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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #540 on: June 04, 2012, 11:05:21 PM »
By antics I meant your comments lol
And why does everyone think I'm a guy? XD

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #541 on: June 04, 2012, 11:20:05 PM »
YO!
I haven't commenting on your fic for a while but that doesn't mean that I didn't like your fic or anything  :)
And the history of Shinoda and the great-grandfather or what ever of the current is making me exited.
My sense was right that even in the pre incarnation Mayu was a girl  :P

About this update...a the ranking system just like in India when the lowest ranking people are called "the untouchable"
being in the lowest ranking system their job is to clean the toilet ( no not ordinary toilet) but yeah outdoor toilet where people dumping on the floor and such.

So Shinoda wanted peace I hope that they will get in the future. I feel so sorry for him  :cry:
And story about the origin of the ring+Mai sacrificing herself  :cry:
So Minegishi refused to serve Shinoda I wonder what happened?

Mmm I'm curious about WMatsui story and *ROFL
Rena is perverted in this fic? and Airi is not?  :rofl:  :thumbsup

Thank you for your update anzai-san
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing)
« Reply #542 on: June 05, 2012, 03:18:07 AM »
     
@ Chicay12:
    Yeah, it's a sweet chapter for Ren/Airi, well, for now.  :twisted:

@ Maria-chan:
    Thanks for the excitement. :cow: :cow: :cow:
    Next we'll have some action, drama, fighting scene, and blood (of course).  :twisted:

@ kahem:
    Do you know why everyone thinks you're a guy? :lol:
    Let me tell you why.
    1. You're a lazybone, your comments are always short, brief, and direct/straight to the point.  :lol:
    2. You never use cute smiley/emoticons, such as  :ptam-shy: or  :ptam-kiss:  or  :luvluv1: or  :tama-bigheart:
        or  :mon cute: or  :mon inluv: :mon innocent: :mon lovelaff: :mon crazyinlove: :mon heh:
        or these.... :gmon flowers: :gmon heartu: :gmon love2: :gmon twirl: :gmon tears:
    3. You love fighting scene a lot.  :knee:
    4. You said this is the first fic that made tears on your eyes, and you said I can't do that again on you because you're tougher now.
        You're really a tough guy, kahem....   :lol:

@ Megumi:
    Don't worry Megumi, I know you're still my reader.  ;)
    You knew Mayu is a girl? Good...good... You're keen like oddball and kahem.
    I heard about the ranking caste in India (and the toilet too). In Japanese, the Eta works in tannery, burial/funeral, animal hunting, etc.
    Hopefully the discriminative system had been diminished/vanished.
    Shinoda will get his peace, even more, he'll rest in peace.  XD
    Ren/Airi: Rena is a perverted, trigger happy, god of war. While Airi is her charming servant.
    At first I wanted to make Airi as a boy, but I couldn't find a boy's name for her.  :lol:
    And it was you who suggested me to write a story about the origin of the ring, remember?
There is "the ring", you know......Chiyuu's ring. 
Yeah I tough about "the ring" too I'm looking forward too know more about it if you can come up with any possible ideas about it's origin or something.

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« Last Edit: June 05, 2012, 05:14:56 AM by anzai48 »

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #543 on: June 05, 2012, 04:33:08 AM »
Does Wmatsui still in the Fics....Or You change it into RenAiri...

RenAiri vs WMatsui
WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #544 on: June 05, 2012, 04:44:50 AM »
Does Wmatsui still in the Fics....Or You change it into RenAiri...
RenAiri vs WMatsui

WMatsui will be in the present time.
For the flashback, we're going to have RenAiri vs JuriChuri!!!! Yeay......  :deco:  :twisted: :cow:

(why do I keep giving a spoiler here?)   :sweatdrop:

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing)
« Reply #545 on: June 05, 2012, 06:06:47 AM »
@ Pwoper48:
     Hahaha.... Next time I will write about Yuki riding a MOUSE!!! (oops sound so wrong...XD, but it does rhyme... :lol: )
     Thanks for the correction, btw.
     Don't get too curious, Pwop-san. Sometimes curiousity can kill a cat. ( :? )
     And.....if you get good mark on your test, can you say it is because of me too?  :smhid

MOUSE??? I see what you did there :w00t:

Mou~ but I'm still curious about Tomo~ hope that you can make chapter about it soon

Nani? Who do you think you are? :p
btw, my grade is all good. when I said it's good, that means my grades are really good :p

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YOSH!! You update~! It's short but good... Thanks for updating it :twothumbs

Well, our Gekikara Rena miss Yuki right? Miss her as an opponent of course. Or maybe you gonna make Yukirena? Or... ah forget it..

Rena!! What were you thinking? Taking and cuting other girl's clothes? that's good bad!! :angry:

So, next chapter is gonna be about Jurina's past? Well, i'm looking forward for it, please update soon :bow:

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #546 on: June 06, 2012, 10:31:32 AM »
you really write A LOT!  :sweatdrop:

i like that!  :thumbup

i just ended page 26.... I got a long way to go still!  :nervous :cathappy:

it's enough for tonight my head hurts!  :D

keep up the good work.. :thumbsup

i love your updates!  :inlove:


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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #547 on: June 06, 2012, 03:00:29 PM »
Thank for the Update anzai-san....  :deco:
Your Story fic are always amazing... :theking
im about to cry, when read your update... :cry: :deco:


so it's Renairi VS Jurichuri eh? :thumbup

Really curious...if Rena and Jurina Really Love each other in Present time...(if they really love each other they never get bored, and i see its always jurina who took initiative first (kissing,talking... etc) :deco:
Well I'm sure jurina really love Rena (in present time) but not really sure about rena feeling toward Jurina... :cathappy:

So I am really curious about their history...aaaaaaaall hail Anzai-san.. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:



RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #548 on: June 06, 2012, 03:03:54 PM »
 :ptam-glow: wahhhh... :twothumbs :twothumbs
i really love ur update!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
plsss update soon!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing)
« Reply #549 on: June 06, 2012, 05:37:47 PM »
I just comeback after streaming the senbatsu election. Lots of emotion there.

@ Pwopie: (can I call you Pwopie?)
    Good grade? Oh, I'm proud of you, son! (Who do I think I am....LOL....  :lol: )
    TomoTomo will have to wait longer, because I'm a bit strict about the chapter sequence (and by 'long', I mean it's very long).
    It's hard for me to change the sequence once they are settled.
    But I do will consider the poll result.  ;)

@ cmze:
    Yeay, you comment. Please take your time to read. Don't rush it. I know you're busy.
    I will comment to your new story soon (Yuki as the archer).

@ kurogumi:
    Thanks for the nice comment. It's really motivating me!!  :twothumbs
    I have some crazy idea in my mind about WMatsui. Please look forward to it, kuro-chan.... :D

@ Chichay12:
    Thank you for loving it. Please keep reading.... :D

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #550 on: June 06, 2012, 06:06:17 PM »
I forgot to say yesterday.....

PLEASE CONTINUED YOUR AWESOME AND WONDERFUL STORY

WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing)
« Reply #551 on: June 07, 2012, 03:47:06 AM »
I just comeback after streaming the senbatsu election. Lots of emotion there.

@ Pwopie: (can I call you Pwopie?)
    Good grade? Oh, I'm proud of you, son! (Who do I think I am....LOL....  :lol: )
    TomoTomo will have to wait longer, because I'm a bit strict about the chapter sequence (and by 'long', I mean it's very long).
    It's hard for me to change the sequence once they are settled.
    But I do will consider the poll result.  ;)
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The selection is made me sad because Akicha is no longer in Senbatsu

Pwopie? :lol: but it's ok.  XD
Wut? NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :bleed eyes:

Eh? well, ok then. I must be more patient then.....
Now waiting for next update :bow:

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #552 on: June 07, 2012, 04:15:42 AM »
@ Chichay12, xxx220, Pwopie:
    Wow, thank you for commenting twice.....  :heart:
    I feel sad too, all of French Kiss members' rank went down (Akicha and Mocchi), and stagnant (Yuki).  :cry:
    It's my most favourite subunit. They have great voices and great songs.


Edit:
Thanks for all your comments, guys.
I will write faster and more chapters (longer one)..... :mon yeah:
« Last Edit: June 07, 2012, 04:24:32 AM by anzai48 »

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 1 (New Pairing!!!)
« Reply #553 on: June 09, 2012, 01:22:22 PM »
Hey Anzai, apologies for the late comment!

Hmm it's interesting to see Shinoda with the rest of his 'family' in modern times. First of though he obviously respects and likes all the other daughters, it is also apparent that compared to Acchan, and indeed Mai, they dont really compare, at least in Shinoda's eyes, thing is I think that Ume and WMatsui are aware of this themselves (we have seen Ume be affected by this both in the past and the presant at least) and I think that in thier own specific ways, this shows with Shinoda.

One thing he treats them in the same way as Acchan though is that he respects and id proud of the skills they have and unlike earlier with Acchan in the past he is fully aware of thier talents, though just as with Acchan when she was fighting Kai, we see that indeed Shinoda is imprssed with the girls, but also maybe in some ways he is a little scared by them at the same time....

Hmm, maybe we see Jurina's win at any cost attitude come through her past, she was the lowest of the low, and maybe this past of hers makes her into the person she is today, makes her always want to win lik she does....

And Rena, well it seems as though her past is alot motr traumatic, turning her into Geki at some point, interesting to see Airi come into play her, obviously there is a role to play here, I wonder how much it has to do with quite how Geki is today........

Interesting that at some point the Minegishi clan left the Shinodas.... why did they leave? was it what Shinoda was coming, something about Mai? perhpas we will find out more later om.....

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« Reply #554 on: June 10, 2012, 09:44:57 AM »
@ oddy:
    It's okay, oddy, as long as you comment.....  :P
    Somehow I felt it's just so right, Mariko's speech at the last election, when she said they must not wait until someone left the throne
    and just hoping they can replace her empty spot. It's the same with Acchan-Mariko-Umechan here.
    Somehow Umechan managed to steal 16th because Acchan's leaving.
    But we knows noone can replace Acchan even after she graduated from AKB.
    Well, what can I say? I made this fic as a parody/metaphore of their real life. XD
    But, yeah, I still know so little about them.

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Part 2


To give a further background for our vampire girls, we must go back to 6 years before the last scene of RenAirin in the last update.


1847.


It was a peaceful day in a small village, almost sunset.
The villagers had just come back from the farm and the forest, where they usually work for food gathering/producing.

This is just an ordinary day for the people of this village.
Except that this village is not an ordinary village.
It was inhabited by the lowest people, the caste of Eta, the Untouchable.

Most of them work in subsistence farming, to produce and keep food only for their family.
They don’t do trading, nor do they exchange goods with other people, because nobody wants to have business with them.

Other than farming and food producing, they also do hunting and animal breeding.
That’s why they usually live near forest or river, to support their daily needs.

The only goods they sell to other people were hides (animal’s skin).
Tannery was considered as a filthy job, and that might be one of few jobs which are available for this lowest caste.

The Eta people would hunt the animal and skin them.
And then they would sell the animal’s skin at the market with a certain price.

Other jobs for this lowest caste might as well be considered as filthy, and usually heavy-related with animals, soil, dirt, mud, smoke, and funeral/burial.

Most of these people were illiterate.
They had no way to communicate, other than using verbal language and some primitive symbols to write or record something.


And that is where Matsui Jurina was born and raised.
She’s grown up in this isolated village, where the people were abandoned by the lords and the higher caste.


Everyday, the poor but cheerful Jurina spent her time with her friends, exploring the forest, collecting foods, and playing around to amuse themselves.

Jurina was only 9 years old, and had two little brothers.
When Jurina was still an infant, her father had an accident while going out hunting, falling into an animal trap, and then he must had his leg amputated.
Since then, Jurina’s mother had worked very hard to support the family.
And now being the eldest in the family, Jurina had developed responsibility and behaviour as the family leader, at a very young age.

Even among her friends which are mostly boys, Jurina was considered as their leader.
Not only because Jurina always win a fight/duel between them, but also because she’s smart, brave, has a handsome face and boyish behaviour.
She acts like a lord among her circle friends.
And she’s strong too, for a girl.
She never back down from a fight, despite her opponents was a big boy and way older/taller/stronger than her.
She’s really persistent, competitive, and ambitious.
She always wants to win her every fight, either physical fight or mind battle (debate/argumentation).

Nobody knows how Jurina came to have a smart brain like that.
She can’t read kanji, katakana, or hiragana.
But she can grasp something very abstract in her mind.
She thinks like a strategist and schemer.

She can influence people with her words.
She can sweet-talk information out of her enemies/rivals.

If only she was born in a high class family (land-lords), then she would’ve made it as one of the greatest, brightest lords at that time.


But Jurina couldn’t care less for those lords outside their village.
She was happy enough to live her peaceful life, far from war and danger.
As long as she can support her parents and her little brother, it was enough for Jurina.
For now, she can keep her dream only to herself.

Her dream: having a better life in the future, getting enough education, fortune and welfare.

She always wants to change the fate of her people.
To raise them up to the new level.
To gain respect in this society.


But that was just a wishful thinking.
It only happened in Jurina’s ideal dream, an alternate universe.


Jurina's dream were crushed, when in one fine day, a handful of army came attacking the village.
They killed everyone, and burnt everything, leaving nothing but smoke and dust.

The village was destroyed.
The people were cleansed.


A warlord come entering Jurina’s house.
And for the next few minutes, Jurina witness the massacre of her family.
She saw blood gushing out from the head and the body of her beloved father and mother, and her two little brothers.

All Jurina was thinking at that moment was why, why someone she don’t know would want to kill her family.
They didn’t do anything wrong.
They never hurt anybody.
They never disturb anybody.
Why they had to go through all this suffering?
Why would a warlord want to kill them?


Jurina fought back so hard.
She utilized anything as a weapon, trying to prevent the warlord from slaughtering her family.
But she just couldn’t win against the fierce warlord.

And all she can do was staring deep into the warlord’s eyes.
The warlord’s eyes were all red, and void.
She sees no warmth in there.
No humanity.
Frightening.
Freezing.
Mesmerizing.


Jurina kept staring at the murderer’s eyes, as if she wanted to picture it forever in her mind, so that she can get revenge someday.

Jurina could not see the murderer’s face, because it was covered with a mask/helmet, while the body was fully covered with a heavy armour.


Jurina kept staring at the murderer’s eyes.
The murderer stared back.

They stared at each other for they don’t know how long, until the murderer decided to knock Jurina out but did not kill her.

All Jurina knew was a sword swinging at her, and hitting her head so hard, so that she collapsed.
And when she woke up, the army had gone, leaving the village ruined in ash and dust.
A hundred of dead bodies lying on the ground, inside and outside their houses.
Men, women, children; all were slaughtered without exception.

So, why is it that her life was spared?
Why the warlord killed her family, but didn’t kill her, only knocked her out?
It was a question that can hardly have an answer.


Jurina could not stomach what happened before her eyes.
This village was already destroyed.
She had to leave for another place.

Bringing nothing except her only clothes, Jurina dragged herself wandering to another village, searching for help.
Much to her surprise, the condition in those other villages was no better than her village.
They’re all destroyed, burned, and abandoned.

Jurina couldn’t help but thinking what kind of monster who did this kind of thing?
A mass slaughter.
A caste cleansing.

What did they do wrong so that they must endure such a cruel fate like this?


Jurina kept dragging herself, walking on her foot, starving on her way as she moved from one place to another.
The weather was bad.
It was rainy and stormy almost every night.

Jurina had nothing to eat, nowhere to sleep, and not enough clothes to keep her warm.
She only eats whatever she caught within her sight: fruits, leaves, roots, weeds.
She kills animal to for her meal.
She did anything to survive.

But her health was decreasing rapidly in such poor condition.

One night, she collapsed near a forest.
She was hoping she would die soon, so that she won’t have to suffer anymore.


Jurina woke up in the morning, finding herself in a shelter.
Someone must have moved her from that forest, and gave her some clothes.

“Hey, Kid. Are you awake?”

Jurina looked up to see her saviour.
Her head was still dizzy and her vision was still blurry.
She needed few seconds until she can fully see the person in front of her.


It was a girl, wearing an eyepatch like a pirate, standing in front of her.

Jurina opened her eyes wider and get up from the bed.

She saw several girls surrounding her.
They looked so badass, like a bunch of pirate or mugger.

“Give her some food.”
The leader, a girl who’s wearing an eyepatch, instructed one of her minion to give Jurina some food.
The minion went out somewhere, and back with a bowl of katsudon.

They all waited and stared at Jurina while she’s eating the katsudon like a hungry bear.

“Thank you,” said Jurina after finishing her meal.

“Isn’t it time to introduce yourself, other than saying thank you to your saviour?” said the leader.

“Ah, sorry, I’m Matsui Jurina.”

“A MATSUI..!! LORD MATSUI…!!!” suddenly those girls become panicked and pulled out their weapons, ready to attack Jurina.

“What? Why?” Jurina asked confused.

“You’re Lord Matsui Rena!!! The warlord!! Guys, kill her!! Don’t worry, she don’t have any weapon now!!” the leader shouted.

Jurina panicked, but she quickly grasped the situation.
“Woaahhh…..Wait…..Hold on!!   I’m not a lord. Don’t kill me. Wait…Listen to me!!”

Jurina gets up frantically and put her hands up, showing a sign of surrender.

“I AM NOT A LORD!!!!” Jurina shouted angrily, as she found herself being cornered like a dangerous animal.


“ I. AM. NOT. A. LORD…..Please, believe me,” said Jurina again.
Her eyes were full of fire and determination. She was determined to make those girls listen to her.


The eyepatch girl frowned, and gave a sign to her minions to back down.

“See, I’m not dangerous. If you don’t trust me, just tie me, but don’t kill me. And then we can talk.” Jurina put her hands higher.


Those words somehow got into the girls.
Somehow they can see that Jurina is telling the truth.


“Okay, we believe you,” the eyepatch girl put her sword back into the sheath.

“Thank you,” Jurina said relieved, smiling at the eyepatch girl.
(Geez…..Why do all of them have weapon?)

“I’m Matsui Jurina. I share the same name with that lord. It’s just coincidence.”


The eyepatch girl winced and tilted her head. “I see. And I’m Akane, by the way.”

Jurina saw a crow flying closer at them, and perched on Akane’s right shoulder.

(What is she? A pirate?)
Jurina thought, amazed by the girl’s appearance.

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1847.
MATSUI’S CASTLE.



Lord Matsui Ichiren was alone in his room.
A guard came in, informed him that his daughter had arrived.

Guard       : “Lord Rena had arrived, My Lord.”
Lord Matsui: “Bring her in.”

A young warlord came entered the room, and then bowed and kneeled in front of the lord.
Surprisingly for us, this lord was a girl.
A pretty girl who should be called with ‘Lady’, not with ‘Lord’.

And this lady did not wear a kimono, yukata, or any woman’s dressing as such.
Instead, she’s wearing armour.
She held her katana in her right hand and her helmet in her left hand.
Her armour and helmet was covered with blood.
Not her blood though.
It’s her victims’ blood.


Lord Matsui: “Did you finish your task?”
Rena         : “Yes, father. We destroyed and burned those villages.”
Lord Matsui: “Did you kill all the villagers?”

Rena hesitated for a while, before she finally answered: “Yes, father.”

Lord Matsui saw the hesitation. “Did you kill them all? No exception?”

Rena         : “All of them were killed. No exception.”
(I should not tell him that I left one person alive in that village.)

Lord Matsui: “Good. And where’s your brother?”
Rena         : “He’s still on his way.”
Lord Matsui: “Tsk. He’s always slow when it comes to fighting a battle. I wonder who is actually my son: you or him.”
Rena         : “Onii-san is not slow, father. He’s just more cautious than me. He thinks before he acts.”
Lord Matsui: “But he thinks too much, and too long.”

Rena didn’t answer.
She just bowed down, asking permission to leave.
But then she stopped and looked up at her father again.

Rena         : “Father, may I ask a question?”
Lord Matsui: “Sure.”
Rena         : “Why must we kill all the villagers? They would surrender anyway. They can’t fight back. They can’t defend themselves. There's no need to kill them.”

Her father stared at her with a deep, intense gaze.
She could sense her father’s anger in those eyes.
She knows her father doesn’t like it when she asks those questions.

Lord Matsui: “This is war, Rena. They’re just a collateral damage. They must die for a greater good.”
Rena         : “A greater good?”

Her father nodded.
Lord Matsui: “Once we win this war, we can be the absolute ruler. We’ll bring peace to the whole country.
                    Now the Shogunate is going down. We must take advantage of this momentum. Mobilize our army. Expand our land. Strengthen our force.”

He continued.
“And those people you killed were just a low people. The lowest caste. The Untouchable. They don’t deserve a place in this world.
We must get rid of them before they become stronger and rebellious. Do you understand? How many times do I have to tell you this again, Rena? ”


Rena         : “I’m sorry, father.”
Lord Matsui: “I will not have you asking those questions again. Am I making myself clear?”
Rena         : “Yes, father.”

Rena bowed again.

Lord Matsui: “And Rena, I brought you a new servant.”

Lord Matsui called a name, and then a young girl came.

Servant    : “My name is Furukawa Airi. I will serve you from now on. Please take care of me.”

The servant bowed down at Rena.

Lord Matsui: “Get along with her, Rena. She will be your personal assistant.”
Rena         : “What can she do?”
Lord Matsui: “Everything.”

Rena eyed the servant from top to toe.
She’s shorter than Rena, but looks mature and collected.
She maybe one or two years older than Rena.

Rena        : “Airi-san, how old are you?”
Airi           : “15.”
Rena        : “Ah, I’m 14. Let’s be friend, Airi-san.”
Airi           : “Yes, My Lady. Thank you.”

Rena smiled at Airi.
Airi smiled back at her new master.

Little did Rena know, that her new servant will become the most important person in her life, and that Rena will become a different person because of this servant.

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SIX YEARS LATER.
1853.


Jurina, now 15 years old.
For six years, she’s been living together with her new friends, her saviour.

She never thought they were actualy a gang of thief/mugger who likes to steal and rob something from wealthy people/lord.

But this gang likes to help the unfortunate people.
If they had enough share from the loot, they would give some money for the poor people.

The gang was led by a brave girl with an eyepatch, named Takayanagi Akane, 20 years old.
She was the bravest and fastest among the girls.
She can fight very well, either emptyhanded or in swordfight.
And her speciality was shooting with her arrow.

Akane always brings a crossbow on her back, along with sword on her waist, and a crow who likes to perch on her shoulder.
Someone said that the crow was her twin sister who died a long time ago when they’re still a kid.
Just like a pirate, Akane would let the crow perching on her shoulder everywhere she goes.

But no, she doesn’t have an elastic/rubber body.
Nor they have a ship to sail on.
And the town was quite far from sea.


No.
They’re not a pirate.
They’re just a bunch of thieves and muggers.

Days passed by, years gone by.
Now it’s been six years.
They’ve been moving from one town to another town, mostly to hide themselves and avoid the Shogunate’s army.

They’re slick like an eel.
They’re hard to catch.



And for all those six years, Jurina had learned a lot of things while she’s hanging out with them.
She learned how to fight and to survive.
She also learned how to read and write in kanji.
She developed her wisdom and intelligence.


And Jurina feels belong to this gang a lot.
They respected her.
They listened to her whenever she speaks her mind.
They treasured her like noone has ever done before.
They loved her, eventhough they know she came from Eta, the caste of the Untouchable.
They’re all treated each other with equality.

That makes Jurina feels she had found her new family.


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MATSUI’S CASTLE.
1853.


Matsui Rena had just come back from a battle.
As usual, her body, armour, and sword were fully covered with blood.
She looked at herself, murmuring as she saw the crimson liquid on her shining armour.
She’s sure looked like a bloodthirst warlord now.


Her face look more depressed.
She always feels depressed whenever she comes back from a war, eventhough she won the fight.


But when she reached her room, her expression become brighter and cheerful again, as she’s searching for a particular servant, calling out her name.


“AIRIN.......AIRIN……..Where are you?”
Rena shouted loud, looking for the person.

She rushed into her room, and spotted her beloved servant preparing warm water for the bath.

Airin glanced to see Rena, and smiling at her as if the sight and the scene of blood didn’t affect her at all.


Airin    : “You must be tired, Rena-sama. I have heaten up the water for your bath.”
Airi said smiling as she helped Rena remove her armour.

“And there’s your melon pan……Now let’s…..HEY HEY….Don’t eat that melon pan with blood on your hand, Rena-sama!! What are you thinking!!??”
Airin scolded her master, but couldn’t help but smiling to see the master’s childish behaviour, rushing and grabbing the melon pan with her bloody hand.


Rena    : “Hehe….I’m sorry, Airin-san. I’m hungry.”
Airin     : “Tsk…Rena-sama, I wondered how you can still maintain your appetite after seeing so much blood in those battles.”
Rena    : “I can eat melon pan during war.”
Airin     : “That’s creepy.”
Rena    : “But I love melon pan.”
Airin     : “I know. Now hurry take a bath, Rena-sama.“


Airin continued helping Rena remove her clothes and undergarment.
Now, she’s standing behind her master, and fully facing Rena’s backside body.

Airin unconsciously hold her breath.

That was one helluva perfect body.

Although Airin had seen Rena’s stripped naked for a hundred times before, since 6 years ago, she was still amazed to see how perfect Rena’s body is, especially looking from behind.
And it’s getting more perfect each and every day, as Rena growing up to be a more mature lady.

Who ever thought that a God of War could have such a perfect body?
Noone knows it.

Noone, except Airin.
Because she's the only one who is allowed to see Rena naked.
Rena only wants one person, that is Airin, to help her taking a bath and such.

Airin keep staring at Rena’s back.

There’s a long scar on that back.
It was a new scar.

Airin     : “You have a cut on your back, Rena-sama.”
Rena    : “Uh-huh? I don’t feel it. How bad is it?”
Airin     : “It’s not deep, Rena-sama. But we should tend to it first.”

Airin took a towel and gently cleaning Rena’s wound with it.
Unfortunately, it was not deep so Rena could still taking her bath without having worried of that wound on her back.

Airin     : “Is it hurt?”
Rena    : “No, I can’t feel it.”
Airin     : “Really?”
Rena    : “Yes.”
Airin     : “Well, isn’t it a wonder? How come you didn’t feel the pain, Rena-sama?”
Rena    : “I have no idea, Airin.”
Airin     : “Everytime you get wounded, you always say you don’t feel the pain. Are you telling the truth, or you just say it to fool yourself and people around you?”
Rena    : “Nooo~….Airin, I’m not lying. I really don’t feel it at all.”
Airin     : “That’s strange.”
Rena    : “Yeah, but that’s an advantage for me, if it comes to battle and fighting.”

Airin     : "But pain, my lady, is one the bless God gave to us. Without pain, you'll never know when something's wrong with your body.
               Pain is an instrument of survival, indeed."

Airin clicked her tounge, still thinking and looking for a logical explanation behind this symptom.
Airin never saw someone as strong as Rena.
And the strangest thing is, she never saw someone who can’t feel pain.

It’s as if there is a brain damage inside Rena’s brain that made her losing sense of pain.

Maybe that what makes Rena to be as she is now: fearless, emotionless, painless.

Airin took a soap, and brushed it on Rena’s body.
She helped cleaning all parts of Rena’s body: her back, her neck, her shoulder, her hair, her waist, her arms, her legs.
And then she helped her master to get into the hot water.

Rena submerged and enjoyed the hot water, while Airin busy massaging her shoulder.

Rena    : “Airin, why don’t you take a bath with me too?”
Airin     : “What are you saying, Rena-sama. Of course I can’t.”
Rena    : “Just close the door, so the guard won’t see us.”

Airin chuckled.
Airin     : “Maybe next time, my Lady.”

Rena closed her eyes, letting out a soft moan, as she enjoyed the massage Airin’s giving her right now.

Rena    : “Airin, you’re a massage expert.”
Airin     : “Thank you, Rena-sama.”
Rena    : “Airin, would you mind sleeping together in my room tonight? I’m afraid I’ll be having a nightmare again.”
Airin     : “Of course, Rena-sama. I’ll be watching you tonight.”
Rena    : “Thank you, Airin.”


And that was it.
Everytime Rena come back from a battle, fully covered with blood, it will be Airin who always give her a comfort.
The fearsome, emotionless God of War had found the only comfort in a form of one person: her charming servant.

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SOMEWHERE OUTSIDE THE TOWN.


Jurina stood leaning on a rock, crossing her legs, chewing on some weeds.
She watched as her friends practiced their fighting skill.

Sawako and Manatsu were sparring using their swords.
Ogiso was playing alone with her dagger.

Jurina herself have never been so interested in practising martial art.
She can fight well, but she just not into it that much.
There's other thing that catch her attention.

Jurina likes to watch her friends.
She likes to watch and capture anything that happen around her.
She likes to analyze things, deducing things.
That's how her brain worked.


And now, she just busy watching Akane not far from her.

Akane, the girl with eye-patch, was busy focusing herself on her target.
She put her arrow and bent her crossbow, ready to shoot.

The target was an apple hanging on the branch of tree, several meters from the archer’s position.


Jurina kept watching the eye-patch girl, unconsciously forming a smile on her face.
She always like it, watching Akane from a far while the girl busy focusing and shooting something.


Jurina had always wondered, how come Akane had such an amazing shooting skill.
Akane, just like Jurina, came from a poor family.
Noone taught them how to fight or defend themselves.
They learned it by themselves.
They developed their skill based on their interest.

Akane had a talent and interest in archery.
She always thought it was cool to be an archer who never missed any targets.
She practised her shoots everyday, alone, without anyone to teach her.


And how she manages to do it with only one eye, it remained a mystery for Jurina.


Jurina kept watching the archer-girl, waiting her to make a move.

(Here she goes. Here she goes. She’s going to shoot now. Yeah, shoot it now, Akane.)
Jurina whispered to herself.


The eyepatch girl released her arrow.
And ZWAAARRRTTT……………….

An apple flying away from the tree branch, with an arrow buried right at the center of it.
It’s flying several meters in the air, before landing nicely on the ground.


Jurina’s smile becomes wider.

She stood up and walked closer to the trees.
And then she picked an apple and put it on top of her head.


“SHOOT ME, AKANE…!!!” Jurina shouted.


Akane and the other girls were startled, and become noisy, yelling at Jurina.

“What the h*ll are you doing there, Jurina!!??” Sawako yelled.

Akane furrowed her eyes, hesitating what to do.
She glanced at her friends: Sawako, Manatsu, Ogiso, and others.

“Come on, shoot me, Akane!!” Jurina kept insisting.

Manatsu : “Don’t do it, Akane. Jurina’s just being crazy. She wants to kill herself.”
Jurina    : “No I don’t!! I’m sure you can shoot it without killing me. Come on, Akane.”

Ogiso    : “Akane, this is crazy. You never did this before. And you only have one eye. Akane……..”
Jurina    : “Shut up, you all…!! Let Akane do it!! Prove it to them, Akane!! Prove them wrong!!”

Manatsu : “Akane, how if you miss it? It’s dangerous. You don’t have to do this. You don’t have to prove anything, Akane ….”


Akane, still hesitating, she stared deep into Jurina’s eyes.
Trust. Faith. Determination. Courage.
Those were what Akane saw in Jurina’s eyes.


And then Akane realized, ever since she saved Jurina that day, six years ago, she never saw Jurina hesitating over something.
The poor little girl she found six years ago was gone.
The old Jurina had already died six years ago.
And that day, a brand new Jurina was born.
The new Jurina who never fear of anything again, not even death.

Jurina’s already dead anyway, six years ago, if only Akane didn’t save her.
She owed Akane her life.
And if she had to die, she wanted to die in Akane’s hand.

Maybe Jurina is crazy.
But she knows that her love, faith, and trust for Akane is invincible.
She won’t lose to anyone, if it comes to loving and adoring the eye-patched archer girl.


Akane was fully aware of that.

So, Akane strengthen her heart and decided.
She will do it.

She put an arrow, and raised her crossbow.
She did not need to wink her eye to focus herself, because she’s already a one-eyed herself.

Akane moved an inch to find a right direction, aiming her target.

Sawako, Manatsu, Ogiso, and the others were holding their breath, as they saw an arrow flying right to Jurina’s head.


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Jurina closed her eyes, and felt a wind as the apple flying above her head, and fall down to the ground.

Jurina opened her eyes.
She’s still alive.

Not that she’s surprised about that.
Nothing can surprise her anymore.

But eventhough she already knew Akane is gonna make it, still she’s amazed by how perfect Akane made that shot.


Jurina smirked, still chewing the weeds.
She picked the apple from the ground, removed the arrow from it.
She rubbed it on her clothes, making it clean.

And then she walked closer to Akane.
The way she walked was full of victory.
Proud, gallant, stylish, and smug like a lord.


And then, putting on a smug smile on her face, Jurina gave the apple to Akane.

Akane took the apple, while keep her eyes sticking at Jurina.


(This kid. Did she know what she’s doing just now? What if I missed that shot and killed her?)
Akane thought.


“I knew you can do it, Akane.” Jurina said. Again with her charming smile.


So suddenly, Akane felt her heart skipped a beat.
(Ouccch….. Did she just shoot my heart with an invisible arrow? Damn it, Jurina, what have you done to me!! You little kid!!!)


“With you improving your skill, Akane, I’m sure our mission to rob Lord Matsui will succeed. I’ll gather the information first, when they will transport their luxuries to Lord Umemoto’s castle. We will steal their golds.” Jurina said.


Jurina glanced at Sawako, Manatsu, and Ogiso, with a 'Yeah-I-Win!!!' look in her eyes.

She whispered something to Akane's ears, making Akane's blushing mad.

And then she left, leaving Akane and the other girls dumbfounded like an idiot.


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LATER AT NIGHT.
MATSUI’S CASTLE.


Matsui Rena could not sleep well.
She flipped her body over, side to side on her bed.
Her heart was racing, willing to jump out from her ribcage.
Her eyes was closed, but she's seeing something frightening inside her  mind.

She's having that nightmare again.

In her dream she saw a village.
At first the village was quiet and peaceful.
Men, women, and children were walking around the village.

But then a handful of army marching into the village, destroy everything and kill everyone on their way.

It was her army: Matsui’s army.
Fierce.
Unstoppable.
Fearsome.
Blood thirst.


And Rena was there too, wearing armour and helmet, riding on her big horse.
She’s holding up the flag of her mighty clan.

She saw the villagers were slaughtered before her eyes.
Men, women, even children and infant could not escaped from this cruel massacre.

Blood and tears were everywhere.
Everyone’s screaming out of pain.
Their screams only lasted a second, because then the screams were stopped abruptly, as swords making their way into their flesh, taking the life out of them.
One could see the strike of pain and disbelief in their eyes, as their life being taken.


Dead bodies were lying on the street, outside and inside their huts.
Bodies lying on the ground, with their limbs torn apart, guts scattered, and blood gushing out like a fountain.
Headless, armless, legless, lifeless.

Everywhere Rena could see, it was all red.

Her vision becomes graphical and surreal.
All objects within her sight turned its colour into a heavy red, while the backgrounds were painted in black.

Nothing seemed to be real anymore.

She’s living in a world of surrealism and absurdity.

A world where everything happened like a game.
A world where people killed each other crazily, trigger happy.
A world where rulers were yearning for power, fighting against each other, not caring for the collateral damage that was left behind.

A world without peace and law.
A world without reason and humanity.


And Rena just couldn’t figure it out.
Is this the kind of world that her father planning to create?
Why her own father would want to turn her into a monster like this?

Rena fully awared of herself now.
She’s a bloodthirst monster, a killing machine.

One more kill and Rena was sure she’ll go crazy.
All of this had driven her insane.


And she had noone to talk to.
She had noone to express what she’s feeling inside.

She felt pain in her heart, everytime she kills someone in a war.
She wanted to stop.
She wanted to quit.
She wanted to change this reality.

But she can’t.
She doesn’t know how to change it.

She’s just a doll for her father.
She must do whatever her father told her.
She doesn’t even have control over herself, her mind, and her own feeling.

She must not think.
Must not feel.
Must not love.

Kill.
She only lives to kill.



And how many people had she killed with her sword until now?
A hundred?
Two hundreds?
Three hundreds?

She didn’t know.
She didn’t count it.
But she still remembered the faces of her victims.
All of them.
They’re all staring angrily at her, cursing her soul.

Like a crystal clear, Rena could see through her victims’ eyes.
And she saw pain, tears, misery, and grudge in those eyes.

No matter how much Rena wanted to forget those faces, and no matter how hard she tried to do so, those faces were stucked in her mind.


She’s only 20 years old, but tired.
Tired of living her life like in hell.

She’s been in numerous battle and bloodbath, in which she gained victory in all of them.
She had never lost her fight.
Not even a single fight.

And everytime she came back from a battle, her sword and armour were always covered with blood.
It’s her victim’s blood.


Every day, every month, every year is just the same.
Nothing ever changed.

She is Matsui Rena, the God of War.

People feared her and would do anything to avoid her in a battle.

But deep inside her heart, this God of War was hiding an unbearable pain and emotion.
Noone knows her suffering.

Time goes by.
And she becomes numb.
Void of emotion.


So she started developing a symptom of insomnia, because she had those nightmares that would keep her up almost every night.

In her dream, she saw a village being destroyed and burned, and the villagers were slaughtered.
And then, in her dream, she would enter a hut.
Inside that hut, there’s a poor little girl, standing and staring angrily at her.

Even in dream, Rena was sure that she’s wearing a helmet and that her face was unseen except only her eyes.

But this little girl’s staring at Rena as if she can see through Rena’s eyes, making the warlord feel naked all the way.

Rena could see clearly the face of this little girl.
She would never forget the look of that girl’s eyes.

“YOU MONSTER…….MURDERER……!!!”

Rena heard that girl spoke to her.

It was like a curse for Rena.
In her dream, Rena would freezed in front of that little girl.

She could not move.
She could not breathe.
She was paralyzed.

And this was the time when she would struggle to wake up from the nightmare, finding herself soaking wet in her bed.


Almost every night, Rena suffered from the same nightmare.
A nightmare that started haunting her right after she killed the father, mother, and brothers of that poor little girl.
Rena doesn’t know who that little girl was, or who’s her name.
And now that little girl was cursing her, wanting for revenge.
And it won’t stop haunting until Rena’s last breath.
Just as long as she lives, the poor little girl was always there with her, every night, staring at her, mesmerizing her, paralyzing her.

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Rena woke up soaking wet.
It’s still in the middle of the night.

Rena’s body was trembling hard and she’s breathing heavily.
She couldn’t get the picture of that girl out of her head.

She started crying, embracing herself.


Beside her, Airin woke up abruptly, and quickly hugging the master tight.

Airin: “Rena-sama, it’s okay. It’s okay. It was just a dream.”

Airin kept hugging Rena tight, until Rena’s body stopped trembling.


TO BE CONTINUED..............

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Thanks for reading.
Sorry if it's boring and lame.

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 2 (RenAiri VS JuriChuri)
« Reply #555 on: June 10, 2012, 10:27:34 AM »
uwaaahhhh... update

and it was about WMatsui's past

will jurina finally know that rena was the one who destroyed her village and killed her family?

or she already know about it?if she does,how did she react?

is that the reason why rena asked shinoda to sired jurina?

mann...this chapter leaves lots of question on my head...bravo anzai-san bravo

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 2 (RenAiri VS JuriChuri)
« Reply #556 on: June 10, 2012, 11:05:30 AM »
will jurina finally know that rena was the one who destroyed her village and killed her family?
or she already know about it?if she does,how did she react?
is that the reason why rena asked shinoda to sired jurina?

mann...this chapter leaves lots of question on my head...bravo anzai-san bravo

Thanks you for comment, bunny-san.  :deco:
I still don't know which scenario I will choose.
Each scenario will have different effect for all those many chapters that will follow behind.
So, which one I should choose? I'm confused..... XD
« Last Edit: June 10, 2012, 11:13:00 AM by anzai48 »

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 2 (RenAiri VS JuriChuri)
« Reply #557 on: June 10, 2012, 11:56:28 AM »
Wow this is really crazy chapter Anzai-san!!!

Confused..confused...confused..im really confused about Wmatsui future
Why they become lover? (But still i dont sense love from rena for jurina in present time,it is because she still felt guilty about her past?
So she doesn't dare to Love or learn how to love or how Love work?,she doesn't know why yuki not mad at her hahaha)

Its confused to,see Jurina in present,
if jurina know about rena the one who destroyed her family,i think,still i cant accept that...i cant love someone who kill my family
And if she doesn't know who kill her family until in present time,well i see this what we can see what jurina doing in present (flirting with other girl ect.  hehehe)
 But i think jurina know who kill her family,she remember Rena eyes...LOL

Amazing...hope the next chapter update soon...fast...kekeke

Thank you,Obligado,Arigato,Terima kasih hahahaha
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 2 (RenAiri VS JuriChuri)
« Reply #558 on: June 10, 2012, 12:10:13 PM »
Thanks you for comment, bunny-san.  :deco:
I still don't know which scenario I will choose.
Each scenario will have different effect for all those many chapters that will follow behind.
So, which one I should choose? I'm confused..... XD
bwaratatatatata~

too many options=brain over heat :on lol:

same with me...i haven't decide which scenario i will use for 2nd chapter on my fanfic :on lol:

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Re: HUMAN vs VAMPIRE: CHAPTER C. PARADISE - PART 2 (RenAiri VS JuriChuri)
« Reply #559 on: June 10, 2012, 12:58:46 PM »
yehey un update!!!! :ptam-glow:
 :farofflook: you never fail to amazed me to youre fic! :farofflook:
!youre so good!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv1:
i really love youre fic so much!!! :wriggly:
keep it up!!!
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