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Re: Heart Station [Update 26/8: I Dare You Final Part]
« Reply #120 on: August 26, 2011, 01:04:25 PM »
OMG OMG OMG
CAN I LOVE YOU FOREVERRRRRR? <3333

Your MaYuki fics are really the best, have I told you that? <3333
I was smiling the whole time as I read this.
More please??? ♥♥♥
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Re: Heart Station [Update 26/8: I Dare You Final Part]
« Reply #121 on: August 26, 2011, 01:43:36 PM »
Nothing better than this !!! >//<
So sweet of Mayuki's ending !!! Love it Love it  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:
Thank you so much for this sweetness >//<

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Story XIV: By Your Side (SaeYaka)
« Reply #122 on: August 26, 2011, 09:30:29 PM »
@cmze: Thank you! ^^
@akinyan: XD XD XD
@arisa03 & RenaChii: Sorry, but I'll leave what happened next up to your imagination. XD LOL
@fanyan: Yes you may. XD Thank you very very much!
@pattinium: Sweet is good, no?  :on GJ:

Another fic this week! :on asmo:

Something different this time, it's SaeYaka! Remember A Peculiar Fairytale? This story serves as a sidestory as that one.

As usual, I hope that you will enjoy reading what I had written. :kneelbow:

Let's roll!  :pen_whirl:


Story XIV: An A.P.F. Sidestory - By Your Side (SaeYaka)

Once upon a time, there was a noble lady knight who served the Miyazawa’s castle.

Her strength rivaled that of a hundred men, her skills in swordplay ranked first in the realm and her wit in battle had led her to victory countless times.  Having all those remarkable combat qualities combined with her unwavering loyalty to the royal house, Akimoto Sayaka was simply the best knight that a kingdom could possibly have. However, beyond all those high reputation as the kingdom’s greatest protector, there lay a fact about her that many seemed to have forgotten.

Before the title knight was bestowed upon her, there was only a normal girl.

Like any other female, Sayaka had longed for the common girly things when she was a child – Grow up beautifully, fall in love, marry a handsome guy, and many other wishes.  Unfortunately for young Sayaka, God had graced her with a man-like built and physical strength that exceeded normal girls (and most boys, as well). Sayaka was shunned by the other kids because of that. Girls refused to play with her because, according to them, she was not pretty enough. Boys were afraid of her because Sayaka would beat them up if they tried to do something mischievous, most often in the form of stealing fruits from the Takahashi’s orchard. Sayaka had always had a great sense of justice, even at the time when she was too young to understand what justice really meant. Poor girl had spent most of her time alone, though occasionally, the daughter of the orchard owner, Minami, would came over to the Akimoto’s residence to play with her when the girl was not too busy picking fruits. Other than Minami, Sayaka had no other friends. Loneliness would knock on the door to Sayaka’s heart sometimes and during those times; she hated herself and hated the people above for making her so ‘ugly’.

Sayaka stopped hating herself after this one day.

She was on her way back from the Takahashi’s after chasing away several naughty boys. En route to her house, she heard shouts calling out for help. Her heroic instincts kicked in and she ran toward the source of the voice to be met with a girl crying by the river bank. When asked what was wrong, the sobbing girl pointed to her friend who was bobbing up and down in the water, desperately trying to stay afloat. Without another second wasted, Sayaka took off her shoes and dived right in to save the one in trouble. Once both of them returned safely on land, the boy that Sayaka had just pulled out of the river coughed out water and thanked his savior after calming down. Sayaka just sat there and watched as the girl who was crying earlier hugged the boy and then suddenly hit the boy on his shoulder. 

“Sae-kun you idiot! I thought you were going to drown for sure! I already told you not to play near the river! You know that we can’t swim! If something really happened what am I going to tell your parents?”

‘Sae-kun’ only grinned sheepishly at the girl’s scolding and brushed it off as if he did not almost lose his life a few minutes ago.

“Don’t worry Yuki-chan, I’m still alive. See? Thanks to this pretty girl over here.” The boy gestured at Sayaka.

Sayaka felt her cheeks grew warm. Nobody had ever told her that she was pretty before.

‘Yuki-chan’ sighed at her friend’s state of indifference over the tragedy that had almost taken place. Turning toward Sayaka, the girl shook Sayaka’s hand and thanked Sayaka for saving ‘Sae-kun’. Sayaka could only nod quietly, not sure of what to be said. ‘Yuki-chan’ then dragged the boy away, telling him that they should be getting back to the palace. The word ‘palace’ made Sayaka curious of the identity of the pair. Before Sayaka could ask anything, the boy who was reluctantly being pulled away shouted back at Sayaka.

“Pretty girl! Thank you for saving my life! I promise I will pay you back one day!”

Once again, Sayaka was left stunned by the pretty girl remark. As she watched the disappearing backs of the two kids she just met, a smile crept up to her face.

She couldn’t wait for the day where she would meet the boy again.

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The day came soon enough.

Only a week had passed since that incident and Sayaka was extremely surprised to see the boy sitting by the riverbank when she had to pass by river again.

“Pretty girl, where had you been? I’ve been waiting for you the whole week!”

Young Sayaka fell in love right at that moment. 

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When Sayaka had saved the boy that evening, never in a million years would she thought that the boy was actually the prince of her country. But that was the truth and ‘Sae-kun’ was really prince Sae of the Miyazawa kingdom. The prince came to find her almost every day and the two of them would have fun, enjoying the time they spend together. Instead of being disgusted or scared by Sayaka’s unnatural nature, the prince had found it endearing. For once, Sayaka felt that she was being treated as a normal girl. Sayaka never felt happier. Not only had Sayaka found the companion that she had been longing for her entire life, she found someone that she loved too. 

Five years passed by too fast and it was almost the prince’s sixteenth birthday. Sayaka was met with a sad looking Sae when she arrived at the river bank one day. The prince explained that he was not able to come over anymore. The king had wanted him to start his training as the rightful heir to the throne and the training would take up too much of his time. Sayaka was terribly saddened by the news but she did not say anything because she understood. They lived in a different world. She gave the prince a handmade bracelet as a birthday gift and as a parting gift too. Just as Sayaka was about to walk away, the prince pulled her into one final embrace.

“I wish for you to stay by my side.”

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Fate is a funny thing.

What Sayaka hated about herself was what had brought her closer to her prince. After they had bid their farewell that day, Sayaka thought long and hard on how she could make the prince’s wish (and hers too) come true and how she could be with the person she loved.  The only solution was for her to enter the castle and for that, Sayaka made sure that she fully utilized what had been gifted to her. Sayaka didn’t have any other specialties, her built and her strength were the only thing that she was confident of. For two years straight, she trained and trained, built up her skills and master all the knowledge that a good fighter should knew.

By the end of the spring of the two years, Sayaka entered an annual fighting competition held by the palace where the winner would be awarded with the title of a knight. The prince was happy to saw her again and cheered her on. Glad that the prince did not forget about her at all, Sayaka had her heart set on winning. People were skeptical about her ability at first; giving hurtful comments such as how women are weak creatures and the like, but they soon ate their words after Sayaka had singlehandedly beat all the other contestants. Seeing the happy look on the prince after witnessing her triumph, Sayaka thought that being a strong girl wasn’t a bad thing after all.

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Because Sayaka had now lived in the castle as well, after being appointed as the prince’s guard, she and prince Sae were able to be together again like before, resuming their friendship or maybe even closer. They were the perfect partners. United, they conquered unknown lands and expanded the Miyazawa kingdom. Both fully trusted each other with their lives and no secrets were kept in between them, perhaps, which was the reason why prince Sae decided to tell Sayaka the biggest secret that the palace held. A secret that must not be known by others other than Miyazawa families–

The prince was actually a princess.

The country needed a prince, but since there was no prince born into the family, the king decided to make a prince out of a princess. Prince or rather actually, princess Sae’s boyish look made the lie an easy feat to pull off and nobody suspected a thing. Sayaka felt cheated at first. Her prince was actually a girl. Her girlish dream was shattered by that revelation. Nonetheless, as the princess eyes stared hopefully at her, Sayaka realized that she was still very much in love with the person in front of her, regardless of the gender.

“I will always stay by your side.”

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Sayaka had made a promise and she intended to keep them for the rest of her life. Even though her heart was broken into pieces at the news of Sae’s engagement with princess Yuki, Sayaka stayed. Even though she was crying inside, a smile still formed on her face when Sae had told her about it.

When she heard that princess Yuki was kidnapped by the Dark Witch, secretly Sayaka’s heart rejoiced. However, her heart broke again when Sae announced the she will rescue the kidnapped princess. Sayaka didn’t want to be part of the rescue team but because of the promise, Sayaka still stood next to the princess as they fought their way to the witch’s tower.

Because of love, Sayaka endured it all. If it was for the Sae’s happiness, Sayaka would gladly to throw away her own.

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On the day of the royal wedding, Sayaka wished that she had died in the Forbidden Forest so that she wouldn’t have to witness the one she loved became someone else’s. She had congratulated Sae prior to the ceremony but she wanted nothing more than to take the words back and swept the princess off her feet, stealing her away from the event. The ceremony did not proceed without Sayaka silently praying that somehow, Sae would not make her pledge to take princess Yuki as a wife. By a strange twist of fate, Sayaka prayers were heard but to Sayaka’s shock (and everyone else as well), it was princess Yuki who had called off the wedding.   

Sayaka should feel happy with the strange turn of event but when she saw the princess that was left alone on the altar, her heart was burning in rage.  Sae didn’t deserve to be ditched like that. She walked up to where the Sae was standing and asked the princess if she was going to do something about the failed wedding but the princess just shook her head and smiled.

“Nah. Yuki-chan is in love, I don’t blame her.”

The knight was about to protest but the princess took the knight’s hands in hers and held on to them tightly, causing the furious knight to somewhat calm down.

“Besides, I have you by my side don’t I?” The almost groom flashed a childish grin.

It didn’t matter how many times it had happened before, Sayaka’s heart would still leap a little bit every time Sae said kind things like that to her. 

“Of course. For as long as you want me to.”

Sayaka smiled her biggest smile. Something told her that she might have a chance to get her happily ever after.

Who knows? Maybe she did.

THE END

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OMAKE!

“Ne, Sayaka… I just thought of something.”

Princess Sae suddenly spoke up as she and the knight watched the runaway bride flew away riding the infamous witch’s broom. Sayaka remained silent while she waited for the royal to continue.

“Since I don’t have a bride now, and everyone was already prepared to have a wedding, it’ll be a waste wont it?”

 “Well yes… but there’s nothing we can do?”

“You’re wrong! There is something you can do!” The ever energetic cross-dressing princess replied enthusiastically.

“What?” Confusion hit the knight.

“You can take Yuki-chan’s place.”

“Eh?”

“Marry me.”

“EHHHH?????”

OMAKE END.

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A bonus omake to make up for the short storyline. I could've have written longer but I didnt want this to exceed the main story. LOL

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Re: Heart Station [Update 27/8: By Your Side]
« Reply #123 on: August 26, 2011, 11:59:03 PM »
Yeah go! Sayaka marry Sae! ^^

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Re: Heart Station [Update 27/8: By Your Side]
« Reply #124 on: August 28, 2011, 04:45:58 PM »
I just gotta say: Your fics are amazing~ I enjoyed reading most of them (not all, seeing as I don't really have the time eheh)! Keep up the good work~ :on GJ:
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Re: Heart Station [Update 27/8: By Your Side]
« Reply #125 on: August 30, 2011, 08:29:09 AM »
OMG! i love the way you did it..! :heart:
awww so cute all yours chapters are great!  :twothumbs
you make read about couples that i don't even care!  XD
thank you!  :grin:
please update soon! :bow:

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Story XV: Can't Say You.. Again (TomoTomo)
« Reply #126 on: August 30, 2011, 03:02:07 PM »
Thanks for the comments and the thank yous! ^^

I'm back with another update! This is the continuation to the first TomoTomo fic (link) that I posted back then.

Enjoy~ :on gay:


Story XV: Can’t Say You… Again (TomoTomo)

You have: 1 new email.

Itano Tomomi flipped open her phone at the notification and read through the message she had just received. Her brows furrowed at the email content and after typing her brief reply, she closed the phone cover again with a sigh. She scanned the room for a particular someone and found that person sitting in front of one of the dressing tables at the opposite side of the room. Tomochin stared as the girl in question checked her phone, puffed her cheeks, turned her head at the fashion queen’s direction and pouted. The seemingly unsatisfied girl diverted her focus back on her phone screen and tapped furiously on the keypad. Soon enough, Tomochin felt the vibrations caused by the device in her hand. Another email was received. This time, instead of replying the email, Tomochin looked directly at the sender and shook her head, signaling a no. The female across the room pouted again.

Feeling agitated, Tomochin got off from her seat and walked out of the room, away from the source of her inner turmoil. She wandered around the building aimlessly until her brain finally decided on a destination - the rooftop. There was no other soul present on the top of the building and it was exactly what Tomochin had hoped for. She could use a few minutes of alone time.  The frustrated girl had her back against the rail as she sat down and closed her eyes, allowing herself to be soothed by the cool air brushing past her cheeks.

Her moment of peace was broken when her phone started to move again.

Another sigh escaped Tomochin’s lips and she reached into her pocket for the buzzing item. She expected that the new email content would be similar to the previous ones that she had been receiving the whole morning but her expectations fell short as the text displayed on the screen made her eyes widened slightly in surprise. The email was still from the same person but instead of random names in place of the message body, there were three words written. 

“Where are you?”

The fashion queen contemplated on what to answer. Should she tell? Half of her heart still wanted the space but the other half didn’t want to make the girl who waiting for her reply to be worried. After a moment of hesitation, a reply was given. While waiting for the girl to arrive, Tomochin lazily dragged her knees to her chest and rested her head on them. The sound of footsteps climbing up the stairs was heard not long after and the door to the roof creaked open. A head peeked through the swinging metal and a pair of eyes darted around the area until it found its target. Tomochin didn’t move from her spot when the door was swung entirely at last to reveal a nervous looking Kasai Tomomi.

Tomochin lifted her gaze to meet Chiyuu’s concerned filled ones as the newcomer slowly made her way to the one sitting down. The younger of the two Tomomis squatted down and quietly, she asked.

“Is Tomochin angry?”

If Tomochin was angry before that, her anger would have dissipated right away seeing the look on Chiyuu’s face. It resembled a little puppy that knew it had done something wrong and was now begging for forgiveness.  No normal human being living on this planet could stay angry at that.

Tomochin stretched out a hand and patted the younger girl lightly on the head. The older Tomomi then shook her head and gave a weak smile.

“Iie, I’m not angry.”

Although Chiyuu seemed to relax a bit after hearing those words, her eyes still showed uncertainty.  Tomochin removed her hand from on top of Chiyuu’s head and gestured for the other girl to settle down on the empty space next to her. When Chiyuu did, Tomochin had left her stunned when the older girl suddenly lay down on her side and placed her head on Chiyuu’s lap.

“I’m really not angry you know.”

A smile made its way on Chiyuu’s face. She was worrying too much after all. Even so, she still felt guilty. Her excessive level of curiosity had led her to continuously pester Tomochin about Tomochin’s secret crush and it had brought discomfort to her best friend. Chiyuu spoke out her apology but was quickly dismissed by the older girl.

“I told you that I’m not-“ Tomochin was cut off before she could finish her sentence.

“Chiyuu won’t ask anymore.” 

The girl on Chiyuu’s lap gaped and stared at the person who was staring back at her for a few seconds. In the end, Tomochin looked away with a soft ‘thanks’. Chiyuu noticed that the older girl was blushing but didn’t mention anything about it and just smiled. Tomochin stiffened when she felt Chiyuu started stroking her hair but shortly relaxed into the gentle touch. Eyes fluttering shut at the comforting action, Tomochin silently worded out her own set of apology as well.

“I’m sorry I still can’t say it’s you.”

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“..sashidasu sono te wo
kasaneta futari wa
oshibe meshibe yoru no chouchou…”

Tomochin fidgeted uncomfortably as she watched the scene played on the television screen. She was over at Chiyuu’s place and it was the younger Tomomi’s idea to watch their stage DVDs. Tomochin regretted agreeing to that idea because right now, she was forced to watch the one she liked being sexually harassed on stage. What irked the fashion queen further was the fact that Chiyuu didn’t seem to hate it. At all! Actually, Chiyuu looked like she was enjoying herself a little bit too much performing that particular song. The ending made Tomochin cringed.

“You give away kisses too easily.” The comment slipped out of her mouth before Tomochin could stop herself.

The younger Tomomi paused the DVD player and frowned.

“What’s wrong with kissing?” Such innocent reply made Tomochin wanted to bang her head on the concrete wall.

“Kisses are reserved for people you really like.” As calm she could, Tomochin explained why Chiyuu should not take kisses lightly. She looked hopefully at the younger girl, praying that Chiyuu would understand what she was trying to say.

“Chiyuu do like them!” Stated Chiyuu in a defiant manner

The two Tomomis had a little glaring contest before the older one broke the eye contact and let out a defeated sigh. Chiyuu just wouldn’t get it would she?

“Nevermind. Just forget it.”  Tomochin grabbed the player remote and pressed resume.

Chiyuu felt like she was being treated as a child who wouldn’t understand anything even if you explained the same thing over and over again.

It was a very unpleasant feeling.

Taking the remote from Tomochin’s hand, she drew the older girl’s attention back toward her. 

“Tomochin kisses people too!” She retorted in her dissatisfaction.

The older Tomomi became flustered at the accusation.

“I don’t! At least not anymore!” Tomochin defended herself fast.

“But Tomochin still kisses Chiyuu!”

At Chiyuu’s last remark, Tomochin became mute all of the sudden and looked away, unable to give a proper answer without giving away her true feelings. The strange change in behavior puzzled Chiyuu. Why was Tomochin looking nervous all of the sudden?

“Just wait a minute. Tomochin didn’t like Chiyuu kissing people... Tomochin said kisses are for people you like... Tomochin still kisses Chiyuu…”

Chiyuu connected the dots together and a shocking revelation was made.

“OH. MY. GOD. It’s Chiyuu! The one Tomochin likes is Chiyuu!”

The knowledge sent a rush of excitement for the younger Tomomi. She finally knew the one who captured queen Tomochin’s heart! And without having Tomochin tell her who too! She smiled triumphantly and her heart leapt in joy, temporarily forgetting what the revelation would mean to their relationship.

“Tomochin likes Chiyuu! Tomochin likes Chiyuu!” Chiyuu happily chanted, clapping her hands.

A horrified look was on Itano Tomomi’s face. The cat was out of the bag. She tried coming up with a comeback to salvage herself from that uncomfortable situation but nothing came to mind no matter how hard she tried. Meanwhile, the euphoria had died down for the other Tomomi and her clapping slowly came to a stop.

“Tomochin likes….. Chiyuu.” 

The truth seemed all too surreal suddenly.

Chiyuu crept closer to the older girl, who was facing away and had her head hung low. She reached out for Tomochin’s hands and held on onto them.

“Why didn’t you tell me?” She asked softly.

Hearing the younger Tomomi stopped addressing herself in third person, Tomochin knew that Chiyuu was serious. Tomochin’s eyes were fixated on their clasped fingers. Tomochin had always liked Chiyuu’s hands. They were warm, just like their owner. Similar to how the younger girl’s body heat was making Tomochin’s hands warm, Chiyuu presence had melted Tomochin’s heart. Tomochin was unsure when she started to harbor more than friendly feelings toward the younger girl but by the time she was aware of them, she tried suppressing those feelings and hoped that they would go away in time.

“It’s just a silly crush. It’ll fade away eventually...”  Tomochin said with a sad smile. Her words were more of an attempt to convince herself instead of the other girl.

“NO!” The younger girl’s sudden outburst made Tomochin blinked. She couldn’t decipher the emotions that were reflected in the pair of brown orbs in front of her.

“Chiyuu doesn’t want Tomochin to stop liking Chiyuu…” Tomochin felt the slight increase in pressure on her hands as Chiyuu kept on talking.

“..So please… don’t stop liking Chiyuu.”

By the time Chiyuu was finished, Tomochin didn’t know what to feel. She didn’t know what to do or say either but the girl in front of her was already looking like she was about to cry that Tomochin couldn’t help but panicked.  Her eyes were starting to burn as well and Tomochin fought back the tears with all her willpower. Chiyuu inched toward the older Tomomi and rested her head on the slender shoulder.

“If Tomochin wants to be with Chiyuu… Chiyuu would be okay with it.” Chiyuu murmured onto Tomochin’s neck.

Not only had her body froze, time too, had stayed still for the older Tomomi. For someone who planned to keep her feelings forever locked in her heart and not confess at all, hearing that from her crush was… overwhelming. Tomochin freed her hands from Chiyuu’s grasp and cupped the younger girl’s cheeks. Their eyes met. Tomochin wanted to say out that she liked Chiyuu properly, but the words formed would not leave her mouth. One word did come out however, which made it sounded a lot like Tomochin was breathing out the girl’s name.

“Tomomi…” 

Chiyuu smiled at the usage of her given name.

“Chiyuu likes Tomochin too… A LOT!” Chiyuu declared her fondness over the older girl, adding the last two words enthusiastically as an afterthought. She needed Tomochin to know that Tomochin did hold a special place in her heart.

Tomochin laughed amidst her tears and pulled Chiyuu into a tight hug. Chiyuu returned the embrace and nuzzled into Tomochin’s neck. They stayed in that position blissfully until something crossed Chiyuu’s mind and she pulled away.

“Can Chiyuu kiss Tomochin?”

The older Tomomi instantly blushed at the question and looked away. She couldn’t meet the other girl’s eyes.

“Wha-Why do you ask me such embarrassing thing?” Tomochin stuttered out her words.

“But Chiyuu~” Chiyuu pouted. Her hands tugged on Tomochin’s t-shirt several times as she whined.

Tomochin ignored the pull on her cloth but stole a glance at the pouting girl, her blush darkened. Chiyuu stopped her actions when she sensed that her best friend was not submitting to her request.

“…no?”  She asked again yet she didn’t receive any reply from Tomochin. Tomochin didn’t look like she was about to do something too.

Chiyuu’s shoulder slumped and the pout was replaced with a sad face. She moved away, grabbed a cushion and hugged it. The younger girl remained silent as she continued to watch the long forgotten DVD or well, appeared to be.  Her eyes were glued to the television screen but her focus was elsewhere. Being rejected by Tomochin had hurt her feelings. Didn’t the older girl like her? And didn’t the older say that you can kiss the person you like? So why had Tomochin denied her a kiss?

“Tomochin is so confusing sometimes.” Chiyuu brooded.

Chiyuu broke her non-existent attention toward the screen and turned to look to her right when she felt Tomochin shifted. A sudden pressure on her lips had caught Chiyuu off guard and before she had any time to react to the kiss, it was over. Tomochin had pulled away as quick as she had leaned in. A flabbergasted Chiyuu stared at the older Tomomi, who had a cheeky smile plastered on her face (Tomochin’s cheeks were still a little bit pink, Chiyuu noticed).

“I didn’t say you can’t, did I?”

Chiyuu bit her lower lip at her best friend (or was it girlfriend now?) tsundere-ish behaviour. Tomochin was being unfair, toying with her feelings like this. Chiyuu’s features darkened as she plotted on how to get her revenge. Tomochin slowly backed away when she saw that Chiyuu was closing in on her. Her back hit the wall. There was no other way to escape.

“Just wait- wait a second!“ Tomochin held out her hands in her effort to stop the younger girl. It didn’t do much. Tomochin yelped as Chiyuu jumped on the older girl.

After that, Kasai Tomomi made sure that she would be able to claim the lips of Itano Tomomi.


THE END
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So yeah, that's the second part. This took me longer to update than expected. ><


Now I'm not sure what to write next. LOL

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #127 on: August 30, 2011, 05:08:09 PM »
So cute!!! :heart:

Chiyuu is definitely the dominant in the TomoTomo pairing :p :wub:
Tomochin so tsundere  :rofl:

So cute!!!

Thanks for the update
I'll be looking forward to your next update XD

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #128 on: August 30, 2011, 05:24:14 PM »
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~ :heart:

Doesn't matter how long it took, the wait was worth it~!

Ah there needs to be more TomoTomo fics, I fell for this ship awhile back and it's so rare for them to be the main couple instead of the side one.

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #129 on: August 30, 2011, 10:38:32 PM »
That was really cute :)

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You should write kojiyuu next ofc ^___^

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #130 on: August 31, 2011, 05:25:35 AM »
tomotomo its no my favorite pair.. but.. this fic is cute :D i like it...

Yeah!! Kojiyuu 4ever :D

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #131 on: August 31, 2011, 06:21:56 AM »
TomoTomo  XD XD XD ne, ne you should write more fics about this pairing! :yep:
I love you...-r fics, lol its so cute and a bit of fluffy  :twothumbs
Forget about Atsumina LOL! jk  :lol:

Awesome update! keep it up!  ;)



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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #132 on: September 02, 2011, 10:27:05 AM »
i like it very much!  :cathappy:
thanks for posting this! :D
please update soon!  :bow:
btw i heard you were injured..hope you get well soon!  :twothumbs

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #133 on: September 02, 2011, 08:37:57 PM »
Yeah more Tomotomo!!!!!

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #134 on: September 05, 2011, 10:35:29 AM »
Because of story 8, "A Peculiar Fairytale", I cried manly tears! It's rare to encounter such touching stories! Hence, I'd like to congratulate you for writing this excellent piece! :cry: :twothumbs

Fairytails are a good change of pace. All of the school/work related fics were getting to me. I really enjoyed reading it. Really good twist as well! If not for the [MaYuki] tag, I wouldn't have bothered continuing because honestly, I'm not much of a SaeYuki fan. :sweatdrop:

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Re: Heart Station [Update 30/8: Can't Say You... Again]
« Reply #135 on: September 05, 2011, 01:53:51 PM »
 :inlove: Totally LOVE your TomoTomo stories!!!! I love that couple!!! Can you please make more?  :w00t:
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Here are my fics~! They can be found amongst these three. :hee:

Shots
Love's A Mission
Oh My Dolly!


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SoUL (Series)


The Akiba Family (T.A.F)

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Story XVI: Something Unspoken (AtsuYuu)
« Reply #136 on: September 10, 2011, 08:42:12 AM »
@blughise: Yes Chiyuu is badass and Tomochin is total tsundere. xD
@Kid_Alpha: Sorry for the long wait. >< I tried to finish this earlier but got caught up with other things. LOL
@Arakawa & @Haruko: Thank you! I'll see if I can write mroe KojiYuu. Hahaha
@dark-atrox & @karomuwi & @kahem:Yes! TomoTomo deserves more love  :heart:
@cmze: Hey, thanks! I sprained my ankle last two weeks. But it's getting better now.  :)
@BlackRockAnon: Thank you!!  :heart: LOL I'm not much of a SaeYuki fan too.  :P

Back with another fic!  :on GJ:
This fic is dedicated to meiswota (who had requested it) and arisa03 (who ships Acchan/everyone :lol:)

It's an AtsuYuu this time. LOL. Dont say I didn't warn ya. :P There are implied KojiYuu/Atsumina as well, if that will make you happy. XD

If you have decided to give this fic a chance, onwards with the story! Enjoy!  :kneelbow:



Story: Something Unspoken (AtsuYuu)


An impatient Oshima Yuko paced about in a small, dimly lighted room. The room lights had long given out except for the emergency lighting which was not shining as bright as it should be. It was getting stuffy and warm in that confined place, evidenced by the small beads of sweats forming on the petite girl’s forehead. Yuko’s eyes glanced at the door at every few seconds for any signs that that it will open soon but so far, all she saw was two pieces of metal firmly glued together in their place.

Luck was not really on her side that day. 

Yuko’s sole companion in the space too little to anyone’s liking was Maeda Atsuko, who was sitting down on the cold floor with her legs stretched out in front and a bored expression on her face. The younger girl watched as Yuko moved back and forth in front of her, stopped after a while, folded her arms and tapped her foot like there was no tomorrow.

“Doing that won’t get us out of here, you know.” Atsuko pointed out the obvious.

The elder stopped whatever she was doing and sighed. She turned around and walked toward Atsuko before slumping into the space next to the younger girl.

“Damn, how much longer will it takes for them to fix this thing?” Yuko complained.

Atsuko shifted her eyes from the girl beside her to stare at the metal door that wouldn’t budge. How long has it been? 5 minutes? 10 minutes? Or was it 30 minutes? Atsuko was not sure but it certainly did feel like forever since the elevator broke down and left the two of them stuck in it. Waiting sure had its way to make the time move slower. They had already asked for help and the operator had said that the elevator would be fixed ‘soon’ but that promised ‘soon’ was apparently not soon enough. Damn liars.

“Beats me.” 

Atsuko let the weight of her body fell on her side as she rested her head on Yuko’s shoulder and closed her eyes, allowing her drowsiness to take over. If they were not going to be rescued anytime soon, she might as well make the best of their situation and catch some sleep. Work really had her drained and there was inadequate time for her to rest. She had photo shoots, drama filming, variety shows, rehearsals, concerts and tons of other activities listed on her schedule that she was deprived of a proper sleep lately.

A few moments later, Atsuko felt a weight on top of her head. It seemed that Yuko had also leaned onto the younger girl. They stayed just like that in silence and Atsuko could feel her consciousness slowly slipping away as the time passed by.

“I hate this.”

Before Atsuko could drift off to dreamland, Yuko’s voice pulled Atsuko back to reality. Her face scrunched up before she groggily opened her eyes. The ace still wanted that much needed sleep but sleep would not come easy if Yuko was going to keep on talking. They needed entertainment and the only form of entertainment they have was each other.

“You said it like you experienced this plenty of times before.” Atsuko commented lazily, still remained in her position. Yuko sighed again as a reply.

Another minute passed and both of them were now staring dumbly into spaces.

“I wonder if the others had already known that we’re stuck here.” Yuko spoke up once more.

“I think they should by now, since we already informed the security. Besides, how can they not realize that their number 1 and number 2 are missing?” The ranking joke earned a grin from Yuko. The senbatsu sousenkyou had always been a serious business within the group and hearing Atsuko cracking up a joke about their placing was refreshing. Atsuko thought for a short moment and then decided to tease the older girl.

“Don’t worry. I’m sure that Kojiharu would definitely notice that her favourite squirrel is not there.”

The shoulder that Atsuko leaned on shook slightly as Yuko stifled a laugh. Atsuko was one of the selected few that knew about the true nature of KojiYuu’s relationship.

“Yeah… I think so too.”

Atsuko didn’t see it but she knew that the elder girl was probably smiling to herself, with her dimples showing and everything. Atsuko smiled as well, she liked seeing those two together. They have something that Atsuko wanted to have too. Her mind briefly travelled to a certain short captain and her smile vanished. Would Minami notice her absence? Or would she be too busy taking care of other members to realize that Atsuko did not show up?

Atsuko’s heart was hit with a pang of jealousy.

“Must be nice, to have someone worrying about you.” Atsuko tried to say it in a nonchalant manner but the envy in her voice was obvious. Yuko peeked at the younger girl from the corner of her eyes and saw a sad expression on Atsuko’s face. The older girl knew that Atsuko had her eyes set on the AKB captain but as far as Yuko can tell, Atsuko’s attempts to woo Takamina had not yet resulted in them being in the state of relationship such as Haruna’s and Yuko’s.

“What about you and Takamidget? Any progress?” Yuko asked tentatively.

She was unsure if the issue would wound the ace’s feelings. Yuko waited nervously for Atsuko’s reply and even thought of changing the subject after not getting any but stopped when she felt the younger girl moved. From the movement that she felt on her shoulder, Yuko could tell that Atsuko was shaking her head.

“Minami is as dense as ever.” Atsuko finally expressed her irritation over her captain’s obliviousness. She sighed and then continued. “You know, sometimes I wonder why I fell for her in the first place.”

The defeated tone made Yuko felt sorry for the younger girl. It had took Yuko at least three years before Haruna and her were officially together and Yuko thought that was already hard enough, but Atsuko waiting for Takamina made that duration of three years looked like it was nothing. Suddenly, Yuko found a whole new respect for Atsuko. One usually would have given up long ago if they were in Atsuko’s situation.

“She’ll come around.” Yuko tried to defend her fellow short comrade. Atsuko fell silent for a couple quick seconds before muttering a quiet ‘I hope so.’

“Love is tough, huh?”

“It sure is.” Atsuko nodded, agreeing with the older girl’s comment. She lifted her head from Yuko’s shoulder at last and slumped in her seat. 

“Why can’t I have a love life like in those sappy romance doramas? Meeting that person, fall in love, get together and then live happily ever after.” Another sigh came out from Atsuko’s lips. If Atsuko’s life was really a drama, it would take several seasons of the drama just to get Takamina to agree going out with her. It was really THAT long.

Yuko snorted at the childish wish.

“That’s because they’re doramas. Real life doesn’t work that way.”

“At least you still have that whole meet, fall in love and end up together part.” Atsuko retorted. Somehow, she was sure that KojiYuu would end happily ever after too. Yuko laughed.

“Actually… Kojipa was not the first AKB girl I had a crush on. I didn’t end up with the one I wanted in the first place.” Yuko embarrassedly admitted. Atsuko’s ears perked up at the revelation. The younger girl didn’t know that there was someone else in Yuko’s heart before Haruna.

“Who was it?”

Yuko mentally facepalmed herself. She never planned to let anybody else knew about that little crush of hers. The laugh turned into a nervous chuckle and Yuko immediately looked away, finding the ceiling interesting all of the sudden. Atsuko raised a brow at the odd behaviour. Yuko was not going to be a spoilsport now, was she? Now that the elder had slipped out that interesting piece of information, there was no way Atsuko could be blamed for being curious. Atsuko kept her stare on the older girl, making Yuko squirmed uncomfortably under pressure. Finding Atsuko’s gaze was too overwhelming, Yuko yielded.

“Fine, fine. I’ll tell.”

Atsuko grinned triumphantly when the Yuko’s words reached her ears. Her heart beat wildly in excitement that she got to know something that others never did.

“It was you.” Yuko said queasily, her eyes casted downward on her clasped fingers.

Out of all the names that she had listed in her head, Atsuko did not write down her own name as one of the possibilities. Therefore when Yuko had said that, Atsuko was shocked. Totally and extremely.  She waited for Yuko to spring out a ‘Just kidding!’ or a ‘gotcha!’ but Yuko never did. The air became considerably awkward between them. Atsuko loosened the collar of her shirt and gulped, feeling the small room had risen several degrees in temperature. Was that what they meant curiosity killed the cat? Atsuko wished that she had not been so persistent in asking that question because at that moment, she did not know how to respond to the answer.

Yuko, who seemed to notice the younger girl’s uneasiness, quickly saved the situation. 

“It’s just a thing in the past. Don’t worry about it. I have Nyan Nyan now. Even if you came on to me now I won’t replace her with you!” Yuko joked, causing the ace to form a smile. The older girl then rubbed her chin in a thinking pose.

“Now that I think about it, I think it would be difficult if we did end up together anyway.” Atsuko frowned at the sentence. Why? She thought to herself.

“Just imagine, Oshima and Maeda joining forces. It will be too much for the world to handle.” Both girls burst out in a fit of laughter at the end of the joke.  After they had somewhat calmed down, the younger girl laid her head on the older girl’s shoulder once again.

“Thank you, Yuko” Atsuko spoke out softly. Yuko only smiled in return.

As she sat there, Atsuko wondered about what could have been if she had noticed Yuko’s feelings for her earlier in their younger days. If she was not too fixed on Takamina, then maybe, she would be in Haruna’s place right now, enjoying the older girl’s attention. Instead of being in a stagnant ‘more than friends but less than lovers’ relationship like she currently had with Takamina, she could be in a real one. Atsuko was sure that Yuko would make her happy too.

When the ace made a comparison between the older girl and the captain, she honestly believed that there were more reasons to choose Yuko over Takamina. Yuko was just as caring and kind as Takamina (just a little bit perverted) but cuter, more affectionate and slightly taller (Atsuko laughed silently at this). Besides that, having tasted the top placing, there were some things that Yuko would understand Atsuko better than Takamina did. Atsuko knew that because of the fact that Takamina was the de facto leader of such huge group, Takamina had a lot of things on her mind and not just Atsuko. That was why no matter how much of an understanding person Takamina is, she could never understand fully what Atsuko felt.

Empathizing and experiencing is different after all.

“Ne ,Yuko?”

“Hmmm?”

“If there was no Kojiharu, would you still have given up on me?”

“I don’t know…. Would you give up on Takamina?”

Atsuko couldn’t answer the question. She didn’t know herself if she would do such thing. The human heart works in an odd, unpredicted way. Although it knew what was better for you, sometimes it still yearned for something that was harder to reach. Atsuko’s heart still wanted Takamina, regardless how much she had suffered in that unrequited love.

The younger girl’s silence had caused Yuko to turn her head in Atsuko’s direction and their eyes met. Something strange happened afterwards. There was no fluttering of hearts of any of the sorts that people used to describe cheesy romantic situation but somehow, the distance between them lessened until their lips touched. Perhaps it was the lack of air circulation that impaired their judgement or perhaps it was the dim lighting that influenced them to act that way.

Or perhaps, they just couldn’t help but wonder of the ‘what ifs’.

Just one kiss, they thought. That should be sufficient to satisfy the lingering question that was playing in their head. But one became two, two became three, three became four and four became many that they lost count exactly how many times they had kissed. Despite knowing the situation was so wrong in so many levels, neither made a move to stop. It was when Atsuko felt a sharp tug on her hair only did she pulled away from the passionate kiss.

“Ow, ow, oww!” The younger girl moaned in pain. Yuko instantly regained back her senses and looked over at the ace worriedly. What in the world had happened? Atsuko pointed at Yuko’s hand which was on the left side of her head. The bracelet that Yuko wore that day had several strands of Atsuko’s hair tangled with it. The older girl carefully removed the tangled bits until her hand was free to move again. Atsuko rubbed the part of her head that was hurting a minute ago and breathed in relief. Yuko didn’t look at that relieved however; a guilty look was on her face as she played with the offending bracelet.

“This bracelet… Nyan Nyan gave it to me.”

Atsuko’s heart fell. Guilty was not enough to describe her feelings. She felt absolutely horrible. Too caught up in the moment, she had forgotten all about Kojiharu. Such friend she was.

 “Yuko.. I’m sorr-” Yuko cut her off before Atsuko could apologize properly.

“I guess this is a sign that I shouldn’t cheat, huh?” Yuko smiled weakly. It was clear that the older girl was trying to brush off the incident by making a humor out of it. Atsuko knew that it was probably to prevent their friendship from falling apart too. Yuko is really an amazing person to be able to think quickly like this. If Atsuko was in that kind of pinch with anybody else, she was a hundred percent sure that their friendship would go down the drain. 

“Probably. You better not.”Atsuko punched Yuko’s arm lightly in a playful manner and the top two senbatsu members exchanged smiles. The tension between them dissolved into thin air.

The two girls squealed in surprised when the room jerked suddenly. It became bright once more and the elevator started moving.

“Finally!” Both of them thought. They stood up just in time before they heard a ‘ding’ and the door opened, revealing worried members and several strangers.

“Are you girls alright? We’re really sorry about what happened. We promise that this will never happen again!“ A man whom Atsuko recognized as the building staff bowed his head and apologized. Atsuko politely bowed back and dismissed it like it was nothing. An idol should not curse in public, although the face of AKB wanted to. It took them too long to fix the darn elevator!

Atsuko’s eyes scanned the crowd and disappointment washed over her when she saw that the one she was looking for was not in them.

“Hey.” A voice called out from behind, startling her. Atsuko turned around and standing in front of her was her unrequited love, whose look was full of concern.

“Hey.” Atsuko replied with a smile.

“You okay?”

“Well, I’m still alive.”

The captain took it as a sign that Atsuko was fine and pulled her into a hug. Atsuko hugged back, happy that Minami was actually worried about her. Still in the embrace, Atsuko threw a look at the other victim of the incident. Unsurprisingly, Yuko was already clinging onto her tall girlfriend. Though Haruna seemed unfazed about what had happened, her hands were firmly wrapped around the smaller girl’s body, not showing signs of letting go anytime soon. Atsuko giggled at the scene.

“What’s so funny?” Minami asked. The ace shook her head.

“Iie. It’s nothing.”

Yuko overheard the conversation and looked at Atsuko’s direction. One last knowing glance was shared and the incident was never brought up between them ever again. Both Atsuko and Yuko had already picked somebody else to be on their side – A captain and a cat-like girl. That one fact was not going to change because that was what their heart had decided on in this life. If there was an alternate reality where Takahashi Minami and Kojima Haruna did not exist, then yes, Maeda Atsuko and Oshima Yuko would definitely be together. 


THE END

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« Last Edit: September 10, 2011, 10:21:28 AM by kaizoku_gal »

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Re: Heart Station [Update 10/9: Something Unspoken]
« Reply #137 on: September 10, 2011, 09:22:31 AM »
Woa I actually love this (surprised at myself XD). At first when I knew it was going to be Atsuyuu I was hesitant in giving it a try because they aren't one of my favorite couples. I don't hate them though, I'm just not shipping them together and only seeing them as close friends. But the way your story flows and how you tackle the relationship is just so fitting.

After reading this, I, too, agree that Yuko would probably make Atsuko happy as much as Takamina for the fact that she would reciprocate  Acchan's feelings (assuming that she loved her too)and would not be as dense as Takamina (Yes you are too dense Takamina despite god-knows-how-many-countless-moves Acchan has done up until now :angry:). Well can't blame Takamina either since being the leader as she is, it's just in her instinct to care for every girl in the group, and thus somehow neglecting Acchan in the process :nervous.

But, AGAIN, but what the mind knows would be better for you doesn't always equal to what the heart feels. One might be consciously aware of what would bring them happiness but their heart just doesn't listen to it and prefer the hard way, or rather, the way leading to their true destiny. After all, Acchan knows that her heart would still be with Takamina regardless. I guess there's no logic or sense when it comes to love. And again, love isn't love at all if there's just happiness and no pains involved. Just like us humans with our 7 deadly sins; they may either make us a good or a bad person but without them, we can't be called humans.

I end up ranting again and no, I've never been in love XD.
« Last Edit: September 10, 2011, 09:48:12 AM by Tanchan »

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Re: Heart Station [Update 10/9: Something Unspoken]
« Reply #138 on: September 10, 2011, 07:59:36 PM »
Another great AtsuYuu fic XD
I never expected something like that and even the kiss... :w00t:. I like both of them but XD I still love my Atsumina more!!!!
Great job !!!! :twothumbs

I'll be looking forward to your next fic XD

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Re: Heart Station [Update 10/9: Something Unspoken]
« Reply #139 on: September 11, 2011, 12:53:49 AM »
ATSUYUU  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

i love atsuyuu..

the fic makes my heart melted..


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