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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #40 on: May 15, 2012, 03:44:19 PM »
Excited for the next chapter~ (>w<)

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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #41 on: May 24, 2012, 07:42:30 AM »
i love this fic...!!
Pls update soon!
I cant wait!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup

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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #42 on: May 28, 2012, 02:39:13 PM »
It been a long time since I update....So Sorry for the Late Update ...This is the Chapter

Chapter 7 :A Short Vacation
At Evening 5 PM

Everyone Already Packed Up and Ready to go home as They all Sleep over at the School having Breakfast and Lunch by Barbeque some Meat and Vegetables...They Start their Motorcycles and Car and Move to the Mansion ....

At the Mansion ...They Parked their Vehicles Neatly in the Garage...As They Drag their Stuff to the Living room and Rest ....Yuki , Rena and Tomochin and Tomomi Sat on the “L” Couch...As Jurina , Mayu , Anna and Kumi standing behind the Couch as they looked at Takamina and Acchan who was Standing in Front of the Flat screen Television ....Takamina Suggested to go the Akiba Private Beach Next as She Explained in a Long way as the 3 Youngest make a Confused face....
‘So Takamina say is....What’ Jurina say as she look at Acchan who was the one that understand what Takamina is saying
‘Yeah...We Don’t Understand a bit ..’ Kumi say as Anna Nodded
‘Youngster ...Acchan can you Please Explain to Them’ Mariko say as she sat on the Left Couch Beside the Stairs
‘Well What your Problem Mariko-sama’  Jurina say as she Look at Mariko
‘Well....Nothing ...Maybe you guys need to learn more about Something then Gaming’ Mariko say with a sigh
‘Guys...Don’t Fight Acchan want to Explain ‘ Tomochin say as she Continued making her Nails
‘Well....Takamina was say is We will be going to our Private Beach ...So Get Ready ‘Acchan say as Jurina and Anna High Five ..
‘Wait ...What..Get Ready ..’ Kumi say as she make a Confused Face again
‘Yeah Get Ready....’ Tomomi say as she look at Kumi
‘Oh...Get Ready ‘ Kumi say with Shock tone
‘You Such a Slow head Kumi ‘ Rena say as she look at Kumi
‘She Learn it for You Yuki’ Rena glared at Yuki
‘Heck...No She Learn From you Ren-a’ Yuki say as she glared at Rena
‘What...She learn from you ...Mom Side’ Rena cross her Arm
‘No ...It Dad Side ‘ Yuki cross her Arm as Head Butt Rena Head Slowly
‘Mom’ Rena say as their forehead met
‘Dad’ Yuki say as she Pushed Rena by Forehead
‘No...MOM’ Rena Pushed back
‘Dad ..you Little----‘ Yuki say as she Head Butt Rena Head Hard
‘Ouch....What your problem’ Rena say as she Rubbed her head
‘I Don’t have any Problem Now’ Yuki say as she Cross her Arm and Smile
‘Guys..Stop...’ Takamina say as the two Sit down Growled
‘Maybe Kumi learn it from the Both of You’ Takamina say as the both of them make a confused face
‘What the Heck ...Takamina ‘ Jurina say as she look at Takamina
‘Yeah....How can we Create a Slow head’ Yuki say
‘Well....Shy + Quiet = Slow’ Takamina Explained
‘What.....’ Anna say as she was Shock
‘Yeah...What the Heck Takamina’ Tomomi say as she Think
‘Well Rena was Shy and Yuki was Quiet that make Kumi was Slow because They didn’t Teach Kumi how to Explain’ Takamina say as she sat down
‘What ...We did teach Kumi how to Explained...Or it may be the Bananas ’Yuki and Rena say as she look at Kumi who was Eating Banana
‘Kumi...Don’t Eat Banana Again or you will be Slow head ‘ Yuki say as she pointed to the Banana
‘I Know Monkey Brain’ Rena say as Yuki passed the Banana to her
‘Monkey Brain’ Mariko say with a Weird Tone
‘Yeah..’ Rena say as she eat the Banana
 ‘Well...What wrong with Banana.....Ah....Rena-Oneechan My Last Banana’ Kumi Cried Out as she Saw Rena was eating her Banana
‘Ahh...Rena Don’t Eat ‘ Yuki Snapped the Banana as she saw Rena was Eating it
‘What ..I’m Hungry’ Rena say
‘Yeah Rena Right....Let have Dinner’ Tomochin Say as she already Finish making her Nails
‘Yeah...Want to go to a My Restaurant’ Miichan say as the other look at her
‘Wow...Who are you...You are not Miichan’ Mariko say as she look at Miichan
‘Well Miichan here ...Need To Show you guys Her New Restaurant that she ask me to help her with It...Well that was My Hotel and she was my Family so I Decided to help her as well’ Takamina say
‘I thought we are Going to the Beach next ‘ Mayu say
‘No...We are staying at my Hotel Next ‘ Takamina say
‘Yeah Mariko Right...It Rare to you ask us to come to your Restaurant’ Jurina say as she Hugged Mayu with a Hand on Her Neck and ignore Takamina
‘Well ..Now I’m Offering you Guys to my Restaurant ....Are you Accept it’ Miichan say as she look at Everyone
‘Before we Going Let packed up for clothes for the beach ...We going to Sleep at my Hotel’ Takamina Repeat her Answer as they All Run toward their Room and Packed...

‘Well...What are we Waiting for ...Let Go’ Acchan Say as the other stood up their Butt from the Couch...And Took their own Car Key as Kumi , Anna , Jurina and Mayu was lazy to Ride their Motorcycles...As Yuki was driving her Lamborghini Reveton with...Mayu in the Front seat, Rena and Jurina was on the Back seat...As For Takamina was Driving Her GMC Yukon Denali with Acchan, Tomochin , Tomomi , Miichan , Mariko , Anna and Kumi...As for Yuko and Haruna was Riding their own Mazda RX-8 who want a sweet moment just both of them..

As everyone was on board ..They Drive in Three and went to Takamina 5 Stars Hotel with Miichan 5 Stars Restaurant in it as they were on their Way to Tokyo ( As that was Their Location of Takamina Hotel )

1 Hours later

As they arrived at the Restaurant they parked at the Private Property at the Underground Parking Lot as they Parked their Car and Walked to the Lift as the lift only suit with 7 person only...as they Separated in two Groups....

As the First Group was Takamina , Miichan , Mariko , Tomochin , Tomomi , Jurina and Mayu
As the First Group was already left the Lift and The Second Group was Acchan , Yuki , Rena , Yuko , Haruna , Kumi and Anna..

As the Lift Arrived at the Level 5 Restaurant for the Richest , Richer , Rich People Only...As The Staff saw Them ...One of the Staff Lead the Way to their Private Room as the People Who was eating at the Restaurant Greet them Gently and Nicely as they Saw the family Member of The Owner....

As the Staff Open the Door to let them Enter the Private Room...as They Enter the Private Room..As Everyone was there Busy looking Around the Private Room....
There have a Arcade, Big Dining Room , A Karaoke set at the Living Room , A Room with 14 Beds , 3 Huge Bathroom , Indoor Pool  and even a Jacuzzi at the Balcony and Outdoor Couch...

As the others looked around the Hotel Private Room....Rena Sat at the “L” Couch as Kumi saw her sister were sitting and Not looking around the Room...She Join Rena as they both Look at each other and Hugged Happily...

‘Sorry for calling you Slow head Kumi-chan’ Rena say as she Hugged Kumi
‘ No worry ...Sorry for being Slow head ‘ Kumi say as she broke the hug and Look at Rena
‘Well...I know you are a Smart Girl but you Just Pretend to be stupid Like you don’t what Takamina was Talking about.. Right ? ‘ Rena say
‘How do you know I’m a Smart girl ‘ Kumi say as she was Surprised
‘Well...I didn’t forget about everything you know...I Remember I teach you Until you get 99% of all Subject but never get a Chance to beat my Score 100% ‘ Rena say as she Smile Widely
‘ I never need it to beat you Score Cause I Already Beat you  at Sit Up ‘ Kumi Laughed
‘ Stop Laughing...It not funny ‘ Rena Scold as she took a Pillow and Hide her face on it

‘Hey You guys Stop Fighting ...Come on let Eat ....Look like Yuki was Getting Weak ’Mayu say as she Pointed to Yuki who was Kneeling Down and make a Sad Face while Holding her Stomach

As Mayu say that ..Rena and Kumi Quickly look at Yuki who was Kneeling Down at the Floor and Even say the word “FOOD” ...As They Saw Yuki ..they two sisters went to Yuki and Pulled her Up to her Feet and Help her to the Dining Room..and Ask Yuki to sit at the Chair ....

As Everyone Finish Touring the Room and Went to the Dining Room ....Mayu was already Sat beside Yuki , Rena and Kumi ....As Jurina and  Anna was sitting beside Kumi ...Haruna , Yuko ,Tomochin , Tomomi , Mariko and Miichan sat in front of them and Takamina and Acchan was sitting in the end of the Dining Table... While Everyone already Sit Down...Miichan Ring a Bell and 7 Waiter with 2 Meals on his Hand and Putted the Meal in one person one Meal...With a 2 Big Jelly with a shape of a Gun and a Roses...

As they Thank for the Food and Rushed eat their own Meals.....A Roasted Chicken Leg with a Mushroom Sauce , Vegetables ....As for Rena Miichan Ask The Waiter to Make her a Salad Sandwich with a Vegetables full on the Plate...As Miichan know Rena didn’t Eat Meat...As Mariko Complained her Food

‘Why Rena Have a Vegetables Meal ...While we Have the Same Delicious Chicken Legs...’ Mariko say to Miichan as Everyone can hear it
‘Well...Ask Takamina ..She Know It All’ Miichan say as Mariko looked at Takamina
‘Why the Heck I Have to Answer It’ Takamina Say To Miichan
‘Well You the Doctor ‘ Miichan say as she Continued Eating
‘As You can See Rena Technically Have A Serious Problem with the fatty Acids Stuff   ‘ Takamina Explained
‘Don’t Say it in a Science Explanation Takamina’ Mayu and Anna say as they Looked at Takamina with a Mad Eye
‘Well...Takamina was Saying was Rena is Allergic to Meat and Alcohol...’ Yuki say as she looked at everyone
‘What RENA ALLERGIC TO MEAT’ As Everyone was Surprised that she Can’t Eat the “Fatty Acids Stuff”
‘and Alcohol’ Rena say
‘That we already Know ...But MEAT we Didn’t ‘ Tomochin say as Tomomi Nodded
‘Well ...I Think I Know That Tell your Guys about my Allergic of Alcohol ‘Rena say with a Evil Glared to Yuki
‘Ehh...What Do you Think I Told Them About Your Allergic’ Yuki say as she Eat the Meat
‘Well...I know Takamina won’t Tell because she the One that ask me to Don’t Tell Anyone except Kumi , You and Jurina Only...I know Kumi won’t ....Jurina Won’t either....So It was You’ Rena say as she Pointed to Takamina to Kumi and To Jurina Then she look back to Yuki
‘Fine...I Won’t Lie...Yes I Told Them ...Accidently told Them....’ Yuki say
‘She Didn’t Accidently Told Us ...’ Tomochin and Tomomi say
‘YUKI.....’ Rena Yell with a Evil Smile and Glared
‘Ah...Gotto Run ..’ Yuki say as she Stood up from her Chair and Run to the Arcade
‘YUKI’ Rena shout as she Stood Up too and Chased Yuki
‘Rena ‘ Jurina Run to catch up with Rena
‘ Oneechan ‘ Kumi say as she Run toward the Arcade with Anna following Her

As everyone Laughed to Them.
‘ Hey Guys ...You shouldn’t Be running after Dinner’ Acchan say
‘Yeah...you guys will had Stomach Ache Later ‘ Takamina Shout
‘Hey Mayu you didn’t Join them’ Mariko say
‘No ...I’m Hungry ‘ Mayu say as she Eat Yuki Chicken Leg

As the 5 Member play Hide and Seek like a 5 year old Children....As the Other  9 already Finished Eating and Clean them self at the Huge Bathroom with a Tub big as Pool....As the 5 member at the Arcade Playing Games..As Acchan , Takamina , Tomomi , Tomochin , Mariko and Miichan were Going to the Club at Upper Level ....as the Underage stay at the Room....Before they leaving Acchan and Takamina Advised Rena and Yuki

‘Hey You Guys...Can you Watched the Youngest ...We Don’t Want them to go to the club and Get Drank ..’ Acchan say as she Pushed Takamina Out of the Door..
‘Hey Wait...’ Yuki say as Acchan and Takamina Look Around
‘What ...Any Questions’ Takamina say
‘Yeah...Do I and Rena can go to the Club if the Youngest is already asleep’ Yuki say
‘Sure....But look like Someone is already Run for Going to the Club with You’ Acchan say as she Pointed to the Empty Spot next to Yuki
‘Ehh....RENA ..can you Just Send me to the Club ‘ Yuki Shouted Rena name and Ask Rena
‘No...You Know I Hate the Place’ Rena say as she walked next to Yuki
‘Yes...I Know and You Allergic to Alcohol Too but can you Send me to the Swimming Pool Area or the Front Door of the Club...’ Yuki say as Rena Make a Shock Face
‘Heck No.....Remember what Acchan say I have to Check the Youngest Member ...’ Rena say as she look at Yuki
‘Well..Please ‘ Yuki say as Hugged Rena tightly
‘Wait ...Why Me...Mayu Here You ask her’ Rena say as She Pushed Yuki Face From her Face
‘Oughh...She Underage Come on Please or I’ll Kiss You...I can Do It and I Will’ Yuki say as her Face is Closer and Closer To Rena
‘Oh No ...Not the Kiss...Fine ...I’ll take you but Only at the Pool Area’ Rena say as Yuki Kiss Rena Cheek
‘Arghh...Not the Kiss...Let Go ‘ Rena say as she Pushed Yuki face
‘What we were Sisters ...I can Kiss you as I Pleased’ Yuki say as She Walked to the Lift With Rena
‘Yeah...I Know But you can’t Just Kiss me Everywhere You want...’ Rena say as she Glared to Yuki
‘Well...Kumi Comfortable with It’ Yuki say as she Walked out of the Lift
‘Well...She Love you...’ Rena says
‘Why You didn’t love me’ Yuki say as They Stopped at the Swimming Pool
‘I Love you but sometime I wanted to Ignore You’ Rena say as she kiss Back Yuki at the Cheek
‘I Know you Love Me’ Yuki say as she Walked to the Club Guard
‘Don’t Get Back Drank’ Rena say as she Walked Away

As Yuki Stopped at the Club Guard as the Club Guard Saw Yuki...He Greet Nicely and Let her In Easily as the Other Stranger Wait for the Line..

Rena get Into the Room  and saw Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna at their Bed...Rena Smile and went to the Bathroom as she took a Long Hot Bath....Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna look at Rena as she locked the bathroom Door ...They Stood Up From their Bed and Put Their Hotel Cuddle Pillow under their Sheet and Secretly Went Out of the Room ....As Rena went Out of the Bathroom after Shower and Look at the Bed that been Cover by Sheet with a Silence ...

As Rena thought that the Youngest might been Snoring by Now...But They Didn’t ....Rena Took off the Sheet and Found a Cuddle Pillow Every Sheet the Cover were the Same....Rena Dress up her Green Jersey with a Logo “ Rena 1 “ On the Back ....She Wore her Black Skinny Jeans and a Brown Knee Boots.. and Went to Search for the 4 Youngest...

Rena search for the 4  Youngest....At the Lobby , Restaurant , Gym ,Big Arcade ,Outdoor Park , Indoor Park ...Swimming pool and the Last Place that she Hate

‘The Club ...I Shouldn’t Have Known it ....It a Waste of time that I Run all over the Hotel Section ...’Rena say as she Took a Long Breath and Walked Quickly to the Club Guard

‘Oh...Miss Rena You Shouldn’t Be Here’ The Club Guard say as Rena Nodded
‘I Know ...But you see Miss Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna’ Rena say as The Guard Shock
‘No...I Haven’t See One of them Either....But here if you want to check Inside’ the Club Guard Give Rena a VIP Pass
‘Thanks ‘ Rena say as The Guard Bowed

As Rena walked Inside the Club as she Hold her Allergic ....She Walked toward the Bartender and Ask for Coke Drinks for One

‘One Coke Please ..’ Rena say as the Bartender Pour a Coke and Give it to Rena
‘Where are those Guys’ Rena Took a Sip and Look around the Crowd of People Dancing , Drinking ,chatting even Kissing...

‘Hey Mayu...Look like this Club Awesome’ Jurina say as Kumi and Anna Followed Mayu and Jurina From behind and was about to  Sat next to Rena as Rena Stood Up with a Glass of Coke on her hand and Went to the Back bar Section

‘There they are but I can’t stop them but rushed to hit Them....Hey You’ Rena say as she Yelled to the Bartender
‘Yes...can I help you’ the Bartender ask
‘Yes...can you see the Four Girls there....If they Ask for Alcoholic Drink just Give them Coke...Please here some Tips ‘Rena asked the Bartender as she Give him a Money Tips     
‘If it is For Money ...Done’ The Bartender agreed

‘Hey...4 Beer ‘ Jurina say as the Bartender give them their Drinks in a Glass

As the Four Youngest took a Sip of their Drink and Complained to the Bartender

‘Hey this not Beer this is Coke’ Jurina say to the Bartender
‘Sorry Someone Give me a Tip to Give you a Coke’ The bartender say as she Pointed to empty Spot that Rena sit

Rena Know that Jurina will  Notice the Drinks ...she walked to the Dancing Area ...and Hide her Self in the Crowd...As the 4 Search for the one that Give tips to Bartender so that the Bartender Didn’t Allowed them to have Beer or Other Drinks than Coke...

The Four Move to the Dancing Area to have Fun....As the Dancing like a Sexy Girl in Stage....As Jurina Dancing Around and saw Some look Familiar at the Club and Ask the Other to check it Up
As Rena didn’t Comfortable at the Dancing Area She went back to the Bartender and Ask for a Glass of Coke again...As the Bartender Pour the Coke to the Glass and Accidently pour a Little bit Vodka  went Rena was looking at the Dancing Area ....And Give the Glass to Rena who was Sitting there Staring to Something

‘You have a Problem Miss’ The Bartender say
‘Yeah...Kind of’ Rena say as she Took a Sip of the Coke
‘Go have Fun’ The Bartender say
‘No...Never mind’ Rena say as she Stared at the Bartender making a Cocktail

As Rena was Talking to the Bartender ....Jurina and The other 3 Searching for Someone suddenly They Stop at the Entrance of Dancing Area and Saw Rena

‘Is That Rena-chan’ Jurina say to Kumi
‘Well...I Don’t Know...But Rena Never Go to the Club Before ‘ Kumi say
‘ If she is not Rena... Why she Wearing Rena Archery Jersey’ Anna Pointed to the Logo Behind the Jersey
‘That Rena Jersey...and That is Rena’ Mayu say as she look at Jurina
‘Wait...What is Rena Drinking ‘ Jurina say as she look Properly
‘ She Never Drink Beer or Other Alcohol Drinks...She Allergic to the Thing’ Kumi say
‘Come on Let go meet Rena There’ Jurina say as Mayu , Kumi and Anna Followed Her
‘Well...well...Well...Look what we Got Here ....Little Miss Rena who Doesn’t Drink’ Jurina say as they Sat next to Rena
‘It Coke ...Not a Beer like you guys just Order’ Rena say
‘Oh ....That was You ‘ Mayu say
‘Yeah...You Guys make me Run all over the Hotel...’Rena say with Emotionless Tone
‘What you Searching For Us’ Kumi say as Rena Evil Glared to Kumi
‘Yes...And If Acchan and Takamina Knows ...We Died....’ Rena say as she Finish her Coke  and Walked toward the Exits
‘ Oh....Yeah If you Guys Finish Get back soon ‘ Rena say as she Give the Club Guard The VIP Pass and Run toward the Stairs...as she Get to the Room as Soon as Possible as she Know that the Coke Taste alcohol a little Bit....She Washed her Face as she Saw her face was Red as she felt her Forehead and It was Burning like a Fire...she Wore her Black Jacket and Even Change Her Skinny into Boarding Shorts and Run toward her Bed and Cover herself Under the Bed Blanket and Bed Sheet ....She Cover her Face in the Sheet and Close her Eyes...

As a Couple of Hours ...

Acchan and Takamina Found Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna at the Club Dancing ....so they Brought the Youngest back to The Room as Tomochin , Tomomi , Mariko ,Miichan and Yuki were Karaoke at their Private VIP Room...

As Acchan And Takamina Scolded at them at the Living room...Jurina , Mayu , Kumi and Anna Sat at the “L” Couch and Heard Takamina and Acchan Scolded at them...as they Make a an Believable Face to the Two Leader

‘You Guys Shouldn’t Sneak Out of this Room’ Takamina Scolded them
‘You Know You Guys are Underage and Not allowed to go to the Club ‘ Acchan say
‘Well I’m 18 ‘ Mayu say as She looked at Acchan
‘Well ....You Still in School Mayu ‘ Acchan say as Mayu cross her Arm
‘And where is Rena ‘ Takamina say as she look Around
‘Well...A Hours ago Rena at the Club Searching for Us ..Then She Went Back ‘ Mayu say as she was the Older of the 4 Youngest
‘Wait...What ...I’m Hearing thing that Rena went to the Club ‘ Takamina say
‘No .....And Yes Rena Went to the Club’ Jurina says
‘Oh No.....’ Takamina Run to her Bag and Took out a Packed of Allergic Pills in case for Emergency and Went Beside Rena and Wake Rena Up

As Rena Was Up and Sit Up on her Bed and Ask Takamina

‘What Wrong is there something Wrong’ Rena say Weakly
‘Yes....Here Eat This Quickly’ Takamina Hand over the Pills
Rena Took the Pills and Look at the Youngest

‘Did you Guys was Founded by Takamina and Acchan’ Rena say as they Nodded
‘Thank Goodness ...Your Allergic is Slowing Down ‘Takamina say
‘Did you Drink some Alcohol ‘ Acchan say
‘No...But the Coke Taste Weird’ Rena say as she Lay down back
‘Coke ...Maybe the Bartender Accidently pour some Alcohol ‘ Takamina say
As the 4 Youngster Stared at Takamina and Acchan ...
‘As for you 4 ...GO TO BED NOW’ Acchan say as the 4 Run to their Own Bed and  Close their Eyes....
‘We Will be Watching you Guys’ Takamina say as she Ask her Bodyguard to Guard the Front Door of the Private Room...

As the 4 ...Can’t Help it to stay at the Room....They Sleep on their Own Bed....As they Fall Asleep for a Few hours till 6 A.M...Rena Woke Up and Went to the Bathroom to Wash her Face and Change her Clothes...She took off her Black Jacket and Wore her Green Sleeveless Hoodies and over her Jersey and Change Back into her Skinny Jeans and Wore back her brown knee high Boots and took her White IPhone....

She went out of the Room and Went to the Outdoor Swimming Pool Area and Sat at one of the Bench near Pool...and Look at the Sky Full of Stars ....She Stared one by one of the Stars and Smile Widely...

‘What Happen if the Ambulance didn’t Come to save me ....Did they still can Forgive me or Not..’Rena Thought to herself and Sighed
‘Look Like It a Wonderful Night’ She Say to herself and look at the Sky

As Rena relax herself and stood Up and Walked to their Room and Packed her Stuff Quickly and Quietly as the youngster Were Sleeping ...She Went to the Lobby and Stop a Taxi In the Entrance of the hotel

‘Akiba Mansion Please’ Rena say to the Driver
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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #43 on: November 07, 2012, 11:41:28 AM »
I Know it been a long time since I continued writing this Fics....but I got so confided that I will continued Writing this fics....

Please Enjoy ....Sorry for my bad words and spelling ....I hope you like it...I stop writing because I didn't know how to write the ending


Chapter 8 : Old Enemy

As Rena waited to Arrived at their Mansion ....Rena took out her Iphone and Message Kumi 
As The taxi stopped in Front of Mansion ...as Rena stood Out of the Taxi and Was about to Pay the Man ...the Taxi took off as Rena Shouted

‘Hey....The Money...I guess It free ’ Rena say

As Rena put back the Money on her Pocket and Walked toward the Mansion Door ...but suddenly a Group of Yankee Girls and Mafia Girls Walked to the Akiba Family Territory Mansion with a Steel Pipes and Wooden Stick and Even one of Them brought a Real Katana to Prove that their group were the best ...

Rena Stood in the Middle as the Group Build a Circle Around Rena

‘What do you Guys Want with Me ‘ Rena say as she was about to Pull out her Glock 18
‘We Want Revenge for Zakarune family for a Few Years Ago.’ One of the Mafia Girl say as she Pointed a Gun to Rena
‘You took for Years to took Revenge on US ‘ Rena say as She Kick the Gun off the Girl Hand and Swing a Fist on the Girl Face
‘ Yeah...Come and Get it’ Rena say as she Kick and Punch the Enemy
‘You Shouldn’t Be so happy first’ A Girl Hit her With a Steel Pipe on her Head
‘Ouch.....you Shouldn’t Do that Too’ Rena say as she Throw a Several Punch on the Girl face
‘ Die ...’ One of the Girl Almost Shoot Rena but Luckily Rena Dodge

As Rena grabbed the Steel pipe that on the Floor and Hit the Enemy ....As Rena Was About to become Crazy of Hitting People ...One of the Mafia Shot Rena on her Arm...as Rena Scream as loud as she Can...

‘Arghhh....Arghhhh...’ Rena Shout out loud as she Didn’t think that she can Hold the Pain To long....
‘Shut Up Akiba ‘ One of the Mafia Girl Kicked Rena Face
‘How dare you kick my Face Arghh..’ Rena say as she Spilled out the Blood that was on her mouth
‘You Think your Face is Prettier than Mine....Heck No’ The Girl Say
‘COMEBACK....Let make her Suffer of Pain’ Their Comrades Asked the Girl
‘That a Good Idea...GUYS TIED HER UP AND HOLD HER BLOOD FROM LOSING’ Comeback Shout to her Gang

As they Tied Rena with a Hard Rope...As they Tied a Clothes in Rena Arm Carefully..

‘ARGGHHH....THAT HURTS YOU IDIOTS’ Rena yell to the Mafia Girl
‘SHUT UP....As if I Care’ Comeback Punch Rena on her Stomach
‘Argghh...Oww..That My Word ’ Rena Replied
‘The Word that you Said to my Family Members ...’ Comeback Said
‘So ...You the Last Brat that Alive in that Weakling Family ‘ Rena Said as she Laughed
‘You Bitch ...”PAK” ‘ Comeback said as she Slap hard Rena Face

As They Finished Tied Rena ....Comeback and her Troops Punch , Kick and Hit Rena with Steel Pipes and Wooden Stick
‘You are a Weak Person for Akiba’ Comeback say as she hit Rena with a Steel Pipe on Rena Back ..
‘Coward~~.....You th-e one – wh-o was- we-ak Idio-ts’ Rena say weakly as she Cough of Blood
‘What did ya say...’ Comeback say as she offer her Ear
‘I say you ar-e a Arghh....Cowa-rd’ Rena say
‘ SHUT UP’ Comeback Shouted to Rena as she Kick Rena Face
‘I Will Come Back for a Rematch...ZAKARUNE’ Rena said before she get Beat Up

As Rena Suffer a lot of Punching , Kicking and Hitting....She Can’t Hold her Pain and Everything Gone Blurred and Fainted

As the Zakarune Outsider Mafia left Rena in the Bushed Next the Mansion Entrance with a Blood lead to Rena Fainted Body ...

As for the Akiba Family member were Packing their Stuff and Ready to head back Home....As they was About to Start their Car Engine...

‘Hey...How about we took some Foods at the Restaurant ....Maybe We can Fill up Our Stomach on the Way Home...’ Takamina suggest as Everyone nodded
‘How About Rena’ Haruna Asked
‘She Could Survive with her Gekikara Fried Rice’ Tomochin said

As they Head back inside and Went to the Restaurant and Sit down on a Normal table like a Normal Guest as Kumi , Anna , Mayu and Jurina Steal a lots of Bread , Fruits and Even chicken Sausages and put in on Big Plastic bag that they Hide inside Their Bag ....In case they Hungry ...

As Takamina and Acchan Saw them Stealing a Packed Bread and Fruits ...They Chased the 4 Youngest as Miichan laughed Happily...

‘Hey Guys...You are Going to Scared the Guest Around Here....And Don’t Worried There will be More that came From..’ Miichan say

As Takamina , Acchan , Jurina , Mayu ,Anna and Kumi Stopped Running and Took some food and Hit back to the Parking Lot ....As Yuki , Tomomi , Tomochin , Mariko , Yuko and Haruna was at the Parking Lot Ready to Hit back Home....

As they Move back Home.....They Went Straight to the Garage and Parked their Car inside It...and Took their Stuff and Walked to the Main Entrance as Kumi and Anna Scream out Loud as they Saw Blood

‘Hey You Two what happen Here’ Takamina say as she was Worried about the two Youngest
‘Loo-ook...Bl-ood’Anna say as she Pointed the The Puddle of Blood
‘How Come they were Blood at the Entrance Door too’ Mayu say
‘Mafia...’ Haruna say as she Pointed to a Few Bullet on the Entrance Door
‘ Look Takamidget...it look like the Blood is tracking Somewhere’ Yuko say as Jump on Takamina  and Pointed to the Blood

As Yuko say that....Kumi Followed the Blood and End on the Bushed and Saw Rena Fainted Body and Scream out loud

‘AHHHHHHHHH........Oneechan ‘Kumi Scream as she pushed Rena With her Leg
‘Ehh...Rena-chan’ Jurina say as she Help Kumi Dragged Rena out of the Bushes to the Entrance
‘Rena....What Happen to you....’ Yuki Say with a Panic Voice
‘Yuki.....Relax ....Here some Water’ Mayu say as she Handed Yuki a Bottle of Water

As Yuki Accept Mayu Water and pour the Water on Rena face to Wake her up as Mayu was Surprised that she Saw her Water being Use to wake someone up

‘Ahh....You Use my Water...That I Brought for You’ Mayu say
‘Well ...you can Buy me a Huge One ....For Emergency Panic Drink’ Yuki say as she Smile to Mayu
‘Hrmm....She Didn’t Even Brought that....She Steal it at the Restaurant’ Jurina and Anna say as they Smile Evilly to Mayu
‘And Maybe you Brought it yourself if you want to give it to me’ Yuki say as she Wake Rena up

As Rena Didn’t Wake up ....Jurina was Lazy to Wait Until Rena was Up....She Shake Rena Several time that make Rena Yelled Stop

‘STOPPPPP....JURI-NA  ST-OPP ‘ Rena Shout out loud as Jurina Keep Shaking her
‘Rena ...Finally you awake’ Jurina say
‘Arghhh....Awww my arm’ Rena say as she took off the Clothes that the Mafia tied on her Arm
‘RENAAA....Your Arm is Bleeding ‘ Acchan Shouted to Rena
‘Acchan Could you Please Stop Over Acting about Arm is Bleeding ‘Takamina say as Jurina , Anna and Kumi nodded
‘Could We Do this Inside....Because I have a Bad Felling about Mariko Going to break all my Vases at the Garden’ Kumi say as she pointed to Mariko who was Sitting at the Garden table
‘Yeah....Mari-chan Look like Bored ‘ Yuko said as she Carried Haruna bags as Haruna was Busy Playing her Nintendo DS

As Jurina Carried Rena Inside while the other Followed Them with their Bags...As Jurina Helped Rena Remove the Bullet from her Arm in their Room Bathroom...As Acchan and Takamina was at the Study Room watching the CCTV ....Tomochin was Cleaning her Pink Porsche Car... as For Tomomi was Sitting under the Shaded at the Pool Area Playing Ipad Apps...As for Kumi and Anna was Swimming at the Pool....Yuko and Haruna was making Lunch for Everyone ....Yuki and Mayu Went to the Kumi Supermarket as they Know they will get Free at Kumi Market....

As they Arrived at Kumi Market...The Two cut the Line as the Costumer Give them in front of Him..They asked the new cashier to pick their usually Stuff...as the Cashier Rushed to the Store and Collect the usual List...as in a couple of Minutes ....Yuki and Mayu thank the Cashier and Left the market and Went Back to the Mansion....

As they Arrived at the Mansion...~~

Yuki Parked her Car in the Garage and Went straight to the Kitchen and give the Ingredient to Haruna and Yuko who was Pretty Busy Cooking Haruna Special Fried Rice....as Yuko helped Haruna...

‘Haruna....Can you put a little more Spices’ Yuko complained
‘No ...Yuko.... You know Jurina Hate Hot stuff ‘ Haruna say
‘Ohh...Pleaseee’ Yuko say as she Hugged Haruna from the Back
‘Yuko...Not now....I’m Cooking....Fine Just a Little’ Haruna say
‘Yeyy....Love you’ Yuko Kiss Haruna
‘Arr.....Lo-ve you too I guess’ Haruna say as she Put a little Spices

As Yuko went to the Living Room and Join Mayu watching TV

At W Matsui Room ~~
 
Jurina was Helping Rena Removing the Bullet from Rena Arm....

‘Here Bite This...it may be Hurt a little bit ‘ Jurina say as she Handed a towel
‘Hah...Why I have to Bite this Towel’ Rena say confused
‘ Well you may Scream like you been Torture By Me ‘ Jurina say
‘Hah...What that Mea-‘ Rena say as Jurina Put the Towel into Rena Mouth
‘Just hold the Pain a little Longer Ok ‘ Jurina say as she kiss Rena on her Cheek and Start Removing the Bullet the Hard Way
‘ARGHHHHHHHH’ Rena Scream out loud as she forget to bite the Towel
‘Just a Little Bit....’ Jurina Say to Rena who was Busy screaming of Pain
‘ Arghhh...It hurts....Slowly Jurina ‘ Rena say to Jurina
‘If you ask to Remove it Slowly it will Hurt then this.....That why I making it Faster.....DONE’ Jurina say as she Sit down on the Floor
‘Ouch...that Hurts ‘ Rena say as she Took a Towel
‘I Won’t Hurts went you Stopped getting Shot all the Time...at the Same Arm as Yesterday’ Jurina Scolded to Rena
‘I Know....I Know....Hey Give me Some Water to wash out this Blood ‘ Rena asked Jurina
‘No....Wait here in the Tub I will be Right Back ..’ Jurina say as she Left the Bathroom
‘Hey....JURINA.....’ Rena Shout as Jurina Left the Room

Jurina Went to the Kitchen and Took out some Big Packet of Ice pack and ask Kumi and Anna who was Finishing their Swimming ...to help her Carried the big packet of Ice pack to Jurina Room..

‘What are you planning Jurina with this Ice Packs’ Anna Asked as they Climb up the Stair to the corridor
‘You will see ‘ Jurina Open her room door as the two can Dropped the Ice packs inside the Bathroom
‘Ehh...Rena-chan’ Anna say as she put down the Ice Pack
‘Ehhh....She Asleep in the Tub as just a couple of Second I Ask her to Wait ‘ Jurina Whispered
‘I Guess She Really Tired getting Beat Up ‘ Kumi say
‘Guys....Look at This....’ Jurina say

Jurina Pick up one of the Ice Packs and Open it with her Knife and pour all the Ice on Rena Body as Rena Surprised wake up from the Coldness of the Ice..

‘Arghh....It Cold ..Jurina-chan ...what are you doing ‘ Rena Scold to Jurina
‘Ohh....Jurina you making a Ice Bath for Rena ...I see’ Kumi say
‘Yeah....Help me with the other Two Packs’ Jurina say as Kumi and Anna Nodded

As the Three pour the Ice out of the Packs into the tub and Asked Rena

‘Hey...Maybe we should tied one of her Hand to the Towel Hanger’ Anna suggest as she Took out of a Rope
‘Good Idea Anna-chan’ Kumi Agree with Anna as the two tied One of Rena Hand to the Towel Hanger as Jurina just Laughed
‘Rena-chan ...Wait In there as I Come Back a Few Minutes later if you want your injured Arm and Body to be Fine ‘ Jurina say as she wash up her Hand and Left the Bathroom with Kumi and Anna..
‘No...You Guys Let me GO....IT COLD AND YOU ARE TORTURING ME  ‘ Rena Shouted at the three as they Left the Bathroom

As the Two went to their Room and left Jurina at the living room Joining Mayu and Yuki watched a Weather Broadcast as Mayu start to get boring watching the Channel that Yuki Change as Yuko and Haruna asked Jurina

‘What the Heck was That’ Yuko asked
‘Oh Just Giving Rena a Ice Bath’ Jurina said
‘Remember to let her Out ‘ Haruna Advice Jurina

Haruna and Yuko went back to the Kitchen

‘Arghh...this is Bored ‘ Mayu Growled as Yuki Glared to Her
‘What is Bored ...it Fun watching this ‘ Yuki say as she Pointed to the TV
‘Aww...Jurina what are you doing inside your Room’ Mayu asked Jurina
‘Well...just making Rena-chan a Ice Bath ‘ Jurina say as she Smile Evilly
‘...You Doing the Ice Bath Trick again’ Yuki say as she Change the Channel
‘Hey that my Line...’ Mayu say
‘Whatever.....You Know Jurina you should have make a New Trick to Rena ‘ Yuki say as Mayu and Jurina Shock
‘Since When did you Interest in Jurina Tricks’ Mayu said
‘I will after Rena is Fully recover her Memories First then she didn’t Know My New trick was’ Jurina explained as she Wait the Anime Channel that Yuki change for Mayu...
‘Well ...Poor Rena-chan ...How was is she Doing ‘ Mayu say
‘She Fine...it so hard to remove the Bullet from her Arm ...’ Jurina say
‘Well...Rena is Strong that why it Hard to Remove a Bullet From her Arm..you Remember before the Time she Lost her memories that she Got Shot..’ Yuki explained to Jurina about Rena Situation 
‘Yeah....that She Scream as I get Back ‘ Jurina say as she watched the Anime with Mayu
‘Wow...Me and Kumi tired to Clean her Wound for half an Hour’ Yuki said and Watched the Anime 

As they Watched the Anime in Half an Hour ...Jurina Forget about Rena who was in the Tub full of Ice..Luckily Yuki asked

‘Hey Jurina ...how long do you think Rena will be Out of the Tub’ Yuki asked Jurina
‘Oh...No...RENA-CHAN’ Jurina Shouted Rena Name  as she run quickly to their Room
‘Jurina.....What Happen ‘ Yuki say as she run to Jurina and Rena room while Mayu walked to the room
‘Rena-chan’ Mayu sing while Climb up the stairs

As Jurina , Yuki and Mayu arrived at the Bathroom ....and saw Rena was fall asleep in a Tub full of cold Ice

‘Rena-chaan WAKE UP ....’ Jurina Say to Rena and Shake Rena forward and Backward
‘Ju-ri-Na –Ch-an  is Co-ld...’ Rena say
‘Jurina Stop Shaking Rena....and Put her Some new Clothes‘ Yuki say as she Untied the Rope

Jurina carried Rena on her Back and Help Rena Change into her England T-shirt and her Black Short ...Jurina handed Rena Black Jacket and as Rena Lend down on her Bed ...Jurina Cover Rena Body with Rena Blanket and Smile at Rena ....As she Left the Room with Yuki and Mayu...

‘I Think you Over did it ...’ Yuki said Simply
‘She Frozen...You Should Cuddle her’ Mayu said as she Hugged Yuki
‘Let her Rest ...’ Jurina said

As Jurina didn’t Want to Interrupt Rena...She went downstairs and Search for a Good Movies...as she Open the Drawer on the Coffee Table...and Found a Akiba Memories video ...and decided to watch back the video...The Video was Recorded by Our Technology Producer ...Matsui Rena.....She Play the video...the Video Start with a Introduction of the Family member then the Real Happy Mafia Family of all

As Kumi , Anna and Mayu heard Some Laughing Sound ...they Decided to Went Downstairs and Join Jurina...as all the Akiba Family were asleep....Only the Four Youngest didn’t Sleep...
They Watched the Video with a Laughter , Happiness , Enjoyable and Even Sadness....But since Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna Move to Tokyo for 6 Months...Akiba Family become Unstable with Happiness , Enjoyable emotion and Even laughter ...Akiba Family Become More and More to Sadness , Bored and Madness...But Now the Akiba Family Turn back into the Happiness Mafia Family ever...And the Strongest of all.

Mayu , Jurina , Kumi and Anna Watched the Scene went Mariko , Miichan , Yuko and Haruna are Leaving to Tokyo....all of the Youngster Cried as she Remember the Memories of Akiba Family Happy Time..

As the three went to their Room...Leaving Jurina Alone at the Living room....As Jurina was Still watching The Video and Suddenly fall Asleep on the Couch without Closing the Video off...




That All for Chapter 8 ....Wish me luck for keeping Updating my fics...Hope you guys like it
WMatsui lover ....JURINA & RENA


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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #44 on: November 07, 2012, 12:50:06 PM »
uwaaaah, you comeback!!  :cow:

and this chapter is so great!!
but, it's not the end, eh?

thank you  :thumbsup

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Re: Oketteru Angels (Story About Rena and Others)
« Reply #45 on: November 15, 2012, 09:28:05 PM »
 :shocked You updated!
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Always exiting to read your fic
Thank you for your update!
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