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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 12 Enjoy!!
« Reply #60 on: March 07, 2012, 06:16:50 PM »
(So this is Sakura_Drops_ chapter that she asked for hope you all like it)

chapter 13

(Riku's pov)

I cant believe it im stuck in a police cell just becasue i left my gurad down i swear this girl is going to pay.About 5 minutes later Kai came in with handcuffs around his waist followed by a very sad faced girl behind him who whispred something in his ears unfortentely i couldnt make it out."So you got caught to?"Kai asked stating the obvious however something didnt seem right in his tone of voice or the way he acted.

I knew he had a plan no dout so we decied to wait for Kuu to come since it wouldnt take long and the fact we stole one of there radios helped get info fast good thing they where eating there donuts.Kuu came screaming in and was took in the intergation room he was back no later then 3 minutes after he had entred.The guards left the three of us."Have a plan?"I questioned Kai nodded and shown the number 3 with his hands we got up from our seats then walked around one after one we disabled the camears kicked open the top vent and climed through.

Eldest to youngest as Kai sealed the end shut so the guards coudnt follow us.Turning right from left i seen a little vent we could squeeze through and get out.Hitting it open i jumped through suprised to see a little squirral infront of me so i motined for the other 2 to keep going to find another way.I was really getting frustrated this girl was being a pain in the arse."Move Squirral!"I ordered as i pushed her to the side and then she suddenly reappred infront of me she really knew how to push a guy.I then noticed a sight blush on her face knowing what this ment i used it to my advantage i had to get out of here and i didnt care who i hurt.

I pulled her to my chest i felt her body heat up and her heart speed up i forced her head into my neck and could feel her breath against my neck.Oh no there it is the feeling i am not inlove hell no that is not aloud i am not falling in love that is not aloud no butterflys god damit i order myself stop!

She tilted her head up to see my face she didnt fight back she didnt push me off her she just stared at me are faces got closer until are lips met once more.I could feel electricty this isnt aloud i thought i cant fall inlove with the enemy but my body would not order my brain.My brain was telling my body one thing while my heart told another and my body obeying the heart.Tears dropped down her face i was sure because i could feel something wet against my cheeks.We both wanted this but we coudnt have it.

I shoved her off me and eyes met you could literally see sparks flying from are eye contact.I opened the door and walked through it she didnt stop me she coudnt not if she felt like i did there was no way she could just like the time i had the chance when she broke into my house to hurt her i coudnt not when i felt like this.Running out of the room i ran past the guards and jumped over obsatceles that where in my way and soon enough i was out of the police station as the news came on at one of the tv shops.

ON THE TV

"It has recently been said who the three angel brothers where and everyone was shocked with the outcome."

Pictures came up on the screen.

"Eldest of the three The famouse number one chef Riku the middel child idol Kuu and there little brother star of his highschool football team and captain Kai this news shocked the world and there fans no one knows why they did it and it has just been recently reported that the three boys have escaped police custaredy."

(back to Riku's pov)

It was over my caree was over but more imporatantely my brother lifes runined in a instant.

End of chapter

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #61 on: March 07, 2012, 06:29:01 PM »
AH!!!! THe KojiYuu moment!!!!!!!!!  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

THANK YOU, XxRoByNxX78-san!!!!!!!!!  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

But that aside, poor three brothers...  :panic: :panic:
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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #62 on: March 07, 2012, 06:37:09 PM »
O.O I disappear for a bit from jphips and I come back this is already at chapter 13 *jaw drops*  :panic:

OMG I can't keep up with everyone's update... feel so guilty for not commenting too....

Roby I read your other stuff too!  :thumbsup but I just don't have time to comment on all of them sooooo
being  :twisted: and just leave one  :P

THanks for the updates! Keep it up  :thumbsup

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #63 on: March 07, 2012, 07:48:12 PM »
Oh oh it's really bad for the guys but Kojiyuu wow!
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« Reply #64 on: March 07, 2012, 10:02:16 PM »
Wow great chapter guess they had their moment keep it up    :twothumbs

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #65 on: March 08, 2012, 04:34:56 AM »
Great chapter! I love the Kojiyuu part, awww they're both in love but they know it's a forbidden love and it's hard to stop how you really feel for a person.

Too bad for the three brothers, their careers are now ruined because of the three detective girls. Tsk.

Waiting for more!

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #66 on: March 08, 2012, 06:21:53 AM »
aww kojipa make happy your  wifey..

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #67 on: March 08, 2012, 01:06:37 PM »
kojiyuu moment is  :heart:

update soon  :bow:


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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #68 on: March 09, 2012, 12:41:50 AM »
i love Rikuyuu moment so sweet and.....sad......

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #69 on: March 09, 2012, 04:54:00 AM »
i love it  :wub: thanx  :cow: update soon please   :bow:

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 13 Enjoy!! 7/3/12
« Reply #70 on: March 09, 2012, 05:38:26 PM »
chapter 14

(Kai's pov)

I met Atsuko at the said time and we went round the shops which really suprised me as i had no idea that the shops where open at 5 in the morning.About an hour later we grabbed something to eat or thats what i thought anyway she kissed me then handcuffed me to her my eyes widedened in realisation.She got a text and sighed when she read it i could tell we werent going to the police yet.We got to school and everyone stared at us making me angryer and angryer a Sensei stopped us asking about the handcuffs."Oh yer right you know my sister Yuko right Sensei?"The Sensei nodded at Atsuko while i scoffed trying to snap the handcuffs in half."Well yer she kind of did this and now we dont know what class we should go to."She answered knowing that my plan in snapping the goddanm handcuffs wasnt working i just yanked Atsuko to my class ignoring the Sensei shouting us to come back.

I turned the corner and shouted Tomochin he immediently came out the class and burst out laughing making me want to kick his teeth in.But i coudnt with this old lady on me i love her and she done this great to know i can trust her."Dont just stand there help!"Tomochin just looked at me with a big grin then he said "Beg!"

"What no way!"

"Fine i wont help then."

"Tomochin!"

Great he walked away just great i cant trust my 'girlfriend' and now i cant trust him just great!

(Atsuko's pov)

I watched Kai get into a huff when Tomochin walked off because he woudnt beg for help i just chuckled and was happy as if he actually got of these handcuffs i would be in huge troubale and i dont like being in troubale with my sisters they are the worst when they are angry.In all honesty i didnt want to do this i love Kai he however probaly hates me now.I mean i coudnt betray my sisters that is to much to ask but betraying him is a kneif through my heart.

(No ones pov)

The day ended slowly because it dragged on every hour the entire day the pair was arguing or Kai was ignoring Atsuko which just made her more upset.Knowing that he would have to go to the poilce station he quickly drew a plan into his head as he tried to think of where all the cameras vents and all the other things where.

They arrived at the station and Kai coudnt believe it when he seen his brother Riku sitting down looking hopeless.His second brother then came in Kai then explained his plan to the pair by showing a number 3 with his hands his two brothers knew what it ment and took all the security cameras out got inside a vent and Kai sealed it just as he got in.

(Kai's pov)

I could hear the gurads shouting are names and screaming saying theve escaped pretty pitafull guards if you ask me.Riku stopped us and jumped down out of the vent and motioned for us to carry on when he noticed the girl infront of him.We found another one this time Kuu jumped down it and done the same as Riku these girls are a pain.I seen a exit and crawled to it jumping down and twisting my ancle i held it in pain but looked up to see her infront of me."What do you want now?"I asked earing a scowl to be honest i dont care what she thinks at this point in time because she has really scrathed me the wrong way."Im here to stop you."She replied looking so smug my ancle throbbed in pain so i pushed her to the ground then ran as quick as my injured ancle would carry me only to be confronted with police i knocked one or two out and dislocated some of the others arms and ran.
I made it outside running into people as the police gave chase.I saw a bike just laying on the ground so i lifted it up and jumped on peddling faster and faster lets see them donut eaters catch me now.A car swearved infront of me the breaks on the bike didnt work then.......

end of chapter

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #71 on: March 09, 2012, 06:40:30 PM »
Kai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #72 on: March 09, 2012, 07:23:41 PM »
Lol Tomochin didn't help his buddy

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« Reply #73 on: March 09, 2012, 09:36:43 PM »
Kai!!!!

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« Reply #74 on: March 09, 2012, 09:39:18 PM »
Lol well Done cookie love the handcuffs  :P

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #75 on: March 10, 2012, 03:16:03 AM »
What will happened to Kai? I want to know. Update soon

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #76 on: March 10, 2012, 08:11:40 AM »
nooo kai  :panic: i love reading this fic  :luvluv2: please update soon  :on gay: thankyou x

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #77 on: March 13, 2012, 04:27:50 PM »
Thanks for the Update :kneelbow:

BUT...........!!!

NO!!!! Kai!!!!!!!!!! :cry:
OMG! I hope nothing will happen to him which I don't think so...

Please Update Soon! :thumbup :thumbup

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Re: bueaty and the theif chapter 14 Enjoy!! 9/3/12
« Reply #78 on: March 13, 2012, 06:30:12 PM »
chapter 15

I felt pain shoot through my body and i could hear people screaming i looked up to the sky to see 2 people looking down on me but i gave into the pain that was calling me the pain that was telling me to give in and enter the world of darkness.
I woke up to a blinding light which made me quickly close my eyes once more.Opening them once more i seen people running around with medichen and other things.But there is one thing that was bothering me.You see i dont remeber who i am.Can someone tell me instead of running past me why am i the hospital?What did i do?Suddenly a girl walked towards me who is she?Do i know her?

She said something to me and then i was inside one of there wards tucked tightly in one of the beds with wrist straps tying me to the bed.I turned my head and seen a drip going into my arm still alot of questions where running in my head.The door opened a nurse and the same girl from before entred the room i coudnt stop looking at the girl she had shoulder length brown hair amazing big brown ords for eyes and a charming smile that could make my heart melt then i thought popped into my mind i should ask her.

"Erm who are you and who am i?"

"Ha nice one Kai."

"Kai is that my name?"

The nurse could see that i was serious and took the girl outside to explain something to her when she came back in her face was red with tear stains which confused me.She sat down in the seat next to my bed taking my hand in hers.

Is she my sister?

"Im Atsuko your girlfriend and your name is Kai you are the goaly captain and star of your highschool football team you are also a detective who is helping me and my sisters catch the two angel brothers."

I could sense that she was lieing but i had know idea what about.But i decied to trust her anyway after all she was the only person here and she seemed to know whoever i am well.She stroked my hand gentally grinning like a child."Why am i tied down?"Her head shot up with my question an then quickly untied them looking at the clock i seen it was 11pm the day had gone very quick.Atsuko looked at the clock aswell and i seen a frown appare on her face.As she was about to get up i pulled her down.I lifted he cover up and patted on the bed she gave me a what-if-i-have-to-go sort of look but i shrugged giving in i gave her my victouris smirk she climed into the bed putting her arm around my waist then nuzzeling her head in my shoulder closing her eyes to quickly start sleeping.

This girl seemed very genuine very caring and defenitly loved me that i could just by looking at her eyes and i could tell i loved her i felt close to her i mean not just because she is cuddeled into me but emotienly close so i knew she wasnt lieing about being my girlfriend that was for sure.A nurse walked into the room and opened her mouth to say something when i spoke."Please let her stay."I begged she nodded and walked out telling the other nures not to bother with me i sighed greatfully closing my eyes to fall asleep whispering "Goodnight Atsuko."

end of chapter

so what did you all think ehehehe u all hate me now right coz i made him loose his memories.

hahaha thanks for reading please comment!

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Oh and Mayu and Kuu's chapter will be up next lol

An Adam me an Jamie arnt inlove at all we aint toghter and never will be !!
 

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« Reply #79 on: March 13, 2012, 06:42:26 PM »
Lol good chapter and losing memory  :( . U never know there's Still time for u two ;)

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