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Re: You 4/4/12 chapter 4
« Reply #20 on: April 04, 2012, 04:28:06 PM »
I don't get it do they own the café or just work there ? And great chapter lol I'm in the pics waiting so it gave me something to do thanks for update

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Re: You 4/4/12 chapter 4
« Reply #21 on: April 04, 2012, 07:20:46 PM »
I like how they decide who will make dinner xD

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Re: You 4/4/12 chapter 4
« Reply #22 on: April 05, 2012, 01:09:45 PM »
Replys to everyone :

@Nakamii : Thanks for putting the pics up for me and your suggestions have been used anymore feel free to say and i agree L is creepy the one u suggested is so much better also i found alot of anime people suite Rena Yuki and Tomochin =D

@Saeyukilover : Yer there will be more Kojiyu i promise and dont worry Takatomo will improve fast =D

@Farquhar97 : They work there but there manger that owns it isnt there much mostly because she gets drunk like every night lol and you where right i do put kojiyu in all my fics lol

@Kahem : I do to me and my friends do that alot but im always the slow one =( lol

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chapter 5

some where in tokyo

"Mr Takahashi are you sure you want to get your son involved into this kind of bussiness?"

"Of course he will do anything for his family trust me."

Takahashi then left his friend moldeing into the crowd of the buzzeing streets of Tokyo.

(At there school)

Takamina Tomochin Koji and Yuko skipped there classes together so they went to the roof where none of the teachers check for people that skip because the door is always locked.The 4 of them stood infront of the door and Koji took out her hair clip picking the lock in the door when it clicked granting them acsess to the roof."Thats my Nyan-Nyan!"Yuko praised jumping onto her girlfriend kissing her then running off to look over the guard rail on the roof.Koji followed closely behind her wrapping her arms around the squirral girls waist and placing her head on her shoulder and the two just talked.

Tomochin sat down against the wall with Takamina when she felt something heavy against her lap.She looked down to see Takamina laying on it with her eyes closed.She smiled at the small girl on her lap kissing her on the fore head whispering have a nice sleep.Tomochin stroked the girls head over and over earning little smiles for the sleeping midget."Takamina i love you."
Tomochin said blushing she didnt know why she was blushing its not like her sleeping friend could hear her but then it was still embaressing to say it out loud infront of Koji and Yuko but then they wernt paying any attention as they where to busy playing games like the alaphabet one as they began naming things that began with the letter A.She shook her head those to where just big kids.She had to get those words out of her system she was sure the sleeping angel before her didnt feel the same so she decided to keep her feelings a secret if she coudnt have her as a girlfriend then a best friend will do.

(The park)

Rena didnt feel like class today neither did Yuki so they said they where sick and some how eneded up in the park togther they got ice cream and sat down on a near by bench and Rena took into her ice cream practically stuffing the thing on her face.
"Rena you have it all over your face."

Yuki reached foward brushing off the ice cream on Rena's face.Rena coudnt believe that Yuki had just done that she turned her head away from the latter hide her blush but it became more red when Yuki kept asking her why she turned away.
This Yuki was going to be the death of her.

(Math class)

Mayu sat alone in the back of the class when people asked her things she answred with short one word answers.She had already finished the work set by the sensei so she just decied to catch up on her sleep.

(Japanese history class)

Ren and Kai where sat togther causing there sensei to go crazy at them for not doing there work as they where arm wrestling.The girls in the class where telling the sensei to let them keep arm wrestling making the pair laugh.All of the girls had been flirting with them the entire lesson even some boys where.As far as the girls where concerned there was no Mayu which ment they could flirt with Kai all they wanted and Ren was there type having these two in there class was like a early christams gift.
Ren had became really popular and was concidered and was accepted into the group so the group of 8 was now a group of 9 all with amazing talents and looks.

The pair where also talking about the cosplay they where going to wear for tonight when they finally came to a desicion.

"Kai you know your my best friend even though we have known eachother since yesteray."

"Your mine to Ren hehe you know we shoudnt get soppy here the girls expect us to be manly."

"Yer your right haha."

(Work)

The day eneded and the group went to work and once again changed into there cosplay.

Ren = Inzuma eleven from the team Greek Gods Zeus

Mayu = K-on's Mio

Yuko = K-on's Yui

Koji = The melancholy life of Haruhi Suzumiya's Suzumiya

Kai = X burners Tsunayoshi Sawada

Yuki = Strike witches Lucchini

Rena = Naruto Shippuden's Hinita

Tomochin = Chobit's Chii

Takamina = Chobit's Freya

Today the person on till was :

Mayu

The waiters where :
 
Kai
Ren
Koji
Rena

The greeters where :

Tomochin
Takamina


The cooks where :

Yuki
Yuko


Everything was going along smoothly the door opened for the nth time that day.

"Welcome let us show you to your ta-"

Takamina looked up from her bow whil Tomochin carried on with her sentence Takamina's face had shock written all over it Tomochin kept poking Takamina to try and snap back her into reality when she said.

"Father."

Kai coudnt believe what Takamina had just said so he had to go over and check stopping in his tracks when it was actually there father.

"Why are you here?"

"I need to talk with Kai so can you come out side a minute?"

Kai nodded and excited the cafe and his father began speaking.

"I dont want your sister to know okay?"

"Okay whats this about?"

"The company has been having a bad streak for a long time now so i was hoping if you could help out by helping us with our special type of bussiness."

"Special."

"Drugs my dear boy."

"What no way."

"If you dont then you and your sister will have to drop out of school and switch to another we will have to move country an everything."

Kai wanted to say no but he coudnt let anything bad happen to his family so he made his decison one he would come to regret.

"Fine."

"Thats my boy you will start after work go to this location."

Kai took the piece of paper and left his father going back to work to be bombarded by questions off everyone he didnt answer any of them so they all gave up.

Koji took the order from table 3 and went over to pass it to Yuko and Yuki when she heard Yuko complaining.

"Ahh i cant do it Yuki look its gone wrong again."

"No it hasnt its abit burnt but try again."

"Its not just a bit burnt its pitch black like coal i hate cooking."

Koji chuckled walking into the kitchen to see what she had burnt.Yuko however seen Koji entre the kitchen so quickly thrown it into a bin.Koji noticed it so gave Yuko a weird confused look which was ignored.

"Here is the order for table 3."

"Thanks Nyan-Nyan."

Yuko tip toed and stealed a kiss off Koji and began working on the order and Koji ran over to her and stole one off Yuko then ran out of the kitchen.

"Im glad she didnt see that Yuki."

"Well when you get it prefected she will."

"The cake keeps going wrong though and it needs to be done by our anniversy."

"Poor squirral your totally whipped."

"huh?"

"Nothing come one lets work."

Work finished and all went home except for Kai.He took the paper from his pocket sighing as he did so.When everyone asked why he wasnt comeing home he just replied with im going for a walk which i suppose is sort of true.
When he got to the location he got the drugs off his fathers dealer and went to the ally he was told to go to to meet his clients.One by one they came and one by one he sent them away happy that night he had made around 100,ooo yen for his father.He met his Father later on passing him the money which made him feel like scum.

When he arrived home he went straight to be ignoring everyone calling his name.

"Whats wrong with him?"

"Beats me."

"Ahh when did you get here Miichan."

"I snuck in!"

Yuki coudnt believe the speed this girl had so she shook her head.

"Your a baka Miichan what did you do this time?"

"I sort of well erm 'borowed' some money and didnt pay it back."

"Baka."

"Dont call me a baka Tomochin!"

Tomochin just continued to tease the poor Miichan.

"Anyway bagsey not making dinner!" Mayu shouted

"Me 2!" Yuko said upset in the kitchen whipping the flour off her nose from her failed anniversy cake again.

"Me 3!" Koji said walking into the kitchen to see Yuko put whatever caused her to be upset in the bin and just comforted her girlfriend.

"Me 4!" Miichan said taking and energy drink from her pocket which quickly hyped her up causing her to try and kiss Takamina.

"Me 5!" Tomochin said struggling to try and get Miichan away from Takamina which in the end back fired.

"Me 6!" Takamina said who was now trying to get Miichan away from Tomochin.

"Me 7!" Rena said who made the mistake of flicking Miichan when she is hyped beacuse she is now being chased up the stairs.

"Ahh i already made it once so unfair." Yuki moaned going into the kitchen making kattsudone when they all eat before the noise could even go off to tell them to sleep they where all tucked into there beds sound asleep.

End of chapter

I hope you enjoyed and like there cospaly

what do u think of Kai's new 'Job'

please comment thanks for reading

if u have suggestions for there cosplay tell me and put a pick up of them

also the same as before can someone put there pics up for me sorry about that

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #23 on: April 05, 2012, 01:29:37 PM »
Oh oh Kai is in middle of bad business
It would be awesome a cafe with AKB in cosplay ah~

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #24 on: April 05, 2012, 02:15:18 PM »
 :angry: what the ... What kind of father would give there child such job!! :angry:

I'm angry right now!!!! Pls. Update more thjank you:)
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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #25 on: April 05, 2012, 02:18:30 PM »
Wow that's a shock kai a  drug dealer  :shocked and thanks for answering the question and one more question Erm what's a cosplay? Oh and thanks for update keep it up :)

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #26 on: April 05, 2012, 03:33:48 PM »
Wow that's a shock kai a  drug dealer  :shocked and thanks for answering the question and one more question Erm what's a cosplay? Oh and thanks for update keep it up :)

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #27 on: April 05, 2012, 04:14:38 PM »
@ Nakamii Thank you

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #28 on: April 05, 2012, 04:18:12 PM »
No Problem.. xD
@RobyN: Since you're fast at updating, Don't update Chapter 6 before I comment about Chapter 5 yet... ROFL.
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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #29 on: April 05, 2012, 04:33:11 PM »
okay no worrys Nakamii-san i will wait till you comment =)

i havnt writ it yet lol im watchin mike and molly so i will write it after its finished so no probs there Nakamii-san =)

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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #30 on: April 06, 2012, 11:26:03 AM »
Ah, You just Impressed me with your Awesome Story again...
Let me tell you that, At first I haven't read the full story.. so that I can't comment... Even thought sometimes i'll just comment without reading the story, first. Lmao
So, where do I start.. Okay, maybe I'll make a long comment... But, not that Long.. Just, a bit long comment.. coz I just feel like I really want to make one...

Oh My, Kai and Minami's Daddy is such a... BAKA! He's like already out of His Mind... How can a Father Employ His OWN Son with such a...Bad Job. Really, Their Father is Awful...  if I have such-a-stupid Father like that, I'll F*ckin' Kick his Ass... So, He know that he should think of his own child's Future than That F*ckin' Stupid Bussiness...I'm lucky to have father that Love me.

Oh, KojiYuu's Moment were So...CUTE! And, I like how their Relationship developing... It's like they fallen each other in NO TIME..Yuuchan is So Cute! Ne, Yuuchan, Can I Hug you? Oh my, Yuuchan kissed Koji! I Like it.. Kiss! Kiss! I say, "Yuuchan, I want a kiss too!" Then, Yuuchan says "Sure...In your Dream!" LOL! Ah, I can't even imagine all about it... If Someday I Got a Kiss from The-Cute-Pervert-Squirrel in My Dream, I would really Pleased! Even if It's in Dream, Isn't it wonderful? The Most Wonderful! <3 Oh, They Skipped Class... Such a Lazy Kid..

YukiRena's Scenes is Sweet! They Skipped class too.. They Lied... They say that They're 'Sick'... Such A Good Excuse...xD And, CUTE Rena! I Like Childish Rena... Have the Ice Cream all over Her Face.. And, Yuki wiped it...... With her Hand. No. Why don't you Kiss Rena, Yuki?! Lol! Blushing Rena is Cute too! I wonder what's Yuki's Reaction about Blushing Rena... She must be Think that Rena's Super Cute..

I'm not really goin' to comment anything about Mayuyu's Scene... Coz, It's so Short... and, I don't really know what should I say about that..

When I start to Read the 'Japanese History Class', and Continue Downward.. I though it says 'Rena and Kai'.. So, I wonder "Eh?! Rena? I thought she was with Yuki!'. But then, I read it again and felt relieved.. It's Ren not Rena... What a Disappointment Ah! The Girls tried to Flirt with Kai... When there's no Mayu! It's Obvious! If Mayu was there, Then There would be a Girl-War!

Okay, now I'm enough with The-Comment-About-All-Scenes-Without-Cosplay Thing..

@Cosplay:
Yay! Finally, I can comment about Their Cosplay!
Ne, RoByN.. Tsuna's not from X-Burners... Instead, X-Burners is One of Tsuna's Poweful Attack/Power..Tsuna's from Katekyo Hitman Reborn..
And, I don't have any suggestion for their's Cosplay...
Here's The Picture:
Ren=               Mayu=             Yuko=            Koji=                Kai=                Yuki=              Rena=             Tomochin=      Takamina=

Okay, Here's Mayu Cosplaying Mio:

DONE!
Btw, Update Soon!
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Re: You 5/4/12 chapter 5
« Reply #31 on: April 06, 2012, 02:43:00 PM »
Replys to everyone :

@Kahem : I agree there should be a cosplay akb cafe that would be fun the only problem is that it would be in japan in not in the Uk which means i would not be able to actually see or meet them =( Be so good if one opened in liverpool though lol

@Saeyukilover : Im sorry that it made you angry and everything will be explained later on

@Farquhar97 : Since Nakamii-san already explained i dont need to lol Btw you cant end your fic i still have to meet Atsuko

@Nakamii : lol i love your long comment sorry about the mistake with Kai's cosplay coz ive never really seen the one you where on about i know how you feel about there dad as well coz i would beat his ass if mine was like that luckly he aint and you wont like what he does in this chapter i agree Kojiyu scenes are cute i always wanted them to be like that lol as for Mayu's scenes they will be longer later on i am more focused on Kai and Takamina at the moe and Rena Yuki you will love what happens in other chapters to them.
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chapter 6

School the thing Rena loved but hated at the same time she loved the way people worshiped the floor her and her friends walked on she loved the attention she got the way they all lived toghter the way that she was number one in the deparment she studied.
The things she hated where the fact school took up most of her day 5 times a week the way Yuki would give people everyone attention but her except on those special acessions like when they got ice cream toghter and yer they share a room an sometimes played pranks on eachother but they never really talked which dissapointed Rena they had never had a serious conversation.She really liked Yuki hell she was sure she loved her but she didnt want to scare the girl by saying it some things where more important to Rena like Yuki's feelings.

In the past Yuki had countless of boyfriends each time Rena had got jelous but she never tried to show it infront of Yuki she wasnt going to give up on her but she was going to let her figure her feelings out for people.

As for Tomochin she hated school altoghter the only thing she liked about where her friends the fact she lived with her friends and the fashion course the school provied other wise she skipped alot of classes that is when she didnt have Takamina to drag her to them saying she wasnt going to let her best friend get kicked out of school leaving her which in the end made Tomochin feel guilty.As the thought of leaving Takamina's side made her upset.She crawled out of her bed feeling sick and started crawling to the kitchen to be dragged up by her small best friend.Takamina looked down at her fashion queen friend with a worried expression attached to the useal cheery face.

Before Takamina could ask what was wrong Tomochin ran to the bath room makin barf sounds Takamina rushed behind her tieing her hair back and took some medichen out of the cuboard then gave it to Tomochin there was no way that Tomochin was going to school and neither was Takamina she was going to look after the girl who was currently throwing up again.

Suddenly everyone was either in or out side the bathroom trying to help the sick Tomochin who was literally green because of how bad she felt.Everyone except Tomochin looked at Takamina giving her the your-not-staying-off-2 look which she just nodded saying that she was.They all rolled there eyes when ever Tomochin or Takamina was ill the other would stay off to look after the other even if everyone tried to pursue them not to saying they can look after them selves they still refused.

Eventually everyone left leaving the pair alone.Takamina pulled the girl to her bed and layed her down Tomochin instently fell back asleep.Takamina tucked the sick girl in her bed then headed to the kitchen where she made soup and made her a glass of milk placing them on a tray walking into Tomochins room and placing it on her desk when she heard someone moan her name.

"Takamina."

She stopped herself from walking out of the room but before she could check if Tomochin had woken up there was a knock at the door.She looked through the peep whole to see her father standing there.Opening the door her father came in side with ou being invited.

"No one else here?"

"Yer Tomochin is but she is asleep."

Her fathers expression changed he had a worried one on.

"Erm well you see i need to talk to you you cant tell your brother."

Takamina complaied and motined for her father to carry on.

"Well you see the company has taken a rather bad turn and i need your help."

"What do you need me to do?"

"Well i need you to sell this."

He handed his daughter a package which she opened her eyes widened as she look up to face her father.

"Drugs you want me to sell DRUGS!"

"Sshhhhh keep you voice down dont you see this is the only way for our family to survive we need the money do you want to switch schools and move to a completely diffrent country!"

Takamina was speechless she didnt know what to do she coudnt move away not from her friends not from Tomochin there bond is strong enough to get through moving yer but she didnt want to leave and she didnt want to be the one that made Kai leave Mayu.

"Fine but i dont want to."

"Great here this will be where you sell first be careful."

Her father left leaving her standing still in the middel of the dorm when Tomochin came in rubbing her eyes bringing the bowl and glass that was once filled with milk and soup.Tomochin placed them in the dish washer and stood at Takamina's side.She tried shaking her but nothing worked Takamina was as still and silent as a statue.She tugged on Takamina's arm it didnt work so she kissed her.Takamina's cheeks went brighter than the sun Tomochin had kissed her she tilted her head up and to the side to see Tomochin but she was facing away hideing an equaly brighter blush.

Meanwhile outside Takamina's and Kai's father called up some one from his work.

"Hello mr Takahashi is everything taken care of?"

"Sort of Kai wasnt there so i tricked my daughter into selling aswell."

"Your very pressiuve mr Takahashi you should inform your son that he doesnt have to sell tonight."

"Will do bye Gikwang."

Looking at the time he was sure that since his son wasnt there then he was in class so he sent him a quick message sayin that he didnt need to sell today as the clients where out of town.He then left the dorm and school.
Back inside the dorm Tomochin was just as silent now as Takamina although she was happy she got her out of the weird trance she was in now it put her in one just as bad because all she could think is that Takamina's lips tasted like cherrys.But before she could say anything Takamina wasnt by her side anymore except in the kitchen holding a package in her hands texting someone.

(Tomochin pov)

I walked into the kitchen asking Takamina what was in the package only to be blanked by the latter.This made me angry this was the first ever time she had blanked me i had never done that to her so why was she doing it to me.Was it because i kissed her?
Once again before i could doing anything she walked past me looking serious i didnt know what was wrong with her but whatever it was i think the kiss might have made her forget about for a moment.

"Takamina whats wrong?"

"Nothing i cant go to work tonight since your better can you cover for me?"

"Yer sure bu-"

"Thanks your a life saver im going to buy you some more medichen i will be back later."

I was going to call her back but she ran out whats wrong with her ?

(End of Tomochin's pov)

Takamina ran out of the house at full speed her father had texted her saying that a client wanted there 'sherbet' early she had no choice in the matter if she didnt he said that he would take her out of the school to save money.She coudnt say that she hated her father but it wasnt love she felt for him at this moment.

She checked the text one more time to see where the location was when she found it she stood there looking like an idiot until finally someone arrived.The man handed money in return for the 'sherbet' and left.Takamina looked at the dirty money she was handed counting it to see if she was given the right amount.

"1,000 2,000 ............60,000.......90,000....100,000 yup all there unfortently."

She would have just given this to the guy for free if he had asked she didnt want something like this on her concious not now not ever.She asked a stranger what time it was to be answred with 7:00 she coudnt believe she had been out so long she had only told Tomochin that she would be back after she got some medichen another text was then recived from her father.

To : Takamina
Subject : No need
Sweetie you can go to your work
today the others cancelled dont worry
will contact you tommorow bye
From : Father
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When she read it she typed a quick a reply and sent it then went straight to work when she got there everyone was in there cosplay.

Ren = Saiyuki reload's Genjo

Mayu = D Grayman's Lenalee

Kai = D Grayman's Lavi

Tomochin = Special A's Megumi

Yuki = Lilpri's Natsuki

Rena = Shuffel's Sai

Koji = Clanned's Tomoyo

Yuko = Bakemonogatari's Shinobu

Takamina then got changed into hers:

Full metal panics's Kaname

Everyone seen Takamina come in and get changed and when she looked at them and Tomochin pointed to the board where it had what they where working as today.

Till :
 
Koji

Waiters :
 
Rena
Yuki
Tomochin
Mayu


Greeters :

Yuko
Ren


Cooks :

Takamina
Kai


Tomochin was abit confused as Takamina had asked her to cover for her but then she was probaly abit more curious as to where Takamina was when she said that she was just going to get medichen but then she cant question her now.Yuko seen Takamina walk into the kitchen and quickly ran in after her."Takamina can i switch with you you know why." Takamina nodded to Yuko and passed her an apron walking out to greet the customers.Takamina was sort of thankfull to Yuko because after what she had just been through that she had just been told that she cant tell anyone not even her brother about if anything she didnt really wanna be in the same room with Kai right now.

There day at work finished quicker than lighting and Tomochin took Takamina to the side to talk to her after they had changed.

"I thought you where getting medichen."

"I was but they ran out so i had to go searching for it look her it is."

Takamina pulled out a bottle of medichen and handed it to Tomochin.

"See i would do anything for you."

Tomochin blushed at the statment then she asked something that had been on here mind.

"So you didnt run out or blank me because i kissed you?"

"Nope hehe i enjoyed that but i had to worry about your health come on we have to get home so we dont have to make dinner."
Takamina and Tomochin interwined hands like they usally did and walked home with everyone and said goodbye to Ren.When they arrived the debate began.

"Bagsey not making dinner!" Kai said running and jumping on Yuko's back screaming piggy back.

"Me 2." Yuko screamed running around the living room with Kai on her back.

"Me 3." Koji said with a hint of jelously in her voice which Yuko quickly caught on to and put Kai down then cuddeled into the side of her girlfriend earning a hump in responce.

"Me 4!" Takamina belowed taking two bottles of water out of the fridge handing one to Tomochin.

"Me 5!" Tomochin said placing the water on her head to try and get rid of her temprature.

"Me 6." Yuki said flicking a tired Rena on the head.

"Me 7!" Rena said trying to swat Yuki's hand away.

Mayu headed in the kitchen taking out everything she could find when an idea popped into her head she took out some wasabie and after she finsihed making the dinner put all the wasabie in it well leaving out her own.When she gave it to the rest everyone sat down they tucked into there meals and scream's where heard from everyone except Mayu.She could see the anger on there faces so she took her dinner and ran into her room locking the door behind her.The others where knocking on it until the noise for bed was heard they all shouted i will get you Mayu then left to get in there beds.

Today was an eventfull day for all of them when there heads hit there pillows the visted dream land dreaming of tommorow.

End chapter

So i hope you all enjoyed

thanks for reading please comment

I know you all hate Kai's and Takamina's father more now

Some one will find out in the next couple of chapters what there dad is making them do

Also a couple will be made

hoping some one puts the pics up for me because your all great help for that

And happy bday to me nan lol

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Re: You 6/4/12 chapter 6
« Reply #32 on: April 06, 2012, 09:57:20 PM »
 And now takamina :angry:

Anyway pls...  :bow: continue updating I love ur fic bythe way :fap

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Re: You 6/4/12 chapter 6
« Reply #33 on: April 06, 2012, 11:56:52 PM »
Wow their dad is twofaced to his own kids that's low and thank for update. I've Got a idea for where u can meet thingy (lol forgot name ) so I'll try write that for u. :) btw tell your nan I said happy birthday and I wish her all the best and don't forget to update other fics as well Meany

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Re: You 6/4/12 chapter 6
« Reply #34 on: April 09, 2012, 01:18:00 PM »
Of course I hate the father!!!!
Great prank Mayuyu by the way lol

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Re: You 6/4/12 chapter 6
« Reply #35 on: April 10, 2012, 09:22:06 PM »
Replys to everyone :

@Saeyukilover : Oh have i got a suprise for you lol hope you like it and trust me there dad will get whats coming to him also thankyou for supporting my fic =D

@Farquhar97 : My nan said thanks and that your a sweet boy lol also cant wait till you update hope you enjoy this one oh and how your gonna love wht happens to there dad

@Kahem : Mayu is smart huh and yer i hate there dad and im writing him lol thanks for supporting the fic =D
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chapter 7

it had been a week since Kai's and Takamina's father had tricked them both into selling drugs and Kai was completely diffrent.He had become distant bad tempered ignorant and was pushing everyone that was close to him away.Takamina however stayed the same only keeping quiet alot more than useal.

Tomochin had noticed Takamina's slight change in behaviour but had stayed quiet thinking that if something was wrong Takamina would have told her already.Mayu coudnt even speak to Kai he never spoke when they where with eachother and when she asked what was wrong an argument would happen so she had practically given up.

Kai was walking the school hallway everyone stopped walking and talking watching the prince like boy walk to class to meet his best friend.As he got to class his best friend Ren appared sitting at there useal desk he sat down next to him neither talked until the teacher came in pairing them togther for a class project.At the end of class both walked the halls when a boy bumped into Kai."Watch where your going idiot!"People around stood still never had they heard Kai speak that way not ever.Ren although shocked by his friends behaviour didnt question it by the looks of things the past week someting bad had happaned an Ren was determined to find out what.

Takamina was sitting in class when her classmates came running in telling her about her brother she just nodded at them Kai had been acting diffrent it coudnt be that he had been put into the same bussiness as her it coudnt be there father had lied.She shook her head confusing Tomochin who had just walked into the shared math.She didnt question Takamina she just sat down as class begun.

Second lesson was always the worst for Rena she hated it the one thing she hated the most was learing english as far as she is concerned she didnt want to go to the Usa or the Uk so she didnt see the point in learing it.(Authors note : Like me in German lol but i picked it a one of my options this year lolz)And plus no one was in her class not even Yuki she hated this lesson so much.She didnt even know why she was taking the stupid thing the lesson began and Rena put her head on the desk thinking that she should catch up on her sleep.

Mayu entred her class room with an icey aura around her no one dared question she sat down at her desk giving glares to all that stared at her scraing them off.Kai had really put her in a bad mood.Shortly after she gave glares small talk was shooting around the class they all where asking what was the matter with her and Kai and other things.But the talking was soon caught off as when Mayu seen who was talking about her she grabbed a ruler that was on her desk then thrown it straight at them silence filled the room Mayu smirked evily then slumped down in her chair giving off a black aura.

Yuko once again decied to skip class and headed to the ft room.She asked the sensei if she could stay there jouring that lesson so that she could work on her cake the sensei hesitentally agreed after she heard who Yuko's next sensei was since she was scared off her.Yuko caused a mess in a matter of seconds so sensei Atsuko had to step in.She could barely contain Yuko but soon enough the cake was made to prefection.But then Yuko's sensei for the lesson she should be having walked in.

"Miss Atsuko why do you have my student in your room?"

"She told me that she was aloud mr Tomo."

Mr Tomo looked down at his pupil shaking his head then he thought he could let it slide just this once.

"Its okay Miss Atsuko i can let it slide it is obviously important."

Mr Tomo left the room leaving miss Atsuko sort of shaking yuko chuckled at the fact that someone could leave a person shaking that but then got told to carry on cooking if she wanted her anniversary dinner to be perfect.

Yuki was bored so asked her sensei to excuse her from the lesson the sensei obliged so she left the class room and the school grounds bumping into someone with short black hair."Im so sorry sir."She quickly apoligazed only to see the person with a frown on his face."Im not a boy."Yuki's eyes widened at her mistake she apoligazed one more time the girl just said that it is okay and then introduced herself."Im Miyazawa Sae nice to meet you."She held her hand out to Yuki who took it and introduced herself sweetly.Yuki offered Sae to walk with her which she agreed to Yuki didnt go to her next lesson as she was to intrested in her new friend.

Koji was running round her class with Miichan because the idiot pair had dranken about 50 enrgey drinks between them the sensei triend everything from bribing them with food to straping them to there seats to keep them still but each thing failed oh how they where going to regret this soon.

By the time the day had eneded they went to work straight away when they got there first they changed into there cosplay.

Koji = Shin Kohimie musou's Bachou

Yuki = Angel beat's Shiina

Kai = Angel beat's Ayato

Ren = Angel beat's Tk

Yuko = Kampfer's Sakura

Takamina = Gosick's Victorique
 
Tomochin = Angel beat's Sekine

Rena = Naruto's Konan

Mayu = Angel beat's Yuri

They looked at the bored to see what they where going to work as.

Till :

Ren

Waiters :
 
Rena
Mayu
Yuki
Tomochin


Cooks:

Yuko
Koji


Greeters :

Kai
Takamina


Also it had a special annocment underneath.

Everyone today will be Korean day this will
also be for the entire next week to
Ren will be performing with his band Nu'est today
You will all be peforming next week
So refresh your heads with the langue
love
Meetan

They all looked at Ren he smiled but before they all went to the seprate jobs and put the sign saying open up he took Kai by the wrist and told him to lesson to the words of the song carefully since he knew they all understood it.
Finally it was time for Ren's preformance he stood up from the till an got changed into a badboy outfit heading to the stage where his band was.

"Hello im Ren of Nu'est."

"Hello im JR of Nu'est."

"Hello im Aron of Nu'est."

"Im Nu'est's Minhyun."

"And im the leader of Nu'est Baekho."

Then there performance began.

(You need to listen an read the subs of this to get where Ren is coming from thanks everyone oh ren is the one that wears pink shoes and has the pink top on another bit.)



As it ended everyone was clapping Kai was stood still listening to the message of the song he had to trust Ren with his secret he had to.Takamina had listened to the song and like her brother wanted to tell someone so that was it she was going to tell Tomochin tommorow.

Work finished and they all went home before Ren went his seprate way kai misked up all his corage and told Ren.

"Ren before you go i need to tell you something and i need you to help me and not tell anyone."

Kai explained everything to Ren the rest went home not noticing Kai wasnt with them.Ren coudnt believe it his fist was clenched he coudnt believe Kai's father until he came up with something.

"Kai tell the police and go undercover to take him down."

Kai thought about the idea for a moment and agreed Ren offred to go with him to the police with him now so Kai quickly texted Mayu saying he went home with Ren and he was staying over.

Mayu and the others had just got in when she recived a text.

To : Mayu
Subject : Dinner
Im staying over at Ren's so
i wont be there for dinner
From : Kai

The useal heart wasnt there she pouted for a moment before saying the useal.

"Bagsey not makin dinner." She exlamined.

"Me 2!" Yuko whispred carrying a sleepy Koji on her back.

"Me 3." Mumbled Koji into Yuko's back.

"Me 4." Tomochin said playing rock paper scissors with Takamina.

"Me 5." Takamina shouted as she was just beaten by Tomochin.

"Me 6." Yuki said trying to get Miichan out the house as she had just sneaked in.

"Me 7!" Rena moaned as she just had to drag Yuki off Miichan telling Yuki that Miichan can make the dinner.

Miichan didnt moan she just went to the kitchen to cook as long as she was away from Mariko when she had pms she was okay.
Dinner was served everyone eat and Miichan slept on the couch and everyone else headed to there beds time for there sleep time.

End of chapter

Well i hope you all enjoy Kai's and Takamina's dad is going down lol

Yuki met Sae lolz i wonder whats gonna happen

Ren singing to Kai to basically say come talk to me and i will help

Tomochin is going to get told by Takamina about her dad ahhh

Miichan and pms Mariko will be in next chapter

thanks for readin please comment

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Re: You 10/4/12 chapter 7
« Reply #36 on: April 10, 2012, 09:35:18 PM »
Lol bout time u updated and Yes there gonna take the dad down by going undercover get in and make sure u update soon Thx for the update :)

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Re: You 10/4/12 chapter 7
« Reply #37 on: April 10, 2012, 10:49:28 PM »
stupid father  :pimp: go down!!!!!  :shakeit:

 :fap yuki meeting sae... but what will happen to rena  :?

 :shock: what is this sensie atsuko ? mr tomo ?

miichan is energetic as always  :wahaha:

kojiyuu and tomotaka are so  :luvluv1:

 :mon XD: when u write about ren i didnt know ur talking about ren of NUEST :)

 :mon cam: i really like their song FACE but my oshimen is BAEKHO  :mon yeah:

 :fap :fap :fap i'll wait for your nxt update :)
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Re: You 10/4/12 chapter 7
« Reply #38 on: April 11, 2012, 12:04:31 PM »
OMG!!!! 50 energy drinks?!!!!!
So, Chiyuu and Acchan are teachers, hum interesting hehe

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Re: You 10/4/12 chapter 7
« Reply #39 on: April 11, 2012, 08:53:54 PM »
Replys to everyone :

@Saeyukilover : My oshimen has to be Ren omg i love him if only he was 14 went to my school ohh i would so ask him to be my bf lolz Yuki meeting Sae i will leave what happens to you because i have plans for someone else for Rena mabye hehe yer Miichan energetic ooh how i love hyper hehehe well this chapter is based on Kojiyu its there anversiarry an yer tomotaka or cute to

@Kahem : Actually Mr Tomo is Tomo from vistlip my pro pic sry for the confusion and yer Atsuko a teacher lol there wont be much more about her sry bout that there might be though coz i might do a special chapter about her and the students since she graduating Akb

@Farquhar97 : Yer the dad is going down lol remeber our deal i update so do you lol
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Chapter 8

"Ahh what time is it?"

"Erm its 6 bout time you woke up though the police called just before about what you told them last night."

"6 in the morning ahh and what did hey say?"

"They are going to let you go undercover and you need to meet up with them later."

Kai nodded at Ren and left the guest bed room with Ren following breakfast was already made and on the table with a note off Ren's mother saying enjoy.Then both tucked into there delicous breakfasts.

At the dorm one little squirral was already up preparing everything for her and her girlfriends 2 year anniversary.Looking at the time Yuko seen that it was half 6 she ran down to her work place to set everything up for her preformance that Takamina Tomochin, Rena, Yuki and Mayu had been helping her with in secret for a while now.She was thankfull to all of them she set up the music and put the costumes in the back then left for school.

When she got there she headed straight to register arrivaing in register the others gave her a look asking if everything was set up she gave them a thumbs up making them sigh in relife.Koji then went straight towards her squirral hugging her saying happy anniversary Yuko smiled and repated the words to Koji who pulled out a long slim box and passed it to Yuko.Yuko opened the box to see a braclet with a heart at the end she kissed Koji.

"You will get yours tonite."

Koji nodded taking her girlfriends hand in her own so register could begin with out any staring at them with jelous or envious eyes.It ended and Yuko went to acting class.It went perfect no mistakes in her preformance the sensei could only clap at her and gave her the half term grade which was the highest in the class.

Class eneded and the bell signaled for everyone to head to the next one Yuko had English next so she went as quickly as she could so she coudnt get on the bad side of Miss Sooyoung the skinshin who would literally try and eat you if you where late.Luckly she got there in time and sat in her seat to be board for the next hour.

Finally break came and Yuko ran from the school grounds with the 5 who where preformaning with her.They went inside so they could talk to Meetan about preformaning.

"Sure didnt i put on the board you all have to perform it just doesnt count for the others though."

"Thanks Meetan are you going to be here tonight?"

"Yer i will handel the music for you."

"Thanks."

They all left happy that they where going to be able to preform but abit pissed that it doesnt count for anyone except Yuko because it was her idea.Takamina was walking along side Tomochin on the way back to the school grounds and saw this as an oppertunity to tell her about what her father is making her do.

"Tomochin i need to tell you something."

"What is it?"

"Well my father he came to visit when you where ill a-"

"I already know i over heard you i was hoping that you would tell me on your on though."

"Really?"

"Yer but i dont see what i can do."

Takamina was relived that someone knew but was dissapointed that Tomochin didnt have any advice for her.Before she coul say anything else they where at school and had to go to there seprate lessons.She Jush had to wait till tonight.

Now it was time for work to begin they changed into there cosplay and checked the board for there work postions.

Takamina = Working's Taneshima

Yuko = Chu-bra's Haruka

Yuki = Amagami's Haruka

Tomochin = Fortune arterial's Erika

Koji = Amagami's Risa

Mayu = Amagami's Tsukasa

Kai = Dance of the vampire bund's Akira

Ren = Fortune arterial's Iori

Rena =  Soro no woto's Kureha

And there posts where :

Till :

Yuki

Greeters :

Ren
Mayu


Cooks :

Tomochin
Rena

Waiters :

Yuko
Koji
Takamina
Kai


They all went to where they where put and switched the sign as useal as soon as the did the cafe was filled with custormers.And then finally it was time for Yuko and the others to perform Meetan got on the stage first to introduce them while they got changed.

"Hello everyone thanks for coming as you know this is Korean week so our employs are going to preform everday i hope you enjoy."

Meetan ran off the stage and put on the projecter as pictures of Koji started to come up on the back on the stage.
Then just over one of them it said :

Happy anniversary Nyan-Nyan
I love you


Koji coudnt believe it then she noticed all the girls where gone and now on the stage dressed in the outfits of BEAST her eyes widedned then the musice began playing.

(So Yuko and the others are singing the song beneath this please listen to it if you wanna get the bits after it also they will be singing like this : Yuko = Yoseob's bits Tomochin = Kikwang's bits Takamina = Jun Hyung's bits Rena = Dong woon Yuki = Doo Joon and Mayu = Hyun Seung's bit thanks oh also they are dressed the way the BEAST boys are in this and do the dance)



Koji ran on stage as the song finished jumping on Yuko giving her an almost suffercating hug.Yuko recprecated the hug and kissed Koji on the cheek.

"Theres more the others are going out for a meal while i cook for you then your getting your present."

Koji coudnt stop smileing everyone made there way off stage and all the girls and boys started going crazy over them as they got back to work Koji coudnt love Yuko more than she did right at this moment she coudnt wait for tonight.

Work ended and the others went for a meal Yuko took Koji's hand in hers and walked her back to the dorm.When they got there Yuko opened the door blind folding Koji before she did so she guided her to the table where rose petals covered it candels where lit and the food was just about ready to be served.She took the blind fold off Koji and the look on her girlfriends face made her smile she ran to the kitchen putting the food on the plates and brought it to the table placing one infront of Koji and the other onfront of her seat.And just before she sat down she pulled out a necklace and placed it on Koji's neck.It had Koji's name written on it and was solid gold.

This was the perfect anniversary for sure koji got up from her seat and kissed her girlfriend then sat back down.There meal was amazing Yuko had done great then it was dessert."I made dessert i practiced everday for this to be perfect today and i think once before was the only day it didnt burn."Koji laughed at what Yuko said and was then presented with a magnifacent cake when she tasted it she realised it was her faviourate chocolate cake.

Yuko looked at the time seeing what time it was she cleared and washed everything and her and Koji layed on the couch watching a film togther untill both fell asleep cuddeled togther.

End of chapter

Yuko sooo romantic ahhhh

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also there will be other preformances just to let you know.

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