drunk or high to control what she was doing. High…

As it slowly came back to her, her door swung open and her brother stepped in. “Miyabi,” he mumbled in his white t-shirt and cute little heart-covered boxers, apparently having just woken up himself, “Where did you put my toothbrush…?” But when his eyes drifted up to her, he just stared, if without much reaction.

Miyabi finally rolled her head to the side to see Chinami, her hair tousled and bare from shoulders down to where the sheet ended at mid-chest, and the rest of the night came back to her… if in somewhat of a smoky blur.

“Well,” her brother said, and after a moment again, “Well, I see you’re… um… busy...” Seeing as how he couldn’t seem to stop staring, Miyabi pulled the sheet up further to their necks, and was quickly developing an early morning glare. “I’ll just find another toothbrush…” And he turned and pulled the door shut behind him.

Miyabi lying stock still, Chinami rustled beside her as she woke as well. “Miya,” she began, and she saw the girl smile and reach over as if to hug her. She deftly evaded though and slipped out of the futon to pull on some underwear that would last until she would be able to bathe.

Chinami sat up, rubbing her eyes as the sheet fell down to her waist. Yep, she certainly was naked. “Was someone just in here?” she asked, yawning.

“I dunno,” Miyabi replied non-committally, pulling some pajama bottoms on. When she looked back, Chinami was peering curiously at her.

“We just slept together, didn’t we?” she asked, and Miyabi stared back before swallowing.

“Yep,” she replied simply.

Then Chinami flashed her trademark smile. “It was really fun,” she said warmly.

Miyabi stood up, not bothering with a top to go over the bra. “You know you’re my best friend, right?” she asked, capturing the girl’s eyes sharply with hers.

“I know,” Chinami replied quietly.

Miyabi’s eyes flickered to the clock. “I’m sorry we only have the one bathroom, and my stupid brother’s using it now, but he won’t be long. There’s plenty of time before school at least… if we’d care to be on time.”

“I think I feel like being on time today,” Chinami said, her face seeming brighter than usual behind the omnipresent smile. Miyabi looked on as she turned away to the edge of the bed and slowly rose herself, getting a view of the entire package. She really did admire the girl’s body, after fully noticing for the first time. And she really did have fun last night too. It was… different… than anything she’d experienced before. That restless urge within her seemed to be gone as well, or rather… satisfied. Then she wondered…

Had she unknowingly found the answer she’d been searching for?

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