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« Reply #80 on: June 29, 2011, 08:57:48 AM »
please let me know what you think...!
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« Reply #81 on: June 29, 2011, 09:39:55 AM »
Waaa, Haruna don't worry it's only 2 weeks. Or... am I wrong?

'So baby I'll be waiting for you.' - Glad I have a song that suits in BIG GOODBYE.

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Is it the end now?
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« Reply #82 on: June 29, 2011, 09:44:58 AM »
noo she leaves for two months..!
i got confuse (my bad...!) :D
no it's not over yet...!
unless you guts want me to leave it like that..!

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« Reply #83 on: June 29, 2011, 09:52:27 AM »
Ahh, hell that was long. Well, it's not a good ending for me if you'll end it that way. Still hoping to have another chapters. Cause I got a feeling something will change when Yuko gets back to Japan. Hehe :P
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« Reply #84 on: June 29, 2011, 09:58:06 AM »
actually i was thinking leave it that way
and start with another fic that someone ask me about aachan and takamina wich won't be long.!!
till something good and intersting come to my head..!
and then finish with yuko and nyan nyan

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« Reply #85 on: June 29, 2011, 11:09:32 AM »
the last chap give me goosebumps~~ LOL

i thought you gonna end it sad way... Yuko went to US for 2 weeks or 2 months?  :?

please continue this... just take ur time ok, write something good for the ending~~ :bow:

and please..please write for takacchan too~~~ :twothumbs :twothumbs

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« Reply #86 on: June 29, 2011, 11:24:07 AM »
yeha yeah!!!!

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« Reply #87 on: June 29, 2011, 11:51:05 AM »
YUKO LEAVES FOR 2 MONTHS..!
SORRY WRITTING IT'S NOT MY BEST..!
i guess i'll writte about takamina and acchan..!

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« Reply #88 on: June 30, 2011, 05:27:35 PM »
Want a sequel ^^ maybe Kojiharu can visit her squirrel in USA...

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« Reply #89 on: July 01, 2011, 10:24:33 AM »
well i'm taking some days off...!
i'm celebrating my bithday so don't expect anything till monday...!
ok take care byeeeeeeee...
ps i just wrote the first story of takamina and acchan but i didn't like it so i deleted it...!:(

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« Reply #90 on: July 03, 2011, 07:04:59 AM »
^ : happy birtday  :)


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« Reply #91 on: July 03, 2011, 06:59:32 PM »
thank you...! XD
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« Reply #92 on: July 03, 2011, 07:13:59 PM »
1 (22) this means that it's the start of takamina an acchan but also is continuing kojiyuu but just for a little...! 

ahh where's acchan ask takamina?
i don't know we send her the message that meet us here....!
look she's coming over there says nyan nyan ...!
aww i can't believe we're here don't you remember nyan nyan?ask  sayaka 
uh? what are you saying?
this floor doesn't remind you something? as sayaka again with a evil laugh..!
no nothing ..!
acchan reaches the girls and start walking ..!
kojima grabes her necklace and thinks of course i remember this  is the exactly place where yuko gave me my necklace .! and sigh
takamina look at acchan and try to go talk to her..!
but acchan polietely tell her that she doesn't wanna talk to her..!
ahhh...! SHE'S STILL MAD...!
like it was my foult thinks takamina and keep walking with the girls to find a good place to eat..!
FLASH BACK
the reharsal ends 
hey takamina wait...! can you help me out with something?
yeah what it is mocchi? don't tell anybady but i still don't get this cheorography...! 
please help me takamina..!
 now now? ask takamina
 yes answer mocchi 
but i just..i just have another thing to do..
please ..!
hmm fine let's go :(
they went to mocchi's house and reharsal all day and takamina forgot to call to acchan..!
leaving her waiting for her at the cinemaaa..!
END OF THE FLASHBACK...!
that's seems a good place don't you think? ask acchan
yes this seems a good place takamina answer 
i did ask you mhm says acchan looking away...!
the girls have dinner 
kojiharu is texting and she doesn't pay attention to the girls or food...!
maybe she is texting yuko says yuki 
yeah don't pay her attetion you know how she is when she gets mad says mariko..! and sigh 
YUKO'S TEXT: ahh i'm so bored
NYAN NYAN'S TEXT: for your own good don't you dare to look other girl...!
YT: ahhh haha never i just want my nyan nyan..!
NNT:no skinship with anyother girl..!
YT:  ok ok 
NNT: and most important thing I LOVE YOU...!
YT: i know I LOVE YOU TOO
nyan nyan blushes and the other girls  the look at her and they laugh ..!
what did she say? ask sayaka
mmm nothing that she misses you and she's bore...!answers kojiharu
then the girls say goodbye and they split in groups (kojiharu, mariko,miichan)(sae, yuki, mayu)(sayaka,acchan,takamina) 
well sayaka went in another route leaving acchan and takamina alone
takamina and acchan walks and there was an ackward silence between them 
takamina says look i'm sorry i should call but i forgot i really sorry please say something....!
mmm acchan thinks you jerk how could you...!
they got to acchan's house  
acchan was about to get in but she turns around she grabs takamina's hand and kiss it 
i know you're sorry says acchan
takamina blinks and  blushes she was in shock..!
while acchan get in her house..!
sorry if its not good 
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« Reply #93 on: July 04, 2011, 12:14:51 AM »
2(23) well for the lack of inspiration and imagination i decided to put more characters to make it better because we all know that takamina and acchan are perfect for each other and they are really good people so they would never cheat or something bad ..!and my favorite perv squirrel it's out of town so don't hate me..!

it's gonna be my birthday you're all invited to my house to celebrate and bring my presents nooo i'm kidding says yuki loud...!
ok ok see you there say the girls..
takamina was thinking should i tell her or not ?while she walks in the sidewalk  
hmm this  is so camplicated she barely talk to me today now i don't know if i was dreaming yestarday..!
aaaah...! shouts takamina 
what's wrong? somebody ask
uh? takamina turns around a little bit scared and sees acchan..!
ooh sorry i didn't mean to scared you..! says acchan
takamina: scare me hahahaha no no no 
 what are you doing here...?
nothing i just.. i just wanted says acchan nervous with out finish her sentence..!
wanted what?ask takamina 
i j- just acchan hesitate and look other way..!
sorry acchan i don't understant says takamina
DO YOU WANT TO COME WITH ME TO YUKI'S DINNER? shouts nervous acchan 
everybody look at them
takamina was static but she was surprise and staring acchan with open mouth..!
acchan was totally red and looking to the floor 
MEANWHILE
kojiharu was fighting with her computer because it doesn't work and she wants to use it her to see her favorite pervert squirrel...!
AAAHHH  STUPID COMPUTER...! kojiharu mad shouts and kick it and go to buy another one..!
going to the store somebody waved at her she wasn't paying attention so she goes right streight to the store 
mariko was surprise that kojiharu didn't wave back so she went after her when mariko gets to the store 
finds a mad kojiharu fighting with other guy 
AHHH I NEED IT MORE...! GIVE ME MY COMPUTER
this is not your computer i saw it first...!
kojima was forcing with a guy 
nyan nyan what are you doing?
this guy is trying to steal my laptop answer kojima while still forcing with the other guy
please you're going to break it say the adminitrator worried
mariko says  c'mom nyan nyan you don't need to fight for that laptop i can give you mine...!
really?ask kojima
yeah really let's go says mariko
ok they get to mariko's house 
OMG IT'S TIME...! please let me use it here ask kojima
ok says mariko while thinking she drives her crazy even when she's in another country..!!:(
MEANWHILE 
should i give her this letter?
mmm no she doesn't want it she doesn't care ..!
she just see me like her little sister ..! thinks mayu while crossing the street in front of  yuki's house
HEY WATCH OUT...
mayu didn't saw the car but someone move her out the way..!
mayu says that was close while looking for the letter wich
the car destroyed and make it pieces
yuki yells mad WHAT THAT HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU...? looking at her with really mad face
sae got closer and ask them if they are ok?
NO WE'RE NOT yells yuki mad..!
yuki san says mayu sad and she's about to cry so she runs to her house leaving sae and yuki..!
mayu runs crying now and thinking now she hates me...!
sae ask don't you think you were a little bit mean..?
yuki sighs and say no i'm done she's always so distracted she needs to grow up and i can't be always to watch her back...!
yuki say goodbye to sae and she see a piece of the letter that mayu made and read it:
"If I could be a part of you i'll choose to be your tears because your tears are conceived in your heart born in your eyes, live on your cheeks and die on your lips i wish that one day you'll see me  i love you yuki"
yuki doesn't know who wrote it and start wondering who could feel this way about her and start looking for the other pieces 
MEANWHILE
takamina was froze but then shake her head and quickly answer yes i want to go with you to yuki's dinner

i'll post next later ..!i have no battery..!
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« Reply #94 on: July 04, 2011, 12:23:19 AM »
nice nice :twothumbs

keep up the good work  :yep:

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« Reply #95 on: July 04, 2011, 05:17:38 AM »
3(24)
hi...!
aww it's my nyan nyan.!so pretty as always...! 
hello..!
uh?AAHHHH...!WHAT ARE U DOING WITH HER??
sorry sorry yuko
my computer is broken so mariko san gave me hers...!answer kojiharu
aaaahh she's so good..!STAY AWAY FROM MY NYAN NYAN mariko...!grrr
don't worry yuko i'll take care of her...!:P say mariko to make her mad..!
ooohh you don't wanna see me mad...!says yuko
uff i'm so scared of you...! hahahha
ok stop it...!kojima says while she laugh with mariko 
they spend all afternoon talking 
mariko got a phone call and went to other room to talk
finally she's gone says yuko with a sad face
why are you sad ..?ask kojima
mm well i gotta work and i really wanted to talk to you but just the two of us...!:(
mmm i'm sorry say kojiharu
no it's okay 
i miss you nyan nyan
i miss you too yuko
nyan nyan say that you love me 
mmm say nyan nyan looking away" i love you "
say it again  "i love you yuko"
now let me see your bra
uh? no..! yuko you're crazy 
what?you're using that red one that you know that i like very much...!
kojima blushes and look other way sigh
and unbotton her shirt for 10 seconds 
yuko bleednose
hahaha kojima laugh 
I LOVE YOU and close the webcam session 
mariko enters the room and see a red kojiharu..!
what happen? 
nothing aswer kojiharu 
ring ring kajima recieve a text message:
WOW THEY LOOK SO AMAZING...! THANK U ;) I LOVE YOU TOO..!
kojima is still red 
mariko says well we should get ready for yuki's dinner 
MEANWHILE...!
hi acchan 
hi takamina 
are you ready? ask acchan 
yeah but first here ..! say takamina
this rose will look amazing here on your hair..!
matches with your beutiful eyes...!
acchan blushes thank you 
you're welcome let's go
MEANWHILE
now she hates me..!
i guess she doesn't want to see me in her birthday
and i can blame her i'm always in trouble..!
i'm not like sae she's smart talented that's why they
attrac each other i can't compite with that..!
mayu thinks while looking a picture of yuki and her..!
MEANWHILE 
takamina and acchan walks to yuki's house 
but acchan got stuck in grass takamina try to help her and pull her feet out of the cesped..!but it was hard..!takamina try twice in the third one she got to pull stronger 
takamina pull her out  but they fall in the grass...!
they look each other because they look like a mess 
and start laughing like crazy...!
it was funny the way they look to each other...!
they stop laughing and lay in the grass they look eachother with sweet eyes...!
takamina says you're beatiful 
acchan blushes and grabs takamina's hand they got closer with out blinking..!
they got really close they could feel each other nose 
takamina thinks this is what i always wanted...!
ahh hey girls say mariko and kojiharu..! 
mmm you guys are in my garden...!say mariko
and you guys look like a mess..!
i think we should go say kojima
uhh? wait up we'll go with you guys says acchan 
all the girls arrive to yuki's house
yuki say hi to everyone and start thinking who might the one who wrote that letter..!
that letter make her feel so beloved protected so many emotions that she can't explain 
she thinks that the person who wrote that don't want her to know who she is..!
yuki start making questions to all the girls about all the things that the letter say and the person who answer like the letter..that might be the person that she's looking for..!
she talks with almost all the girls 
the one who got nearest with her answer was sae..!.
yuki was really happy with the result 
sae and yuki talked almost to midnight 
yuki always has a little crush on sae..!
but then yuki relize that something it's wrong that something is missing she look everyone and can't find it and leave sae and look everywhere in the house 
and finally ask has anyone seen mayu?
no we haven't
 me neither..!sorry
yuki look away with a sad face 
i can't believe it..! 
yuki calls a taxi and went to mayu's house
MEANWHILE 
acchan and takamina where fooling around..!
they can't help no touching each other acchan gives takamina a kiss on the cheek both blushes..!
mmm they seem so happy say mariko 
yeah they do reply kojima and sigh
she'll be back don't worry say mariko to cheer up kojima
MEANWHILE 
yuki went to mayu's house 
hey good evening can i talk to mayu..?
yeah darling she is upstairs
ok thank you...!
yuki goes upstairs and enter to mayu's room 
and mayu's is sleeping 
yuki stares to mayu while she's sleeping with a sweet face ..!
yuki was mad but then relizes that she was really mean to her..!
yuki it's about sit but and she makes a litlle noise with a toy 
mayu wakes up and sees yuki 
mayu thinks it's a dream and got closer to yuki and hold back yuki's hair and  look at her in the eyes and hugs her they stood like that like 10 min without saying a word 
yuki thinks why this feel so warm like the letter..!
yuki says i'm sorry i didn't mean to wake you up..!
what?answer mayu this is a dream there's no way in hell that would come to my house at this hours...!
mayu i'm here it's me you dumbass
ahh really ??
what are you doing here asks mayu surprise...!
i missed you..! look i'm sorry about this afternoon it's just if something happen to you i'll don't know what i'll do you mean so much to me..! and yuki keeps hugging mayu
no yuki don't apologize i'm very dumb 
let's just forget it ok..!!
ok say mayu happy  
why you didn't go to my birthday dinner?
i though you didn't want to see me..!answer mayu
NEVER..!yuki say
uhh ?
I NEVER WANT TO STOP SEEING YOU..! yuki say laughing 
mm i'm tired say yuki while lays in mayu's bed 
i think i will sleep here
you don't mind right?
no no you can stay whenever you want...!
thank you 
mayu also lay in the bed. 
and both fall sleep.. 
i'll post the next one later sorry for my english..!





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« Reply #96 on: July 04, 2011, 10:19:54 AM »
yeay!!! Takacchan~~~  :cow: :cow: :cow:

I like it, you make this story the continuation of KojiYuu.. :twothumbs :twothumbs

nice~~ XD

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« Reply #97 on: July 04, 2011, 11:22:08 AM »
yey at takacchan moment XD

LMAO Yuko this girl  :smhid

mayu mayu fight!!

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« Reply #98 on: July 04, 2011, 01:33:52 PM »
I like kojiyuu conversation hehehe

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« Reply #99 on: July 04, 2011, 08:25:41 PM »
4(25)
uummm the girls are preparing for a show they have...!
kojima enter to the dressing room and everybody shut ups and stop doing what they were doing and stares at her..!
kojiharu what's going on?why you're looking at me?
who tell her? ask sayaka 
i won't..! i'm scare of her right now...!says takamina
all the girls goes one step back..!
leaving acchan first...!
what? what? DON'T DO THIS TO ME...! aaahhh..! complains acchan..!
mariko takes a deep breath because she knows that kojiharu has a really bad behaviour when she's mad..!
mariko walks one step forward and ask have seen any amagzine or any newspaper or tv?
mmm no why? answer kojima with a question 
mariko really scare and shaking gives kojima a newspaper...!
all the girls were scare for what she could do..!
kojima read the newespaper and her face turns red in two seconds...!
kojima don't know how to react and brake the newspaper in  little pieces and say murmuring STUPID SQUIRREL..!
and bit her lips to not cry...! 
and goes to the bathroom really mad...!
i think she's dealing with it better that i though..! say mariko 
yeah you right agree acchan,takamina
till they heard BE CAREFUL WITH THAT..! a man yells 
I DON'T CARE...! reply mad kojima
 The newspaper article says she found love with japanesse singer they have been really close since she come to have her own show..!
and shows a picture of the two kissing..!
 kojima sits looking away and try not cry but she can't contain it..! 
 MEANWHILE
acchan and takamina are worried abou kojiharu and yuko..!
it seems that hurts a lot..! says acchan sad 
yeah..! says takamina 
i couldn't resist if you break my heart like that..! so please i giving you the best part of me so don't brake it says a sad acchan
takamina look at her with a sweet look and can help kiss her on the cheek in front everyone ..!
if you give me you're heart i'll put it in the safest place in the world..!
acchan blushes and ask where?
RIGHT NEXT TO MINE..! so they can dance around each other and never feel lonely and i'll protect them with life...!
 that's a promise..!
thank you says acchan  and grabs takamina's hand..!
both stare each other for a while..!
MEANWHILE
mayu look at yuki who is with sae playing and fooling around she watches sae's hand in yuki's thigh 
mayu imagine her and yuki doing the same thing she didn't notice but her face was really red..!
yuki see mayu's face and can help get up from her seat and touch mayu's forhead..!
mayu feels yuki hand and get even more red ..!
yuki worry ask are you with fever?
nooo aswer a shy mayu (still yuki is touching her forhead)
hmm but you are so red...!
i'm fine says mayu go back with sae..!
yuki look back and wave to sae..! and go and sit with her 
MEANWHILE 
kojiharu is sitting alone thinking something that not be yuko..!
hey are you okay ? ask mariko 
yeah say a sad kojiharu
it's just the distance she'll come back for you,you know it..!says mariko to cheer up kojima
COME BACK FOR YOU..!repeat kojima murmuring
yeah that she would do if i were in her situation..!
she would go to america after me...!
yeah that's what i should do
I'M GOING TO USA..! 
sorry if you can't understant i don't know how to writte i barely know how to speak  hehehe:P

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