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Re: Rainy days CHAP 2 UPDATE 29/6/12 kojiyuu
« Reply #40 on: June 30, 2012, 10:26:08 AM »
@Sakura_Drop_ : Its because your a better and much more cooler writer

@Adam : Im fine now all better lol but you wont ur fear is in this chap

Colour of her soul

chap 2 - experiments

How to use the death note one :

1.The human whose name is written in this note shall die.

2.This note will not take effect unless the writer has the person’s face in their mind when writing his/her name. Therefore, people sharing the same name will not be affected.

3.If the cause of death is written within the next 40 seconds of writing the person’s name, it will happen.

4.If the cause of death is not specified, the person will simply die of a heart attack.

5.After writing the cause of death, details of the death should be written in the next 6 minutes and 40 seconds.

Interesting Mayu thought while reading the note books rules over again Rena watched the girl carefully this wasnt the type of person she expected to pick up the death note.She always thought the death note would be found by someone stupid but no this was the complete oppisate this girl was taking the time to read the rules and even ask questions and the best thing she is actually using it.

How to use 2 :

1.The notebook shall become the property of the human world, once it touches the ground of (arrives in) the human world.

2.The owner of the note can recognize the image and voice of the original owner, i.e. a God of death/Shinigami.

3.The human who uses the notebook can neither go to Heaven nor Hell.

The more Mayu reads the more intrigued she got this really was the perfect way to protect someone without getting caught she could get away with anything she wanted anything at all.

How to use 3 :

1.If the time of death is written within 40 seconds after writing the cause of death as a heart attack, the time of death can be manipulated, and the time can go into effect within 40 seconds after writing the name.

2.The human who touches the death note can recognize the image and voice of its original owner, a Shinigami, even if the human is not the owner of the note.

Hold up manipulated this could be fun.Mayu skipped to the front black pages of the note book and writ three peoples names init.

Adam Farquhar
10:35pm
Gets caught and took to prison
his cell has rats
rat bites him he writes i can no longer live on the wall
Rats then eat his lifeless body

Lee Choi
10:35pm
Runs away
gets hit by an on coming truck

Kai Matsui
10:35
burt to death

Three names three different ways to die now all she had to was see if they work she turned on the news like always and awaited to see if the note book was telling the truth.

She then opened it a reads some more rules.

How to use 4 :

1.The person in possession of the Death Note is possessed by a god of death, its original owner, until they die.

2.If a human uses the note, a god of death usually appears in front of him/her within 39 days after he/she uses the note.

3.Shinigami, the original owners of the Death Note, do not do, in principle, anything which will help or prevent the deaths in the note.

4.A Shinigami has no obligation to completely explain how to use the note or rules which will apply to the human who owns it unless asked.

Mayu looked at Rena who just shrugged in responce Mayu stuck her tounge at her then went down stairs for a snack.Rena followed her down the stairs floating in the air behind then she seen a circule brown shaped thing on top of the table with squares in the top.

"What is that?" She asked pointing to it only to be blanked by Mayu who then grabbed a packet of crisps then the thing Rena pointed to then went back upstairs.Rena quickly flew after her and through the door behind Mayu.

Mayu locked the door behind "This is Melon pan eat it love it enjoy it dont bother me with it." She finally answered throwing the melon pan at Rena who caught it then shooved it into her mouth.Her face lit up this was the most amazing thing she had ever tasted in her life (death gods dont need to eat) The news women then began to speak.

"Today three young boys at the age of 17 died at 10:35pm the police are wondering wheather the deaths are connected and have decied to get a special officer that goes by the name A on the case the familys would like to keep the boys names a secret but will reveal how they died." And the women continued to speak and said what Mayu writ in the note book.

Intersting very intersting...

To be continued .....

A/N : thank you for reading i know it was a crap update but i got adam back lol thanks for reading please comment and tell me where to improve.

« Last Edit: July 27, 2012, 01:11:41 AM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
« Reply #41 on: June 30, 2012, 10:52:14 AM »
No, I think it's because they are the smexy, funny, and easy-communicating couple. For example, I find it hardest to write about SKE couples, it takes a lot of time... But oh well  :nervous And thanks for praising me  :bow: :bow:

I really love your plots. This death note story cracked me up, poor farquhar  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :nervous

Rena-sama as melon pan loving shinigami is  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

And Mayu is sure one clever death note user  :glasses: :ding: :hiakhiakhiak:

Thank you for this update  :bow: :bow: :bow:

You're a good writer too, considering your age, so don't worry. With time and practice you might get a hold of writing about AtsuMina  :on GJ: :bingo:
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Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
« Reply #42 on: June 30, 2012, 01:21:27 PM »
 Yukiii stop your mayuyu from doing that! Kyaa

RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
« Reply #43 on: June 30, 2012, 01:35:20 PM »
Ahhh robyn ur horrible to me lol anyway good chapter part from me gettin killed by rats meanie btw it might be 1-1 lol but I'll do somethin elese to u at one point lol

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Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
« Reply #44 on: June 30, 2012, 05:11:04 PM »
i love it..
the shinigami eat melon pan XD

continue pliz~


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Re: colour of her soul CHAP 2 UPDATE 30/6/12 mayuki
« Reply #45 on: July 01, 2012, 02:35:49 PM »
@Sakura_drop_ : Thankyou im glad that im good for my age also yer hopefully i can write atsumina better and i wannna be like you at writing =) and yer poor adam

@Kurogumi : Nope i think Yuki will make it worse

@Adam : Yer im horriable but hey thats me

@Yukofan : Thank you

chap 2 - meeting and training with 2NE1

5 days later

Takamina and Rena where practising rapping in english everytime they got one word wrong they rewinded the song and practiced that one word or verse furiously none stop until they got it perfect.

"Starships where ment to fly hands up and touch the sky............cant stop coz where so highhhh lets do this one more time x2 !"
The two sang trying the absolute best to pronounce all of the words correct.The song ended and the pair put on lip gloss by Lil Mama.They clapped there hands in tune with the beat and started to try and do the steps of the dance slowly obvioulsy with difficulty as they have only seen the dance once.

Miichan stood there watching the pair before walking out of the dance rehearsel room and headed to the vocal room."What song there practing rapping in english so i should start and try and sing korean i suppose where not aloud to practice lies and Haru Haru unless there is two of us or all of us so lets see."She spoke to herself scrolling down her phones song list and looking at the songs she recently downloaded last night to help with her Korean.She clicked on Beasts song bad girl and music filled the silent room.

She started dancing and jumping around the room mindlessly as she sang the lyrics in perfect pitch and tune like this wasnt her first time singing in Korean at all.

"jakkuman ni saenggage michyeo michyeo bad girl

tteonaji mallago nege sorichyeodo

dwidora bojido annneun bad girl

down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down

(I wanna come to me girl)

down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down
down down we gotta get down

(I wanna come to me girl)

na honjaman tto seulpeohae naege dorawajwo"

She herself was suprised at her skill but also proud that she could pull it off so skillfully in such a amount of time.She gave her self a smug little smile then started practing again.

Meanwhile Yuko was missing her Nyan Nyan in the past 2 days they werent able to see eachother do to her busy shedule and Yuko's pre preparation to meet and practice with 2NE1.But she quickly snapped out of her sad mind set she was going to be one of the main vocals instead of mopping she had to practice if she wanted to get better and win Korea over.

She got a video up 5Dolls like this like that on her phone and watched the dance version over and over again listening to the lyrics and watching the dance with a keen ear.She whispered the lyrics to herself and put the video back to the bits where she wasnt sure of.

She watched Chan Mi's moves more than the others why because she was amazed by the girls voice (A/N : Honestly i am i love her range that she can go to oh and she is my fav in 5Dolls and Co-ed school)"One two three." She labelled the dance moves as she moved to the beat.

As for Mayu she was in seprate room practacing dancing she put a chair in the middle of the room and started the music player.
"I did did it for love!" Boa's voice sang occasionally Mayu missed a step and the beat but she soon got back into the rhytme after all she had been practing and studying this dance for a while now.

When the song finished she heard clapping from behind.

"I know you where watching me for a while now im not stupid."

"Should you talk to you seniors like that?"

"Not really but i havnt seen your face so how do i assume your my senior or someone younger than me."

"Turn around then."

"Or you could head out of the room and wait till we meet again honestly i like my idea better."

"Fine see you later."

"You sound confident."

"Its because i know i will."

With that the mysterious voice said its last sentence and dissappeared from the room.Mayu shook her head not the least bit concerned or puzzeled about what the voice said why beacuse she didnt care.She took her towel in her hand and wiped the sweat off her head then went to Takamina and Rena as it was time for all of them to meet 2NE1.

When she got there everyone looked amazingly tired but there faces soon stopped that look because right behind Mayu was the 4 figures they have been waiting for.

Mayu was confused at first until there was a tap on her shoulder so she turned and faced a short haired beauty of a girl in Mayu's eyes an angel."Told you we would meet again." Her eyes widened no way no way no way the person in that room with her all that time was 2NE1's Minzy she mentally cursed herself to actually turn around and see who it is next time.

A hand then was waving infront of her face scaring her slightly but she just shook it off ignoring the comment from before and sat next to her friends who just looked at her with a wtf face.Which she replied "Dont ask." They just nodded in return.

"Im 2NE1's Maknae Gong Minzy nice to meet you all." She introduced herself smiling "Looks old if you ask me she is younger than you." Mayu remarked causing all eyes to fall on her and Minzy to laugh."Ive found my match im going to like you." She retorted making Mayu just give her a glare making Minzy laugh more."Im 2NE1's kiss ass sexy vocalist Park Bom nice to meet you." She bowed her introduction making all of them giggle."Im the 4d fake maknae Sandara Park but just call me Dara."She said poseing cutely."Im the leader of 2NE1 Lee Chaerin just call me Cl please take care of us all."

After the four introduced themselves they asked the Big bang girls to tell them about them selves."Im Akb48's leader Takahashi Minami im 145.5 cm one of the smallest in the group if not the smallest member just call me Takamina."

"Im Oshima Yuko the jokester of Akb48 also one of the smallest at 152 cm."

"Im Matsui Rena the pale skinned beauty of Ske48 nice to meet you."

"Im the cake lover of Akb48 Minegishi Minami just call me Miichan."

"Im Watanabe Mayu."

Knowing that was the most they where going to get from Mayu they left the introductions there and started the song.
"This is the beat to Haru Haru good right?" 2NE1 asked getting little yers and such from the 5 girls."Okay now for the dance." The 2NE1 girls shown them the basic steps quickly and the 5 girl mirrored there moves without much difficulty except that is for Takamina.Since Minzy was ment to look after Takamina she took it upon herself to help her until she got after a couple of minutes she had it but her moves werent as slick as what the others looked like.

After a little bit more time the 2NE1 girls had decided to teach them all the entire dance so after hours they had learnt the dance and then started to learn lies after a couple of more hours they had both dances done perfectly but tweeks could still be made.
"Lets take a break from dancing we will teach you Korean and the lyrics to the songs now." Cl ordered in which everyone just replied with a "YAY!".Learning the language wasnt as hard as they thought and of course they got some words wrong they where beginners 2NE1 had given them all permission to call them Unnies that is of course except Mayu because where as Cl Bom and Dara had said she could Minzy said no.When asked why she said no she simply answered "She needs to earn my respect first."This annoyed Mayu but there was nothing she could do its not like she could force Minzy to let her call her Unnie and why would see want to anyway.

By the time they finished learning everything it was 3am in the morning never in there life had they practiced so hard or freely to this time when they had started at 8am the morning of the day before.Even 2NE1 had left at 10pm telling them all to get rest and come back the same time the next day but they all ignored them and continued determined to make this the best debut Korea had seen.They where more use to the steps of the dances and more famililar with the lyrics somehow they had a connection to each song in there own special way which made them want to do better all the more.

"Lets rest for 5 minutes." Rena said dropping to the floor panting and sweat sliding down her face and with in seconds the other where sat down or lying on the floor with her.

"We have to do are best no matter what." They all said in unison.

the next day

2NE1 walked into the practice rooms to find the 5 girls asleep on the cold floor drenched with sweat they chuckeled to themselves and left to go to a certain shop for them.

The 5 girls woke up to see it was 8am all of them shot to there feet looking for there 2NE1 unnies but found them no where to be seen figuring the where late they switched the music on again and started singing/rapping the lyrics while dancing there hearts out.

About 10-15 minutes later 2NE1 arrived with bags of clothes and food.

"Here." Minzy shly looked away as she handed Mayu the bag.Mayu opened it cautiously  to find it had black sweat pants with red stars on the side of the left leg a gray top white pumps and a black jacket simular to the pants.Along with that her favourite food and drink and chewing gum at the bottom of the bag.She looked up at Minzy her face a slight tint of red on her cheeks "Thankyou." Mayu quietly mumbled."Sorry didnt hear you." Minzy spoke placing a hand to her ear wanting Mayu to say that again but instead she got a flick to the nose.

Everyone got clothes and there favourite drink and food so qucikly they all changed eat and drank eat some chewing gum brused there hair with a brush that Cl had given them then went back to training."Before you all start dancing your going to record today so follow us."

They left the room one by one following there unnies except for Mayu who stayed for a second as she was thinking but the quickly regained her composer and ran after them all.

They got to the recording studio and was told they were going to record separately then all together they agreed and the first to record was Rena.Everyone heard the muisc dance around the room then Rena's voice followed.She rapped with no mistake and vocals perfect the song finished then the next started finally the second song felt like it finished to quick but that was just beacause of the fun they where having and Rena left the booth high fiving the other members now it was Takamina's turn she took a deep breath then entered the recording booth.Once again the room was filled with  music and they all danced in there seats mouthing the lyrics.All of them where suprised to hear Takamina's skills at rapping they could defenitly tell who was going to be a fan favourite.

Once she finished recording the two Miichan skipped into the booth and started singing with the beat and jumping in the booth causing the others to laugh hard at her she just pulled her tounge at them and continued pratting about.After her was Yuko whos voice sounded like an angel her concentration was impecable to the others which impressed 2NE1 alot.Finally Mayu had her turn to record like the others it was perfect she even suprised them all with her vocal power which doesnt get shown that often but she didnt mind this was her time to shine.

When she finished 2NE1 practically thrown the rest into the room with her so they could recored the song together.
Finally after a long amount of recording they where free to practice there dancing so the rushed back to the dance studio and danced till there bodys broke down.

Akimoto-p then came marching into the dance studio with a smile on his face whilst clapping his hands."I just heard the recording you all sound amazing thank you for helping them 2NE1." He said joy filled in his voice "Now practice makes perfect." With that he exited the room silently whistleing the songs to himself.

To be continued ....

A/N : i really like this ahahaha next chap will be the week before the debut comment and tell me what you all liked and what i need to improve thank you for reading.

Oh and adam sumit bad just happaned come on fb as soon as u read this please i need someone to talk to

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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
« Reply #46 on: July 01, 2012, 03:00:53 PM »
Oh, this was interesting! Oc, Yuko-sama is like an angel, and oh i so imagine Taka rocking da house with her rapping  :wub: :wub: :wub:

Thanks for this update  :bow:
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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
« Reply #47 on: July 01, 2012, 04:29:36 PM »
Omg how could they be up till 3 o clock lol and Lov the bit were bommie has a bow lol update soon and I am

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Re: Akb48 = Big bang CHAP 2 UPDATE 1/7/12
« Reply #48 on: July 02, 2012, 11:49:04 PM »
The school life of AKB48

Yuko : Ahhhhhhhh (trips and rolls down stairs)

Haruna : Yuko are you okay?"

Yuko : I dont think i will survive unless (Pretends to be dieing)

Haruna : Unless what Yuko ? (Worried)

Yuko : You let me touch your boobs! (Pervyness shows)

Haruna : PERVERT !! (Smacks Yuko's head)

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*In the libary*

Takamina : Acchan stop it (Pushes Acchan away)

Acchan : Stop being so cold and let me kiss you! (Trys to kiss Takamina again)

Takamina : Acchan i said stop! (Pushes her away again)

Acchan : Just one kiss and i will stop i promise

Takamina : Fine

*Takamina kisses Acchan only to be pulled into a deep kiss and pulled futher away into the libary*

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*Hallway*

Jurina : 8

Mayu : No way 10

Jurina : Your only saying that because she is your girlfriend

Mayu : Oh like you woudnt rate Rena ten if we where rating there butt!

Jurina : Okay okay i understand you no need to be angry okay what about Tomochin?

Jurina and Mayu : 9

*Jurina and Mayu high fived eachother*

Yuki and Rena : What you guys talking about ?

Mayu and Jurina : Nothing (Quickly change the subject)

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*Classroom*

Tomomi : Tomo~~~chin who are you texting ?

Tomochin : Suprise

Tomomi : Tell me please (Sits on Tomochins lap and wraps arms around her neck)

Tomochin : You will know in a second i promise (leans and kisses Tomomi's nose)

*Knock on class room door a man with roses comes in*

Man : Delivery for a miss Kasai Tomomi

Tomomi : Tomochin did you text a flower shop to deliver roses to me ?

Tomochin : Y..y..yer (shyly nods head)

*Tomomi gets up and takes flowers off man walks back sits on Tomochin's lap and kisses her*

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*Canteen*

Miichan : FOOD (starts drooling)

Mariko : Stop drooling (Smacks Miichan)

Miichan : Old women!

Mariko : Who are you calling old Gachapin!

Miichan : Please your so old your memory is in black and white!

Mariko : Idiot!

Miichan : Your so old you have Adam and Eve's autographs!

Mariko : Thats it! (Drags Miichan away from canteen and asks dinner women to not let her back in)

Miichan : Your so cruel (Starts crying in a corner)

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*Gym*

Sae : YES I WIN !

Sayaka : No way rematch !

Sae : No im tired besides Yuki isnt here for me to impress so there is no point

Sayaka : She is with Mayu

Sae : She will be mine (Dreams of a life where herself and Yuki are together)

Sayaka : Well as long as she can dream (Sayaka walks away shaking her head)

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To be continued ..........

should this be continued ?? did you like it ??? Please comment and tell me where to improve and what you liked thanks for reading

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Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
« Reply #49 on: July 03, 2012, 12:06:44 AM »
Yes Robyn I like it because it breaks down the chapter and makes it easier to read but I really think that you carry on with the old way as well because in this way its not Got as much as a story as a long one and I like reading the long chapters lol and Yukos being a bit pervy lol update soon

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Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
« Reply #50 on: July 03, 2012, 12:29:28 AM »
should this be continued ??  IT MUST BE!!! :yep:
did you like it ??? I LOVED IT!!! :heart: :heart: specially the atsumina moments!!!! :thumbsup

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Re: The school life of Akb48 UPDATE 2/7/12
« Reply #51 on: July 03, 2012, 06:20:25 PM »
part 2

*Break time in classroom*

(People talking about a new student)

Yuki : Rena have you heard there is a new girl in school ?
Rena : Yer i wonder what she looks like do you think she is pretty ?
Yuki : Oh here is Mayu why dont we ask her.
Rena : Mayu!

(No ansewer from Mayu)

Rena : Is she ignoring you did you do something wrong on your date last night?
Yuki : What no are date was amazing last night. (waving hands in the air saying no)
Rena : Well you must have if she is ignoring you oh wait she is coming over.
Mayu : Excuse me have you seen Mayu?
Yuki : You are Mayu stop joking its not like you.

(Rena is shocked and cant speak when she sees another Mayu coming in class room)

Girl : Nezumi where you looking for me ?
Nezumi : Yup
Yuki and Rena : Wait what
Nezumi : Oh now i get it im Mayu's twin Nezumi i just came from  Korea the girl next to me is Mayu.
Mayu : You thought she was me come on there is such a big difference
Rena and Yuki : im speechless

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*Other side of class room*

Yuko : Please !! (On knees pleading)
Acchan : Nope
Takamina : I dont wanna die!
Yuko : But she will rape me!!
Takmina : Not my problem
Yuko  : Im your best friend so it is your problem
Acchan : Im her girlfriend and i say no!
Takamina : Ask Haruna (Says half heartly)
Yuko : No way im not letting that old women touch her
Takamina : Thats why im not going you know her obsession with me
Acchan : Go to nurse Megumi yourself
Yuko : Fine but if im not back in 5 minutes tell Haruna i love her (Walks away dramatically)

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*Class next door*

Erena : That is not how you do it
Miho : Yer it is !!
Erena : No way this is the right way (Demonstrates again)
Miho : Lies (Scoffs)
Erena : Fine lets ask Lovetan
Miho : Fine
(Asks Lovetan she demonstartes differently)
Erena and Miho : Wrong !
Lovetan : Right!
*Teacher comes in class*
Miho Erena and Lovetan : Sensei this is how you do the Penguin waddle dance right?!
(Do the dance from Beast's fiction)
Sensei : No it's like this (Shows perfectly)
Erena Miho and Lovetan : Sensei Yoesob is the best (Stars gleaming in there eyes)

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*On roof*

Tomochin : BORED !!

(Lays on the roof on her own phone rings)

Tomochin : Moshi Moshi mother.
Tomochin's Mother : Your skipping class again.
Tomochin : Im not who told you that.(Declines)
Tomochin's Mother : No one told me anything i can see you
Tomochin : See me ??
Tomochin's mother : Look above you

(Tomochin drops her phone her eyes wide then picks phone back up)

Tomochin : You took the helicopter for a spin i see
Tomochin's Mother : Yer now get to class

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*Back in Tomomi's class room*

Tomomi : I want that that and that
(Orders clothes and shoes)
Tomomi : OOOOOOOOOO Tomochin would look good in that (Orders dress)
Sensei : Can you get off my laptop (Trys to pull Tomomi away)
Tomomi : Later pushes sensei away and continues shopping

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*Gym class*

Sae : 1,2....3,4.......5
Sayaka : 10,11,12
(Yuki walks in the gym)
Sae : 6,1000
Sayaka : WTF (Troll face)
(Yuki sees Mayu and runs past ignoring Sae who is doing weights)
(Sae tears in eyes)
Sae : You will be mine
Sayaka : Better luck next time dude

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*Gym class*

Miichan : Give it back !
Mariko : Climb the rope first or your going to fail gym
Miichan : I dont care give it back (Jumps to reach it)
Mariko : Do it
Miichan : Fine
(Climbs rope drops down)
Miichan : Happy ?
Mariko : Yes here you go (Passes back cup cake)
Miichan : I want another prize (Points to lips)
Mariko : If you want that do 50 laps of the gym
(Miichan zooms round gym 50 times)
Mariko : Why coudnt have i said that before it would have been easier than stealing the cupcake (Facepalm)
Miichan : Mariko !! (Jumps up and down whining pointing to lips)
Mariko : Fine here (Kisses Miichan)
Miichan : YYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY

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To be continued ........
Did you like its part 2 of yesterdays i will update past present future tommorow because i havent spell checked it yet comment and tell me what you liked and what i need to improve thanks for reading

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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
« Reply #52 on: July 03, 2012, 07:17:12 PM »
w-wahhh~ 2Mayu?  moreeeeeeee love for Yukirin!!!!!!!!!    its MayuxYukixNezumi pleasssseee? pretty please?  XD :wub:
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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
« Reply #53 on: July 03, 2012, 07:37:45 PM »
Yay Thx for the update its great can't wait till next one lol and. It's dead funny lol

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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
« Reply #54 on: July 04, 2012, 01:29:00 PM »
ROFL* I love how Yuki totally ignores Sae  :rofl:

Hahaha Nezumi! Twins! LOLOLOL

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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 2 UPDATE 3/7/12
« Reply #55 on: July 04, 2012, 09:52:39 PM »

Past present future

chap 3 - im in love



The filming of Akbingo had finished my last episode done im hoping that i will get invited back in the future i dont think i can stay away from everyone for long.I looked around but you where no where to be found when i asked if someone had seen you they just shook there head.I sighed but then the Tomotomo couple came running towards me and with the hands that werent filled with fashion magazines then they dragged me to change.

They thrown a dress at me confusing me but they changed into dresses themselves so i just mirrored there action.There was no one else in the changing rooms with i found odd because usuasly there are still people getting changed at this time i shook the thought from my head an followed Tomotomo where they where taking me.

I followed them to a room that was pitch black why would they take me to a place like this ??

Then all of a sudden lights switched on and people shouted "Suprise!" I really was suprised i never thought they would do something like this for me i could feel tears roll down my cheeks and my head was taking mental pictures for memories.This really would be a story to tell on an interview or to our kids i hope in the future.

Members and staff came foward to congratulate me of graduating and they sad that that was my last episode and just like i wanted they invited me back later on in the year.People where even giving me presents that i never thought would happen.In all this fun joy and laughter i still coudnt catch a glimsp of your tiny body."Acchan if your looking for Takamina she coudnt make it she got called to a photoshoot and a cf but she wanted us to give you this." Tomotomo said with smiles on there faces and handed me a small box and a note.

I opened the box to see the earings i have been wanting for weeks now how did you know i wanted them i only told Yuki and the two of you dont really talk.The earings went perfectly with the dress i was wearing so i put them on right away and then read your note.

To Atsuko,
Sorry that i coudnt make it if Tomotomo didnt tell you i got called to a photoshoot and a cf i really wanted to be there for you.I hope you like the earings i was stressing about what to get you until Yuki told me i really owe her for that.I finish my schedule at 8pm so meet me at the place you confessed i promise i will be there.Ive got to leave for the photoshoot now see you at 8pm.
From Takamina xx

I smiled at the note you left me you really are sweet you know i looked at the time it was 7pm one more hour till i see you again."Like the note?" Miichan asked i just nodded my head over and over making her laugh at me.

about 40 minutes later Yuko came sprinting over to me with Haruna right behind her."Come on where leaving to your secret spot now." Yuko and Haruna say pushing me out the door without giving me a chance to say goodbye to anyone."How do you know where it is?" I asked "Takamina my bestest friend in the world told me where it was how to get there and what time to take you." She boasted what a loyal friend of a squirrel you have there Takamina.

Looks like leaving 20 minutes early payed off because we just got there in time.I ran out of the car they drove me in and thanked them i got to the spot but i coudnt see you.Mabye your schedule over ran i thought looking down to the ground frowning then music started to play.

I coudnt make out what it was propely until i heard it go "Im inlove." It was Narshas im in love one of your favourite songs you always said that song got you thinking of me.Then you came from behind the tree that had our names engraved on it.You waved at me and i charged towards you jumping on you hugging you until atleast half the oxygen left your body.You of course hugged me back and then pulled away seconds later.I was a bit upset but there was nothing i could do since you then took my hand and led me to a blanket that was on the floor.

"Since your going to leave Akb48 soon i wanted to renact the day you confessed to me and do it Takamina style the only difference is that its not midnight but 8pm because you need your sleep you dont have a week off like last time." You say with a slight blush on your face the two of us then sat down on the blanket and cuddeled under the stars.I noticed a projecter infront of us but i didnt say anything until you pointed on a wall behind us and it started playing our live preformances our funniest moments on Akbingo and other shows and pictures appared every now and then.When it finished i had tears in my eyes but before i cried the projecter then shined bright on one spot inpracticular.

You had made one big picture (A/N : Like on demi lovatos give your heart a break music video at the end) of us out of little ones in the shape of a heart.I tackled you down with hugs and kisses the sweetest and most lovely person is mine and that makes me the most happy person in the world.

We ate the food you brought and talked for hours we laughed and flirted with eachother today had to be the best day of my life so far.

I know now i have caring friends and most importantly a very caring and gentle girlfriend called Takamina.

To be continued ....

A/N : Did you all like it i hope so comment and tell me what you thought and what i need to improve oh hope the song went well with the chap.
« Last Edit: July 15, 2012, 02:33:08 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
« Reply #56 on: July 04, 2012, 10:59:24 PM »
Awww  :wub: lol at first tho I didn't think she was showing up at their tree but she did yayay and lol tht song does fit in with the fic nice update :)

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Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
« Reply #57 on: July 05, 2012, 10:13:05 PM »
ahhhh takamina is so sweet!!! :luvluv2:
atsumina FTW!!! :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: past present future chap 3 UPDATE 4/7/12 atsumina
« Reply #58 on: July 06, 2012, 09:14:12 PM »
part 3

*Nezumi's and Mayu's house*

Mayu : Im not talking to you go away
Nezumi : What why what did i do ?? (confused)
Mayu : You know what you did (Annoyed)
Nezumi : I honestly dont know (Re tracks her steps the entire day)
Mayu : I hate you !! (Shouts and there parents run in)
Dad : What is the matter ??
Mum : What did you do ??
Mayu : She left bread crums in the butter
Everyone except Mayu : Huh thats all
Mayu : What do you mean thats all (Storms off)

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*Haruna's house*

Haruna : How could you !???
Dad : What ???
Haruna : You dont know what you did ??
Dad : Nope
Haruna : You ate my mars bar !!
Dad : (Sighs) Haruna honey the wrapper is in your hand and chocolate around your mouth
Haruna : Oh yer i ate it

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*Tomochin's house*

Tomochin : No
Mum : YES
Tomochin : No way
Mum : YES WAY
Tomochin : I hate you
Mum : I love you
Tomochin : If you did why would you bring that into this house (Points to girl in corner)
Mum : She is family
Tomochin : She doesnt look or act like that
Mum : Treat your cousin Nachu with respect
Tomochin : I hate my life (Facepalms)

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*Yuko's house*

Yuko : These are so much better than them
Brother : What know way dad!!
(Dad comes rushing in bedroom)
Brother : Which are better these or these (Points at magaziene)
Dad : Those (Points to the one Yuko was holding)
Yuko : Ha See told you !!! (Laughs victouresly)
Brother : How are we related
Yuko and Dad : Blood  (Points and starts talking about the pictures)
(Mum walks in)
Mum : Why are you looking at female breasts in those magazienes when these are so much better (Throws them all different magazienes)

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*Tomomi's house*

Tomomi : O__o
Mum : O___o
Tomomi : O__________o
Mum : O__________________o
Tomomi : (blinked)
Mum : I win the heels are mine !!

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*Takamina's house*

Takamina : When you feel like there is no way out love is the only way (Sings)
Kai : What you singing sis ??
Takamina : 2NE1's new song i love you
Kai : I love you too but what is the song name
Takamina : I love you
Kai : I know what is the song name
Takamina : I love you
(Kai gets annoyed and walks away)
Takamina : Wtf (Troll face)

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*Sae's house*

Sae : Yuki what you doing (A/N : Sae offered Yuki help with maths)
Yuki : Taking a break this is hard
Sae : Not really
Yuki : Okay look at the question (Gives Sae paper)
Sae : (Sweat drops)
Yuki : See you dont even know (Takes a picture of it and sends it to someone)
Sae : Wht did you do ?
Yuki : Took a picture (Phone beeps)
Sae : Who is it ??
Yuki : Mayu she sent me the answer i love her!!
(Sae walks away and bangs head on wall in dissapointment)

To be continued ....

Sorry i havnt updated other ones all i could do was write these quick ones i have been busy lately will update colour of her soul 2morra hope u enjoyed
« Last Edit: July 08, 2012, 10:21:41 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
« Reply #59 on: July 06, 2012, 09:31:48 PM »
It's aright I like them anyway and lol did u get the bread in the butter from drama

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