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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
« Reply #80 on: February 04, 2012, 11:04:39 PM »
Aww yuko you are so brave because you protect your wifey

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 16.Get back.. 04/02
« Reply #81 on: February 05, 2012, 07:14:37 AM »
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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #82 on: March 10, 2012, 09:46:59 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                 17.Angels exist

(School terrace)
Everything looks so pretty from here! Mayu thought while see the lights 
"Mayu!" someone said and putted her hand on Mayu's shoulder
Yuki!"Mayu said in a whisper and turned around to hug the taller girl
"i missed you!" Mayu says in tears still hugging the taller girl 
i missed you too!"Yuki says hugging Mayu tigher 
*clap* *clap* *clap* 
Ain't this cute? Alexander asks smiling 
Mayu turned around to see Alexander 
It's increrible that you still think that there's someone there when there isn't! Alexander says smiling 
you don't know anything! Mayu shouts 
i don't but she does..right Black? Alexander asks smiling and clapping 
Bla..Black! Mayu turned to see Yuki and this one grabbed her by her collar..
Yuki Stop! stop! Mayu shouts and looked at her in the eyes but there wasn't anything there...
STOOOOP! Mayu shouts 
~~Ring! Ring!~~
Mayu wakes up in tears...
everyone heard her scream so everyone was staring her..
Mayu what happened? are you ok? Jurina asked 
Acchan was about to put her hand on Mayu's shoulder but Mayu rejected it..
Mayu got putted her pants on and left running..
Mayu wait up! Jurina shouts but someone grabbed her hand "leave her alone!" Acchan says with a smile
Mayu is runs as far as can,she just doesn't want to remember then her legs without notice took her to that place..
is was saturday so it was close but she manage to get in! 
in the terrace she can see that they built a fence..
Mayu remembered when she tried to kill herself and Yuki saved her..
i can't handle this anymore! Mayu murmured then started screaming and kick everything around her to pull out all her pain
ahhhhhhhhhhh! Mayu shouts 
if you want me then come and get me! Mayu shouts crying and putting her hands on her neck 
You coward,fight! Mayu shouts crying and punching and kicking the fence..
~~~~~~~Minutes before somewhere else~~~
wow look at you..all a nurse for Black! Hideki says smiling while sits 
shut up! Sae says while puts a wet towel on Black's forhead 
do you think it changed her? Sae asks concerned
do you know how much energy you need to change someone's energy mostly if it's not negative? Hideki asks looking at Black who is resting on bed 
no,i don't! Sae replies 
A lot! Hideki says smiling 
i guess! Sae murmures and looks at Black 
do you think that a kid like that can do such a powerful technique? i bet it wasn't well done! Hideki says smiling
(call it whatever you want to call it telepathy, intuition, instinct..Mayu screamed and Black felt it that's why she woke up xD) 
Black opened her eyes..
Black you're back! Sae says happy 
welcome back Black or should i says Yuki? Hideki says smiling 
Black moved so fast that she broke Hideki's chair making him fall then she was ready to rip his heart 
Black stop! Sae grabbed her by her arms but Black found her way out..and left 
that was close! Hideki says smiling and nervous 
don't bother her! Sae says 
anydoubt more? Hideki asks then sighs 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<~~~>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(Somewhere else) 
Gekikra been standing in front of the house of that all lady for 7 days...(yes,rain,sun,everything) 
so the all lady was really mad and got out of her house and invited Gekikara in..
where's Jurina? The old lady asks 
home! Gekikara replies 
what do you want to know? The old lady asks while drinks her tea 
everything.! Gekikara answers 
that's a long story! The old lady says 
i got time! Gekikara replies..
(well this story is for the next chapter) xD 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yuko opened her eyes and she didn't know why she couldn't move her hand then she notices that Nyan Nyan is sleeping on it..
so cute! Yuko thought while with her other hand touches Nyan Nyan's cheek for the sudden touch Nyan Nyan opened her eyes,she couldn't help to smile and kiss Yuko all over her face..
yes,yes,i'm glad to see you Nyan Nyan! Yuko answers smiling 
but then the smiles when away when Nyan Nyan hugged Yuko tighly
"Yuko!" Nyan Nyan whispered 
Yuko could feel the tears running through Nyan Nyan's cheeks "i was worry about you!" Nyan Nyan said sobbing 
sorry..!" Yuko says and cuppee Nyan Nyan cheeks 
they looked eachother in the eyes for a moment then Nyan Nyan leaned and kissed Yuko...
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mayu was sitting in a corner of the terrace crying,she didn't know when it became dark but she doesn't really wanna move...she's been there all day..waiting? she wonders while looks other way trying to not think about that person the one who's owner of her thoughts..
"weak..!" a voice says 
Mayu turns around and sees "Yuki!" she murmures 
and more tears show
Black walks closer till the point that she's stading in front of Mayu then she grabs Mayu by her collar and pushes her against the fence
like her dream but this time Mayu is not going to shouts stop!
so you really wanna die! Black says with a smirk 
Mayu just looked other way 
it wouldn't be fun if you want to! An irritated Black says still grabbing Mayu by her collar 
Black got closer to Mayu and whispered in her ear "Run away and don't ever come back there's nothing here for you!" 
Mayu wanted to cry more and pushed Black 
"it's the truth if other fallen angel sees you it would kill you without a doubt but me i enjoy killing when they beg!"Black says while leaves and destroy the fence and jumps from the terrace 
"Yuki!" Mayu shouts and runs to see if she's okay
Mayu looks down and sees Black walking like nothing happened..
Yuki!" Mayu murmured 
Black walks to a park and then sits to see the people,ones where running others were chatting,a couple was kissing and kids were playing..
hey! a little girl says to Black 
hey! Black says then gets up and walks away 
hey don't go,i want to play ball with you! the little girl says and shows her the ball 
Black ignored her and climbed a tree to not being bothered..
the girl started play ball alone..
somehow the ball when to the street..
Black heard the crowd of people screaming..
There's a girl in the street! 
watch out! 
The little girl opened her eyes..
You!" she said and grabs her ball 
nobody could see a thing because of the smoke 
so that means you wanna play ball with me? The little girl asks 
"you should go find your parents!" the irritated person says while removes her hands from the front of the trailer and dissaperars 
soon tye smoke dissapear the parents of the little kid went to hug the little girl 
the reporters were there already..
the reporter asked to the driver what happened why the trailer was so damaged..
you're not going to believe me! The driver says
what? all the reporters asks
it was an older girl who stopped the trailer with her hands! The driver says nervous 
i know what was! the little girl says 
what? all the reporters asks with all the cameras recording 
it was an angel! The little girl says smiling 
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
are you watching the tv? Takamina says while runs with Acchan,Chiyuu,Eiji,Tomochin,Jurina and Mayu to Yuko's room 
Nyan Nyan was feeding Yuko 
what's with the noise? Yuko asks 
Takamina turn the tv on to show the news to Yuko 
the news subject was "Angels exist!" 
what is that mean? Yuko asks 
is there a new angel? Tomochin asks 
maybe we're not alone! Acchan says with a smile
maybe there some good angels out there! Yuko says smiling also 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<<<>>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
so a good new angel to turn! Alexander says 
Black was in silence..
TO BE CONTINUED! 
sorry for taking to long again! xD don't forget to comment thanks for reading me! <3

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #83 on: March 10, 2012, 11:42:44 PM »
PLEASE COME BACK!!! YUUUKKKIIIIII!!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #84 on: March 11, 2012, 04:16:01 AM »
Why Gekikara Went to the Old lady House ? :dunno:

YUKI .....COME BACK MAYU NEED YOU :on speedy:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON ~~~ :on GJ:

I like your story  :tantrum:
« Last Edit: March 11, 2012, 06:47:51 AM by xxx220 »
WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #85 on: March 11, 2012, 04:17:01 AM »
Woa!! This is so interesting...please UPDATE soon!! Lol

YUKIRIN....!!! COOL!!!
 Can't wait WMATSUI...kyaaaa
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #86 on: March 11, 2012, 01:16:39 PM »
Interesting.. wanna know next..
about jurina and who is the new angel
hope you update soon

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #87 on: March 11, 2012, 02:16:30 PM »
Poor Mayuyu ganbatte!

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #88 on: March 13, 2012, 12:02:23 PM »
cmon yuki.. back to mayu :panic:
update soon plizzz,,  :inlove: :inlove: :bow:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #89 on: March 17, 2012, 07:19:35 AM »
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:PLEASE UPDATE  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
:heart: :heart: :heart:MAYUKI :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
 :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:WMATSUI :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 17. 10/03
« Reply #90 on: March 20, 2012, 07:45:21 AM »
 :heart:PLSSSSSSS...UPDATE SOOON!! :heart:

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
« Reply #91 on: March 30, 2012, 09:09:16 PM »
                                THE EXCHANGE!!! 
                                     18.Jurina

So that's your way of having fun? Hideki says smiling
well i'm kinda hating that girl called Mayu and well hurting her friends will be fun! Sae says smirking 
hahahha yes,well i'm in..BTW where's Black? Hideki asks looking around 
DON'T GET IN MY WAY TRASH! Black shouts and pushes the other Fallen Angel out of her way...then sits and watches tv 
wow somone is not in the mood! Hideki says and walks over  fallen angel that knocked out laying on the floor 
They're just trash! Black says looking other way
you ready for school today? Sae asks smirking 
it's not funny! Black says coldly
what.. well you look good with that uniform,i mean you look good with everything you wear! Sae says blushing hard and looking other way 
whatever! Black says and got up 
see you around! Hideki says 
Black kept walking away without saying a word 
what a bitch! Hideki murmures
~~~~~~~~~~~Gekikara's Location~~~~~~~~~~
Everything started a long while ago..i still can remember that night! The Granny says while drinks her tea..
Gekikra was staring her,She can sense that what the Granny has to says is not good..but she kept quiet and payed full attention to her 
I was nurse,yes in the hospital that Jurina was born..that night a young good-looking girl came she was desperate to give birth..she said that she needed "it" out that "it" was killing her from the inside..
i thought to myself "what's wrong with her? is her child that we're talking about you can't call it.."it"! 
at that point i didn't understand why she was rejecting her child..
Gekikara kept stering the Granny
she wasn't ready yet to give birth so they put her under observation..i had to take care of her all night.. Through the night she said somethings to me that didn't seem right,she said "Please don't let him take my baby he's not good..he lied to me..he's a monster just like me and my baby!" 
~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~
you need to calm down girl! The nurse says while adjust her pillow 
you don't know anything a made a mistake a really big one! The girl says while looks through her window
hey,you need to stop..you can't blame that beatiful creature that have no fault of what you've done! the nurse says 
i'm scared! The young girl sofly said 
honey you shouldn't be afraid being a single mother is not that terrible you can do it! The nurse says 
"it's not that what am afraid of.." the girl says looking down to her belly 
then what is it? The nurse asked 
that he finds her eventually and turn her in something that she's not going to be! The young girl says rubbing her belly 
what are you talking about sweetheart? The nurse asked confuse 
you know he was really happy with you! The young girl says smiling 
what? The nurse asked terrified 
you hursband..he was really happy with and he loves you very,he wants you to start over and stop drinking at night because of him! The young girl says 
"what? how you..!" The nurse says confuses 
ahhhhhhhh...now is time! The young girl says to the nurse who inmediately called the doctors 
~~~~~~After an hours~~~~~~~
<Baby crying>
hello there you beatiful angel! The nurse says while grabs the baby from her mini craddle 
The young girl opens slowly her eyes...
she's a girl you know! The nurse says smiling while plays with her 
i know! The young girl says looking at the two 
don't you wanna hold her? The nurse asked and then gave it to the younger girl 
the young girl looked closely to the baby looking if everything was normal and then said "hello there beatiful angel,i'm your mom" while kisses her on her forhead many times 
so what's her name? The nurse asked 
"Jurina!" The young girl answers with a smile
you see it's not that bad! The nurse says while looks at the two playing 
i wish i could hold you more! The young girl says while gives the baby to the Nurse 
hey i wanted to ask how did you...*know?* The younger girl complte the sentence 
yes! The nurse says 
listen to me you're going to watch something that nobody had ever seen before,please take Jurina with you and give her the love i can't give her! The young girl says and wipe her tears with her finger 
what is this mean? What is going on? and how did you know? The nurse asked while hold Jurina in her arms 
the young girl got up,went to her window "i'm a angel,i met him before.. i didn't made him suffer i protect him as i could..sorry i wasn't strong enough but please take care of my baby btw remember this name Rena Matsui!" then she jumped 
what? get back! The nurse shouted and saw how the angel landed on the floor without a scratch the. the nurse saw another figure standing in front of the younger girl...
[Granny telling Gekikara: i don't know if i was drunk or the night didn't let me watch well but those two were fighting..they were so fast and strong it seemed like they were flying but he was definitely stronger than her...]
The nurse looking from up with Jurina in her arms crying
WTF is going on? The nurse said to herself 
<Down>
where's my child? The fallen angel asked mad 
i killed it! The young girl says while gets up and cleans the blood from the corner of her mouth 
youre lying! The fallen angel says and runs to the younger girl and keeps punching her 
i'm going to look for myself! The fallen angel says mad and kicks the younger girl 
The younger girl grabs him by his leg.."let me go whore!" 
the fallen angel took out a little sword from his jacket it was bright and looked unique and special..
with it he stabbed her!"
no!" the nurse says then covered her mouth and gave step back..
[i was afraid and i took Jurina with me..He didn't notice beacuse he was busy taking the young girl body away!] the Granny says 
why she said Matsui Rena? how did she know that i was going to meet Jurina? Gekikara thought
so Rena what are you going to do? The granny asks 
huh? how did you know? Gekikra says 
the old lady just smiled
what did you leave Jurina? Gekikara asks mad 
well he found us! the old lady says while gets up 
and!? Gekikara says 
he did this to me! The old lady says while shows Gekikara a super big scar on her shoulder 
Gekikara mad face changed to a surprised one..
i though that it will be better ..you know i was so close to tell him where she was because of this but i was relieve when she mentioned the name Matsui Rena so i knew she'll be okay with you! the granny says while sees her window
so questions on Rena's mind..she so confuse,is there something that she's forgetting?
Now you need to go is getting dark! The old lady says
yes,i should get going! Gekikara says while leaves
~~~~~~~~~~~At school ~~~~~~~~
Jurina chan is so cool! Some girls says while cheer her because she was winning in hand due
i'm not hahaha! Jurina says smiling 
Black got in and ignore everyone as usual but she knew that something wasn't right..she looked around and then notice "Finally give in.." She murmured to herself and then smirked 
you lose! the girl says 
it's imposible,you're a girl you can't be stronger than me! Ikki says confused
okay play with Kashiwagi san! Mark says 
yes,she's strong! Iiki says 
Black gave them a stare.. "kids!" she thought 
c'mon! the guys says annoying her 
i don't think that's a good idea! Jurina says nervous 
that will be i inresting! Ikki says 
Black was about to beat them all but then she thought that this could be a good opportunity to know if Jurina is as specail as she supposed to be..
yeah let's play! Black said..
everyone was watching closely..
1,2,3 go! Ikki shouts 
first Jurina doesn't seem so strong but then she became stronger and started to couse trobles to Black who was trying to keep herself together..
it seems like they're equals! everyone comments 
Jurnia was sweating and Black was having a bad time 
the didn't finish their match beacuse the desk broke 
wtf? Everyone thought
Black got up,she didn't look so happy about being equal so she just disappeared..
Jurina was confuse she didn't knew that she could deal with Black without losing her arm..she then looked at her hand it was normal not even a scratch
~~~~~~~~~~<<<<<>>>>~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Mayu why you didn't go to school? Yuko asks outsides Mayu's door room 
i'm sick! Mayu answers without opening the door 
you want us to get you something we're going out with Bakamina and Acchan? Yuko asks
no,i'm fine! Mayu asks 
okay..bye! Yuko says 
Mayu was sitting on her desk with many books,a lot coffee and her computer checking everything about angels..
li'm going to get you back Yuki!" Mayu murmured and kept typing..

Uffff Yuko's chapter is going to be..mmm i don't know,i think i'll effort a lot on it because is a really important fragment of the story..WMatsui destiny? maybe...MaYuki? don't worry Yuki Mayu is gojng to save you somehow even if it takes a sacrifice!?AtsuMina..Acchan hope Sae chan won't be to mean to you and your ribs! 
Thanks for reading Leave your comments and give me ideas! xD 

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
« Reply #92 on: March 30, 2012, 10:42:53 PM »
Destiny~

Good luck Mayuyu!!

Please update soon~

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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
« Reply #93 on: March 31, 2012, 02:41:06 AM »
W MATSUI Destiny

W MATSUI..... :on lol:

so Jurina is Who Daughter ?
WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
« Reply #94 on: March 31, 2012, 10:54:37 AM »
Yay! Mayu, Go get Yuki!
As what Anzai-san says, I want a Cool-Fight Scene too! Update Soon!
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Re: THE EXCHANGE!! 18.Jurina 30/03
« Reply #95 on: March 31, 2012, 12:18:51 PM »
aghh who is jurina parents..
hope you update soon

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Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
« Reply #96 on: April 13, 2012, 07:54:43 PM »
Hope you can help me to choose which fanfic i should update more often...

No rules for this poll.. XD

have fun!  :lol:

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Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
« Reply #97 on: April 14, 2012, 03:04:52 AM »
you evil person.. i want allkojiyuu fanfic updated!!  awww

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Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
« Reply #98 on: April 14, 2012, 05:50:18 AM »
id like you to update well anything with kojiyuu in it  :D haha

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Re: POLL!!!! Which fanfic should i update in my free days?
« Reply #99 on: April 14, 2012, 08:07:53 AM »
i vote for kojiyuu fic but i still waiting for akb bording school to update...

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