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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 2 - Yukirin, come back with me!
« Reply #40 on: July 29, 2012, 11:25:26 AM »
@kurogumi: It will take a while for Yuki to come back, but you can find out the reason below~

@seigus: actually I didn't come up with this. It was Mayuyu (the real life one). Sometimes, Mayuyu can be unintentionally black, like her mother... for more, see AKBingo on 4th July 2012.

@mo-chan: Thanks! Don't worry about Mayu, she will get help from her friends (I hope).

@Megumi: Yes, it's a reference from AKBingo! Everyone loves to make fun of poor Yuki lol

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Chapter 3 - Nirouni

“A squirrel??” Mayu wondered out loud.

“Mayu! It’s me! Yuko!!”

“What?!! Yuko!! What happened to you?? Why are you here? Are we on earth???” Mayuyu teared up in joy seeing her old friend, despite all the confusion.

“Oshiriko!!”

“Shiriri-kun!!!”

They ran into each other’s arms in slow-motion, embracing and twirling around like a typical scene from a bollywood movie. [Na na na na~~~~na na na na na~~~~~~]

“We came to find you guys!” Yuko explained,”But I’ve gotta share some bad news with you: Yukirin has become another person with no memories of her past because she got sucked into Earth unwillingly. At least that’s what Aki-P has told us.”

“Wait, why aren’t you in human form?”

“It’s our punishment for intruding into Don Quixote….” The squirrel clattered her teeth and rolled on the floor. It’s Yuko’s way of showing frustration, but to Mayuyu, this just looks so cute…She picked Oshiriko up and stroke her gray fur.

“So now, what do we do to get Yuki back? Daddy-P must have told you, right?”

“Yes, we’re to gather shards of…..”

At this point Yukirin’s bedroom door slides open and reveals a black-haired girl in pajamas, rubbing her eyes.

“What’s all this noise?”

“Yuki! We found you!!” Yuko exclaimed and jumped from Mayu’s arms. “Oh shit! She can’t understand anything I say!!”

Indeed, from Yukirin’s perspective, all she heard was “eau eau eau eau chi chi chi~~” She looked down and finally realized a squirrel is in the room.

She crouched back and shouted, “Mayu!! Did you just let a squirrel in my house?”

“Don’t worry, she’s my pet. She’s Yuko!! She’s harmless!”

“A pet??” Yukirin clasped her hand on her forehead in exasperation. She’s never too good with animals…..

Yuko and Mayu give the “innocent watery eye” look and pouted with all the kawaii-ness they can possibly muster.

“Let her stay…pleassssssssssssssseeeeeee!” Mayu begged. Yuko tried to stand on her rear-legs to impress Yukirin as well.

“Fuuuuuuuuuuuu” Yukirin puffed her cheeks and sighed loudly,”…..Make sure it doesn’t come into my room, ok? Also, just to check—- anymore surprises for tonight?”

“No!” Mayu promptly answered. Just at this moment there is something scratching on the front door.

“What’s that?” Yukirin looked at the door in alarm.

“Oow, woow, oow!!” High-pitched barks can be heard.

“Mayu! It’s Saepo!!!” Yuko suddenly remembered she came with Sae.

“Yuki-san….actually I have ANOTHER pet too……”

Without waiting for the girl to react, she opened the door and a brown retriever puppy dashed in and flew itself into Yukirin’s face, knocking her down.

“Rin-chan!! Rin-chan!!” Of course all Yuki can hear is more barks and saliva dripping on her face. Yukirin is clearly horrified and tried to push Sae off.

Mayu quickly grabbed the deranged puppy from Yuki and gave a fake laugh.

“Sae just wants to say thank-you for saving me. Oh wow, it’s 2am already! Yuki, you still have work tomorrow, time to go to bed!” Despite Yuki’s protest, she pushed her into her room and closed the door.

“Good night!” She cried before turning to her friends.

“Just what is going on??????????????????????” She whispered loudly.

“The TV we saw is a portal to other realms of the universe, such as hell and earth. That’s why Don Quixote is out of bounds because we could’ve easily let the likes of Sadako into heaven! However, instead of switching it off, you turned on the passage to Earth. Normally, if you go in prepared, you can come back easily, but strange things happen to anything that got sucked in without its realization. In Yuki’s case, her identity became shards of a mirror that scattered on Earth and she assumed another made-up identity, complete with earthly memories.”

“What does she think she is then?”

“We don’t know…” the squirrel shrugged, and climbed on Sae’s back, who’s now lying with her flat on her tummy with a confused face, tongue sticking out.

“Aki-P himself said that the shards could be anywhere, but it will probably be close to Rin-chan.”

“Mou…that’s not helping at all….” Mayuyu sighed. “I can’t imagine how you two at this state will not give me more trouble. Can we go back to heaven first?”

“It’s part of our punishment in order to get back. We must restore onee-chan’s memories first.”

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Yukirin woke up the next morning, hoping that everything was just a dream. But the moment she opens her bedroom door, she saw Mayu and her strange pets all huddled together on the floor, fast asleep.

Yuki sighed at this sight, thinking how strange it is to have met this girl last night. She is rude, pervy and troublesome. But she’s sleeping like an angel now. Her face is innocent and cute, her skin is so translucent, isn’t it? I want to touch her glistening, black hair….. Realizing how ridiculous it is, Yuki shook her head to stop these thoughts.

She made a quick breakfast consisting of bread, mayonnaise and banana, but before having her first bite, she gave Mayu a glance again.

Making another share the same as hers, she poured out some peanuts from the cupboard and some milk into a bow. Do squirrels eat peanuts? Can dogs drink cow’s milk? Deciding not to care anymore, Yukirin shrugged and put those on the floor.

“Mayu-chan, wake up!”

Mayuyu rubbed her eyes but ignored Yuki. She’s still deep in her dream, which is quickly spiraling into a nightmare, as she clenched her teeth witnessing Yukirin transformation into a black daschund (sausage-dog), poking her sleeping self!



“Mayu!”

Mayu just rolled back and forth vigorously, continuing to ignore her.

Yuki tried harder and yanked the sleeping beauty’s arms. “Stop this! Brat!”

Nope, those words didn’t come from Yukirin, but Mayu’s mouth. She was actually directing it to Yukidog (in her dream), but it doesn’t matter since it’s said to Yukirin either way. Hearing this, Yukirin’s nostrils flared. She flung the puppy and squirrel from Mayu’s side (knocking them out btw), then tickled the princess’ stomach with zeal. Mayuyu’s resistance to tickles are very low and she wriggles furiously, unable to suppress her laughter.

“Waaahahahahhwahaha, no, stop! Eh??” The now fully awaken Mayuyu looked around and recall that she’s now on Earth in Earthkirin’s flat. Yuki stood up and smiled knowingly, like she’s learned her nemesis’ weakness.

“Eat your breakfast now and let me know your address. I will try to contact your parents before I go to work.”

Sitting at the table, Mayu bit on the sandwich.

“Uuuwurghhhhh….what the hell is that?”

“Stop complaining, it’s banana mayo sandwich. If you stay in my house, you eat what I make.” Yukirin smirked.

Mayuyu has never seen this face before. The only word to describe the smirk and the dark look in her eyes is BLACK. Yuki proceeds to munch happily on the sandwich. Mayuyu can tell that she genuinely enjoys the food. Shaking her head in disapproval, she gulped and swallowed down the food.

Yuki took a quick glance at that sour face and asked, “Check and see if your pets are doing alright…and write your address here.” She pushed a piece of paper and a pen to Mayu’s side of the table.

“123 East Wing, Palace Road, France Region, Okinawa???? Mayu, this is obviously fake!”

“I suffered a concussion….it may take me some time to recall….go to work first while I try ok??”

Yuki narrowed her eyes and replied, “Don’t do anything funny, or I’ll deal with you later tonight.”

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“Squirrel! Do something!” Mayuyu stomps around the now empty house. “I don’t think I can live with this any longer. Whether I’m asleep or awake, it’s BLACK Yukirn World! How do we find the shards?”

“If it’s around her, the only way to look is follow her to work.” Yuko said.

“Yes, it will be easier since we can move around without stirring up any attention.” The puppy joined in.

It’s hard to imagine how a cute girl in pigtails, a squirrel and a puppy walking alongside each other does not attract any attention. After getting lost 3 times, and breaking a ticket machine while trying to get on the metro, they did arrive at the amusement park, which is teeming with children and adults.

The trio split up to look around. The squirrel will look through trees, bushes and trashcans while the puppy plays cute with park visitors to see if they carry anything special. Mayuyu will follow Yukirin’s back.

“Let’s meet here again at 5pm.” The trio lifted their empty wrists to corroborate on the time. None of them own watches but it doesn’t seem to bother them, as they nodded to each other and went off in separate directions.

Mayuyu quickly found Yukirin dressed in her brown uniform again, this time carrying a toolbox with her as well. She’s now at one of the biggest roller-coasters in the park, entering the engine room for some inspection.

Mayuyu trailed behind her without knowing what to expect. The engines are humming in a constant rhythm, covering the sound of Mayu’s footsteps. Yukirin started working on a part of the engine with intense focus, one hand maneuvering the screwdriver and the other holding some nuts and bolts.

Kakkoi, Mayuyu thought. In heaven, she’s a smart officer and on earth she’s a cool mechanic. In truth, the princess never thought of Yukirin that way. Her seriousness used to bug Mayuyu alot. The things that the guard excelled in, like combat and military planning, are exactly what Mayuyu hates. But seeing this serious face working with complex tools and parts with precision and ease, she cannot deny there is a mysterious charm in it.

“Mayu! What are you doing here!” Mayu woke from her trance and sees that Yuki is already standing in front of her.

“I…em…I’m trying to trace my memory back to where I’ve lost my parents, so I came here….”

“Don’t ever come in the machine rooms! It’s hot and stuffy, and it can be dangerous!” Yukirin pulled Mayu’s ear and dragged her outside quickly.

“Itai!!!!” Mayuyu rubbed her ear and shielded herself from the bright sunlight.

“If you really want to get your memories back, how about reliving what you did yesterday?” Yukirin suggested.

“But if I don’t remember, how do I know what I did?” Mayuyu snapped back in perfect common sense.

“You…! OK, fine…give me a few minutes to drop off my stuff. I will take you around.”

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For the rest of the day, Yukirin took Mayu on all that the park has to offer, from kiddie rides, to swirling teacups, to gigantic roller-coasters. She bought her ice-cream and watched her eat. She even wiped the ice-cream that’s gotten on Mayuyu’s face, causing the princess to blush to this unexpected gentleness. Yukirin looks as calm as always, unaware of the excitement that she’s caused. She explained to Mayuyu what she does as a mechanic, and told her stories about weird episodes with other park guests.

“So…I’m the strangest person you’ve met so far?” Mayuyu asked, after laughing at the story about some pranks Yuki played on unruly kids in the park.

“God knows why I’m so nice to you, letting you stay and all that…” Yuki smiled back at the princess. The girls warmed up with each other considerably after spending the day together. Mayuyu completely forgot about her mission and almost thought that she’s on a date.

“I wish my sketchbook is here. There’re so many things I haven’t seen before….”

“I want to see your drawings someday.”

Mayuyu took a pen out of her purse and started drawing on the napkin.

“What is it?” Yukirin asked.

“A secret.” Mayuyu answered without looking up. Just as Yuki was about to lean over to the other side of the table to look, there’s a  huge bang behind them.

Smoke crept up from where the ferris wheel is and screams were heard. Yukirin quickly jumped from her seat and ran to the ferris wheel, Mayu following closely behind.

The wheel has already stopped turning, but the source of this outage has not subsided. Tongues of fire soared out of the bottom left of the structure and up flew a giant green snake with four bumps in its body, circling the ferris wheel.

“What the hell is that!!” Yukirin’s eyebrows furrowed and her jaw dropped to the ground.

The green snake spit out more flames, terrorizing the passengers and those watching below.

“How can that be…..” Mayuyu rubbed her eyes 3 times in disbelief and said to herself, “Don’t tell me it’s….Nirouni!”

“Huh? What did you say just now?” Yukirin turned to the princess who’s mumbling to herself.

“Uh..er…I said ‘Don’t tell me they are aliens!’”

“Mayu, I need you to stay here.” Yukirin dashed off in the direction of the ferris wheel.

“No, Yuki, wait!” Mayuyu disobeyed Yuki’s order and followed her.

At this time, the squirrel and the puppy also caught up with their friend.

“Mayuyu, I don’t think this belongs to Earth!” Yuko exclaimed.

“Yes I know I know….it’s Nirouni, the snake Yuihan drew on my sketchbook!! But why has it grown into such a huge monster? Wait, the question I should be asking is: Why has it come to life?!!!”

“AHHHH….I remember now!!! Yui said it’s a dragon! She drew it to celebrate the beginning of 2012!” Sae barked excitedly.



“Saepo, it’s not the right time to get excited! Mayuyu, looks like the sketchbook is under some spell because it’s not brought to Earth by will, just like Yukirin.” Yuko reasoned.

“But why is it attacking the ferris wheel!? Eh??? Is that Yukirin??!!” They all looked up to where Mayuyu pointed and saw that the girl has already climbed about 2 stories high to a spot dangerously close to the fire. She has her toolbox with her, looking like she’s trying to open the doors of the carriages and revive the turning of the wheel to let the trapped passengers out.

“Mayuyu, don’t!” shouted Sae at the princess who’s also trying to climb up.

“Leave it, Sae!” Yuko halted the puppy. “I think Nirouni’s aim is the engine room below the ferris wheel. We should get in there and see what it’s looking for.”

With that, the trio split up again. Will Yuki succeed in saving those poor passengers without getting hurt? What is Nirouni looking for? Can Mayuyu help Yukirin?

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Sorry Yuki fans, I just can't resist, the AKBingo episode is too hilarious! But it's all an expression of love XD

Anyone who hasn't seen Yonpara (where Nirouni comes from) yet, do it now!!

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #41 on: July 29, 2012, 12:11:59 PM »
 :OMG: eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh
what's going to happen  :stoned:
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Mayu save Yuki  :pleeease:
I can't wait for the next  :prayers:

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #42 on: July 29, 2012, 02:25:51 PM »
www... So fun XD

Yuko is a squirrel and Sae a dog too funny :rofl: :hiakhiakhiak:

Nironi...  :rofl: :rofl: :hiakhiakhiak:

Update soon please :peace: :byebye:
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #43 on: July 29, 2012, 03:33:04 PM »
I seriously need to catch up on AKBINGO. I'm sooo behind!

But woo hoo! Serious Yukirin is hot stuff :inlove: She's really crazy to climb two stories without any safety harness (I'm assuming there isn't)!

I like all the references you make in the story, especially Yukirin's banana mayo sandwich! Mayuyu's reaction is hilarious :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: I remember going WTF?! too when I first read about Yukirin's weird creation. And they even served it at the AKB48 Cafe! :doh:

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #44 on: July 29, 2012, 10:27:43 PM »
 :hiakhiakhiak: Yukirins famous  "banana mayo sandwich"ah I wanna try it someday when I visit Tokyo...

 :grr: Omg...That pic!  :mon closeup:  :mon spit:  :mon lol: LOL my stomach! I LoLed so hard!
Hilarious! Ohh can't wait for next update!


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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Prologue
« Reply #45 on: July 30, 2012, 10:45:53 PM »
LoL Sausage body...I remember from (akbingo) "dandelion" and "dachshund" she sure had a lot of "mean" nicknames. :rofl:
I didn't know it. Which episode?
As for Mayuyu's episode AKBingo on 4th July 2012 -> added to my download list.

It's recently from AKBingo 2012 07-04 if you haven't watch it it's hilarious! I missed Myao she was there LoL she was the one called her "dandelion"
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #46 on: August 01, 2012, 06:21:03 PM »
Thanks for all your comments!!

Unfortunately, I'm too absorbed in watching Olympics this week and can't even find the time to read/write.  :nervous So the next update will probably come later.....

@mo-chan: I will update soon! Please wait!!  :heart:

@Pwety: When it comes to fanfics, my fav characters have always been Sae and Yuko. I just want to picture them as animals all the time :P I'll see if I can find them a pairing without digressing too much from Mayuki's storyline!

@seigus: Actually you will be surprised if you google banana mayo sandwich and find out that Yukirin is not the only one making it in this world. I want to try it someday too...do I?

@Megumi: Yuki is trained well in heaven (and so is Mayu and everyone else)...there'll be some action next chapter...please look forward to it! orz

@anzai48:  :w00t: Thanks for your detailed comments!! I really appreciate it especially coming from you!! Actually I fell in love with Mayuki because of your fic! Before that I was more of a hardcore Atsumina....lol You are right that I'm fascinated by Yuki's multifaceted personality. I find that different pairings bring a different her out (in real life) and I try to do that same for my fics too. Although from the way you commented, I realize I kept on poking fun at Yukirin all the time (sorry Yuki fans, this is really out of my love for her)...lol Mayu will get her turn soon  :twisted: :twisted:...  PS they will get a proper date soon.


Since I am so absorbed in Olympics, my updates will be slow  :bow: sorry. But because I love Atsumina so much, and it seems like I will never get to them at this rate, I decided to post a super-short OS just for fun. This is inspired by the blog entry Acchan made about talking to Takamina on the phone for 3 hours. The entry's translation can be found in Blog48 here

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3 hours

A vibrating sound buzzes from Takamina's bag as she's taking the elevator up back to her own apartment. Looking at the caller's ID, she hesitated before ignoring the call.

I hope Assan won't mind, I'm too tired to talk today and I haven't even had dinner yet.

She entered her flat and threw herself into the couch.

Buzz buzz.

Again??

The caller's photo is set as Acchan's signature crinkled nose smile, baring her cute teeth and holding a stunned Pen-kun up. The irresistible face is begging her to pick up.

Sighing, Takamina slided her finger across the screen.

"Moshi mosh!"

"Minami! Did you just ignore my call?" Acchan whines from the other side.

"O did I miss your call?" Takamina feigned ignorance. "I was just getting back home so I must have missed it. Sorry."

"Apology not accepted. Talk to me~~~~"

"I'm talking to you now."

"Yes I know~~~ I mean, say something to humor me."

"Em....I'm hungry???" Takamina rubs her temple with one hand. She is really not good at talking about nothing. Unlike other girls. That's why she never replies to text messages because 90% of them do not have substance.

"Mou, MINAMI!"

"Acchan, you know I'm not good at this...maybe Yuko is free too?"

"But I want to hear YOUR voice! Anyway, guess what, mama made me a huge bento today!!! Then I wonder if I can feed some to Pen-kun..."

"I am allergic to cats so I haven't kept one before, I don't know if they can eat human food, I guess if it's unprocessed, it's ok?"

...(talk about nothing of importance ensues for an hour)...

"Ne...Acchan, do you hear this?"

"What?"

"My stomach growling, I need to hang up."

"I love you Minami~~ don't hang up!"

"Acchan, we're running out of topics anyway. I love you too, but see you tomorrow?" There is no love in hungrytaka's voice.  :smhid

"Minami...but I'm hungry as well." Takamina can sense the mischievous smile at the other end of the phone even though she can't see it.

"Didn't you just eat?" Takamina thinks that sometimes she's dating a kid instead of a national idol.

"No not that type of hunger. Ne...Minami, I think I can help satiate YOUR hunger though..."

???????

Takamina's face tightened as she hear heavy breathing coming from the other side...

"Minami, I am sliding my fingers along my belly now...up and down, up and down....Maybe my hunger can be satisfied with your kiss?"

The sound of smooching and tongue licking triggered Takamina's eyes shot wide open.

"Oh, it's so hot here, I better take off my shirt."

"Acchan..." Takamina sat up straight in realization of what's going on. Her fingers are tingling as if tiny electric shocks are firing up from her fingertips.

"Mi~na~mi..." The breathing becomes even more rapid and she can hear some rustling sounds from the other end.

Takamina feels like all her blood has travelled to her head, ears and cheeks. She's now imagining herself right in front of the ace, who's now taken off her shirt. She can visualize Acchan's hands running through her own body, all the way from her bellybutton up to her cleavage, then sliding back down to her lean waist. Her back is slightly arched back, with her newly done dark almond hair dangling sideways.

"Atsuko..."

"What? I can't hear you, say it louder..." Acchan commanded in a dark and sexy voice.

"Atsuko!" Takamina slumps down the couch, and feels her hand traveling down her own slouching waist too.

"Minami! I'm hungry!" The ace has turned on the speakerphone now, since her voice sounds more hollow and distant.

"My palm is rubbing on my heart which aches for your touch now! Arrr~~~~Is that you caressing my thigh? Oh yes, it feels so good."

"Atsuko..." Takamina's hand followed the ace's move down to her own thigh, softly rubbing her sensitive skin and closing up inward. Her breathing intensifies and her voice became lighter as she continued to call out Atsuko's name.

"I want you on top...UWAAHH"

Suddenly, a loud crash was heard and Acchan's moaning turned into an abrupt yelp.

"Acchan?" Takamina sat back up as she's snapped out of her trance.

Doo, doo, doo-----

The line was cut off...

WTF...Takamina thought and to top that anti-climax, her stomach growled loudly.

The phone buzzed again but this time, Takamina ignored it. Making herself a quick microwave katsudon, she sat at the dining table and started munching down on the food, even though she should be worrying about what happened to the ace instead. Finally, the phone rang again and she picked up.

"Minami! Sorry about just now, Lube jumped on the coffee table and toppled my glass of water and my phone...."

"Doon't wworry about it," answered the munching chibi captain. "I'll see you tomorrow anyway."

"Don't you want to continue where we left off?" That was more of a demand rather than question.

"Are you really still in the mood?"

"Actually....no....heh heh..."

"Assan, sorry about that too but I am a bit tired today as well. Though I admit this first time is kind of fun...maybe it can replace me coming over to your place tomorrow." Takamina teased.

"Hey, if you really dare to do that, you won't see the light of the day ever again!" Acchan threatens.

"Your voice is too cute angel, it's not scary at all. But I'm just joking... =)"

"Hymph, of course you are. And what a bad joke it is, suberi queen!"

"Why do you always have to poke fun of me!" Takamina pouted. "I thought I did a pretty good job MC-ing in the last stage..."

The two carried on talking and ended their call which clocked for 3 hours, probably in the top 10 of Takamina's record of calls.

"Minami, thank you for talking with me so long even though you're hungry and tired."

"It's okay Acchan, you know I can never say no to you." Pausing for a second, she added, "You know I really love you, right?"

"And you know I feel the same way too. Graduation is coming soon but I'm not afraid of our distance growing further, because my lover is none other than Takahashi Minami, the person I can always trust." Even Acchan is surprised at this solemn confession, but at the same time, she felt relieved that she can put this thought into words and say it directly to Takamina.

"Atsuko..."

"Jya, I'll see you tomorrow then. Bye bye!"

After that, Acchan rung up Yuko:

"Yuko~~ that totally didn't work!"

"Eh? How is that possible? Nyannyan loves it! Maybe you're not skillful enough? You will need a lot of that especially when you guys won't be seeing each other that often after your graduation."

"Yes I know, but there are so many things that can interrupt."

"Whatevs. Maybe you should practice with me first. Come on, now!"

"No way, perv!"

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni / OS: 3 hours (Atsumina)
« Reply #47 on: August 01, 2012, 06:57:10 PM »
weeee This feeds my mind!
and yuko teaching her..
I've red her blog too when she posted that!
that made me rolled over  :shy2:

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni / OS: 3 hours (Atsumina)
« Reply #48 on: August 01, 2012, 06:57:48 PM »
Omg sexadicchan never fails to make me  :imdead: :mon crazyinlove: :mon blood: :imdead: :mon bleed2:

thanks for the update!!  :heart:

your fic, so AWESOME!!  :twothumbs

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni
« Reply #49 on: August 01, 2012, 11:07:54 PM »

"Minami! I'm hungry!" The ace has turned on the speakerphone now, since her voice sounds more hollow and distant.

"My palm is rubbing on my heart which aches for your touch now! Arrr~~~~Is that you caressing my thigh? Oh yes, it feels so good."

"Atsuko..." Takamina's hand followed the ace's move down to her own thigh, softly rubbing her sensitive skin and closing up inward. Her breathing intensifies and her voice became lighter as she continued to call out Atsuko's name.

"I want you on top...UWAAHH"

Suddenly, a loud crash was heard and Acchan's moaning turned into an abrupt yelp.

"Acchan?" Takamina sat back up as she's snapped out of her trance.

Doo, doo, doo-----

The line was cut off...

WTF...Takamina thought and to top that anti-climax, her stomach growled loudly.

Just when we're getting in a rather hot scene  :stoned:
Got me laughing though... liked Takamina's WTF expression when the line was cut.

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 3 - Nirouni / OS: 3 hours (Atsumina)
« Reply #50 on: August 02, 2012, 06:36:51 AM »
OMG!!! i love it!! when i heard about atsumina talking for 3 hours i dont think nothing but now with your fic.. always when i heard about talking about so much hour... Sex phone gonna appear in my perv mind...


jajaj yuuchan.. if haruna heard about you proposal to acchan you gonna have troubles...

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 - Unexpected turn of events
« Reply #51 on: August 17, 2012, 04:15:28 PM »
Sorry for not updating forever!! Hope you guys still remember the story..we'll wrap up Nirouni's visit to Earth today!

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Chapter 4 - Unexpected Turn of Events

Sae and Yuko sneaked into the room, which is already boiling in heat. The roar of Nirouni could be heard above.

Apart from the humming engines, there's nothing noticeable. Both animals can feel the heat in double intensity due to their thick furs.

"Mou....Yuko~~~~~~~ there's nothing here, let's go back."

The squirrel darted around and aimlessly under the engines...

"There must be some connection between Yukirin and the sketchbook...there's no way the snake will just come out of nowhere..."

"Yuko, wait, I think I smell something..."

Saedog sniffed again and followed her heightened dog senses. They made several twists and turns around units of machine until there, to their horror, a small girl about 5-6 years old was tied up and gagged.

"Wow, my dog powers worked!"

"Now is not the time to gloat, stupid! Come help me!"

The duo tried to bite off the rope but due to their sizes, they have to slowly saw their teeth through.

"What's the beeping sound, Yuko?" Sae is catching her breath from the sawing and heard a strange noise.

Strapped squarely on the girl's chest is a clock that is counting down at 3:46.

"I think I've seen something like this in the Academy..." Yuko gritted her squirrel teeth in heavy thought.

"A bomb!!!" The squirrel's tail and hairs stood as she exclaimed.

"Huh??" Saedog's nose creased in confusion. "Yabai!! Saw quickly now!!"

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On the other hand, Mayuyu climbed up the rungs of the ferris wheel with considerable ease. Afterall, as the resident troublemaker, she's used to dodging and escaping from people who found her out.

"Ah----- the switches and circuits are melting!" Yuki exclaimed as she tried desperately to re-establish the connection to unlock the doors of the carriages.

"Yukirin, there is no time! We must break in!" Yukirin turned to the carriage nearest to the fire. The flames have already eaten into one side of the compartment, and a horrified couple is tipped to the other side, trying to avoid the impending danger.

She turned her head back and discovered the girl with pigtails already by her side.

"Mayu! What do you think you're doing! Go back down!"

"Let me help you!"

"It's too dangerous, go down now!"

"I can't just stand back and watch!"

"Don't you understand! I can't afford to take care of you and the passengers!"

"Who says I need you to protect me?"

But the older girl knew there's no time to argue. Mayuyu is right, to revive the machine is useless now. She climbed diagonally down to the said carriage, but the heat is making it too hard for Yuki to hold on.

"Here!" Mayuyu took her jacket off and threw it to Yukirin. Mayu herself is already wearing a pair of gloves, so both of them can now advance with some protection.

Dodging the flame which is blown in their direction, Yuki smashed the window with her wrench and climbed in.

To her surprise, she found that the woman's hands are tied, while the man, crouching close to her to avoid the fire, has a gun in his hands.

What is all this? Yuki thought. "Untie the woman now and let's all climb out!" She shouted.

"No, we will all die here today!! Hahahahahaha!!" The man suddenly laughed hysterically and pointed his gun at Yuki.

"Get out now girl, don't disturb me from my final moments with my wife here!"

"Please!! Save my daughter Hana-chan!!" The woman pleaded to Yuki in tears. "This man is mad!! He locked his own daughter up in the room down below with a time bomb!"

At this point Nirouni made a dash under the carriage again, trying to smash through the concrete roof without much success. Afterall, though Yuihan and Nirouni both think that it's a dragon, it's nothing more than a cute snake with the ability to breathe fire.

The carriage swayed violently as Nirouni brushed past them again. Yukirin took this opportunity and swung at the man's wrist with her wrench. She disarmed him as he lost his balance, grabbed his gun, and threw it out of the broken window.

Untying the woman's knot, she glared at the man, "You have two choices: Stay here or leave with us."

The man was about to leap forward but Mayu, who has caught the gun that flew out of the window, is now pointing it at him at a distance above the compartment.

"Mayuyu..." Yuki looked up and saw the princess extending her hand.

"Here, bring that woman to me."

Yukirin helped the panicking woman climb out with Mayuyu's pull, while the armed princess did not leave its mark for one sec, eyeing the man with her pointed gun nervously.

The woman is now clinging onto Mayu's back with her other hand rested on the ferris wheel's rail, which is covered with Mayu's jacket. Yukirin proceeds to climb out too, but now the mad man decided to dash towards her anyway.

Mayuyu could hardly react as the mechanic, who was already halfway out, got a huge shove from behind and fell from the carriage.

The girls both screamed at the same time, but luckily, Mayuyu dropped her gun and grabbed onto Yukirin's hand on time.

The mad man stood back laughed hysterically, "Well, we're all gonna die in about 2 minutes anyway. You can have your way, hahahahahahahaahaha!"

Mayuyu, Yukirin and the woman are now in a very precarious situation, with the focal point of holding them altogether being Mayuyu, who's quickly losing her strength.

"Mayuyu," Yukirin looked down to the burning platform and said, "Let me go, or all three of us will die!"

"Yukirin! Don't ever say such things again! IIIIIIIIIIIIIYAAAAA!" Mayuyu is now pulling with all her might, while her other hand clings onto the burning rail, her gloves already worn through and her palms exposed to the searing heat of the metal.

I can't let Yukirin go...

I still need her to remember who her princess is.

I want to see her tensed up face again, swallowing all anger and restraining to explode in front of me.

I still haven't touched her oshiri yet.

I must get her back...we must go home together!

Thoughts like these raced through the strained  princess' head and she refused to give up. Miraculously, despite her smaller stature among the three, her adrenaline rush allowed her barely to accomplish pulling Yuki to a height where she could reach for the rails herself.

For a fleeting moment, Yuki eyed the panting girl in wonder before climbing back up to assist all three of them out of the burning zone.

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"Dekkita!!" Saedog barked. The ropes are now bitten loose and the gag also removed, revealing a panic stricken girl who's too shocked to cry out loud.

"Follow me!!" Saedog barked again. Even though the girl couldn't understand her, she's smart enough to follow her saviors.

All three of them got out of the machine room and Sae collapsed, panting furiously.

"Now is not the time!!" Yuko exclaimed and climbed onto the girl's chest, where the bomb is ticking.

"57 seconds left!!" The squirrel squealed.

"Recall, Saeman," Sae mumbled to herself. "The bomb dismantling class...where I flirted with Mocchi....NONONONO! Not this part!! The wire to cut to stop the timer.... which one???"

The puppy is now rolling back and forth on the grass, as if that will help her at all.

"The blue one! The blue one!!" Sae blinked as she finally recalled, and bounced up towards the girl.

Biting the cover off, the wires are revealed.

"Shit!!"

"What?" Yuko asked.

"I'm a dog!!"

"So?"

"We're color-blind!!!"

"O right!!" If the squirrel can face-palm, she will do it now.

28 seconds left...

"Mayu!!" The squirrel dashed out and frantically look for the said princess.

Luckily Mayu and Yuki are both safely back on the ground.

Mayuyu and Yukirin both followed Yuko to where the little girl is. The situation quickly dawns upon them.

"It's the bomb that the mad man talked about!!" Mayu exclaimed.

"Find the blue one and cut it now!" Sae barked.

"Blue! Yukirin!!" Mayu translated Sae's words.

The mechanic produced a swiss army knife out of her trouser pockets and placed the scissors extension between the blue wire.

"15 seconds...Mayuyu, run away now in case we're wrong!"

"Don't be silly, if any happens, we'll be together through the end!"

"Can you just listen to me for once!"

"No I can't! Yukirin, there's no point if only I get out of this alive!!"

Yukirin is shocked to see the girl in front of her in tears. What must it have meant for the weird girl to risk her life to save her, when they've just met last night. But why, do I also feel the same way? Yukirin is also puzzled at how desperate she wants to keep the pigtailed girl from harm.

"3 seconds left!" Yuko screeched.

Yukirin took a quick breath and cut the blue string. The timer stopped and all the members involved are now frozen on spot, scared that the bomb will be triggered if any of them make the slightest movements.

1, 2, 3, 4, 5....Nothing.

"Yokatta!!!!" Yukirin exclaimed in joy with her usual exaggerated expression. She hugged the little girl who was finally able to cry out loud due to relief.

Letting Hana-chan go, Yukirin stood up and embraced the crying princess. Mayuyu also wrapped her hands round the mechanic in joy amidst the flames that are still burning above them.

"Thank you for saving me, Mayu-chan..." Yukirin whispered gently into Mayu's ears.

Nirouni, who's been circling above, saw that the little girl is safe and it seems to be relieved too. Letting out a huge sigh, one of the bumps in its stomach got gargled out of it's mouth.

A huge dollop of water dropped straight at the flames it created, putting out most of the fire.

Even the dragon seems to be taken aback by this and tilted its head in confusion.

Like a hero who retreats after the job is done, Nirouni soared up the skies and disappeared out of sight, leaving the spectators in wonder and confusion.

"Yuihan...just what kind of animal have you pictured in your mind?" Mayuyu, who's now released from Yukirin's hug as they both shifted attention to the snake, looked at the empty sky and wondered to herself.

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Our heroes finally pieced the story together after the police came and arrested the man. It turns out that the man has lost his job a few months ago, and without any means to support the family, the wife decided to take her girl away back to her hometown so she can be taken care of. The man found out and snapped, concocting a plan to take the family to the park for a last-day outing. There, he first planted a bomb on the girl, before taking his wife to the ferris wheel, the place he proposed to her, so they can spend their final moments together.

"Kowai..." Mayuyu only managed to utter. Her body slumps into the park benches as she's completely exhausted in the actions just now.

The little girl, who was just saved from the bomb, walked towards her hero.

"Onee-chan, thanks for saving me." She blushed and took something out of the pocket. It's a shard of beautiful glass that produces technicolor reflections.

"Hana-chan..."

"This is my most important treasure. Here, please have it." The girl smiled and handed it to her in both hands.

"Thank you!" Mayuyu smiled with teary eyes. Although showered with gifts her whole life, she's never felt so happy before about getting a present. Even though this is worth nothing compared to the beautiful outfits and cool gadgets she gets in heaven.

The girl trotted off to her mother while Mayu stared at the glass in her hand. It feels different. Could it be...?

A flash of Yukirin in her white warriror outfit appeared in the mirror shard.

Putting the glass safely in her purse, Mayuyu realized she's just gotten a piece of Yukirin's memory back.

Yukirin, after talking to her boss and the police (and receiving their thanks, of course), walked back to the bench, where Mayuyu and her pets have all fallen asleep. She smiled, recalling how the miracle of Mayu pulling her up with one arm just happened. A piece of napkin got caught on her shoe. She bent and picked it up to throw it away, but looking at it more closely, she saw that there's drawing on it.

It's a sideway profile of a girl with black straight hair, holding a screwdriver in her hand and working meticulously on something. The girl has dark, focussed eyes and and a tightened lip, who exudes an air of beauty that you can only find in people who are concentrated and know what they are doing. The air of seriousness and professionalism, captured beautifully in Mayu's drawing.

Yukirin felt her heart beating faster at this, realizing the way this bratty girl, who always talks back at her, actually sees Yukirin. She pocketed the napkin and woke the sleeping girl up with a tickle.

"Time to go home and get some rest now."

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"Mayu, I think your wounds are finally healed..." Yukirin unwrapped the bandages around Mayuyu's palm and examined the faint scar. It's been two weeks since the ferris wheel incident. Touching it with her fingertips gently, Yuki recalled the scene where Mayuyu held onto her with one hand, and latched onto the scorching railings with the other.

"Cool." Mayu answered flatly and jumped out of her chair. Settling herself snugly in the couch, she resumes reading her anime magazine.

For the past two weeks, Yukirin has not broached the subject about sending her home at all. But now that she's healed, Mayu is scared that this will come up again. That's why she's been trying to avoid contact with her recently.

However, Yukirin is baffled by this coldness. Actually, the thought of sending her home has not occur in Yuki's mind since the Nirouni incident. She's been struggling about why she doesn't want to see the girl leave, and she knows it's not just because she feels guilty about Mayuyu's burns.

For instance, the mornings when she stared at Mayuyu in her sleep before waking her up have been getting longer and longer.

At work, she takes out the napkin with Mayu's drawing of her more often just to look at it.

Randomly, biazarre things that Mayu does creep up, such as that time when she found her taking 10 pages of notes on TV channels, listings and mechanics. Yuki's calm and serious reputation is tarnished as she gets caught more and more by colleagues smiling to herself.

At home, she observes the girl in amusement as she whispers seriously to her pets. What a nerd...as if, they'll understand what she says, Yukirin chuckled to herself.

She even buys things that please Mayu, such as the anime magazine that the princess is reading now, but pretends they are just some hand-me-downs from her colleagues.

In general, she's trying to be nicer to Mayu without letting her know that she's getting more and more interested in her. Even she can't explain why she's so secretive about this. Surely, it's a good thing to like someone?

Just as Yuki is welled up with these confusing thoughts, Mayuyu started getting colder towards her. Now, Yuki is wondering: Am I becoming a creepo? Is it obvious to her?? Maybe I should hide it better.

Staring at the princess, whose face is hidden behind the magazine, she stood up and walk over, snatching the booklet from Mayu's hands.

"Do you know what getting well means?"

The princess looked at her with a blank face. In truth, Mayuyu's heart is pounding in fear and anticipation.

"Time for you to take up some work." Yukirin answered her own question.

Mayuyu frowned in astonishment. Me, a princess, working?

"You don't suppose you can stay here for free? At least, let's start with cleaning after your own mess. Everyday, your dog and squirrel comes back covered in dirt and I am the one who has to clean them up!"

"I..."

"Also, I've had enough of you complaining about my cooking. You can start cooking for me while I go work to pay for our rent."

With that outpour of commands, Yukirin turned and went back into her room.

The princess face is still frozen in her frown. What? Me?

"But I can't cook too!" She shouted at the closed door. Why is she suddenly so mean to me?

"I don't care." A cold reply shot back.

"But, but I'm your guest!" Mayuyu protested.

"Are you sure? Then why didn't you finish up all your vegetables on your plate as a polite guest would?"

"What? Out of all things, you are complaining about that!?"

"Yes, mouse."

"That's unfair!! And how dare you call me a mouse!"

Yukirin opened the bedroom door and said in a shocked (but fake) tone, "Yes right! It IS unfair!"

Narrowing her eyes, she continued,"Ok, add 'doing laundry' in the list of things you need to do tomorrow."

Before closing the door again, she added with a sarcastic smile, "Well, next time you know better when you cross my path, mouse."

Mayuyu propped up from her slouching position and continued to stare at the door in disbelief.

"This is revenge Mayuyu..." Saedog jumped up on the princess' lap. "If I didn't know better, I'd say she remembers every single thing you did to her in heaven."

"Shut up..." Mayu grabbed the puppy tight and gave her a huge spank.

Sae growled in frustration as she tried fruitlessly to wriggle out of the mouse's arms. Yuko, who's been witnessing all this, laughs uncontrollably.

"Seriously, you two!" Mayu gave them a death glare, "What's up with getting back all dirty everyday? So I see you've been having a lot of 'fun' ...well, go ahead and stay like this forever! And, I won't clean you guys up like Yuki does!"

"Chill out, princess!" Yuko chirped, "We're working our asses off to find the other shards everyday. Since Nirouni appeared at the park, we reasoned our best shot is to look around that area. If anything, you should be thankful to your loyal comrades!!"

"So have you found anything so far? The more this drags on, the more I'm worried what in my sketchbook will come to life next..."

"Don't worry, what's the worst that could happen? But we haven't seen anything yet..."

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A dark shadow looms outside their apartment, watching them in amusement through the window...

"Watanabe Mayu....hym hym hym...."

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 -Unexpected Turn of Events
« Reply #52 on: August 17, 2012, 04:40:21 PM »
that was ....intense~! XD XD

Im glad you are back! Interesting chapter! XD

I wonder how was at the final?......Rena? or how? :O :?


Mayu is so a mouse! :twisted:
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 -Unexpected Turn of Events
« Reply #53 on: August 17, 2012, 09:03:27 PM »
The heaven story is funny ^^
The atsumina fic WOW!!!!

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 -Unexpected Turn of Events
« Reply #54 on: August 18, 2012, 10:17:45 AM »
domo, saeyu-san.. allow me to say few words please  :)

first, i'm sorry that i don't read your SaeYuki fics. I don't really favor the pairing much, and so i'm just gonna comment about the Mayuki fic. hope you don't mind :on drink:

next, the fic is awesome! poor yukirin, she's lost her memory in heaven, and become other person now. mayuyu, goodluck in trying to recover yukirin's memory!  :mon determined:  and goodluck with falling in love with yukirin too, hehehe  :mon star:

mou~ yuuchan, sae-kun, please stop dirtying yukirin's house! poor yukirin has to always clean them  :mon fierce:

thanks for the fic! please update soon!~ matterukara~  :mon cigar:
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 -Unexpected Turn of Events
« Reply #55 on: August 18, 2012, 10:54:36 PM »
Oh My God what did innocent Yuihans drawing do?
LoL a cute worm spewing out fire  :rofl:

That was scary tough the man kidnapping his wife and planted bomb on his child...as Mayu said "kowaii"

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"57 seconds left!!" The squirrel squealed.

"Recall, Saeman," Sae mumbled to herself. "The bomb dismantling class...where I flirted with Mocchi....NONONONO! Not this part!! The wire to cut to stop the timer.... which one???"

The puppy is now rolling back and forth on the grass, as if that will help her at all.

"The blue one! The blue one!!" Sae blinked as she finally recalled, and bounced up towards the girl.

Biting the cover off, the wires are revealed.

"Shit!!"

"What?" Yuko asked.

"I'm a dog!!"

"So?"

"We're color-blind!!!"

"O right!!" If the squirrel can face-palm, she will do it now.

Oh god I LOLOEd so hard"!  :rofl:
And what's with the creeper out there watching Mayu...

Can't wait for next update!
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 4 -Unexpected Turn of Events
« Reply #56 on: August 19, 2012, 09:06:56 PM »
@yuukimoko: Heheh, the black shadow is not Rena...I hope she'll appear at some point but right now, it's not planned yet.

@kahem: thanks for the comments on Atsumina. I really want to write a fic about them but I can't see how they can appear on Heaven on Earth, so I resorted to an OS. Glad you enjoyed the trololing... :D

@lollita90: No worries! Although I'm biased towards Saeyuki, I love all Sae with everyone and Yuki with everyone too, so I can accept people not wanting to read some pairings. I'm happy you are enjoying this fic. Please continue to read on, thanks!!

@Megumi: Haha it's kind of intense but if you picture Yuihan and Nirouni, the whole situation becomes hilarious. SaeXYuko is my favorite non-romantic pairing, so forgive me if I give them too much screentime in a Mayuki fic!

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Chapter 5 - Black Marimokkori

"Seriously, that was a close call last night..." Saedog mused as they both set off to 'work' the following morning.

"Yup, we can't let Mayuyu know about this now...ok, maybe in two or three days time?? We can't let her know we're just stalking Nyannyan and her dog!!!" Yuko is resting herself on Sae's back, basking under the sun leisurely.

"Who's nyan nyan??" Sae's ears perked in confusion.

"It's what I decided to call my pretty angel, you stupid!!"

Reaching the amusement park again, they both hid in the bushes, waiting for their targets to show up.

Before long, an elegant young women dressed in a peach-colored one piece appeared, with her tan-furred German Shepard strolling closely behind.

"Nyannyan..." The squirrel's drools dripped on Sae's back.

"Zip it..." The puppy hushed, while her eyes followed the shepard dog keenly.

The shepard dog, trained in tracking and possessing better senses than Sae-puppy, already knew that her master is being followed again. Turning her head to Yuko's direction, it barks loudly. Luckily, our heavenly citizens obtained the ability to communicate with other animals through their transformation as well. The shepard dog's barks are fully understood:

"Stop following my master, you pervs!"

Yuko jumped ahead to the woman, ignoring the dog's warning. "Nyan nyan!!" She called out. The woman whom Yuko called Nyannyan happily caught the cute squirrel into her arms and said, "Oh it's you again!"

Meanwhile Sae is already totally mesmerized by the commanding figure in front of her.

"Why won't you let me know your name?" The puppy pleaded to the proud shepard.

"Because I can't let your hentai friend near my master! Too bad she still thinks Yuko is just an innocent little squirrel. If only I can speak in human tongue!!!!!" The tanned dog is now venting her frustration at Yuko, but to her master, it just looks like she's barking aggressively at her.

"Sush, sush, Sayaka! Look, you're scaring our little squirrel and puppy!! Let's all have fun together, ok?"

"Sayaka! Your godly name is Sayaka!" The puppy beamed and started running round and round Sayaka in joy.

Although Sayaka is still suspicious of these two cheeky animals, her heart softens a bit at the sight of the star-struck retriever sticking out her little tongue, panting and yelping at her.

"How can you be so cool and pretty, Sayaka? I saw you fending off those yankees yesterday!! I jumped on one of them too, but he only smiled and patted me on the head!"

"Puppy," The larger dog tried to suppress her laughter. "I'll let you guys follow us, but make sure your friend watch where she puts her hands."

"Your wish is my bidding!" The puppy straightened her body in alert. "Yuko!!!" She barked menacingly (or so she thinks). "Don't jump into Nyannyan's cleavage again or I'll rip your tail off!"

"Fine fine...I'll just kiss her and nibble her cute ears today!!"

"I feel bad for Haruna-san..." Sayaka shook her head in defeat. "But since I am here to protect her from greater danger than you two weirdos, I'll just have to trust that you can help us in the end."

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Meanwhile, Mayuyu is also trying to start off her day meaningfully. She's now all alone in the house after serving Yuki burnt toast for her breakfast. Yukirin retaliated by making a special vegetable drink with bitter gourd, peppers, and spinach, forcing Mayu to drink all of them.

"No way!!" Mayuyu tried to leave the table, but Yuki grabbed tightly onto her arm.

"Yes way! I just bought this blender and we should both start a healthier lifestyle. Come on!"

She jumped on Mayu and pinned her down, literally force-feeding the cup of green stuff down the princess throat.

Is this what they called water-boarding in our terrorism interrogation class? Mayu wondered and cringed, feeling really bad for all the devils and monsters that the heaven guards caught. [A/N: force-feeding is not waterboarding, it's a lot worse in case you don't know...]

"Isn't this great?" Yuki smiled satisfactorily. "Under my guardianship, you will never need to worry about not getting your vitamins and fibers!"

Mayuyu is still dumb-struck by the bitter taste of her special drink, looking at Yukirin frightfully and waving her arms frantically to shoo her away.

"Go...go to work....I don't want...to urghh...see...your smug face..."

So that's how breakfast ended and now, Mayuyu is looking at the list of tasks Yuki wrote worriedly.

"Clean the kitchen. Take out the trash. Mop the floor. Wash the white and light-colored clothes. Cook dinner.... Holy crap that's a lot!!"

Begrudgingly, Mayu drags her body to work. This is the first time she's doing something not out of her own will. Since no one in heaven, not even her servants, need to clean anything by hand (they are in heaven, of course there is magic!), she has no clue how to start.

"Do you need help?"

Mayuyu is startled by this voice behind her back. She's supposed to be ALONE in the house....

Don't tell me it's really.........this time? But it's broad daylight!! Slowly, Mayu turned her head with her eyes half-closed.

"UWAH!!" She jumps back in horror. "Ghost!!"

"Calm down! I'm not a ghost! Don't you recognize me, master?"

"Eh?? Who's this????" Mayuyu recovered from her cowered position and got a clearer view of the black shadow that she thought was a ghost. In front of her was a little man, standing as tall as a 5-year old child, totally in black.

It smiles slyly with eyeballs rolled slightly sideways, which only makes it even more cunning. It looks perpetually turned on by sight of its bump on the crotch, but no matter how ridiculous this thing looks, there's no doubt it resembles Yukirin.

"Black Marimokkori?" Mayu's eyeballs jumped right out of her sockets for the umpteenth time in this fiction.

"O princess, just call me Marimokkorin, as you labelled me." Pointing to her chest, marimo even answered in Yukirin's sweet voice.



"Marimo, why are you here?"

"Princess, everything in your sketchbook came into life! I thought you knew after you saw Nirouni?"

"Impossible! The world would've ended if everything I drew came to life!" However, there is no denying that marimokkorin is Mayu's unique creation, fashioned after Yukirin, the heaven guardian that she despises.

"Well, it's up to you to decide if you want my help at all. You should know how resourceful I am as a Yuki doppelganger."

Mayu ponders this statement and nodded. "True, you should be as smart as Yuki. Now tell me how to clean this stain."

Pointing to a flask of yellow liquid, the mossball (marimokkori) said, "Damp this cloth with it and scrub the floors and the stove with it. That will clean everything off in no time."

As Mayu absolutely have no clue what cleaning is about, she raced through the cleaning as advised, without really thinking twice about whether it works. She's just keen to finish off everything in Yuki's list of commands so she can take a rest and resume studying the TV.

"OK, take out the trash, check. Now the laundry..."

Separate into two piles of clothes, Yuki has already sorted the light-colored and white stuff that needs to be washed. For readers who don't do any housework, like-colored clothes are usually washed together to prevent dyes from other items to go onto them. Special bleaches for white clothes are used too because the stains are harder to get rid of in white clothing. You can probably guess too, that they don't work well with colored clothes.

"Are you really just washing one pile today? The machine is not even half full!" Marimo commented from behind.

"Well, that's what it says here." Mayu pointed at the list while busy studying the different types of detergents in the cabinet.

"Come on, she just wants you to do double the work! I guarantee she'll make you wash the second pile tomorrow! It's all nonsense, just throw everything in together!"

Mayuyu thought for a bit. Yes, of course that's another one of Yukirin's stupid revenge plans. It's good that I created black marimo, who knows exactly how she thinks!

"Okay, clever one. So which bottle should I use?"

"This one."

"Great."

Turning the washing machine on after an hour of struggle, Mayuyu started to mop the floor. Barely getting a gasp of breath after she's done, a neighbor knocked on the door to tell her that the trash is not sorted right, so she has to go and pick out the plastics and paper from the bag since it's not the day for collection. All this is so tiring and confusing for the princess, who's never worked for a day in her life.

Throwing herself on the couch, marimo dutifully handed her a cup of water, which the princess gulped down quickly.

"Take a rest, princess, you've done a lot today." The mossball coos soothingly.

"Yes. 10 minutes, then I'll have to start making dinner."

Unfortunately, her eyelids feel really heavy suddenly and within minutes, our cute little mouse is sleeping soundly in her crib. The mossball's smirk only grew wider.

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"Wake up, mouse!" Yuki's violent shaking jolted the princess out of her dreams and again, she looks at the mechanic blankly.

"Looks like someone has not made dinner yet, huh?"

Yuki pulls Mayu up from the couch and sighs. "It's your first day...maybe I shouldn't expect this much from you." Mayuyu still looks dazed from the dream. The setting sun shone in from the window and casted a warm light on her flawless face. Yuki is suddenly struck by this cuteness and straightens the princess slightly messy hair gently. Eventually her fingers reached Mayu's left cheek to feel her smooth, radiant skin. The beeping from the washing machine disrupts this dream-like sequence, and Yuki just discovers how weird she just acted. Blushing madly, she stood up and walked to the kitchen.

"I...I'll make dinner then." She stutters.

She barely stepped into the kitchen until the unusually slippery floor caused our poor mechanic to perform a leg split unwillingly. Even though Yuki's trained in combat (in heaven), this happened all too quickly, and Earthkirin couldn't react. All she felt was a sharp pain spreading from her overly stretched thigh muscles, and she yelps in pain.

Looking around her, she's astounded by the glittery tiles and stove...they are all covered in oil.

"MAYUUUUUUUU!"

Mayu has already rushed to the kitchen after hearing Yuki's yell. She's now looking at the mechanic sitting on the floor with legs split, covering her pulled groin in pain and anger.

"What happened, Yuki?"

"This is what you should ask yourself! Why did you pour oil all over the kitchen?"

"Eh?????? But it's...." Mayu stopped halfway through her sentence. Our mouse is clueless about housework, but she's not entirely stupid. She quickly realized that the horror of the truth and covered her gaping mouth.

The beeping of the washing machine reminded Mayu that her clothes are still inside. Yuki stood up slowly and limped towards the machine, turning it off and opening the lid.

"What the hell is this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Mayu has never seen such an angry Yukirin. Yuki is now taking crumpled pieces of cloths with blotches and patches of dyes. The white ones are stained, the colored ones are bleached partially, and there's her favorite silk gown, totally ruined by the highest level of spinning Mayuyu set. Strangely, holes are cut at odd places in the clothes, places where pervy and hentai people will take interest in. Piece by piece, Yuki examined the damage and threw them at Mayu, who can only dodge left and right while hearing the worst obscenities a human being can utter in the shortest amount of time possible.

"You did it on purpose, didn't you! Just because I ask you to do SOME housework?"

"No Yuki, I can explain! Someone tricked me into this!"

Yuki pretends to look around and answered, "Like, who? You're alone in this house." Holding up and looking through two holes at the pads of her dyed bra, she crumpled up the piece and threw it at Mayu. "I can't believe you....urghh!"

"But it's not me, your underwear is not even in the stack of laundry!"

Their argument is disrupted by commotion in the living room. It turns out that Sae and Yuko just returned from their daily excursion, but they're chasing something around the house and breaking quite a lot of breakable things, like a vase of flowers Yuki just bought in the weekend, and the bottle of ramune that she got for Mayu on her way home today (aw...poor Yuki).

"Stop!!!" Yuki screamed.

The two animals screeched to a stop, with a black shadow escaping from the window.

"Mayu!!" Yuko exclaims. "We saw black marimokkori, who claims to be from your sketchbook!!"

"We tried to chase it down but we lost them!!"

Of course, human Yukirin would not understand the barks and and squeals from our righteous friends. All she sees is dirty paw prints, broken shards and oil stains all over the living room.

"Mayu, you and your idiotic pets!!!!!!"

"Hey, we're sorry, but stop calling us idiots! I told you it's not my fault that this happened!" Mayu snapped back. You have to remember, princesses typically don't have nice tempers, even if they are in the wrong.

"Then who should I be angry about?" Yuki asked sarcastically.

Mayu bit her lips as she can't find words to fight back. She can't tell Yuki about marimo....but hell, isn't it Yuki's fault that the wicked mossball is created in the first place?

"You! You should be angry about you!"

"What?" The reaction queen made the most dumbfounded reaction you'll ever see.  A watermelon can fit in her jaw-dropped mouth now. [A/N: this is clearly an exaggeration.]

"Yu, yu, yukirin..." Mayuyu just realized how ridiculous she sounds.

"I don't know why I cared about you so much. A brat that blames others for her mistakes. I am....I am just..." Yuki's voice softens, "disappointed."

She slowly limps back into her room and shut the door, leaving Mayu stunned. She was expecting to get a smack on the head or even worse, some serious beating, but Yuki did none of that. However, it seems like an arrow is shot to her heart when Yuki's angry face transformed into resignation. It hurts even more than getting scolded, because that person is so disappointed that she doesn't even bother to get angry at you anymore. That must be how Yuki is feeling now. She's given up on Mayu. The brat who tricked her way into her house, forcing Yuki to take care of her. Once, she thought she could see some redeeming qualities in this girl, but now, this all seems like a crazy person's wish. Behind the closed doors, Yuki huddled inside the blankets and recalled how the two spent the past two weeks together. The feelings of bewilderment, amazement, happiness, anger and disappointment are all mixed together. At this point, Yuki doesn't know what she wants to do with the mouse next.

Outside the room, Mayuyu recovered from her shock with Saedog's nudge. The two buddies and sense the tense atmosphere and tried the best that they can to clean up their own mess. With some luck and experimentation, they stayed up all night to tidy up the oil covered kitchen.

"Who is this black mossball?" Saedog asks. "Is it really your drawing?"

Mayu continues to scrub without answering. Black marimokkori, why did you do this to me??

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Mayuyu now digs deep into thoughts about how she created marimokkorin. She recalls the first time she saw Yukirin when she's about 12. It was her first day in the academy. Everyone knew she's the princess so no one dared to talk to her. Too proud to start a conversation with someone, Mayuyu strayed off to the fields during recess and found a girl practicing archery.

That girl stood sideways calmly, with black straight hair tied tidily on her left shoulder. Placing the arrow neatly on the bow, she narrows her eyes to aim at the target and fired without hesitation. The arrow hits the bullsmark but the girl's expressions barely changed, as if it's just an ordinary result that didn't matter.

"Yuki!" Another girl ran up to her. "It's time to take a break."

"O really? Thanks Hacchan." Yuki replied, breaking into a gentle smile as she walked away with her friend.

What a beautiful girl! Mayuyu thought as she pulled her sketchbook out. She lamented how cute the otherwise perfect figure will be if only she doesn't look that cold and serious.

A few days later, after getting a compliment from Yuko on her butts, Mayuyu became friends with her and Sae, the only two classmates who didn't treat her as a royalty. During her first visit to Sae's house, she was stunned to meet that archery girl again.

This time, Yuki is dressed casually in a green tracksuit, sitting on her couch reading a book. She must have hit a funny part as she curved her mouth into a broad smile, her eyes forming into bean shape.

"Rin-chan, I've brought my friends home today."

Yuki nodded and didn't look up until Sae stood right in front of her. "Here, meet Princess Mayuyu, my new friend from school :)"

Yuki brows jumped in surprise but maintained her calm face. "Welcome, Princess. Please make yourself at home." She looked down and continue, "However if you may excuse me, I have some errands to run." Yuki stood up and left the living room.

"O don't worry Mayu, it's nothing personal. She's just shy like that." Yuko shouted from the kitchen as she started hunting for food already.

Since then, they barely talked to each other and annoyance slowly built up inside Mayu especially when she couldn't seem to forget the indifferent girl's face. Is the fact that I'm princess so bad to her?

Beside a rough sketch of a girl fixing a bow and arrow to shoot, she drew green marimokkori and smiled at her creation.

"Yes, this is how Yuki look like, a green mossball with bean-shaped eyes...wakakaka" She laughed at her own creation.

Whenever she saw Yukirin talking to her friends at school, sometimes breaking into funny, exaggerated reactions, Mayuyu would watch and smile to herself from afar. She would think of marimokkori's face and wonder when they could finally talk to each other freely like normal persons. But each time they passed by each other, Mayuyu felt too indignant to open her mouth, and even if she did, she'd sound rude, with the other girl responding curtly as well. ("You're not gonna be there when I come today?" "No princess, I have extra lessons today.")

A few years had gone by, with Mayuyu gradually gathering quite a reputation as a clever prankster. Slowly, her curiosity on Yuki turned into some kind of inexplicable loathing that she attributed to the differences in their nature and personalities. As each day went by, she became bolder and bolder in her pranks and antics. Once she hacked into the academy systems and change everyone's grades and at other times, she's caught squeezing oshiris of unsuspecting juniors. Together with Yuko and Sae, they got punished many times and it's starting to give Aki-P a headache.

Right around this time, Aki-P did a personal interview for all the graduating recruits who applied to be palace guardians. Giving some tricky problems for the recruits to solve, Yukirin aced everything easily, impressing Aki-P with her mature thoughts and tactical mind.

"How old are you, Yuki?"

"18 this year, my lord."

"This is very impressive. I wish my daughter, who's only 2 years younger, can be a quarter like you in 2 year's time." Rubbing his temples and laughing faintly, he added, "I don't think this will come true. But anyway, I will appoint you to guard Don Quixote..."

That night, Aki-P got notified that his daughter let the palace's unicorns loose, creating havoc among the guards and staff. He furiously told Mayu off and kept repeating how good Yuki is compared to her for the next few days.

"Yuki this! Yuki that!" Mayuyu was punching the pillow in her room, venting and ranting. "Daddy-P never sees anything good in me. I do things with good reasons. I wouldn't have changed everyone's grades if I haven't discovered that the snobbish top student was actually cheating in exams and blackmailing others to do his homework. But the adults never listen to me! What's so special about Yuki? She's working hard and doing all these great things just for herself!"

She opened the sketchbook and turned it back to the first pages, where marimokkori is.

"You, black, devil!"

Taking out her black marker, she painted the mossball character black and added a bump on it's crotch too.

"I bet she's actually a perv like her sister too...Hymph!"

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Gosh! Mayu facepalmed herself now...She realizes that she's not been honest about her feelings at all. Her pride and presumptions led her to behave like a stuck up idiot whenever she's in front of Yuki. This does nothing to help but only fuels her prejudice against the aloof beauty over time. Black marimokkori's existence is entirely her own creation. Entirely her own mistake.

I must recognize that the true Yuki is nothing like Marimo....

But who is the true Yuki?

The princess has a hunch that the key to defeating her creation must be linked to this question. Before she knows, Yuki, with or without her memories, is too precious for Mayu to let go now...

To be continued...

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I have started two plotlines here, but we'll deal with marimokkori before we turn back to Nyannyan and Sayaka. I will probably update again in the weekend since I need to catch up on all the other fics that I haven't been reading.

Please tell me what you think and I'll see if I can answer them in the story. :P

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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 5 -Black Marimokkori
« Reply #57 on: August 19, 2012, 09:29:28 PM »
Nyannyan makes her apparence~

Yuki sure is disappointed and so I am ,Mayu..... :smhid

Please update soon! I wanna read more~!!!!!!!! :wub:
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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 5 -Black Marimokkori
« Reply #58 on: August 20, 2012, 01:28:31 PM »
 :lol: It's okey Sae-chan dog and Yuko the pervert squirrel made a good combination  :thumbsup  :rofl:
Anyway shouldn't they be searching for Yukirins memory? Not stalking some cute cat like girl and her dog?  :rofl:

Oh my god Black Marimokkori is a real prankster and that was Mayus entirely fault.  XD
But now that Mayu had realise it what will happens next?  :smhid


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Re: Heaven on Earth (Mayuki) - Chapter 5 -Black Marimokkori
« Reply #59 on: August 20, 2012, 08:13:23 PM »
yes, i am enjoying this story very much!  :wub:

mayuyu, how clueless can you be? luckily the house doesn't burn considering that there's oil everywhere in the kitchen.  :mon POd:  goodluck with consoling yukirin, mayuyu! you have to gain her heart back!  :scolding:

will be waiting for next update!  :on lol:
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