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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #60 on: October 27, 2011, 08:35:15 AM »
Poor Miichan T_T

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #61 on: October 27, 2011, 08:54:41 AM »
aww miichan dont worry you can pimp whatever of more 100 girls in project48 :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #62 on: October 28, 2011, 04:32:08 PM »
nanka I feel sorry to Miichan, but I feel happy for my AtsuMina  :cow: :cow:
Acchan! Go get your love!!  :heart:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #63 on: October 29, 2011, 10:30:38 AM »
Finally update!! Thanks a lot... :heart: :heart: :heart: I just read it today.. my notebook just broke down about 7 days I think... nice chapter!! hope Atsuko have time to meet Takamina!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :wub:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #64 on: October 30, 2011, 10:58:19 AM »
Waa~ I love it!  :wub:
I'm hoping Tomochin will have a more aggressive role in getting Takamina~
 XD Love It!!!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 11 UPDATED 10/28
« Reply #65 on: October 30, 2011, 10:57:15 PM »
Go Acchan!!! Find Taka!!!!  :onioncheer:  and taka, go confess to Acchan~~  :luvluv1:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #66 on: October 31, 2011, 07:41:02 AM »
Part 12

The ace was on her way to find Takamina at the hotel , in the subway heading back..she had a phone call..”ring ring ring” *caller id: Aki-P*  “Moshi moshi ” “Ah..Atsuko I have important news to share with you” “Hontoni? What is it?” Acchan said excitedly “I have a great opportunity for you to boost your career” “how so?” “An agency called me and offer you a role in a Drama” “Oh my gosh! Really?!?! NO WAY…” “Are you excited?” “Yes! Yes of course..it’s an honor” “But..” “Eh? But what?” she asked curiously. “There’s a down side to it..It will be filmed in Korea for a month or so..when we leave back for Japan,You would have to fly straight into Seoul instead.” Acchan was silent, all you can hear was her breathing.. she was thinking about the person she loved most and how she didn’t want to be away from her for so long. “Atsuko?” “Hai, I’m still here..” “Well think about it okay? You can give me an answer before the night ends” “Oh okay..thanks a lot Aki-P, I’ll make sure I give you an answer by midnight.” “Mm..Okay, take care” “Hai” * hangs up*

Meanwhille at the hotel..

“Ne,ne Minami..what are you writing over there?” Tomochin asked . “Oh..it’s nothing..” she tore the paper and crumbled it throwing it into her back pack. “Are you sure it’s nothing? you spent hours on that paper..why all of a sudden you’re throwing it away.”  I was just scribbling heh..” Takamina climbed onto her bed sighing..  “I wonder what that Minegishi and Atsuko are up to..should I be worried? I can’t believe I set up the most romantic atmosphere for them..I’m such an idiot. I need to know what’s going on right now..should I call?” Hesitating to pick up and dial...she told herself “Neh  I shouldn’t, I’ll sound too desperate.” “Minami..what are you thinking about?” Tomochin smiled and jumped on the bed laying on next to her.. “Eh..eh..” The captain was surprised by her actions and how close she was. “Is it okay if I lie on your chest?” “Heeeeeeeeh? W-w-w-hy..??”Takamina asked stuttering.  “Because I don’t have any one to spend Valentine with..” Takamina felt bad and let her lye there “Why didn’t you spend it with Kasai? I heard her asked you to be her Valentine” “Oh god..don’t mention her..her Chiyuness gets on my nerves,if I hear it one more time..i might just clock her in the face..” Tomochin said chuckling. “Hahahaha that’s funny and  true..but she’s a really nice girl. You should give her a chance.” “I’ll take your word of advice..well maybe.. but there’s someone else I already got my eyes on hehe” “Hontoni?” Takamina asking with her eyes wide open and enthusiastically. “Yeah..but I can’t say who yet” “Oh..I know exactly how you feel..” Takamina stated. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. After 1 knock, Haruna and Yuko already opened the door walking in.. “Umm..did we interrupt something?” Yuko asked with a pervy smirk..”go ahead and proceed” she also added. Haruna kicked her girlfriend on the leg. “Shut up Yuko.. Hey do you guys want to go eat dinner together?”  “Sure” Tomochin answered. Takamina on the other hand got up really fast.. ”It’s not what you think!” “HAHA sureeee we all know you’re a play girl takaboy! I seen what Asuka and Amina did to you. You dirtry giir--” Yuko teased. “That’s enough Yuko! Lets go...” Haruna yelled dragging the squirrel out the door saving Takamina from embarrassment. In the hotel, there is a fancy restaurant where they decided to eat at. “Hey..I need to talk to you in private” The captain said to the cat like girl. “What is it?” “Can we go to the bathroom?” “Umm, I don’t know..Yuko might get jealous again.” “Well tell her I like ATSUKO!!!” “You’re not shy about it?” “Of course not..when it comes to her..nothing else matters.” “Dang..You caught the love bug!!” “Heh..yeah..i think so too.” “Okay go wait in the bathroom, I’ll let her know later” “Can you guys wait for the food? I have to use the bathroom” Haruna asked Tomochin and Yuko. “Okay,make sure you hurry” Yuko pouted. “Okay I’ll try” .. Haruna replied. Takamina pulled Haruna aside as soon as she reached the door. “Nanii?!” “Help me Nyan  nyan!” “Help you on what??”  “I need you to help me practice confessing to Atsuko.” “Do we really have to do this right now?” “Of course,she’ll be back soon!!!”  The ace rushed in..trying to catch her breath.. She spotted Tomochin and Yuko ”hu..hu..do..d-d-dd-do you know where I can find Minami?” “She’s in the bathroom over there” Tomochin pointed. “Do you need water Atsuko? ” “No uh oh t-t-th-thanks” she said while trying to catch her breath..Acchan  slightly opened the door to the bathroom.. when she heard two girls talking she frozed. She over heard  and seen Minami confessing to Haruna.. “I love you..please be my girlfriend, I loved you for a long time..” Takamina said, then hugging Haruna tightly. Acchan tears slowly dropped from her eyes..she tightens her fist as her eyes began to turn dark..her lips turned into a straight line.. As she let go of the door…she began to run as fast as she could up to her room..she cried and cried like she did the first time she met Takamina on New years. “My heart it hurts..is this what it feels like to have a broken heart? If so..I don’t want to be in love ever again..” She said to herself as she sobbed harder and harder.. Acchan picked up her cell and dialed Aki-P’s number.. “Hello ?” Aki-P answered.. “I—I made up my decision..I want to do it..” “Are you okay Atsuko? I can hear you sniffling” “I’m fine…but can you please get me a flight out of here right now?” “Why??” “I just don’t want to be here right now” “Oh..okay I’ll respect your wishes,pack up and be on your way to the airport.” “Thanks Aki-P” “No problem.” *hangs up*

In the bathroom

“Is that enough practice for you yet? Yuko and Tomomi  is waiting for us! You cheeseball” “Don’t Make fun of me!” Takamina shouted. “I can’t help it..you’re so cheesy, HAHA!” “So what did you think of it?” “Of what?”  “The confession!!! BAKA!!! Sometimes you’re such an airhead Nyan Nyan!” “Oh,hehe it was perfect..but next time don’t hug me so tightly,I like hugging girls..not little boys like you”  “That’s it!! I will tell Yuko that you like me so she can punish you!” “No no don’t. I was just kidding! Now lets go eat.” “That’s what I thought! Bwhahaha” They all finished their dinner.. Miichan walks in..”Hey guys did you see Atsuko anywhere? her stuff is not in the room anymore..”  “Really??” Takamina asked worriedly . Everyone began to search for her..until Aki-p walked in..”Calm down girls..Atsuko is on her way to Korea to film a drama. She couldn’t leave any notices because she was in a hurry to catch the flight. But everybody should start packing their bags as well. We will leave to Japan @ 5 a.m.”

TBC…

Sorry no confession yet! kekek i love teasing you guys!! :rofl: I'm thinking about turning it into Takatomo instead, i'm beginning to love them more than Atsumina LMAO jk!!! ATSUMINA FOREVER!  :wub: :wub:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #67 on: October 31, 2011, 08:43:13 AM »
huaaaaa Acchan!!! She heard it!!  :banghead: :banghead: she misunderstood the situation,  :bleed eyes:
please update it quickly, I want my AtsuMina to be together...........  :panic: and please no more misunderstanding  :bleed eyes:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #68 on: October 31, 2011, 10:45:23 AM »
NOOOO~~  :banghead:

 this is not right!!!  :O I want my atsumina!!!  :panic:

and acchan gonna leave for a month or so?  :bleed eyes:

please make acchan comeback quick, then takamina can confess to her.  :cry:

anyway, goodjob.  :twothumbs

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #69 on: October 31, 2011, 05:50:21 PM »
WA!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :banghead: :banghead:
Poor ATSUKO..... please ATSUMINA :bow:
I hope that TAKAMINA know that ATSUKO hear him practice in the bathroom... and after 1 week without ATSUKO by her side TAKAMINA ask Aki-p for a break and holiday and she went to KOREA to find her.... :wub: :inlove: just my imagination .....hehehe... :nervous

hope ATSUMINA forever... nice chapter :twothumbs :twothumbs good job and GOOD LUCK!!! :wub:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #70 on: October 31, 2011, 06:25:59 PM »
Huaah~! NO~!!!  :smhid Acchan misunderstood it..  :cry:
I hope AtsuMina will be back soon, and I'm very sad to what happen, Hayss~!  :smhid
I Like TakaTomo too, But I Love AtsuMina, There's so many Drama's here, heHe! But I Like it..
Write what you Like Mr./Ms. Writer, I'll support it, THANK YOU and GoodLuck, Update Soon..  :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #71 on: October 31, 2011, 06:43:49 PM »
Thanks guys for reading, i appreciate the comments eheh i'm a girl btw, i just wanted to add more drama to spice up the story, btw there will be more DRAMA coming soon pwhahahaha just be patient and in no time they will be together... well Maybe...or maybe not hah jk!  :twisted: :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #72 on: November 02, 2011, 09:14:57 AM »
Ah bad timing Acchan but it's more interesting ^^

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #73 on: November 02, 2011, 11:52:04 AM »
 :( Aww.. Acchan...
Well..  :smhid Takamina is kinda unlucky there...
This could spice things up between Takamina and Tomochin  8)
And I wonder what Tomochin would do with this opportunity to close the gap between her and Takamina  8)2
 :banghead: Can't wait for the update  ;)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/1
« Reply #74 on: November 04, 2011, 04:25:19 AM »
Acchan!!!!!  :pleeease:  What have you done to my AtsuMina!!!!  :fainted:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #75 on: November 08, 2011, 03:00:38 AM »
Part 13

Minami POV

"Why did she leave without saying a word to anyone?... Thats not like her at all..Something must be wrong..I've been calling several times but it keeps going to voicemail." The members and i just arrived in Japan not so long ago so I  hurried into Aki-p's office.  "Ehm..excuse me for barging in here like this Aki-p but I want to ask you something if you don't mind." "Sure, what is it?" "How long will Atsuko be gone for?" I asked trying to catch a breath from running the whole way there. When he shook his head, I knew it wasn't going to be a good answer. "Atsuko will be in Korea for a month." I froze at the thought of not seeing her face for one whole month...my heart sunken from hearing those words. I needed to see her, there was so much things left unsaid that I needed to tell her. 2 weeks has passed. All I can think about is her. Every day, every night and everywhere I turn all I can see is her face, I’m beginning to think I'm starting to lose my mind slowly… day by day. Is this what love feels like? I don’t get it. Why does it hurt so much? Another week has passed still no calls back; I’m beginning to feel like she's avoiding me. What did I do to deserve this? My heart is aching so bad right now...I would fly to Korea if I could but my career is just now launching off. If I leave now, everything I worked hard for will just be thrown away.." as we we're practicing Miichan came up to me. "Did  you talk to Atsuko yet Takahashi-san ?" "No ..She hasn't call me back yet. I left so many messages but still no replies." "oooh..souka.." she replied with a secretive face.. "what's with that face miichan?are you keeping something from me???" "Well, I didn't want to be the one to break it to you but I feel like I should tell you.." There was a long pause coming from Miichan. "We speak to each other almost every day. I’m surprised that she haven't spoken to you yet, I thought you would be the one person she would talk to everyday while she's overseas." “What?!?!?" I screamed furiously. I felt as if someone just had stabbed me through the heart. "So, how is she!?" I asked shaking Miichan back and forth crudely. " "She's doing real good she says." "Majisuka? Why is she ignoring me only.. what did I do?.." " I really don't know Takahashi-san.. you can ask her yourself. I don't want to get in the middle of it.." "I surely will then." It's nearly a month but it feels like a year without her by my side. Just 1 more day and she will be here and I’ll be waiting patiently for that moment to come."

Atsuko POV

"My eyes, it hurts... Every night for 2 weeks after filming, I would cry in my bed to ease the pain but it feels as if nothing will change. I ignored all of Minami's calls and started talking to Miichan and other members every day to get my mind off of her but still it doesn't seem to work... How could Minami do this to me? Am I just a pawn in her game to play? after all those time, she kept leading me on without realizing it… how could I be so foolish not to see it coming? Especially with all those girls fan girling over her...  She’s just a player and always will be. First it was me... then Tomomi, and soon it will be Haruna. We're all just victims. Although I hate her so much right now… it's hard not to think of her, I know truly deep down inside I still love her. The feelings I have are so strong that it's getting really hard to overcome.” We were done filming for the day… Takeru-kun, my main co-star asked me out on a date. At first I refused, but he kept on being so persistent. My first impression of him was that he's a good looking guy and he’s probably a snob. But he actually turned out to be the sweetest guy you’ll ever meet. Next day I finally agree to go on that date… I had time to think about it last night; if I wanted to get over Minami, I needed to start seeing other people. I know there’s no dating in Akb but no one will ever find out because we agreed to keep it a secret. Two more weeks has passed, not a day goes by without me thinking of Minami...it made me guilty for leading Takeru-kun on… Our relationship is one sided, he likes me a lot but the only reason why I’m dating him is to make Minami jealous. I’m finally going home today; he is also tagging along to do some interviews with me to promote our drama in Japan.

Reaching 1 Month mark

"Minami! Minami! I hear Atsuko is coming back home today! Finally, You can tell her how you feel! Haruna cheered on for the captain. “Really? When will she arrive???” Takamina asked overly excited. “In 2 hours..Are you going to pick her up from the airport and propose to her Taka boy? THAT WOULD BE SOOOOOOO KAWAIIII” Yuko snickered. “Eeeeh? Our relationship hasn’t even started yet.. Why did you have to tell that squirrel about it Haruna!? She teases me nonstop now!” Takamina pouted. “So that “squirrel” would get off my back about me liking you, duh cause I really really don’t!”  “You say it like it’s a bad thing!!!” Takamina cried back. “Well that’s because it is a bad thing.” Yuko added laughing crazily. “Awww shut up!” The captain frowned.  Meanwhile… Acchan flight flew in an hour earlier than expected; she made her way into the practice building to surprise the members. Although she was nervous to see Takamina and Haruna together, she tries not to let it get in the way. The ace walked in slowly, everyone attentions on her now... “I’m back” Acchan simply smiled.  The members ran towards her bear hugging her and squeezing her, particularly Miichan. “We missed you!” Miichan said smiling. “Especially a certain someone” she added. The captain was not in the practice room at the time, she was walking through the building to get some cold water bottles for the members. Acchan looks around and didn’t see the captain anywhere. “Why am I even looking for her after what she did?” she thought. “Well, hey guys I’m going to Aki-p’s office now so I’ll see you guys in a bit.” Acchan walked out the dance studio as Takamina was running in causing them to clash into each other.  ”Hey watch it!” Acchan screamed before looking up..feeling on her sore bum she fell on. ”That voice..Atsuko???”  Takamina asked.. smiling enormously. “We’ve got to stop meeting like this” The captain happily said. Getting on her feet first, Takamina helped the ace up…Before Acchan can move or say anything the captain forcefully pulled the ace into a warm embrace and planted a very passionate kiss on her. Acchan was shocked and surprised leaving her eyes wide open. Without realizing it, her eyes closes and she was responding to the kiss… At that second the ace starts to remember the scene in the bathroom. She pushes the captain off...” Stop.. What are you doing Minami??” she asked repulsively.

TBC...

ps..next chapter is gonna be sooooooooo crazyyyyyyyyyyy..stay tune lol :panic: :panic: :panic: please don't kill me about the Takeru guy!! soon things will fall into place hhehe.

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 12 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #76 on: November 08, 2011, 03:30:02 AM »
Kisu!!! kisu!!!  kisu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-glow: 

and please no heart breaking moment again~~~  :mon runcry: I can't bear it when my OTP hurting each other~~  :OMG:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #77 on: November 08, 2011, 05:11:32 AM »
Yea!!  :heart: Update~!!! :heart:
 :thumbsup Hoho.. Takamina so daring~ Kissing Acchan pationately~~  :wub: :inlove:
Your the man Takaboy  :on GJ:
I hope that Takeru won't do something stupid  :angry:

 :fainted: And I also hope that the misunderstanding will be cleared up soon  :cat:
Please  :mon cute: update soon~ And Thank You  :kneelbow: for updating  XD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #78 on: November 08, 2011, 05:21:42 AM »
NO WAY~  :w00t:
 
takabaka kiss acchan first?  :inlove:  this will never happen in the real life, but this is fiction so...  XD :twothumbs

YAY!!!! make her your, takabaka.   ;)  :cow:

and to AU: please don't make them misunderstood anymore, will u?  :bow:  the last time really make my heart broken.  :(

ps: that takeru guy seem will to be a third wheel  :banghead:

ps2: thank for update and update soon.  8)  :fap

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #79 on: November 08, 2011, 05:53:57 AM »
Whoa! Whoa!  :w00t: :shocked OMG! the Last scene, heHe..  XD
Acchan now thought that Takamina is a Player, hoHo..  :smhid
I wonder what will happen next, and what about the Takeru guy,
is he going to be a probLem to Atsumina reLationship? I guest Yes!
Own question, own answer..  :P
well! Thanks, it's getting more interesrted now  :twothumbs, but it's breaking my heart..  :(

Update soon..  :)

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