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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 2 7/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #20 on: August 08, 2012, 01:52:41 PM »
chap 3

When I reported to my father about what myself and Mayu had overheard he coudnt believe his ears before I knew it he had made plans to do anything for me to be safe.He refused to make me switch school incase they found out we knew so my problems where getting worse.Okay now I need to get rid of one of these damn problems im having before school begins.And just like that the problem entered the kitchen."The two of you will make up before we go to school so if where late its your fault."I demanded taking a bite of the toast I made earlier."Its not me that needs to say sorry." Mayu silently whispered under her breath hoping I woudnt hear but I did."Look im tired and so are the two of you for the same reason im sure im well aware that it is Yuki's fault so she is the one in the wrong so Yuki say sorry and explain why you did it okay?"I ordered irritated that nothing was leaving the usual talkative girls mouth.

"Fine look Mayu im sorry I know what I did was wrong its just she is my childhood friend and my mind went blank when she asked the question and the only words that could leave my mouth where the ones that made her think she had hope when she didnt your the one I love with all my heart no matter what please dont be angry with me im sorry."Yuki begged on her knees suddenly I felt a little like cupid ahahaha a fanged cupid awsome I watched Mayu's face closely but like always her face was unreadable."I believe you and forgive you I love you to." As those words left her lips Yuki dived ontop of her making them crash down on the floor and the pair started chuckling while giving eachother loving stares.What a pair they can go from a serious fight where they ignored one another to the most loving couple in the world well thats if they can beat Wmatsui which I dout.

Yuko then wobbled into the kitchen yawning her hair messy and her eyes with dark circles underneath."You had fun last night."I stated as she sat down next to me completely forgeting that she is my maid."Yer I did and it was sooooooooo good~~!!"She loudly replied all of a sudden more lively."Yer we could hear you ahaha you make some funny noises Yuko." Jurina teased walking in the kitchen dragging a very sleepy Rena behind her."Like what Jurina?"Yuko asked is she really that stupid to not know what she means."You know like ahhhhh more Koji MORE!" Jurina fakely moaned Yuko's face going redder and redder I tried to not laugh but I coudnt hold it in this also made Yuko's face turn even more red.

"Yer it was even funnier when Rena was ment to go to the toilet but walked in you two." Jurina said choking on her drink as did I remembering when we heard a scream.

Flashback

I was sitting on my laptop doing some stupid homework that the midget set when I heard a scream that sounded like Rena.So naturally I headed to there room but to only find a confused Jurina sat on the double bed I seen that Rena wasnt with her so I gathered she wasnt in the room and then all of a sudden the door shot open and a terrified Rena came charging in.She jumped into the bed throwing the covers over her body shouting "My eyes my eyes my poor innocent eyes I dont deserve this!" That is when it clicked well sort of.

"Rena what where you doing out of the room?"

"I went to go to the toilet."

"Why did you scream?"

"I went in the wrong room and well......"

"Well what?"

"I walked in on Y...u...k..o Yuko and K..Koji having there privet time whhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!"

I turned my head to Jurina to find her laughing her head off rolling side to side in the bed to be pushed off by Rena.I coudnt hold in a laugh so I fell to the ground holding my side it was hurting so much since I coudnt stop laughing.

end of flashback

"Yer Rena did you enjoy the show?" I started teasing Rena and Yuko there faces going redder than a Liverpool top this was going to be a good day.

We left for school a couple of minutes later arriving on time and seconds before the sensei Chiyuu was sitting at her desk a smile spread across her cute face when she seen me.Thats when Mayu came up from behind me whispering something "You have to ignore her break of the friendship before it grows your fathers orders." I sighed and nodded I sat at my desk and Chiyuu turned on her seat to face me."Tomo~~chin wanna come with me to my schedule after school?" She inquired sweetly but loudly so everyone looked in are direction "I cant ive got to meet my father after school for something important." I lied trying to let her down gently her faceal expression dropped and I felt guilt rush through my body."Oh okay." She said dimly I wanted to hurt myself for making her like this I swear.

"What about tomorrow?" She asked "I cant im babysitting." I lied again then I think she understood "Are you avoiding me?" Oh great she just had to ask that "Can we talk about this later?" Was all I said and she slowly nodded her head thank you Jesus.
When break time came I leaded Chiyuu to the roof of the school and started to explain.

"Look we cant be friends its not good for you if we are your Idol image might go down the drain if we are and I do not want to be your friend yes we have had a good time these past two days but we cant okay."

"Why you said yes to being my friend if your just going to reject me later on do you know how it makes me feel like garbage where you using me or something I thought I could trust you turns out I coudnt I HATE YOU!" She spat the words out quickly tears threathing to drop on to her perfect skin she turned on her heels leaving me alone basking in my mistake and regret.

To be contiued ...
@Everyone : Yer this isnt as long as the others sorry about that this fic wont be updated next until the 20th because im really busy I hope you enjoyed the chapter please comment what you like and what I cant improve thanks for reading.
Come on Liverpool cant wait going to watch there match tomorrow with my mate Jason and my dad lol

@Adam : I hope you enjoyed this chap then I put extra Yuko in lol

@Sakura_Drop : No she wont ditch Mayu I honestly dont like the SaeYuki pairing (Sorry everyone) So I dont want it in my fic lol Your on the right lines with your Tomotomo theory did you like Yuko ?? Acchan will appear she is actually really important to the story but she wont appear till later ahh and Did Wmatsui do you justice lol ?? Bye 2NE1 sister !!

@Yuukimoko : She forgave her mostly because I didnt know what to do with the argument I hope you enjoyed this chapter

@Mo-chan : Sorry about Mayuki but I coudnt keep them apart for long it was to hard lol but there back and as for Tomotomo sorry about that  ahaha

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 3 8/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #21 on: August 08, 2012, 02:11:57 PM »
I'm happy that Mayuki's problem is recovred  :stuffed:
but still TomoTomo they are not friend anymore   :fainted:
Chiyuu don't hate Tomochin  :pleeease:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 3 8/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #22 on: August 08, 2012, 02:28:27 PM »
Lol Yuko and Koji up to it again and Nooo how can she say that but at least Yuki made up and you know Liverpool are going to lose right? Oh does that mean no updates at all till 20th :cry:  what am I going to do :cry:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 3 8/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #23 on: August 11, 2012, 07:52:28 AM »
Poor Chiyuu T_T
Mayuki is so cute~
And lol Rena hahaha!!!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 3 8/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #24 on: August 12, 2012, 01:04:13 PM »
Tomochin should tell her the real reason :smhid. She made Chiyuu hate her

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 3 8/8/12 TOMOTOMO
« Reply #25 on: August 12, 2012, 01:23:13 PM »
Ah, but MaYuki is so cute together... Like here, crashing together on the floor  :deco: :deco: :deco:

Oh, Yuko-sama, long night, huh?  :rofl: :rofl: Rena-sama, mistakenly going in on them  :rofl: :rofl:

Tomochin, you should tell your Chiyuu the truth, I'm sure she will understand.. It's better than the broken hearts of you both  :(

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chap 4 - Story of us

I used to think one day we'd tell the story of us
How we met and the sparks flew instantly
People would say they're the lucky ones

I used to know my spot was next to you
Now I'm searching the room for an empty seat
'Cause lately I don't even know what page you're on


I walked through the school like always do with my head held high its been a week since I last seen Chiyuu and a week since I talked to her.She texted me I didnt reply she called I didnt pick up its like a game of cat and mouse and at the end the cat always loses.I could have gave her a minute or even a second of my time but I coudnt I was sure I would say those stupid two words that have been crossing my head Im sorry but those words would sound like they dont mean a thing.She also realised a new song that has hit the charts going straight to number one in a matter of days the songs name story of us.

The song describes all the feelings im having and mabye hopefully the ones she is.

Oh, a simple complication
Miscommunications lead to fallout
So many things that I wish you knew
So many walls up, I can't break through

Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room
And we're not speaking
And I'm dying to know, is it killing you
Like it's killing me


Monday mornings suck especially this one those damn bodyguards have stuck to me like glue since we over heard the sensei's meetings and people kept saying that they are my friends which is not true well Mayu is but thats all the others there just annoying really annoying.

Mayu who was walking infront of me with a tired Yuki hanging off her arm slid the door to our classroom open going in first before myself and the sickly cute couple of Wmatsui.Just yesterday the couple was feeding ice cream and spicy food to eachother using there mouths YUCK!

I don't know what to say since a twist of fate
When it all broke down
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now

Next chapter

How'd we end up this way?
See me nervously pulling at my clothes and trying to look busy
And you're doing your best to avoid me


As I walked into the class the first thing my eyes where drawn to her desk which was surrounded by the friends she had made since I broke are friendship off.Are eyes caught eachother like magnets I stood at the front of the classroom she sat at her desk are mouths didnt move so no words where spoken but are eyes where a different story hers watched me with pain confusin happiness sadness love while a sure mine masked what I was truly feeling as she looked away but not before shooting me a forced smile.Her so called friends didnt pay that much attention to us locking eyes because there mouths hadnt stopped moving since I stepped into this torture chamber.

I let out a slight breath and walked to my desk sitting down like I didnt have a care in the world other than my spoiled selfish bratty self.

Another day of avoding ahead how fun.

I'm starting to think one day I'll tell the story of us,
How I was losing my mind when I saw you here,
But you held your pride like you should've held me.

Oh, I'm scared to see the ending,
Why are we pretending this is nothing?
I'd tell you I miss you but I don't know how,
I've never heard silence quite this loud.


The midget sensei entered the class room dark circles under her eyes that look did not suit her.Since I need to cheer myself up I might aswell entertain myself with the dummy."Sensei that look doesnt look good on." I said smirking as I did so and the class turned silent excited to see one of our famous word battles."Well that smug look doesnt look good on your arragont face Tomomi." She replied.

"Ouch that hurt small one."

"If thats all your comeback is im ashamed your in this class since its top set."

"Im ashamed to be taught by you."

"Just leave the classroom before the actual lessons start im not in the mood for you ugly face today."

"Fine by me and im sexy and I know it."

I stuck my tounge out to her thanking her in my mind for :

1. Getting me away for Chiyuu before I break down saying sorry
2. Getting me out of lesson

Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room and we're not speaking,
And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate when it all broke down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now.

This is looking like a contest,
Of who can act like they care less,
But I liked it better when you were on my side.
The battle's in your hands now,
But I would lay my armor down
If you said you'd rather love than fight.
So many things that you wished I knew,
But the story of us might be ending soon.


I soon as my feet stood out of the classroom the door closed even though I didnt touch it and something hard hit my head and I could feel the back of my head be covered in a unknown liquid that hit coudnt have made me bleed could it?

I started to feel drowsy and weak that bitch set me up danm you midget.

Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room and we're not speaking,
And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate when it all broke down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now, now, now.
And we're not speaking,

And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah?
I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate 'cause we're going down,
And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now.

The end.


TBC ....

A/N : Thanks for reading sorry for the boring chapter the next will be good and full of fighting I promise eheheheh anyway hope you enjoyed lol also i got my result for my gcse I got an E with 28 points i always have next year since im just starting year 10 oh the song is called story of us by taylor swift

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@Kahem : Chiyuu will be fine soon I promise

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@Sakura_Drop_ : Hey 2NE1 sister I didnt put Yuko sama in this chap but she will be next time im happy you like Mayuki and Rena ehehehehehe as for tomotomo they have broken hearts yet they dont know why yet lol an where you ill when reading my fic ahhhh i hope your okay now !!!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 4 - story of us 23/8/12
« Reply #28 on: August 23, 2012, 10:25:22 PM »
Aww this is so sad :( life's hard hey? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh  finally an update I've not read in like 3 weeks so I've been watching crap like the Liverpool game Ahh who does tht ;) great update make sure you update soon please or the panda gets it  :angry:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 4 - story of us 23/8/12
« Reply #29 on: August 23, 2012, 10:44:49 PM »
So sad...  :cry: :cry:

I'm fine with everything you write as long as you DO write..  ;)

I'm now okay, healthy and only two days left and I'll be having my free week...  :onioncheer: :bath: :whistle: :on drink:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 4 - story of us 23/8/12
« Reply #30 on: August 23, 2012, 11:54:31 PM »
Poor Tomotomo T_T

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 4 - story of us 23/8/12
« Reply #31 on: August 24, 2012, 06:17:40 AM »
NOoo....  :cry:
This chap's broken my heart, poor tomotomo


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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 4 - story of us 23/8/12
« Reply #32 on: September 11, 2012, 06:35:32 PM »
chap 5

Days,seconds,minutes,hours I have no idea how long ive been here in this dark damp death hole.All I could hear was the drip dropping of water hitting the ground and faint voices that seemed to be closer than I thought.As they got louder every now and then so I could sort of pick up what there conversation was about but it was nothing important nothing that told me where I was or how I got here or who they are.

My mouth is dry my stomach is growling as loud as a lions rawr and I coudnt move an inch.My legs are together while my hands seem to be handcuffed behind a pipe so I cant escape ive never been in this situation before. I dont know what to do my father never prepared me for something like this he always thought that I was far to trained to get into this situation so he never bothered to teach me this.Now look what his stupidity has caused.All of a sudden I can hear footsteps coming closer towards my direction and a light switched on causing me to winch so my eyes could get use to the light that they seemed to be depraved of before.

Two girls dressed in bright clothes stood infront of me a smug smile plastered on there faces."Ahahah the famous daugther of the most feared Mafia in Japan captured so easy your a loser!" Girl one shouted "Ahaha your so right." Girl two said mocking me as she slamed my head against the hard brick wall I bit my lip so I didnt give them the satisfaction of hearing me scream in pain."Awww look she is trying to be strong so she doesnt cry!" Girl two laughed coming closer so we could be face to face."Do you know who we are and we work for?" She asked with her eyebrows raised I shook my head then clashed it with hers making her fall to the ground."You stupid little bitch we will give you some payback for that!" Girl one screeched pulling up girl to in the process.

A fist met my face and another said hello to my stomach over and over again.I could taste blood on my lips and feel it running down from my nose quickly as if it was being chased by a rabid dog.I cant defend myself not like this there has to be away to escape there just has to be.My body was at its limit for pain as it turned numb and there hits began to feel as if they werent there."You two stop hurting our guest and get out!" A sudden shout came from the back of the room.They stopped there attack and froze in there place obviously scared of the owner of the voice."I said leave!" The voice screamed again but this time I could see the face behind it.The two girls left the room running muttering something I coudnt catch as they went out."Im saying sorry on those idiots behalf im Madea Atsuko leader of the gang Demon girls the second most feared gang in Japan other than of course your father the Mafia and you are my captive his daugther the one who will be the main pawn in my plan congrats." She said sarcastically as she introduced herself what I would give to knock that damn smile from her face.

She held her hand out then pulled it back trying to make a joke because my hands had no way to reach hers.She chuckled and that had to be the most horrible sound ive heard in my entire laugh anyone would be fooled by the looks of this girl if they didnt know the real her she truely is a devil in disguise.Her hands reached up and traced my face with her fingers her touch made me feel violated as though all my human rights had been took away from me in a matter of seconds."Your not as pretty as I was told its funny how people make things up isnt it?" She questioned with a tone of innocence and ignorance in her voice."You bitch you better take that back." I snarled kicking out my right leg but only made connection with thin air as she moved away before my leg was even half way up.

"Your feisty I like it." She giggled at me causing me to mini through up in my mouth such a sicking sound in my ears this was torture enough."Your probaly wondering how long you have been here right?" She inquired I nodded my head to her looking to another direction."I would say a week roughly your all over the news you know people think you ran away after you were kicked out of class by my Takamina." She said smiling as she mentioned the other womens name."Your Takamina I assume you mean Miss Takahashi right?" I asked confused "Thats right my fiance is your teacher and my right hand in running this gang." She explained to me smiling once again.

She turned her back to me and I tried to free myself but was unsuccessful and I made noise much to my displeasure."If you want to escape you need this key but I wont give it to you after all your father still hasnt gave me what I wanted." She says dangling the key infront of my face as she turned back to me."What do you want?" I need to know this what is it she want money mabye ? "If your thinking money your wrong I want his postion as the Mafia and he seems adamant of keeping it what a mean father you have miss Itano." She did not just say that my father is mean that witch.

"Let me go home!" I ordered my voice raised forgeting all the pain that my body was feeling at the recent attack I charged at her breaking the handcuffs that held me back I landed on top of her smacking her face as she tried to push me off her and protect herself instead I got up from my own will and sprinted towards the door.I ragged the door open and my legs took me to where they thought was the best direction."What are you doing go after her!" Madea shouted my body was draining of energy quick and I think ive found the way out of this place or atleast I hope I have.

I seen light and I forced my body to go twoards it and boy was I thankfull I did.

TBC ...

A/N : Hey guys long time no update sorry about that lol anyway I hope you enjoyed this chapter Madea's finally shown herself hehehe thanks for reading and supporting my fic you guys can thank Aliee's song Heaven for this update dont ask how just role with it ahaha anyway comment say what you like and what I need to improve thanks for reading.

And a Shout out to Mizuki_Sone for writing an fic on Asianfanfics and putting myself in as a character though im not using my real name your fic is epic thankyou for writing it

Oh and glee starts again soon YAY!

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 5 11/9/12 UPDATE !!
« Reply #33 on: September 11, 2012, 07:07:48 PM »
Whoa... atsumina as the antagonist was... unexpected :shocked
But, update soon... i want to know what'll happen next.






I hope it's not too fast... the house key and the third base thingie... :nervous

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 5 11/9/12 UPDATE !!
« Reply #34 on: September 11, 2012, 08:08:27 PM »
Acchan is the bad guys? I can't say that since they are all in mafia lol
She said "my Takamina"~

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 5 11/9/12 UPDATE !!
« Reply #35 on: September 11, 2012, 08:48:44 PM »
Ahhhh yes finally you updated lol and don't think that this will be a one off because I'll bug you to update and about the chapter those to girls were real bitches and she's macho to break the handcuffs lol  but it would be you to have her in handcuffs in the first place wouldn't it lol  :P  I'm messing and shut up lol

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 5 11/9/12 UPDATE !!
« Reply #36 on: September 12, 2012, 04:11:23 PM »
Your story is something no one will ever imagine... XDD
love your story..update soon.. :3  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter chap 5 11/9/12 UPDATE !!
« Reply #37 on: September 13, 2012, 06:56:46 PM »
chap 6




"Let me go home!" I ordered my voice raised forgeting all the pain that my body was feeling at the recent attack I charged at her breaking the handcuffs that held me back I landed on top of her smacking her face as she tried to push me off her and protect herself instead I got up from my own will and sprinted towards the door.I ragged the door open and my legs took me to where they thought was the best direction."What are you doing go after her!" Madea shouted my body was draining of energy quick and I think ive found the way out of this place or atleast I hope I have.

I seen light and I forced my body to go towards it and boy was I thankfull I did.

Right infront of me stood Mayu,Yuki,Jurina and Rena each with a gun in hand ready to run into this death trap.Their eyes widened when they seen me run towards them and almost fall to the ground in tiredness and pain luckily Mayu caught me just before I could meet it."Oh my God we finally found you you have know idea how many gangs we fought and intruded on to find you im pretty sure you dad has like five more enemy families to worry about now sorry about that." Jurina says smirking when I myself dont find anything funny at all I mean even if they have just found me they have raised my chances of being taken again just so people could get revenge on my father cause there idiots.

"Jurina shut up and watch are backs we are putting her in the car." Mayu demanded putting my left arm around her small shoulders to help me walk and lead me to the car.I heard gun shots being fired and groans of pain as she opened the car door and pushed me in to save me from being hit with a shotgun bullet.She bashed the door shut behind me then pistol and sniper bullets impacted the car."Dont worry its bullet proof ..... well I think it is." Yuki says jumping through the drivers door window pressing the peddle with force speeding us towards Mayu and Rena's direction.

We screeched to a halt.

Rena and Mayu quickly got into the car.Mayu rolled down the window continuing to fire bullets while Rena opened the sun roof climbing up sitting ontop of the car with a rope which had magicaly got there tied sucerly around her waist so she doesnt fall off as she took a desert eagle from her gun holders raining bullets at any one and anything.

We drove past Jurina or so I thought her hand had took hold of the side mirror and she had flung herself to the top of the car to where Rena was shooting as she did.Okay I never thought I would see that in my life time.Before I knew it we had escaped from Demon Girls territory and arrived at my mansion.
As we got out from the badly damaged car I was pulled into a bone crushing hug which could only be my fathers doing.I returned the hug back with everything I could muster up breathing in his scent the usual smell of gun powder somehow comforting even if I was being shot at not long ago.

"Im so glad your safe I love you and you four why am I getting calls from five different famlies claming that I sent people to kill them!" My father said starting off calm then raising his voice at the end.

"Erm well you see we didnt want to wait till whoever it was finally shown who they where so we just went out on a limb to find her." Mayu hesitantly explained scrathing the back of her head trying not to lock eyes with my father.I smiled slightly noticing my fathers eyes soften when she explained why."I ... suppose thats a good enough reason but dont let it happen again but im happy that you saved my little girl thank you." He sincerly thanked them bowing 180 degrees to show his gratitud eyes a Mafia has manners suprsingly true.

The four girls stood there in shock clearly suprised at my fathers actions but I decied to interrupt there little shocking moment by finally speaking."That women I think her name was Madea Atsuko said that I had been there for months and that I was in the news is that true?" I asked to everyone.My father shook his head in response to me then replied "No you have been gone for a week at most the school phoned the day you where no were to be found I assumed you had skipped again but when you didnt come home I got worried then recvied a message saying if I didnt give up my postion as Mafia they would kill you I informed the school that you skipped classes then I sent you to America to vist your cousin an before I could tell the 4 idiots who had took you they had already caused trouable." So she lied why did she think I would tell her something mabye ?

My father sent me to my room to rest and wash myself before dinner was ready while Mayuki and Wmatsui where told to rest.My father went to his study to make some phone calls but he didnt tell me what they where about.

I slipped out of my clothes an got into a perfect bath bubbles covering my entire body slowly I entered dream world.

(Dream)

I was infront of a stage with people chanting a name I coudnt quite make out then a light shone in the middle of the stage and the angel idol Kasai Tomomi stood there smiling and singing her heart out to her song story of us.

My body danced to the beat then I felt a sharp pain was felt in my back.

(End of dream)

I woke up my head under the water and finding it hard to breath.

I shot up and the pain in my back from my dream was there I got out of the bath and hid my body with a towel then faced backwards to the mirror.A huge scratch was on my back bleeding uncontrollably how did that get there.

TBC ...

@Everyone : Im in an updating mood cause GLEE STARTS TODAY AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY which explains the glee song at the top for smooth crimanal lol anyway thanks for reading comment an say what you liked and dislike and does anyone else like glee if so who is your fav character or characters and couples lol

@Stv_wong  : I wanted to do something unexpected with Madea since usually people cast her as a cheeky shy girl with mabye a bad attitude lol also no your not going to fast your fic is going at the right page although i was suprised when i read your update and i read the bits in white lol

@Kahem : Hmmm you could say that about Acchan lol but i gusse it woudnt make sense lol

@Adam : No more bugging me cause glee has started which means me getting inspartion lol also you need to update so =p oh and GLEE !!

@SleepingHam : Aww you flatter me   :wub: thanks for commenting and I updated since you updated Unexpected things happen lol 

Offline farquhar97

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter 13/9/12 CHAP 6 UPDATE !!
« Reply #38 on: September 13, 2012, 07:10:53 PM »
Ahhh yayay I won't bug you if you continue to update and ahh happy that she's Got out Got worried at first lol and I. Will update tomorrow and lol I'll get you back for today but only a little bit Hehe update soon

Offline kahem

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Re: Im the Mafia's daughter 13/9/12 CHAP 6 UPDATE !!
« Reply #39 on: September 13, 2012, 08:55:34 PM »
AHAHAHA! ROFL! I like Mayuki and WMatsui way of resolving problems!

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