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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #20 on: February 13, 2012, 05:16:01 AM »
Is this story gonna be a paralleled one? :?
Will W Matsui and Kojiyuu ever run into each other? (cause for now it still seems unlikely :think: )
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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #21 on: February 13, 2012, 08:07:48 AM »
the plot is really interesting 
~kojiyuu~  as  stepsister....


wait for the next update^^




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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #22 on: February 26, 2012, 11:06:26 PM »
Maybe Yuko skinship would be easier, now that Kojiharu is her sister lol

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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #23 on: April 17, 2012, 01:39:24 PM »
Oh why I'm not read this before? This is so good especially first chapter (Wmatsui maybe..hehe my favorite pairing)

This is a piece of art...
Yukofan-san I will be waiting...the next chapter...arigatou..obligado...

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YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #24 on: April 17, 2012, 11:37:03 PM »
i never thought that there's still someone who read this this fic and even give comment..
i think i abandone this fic because i was focus on my other fic..LOL..
okay,i'll try to update if i have time..


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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #25 on: April 18, 2012, 04:40:13 AM »
of course we are waiting

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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #26 on: April 18, 2012, 05:16:28 AM »
I agree with Haruko-san.
We all are waiting. I'm patiently waiting for your next update, same with LOVE will find YOU. :)
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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #27 on: April 18, 2012, 06:41:44 AM »
i never thought that there's still someone who read this this fic and even give comment..
i think i abandone this fic because i was focus on my other fic..LOL..
okay,i'll try to update if i have time..



NOOOO!!!!!  :pleeease: Please continue this!!! It has my Top #1 favorite pairings!!! I need you to complete it!!! please continue~!  :pleeease:
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:kneelbow: please! please! please! continue~! Don't abandon this one! Please! I'll stop being a lurker! Promise! only in your fics. I can't say the same thing for other fics.
Had a withdrawal, so now I'm planning to fall in love with the couples all over again

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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #28 on: April 19, 2012, 06:35:59 PM »
Please update soon! Loving it already  :heart:

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Re: I Wanna be with You (chap 2 : First Meeting)
« Reply #29 on: May 04, 2012, 01:14:43 PM »
Minna-chan, thanks for the support..it's time to start writing again~ before update my fanfic, i suddenly have an inspiration.so i decided to post this prologue of my new fic.

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MVP of My Heart

PROLOGUE

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Akihabara High School Baseball Club

Main line-up:
Akimoto Sayaka
Miyazawa Sae
Oshima Yuko
Shinoda Mariko
Sashihara Rino

Manager : Kashiwagi Yuki
Vice-manager : Watanabe Mayu


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Nagoya High School Basketball Club


Main line-up:
Matsui Jurina
Matsui Rena
Yagami Kumi
Nakanishi Yuka
Takayanagi Akane


Manager : Furukawa Airi

The annual national high school basketball competition will begin soon. Will the last year’s champion in female category, Akihabara High School, keep their top position? Or there will be another team that will defeat Akihabara Baseball Club..





--FLASHBACK--

“JURINAAAA!” a girl shouted to her friend who was playing on the school basketball court.

The girl named jurina looked the source of the voice. When she saw the girl, she quickly run to her.

“Mayuyu…What are you doing here?” Asked Matsui Jurina

“Here..For Jurina” Watanabe Mayu give a bottle of cold water to Jurina

“Ahh, thanks” Jurina received the bottle

“You practice too hard. Jurina need to take a break now. Let’s sit on that bench” Mayu pointed at the bench on the edge of basketball  court

Then both of them sit on the bench

“Nee Jurina, did you watched the basketball game yesterday on TV?”

“Of course. It was the final of national high school basketball competition. The game was so intense. It was a great game, right?”

Mayu nodded enthusiastically  “Right..Right..The captain from the winner team was playing so awesome. No wonder she became the MVP of the match”

“Mayu, I’ll tell you one thing”

“What?”

“I can play much more awesome than that MVP.” Jurina said proudly

Mayu chuckled “Haha..Really? can you proof it?”

“Nee Mayu..When I become a senior high school student, I will join that competition. I will work very hard to win that competition. I will make Mayu proud of me..”

“Jurina..”

“Now, I’m a 1st year junior high school, so I still have 3 years until I can join and win competition. Until that day come, Mayu will always support Jurina right?”

Mayu nodded “Un..I will always support Jurina”

“Then, that’s a promise..Our promise”

“Yeah, our promise”

--END OF FLASHBACK--





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Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
« Reply #30 on: May 04, 2012, 01:33:59 PM »
Yukofan-ssi: Just read the two chapters of I wanna be with you and.. it's so.. incomplete. :p so please update it if you can. :D
Rena is so cute!!! OMG! too cute! *squealing* and haruna's mom is.. i wonder what will she do to Yuko.. TT.TT

and the prologue is interseting!
after seeing the line up and the flashback..
JURIMAYU!!


but.. they're seperated! OMG!!#!@$

what will happened??
Will they become together again? Or it'll be MaYuki and Wmatsui?
I wonder if there's some drama in this fic. hohoho

and where is Acchan, Takamina, and Haruna? :p
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Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
« Reply #31 on: May 04, 2012, 02:14:31 PM »
I like this scenario! Can't wait for the first chapter!

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Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
« Reply #32 on: May 04, 2012, 03:43:34 PM »
I love you.
No seriously, I love you.
I think this is the second or third time I made a love confession to another author! Lol, forgive me. :lol: Does it make you feel awkward? I hope not. :lol:

Okay, that aside, what can I say? I love JuriMayu you know. :heart:
I hope it turns that way until the end, but mah, WMatsui can happen anytime or ChuriJuri, I don't mind, which pair but I'm quite fond of JuriMayu, especially when I read some in your LOVE will find YOU. :cathappy:

I'm going to follow this like how I do with that fic!
Don't worry, no pressure here, just update when you can dude! >:3
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Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
« Reply #33 on: May 05, 2012, 06:36:56 AM »
@bochang : of course I Wanna be with You is incomplete,it just the 2nd chap.the main story hasn't started yet. yah,mayujuri was seperated..let's see what will happen to them..where's takamina,acchan,haruna?LOL..they have appeared on many akb fic here,so let them take a rest.but maybe i'll make them appear if i need more character..


@kahem : thankyou..i hope i can post the 1st chap soon..

@sieka : u love me? LOL well,i don't know what to say.but thankyoouuu :heart i love jurimayu too..will they be together in the end? i don't know.i haven't decided yet..LOL


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Re: My Story Folder (prologue : MVP of My Heart)
« Reply #34 on: May 13, 2012, 03:19:05 AM »
Synchro   Tokimeki 
 chap #1

--On Akihabara High School--

There were 2 girls who were watching the basketball team practice.

“’Mayuyu, I know you’re nervous. But, please don’t looked so obvious. Look, your hand is shaking. I even haven’t introduce you to our team. Hahaha..” Kashiwagi Yuki laughed at her friend.

Watanabe Mayu hit Yuki’s shoulder “Hey, Yukirin. Stop make fun of me. If it wasn’t you who kept begging at me every single day, I wouldn’t agre to be your vice-manager ”

“Yeah, I even came into your nightmare just to begging at you”

“Why me, Yukirin?” Mayu asked with pout on her face

Yuki held Mayu’s hand and looked into her eyes “Because you’re my daughter, Mayuyu. A child should help her mother, right?” Yuki gave mayu puppy eyes.

Mayu released her hand from Yuki’s grip “Sometimes I feel uneasy with this mother-daughter relationship..”

“C’mon, Mayu. You’re the person I trust the most in this school. Besides, you love basketball, don’t you? I kow you love it so much. Then why at first you didn’t want to be part of our school team?”

Mayu silent for a moment.

“It’s okay if you don’t want to answer. Because starting from today, you become part of this team” Yuki smiled and tapped Mayu’s shoulder

“Hey, Girls! Please stop the practice! I have importants announcements!” Yuki shputed to the team members

After hearing their manager’s yell, all the member gathered and sit around  Yuki and Mayu.

“What announcement, Yuki?” Asked Miyazawa Sae, the captain.

“You’ll know after this..”

“Ahh kawaii~ you are so cute..” said Oshima Yuko

“Really? Arigatou, Yuko..” Yuki said happily

“NOT YOU! But the girl next to you” Yuko pointed her index finger toward Mayu.

Yuki’s face expression became sour “Hey, I’m also cute, you know?”

“What’s your name?” Yuko asked Mayu, ignoring her manager

“Let me introduce this girl to you, girls..” Yuki said

“Hey, manager..I asked her, not you..”

“Shut up, Squirrel!! You’re so annoying sometimes..Listen, Girls..This is Watanabe Mayu. The new vice manager”

“I’m Watanabe Mayu. Starting from today I become your vice manager. I’ll do my best for this team. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“So this was the first announcement, the second one is I’ve made the practice schedule. I hope you all can be discipline in the practice”

Mayu gave the schedule practice paper to every member. When she gave the schedule to Yuko, Yuko said to Mayu “I’m Oshima Yuko. I’m still single. Do you have lover now, Mayu-chan?”

“Yuko, it’s not the right place to flirt a girl..” the manager said which followed by other team member’s laughter.

“Yuki, you’re so mean..” Yuko said poutingly . Mayu just smiled seeing Yuko’s act..

“Okay, all of you have received the schedule..Now, let’s move to the last announcement..Starting from today, this team has new captain. Akimoto Sayaka, you are the new captain of this team”

Miyazawa Sae shocked. She stood up and said “what is this? I’m the captain! Why you give my position to other member?!”

“I’m sorry, Sae. I’ve talked to the coach and he agreed this decision. It’s for this team’s sake. Lately, you seemed to not focused on this team. It’s a hard decision.. ”

“It’s not fair, Yuki!!”

“I’m so sorry, Sae. But…”

“I don’t want to hear your excuse!!” Sae immediately leave the basketball court




--in Nagoya basketball club room--

“Listen everyone..I want to introduce our team’s new member” Furukawa Airi, the manager, spoke.

“EEHHH??!!!” everyone were surprised. How could there were a new member of the team while they hadn’t hold the open recruitment for new member.

“I know, all of you must be surprised. But, trust me. She is a very good player. I know her since junior high school. Fortunately, this year she enter our beloved school.”

“Are you sure she’s a good player or you just make her join into our team because she’s you friend?” said Yagami Kumi

“Ne Kuumin..If Airin said she’s a good player, then she must be a good player” said Matsui Rena

“Rena  is always defend Airin~  ”  Takayanagi Akane teased which made Rena and Airin blushed

 “He-Hey stop it, Churi. Back to the topic. Are you ready to meet your new teammate??!!” Airin shouted…

“…………..”

There were silent….

“Hey! Why you guys are not excited at all?!”

“Just show us her face..” Nakanishi Yuka said unenthusiastically 

“Geez, you guys..” Airin then clap her hand and shouted “Jurina, come in!”

Then someone open the meeting room’s door. She slowly walked toward Airin and stood next to Airin. Airin encircled her arm around the girl’s shoulders.

“This is our new member.”

“I’m Matsui Jurina Jurina. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu” Jurina bowed

“Woah, we have the same family name” Rena said in surprise

All the member were looking at Jurina from head to toe.

“Do you really can play basketball?” Churi, the captain, asked

“I love basketball since I was a kid. I joined basketball club in junior high school. My dream is to participate in national competition. If you ask whether I can play basketball well or not, I should say maybe I’m not the best player but I always play my best in every match.” Jurina answer ed with full of confident. Churi nodded her head. She seemed satisfied with Jurina’s answer

“More question to our new member?” Airin said to her team

“Something that you like?”

Jurina tilted her head “Mmmm..basketball is something that I like the most. I also like ramen, comics, and music”

“Something that you don’t like?”

Jurina’s face expression suddenly changed “People who can’t keep their promise is something that I hate the most.”

After hearing Jurina’s answer, Churi walk toward jurina “Welcome to the team, Jurina. I’m Takayanagi Akani, the captain. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”

“well, I think it’s enough for the introduction of our new member.  To celebrate our new member, LET”S GO TO KARAOKE!!!” Airin yelled

“YEAAHHHHH!!!!!” all the team member were happy with their manager idea.Well., except Jurina..

“Airin, doesn’t we need to practice basketball? The competition is almost come?”

“C’mon, Jurina..Before the competition come, we need to entertain ourselves, right? ”

“YEAAAHHH!!!!” all the members yell

“Let’s go! I want to sing SKE48’s new song!!” Airin said

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i've decided the pirings : JuriMayuYuko,RenAiri,Saeyuki..
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ooooh Rena in a basketball team????????  :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

she can't even do situps properly  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

this is gonna be interesting!!!

and Airin as the manager???  :wub: :wub: :wub:

i love it already!!!!

i want to see more RenAirin moments  :inlove: :inlove:

sorry i know they are not the main characters but i'm just shipping them THAT hard XDDDDD

cant wait for the next update!

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Uwah! It's GOOD!

so it's Oshiri Sister and Jurina? LOL It's kinda new to me so i'm ecxcited!

I have a bad feeling about JuriMayu since Jurina said she despise people who can't keep her promise..
and YUKO! LOL
No matter what fanfic.. she's always the pervy squirrel! LOL

and Sae.. hmm idk..
SaeYuki, is there something wrong between them?

I want to read the next chapter~!! UWAHAHAHA and i comment second.. TT.TT
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Both 'MVP of My Heart' and 'Synchro Tokimeki' are good names imo, yet I prefer the latter. Good choice by the way!

Really, Mayu should be aware of Yuko later. Flirtatious and perhaps... touchy? Dangerous~!! XD
Sae's captaincy is passed to Sayaka? I sense some rivalry is going to happen later. Would love to see the dynamic between the rivals.

Meanwhile in the Nagoya team... just (probably) less than ten minutes of Jurina's introduction, and then already going to the karaoke to celebrate? Hayai! XD
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« Reply #38 on: May 13, 2012, 05:20:20 AM »
@gekirena : it's the first time i write renairi..i'm new with this pairing but i found out that they are so cute together..plus the fact that in real life renairi love are mutual..LOL..there will be more renairi moments in the next chapters..

@bochang : i feel bad for mayujuri too..yup,oshiri sisters <3 i wanted to write about them..i never expected i would write yukomayu in this fic..this idea came up suddenly.. 

@aruka : i played song Synchro Tokimeki over and over when i typed the 1st chapter..i like this song so much that i changed this fic's titile..i was so random..LOL..is yuko that dangerous?hoho..we'll that's not too hayai for airin..LOL


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Just want to say I'm really liking the YukoMayu idea (in fact, I've imagined it before). It's fresh and opens up new possibilities. Yuko is a flirt but can be a good and loving girlfriend too :wub:

I'm guessing the chances of JuriMayu happening are much higher in this story but I'm more interested to see how the YukoMayu side of the love triangle pans out. Not that I dislike JuriMayu but YukoMayu just seems so much more exciting! XD

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