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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #80 on: October 17, 2012, 04:17:12 AM »
Could it be that Takamina and Kai used to date  XD? Kai (which is Takamina in guy form) and Takamina(her real female self) were a couple :wub:. Someone should make a fanfic about these two as I'm sure no one will object Takamina being with this guy  :twisted:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #81 on: October 17, 2012, 05:57:07 AM »
 :? I'm so confused right now

Need to read from the start again.... :banghead: still don't get it...

Pls.. Update more:)

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #82 on: October 17, 2012, 05:58:53 AM »
now Im confused -__-

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 10/16] Chapter 7 part 2
« Reply #83 on: October 20, 2012, 01:09:49 PM »
Thank you all for reading~! and as always all of your comments
amuse me~ all of your thoughts about the latest chapter is indeed
amusing and thanks for sharing your opinions on what do you think
will happen on the future chapters :)

Some of you might be also thinking "When will the play start?!!I'm so craving for it~!! :weeps:"
well I'm really sorry but this is still not the chapter for it  XD

as for this Chapter we will be having Chapter 8 part 1 -A seek to their Past

and we know who's past that was :on lol:

well here's a preview of the next Chapter well actually it's just a picture XD



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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/07] Chapter 8 part 1
« Reply #84 on: November 07, 2012, 08:18:53 AM »
Everyone Sorry for the wait!Update is done!  :bingo:
this chapter as I said to my last post will be the past of two certain people in the fic.
so that your minds will be half-cleared to the confusions you are all having :)

sorry for the rough sketches. :sweat:


so.....ENJOY~!

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Problems for 1 Month Chapter 8 part 1:A seek to their Past



"but what you did was wrong!"

"IT'S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!!

"I'm the student council president so it's my duty to--"

"RAHHH!!!!SHUT UP!!!!"

"!!!!"

"?!"

It was fall in Yoshinaga High,the place where I became the student council president and it is also my duty as the president to provide peace and order to the scholl
but right on that day I think I went a bit overboard.

"HEY!!President's having a fight with Riyota!"

"Eh?!Really?!Where?!I've got to see that live~!"

"Ground floor!"

On that day it all started as I saw class 3-C's Riyota Kurosawa insult a girl on the school gate,I can't hear what he was saying but I can see in the girls face that she is
being hurt by Riyota's words.

Riyota is known as a yankee and a school bully,even teachers are scared of him, with his skills and tall height who wouldn't get scared of him?but I don't agree that
all of us should be scared of him just because of his records of fights.

After I approached and said that he should apologize to the girl, he didn't listen to me but just declared a fight.I can see his fist clenched tightly knowing that I have
broke his temper.He was about to punch me in the face but then suddenly.




A girl that I don't know suddenly appeared out of nowhere blocking the punch of Riyota.

She looked at me and said,"Are you alright....Kaicho?"


"Kaicho?"

that was the first time someone said that to me and I felt kind of weird hearing it from her or maybe she just saw my armband that is color red knowing that I am the
S.C. President.

"Huh?T-Taka-kun!Stay away from this!"

"Riyota!Stop doing this!This isn't right you know?"

"tsk."

In such a small amount of time,that girl that I just met let Riyota leave the scene without making a fight.

"Are you alright?Sorry if my friend did that to you."

"No It's ok Miss,I'm the one who should apologize.Making a girl protect me is a big mistake that I did."

"Mou,what's with that formal speech? and don't call me "Miss"!I'm only 14 years old you know?My name is Takahashi,Minami!"

"Thank you very much Takahashi-san!"I said while bowing in front of her.

"Ah!it's nothing!stop doing this formal things to me!It's uncomfortable to me!your position is much higher to me so stop doing that! and
Just call me "Minami",ok?"

"Ah ok Taka....er...Minami.My name is Kirishima Takumi,nice to meet you."

"Nice meeting you Takumi-kun!"

"Y-you called me by my first name..."

"Is there a problem?"

"Ah....no there's no problem."

"Good~!Let's eat?"

"Huh?aaaaAAaAhHhhH!"

Minami grabbed my hand and run to the nearest canteen to eat.Takahashi Minami....was the very first friend that I ever made.

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After a few months later we became friends....ah no....it was more than that....we became best friends.She joined the Student council and elected as
V.P.(Vice President) and won.Thus "The Two Midgets of Class 2-C" was born.

On the other hand, Riyota Kurosawa changed for the good and became the School's S.C. Peace officer.

We also met a guy named Kobayashi Keitaro, a guy from Osaka and transferred here in our school.

Everything went great for me in this school year of mine.....until that day arrived..."


"Yo,Minami!What are we going to talk about?"

It was spring on February,that time Minami called me to talk about something important and so we decided to see each other at the back of the school.
I was so curious about what are going to talk about.After our last subject I rushed to our meeting place.

"Well I have a good news! and I want you to know it first!"

"Eh~ really?what is it then?"

"I passed the audition!I'm officially an AKB48 member!"

"AKB...48?"

"Eh???didn't I told you about that last time?"

"Ah...AKB48...yeah I....remember it now."

"Hey~ Why are you so down?"

"Didn't you said that if you passed and become a member of the group you'll stop going to school?"

"Ah....about that,I talked to the school principal and can you believe it?They're making me graduate!isn't that great?"

"Eh?really?I don't know that"s possible!"

"Neither do i!hahaha!"

"Hahahaha...."

Continuous laughters came out from ourselves but mine was just for hiding my true emotions on that time..

"Uhm....Today."

"Today?"

"Today is my graduation....Takumi-kun."

"?!!!

W-what?"

"Yeah....So...this is goodbye then?"

"Wait...WHAT?!Why didn't you said this to me and to Keitaro?!We're pals right?!!"

"....sorry but our producer said not to tell but...I can't just keep a promise"

"But why,Minami?Why are you saying this to me now?why now?"

"....Sorry."

Minami was about to leave the scene but I just can't accept the facts that she is going to leave us and that includes.....Me...
That time there was a bracelet in my pocket that I was ready to give to her.Even though it's not White Day I still want to
give her a thing for the thanks that I want to give her and for a very special reason too and that is....to say that I love her.
But then this came through.I hold Minami's hand to stop her.

"So...is AKB more important to you than us?"

'Takumi....sorry but this is my dream we are talking about..."

"I...understand.Here I want you to have this..."

"A bracelet?but it's not White Day yet."

"This bracelet resembles our friendship and I hope....you'll remember me when you see this."

"Arigatou,Takumi-kun."

 "I....I love you Minami.....with all my heart I will continue to support and love you at the same time.
Even if we are apart I'm here to support you so..."

"I love you too Takumi-kun."

"Minami...."

"But I think that "love" that we feel for each other is not the same so....I'm sorry..."

"Uh....It's ok...."

"Well I need to go Takumi-kun.I hope to see you again next time."

"S...So do I....Minami."

"Byebye!"

"Ah!wait!"

"Hm?"

"R-Ribbon!A ribbon looks good on you!you should try it for once!"

"*smiles

sure!"


After that she was gone and suddenly tears rolled down to my cheeks non-stop.

"It's ok Kai..."

"Riyota..."

"I told you...just call me "Riku"..."

"Did you know this was about to happen huh Riku?..."

"Apparently Yes....sorry about that Kai."

"I-It's ok."


T.B.C.

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White Day is a celebration that happens once a year in japan and can be celebrated in other countries.White Day is the day a guy
gives the girl he loves,adores and can also be a friend a thing that can be presented.EX= chocolate,flowers,bracelets,stuff toy,etc.
Valentines in japan is reversed.Instead of the guy giving chocolates and etc. to the girl,

the girl is actually the one that gives the guy a choco and etc.~!


Well that was the fact for White Day if you are curious to know.

Actually did you know that on Chapter 4 - Rival in Problems For 1 Month.

Kai's real name was mentioned? and it was Kirishima Takumi.

Originally Riku was the one who invented Takumi's nickname, which is Kai.

Japanese of President is = Kaicho.

See the hint?

and in this Chapter Riku was Riyota Kurosawa.

Let's see.

Riyota Kurosawa.

tada~

those were the hints that was given in the previous Chapters and in this Chapter so If you already figure that
out then you should be Maeda-san's assistant detective~! :lol:



there are still many questions in this fan fic. that really needs to be unfold so please tune in~!!! :kneelbow:



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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/07] Chapter 8 part 1
« Reply #85 on: November 07, 2012, 08:31:32 AM »
Yeah I was half right, Kai was in love with Minami XD but she wasn't! I don't mind seeing some cute moments of these two because...it's just simply hilarious and cute at the same time, Minami and her male version :lol:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/07] Chapter 8 part 1
« Reply #86 on: November 07, 2012, 10:51:39 AM »
drawing in CATTLEYA??
COOL  :mon fyeah:
xDD yey an update!!!  :mon cweepy:
wahhh minami and Kai  xd cute cute cute :mon kungfu:
arigatou Mai-chan  :mon cute:
SEXY! MAGANDA!  :mon cam: :mon rockstar: :mon bye:
Atsuyuu ♥ Takayuu ♥ Atsumina ♥ Mayuki

YOSH! I'M BACK! FINALLY!!! (notreally)
Been inactive these past few months. =__=
ARRRRGHHHH DUNNO WHY!

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/07] Chapter 8 part 1
« Reply #87 on: November 08, 2012, 05:08:44 AM »
Ah.. i got it finally!!..

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #88 on: November 23, 2012, 11:23:22 AM »
Sorry for the slow update :kneelbow: Busy again for school T_________T

@Tanchan Hehehe It would be fun writing a story in that kind of pattern  :lol:

@yourockme yep yep~!!Cattleya FTW~!!! :on woohoo:

@Haruko yey~ It's great seeing someone not getting trouble on my story anymore OTL

Thanks for all of your comments~!!It helped me again write the next update~!!!




Problems for 1 Month Chapter 8 part 2

After what happened, Minami graduated and left the school like a dust blown away by the wind.

Is this the thing that they call "pain"?the pain of love?If it is...it does hurt so badly.I can't accept Minami leaving me from behind,I know that I have no rights on stopping her but I can't
just let her create her own path without our guide.

"Don't you you mean your guide?"

I quickly looked at my back on who's the one that said that to me and It was Riyota.

I didn't gave any reply to what he said to me, instead he approached me and seat beside me at the school rooftop and sit comfortably.

"So.What's your plan?I know you're not the type of person that gives up."

Riyota is really good at reading a person's attitude,he knew exactly what I am going to do and that is to not give up on Minami.

"Let's.....Let's create an Idol group."Riyota didn't replied fastly on what I said,he think for about a minute and finally he made up his mind and said:

"Hmm....the one that dances and wears awesome costumes?"

"well....kind of."

"In that case count me in."

Riyota really is a weird person if you'll know him well.It's different for the first time we met.That time he was so different from the Riyota I am with today.

Minami sure is amazing,she can change someone by just consulting to that person.She really is an amazing person....

"Hey...from all the girls that you fell in love with...why Minami-kun?"Riyota suddenly asked me that question,it also made me think on why I fell in love to her.

"I don't really know actually...but every time I see her...my heart is beating so hard...."

Riyota grinned of what I said and said "Hmm~" in a teasy way."Hey stop humming....it's embarrassing talking about her."Riyota just laugh on what I said and just patted my head like a kid.

It makes me want to punch him in the face but the problem is that.....I'm to short to reach his face...

"About the Idol group,I know a person that can help us!"

"Eh?you know one Riyota?Who?"

"I'll take you there for tomorrow."

"Ok then..."

Riyota and I agreed on seeing each other at the meeting place and show me to the person that will help us.



The Next Day....

@ a luxury house...

"uh....." I was speechless on the person in front of us.It's non other than Akimoto Yasushi.

"Come,Sit down,Riyota and?"

"Ah!It's Takumi!Kirishima Takumi sir!"

"In short...Kai...is that right?"

"Ah....yes sir."

After that Riyota and me sat to the sofa chair,which is the first time that I sat on one.I'm still wondering on how Riyota has a connection through Akimo Yashushi himself.
Riyota talk to Akimoto-san and said,"About the Idol group we taked about yesterday....We....we are the members for it!I would like to start an Idol Group!"I didn't moved
any muscle after Riyota saying that to Akimoto-san,instead I just look away and still not saying a word or a feedback to what Riyota said.

"Ah,I see.Well isn't that nice."Akimoto-san grinned after hearing Riyota's words.It's like those words maede him happy and interested by Riyota's offer.

"Why exactly to you want to create an Idol group huh Kai?"

"Ah...uhm....I'm doing it....for the person I love...."

Akimoto-san didn't comment back on what I said for a minute or so.He just crossed his arms and thinks for the words I said.He kept saying "Hmm..."over and over letting me wonder
on what's running inside his mind."Why for the person you love?Do you want to impress that person or to reach her?"Those words also made me think."Why do I decided to create
an Idol group?"I said in my mind.Do I want to impress Minami to let her show that she shouldn't let my love go from her? or is it about the thing called "Jealousy?"

"I....I want to reach that person..."

"Hmm....Interesting...."Akimoto-san let go of his arms that were crossed earlier and laid it on the solid wooden table in front of us.He take a deep breath and said...

"Well...I'm happy that you are willing to do that but there is one problem and that is...the Idol group that I need should have 3 members in it."

"W-We'll find the 3rd person!we promise!"I suddenly spoke to Akimoto-san.After what I said he grinned again,"I see.well that's good.I can see that you are willing to find
that 3rd person so I will give you enough time for it."

"When is the due date?"I asked.

"Tomorrow ofcourse."Me and Riyota got shocked by what Akimoto-san said."Tomorrow?!!You got to be kidding me!"that was the sentence that can be read through our faces as Akimoto-said
that thing to us.Yes it's only one person but it is still hard!
 
Suddenly someone entered the room.A tall black-haired guy came in and whispered to Akimoto-san's ears with a serious face on it."Is that so?...I'll speak to them don't worry."
That were the words Akimoto-san said as we hear it from him.

Before the tall black-hair guy leave,Akimoto-san suddenly called his name by saying,"Togasaki,wait a minute."

Togasaki-san came back to Akimoto-san,this time Akimoto-san didn't whispered anything and so is Togasaki-san.

"The 3 member Idol group search is canceled."

"W-What?!Why sir Akimoto?!What happened?!"

"I found the people that will do that project and here they are in front of you."

Togasaki-san stared at us for a second and answer back to Akimoto-san.

"Really?Why sir?especially him!"Togasaki suddenly pointed A finger to Riyota.

"Now Togasaki.Even though Riyota is a clumsy guy.This is the first time I saw him get this serious."



"But sir where is the third member???"

"Togasaki stop asking questions,this problem will be solve.Cancel the search okay?"

Togasaki-san left a sigh and have nothing to do but to listen to Akimoto-san's command.After that Togasaki-san left the room and left a silence to the whole room.

"So!Tomorrow is the deadline for the 3rd member is tomorrow,okay?"

we both nodded at Akimoto-san's words.

"Well we have to go."Riyota said after he stand up to the sofa chair.

"Sure.Goodluck finding that 3rd person Riyota.....my son."

"Ok dad."

"EHHHHHHHHHHHH?!!!!!"is the word I said in my head after hearing those sentences that these two people said in front of me.

T.B.C.



Next Chapter Will still be about How Persona Started and about many things too. :)


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« Last Edit: November 24, 2012, 02:14:12 AM by Mai-chan »
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #89 on: November 23, 2012, 05:51:34 PM »
So an excite~
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #90 on: November 24, 2012, 06:45:13 AM »
aki.p!!!

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #91 on: November 25, 2012, 04:16:27 AM »
Riyota is akimoto son,  :w00t:  :w00t:
Why minami run when she find out that kai is takumi? Takumi the one who's has feeling for minami, I'm bit lost  :?
Thanx for the update ^^
Waiting for the next update :D

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #92 on: November 25, 2012, 02:12:14 PM »
Riyota.... AkiP's son.... great thinking  :? :lol: :)

Wah.... Kai trying to follow Minami... interesting  :twothumbs

Great update, Thank you!!!  :thumbsup

Looking forward to the next one.  :fap :fap :fap

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #93 on: November 30, 2012, 04:35:00 PM »
How come Riyota is Aki-p's son?  XD

Looking forward for next chapter  :)

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #94 on: December 01, 2012, 05:54:56 AM »
I fell for her fics, I found it today and thought it was very creative, it is the differential the drawings is as if the scenes imaginable stay clearer and, hopefully looking forward to the next chapter =)  :thumbsup :thumbsup :bow:

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #95 on: December 10, 2012, 11:01:12 AM »
why no update yet :cry: :(

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 11/23] Chapter 8 part 2
« Reply #96 on: December 15, 2012, 01:18:01 PM »
I miss the drawings
I miss the chapters
and I miss atsumina
but now I'm reading  XD

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 12/20] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #97 on: December 20, 2012, 12:15:22 PM »
Nooo....this fic is on hiatus  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:
But since you said its for the fic
I will be waiting for your update ^^
Ganbatte!!!!!  :twothumbs

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Re: Problems For 1 month [HIATUS] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #98 on: December 24, 2012, 09:20:43 AM »
H......HOLD?!!!!!! WTF??? :grr: why now?! I marathon-ed this story because I thought it's done but then it's on hold?! OTL  :(

What ever is happening to you Mai-chan that involves this story please don't give up and if your loosing inspiration I'll wait for you to grab some :)

more power to PF1M \m/

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Re: Problems For 1 month [HIATUS] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #99 on: January 03, 2013, 02:05:06 PM »
I was so stupid that I didn't noticed that link of this fic. on your siggy XD although I know it's already on hiatus I really liked it.

I read it from the start to chapter 8 part 2 and I like your idea on drawing stuffs in this fic!It makes it a lot easier for us readers to imagine the whole story for every scene and I hope you will continue this because it will be a waste if you don't  :( plus there are so many readers on this fiction too :(

Again,I like this fiction and I hope this fiction will have a great ending in the end :)


Good Luck and Thanks for this story Mai-chan!  :twothumbs
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