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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
« Reply #60 on: July 08, 2012, 09:42:28 PM »
 :hiakhiakhiak: HHAHAAAHAH! Hilarious!

Mayu's house! : Pfft I totally get the bread crums joke  :mon misch:

Haruna's house: Spacing out again  :mon lmao:

Tomochin's house: Aww poor Nachu hahahha  XD

Yuko's house: Oh my the whole family are professional hentai  :rofl:

Tomomi's house:  :lol: Staring contest with her mom over a pair of heels  :rofl:

Takamina's house: Hahaha!

Sae's house: Sae the forever ignored guy  XD
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Re: The school life of Akb48 part 3 UPDATE 6/7/12
« Reply #61 on: July 08, 2012, 10:19:32 PM »
chap 3 - A vs Mayu

The girl paced around back and forth into the room ever since she had took on the case more killings were made every week in the same pattern as before 2 heart attacks and 3 random deaths each highschool students.Why where people so young dieing and why was there no avediance and most importantly who was doing it.

She had searched through thousands of school data bases to see if anyone extra ordinary popped up but no none what so ever.This person she was up against was really smart she only figured out they where in highschool because of the time table they had stopped killing in.The thing she hated most was that people began worshiping the murder calling it Kira apparently all of the people that have been killed bullied kids there age so this made it clear that the killer had to be a victum of bullying or a close friend to those who have experianced it first hand.

"A the killings have changed look."A turned around to face the person who was helping her with the case "What?" A asked and the man pointed to the screen.The deaths had changed 8 people had died in the last 6 hours and jouring the school time "This means that the killer cant be a highschooler." The man said "Wrong Riku the killer is telling us that they can manuplate death also they have someone close in the case check everyones background find out about all there family members and there history dont let any surface be left untouched also we will be now refearing to the killer as Kira okay?"She answered correcting Riku's mistake and flicking her long brown hair over her shoulder."Yes A." Then he left her leaving her with the computers and files to read and check over as she waited for the other members of her team.

Meanwhile at Mayu's house...

"Say Rena this A person really isnt that smart by now you would think that they would have found out i live in Japan."

"I dont get you Humans anyway has anything intresting happaned and where is my melon pan?"

"On my bed and yes it seems i have been given a nickname from the people Rena your now looking at Kira the saviour of bully victums and most importantly Yuki mabye i should move on to bigger better things."

"Kira sounds cool."

"Mayu Yuki is here i will send her up!" Mayu's mother shouted Mayu looked at Rena and immtated zipping her mouth which Rena understood Mayu then unlocked her door then walked back to her laptop."Hey Mayu." Yuki said cheerfully hugging Mayu from behind then kissing her cheek."You seem happy." Mayu says spinning her chair around and dragging Yuki down on to her lap."Ahaha i am very happy thanks to Kira the bullying has stopped everyone is to scared to bully anyone incase they will be next Kira saved me i have a lot to be thankfull for."Yuki says then showered Mayu with kisses all around her face then Mayu nuzzeled her face into the crook of Yuki's neck causing the latter to giggle."So you support Kira?" Mayu asked "I suppose.." Yuki replied "What do you mean suppose?" Mayu questioned pushing for an answere while tickling her arm softly."Well i mean im all for stopping bullying but why kill i mean why woudnt Kira target crimanals?"

Mayu looked past Yuki and put her chin on Yuki's shoulder to see Rena flying around the room laughing at Mayu and eating melon pan.Wait woudnt that be seen just as floating melon pan to her."Psst Rena put it down!" She whispered loud enough for Rena to hear then drop the melon pan on to the bed and Yuki lifted Mayu's head off her and shot a confused look."I said mabye Kira is getting rid of minor problems first besides if the one Kira gets rid of is hurting you im glad Kira is getting rid of it."Mayu told Yuki then kissed her cheek making Yuki blush.

"Ahh look its news on Kira!" Yuki screamed scaring poor Mayu but she then highered up the tv.

"Hello to people all around the world this is A speaking having fun Kira i hope so as i right now am your bigest threat to being caught so i dare you to kill me ........................... what you cant oh i see you need an image of me and my name okay here i am." Mayu coudnt believe anything she was hearing this person coudnt possiably be giving away there life so easy but she coudnt take the risk.Yuki was now laying down on Mayu's bed eating the melon pan as Rena looked down on her with eyes that would kill.Mayu spun her chair to face the desk then writ down the name from the tv and had a clear image of him in her head.

Then the person on the tv fell down onto the desk holding his chest and foam came from his mouth from the heart attack."Aww so i was right oh Kira congrats you just gave away your postion this was only broadcasted in Tokyo Japan no were else im going to tell you the information we have on you okay we know you have someone close to you inside the FBI second your in highschool you can manuplate death and even change peoples way to die if you wish your avarage age is 15-18 you leave no avidance that you where involed in any crime but we know you are close to a person that has been bullied or you yourself have exprinced it first hand and the last is that you live in Tokyo Japan oh and the person you just killed is a crimanal on death row also im not a boy Kira thats all the hints i will give goodbye."

With that the picture of an A on the screen flashed off and the news resumed like nothing had happaned Yuki looked shocked Mayu looked pissed and Rena was rolling on the floor laughing shouting "Looks like Kira has compertion!" While pointing at Mayu.Mayu wanted to say something but she coudnt since Yuki was there A really was putting up a hell of a fight.

And telling Mayu that she was a girl really didnt narrow anything down what was she playing at ?

"Wow A is awsome can you believe it Mayu!"

"Mabye but Kira is smarter."

"Oh i have to go my mum wants me home before it gets late bye bye Mayu."

Yuki kissed Mayu on the cheek and left the room telling Mayu not to bother to show her out.

"So what will you do Mayu ? "

"Simple kill A."

To be continued ...

A/N : thanks for reading i hope you enjoyed it comment and tell me what i can improve on and what you liked. Oh an spelling mistakes will be spelt correctly 2morra i didnt have the time to today

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Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
« Reply #62 on: July 08, 2012, 10:29:45 PM »
hehe~ this new chapter was so sweet with Yuki in it~! thanks for updating~!
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Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
« Reply #63 on: July 08, 2012, 10:53:24 PM »
Ahhh them killings are getting out of hand now sooner or later she will be caught

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Re: The colour of her sould chap 3 UPDATE 8/7/12
« Reply #64 on: July 12, 2012, 10:58:06 PM »
(A/N : This hole chapter is based on what actually happaned to me an my family )

part 4

*Miichans family outing*

(They where in a park)

Miichan : (Throws frisbee) Catch sis
Sister : (Catches and throws to dad)
Dad : ( Jumps up to catch the frisbee it hits his forehead he falls down cluthcing it )
Everyone but dad : LOL AHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH

(A/N : Basically i thrown the frisbee to my sister she thrown it to my dad he thought he would be cool and jump for it but back fired)

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*Tomochins house*

Nachu : Tomochin~~~~~~~ i love you
Tomochin  : Well i hate you (Glares)
Nachu : No u dont ~~~~~~
Tomochin : okay fine i dont Nachu do u wanna hear a story ??
Nachu : Yer sure
Tomochin : You where born under a cabage patch leaf
Nachu : (Tears in eyes runs over to Tomochins mum) Was i born under a cabbage patch ??
Tomochin and her mother : HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH LOL (A/N : my sister done this to my cousin)

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*Haruna's family bike ride*

(Haruna and her family where racing eacother)
Mum : Hurry up im winning ! (Shouts)
Haruna : No way!
Dad : I wont lose wait whats that ?? (Notices something different about Harunas bike)
Haruna : Ahhhhhhhhhhhh
Mum : Im winning wait is that Haruna's front wheel (Eyes widen)
Haruna : HELP !!
Dad : (Speeds up grabs Haruna's bike and slows it down until she stops)
Mum : (Stops grabs wheel goes back to Haruna and re attaches wheel)

(A/N : happaned to my sister i wasnt even born)

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*Tomomi's house*

(Tomomi's baby sister crying)
Mum : Whats wrong (craddels baby in her arms)
Baby : WHAAAAAAA
Mum : Here have a dummy (Places it in babys mouth puts baby back in cot baby stops crying and she walks away)
Tomomi : (Walks in sisters room) Ahh you have a dummy !? (Takes dummy from sisters mouth puts in hers an runs away)
Baby : Wahhhhhhhhhhh

(A/N : My brother done this to my sister except with about 5 dummys)

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*Mariko's family bbq*
Dad : Lets play a game !!
Uncle : Okay lets play drink to you think !
Auntie : Ahh okay but dont get to drunk
Older cousin : What about the younger ones ??
Uncle : They can see who can put there hands futher into the fire!
Mariko : Immature !! (Facepalms)

(A/N : I dont wanna get into what happaned in drink to you think lets just say a couple thrown up some fell over others and some coudnt stop laughing oh an my grandad was sick in his can and had to keep on drinking omg memories)

To be continued ........

A/N : I will do more family based things later on lol my family is really weird but the family bbq's are the best thing ever we start a 1 in the afternoon and finish 3-4 in the morning lol erm i hope you enjoyed full story will be up 2morra thanks for reading erm oh comment and tell me what you liked and didnt oh an what do you think of my family lol


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Re: The school life of akb part 4 UPDATE 12/7/12
« Reply #65 on: July 12, 2012, 11:10:51 PM »
Lol now i see why your weired (only joking lol) and your dad catching the frisbee lol reminds me of my dad in Germany being cocky speaking German and at the end of the order he said grassieass lol

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Re: The school life of akb part 4 UPDATE 12/7/12
« Reply #66 on: July 13, 2012, 10:06:26 PM »
chap 3 - Debut

"Im so tired!" Complained Miichan.Everyone just muttered in agreement as there mouths coudnt form words."Stop moaning and get changed you filming your music videos so hurry!" Shouted Cl as she pulled Rena up to her feet off the cold wooden dance room floor.The other four barely managed to get to there feet because they fell over and over again when they tired until the 2NE1 members helped them.They thanked there unnies than ran as fast as they could to where the music videos where being filmed.(A/N : They are already in Korea) "Wait you idiots you dont know your way round here yet!" Bom shouts as herself and the others run after them.

2NE1 finally caught up with them and hit them across the heads saying "NEVER DO THAT AGAIN UNLESS YOU KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING!" The five girls just nodded to scared to open there mouths that was until one bravely did so."Erm-" But she was cut off "WHAT!" Once again frightened by there loud voices she backed down for a second then opened her mouth again "Are you going to take us to where we are filming then?" She questioned "Yes Yuko now come on before we leave you." They warned walking away and the others followed.

When they got to where there videos will be shot there mouths dropped when they seen prison bars and a orange overall for one of them.The director walked over to them with a smile shining on his face "You must be Akb's new sub group Big Bang yes?" He asked offering his hand for them each to shake."Yes nice to meet you." All of them said together "Okay well your outfits are over there for when you need to change they will be labelled with what music video and what scene they are for also they will have your stage names on them when your dressed as boys i will be refering to you as your stage names and will be calling you a he (A/N : As will i) i assume you have all read the script for each video so you know where you all be and what to do also we might tweek some things 2NE1 will be here to watch your progress and to help you oh and im Kim Ryuko please just call me Ryuko oppa." Ryuko explained with detail then let them get changed.

(A/N : Since there changed i will be calling them a he and be calling there stage name like i said before)

"Okay GD you know all you have to do is run down here right?"

"Yer!"

"Okay well lets start the first scene for Lies okay and action!"

The music started to play and GD ran at full speed and the camera zoomed along with him he looked back as he ran and faced the people that where after him he took a breath then turned a corner where a pay phone hung on the wall "Okay now dial a number and put the phone to your ear!" Ryuko shouted GD took the phone in his slotted money in quickly and dialed a random number that popped into his head.He placed the phone to his ear and seconds later his arm was pushed behind his back by the men that where chasing him."Okay and cut perfect take the others just finished filming the female part before you all came so the first part is finished." Ryuko shouted and everyone cheered "Okay next we will be fiming the part where the women comes from her apartment and you all follow and sing okay everyone get set up GD go change!" Ryuko exclamined and everyone done as he said in an instant.

Gd was changed and headed outside to the street."Okay everyone postions and action!"

The women walked speedily and GD popped out from no where and began miming the words to the song and doing hand signals that fit well with what he was doing.The two walk past TOP who was leaning on a rail with a blue jacket and Taeyang who was sitting down with a black hoodie covering his face from view they mouth the lyrics to the song without no problem and arrive to a red car with Seungri sitting on the end of the car.He sings a little then Ryuko shouts "Cut!"

"Okay Seungri get off the car and get to your next postion!"

"Okay boss!"

The music starts and he walks backwards singing the lyrics and the women acts like he isnt there."Okay and cut perfect go back inside and get into the elevator GD!"

With that said everyone made there way inside GD jumped inside the elevator and the women introduced herself."I forgot to introduce myself im Michelle Zhang." She said politely.GD smiled and then "ACTION!" Music played and took over his body and the scene was done.

"Cut go down to the carpark everyone is evreyone in big bang there apart from GD?" Inquired Ryuko "Yes!" The staff answered Ryuko smiled and pushed everyone down to the carpark.

"No mistakes so far there good."

"Of course they are Bommie unnie they are in Akb afterall."

"I know but its still impressive Chaerin."

"Hehe i know come lets go before they leave us behind where is Minzy and Dara by the way?"

"Schedule."

"OOOOOOOOOO"

GD got down to the car park and was thrown a pair of roller skates that he had to put on he quickly put them to his feet but struggled to get up so Daesung skated over and helped with a charming smile.

"Come on lets make this the best video ever." Daesung said pulling GD up "Everyone get ready!" Ryuko screamed the five boys rolled into postion and everyone was messing around until the music played.As they skated along Daesung slipped and tripped TOP up causing the two to fall the ground and have to re do the the scene.The second time Michelle tripped up on her jeans making them take a third take but that one went perfect.

Every other scene went without a hitch and all of them had fun and coudnt stop smiling the second video went amazingly and the two videos where ready to put on the music channels for members of the public to see and sing along to.
The next day video teaser where put out and everyone was going crazy to know who where the Akb members behind Big Bang.Curiousty and there fan base grew with in seconds.

2 days later both videos hit the tv and the music channels becoming number one in all and both songs becoming 1 and 2 on certain channels.Everyone loved Big Bang and people started having there songs as there phone ring tone and text tone.There music was catching everyones attention and 2NE1 where advertising the songs as much as they could.
Finally the day of there debut they where at M!Countdown early in the morning and changed into there stage clothes with no problem and 2NE1 wished them goodluck and with what seemed like seconds it was time for them to hit the stage and sing Lies!
The crowd was screaming all there names in a rhyme and there nerves rose but when there feet hit the stage they turned calm and felt at home each saying the same thing in there minds.

Lets give them the best performance ever.

The music started and they melted into the dance and song with style.



The song finished and the fans where ecstatic they 5 boys coudnt wait to performe Haru Haru later on.

After some more performances they rushed onto stage and sang rapped and danced there hearts out.The fans sang with them and cheered with them and there hearts with in those small minutes had became one with everyone.



As the song ended it was finally time for them to show everyone who they where the two guest MC's Super juniors Shindong and Snsd's Sooyoung came to the stage."Are you guys ready to find out which Akb members are Big Bang!?" They shouted and the fans screamed then started shouting "BIG BANG WE LOVE YOU SEUNGRI GD TOP DAESUNG TAEYANG!" Over and over again."Now please intorduce yourselfs." Sooyoung begged on her knees making people laugh and Shindong to drag her up.shindong handed GD his mic and GD took his wig off reaviling his actual female self."Hello everyone im Big Bangs leader stage name GD and real name Matsui Rena."She bowed and everyone clapped and started chanting her name.

Rena then passed on the mic to Seungri "Hello im Big Bangs Seungri and my real name is Minegishi Minami." She said taking the wig from her head showing her long black hair and the fans started chanting her name with Rena's.Next was TOP "Im Big Bangs TOP and Akb's leader Takahashi Minami." She waved taking her wig off and like before everyone chanted her name with the other two.Next was Daesung "Im Big Bang's Daesung and Akb's energy pill Oshima Yuko!" She jumped up and down taking her wig off and the fans did the same as they did to the others.Then Taeyang "Im Big Bangs Taeyang and Akb's CG Watanabe Mayu." Mayu took away her wig and everyone cheered chanting her name with the others.

"Welcome to the Kpop world guys please feel free to call me Sooyoung unnie."

"And me Shindong oppa the two of us will look after you."

"Ahh thank you oppa and unnie will we be seeing much of you?" The five asked.

"Where not sure but we want to be close and look after you." The pair answered.

"We would be honoured lets be close and have fun together." The five replied.

"Yup say goodbye to everyone with us." Shindong and Sooyoung said.

"Yer."

"Okay say this." Shindong said passing them a piece of paper.

"Okay ready?" Sooyoung asked.

"YUP."

"1..2..3." Shindong counted.

"Bye bye everyone thanks for watching we hoped you enjoyed everything and loved Big Bang's debut tune in next time to see your favourite idols bye bye!" They all bid goodbye waving and the last thing that was heard on the program was the crowd screaming "BIG BANG WE LOVE YOU!"

The 5 girls ran off the stage screaming and cheering they coudnt believe they just had there debut in Korea and it went so well the feeling they had made think think they could fly.

"Guys you where awsome!" 2NE1 boasted as they ran towards the girls and trapped them into a bear hug "Where so proud to have people like you as our yeodongsaengs"(A/N : For the people who dont know what it means it means younger sister.)"Thanks unnies." They all said in unison with a excited tone of voice suddenly all of there phones beeped.

"The AKB members!"

Takamina's phone :

To : Takamina
From : Acchan
OMG YOU CAN RAP!
YOUR SO HANDSOME
WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME
I LOVE YOU
CALL ME
XXXXXXXXXXXXX

Mayu's phone :

To : Mayu
From : Yuki
OMG YOU LOOK AWSOME MAYU
YOU LOOK SO GOOD AS A BOY
YOUR VOICE WAS OUT OF THIS WORLD
CALL ME !!!!!!!!
X

Yuko's phone :

To : Yuko
From : Haruna
I KNEW AND WHEN I ASKED YOU SAID
NO
OMG YUKO YOU WHERE AMAZING
I CANT WAIT TILL I SEE
LOVE YOU
CALL ME
XXXXXXXXXXXX

Rena's phone :

To : Rena
From : Jurina
THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING THING I HAVE EVER SEEN
YOU WHERE OMG I CANT TYPE ANYWORDS TO DESCRIBE IT
CALL ME
XXXXXXX

Miichan's phone :

To : Miichan
From : Mariko
You where good as a boy but please stay in Korea =p
oh and sorry about last week
xx

to be continued ......

A/N : Hope all of you enjoyed it thanks for reading i know i said that it was going to be the week before but i  had to write there debut lol

please comment and tell me what you like and disliked thanks.

« Last Edit: July 13, 2012, 10:14:53 PM by XxRoByNxX78 »

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Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
« Reply #67 on: July 13, 2012, 10:34:07 PM »
Wow. Lol I love this chapter and lol and the big bang taking off there wigs was dead funny :)

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Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
« Reply #68 on: July 14, 2012, 02:06:58 PM »
Wow I like your fics!
Some are sad, funny, interesting, wtf...ect I like all of them!

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Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
« Reply #69 on: July 15, 2012, 10:32:16 AM »
HELLO...

AHM...

I'M A LITTLE BIT CONFUSED ABOUT YOUR FANFIC...

I DONT SEE THE THE CHAPTER 3 OF PAST AND FUTURE  :(

I REALLY LIKE IT..IT'S ALL ABOUT ATSUMINA...

PLEASE CONPILED IT...

THANK YOU..

I HOPE YOU REPLY...
hello.

I am a fan of AkB48.

I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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Re: AKB = Big Bang WTF Chap 3 UPDATE 13/7/12
« Reply #70 on: July 15, 2012, 02:40:23 PM »
Replys :

@WMATSUI22 : It should be up i just checked it is so incase you where confused beacuse there wasnt any title i put the title on it erm if you still cant find it i will pm u with the chap

@Kahem : Thank you im glad you enjoy them
 
@Adam : I am not sure how them taking there wigs off is funny but i will roll with it and i wont get payback since you where nice and put Daesung in your fic but i will if you dare make me do anything dirty

@Megumi : Lol you got the bread crums and butter joke lol awsome i got the idea fromn one of my friends drama acts wht did you think of the ones i just put up ??
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Re: Replys to everyone so far 15/7/12
« Reply #71 on: July 18, 2012, 04:55:57 PM »
part 5

*At school Jurina's class*

Jurina : I feel sick (holding stomach and looks green in the face)
Rena : Thats what you get for eating all the food (Mocks)
Jurina : Its you fault (Points at her)
Rena : Lies
Jurina : What you dont remeber it was you that fed me the the food (Questions)
Rena : Nope
Jurina : Well first you got melon pan put it in your mouth and kissed me feeding it to me making me chew it then you did it over and over again
Rena : Ahh right i forgot as my punishment wanna do it to me (Smirks)
Jurina : Hell yer (Suddenly brightens up and grabs melon pan)

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*Aachan's class*

(Bang)
Aachan : OW! (Screams)
(Bang)
Miichan : OW! (Shouts)
(Bang Click)
Aachan : AHH HOLY MOTHER !!
(Bang crack)
Miichan : HOW HARD AHHH !!!!
(Bang)
Aachan : ow (Sniff)
(Bang pop)
Miichan : OW OKAY YOU WIN !!!!
Mariko : Children !!
Aachan : Thats right the queen of knuckles right here !!! (Boasts)

(A/N : I played this the other day and apparently my finger  popped out of place lol so my friend Jason popped it back in hurt like hell CHILDREN NEVER PLAY KNUCKLES ITS DANGEOUROUS AND STUPID I LEARNT THAT THE HARD WAY)

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*Princables office*

Takamina : What do you want sir ??
Akimoto-p : This is our knew student Nachu please take her to her class room
Nachu : YO~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WHAT UP~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Takamina : No bye sir
(Exits room)
Akimoto-p : Looks like i will take you myself come on.

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*Tomochin's class room*

Tomomi : I love you chiyuu ~~~~~
Tomochin : I love you to (Leans in and kisses Tomomi)
(Akimoto-p walks in)
Akimoto-p : Hello everyone erm Tomotomo stop kissing while i make this announcment please
(Tomotomo pull away from eachother frowning)
Tomochin : This best be good!
Akimoto-p : It is i would like to introduce your new class mate Nachu !
Nachu : (Runs in) HEY EVERYONE IM NACHU~~~~~~~~~ IM TOMOCHINS COUSIN AND BEST FRIEND !!!
Tomomi : Yer right Tomochin would have told me if she had a cousin like you (Mocks)
Tomochin : No she is my cousin but i just hmmm dont believe it
Tomomi : Really !? (Shocked)
Tomochin : I know right (Sighs and rolls eyes)

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*Gym class*

Yuki : Sae what do you want to see me for ??
Sae : Yuki i have something to tell you so please be quiet until im finished okay ?
(Yuki nods)
Sae : Okay well ive loved you since i first placed my eyes on you which means i have all my life i coudnt believe someone could make me feel so amazing until i met you (Yuki looks up day dreaming Sae doesnt notice) Your laugh makes my heart flutter and your touch makes me go insane i beg you just give me one chance to prove how much i love you and that you should be with me instead of Mayu.
Yuki : (Snaps out of day dream) What did you say *Beep* (Looks at phone) Oh its my Mayu got to go Sae bye!
(Runs off Sayaka comes up to Sae)
Sayaka : Tough luck dude (Pats back)

(Sae silently crys)

To be continued ........

A/N : Will  update propaly 2morra have six weeks off then im in year 10 thanks for reading comment tell me what you liked and where to improve thankyou !! Hope you liked it.

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Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
« Reply #72 on: July 18, 2012, 05:13:01 PM »
Lol well Robyn you only play knuckles if your good at it like me then you won't get hurt and about your replys would I ever do that to you?

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Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
« Reply #73 on: July 18, 2012, 05:43:43 PM »
Awww WMatsui are so Sweet

Tomotomo is sweet too

What are Acchan and Miichan are playing ?
Even Takamina can't take care of Nachu
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Re: The school life of AKB update 18/7/12
« Reply #74 on: July 19, 2012, 09:42:00 PM »
@Adam : Your not a master at all lol and yes you would

@xxx220 : Knuckles is a very stupid and dangerous game where you hit eachothers knuckles with your own its very painfull can damage your hand but since im stupid i played it and popped my finger out of place dont play it

chapter 4 - Day by day

I had just got into my apartment from the most amazing night of my life with you.I clasped onto my bed my head hit my pellow and i instantly fell asleep with a smile present on my face.

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"Im sorry but its over......."

"What your joking right?"

"No im sorry."

"Dont leave me please Minami i beg you."

"I dont love you anymore goodbye."

"Goodbye Atsuko."

I dropped to my knees tears slid down my pale cheek and dropped to the solid ground.The rain fell and masked my tears from those who stared.How i wished this day woudnt come the day where you left me.

One thing was for sure though and that was the fact my heart was torn into two.

I suppose saying that you loved me was all lies you never ment them and never will no matter how hard ive tried or will try in the future.

I was still sat at the place you left me my body to weak to stand and my phone rings every minute but my body acts lifeless and doesnt move an inch to take the annoying piece of technology from my pocket.

I never thought you would break my heart.

After hours i managed to drag myself to my apartment and lay on the couch days and days.

I love you.

I need you.

Hold me.

Touch me.

Kiss me.


I replay the words you said in my head why dont you love me what did i do?

As each day and night passes by my mind is always stuck on you the word i never want to hear you all me a friend because just being friends will hurt me even more.I havnt seen you since we broke up and i havnt been to my schedules making everyone worried.

I wonder if they know you left me that im dieing inside?

I rolled off the couch onto the floor and crawled to the window and watched the clear sun filled sky shine with all its might.I smiled for the first time in days seeing it but it was weak.

I wonder what your doing if your thinking about me.

My apartment is silent all that is heard is the tik toking of the clock and before i know it its night time and im watching the moon look down on everyone.I wonder what happanes to the stars and moon at day time do they run away hide mabye.I have got to get over you i crept to my bathroom cleaned myself then changed i had to get out.

I left the apartment quickly and let my legs take me to any where they could find.

Just my luck that they would take me to your doorstep the place i least want to be with the person i really want to see inside.I was about to knock on the door but my mind told me otherwise.But all of a sudden the door opened and your still face greeted me.

"Atsuko.."

"Im sorry my feet they just-"

"You cant skip your schedule just because where over you have response abillites just because im not your girlfriend doesnt mean i dont worry for you im still your friend."

My heart stopped and your words hit me like bullets and tears spilled from my eyes acting like blood that has been shed after the bullets hit my tired body.

"I love you Minami."

"Atsuko wait here."

You said marching away inside your house and up the stairs to come back minutes later handing my favourite hoodie that i gave to her.My cold hands reached up and took the hoodie relecutenly away from you."Im sorry but ive really got to go back inside goodnight Atsuko."Then the door closed infront of me with your frowing face behind it.

I lifted the hoodie to my nose your scent was still attached to it.

Just kiss me one more time please my baby.

Before my tears dry up.

Kiss me day by day.

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My eyes opened quickly and my body burned with sweat dripping off it had to be a dream it just had to be.I looked at the clock and it said it was 3 in the morning i knew you would be sleeping but i didnt care i had to check if you where still mine and i was still yours.

I snatched my phone off my dresser and quickly texted you.

To : Minami
From : Atsuko
I love you xxxx
---------------------> SENT

*BEEP*BEEP*

To : Atsuko
From : Minami
I love you too always will xxxx

Your reply coudnt have came quicker or made me happier im glad it was just dream because i coudnt live with out you.

To be continued ...

A/N : If your wondering about Rainy days i have to leave that fic for a bit coz i the website i watched Dear friends on took the movie off it so im looking for a website to watch it on lol thanks for reading hope you enjoyed please comment tell me where to improve and what you liked And yes everything was a dream.I know this isnt a very good update forgive me !!!  :bow:

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Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
« Reply #75 on: July 19, 2012, 09:52:46 PM »
Lol I thought that was real I needed to read it twice at first felt really sorry for Atsuko ahhh but happy that it was just a dream and it was a awesome update

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Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
« Reply #76 on: July 20, 2012, 10:43:26 AM »
Finally caught up with your updates. I especially loved those with Yuko-sama and Rena-sama. :heart:

Poor Sae, Yuki is so dense and cruel, though she's not aware of it. And LOL at Nachu
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Re: Past present future UPDATE 19/7/12
« Reply #77 on: July 25, 2012, 08:29:11 PM »
A/N at the bottom

chap - 4 - You belong with me

"Takamina what are you doing?"

"Well since I learned how to rap I wanna write a song for Acchan a graduation song that shows my feelings for her an only you and her get to hear it okay Miichan?"

"Yes can I help then?"

"Yup just dont tell anyone okay since this is our only day off since or debut as Big Bang ahaha."

"Yay lets get working on it then Takamina."

They high fived and shouted "Takamii for ever!" Miichan locked the door to music booth and the pair started working hard on the song wanting to give Acchan the best song in the world.

After a couple of hours they had managed to get the name of the song and the beat of the song all was left was the lyrics and record it.

"Hey girls!" CL screamed as she intruded on them "I thought you locked the door Miichan!" Takamina moaned "She did I just picked the lock not her fault ahaha so what are you two doing anyway?"CL questioned "Writing a song for Takamina's girlfriend." Miichan pointed out while Takamina looked at the ground blushing "Awww can I help?" CL asked "Yer sure." Miichan said and Takamina started up the song and CL bopped her head to the song and started rapping little bits and writing them onto the paper."What about this for part of the chorus." CL said showing them the paper she writ it on.

Oh your the passion in my life
your the secret i cant hide
There will come a day when i say
you belong to me girl
And if i let you know tonight
it'll be alright i bet
You dont know it yet but baby you belong to me

"Wow thats awsome CL Unnie"

"I know hands in the middle CLTAKAMII on three 1..2..3 CLTAKAMII!"

*In Japan filming Akbingo*

"Ahh i miss them!"

"And yet your always complaining about them when they are together."

"Shut up Acchan."

"Sorry Mariko."

They had just took a break from filming Akbingo which was having a special segement on there now Korean/Japanese idols in other words Big Bang.On the segement every one reveals who they thought who was going to be in Big Bang and what they thought on there debut and skills and other things like that some people even cried because they miss them so much as none of them have seen them since they debuted in Korea and it didnt help that the group had became super popular over there which ment the 5 had to stay over there and do more and more promotions.And the 5 where currently number one still for a record breaking amount of weeks winning M!Countdown over and over.

And since there debut Acchan has missed Takamina like crazy.Takamina hasnt called her and when Acchan texts her she only gets short answers in reply this is honestly making her feel left out and abandoned and even making her think that she was being cheated on.But of course she never shown this to anyone not even his best friends everyone in Akb was preparing for her graduation and her telling them how she feels will just cause more problems than needed and that is one thing she didnt want.
Just then her phone lit up showing she had a message she flipped it open to see she had a voice message from none other than Takamina but before she could see what it was she was called to finish the recording for Akbingo.

*Back in Korea with Mayu*

"Go away Minzy!!"

"Did i say you could use my name without formalities?"

"Did i say you could follow me?"

"No but i want to."

"ARHG!"

*Rehearsal Room"

"1 2 3!"

Yuko started dancing to Akb48's Heavy rotation since she hasnt been able to in a long amount of time.Dancing was the only thing that could make Yuko calm and be able to think clearly since she debuted in Korea she hasnt seen or heard from her NyanNyan in along time so lately she has been feeling down but she knew she was going back to Japan in 1 week to finally do some things with Akb so she coudnt wait to see everyone and perform with them again.

Rena walked in to the rehearsal room to see Yuko dancing her heart out to the song she was centered in and instanly ran into postion and started dancing with her and her mind flashing back to great memories.

*After filming Akbingo*

Acchan ran over to her phone and popped her pink headphones into the side and read the message before she played the voice part.

To : Acchan
From : Takamina
Sorry i havnt been able to contact you or answer/return your calls
i hope this makes up for it
i love you xxxx

Acchan smiled and played the voice message.

(A/N : Just imagen Takamina rapped and sang it in english)



Tears streamed down her face crashing down onto the phone screen and then another message appeared.

To : Acchan
From : Takamina
Did you like it
Oh CL unnie and Miichan helped me with this ahaha
Enjoy oh this is just your song okay =)
i love you xxx

To be continued ...

A/N : Did you like it  ?? Comment say what you liked and didnt thanks for reading Colour of her soul will be up 2morra =)

@Adam : Lol cant believe you thought i would break them up

@Sakura_Drop_ : Glad you caught up ahahaha thanks for reading and anything you want in any fics like certain moments and people ???

@Wmatsui22 : Did you manage to find the 3 chapter ??

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Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
« Reply #78 on: July 25, 2012, 08:41:18 PM »
YukoNyan moments plz  :wub: And I loved this update, thanks for posting it  :bow: :bow:
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Re: AKB48 = BIG BANG WTF 25/7/12 UPADTE
« Reply #79 on: July 25, 2012, 08:44:05 PM »
Lol that song goes dead well love it was a little  hard  imagine her in it that's only because I have a bad imagination :(

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