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Offline Vanui

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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #5 (9/28/11)
« Reply #100 on: September 28, 2011, 02:56:15 PM »
Sensei, you and Nishi are so sadistic, always putting Takamina through so much fail. XD

But hey, if it makes for a good laugh, why not? 8D

Keep up da good work, Sensei~ :on GJ:
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #5 (9/28/11)
« Reply #101 on: September 28, 2011, 03:46:06 PM »
Yay SSA Logs~!

Oh Takamina, you fail so hard. lol
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #5 (9/28/11)
« Reply #102 on: September 28, 2011, 09:25:10 PM »
I really like your fic, the SSA are so hilarious!

Thank you for your hard work =D
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Re: R I V E R - SSA Log #5 (9/28/11)
« Reply #103 on: September 29, 2011, 01:45:27 AM »
The tree hit Takamina 8D oh how that made me laugh~~~

I love these SSA's  :heart: :heart:

Keep up the good work!  :heart:
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R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #104 on: September 29, 2011, 05:41:14 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 5
(Posted 9/29/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

Obligatory Sathday (in other people's time zones) post.

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A/N:
So what did you think? ;3
Please forgive me if any technology/military stuff is unrealistic and whatnot llOTL

Thank you once more for continuing to read and give encouraging comments ; v ; Please stay tuned for coming chapters!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #105 on: September 29, 2011, 06:05:13 AM »
Awesome as always! XD


p/s: If you kill off erepyon I'll troll shoot you.  8)2
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #106 on: September 29, 2011, 06:25:53 AM »
NO ERENA! D:

Ugh things are getting crazy.

Made my night~
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #107 on: September 29, 2011, 06:58:28 AM »
ERENA is going to be OK, Don't worry guys..  :)
But the probLem here is where did the Ace go?
I mean Maeda Atsuko, Where she is? hope she's aLright..  :(

and Fuck that Fucking coLoneL.. Huaah~!  :angry:

Ok Edit, haHa.. >> But I LIKE IT! :P
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #108 on: September 29, 2011, 07:05:48 AM »
than you are mean.. but im worst cause i like it!! jajaj
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #109 on: September 29, 2011, 08:20:11 AM »
Awesome! please continue~
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #110 on: September 29, 2011, 08:46:58 AM »
Erepyon!!!!!
OMG Acchan is fool, what can she do alone?
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #111 on: September 29, 2011, 09:58:07 AM »
acchan is lost??!  :shocked where is sheeee...??  :panic: :panic: :panic:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #112 on: September 29, 2011, 11:00:14 AM »
OMG :shocked

That stupid fucking col. eguchi bitch !!! Erepyon and Myao wouldnt be injured and Atsuko wouldn't be lost if it were for her selfish suicide mission!!!!
If something happened to Atsuko I swear I'll hunt down that bitch wherever she is !!!!
I just really hope that the enemies didn't caught her....Please be safe wherever you are Atsuko

Takamina in leader mode!!! Kakkoii!!!

very nice chapter!!!!
update Soon!!!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #113 on: September 29, 2011, 11:46:01 AM »
Or does Atsuko resume the mission all alone, for the sake of her dearest Major? :?
If this possibility somehow turns out to be true, then she's gone nuts!! :shocked (Such the power of love..)

This definitely needs an update! An immediate one, if possible.

And hang in there EreMyao!! You'll be okay!
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #114 on: September 30, 2011, 05:19:23 AM »
Well... if you really wanna know what is militarily incorrect... I honestly don't think they'd send only 16 people for a mission like this, not without more support and people of higher ranks. But you seem to have addressed the absurdity of the Colonel's orders quite enough already ;D

Keep up da good work, Nishi~  :hehehe:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #115 on: September 30, 2011, 09:33:35 PM »
Acchan please NO SUICIDE MISSION !!!
Takamina go to find her !  :tntrm:

Please update soon  :luvuluvu:
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 5 (9/29/11)
« Reply #116 on: October 01, 2011, 05:11:34 AM »
Either Egubitch dies, or I'll set up a team who killz her :shifty:

Oh ZuZu, I want the next chapter noooow! ;____; I must know what happens to Acchan, ACCHAN! MY OSHI MUST FEEL PAIN RIGHT NOW, PAAAAAAAAAAIN  :pleeease:

Update sooooooooooooon

P.S, Yuko is still hilariously funny 8D Falling in the river, cussing...."Egubitch."
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #117 on: October 03, 2011, 02:41:29 AM »
R I V E R

Chapter 6
(Posted 10/2/11)

Warning: Mild language and violence ahead.

A/N: Please ignore any medical discrepancies as well llOTL Also, I apologize if things skewer to the OOC department orz

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A/N: More sadness. Wewt.
I hope you enjoyed this… not so happy installment ; v ; Thank you for your comments! :D
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #118 on: October 03, 2011, 03:19:09 AM »
Thanks for updating!!

I hope you write about how Yuko failed :~)
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Re: R I V E R - Chapter 6 (10/2/11)
« Reply #119 on: October 03, 2011, 03:26:04 AM »
No

Don't kill erepypon!!!

TAKAMINA :cry: :cry: :cry:

Damn that Egubitch!!!!!!!! If something worst happen to Acchan now, I swear I will hunted you down and slowy tortured and mutalate you to died!!!! :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:

This is really so sad :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

Poor Takamina :cry: :cry: :cry:

VERY AWESOME UPDATE!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
I can't wait for the next chatper XD XD XD
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