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« Reply #200 on: July 15, 2011, 12:25:59 PM »
PLEASE KILL THAT KENJI~!!  :banghead:

I REALLY HATE HIM~!!  :angry:

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« Reply #201 on: July 16, 2011, 10:01:21 AM »
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HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
Aaahh...!. nyan nyan don't be mad...she's a little girl,you can't slap her... yuko says while walking behind of kojima
i'm not mad,i don't care...!you can kiss whatever you want yuko...! kojima says mad...
i didn't kiss anyone ...they kissed me..! yuko answers while hugs kojima and says"you're the one i want..there's no need to be jealous nyan nyan"
kojima look other way  blushing and smiling...
and they keep walking to reharsal...!
MEANWHILE..
takamina was walking staring the clouds and trying to not think about acchan...
she couldn't help it acchan was the only thing on her mind..!
"mmm i'm so sad that i can see her in front of me..."takamina thinks and keep walking not paying attention to acchan who was standing there...
takamina wait...! a voice shouts in the back...
takamina stop walking..
huh?takamina turns around and sees acchan running to her..
ohh she was real..!
takamina smile because even if they were over she likes to see acchan..!
hey acchan ..!
hey takamina...!
takamina i wanted to tell you..
takamina interrupts "let's go together to the reharsal"
acchan looks at takamina and answers ok
they walk together...
acchan can't believe she's walking with takamina like that.. ! 
maybe that's what's left.. an" uncomfortables conversations" like nothing happen
takamina  says something to try to pretend that everything it's fine ...
acchan tears come out...
huh? what are you crying? takamina asks
i'm sorry takamina...! acchan answers and slaps takamina..!
takamina brushes her cheek...what was that for?
takamina asks mad
acchan shouts in tears  I'M NOT GONNA PRETEND LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED...! IT WAS REAL AND I HAVE A PROOF OF THAT (acchan shows takamina the ring) AND I DON'T REGRET ABOUT US..AND I...AND I WILL NEVER WILL FORGET IT...!
takamina looks away and asks why you brought that up?
what you win telling me those things?
acchan is shock by takamina's quetions
so ironic..you know..! you always said "please don't break my heart"
and i didn't...but you break mine in thousand pieces and you KEEP DOING IT...! YOU KEEP REMINDING MY PAIN...! takamina shouts looking at acchan 
takamina goes away...!
acchan kneels in tears and start punching the floor...!
MEANWHILE
 note: they call each other yukirin and mayuyu to bother and because is fun for them..!
yuki and mayu were in yuki's room fooling around...!
yuki was laying her bed and mayu was using her phone chatting with kenji who was in the other room...!
mayuyu who you texting so much? i'm gonna get jealousy...! yuki says pouting
awww really mayu says while jumping over yuki....
a friend yukirin..who reply my e-mails and texts ....!answer mayu  while kissing yuki... 
i'm sorry is just that i don't like to use my phone...!yuki says...
mayuyu stop kissing me someone can come in...!
i don't care yukirin...!
i wanna kiss you till i get sick of it..! says mayu while kissing and tickling yuki
stop...stop yuki says laughing...
mayu stops tickling and kissing...
mayu tired lays her head on yuki's waist and says in a serius tone and with tears in her eyes "yuki don't you dare to leave me.. because i feel that i can't live with out you...!"
yuki moves mayu from her waist and sits in the bed..she looks at mayu's eyes and while wiping the tears say" i will never leave you" and kisses mayu on the cheek to make mayu smile...
and besides you're my little girl and you need me yuki says to annoy mayu...!
but mayu answer yes, i'm your little girl and i need you...!
the phone rings ...
it was the alarm the gotta go to the reharsal...!
let's go mayuyu...! yuki says while grabbing mayu's hand..
MEANWHILE
takamina was sad and couldn't stop thinking about acchan so she was waiting to acchan cross that door to apologize but she never did...!
i thought she would come so weird i talked to her yesterday..! mariko says 
wow acchan didn't come... all the girls murmure...!
all the girls arrive 
and they start with the practice...!
nyan nyan was still mad, yuki and mayu were fooling around,takamina was sad and yuko was trying to get nyan nyan's attention...!
the prectice end...
nyan nyan went home with out yuko notice...
she gets home and see the apartament...!
ahh this place is a mess...! now i gotta clean it...! says nyan nyan looking down...
kojiharu starts cleaning and complains about yuko
"this girl really knows how to turn my world into a big mess"
(yuko is been living with nyan nyan since christmas)
kojiharu keeps cleaning the house then she goes to the room and start cleaning yuko's stuff...
"wow this girl is really a walking mess" 
kojiharu was cleaning and saw this weird photo album very colorful btw
she opens it and see a lot of pictures of her and lot of pictures of yuko with her...and also a lot ofpictures of her 
in lingerie, dressing like a catwoman,deessing like wonder woman..!
in the end of the album is written "my everything"
kojima blushes and put the album back in yuko's stuff
nyan nyan sighs "stupid yuko" she changes her clothes and make dinner and she sits waiting for yuko ..!
yuko arrives home ...sees kojima sitting... and a lot of food 
yuko number 1: she looks so good in that red dress... oh god i love red on her...!
yuko number2: focus...! you perv....!she made you dinner..! is this a special ocasion?
yuko number3: maybe she's planning to kill you for lying to her and this is a goodbye dinner
yuko number1: no, no she wouldn't that to me... you heard she's not mad...!
nyan nyan gets up of her seat and got closer to yuko...
yuko close her eyes and feels kojiharu's lips on her cheek
yuko number 1: awwww
yuko number2: don't let her fool you with that hot dress and this kiss..!
yuko number3:maybe this is the kiss of death..!
yuko: " i'm thinking too much lately "
yuko opens her eyes
let's have dinner kojima says smiling...
yuko looks at nyan nyan and smile back and both sit to eat...!
sorry for my english and for taking to long... i was watching majisuka gokuen...! wow acchan,yuko,mariko,rena and mayu can really act ...!
 







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« Reply #202 on: July 16, 2011, 11:42:41 AM »
Aww, the photo album. Yuko, why so sweet?!  :cry: :wub:

Right right? Rena as Gekikara is INTENSE!!!
Defeating Gekikara is a dangerous dream.

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« Reply #203 on: July 16, 2011, 11:54:37 AM »
I agree with RenaChii let's kill that bastard ><

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« Reply #204 on: July 16, 2011, 12:12:05 PM »
you guys are going hate him a lot more...!
when you see what i've prepare ... :angry:
mayuki will kill you...:cry: acchan will make you happy..! :D kojiyuu i don't want to destroy them but i have to :banghead:

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« Reply #205 on: July 16, 2011, 07:21:25 PM »
Takamina!!! Don't do like that to Acchan... waaa....  :cry:

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« Reply #206 on: July 17, 2011, 03:32:58 AM »
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HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
yummy...! in this restaurant the food and deserts are delicius...mayu says smiling and hugging yuki's waist..!
you think? i mean..i pass so many times but i never pay it attention..!says yuki with her arm around mayu's neck..
let's go... you're  going to like it...! mayu says and drags yuki inside the restaurant..mayu takes her to the last table in the corner...!
it's a little bit dark this restaurant huh? yuki says smiling
well that's the point..! mayu answer 
they sit and wait for the waiter to take their orders...!
can i take your order..?
give me.. uhh .. salad with rice and pepsi ...what you're going to order mayu?
i want the same ...! mayu says
how did you know about this restaurant? yuki asks
well... i came with a friend..! mayu answers
do you know what it's the best part about this restaurant?mayu asks
no, i don't..!answers yuki
they take too long with the food..! and i can do this...! mayu starts kissing and biting yuki in her neck ...
 yuki blushes and feels mayu's hand in her thigh...!
yuki put her arm. around mayu's neck and pull her even closer...!
(the restaurant was dark and they were in the last table so it kinda  looks like they just were hugging)
mayu and yuki were kissing passionately...!
mayu's phone starts ringing
yuki says "don't pick up, don't pick up"
and they kept kissing and touching each other...like 2 minutes more...
they get up of their seats to go to the bathroom but the waiter gives them their orders ..!
yuki sighs...and says "i'm hungry and it's kinda hard to choose...!"
mayu smile and says you don't to choose...let's eat..!
they eat and they were full 
yuki's phone rings.. it was the alarm she had to go...! 
mayu i'm sorry i gotta go.. i have this photo shoot....! yuki says
don't worry go..! mayu says smiling 
see you later says yuki and kisses mayu in her forhead...!
 mayu see her phone and she had 4 missed calls from kenji and a new text message from kenji:
"where are you? you told me you wouldn't take so long...!
i'm waiting you outside of your house.."
mayu pays the bill and goes to her house..! 
MEANWHILE
it hurts...! stop yuko...!
but i need to clean it.... (yuko is trying to clean a wound in  kojiharu's knee)
kojiharu shouts "i said stop yuko...!"
but nyan nyan i just want you to feel better...!
i know kojiharu says and got closer to yuko and kiss her on her cheek..! thank you yuko...!
yuko blushes and says you're welcome..
what's wrong nyan nyan?
you're acting weird...! says yuko laying in nyan nyan's shoulder...!
it's just... that i don't know what to do..takamina don't talk to miichan since we went to the hot springs and is uncomfortable especially since we are in no3b and we have to spend much time together..! kojima says and sighs
don't you guys have a performace tomorrow? yuko ask
yes,we do answers kojima
don't worry nyan nyan everything is gonna be okay between those two..!yuko says smiling 
kojihary says yuko... and hugs her tighly...!
yuko says kojima san and got red 
yuko don't ruin the moment...! kojima whispers in yuko's ear..! they stood like that like 5 min...
kojima says i'm hungry and breaks the hug and goes to the kitchen..!
yuko sighs and says "she told me  don't ruin the moment and what she just did? ruin it.."
yuko takes her cellphone and text takamina:
don't be such a baby..! miichan doesn't  know about you and acchan..! you're hurting miichan,acchan and kojiharu in the way..! 
remember that you guys are in no3b ..SO GROW UP AND LET IT GO...!
MEANWHILE
takamina gets the message... and sighs while walking home 
takamina thinks"how sad it is to remind you.. I feel so lonely..it was easy loving you but so hard to forgeting you..!
 How can i forgive you? when i have so many wounds, i just want to hug you and kiss you and forget the past, that hurts..! but i can't acchan i'm sorry...!"
takamina cries and keep walking home..!
MEANWHILE
mayu was laying in her bed with kenji naked... 
mayu asks what time is it?
it's  7:00 pm  answers kenji ...
where are you yuki? mayu says murmuring 
kenji heard what mayu said and answers she had photoshoot today with sae for that stuff of prince and princess..maybe yuki is late because she's with sae eating or something else..!
you know once yuki told me that she felt attracted to sae....!!
SHUT UP...! shouts mayu angry while she gets up from bed with the balnket and goes to the bathroom with her cellphone... 
mayu locks the door and calls yuki..!
hello?yuki says
where the hell are you? why you haven't call? who you think you are? is it true that you're with sae? why did you lie to me..? mayu asks yelling at yuki 
mayu what the f...? stop yelling me and i can't answer right i'm in the middle of something ok..!
mayu says whatever and hung up angry...
mayu gets out of the bathroom...
is she with sae? asked kenji 
you know there's nothing that you need to do now? because i don't to see you anymore...! so go... mayu says mad
kenji gets ip from bed , pick up his clothes  and kiss mayu in her forhead and says "i'm the one for you"and leaves  mayu's house..
mayu takes a shower and changed the blankets and lays on her bed waiting for yuki to call...
mayu waits for an hour and when she's about to fall sleep someone enters the room ...!
mayu turns her head and sees yuki standing there with some chocolate ice cream..!
what was that all about? you were yelling at me...! says yuki mad ..
mayu looked away "you were with sae what you want me to do?"
ahh i didn't wanted to tell i didn't want you to get like this..! answer yuki 
sorry mayu ...!
mayu gets up from bed and got closer to yuki.. hugs her and says in tears" no, i am sorry...!"
hahaha you're adorable mayu...the ice creams are melting let's eat them...!
both girls were laying in the floor eating the ice creams and having a good time...!
you know everybady heard you on the phone ..it was embarrasing never though that you could get that mad..! yuki says laughing
sorry yuki...! 
no it's okay i'm just telling you...
and you know miichan told me that jealous people are jealousy because they cheat too..! says yuki laughing
huh? mayu gets up and asks what? what she knows about jealous people? she's crazy..she doesn't know anything, don't talk to her ...! mayu yells mad..and pouting at yuki
why are you mad again?yuki asks 
mayu sits again on the floor and keeps eating her ice cream..!
yuki is speechless..!
sorry for my english...! i'll fix acchan and takamina later ok...!comment comment





  




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« Reply #207 on: July 17, 2011, 03:48:45 AM »
Mayu!!! what are you doing!!!  :angry:

cant wait for takacchan~~  XD

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« Reply #208 on: July 17, 2011, 07:29:29 AM »
I don't who is the one who make the situation more worst but . . . . AS EXPECTED I STILL HATE THAT KENJI~!!!!!  :angry:

Reading the part when Mayu & him in bed make me want to punch someone~!!  :banghead:

I'm expecting it will be a MaYuki in the end so please make it true~!  :bow:

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« Reply #209 on: July 17, 2011, 09:03:14 AM »
Mayu how can you !!!! This is total betrayal.... Would rather see SaeYuki in this..

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« Reply #210 on: July 17, 2011, 09:16:30 AM »
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Kenji I can't forgive him even is a fic!!!!!!!! Mayuyu why do you do that to Yuki?!!!!
« Last Edit: July 17, 2011, 09:23:26 AM by kahem »

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« Reply #211 on: July 17, 2011, 03:20:18 PM »
poor yukirin..her girlfriend make love with another guy..and that guy is yuki's family..
Mayu :angry:


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« Reply #212 on: July 18, 2011, 01:37:56 AM »
sorry for not posting anything...! i was busy watching majisuka gakuen 2...! :oops:
i'm so saaaaaaaaad that it ends....! :cry:
i going to writte the next chapter now...!  XD

 someone can tell me what's the name of the songs:
1rst season opening and 2nd season ending please...

btw those girls can really act... i'm still impress by rena,jurina,mayu and tomochin...! they were amazing....! :cow:

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« Reply #213 on: July 18, 2011, 09:43:47 PM »
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HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
uuuuhhh today is your performance nyan nyan..! wake up says yuko and kiss her on the cheek..
no,no,no yuko stop! i want to sleep a little bit longer....!
c'mom wake up nyan nyan it's a brand new day,the sun is shinnig and the birds are singing..WAKE UP..! yuko says happy while resting her head in kojima's chest..
nyan nyan felt yuko's body on hers and couldn't resist hugging the tiny girl really tight..!
no, i don't want to wake up...! i want to stay like this for ever yuko...!
nyan nyan i want the same but you gotta wake up..we have to go to the reharsal..!they will kill us if we miss it..
kojima opens her eyes resign and took her time to stare at the beatiful girl who was on top of her and always give her a sweet kiss to wake her up...!
haruna thinks"what did i do to deserve someone like you"
yuko is blushing for the intense look and asks what's wrong nyan nyan..? are you okay? do you have fever? yuko concerned touch kojima's forhead...!
yeah i'm okay yuko don't worry..! nyan nyan says happy..!
both girls get up from bed ..
yuko went to prepare breakfast while kojima is showering..!
haruruna get outs of the bathroom and she could smell the breakfast.. she dress up and went downstairs ..!
kojima smiled at yuko and say:
"i love when you make your monumentals breakfast (that means very much food)"
did't i told you that i'm devoted to make you happy...! yuko answers
MEANWHILE 
some girls had arrive to the reharsal and start talking while wait for the other girls to show up..!
takamina was sitting in a corner thinking about her beloved acchan.."i think that i was too raw..but she hurt me  so bad"
someone enters the room.. takmina looks to see who is...!
it was acchan..
takamina looked acchan's eyes that were so swollen for so much crying..
acchan saw takamina staring at her,she looked other way and went to the bathroom ...
acchan tried no to cry by biting her finger but it was useless she started crying and she couldn't stop ..the pain that she felt is was indescriptable,she just wanted takamina by her side...!
takamina was looking for acchan everywhere (even the things between them were a little bad takamina didn't like to see acchan like that)and enters to the bathroom and see acchan sitting on the floor laying her head against the wall with tears in her eyes..!
acchan stares takamina for a bit and then look other way
takamina is standing in front of acchan... takamina gets down and sit in front of acchan..and stares her for a while..!
acchan blushes and she is still looking other way then she feels takamina's hand in her cheek,which makes her gets another tone of red..! takamina wipes acchan's tears away with her finger..! 
acchan looks takamina directly but shyly,takamina is looking acchan with a sweet eyes ..and got closer to acchan's face just a few inches away from her lips
doubting about what she should do...
takamina can't resist anymore and kiss her slowly..!
acchan was surprise but she wanted takamina..!
acchan puts her arms around takamina's neck to pull her even closer..!
after a minute acchan pull away from the kiss looked to takamina and then starts crying ..takamina hugs her..!acchan says I LOVE YOU TAKAMINA...! 
I LOVE YOU TOO ACCHAN...!
MEANWILE
mayu enters the room and see her captain talking with sae and sayaka..!
mayu got jealous but she thought it twice...!
the only thing that came to her mind was crying because that's what she wanted to do just cry..!
mayu  hugs yuki and interrupt the conversation..!
mayu what's going on? sayaka,sae and yuki asked
i'm sorry yuki..! i'm really dumb answers mayu in tears crying like a little baby and hugging yuki even tigher..
it's okay mayu ..! yuki says smiling
everybody was looking..
what..!?!? you have never seen someone crying..!!says yuki mad...
MEANWHILE
takamina and acchan get out of the bathroom happy...!they walked the hall holding hands but once they enters the reharsal room they acted normal..!
yuko and kojima arrive 
yuko as always was doing a big deal about tonight no3b performance,yuko invited everyone too see no3b 
takamina texts acchan:
come see my performance tonight...!;)
acchan text back:
ok..!:D
the practice ends up and everyone went home to change their clothes and go to see no3b
the night came 
everyone was waiting in first row...!
mayu wondered why kenji is here?"well is kinda easy to know akari is here too" she thought
yuko arrives and saw akari ...
wow akari what the hell are you doing here?yuko asks a little bit surprised
kojiharu saw akari from backstage talking to yuko and she goes with yuko and akari...!
kojima asks mad why are you here?
hey hey ...! easy kojiharu i invited her ... answers mariko(not knowing that akari kissed yuko)
haruna mad takes mariko's arm and drags her to the corner...!
and asks what the hell mariko? what did you bring her?
mariko was speechless and thinking" is she jealous about me and akari? she never acted this way before...! i kinda like it"
sorry haruna i been closer to akari since the day of hot springs SO DEAL WITH  IT...!
mariko was happy to see haruna in that state...! it makes her feel important to haruna...!
sorry that i'm late! yuki says while sitting next to mayu..!
mayu was nervous a couple sits was kenji who was drinking like an alcoholic...!
acchan went backstage to see her tiny captain and whish her luck..!
takamina pushes acchan in a corner and start kissing her..! takamina whispers in acchan's ear "i'm glad you are here with me.."!
MEANWHILE
haruna takes yuko's arm and pull her closer and gives her a kiss on the cheek...! in front of akari
akari rolled her eyes ...!
it's time.. i gotta go..! kojima says and leaves the girls
acchan gets back to her sit in first row..!
nyan nyan i want you kiss me again shouts yuko while running after nyan nyan..!
yuko gets back to her sit...!
the shows starts no3b starts with relax 
yuko's eyes where shining while watching her nyan nyan singing ..!
SHE'S SO BEATIFUL yuko shouts like a crazy fan while taking a lot of pictures of nyan nyan..!
when they started singing kimi shika everyone went crazy...!
when they were singing kimi shika takamina couldn't help to sing it  and stares to acchan .. 
nyan nyan winked at yuko ...!
yuko blushes and shouts I'M YOUR BIGGEST FAN...! 
all the girls say yuko calm down...! 
SHUT UP MY NYAN NYAN LOOKS REALLY HOT,I CAN'T HELP IT...!
all the girls sighs and  say"well that's yuko..it's not like we can't stop her to cheer her nyan nyan"
mayu hugs and smile to yuki the whole song and gives her quick kisses without anybady notice...!
keanji was really jealous...!
when the song end mayu went to the bathroom ....!kenji went after her with out anybody notice..!
so mariko-san are you having fun? akari asks
yes,i'm having fun..!
do you still like her don't you?akari asks
what? what are you talking about? mariko says while looking down..!
why you don't fight for her..?
no,she chose long while ago...!
really because that's not what it looks like...! akari says while using her head to point to the stage..!
mariko looks to the stage and kojima was staring at her with a intense look..!
yuki was worried for mayu and went to look for her...!
when yuki walks in the hall see a couple kissin passionately...!
yuki looked closer and it was mayu with kenji..!
yuki blink she thought that it was alcohol that she was delirious...!
yuki kneels and start crying...!mayu see someone staring at them...!
mayu looks closer it's was yuki ...!
mayu was surprised and run after yuki...!
yuki gets up and runs away when she saw mayu coming... 
yuki got out and  runs fast to her home and thinking "what did just happen ? it hurts...it hurts really bad...!
mayu was behind her shouting stop...!
yuki was trying to loose mayu so she cross a street with out looking ..!
mayu shouts WATCH OUT..!
the car hits yuki leaving her on the floor..! mayu reach her and take her in her arms mayu was in tears...yuki was unconscious and bleeding..! 
the man ofthe car say "she came from nowhere...!"
shut up...! call an ambulance ...! mayu says nervous
the ambulance came and took yuki to the hospital..!
mayu calls yuko to tell her what happened..! and also calls yuki parents..! 
all the girls arrive to the hospital (also kenji and akari) 
what happened?asked yuko
mayu was sitting in tears and just kept repeating "it's my faulth"
all the girls were bewildered...!
 acchan hugs mayu  and takamina joins to the hug..!
sorry this one suposed to be longer.. i finished yesterday but a press the wrong button and end up erasing all ...i was so mad that i wanted to throw my ipod against the wall but i didn't..! just went to sleep and here it is i wrotte it again except for this time it's not as deep like the other sorry but i'm too lazy to do it exactly the same..!:(

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« Reply #214 on: July 18, 2011, 09:57:06 PM »
i'm happy Takamina and Acchan together again~~ :deco:  :heart: :deco:

but what the hell Mayu!!!! :angry: :angry:    what have you done to Yuki!!!!!!  :mon headbang:

and that Akari!!! stop poisoning Mariko's mind!!!  :temper:

man!! I cry when the car hits Yuki!!!  :fainted:

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« Reply #215 on: July 18, 2011, 11:41:53 PM »
OMFG! KENJI!!!! HOW DARE YOU TAKE MAYU'S VIRGINITY AWAY?! YUKIRIN IS SUPPOSE TO BE THE ONLY WHO CAN TOUCH MAYU!!! AUGH  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :angry: :angry: :angry:

KILL ME NOW!!! I HATE YOU MAYU!!!

AUGH AKARI WTF ARE YOU DOING?! AND MARIKO!!! DON'T BELIEVE ON AKARI'S WORDS! SHE'S LYING! :[[

YUKO BEING A SUPPORTIVE GIRLFRIEND!  :wub: DON'T KILL MY KOJIYUU IN YOUR FUTURE CHAPTERS. :[[

DON'T KILL YUKI TOO. :[[

I'M GLAD TAKACCHAN IS THERE TO MAKE ME HAPPY AT LEAST.  :shakeit:
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« Reply #216 on: July 19, 2011, 11:57:07 AM »
30(51) 
HUMAN BEHAVIOR...(irrational,stupid,misunderstood,confusing,reckless,ignorant,desire to possess...someone or someones..!)
 
THE NEXT DAY...
yuki's parents had to work and the girls also have their own things to do...!
yuki wakes up and see mayu sleeping in a chair holding her right hand and sae sleeping in another chair holding her left hand..!
yuki remembered the accident and mayu kissing kenji..tears comes out..yuki tries to stop but she can't and thinks: "why you did this to me? why you're here? i don't to see you or remember you ..! yuki bites her lips..
mayu wakes up and see yuki with her eyes open..
sae also wake up...!
oh yuki you wake up...! sae says 
mayu first rection was hugging yuki..
yuki looks away and asks who's yuki? and who are you? while tears come out..!
what.. you don't remeber us? mayu asks 
sae calls the doctor leaving yuki and mayu alone..
mayu in tears says "YOU CAN'T FORGET ME..I'M MAYUYU.. YOUR LITTLE GIRL.. I NEED YOU...!" mayu holds yuki's hand..!
yuki slaps mayu hand and says "i told you i don't remember with hate in her look and crying"
mayu kneels and cry even more but tries to wipe her tears with her hands  "it doesn't matter you will remember me with time...i love you yuki..."
the doctor enters the room to exam yuki..
the doctor says"sorry but i'm to ask you to leave..you should come tomorrow.. now the last thing that yuki need is disturb.."
sae and mayu goes home..!
MEANWHILE
yuko we have to go...! why you taking so long? nyan nyan says and goes upstairs opens the door to her room and see yuko sitting,crying and staring a picture of her..!
yuko why are you crying? nyan nyan asks while wiping yuko's tears..yuko stutters and nyan nyan can't understand what yuko is saying..!
yuko hugs nyan nyan very tigh and shouts "BECAUSE I DON'T WHAT I'LL DO IF SOMETHING HAPPEN TO YOU..!
nayn nyan can feel yuko's tears in her shoulders and her heart melts with those words and make her cry too..!
nyan nyan breaks the hug, put her hands on yuko's face and says" YUKO I LOVE YOU SO MUCH"...! 
MEANWHILE
all the girls were worry about yuki and they were sad..
why this happen to her? she is so nice and sweet..!sae says crying.. (mayu couldn't forget the hate on yuki's eyes and she's wating to go tomorrow to the hospital..!)
takamina try to cheer them up and says" everything it's gonna be okay don't worry her momories will come back soon...!"
then it was takamina's turn for the photoshoot..!
takamina couldn't focus in the photo her head was somewhere else..!
acchan waits for takamina's turn ends so she could talk to her..takamina's turn end and she went to the dressing room and sits in the couch..!
acchan went after takamina..
hey minabi..!
hi acchan..!
acchan sits next to takamina and say "it's okay takamina..you don't have to be strong this time ,i'm here for you"
takamina lays her head in acchan's lap and cries..!
acchan hugs takmina and kiss her on her head ..!
takamina says thanks acchan
MEANWHILE
kojiharu and yuko arrives and both looked like they been crying..!
mariko thinks "i know it's not right thinking about this but what happened yesterday she really was jealous about me and akari? i now she seems like she fought with yuko...!
this gotta be a sign..!"
mariko goes to say hi to nyan nyan..!
hey nyan nyan are you okay? 
yes i'm fine...!
so why you look like you been crying?
well..that's kinda personal..
hey haruna i was thinking to go to your apartament today because i'm tweaking mine..can i go?
yes, you can silly head..!
the reharsal ends
 mariko went to kojiharu's apartament with kojiharu and went to buy food..!
mariko sits in the living room and thinks"this is it i gotta do it"
mariko goes closer to nyan nyan who was in the kitchen..
hey nyan nyan mariko says behind kojiharu..!
kojiharu turns around...!
mariko kiss her..kojiharu was shocked but pull away from the kiss and asks 
what the hell mariko? 
mariko was surprise that kojiharu reject her..!
i kissed you..mariko answers
why? haruna asks
you feel something for me! i saw you yesterday staring at me and you got jealous for me and akari..!mariko answers
what ?!?!?  no,i don't  and i wasn't staring at you..i was staring akari because i hate her she kissed yuko a couple days ago...! sorry mariko.. i like you but i love yuko..!
mariko was ashamed by her behavior that she went home..!
yuko arrives with the food...!
where's mariko?yuko asks
she left ...she said that she had something to do..! answers kojima with a smile...!
MEANWHILE
yuki was staring at her window thinking" you said that you love me..that word means anything to you?
sorry for my english..!



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« Reply #217 on: July 19, 2011, 12:10:44 PM »
Why are you lying Yuki???  :( :(   but can't blame her.. she was hurt because of Mayu~~ :cry:  and that idiot kenji!!!!! :angry:


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« Reply #218 on: July 19, 2011, 08:26:02 PM »
Dayum Yuki, pretending is bad. yet, I feel her game. I guess, it will show how Mayu is guilty and determine she is towards Yuki.

Damn that KENJI!!! Augh, this is why I hate antagonist in stories.  :banghead: But it gives challenge. :]
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« Reply #219 on: July 19, 2011, 08:55:19 PM »
ARRRRRRG!!!!! Just kill Kenji and Akari!!!!!!!!! ><!!!!
By the way, Yuko cheering her Nyan Nyan is so funny and cute

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