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Offline XxRoByNxX78

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Love and Glory
By XxRoByNxX78
Atsumina kojiyuu tomotomo and others

chapter 1

"Hahahahahaha ne okotte iru?" Gekikara began laughing agian her best friend was in pain at home and could bearly move her leg without screaming in pain this was her revange "No one is aloud to hurt her!" She screamed kicking the groaning body once more making blood spary out of the girls mouth. Gekikara then turned around and walked out of the ally to get ready for school and help Takamina get ready.

when she got home she woke up Takamina forgeting she had blood on her hands then quickly washed it off her small friends face.Then washed her hands then helped Takamina get changed.Takamina smiled at her frined she knew that Gekikara had done something to the person that done this to her leg but as long as she was okay she didnt care they would protect eachother to the death.When Gekikara seen Takamina smile she felt like everything was going to be okay Takamina always had this affect on her Gekikara called this the big sister affect.Neither of them knew what it was like to have a proper family but with eachother they knew it had to be something like what they have.Takamina limped to the door and put on her shoes and Gekikara came out with there bags and passed Takamina hers they then left for school.

When they got to school word of what Gekikara had done had passed through the school but no one dared to talk to her as they where to scared remebering that they had practice the entire day so Gekikara told Takamina to climb on her back as she knew that she woudnt be able to run and sprinted off with Takamina clinging on to her."Yah your late!"The coach screamed at Takamina and Gekikara as they emerged from the changing rooms to see the rest of the team practicing Gekikara done her signutre laugh which made the coach shiver and Takamina just walked past them and sat on the bench.

Atsuko seen Takamina sit on the bench and passed the ball to Yuko and walked over to her.Letting everyone else carry on with practice."What happaned to you and Gekikara useally your the first ones here."Atsuko said hoping that what she heard that happaned to Takamina isnt true.Takamina patted the bit of the bench next to her for Atsuko to sit down."Last nigth when i was coming home from gettin the milk i was pushed down some stairs and landed on my leg wrong i texted Gekikara and she came as fast as she could she took me home and helped me get ready to sleep and made food next thing i knew she was gone and came back with blood on her hands i figure she found whoever that was and they are now in hospital."Takamina explained Atsukos face fell when she heard that Takamina was hurt she was also angry that she coudnt be there for her."Takamina ive told you that i love everday and everyday you reject me but when i hear that you have been hurt i just get so angry please let me look after you."Pleaded Atsuko.

But she got the uasal response which was i shake of the head and i am sorry every time Atsuko heard these words her heart broke into a million pices but she was determined to make Takamina hers.
"Gekikara ive told you next time you get into a figth you wont be on the squad anymore."
"They hurt her!"Screamed Gekikara who was quickly loseing her temper what would the coach do if that happaned to Yuko she would have done the same thing but no because this was Gekikara the trouable maker of the school the one who always figths the one who always puts people into hospital.The coach could see the fury in Gekikaras eyes and sent her to the pitch to fire the ball into the net so she woudnt get hurt.

Gekikara kicked the balls harder and harder every time sometimes kicking the ground leaving holes in it and making grass fly every where.Then suddenly a shadow appared before her.Gekikara looked up and laughed and went back to kicking the gorund instead of the ball when a hand touch her cheek making her flinch with pain with the conatact.Then she hit the hand away.
"That hurts!"Gekikara complained now staring the black haired girl in the face.The girl just stood there looking at Gekikara untill she fianlly spoke."Your really stupid you know you cant play if you get into figths!"The girl said pinching Gekikaras cheek hurting her agian."Shut up."Gekikara was frowing she did wrong but they hurt Takamina and she wasnt going to let them get away with it since Takamina was the one that she relied on since she was the one that always helped her and never looked at her as a monster she was the only one that gave her a chance."Black they hurt her and i am never going to let them get away with it."

end of chapter

okay so i wanted to write a football action one because of inzuma11 so there are going to hittsue techinques and tactics like on the show lol also there are more characters and pairings and i plan on puttin the charater pro up for you for all the characters as i dont know loads about football adam is helping me so thanks for reading and i hope you enjoyed it please comment also yankee love will be taking a very long break as i have got no ideas for it and have sort of loss intrest in writing it so its on a hitus sorry for those reading it once agian thankyou for reading!
« Last Edit: April 23, 2012, 10:54:20 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: love and glory (atsumina kojiyu tomotomo and others) part 1
« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 11:57:09 PM »
 :heart: it robyn and u got my help  :)

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Re: love and glory (atsumina kojiyu tomotomo and others) part 1
« Reply #2 on: February 22, 2012, 03:31:49 PM »
okay so i wanted to write a football action one because of inzuma11 so there are going to hittsue techinques and tactics like on the show lol also there are more characters and pairings and i plan on puttin the charater pro up for you for all the characters as i dont know loads about football adam is helping me so thanks for reading and i hope you enjoyed it please comment also yankee love will be taking a very long break as i have got no ideas for it and have sort of loss intrest in writing it so its on a hitus sorry for those reading it once agian thankyou for reading!
:fainted: What no more "yankee love"? and that story was so interesting...
BUT this story is very interesting too so I'm looking forward to read more (and that you update)
and also thank you farquhar97

Looking forward to the next chapter..
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Offline kahem

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Re: love and glory (atsumina kojiyu tomotomo and others) part 1
« Reply #3 on: February 26, 2012, 08:24:21 AM »
Oh football? Interesting~
There is Tomotomo? YAY!!!! Thank you!!!!!

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Re: love and glory (atsumina kojiyu tomotomo and others) part 1
« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 10:53:40 PM »
Chapter 2

Training was getting worse each week as the day to there first match of the Ozone cup came near Adam had set up special training faciletes for each member so they could practice pesifacally on what they where best at or what they need work on.
Tomochin was working on a new skill that she had only just mastered she was there star attacker after all.
Nezumi was working on a new hittasu tacatic that she was sure would break through the other teams defences with out any one needing to break a sweat.

As for the others they had to work on everything else and Takamina had to focus on working through her injury.
The day of the match had finally came there first oppenent was Morning Musume of H!P highschool.All of them entred the stadium to be welcomed be cheering fans screaming there names each one hoping for there team to win.Nezumi and Centre shook hands with the over teams captain and vice captain then flipped a coin to see who would start.

"Tails." Nezumi answred to the ref who took a look at his hand and pointed to Nezumi it was there kick off.
Nezumi passed the ball to Tomochin and the whistle was blown.Tomochin chipped the ball backwords to Gekikara so that her and Yuko could get a chance to move up to attack.Gekikara bounced the ball off her chest when the enemy teams attacker came rushing towards her snatching the ball away with a swift tackle.Gekikara spun round and sped after her.Black stood still watching as the oppisate teams attacker made it through everyone trying to spot her weakness when she seen it.

(She stops after she has dodged someone but only slightly i have to get my timing right Black thought)

The attacker came charging towards Black with the Ball at her feet then it was gone and Black was running up the pitch and passed it to Sae who quickly dodged the on coming tackle her way by flicking the ball into the air and passing it to Sayaka.Sayaka bounced the ball up on her chest into the air once more "Greeks Pass!" She shouted light flashed off Sayaka's foot and a huge sword hit the ball sending it flying over towards Yuko's direction.

Yuko let the ball fly past her for a second then "Mysestic Phenoxi!" A amazing red Phenoxi appared behind Yuko she kicked the ball sending it hurtling towards the oppesistions goal the Phenoxi flew along side it giving it more power the goaly didnt even have a chance to save it cause all you heard was "Goal its 1-0 to Akb48!" The arean was filled with screams of Yuko's name and her team ran and jumped on her congratulting her.

The match had been going for 20 minutes now and the score was the same the oppesisation had tightened there defence not letting the ball go near the two attackers Nezumi and Centre where running out of ideas when Nezumi said "Lets try that!" Centre nodded her head and siganalled the entire team to defence suprising everyone.Tomochin stood besides Miichan who was going to be the star in this tactic.The attacking team came towards all of them with huge amount of power they shot a chance at goal when a gigantic wall blocked it the  ball dropped to the floor infront of Miichan and Nezumi shouted attack!

The ball was kept at Miichan's feet at all times when the now defending team tried to take the ball they would be met somone completely diffrent than Miichan they kept switching postions so the ball would neve be able to be taken now they where finally in the over half of the pitch now Miichan passed the ball to Takamina who then passed to Centre then all of them fell in line with one another.

The ball went from Centre to everyone else second after second the passes where to quick to be seen by the untrained eye.The ball gained more and more power each time it was passed back and forth.Centre then stopped as did everyone else she kicked the ball high in the sky Tomochin jumped up as did Miichan who used Tomochin to help her get futher into the air then "Devils Rage!" Her eyes turned red her hair white the air turned black and the ball was bright white her foot met the ball and it flew to the goal red beams of light following closely behind "Goal! 2-0 to Akb48!" Miichan fell down to the floor landing on her feet her eyes and hair there normal colour once more.They all high fived and the whistle blown signalling for half time.

Kuu Adam and Mai praised all of them on there so far early victory they all took sips from there water bottles and headed back to the pitch for kickoff.The match resumed once more but it seemed there oppisate team had changed there tactics now they avoided passing to anyone who was near Black and Nezumi.None of them could understand why then before they could do anything the ball had been fired towards the goal with amazing speed and power flames swirled around the ball.Mariko "Air Ocarina!" She postined her hands like she was playing a ocarina and music started to flow around the pitch when the ball reached the goal she blown hard making the ball fly the to the over end of the pitch.

Tomochin ran qucikly following the ball catching up to it dribbling past all in her way until it was her and the goal keeper one on one Tomochin smiled showing her fang then screamed "Vampire's cry!" As she kicked the ball a screech was heard in the arean a black aura sorrounded Tomochin she closed her eyes then opened them revealing a figure of somone unknown to others but her.But the ball lost its power and Tomochin fell to the ground in pain.The ball rolled infront of the goal keeper who picked it up then shouted for a nurse or whatever it was.Adam ran on to the pitch checking Tomochin for anything bad which luckily he didnt find there was only one conclusion that was in his mind when he asked for somone else to take her place.

"The shot was to powerful for her to control her body is to weak."

Tomomi took her girlfriends hand in hers and stroked her head moving stray hairs away when Kuu and Mai told her to subsitute in for Tomochin.She nodded and kissed her girlfriends forhead leaving her in the capable hands of Adam.Tomomi stood where her girlfriend usally stood and the game resumed.

The other team was now on full attack getting stronger each time they did.Looking up at the leader board Gekikara seen they had only minutes left she charged towards the person who had the ball taking it with out even trying Nezumi moved foward along with Tomomi they knew what she was planning the three set out in a trinagler motion then into a staright line once they reached the oppersitions net Gekikara shot shouting "Triple !" Then Tomomi and Nezumi kicked it after her Shouting "Threat!" A pink rabbit a purple rat and a orange bird travled with ball to hear the familuar words "Goal! and the whistle has just been blown the winners are Sakura Highschool's Akb48!"

The team cheered they where on the way to winning the Ozone cup.

End of chapter

yer aint been updated in a while i know

i know there are spelling mistakes so please ignore them im trying to get better at it

thanks for reading please comment

i know that it aint that good sorry bout that

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Lol love they way I give them all training and it sounds like Mario charge football wiv all their moves :)and I'm really gutted  </3  :cry:
« Last Edit: April 24, 2012, 11:07:47 PM by farquhar97 »

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Hahahah! Football in manga always makes me laugh ^^

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