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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 26-2
« Reply #240 on: January 10, 2013, 05:24:49 AM »
I haven't been reading this fic for a while...But thank you for the updates.

It was great... Everything is great... the plots, the story lines, etc

Itano is getting more and more honest with her feeling...

What's going to happen with Atsuko and Minami?

Geki and Black... are they going to get together or not soon....?

Yuko is getting better but still unable to fight yet... But at least she didn't die like in the MG drama.

Yeah... honestly why did Torigaya need to be an erotic masseuse although it seem to suit her somehow?

Shaku and Sado, are they together later... coz' it seems like they always having fun argument every time they meet each other?

Anyhow, can't wait to see more and more of your update...

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 26-2
« Reply #241 on: January 12, 2013, 06:10:59 PM »
Part 3



We walked out of the ward after I was able to convince her to take the job offer. I may hate my dad, but that was a good opportunity for her. That kind of opportunity only came once in a lifetime. When we walked back to the front of the ICU, Yuko-san weren’t around.

“Where’s Yuu-chan?” Torigoya asked Black as we walked closer to the others.

Black pointed out at a ward`s door with her thumbs. “Kokabuki has awakened. Sado-san, Maeda and Captain Takahashi were there too.”

“Is she alright?” I asked Black too.

She was only looking at me for a few seconds, looking at my slightly red eyes to be exact. With a sigh, she said, “Just like what the doctor had said before.” She moved closer to Torigoya and me and said, “You know, you don’t need to hide from us if you want to cry. We won’t tease you about it. We understand.” Geki nodded to gave her opinion too.

From the corner of my eyes, I could saw the others Rappappa, OUR KOUHAI, were looking at us. They definitely heard that. And since I still have to protect my pride, I hurriedly said, “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” And with a hushed whisper I added, “Damn it, girls, don’t say things like that in front of them will you? I still have my pride and honor to protect.”

Black shook her head as she mumbled out, “tsundere as usual.”

I heard a sound of a door being opened, and when I turned my head to look at the direction of the sound, I saw Yuko-san, Sado-san, Maeda and Captain Takahashi walked out of the ward Kokabuki was in. Yuko-san eyes immediately ran towards Torigoya. After a brief silent communication, Torigoya nodded and I saw Yuko-san shifted her gaze to me. She sighed and walked closer to me.

“Her doctor came out of the ICU while you were away.” She said.

“How is she?” I asked her, fear and anxiety slowly but surely gripped my heart again. I glanced at the ICU sign. “Is she still there?”

Yuko-san turned her gaze away for a few second, rubbed her forehead and said, “sit down.” My only response was to frown at her. And then, she added, “Sit. You just given your blood. I don’t want you to faint or something.” Which I did. After I was seated in one of the benches in the hallway, Yuko-san smiled triumphantly and within seconds, her smile disappeared, replaced by a frown instead.

“She has a few ‘nice’ diagonal bruises in a shape of a baseball bat on her back.” Yuko-san sarcastically said. “A broken nose, a big bump on her left cheek, and… the worst is…” She took a deep breath and sympathetically said, “She has nineteen stitches on her abs because of the slash of katana. Thankfully it wasn’t deep enough to reach her internal organs, but it was wide enough to make her loss quite amount of blood. They,” Yuko-san pointed at the ICU room, “had to given her three blood bags to cover it. Yours was the third. Based on what Kokabuki said, she probably lost that much blood because she was still fighting even though she’s injured” She pause a bit to take a breath and released it with a sigh. “If only the ambulance came ten seconds too late, she might… we might lose her because of blood loss.”

My ears were ringing when I heard what might have happened, and my head felt like spinning. “Wh-what…?” I asked to no one in particular. My throat clogged. My hands started to shook violently, I curled my hands to stop the trembled, and, “DAMN IT!!” I shout in irritancies, stood up and punched the wall behind me, again, and again, and again. I know my right fist was bleeding, and yet, blinded by rage, I didn’t feel the pain. At all. I heard the others asked me to stop, but I kept on punching the wall, desperate, angry, mad. All of a sudden I felt someone yanked my right hand, stopping me from punching the wall again.

“I said, stop!!” Yuko-san yelled at me, I turned to looked at her, saw her glaring at me, saw the concern in her eyes and I felt my anger slowly slipping away, being replaced by pain, fear and undescribed sadness again.  I shifted my gaze down, unabled to meet her eyes. “Sado…,” I heard her said. And not long after, I heard some footsteps and I knew Sado-san had come closer to us. Another hands grabbed my right hand, and lightly pressing some spots in my hand, checking it.

“Yep,” Sado-san said, “as I predicted from the cracking sound earlier, this baka breaking her fist.” She sighed and threatened me, “Shibuya, go to the clinic or else….”

I pulled my hand from her grip and turned to looked at the ICU door. “I’ll go after I see her.”

“You could get an infection if you wait longer.” Sado-san said

“I’ll wait until she wakes up.” I stubbornly said.

“Fine then.” Sado-san sighed again. “Shaku, go buy an ice-pack and a Tylenol. If this baka-tsundere insist to stay here and wait for her girlfriend to wake up, at least we should prevent her broken fist from getting worst.”

“Alright.” I heard Shaku’s voice from behind me and not long after, I heard her walked away.

“Um… it’s still visiting time, right?” Youran asked, “I’m going to check Kokabuki.” And she walked to the ward.

“Wait, we’re coming with you…” Wota said and she, with the rest of Team Hormone, followed Youran to Kokabuki`s room.

“Shibuya, sit.” Yuko-san said from behind me. And when my silence greeted her, she flung her arm around my neck, dragged me, “I said, sit down,” and pushed me to the benches. Forced me to sit down on the benches, and smirked triumphantly after she succeeded.

‘Damn, even though it has been a while for her to not using her power, she’s still strong. How could she drag me that easily?’ I scowled at her, irritated at her display of power. Thank God, our kouhai weren’t around.

“Itano-san, perhaps they would charge you for that.” Captain Takahashi said. I looked at her inquiringly and my eyes followed her gaze to the spot on the wall that I had punched earlier. There, on the sparkling white wall, was a blood-stain that formed a fist mark. “But, that’s if they knew who did that.”

“They’ll know for sure if they see her hand.” Sado-san said while she shook her head. “Shibuya, do you know how long it takes to heal a boxer’s fracture?”

“What’s that?” Geki asked as we looked at Sado-san inquiringly.

“That’s boxer’s fracture.” Sado-san pointed at my hand that, by now, bruised and swollen, especially in near the knuckle of my ring finger. “And it’s usually takes about two to three months to heal completely. What if you have to fight during the healing time? You surely didn’t think that far, huh?”

“Um… no.” I said as I lowered my gaze.

“Just pray that your hand`s condition isn’t that worse and your healing process can be much shorter.” Sado-san said, then she shook her head as she mumbled, “and she said she want a revenge… do tell me how could she revenge her with that hand? Baka-tsundere…”

I scowled at her for insulting me, though it was mostly true. I was about to opened my mouth to retort back at her when a group of women came closer to us. At this Captain Takahashi smiled brightly and came towards them.

“Hey, girls… thanks for coming.” She said as they did a group hug.

“Hey, Sachou, still as short as usual, I see.” One of them with a red hair said.

“Hey, what do you mean by that?! I’m your sachou!” Captain Takahashi said.

The other woman with a seductress face, and oddly familiar, giggled and teasingly said, “But that’s didn’t change the fact that YOU ARE SHORT.”

They kept on talking to themselves while we looked at each other with an imaginary question marks floating above our heads, save for Maeda who looked like she was on the verge of explosion. Hmm... was that jealously that I saw on her?

After watching them interacts for a few more minutes, Yuko-san exclaimed, “Ah! They are her Shitennou. I forgot to tell you two.”

“About what?” Torigoya asked her.

Yuko-san gloomily smiled at us, “Well, while you and Shibuya were away, I talked to her and we’re considering calling her Shitennou to help us in case something happen again.” She sighed and pointed at my hand, “This baka broke her fist, the Kabuki Sisters… well, they definitely won’t be able to fight for about two months or so. Even if they’re willing, I won’t let them. And I… I can’t fight yet. So… they’ll be the back-up when needed.”

After her explanation, I felt even more guiltier and we were immersed in a heavy and tense silence, in contrast to the other group who were chatting happily in their reunion. It was all silent here, safe for the older Rappappa`s voices, but inside, my mind, my heart were in turmoil, with guilt, pain and remorse. With each seconds passed, I felt more and more anxious. I kept on glancing on the ICU`s door and window, hoping to see… anything… just… any progress was fine.

All of a sudden a loud voice could be heard, “Hey, I got it!”, came from the direction of the elevator from a girl with a long red coat.

“Oy! Spoiled-brat! Don’t yell in the hospital!” Sado-san hissed at her in irritancies. “My colleagues might kick you out for being noisy.”

“Whooooops~~~,” the spoiled-brat said while grinning innocently. She walked towards Sado-san and gave her an ice-pack and a bottle of Tylenol, then she gave one plastic bag to Yuko-san. “Here’s some foods and drinks, I guess I might buy you all something as well. We haven’t eaten anything yet since noon, right?”

“Thanks,” Yuko-san took the bag full of foods with a grateful smile. It was a good thinking for Shaku, at least I could admitted it.

“Wait,” Torigoya piped in while the others were already started to dig in the bag for food, the older ex-Rappappa were already continued their chat that was interrupted when Shaku came back, “what about the one you’re holding?”

I kept on watching them in silence, not even bother to moved, while Shaku grinned again and said, “this one for me~~.”

“What?!” Almost all of us shouted in response of what she had said, save for Sado-san whose hissed at us, telling us to lower our voices. Well, it’s not our fault, there’s a lot of food there, just like the other bag. Onigiri, melon-pan, sandwich, even some bento box. Sado-san was right, that Shaku really ate too much. It was a miracle that she didn’t get fat. The glutton only smiled at us, at our response actually.

“Melon-paaaan~~~,” Geki said with a smile as she took a few melon-pan from the bag. Heh… that girl really like melon-pan.

Black smiled at Geki, then she took one bento box and gave it to Geki, “don’t eat too much melon-pan, you have to eat real food too.”

“Oh, alright.” Geki said as she put back two melon-pan back into the bag and received the bento from Black.

Sado-san and Yuko-san shared a knowing look and then they turned to looked at me. I grinned at them, signaling that I saw what they saw. After that, Sado-san walked closer to me while Yuko-san opened her bento box, Torigoya, Shaku and Maeda already started eating.

Sado-san opened her hand with palm up. “Hand,” she said shortly. I brought my hand upward and she gave me the Tylenol. “Take this first.” Which I did, and afterwards, she tended my hand with the ice-pack.

“Oy, you two, what do you want? I’ll save it for you before the others came back.” Yuko-san said during my ‘treatment’.

“Anything’s fine.” I answered.

“Same here.” Sado-san said.

“Minami,” I heard Maeda said with a scowl, “why don’t you introduced your friends too us and eat?” Her irritation and anger were clearly apparent on her face.

At this everyone focused their attention to the two of them, even Sado-san neglected my hand for a while. Captain Takahashi noticeably gulped and scratched her head, while her friend smirked behind her.

“Minami, huh?” the red-head said.

“So… that’s the girl….” The seductress face drawled.

“Nice~~,” the voluptuous woman said, and then she whistled, “I have to admit that you’ve got a good taste, Sachou.”

Captain Takahashi immediately turned back to looked at her friends, “Wh-what?! Cut it out, girls…” and then she whispered something to them. When she turned back to looked at us, she forced out a smile and said, “Ah, yes, um… they’re my Shitennou.”

“But, there are only three of them.” Shaku said. They stiffened up immediately in response. “U-um, is there’s something wrong?” She asked.

Captain Takahashi forced a smile again and said, “I rather not talk about it, sorry.” I glanced at Maeda and saw her frowned in response. “Ah, by the way, this,” Captain pointed at the red-head, “is Oshima Mai, and-”

“You’re Oshima too?”  Yuko-san asked as she gaped at the red-head.

“Yeah, you too?” the red-head asked back and then she smiled cheerfully. “Small world isn’t it?”

Captain Takahashi shook her head and while pointed at the voluptuous woman, she said, “This is Noro Kayo, and this,” she pointed at the other woman, who, as I said before, oddly familiar to me, “is Ohori Megumi.”

By the time she finished introduced her friends to us (Ohori was looking at me strangely when Captain Takahashi said my name, my real name, not as Shibuya), the other Rappappa came out of the ward, and looked at them questioningly. “Who are they?” Youran asked Yuko-san. Aaaaaand… the introduction started again. After that, we ate together in the hallway, which was harder for me considering the state of my right hand. Thank God, Yuko-san saved me the sandwich and onigiri, not the bento. There’s no way in hell I could held a chopsticks with my hand being wrapped like that. Maeda was scowling all the time, while Captain Takahashi kept on glancing on her for every ten seconds or so.

While we ate, a doctor came out of the ICU. Yuko-san immediately stood up and walked closer to him. I wanted to ask him about her condition too, but somehow I couldn’t move myself. Somehow, I was paralyzed on the bench. I could only watch and listened.

“Her condition is stabile for now. She already passed the critical state, but we still have to watch her closely for tonight in case something bad happen. So, right now, we put her on a drug-induced sleep. Perhaps tomorrow we can move her to the ward.” He answered Yuko-san`s question. And then he looked around and as he saw Captain Takahashi, he asked, “Miss, you said you are a police officer?”

“Yes, I am. Is there something wrong?” Captain Takahashi said calmly. The aura around her suddenly changed. All of a sudden she looked… big? I didn’t know the right words, but somehow when I saw her, I instantly knew why she could be a Captain despite her young age.

“The patient`s injuries are too severe, and so does the other patient before. Even in delinquents` standards. I think-.”

“They’re under my cover, you don’t need to worry.” Captain Takahashi cut him out. “Just, please make sure they’ll be alright again.”

The doctor frowned for a moments, and with a sigh, he said, “Alright then. Do you want to look at her? I could open the window`s curtain if you want.”

“Yeah…,” I gnarled out, “I want to see her.”

The doctor nodded and went back to the ICU. In the span of ten seconds, the window`s curtain that was directly in front of me lifted up. When I saw her, I gasped in pain and I felt like the food that I had eaten climbed up my throat. I wanted to puke, but I held it back. The onigiri that I held in my hand fell to the floor. The others were talking about her, but oddly, it felt like they were far away from me. Their voices felt like coming from a far.

“Ookabuki…” Shaku said sadly.

“She looks… bad.” Youran said. “Didn’t the doctors said her major injury is the slash on her stomach? Why does she got so many bandages like that?”

“A broken nose and a bruise on her cheek.” Sado-san said, perhaps quoted the doctor`s words. “It might because of that.”

“That’s… Tomo-chan?!” Ohori, Captain Takahashi`s friend gasped in surprise when she saw Tomo.

Her friends, including the captain, looked at her questioningly, “Meetan, you know her?”

“Yeah… she was my neighbor. My parents` home is was next to her. I haven’t seen her again after I moved out of my parents` house though. Oh, God… Kasai-san won’t like it, both of them.”

“Of course they won’t. What kind of parents would like to see their daughter in that condition?” I heard the other woman, Noro, said.

“No. What I mean is, they don’t even know that their daughter-”

“Stop.” I managed to cut Ohori and glared at her. “Don’t say anything about her family. She never said anything about it to the others. Don’t spill it out without her concern.” I hoarsely said, though my death threat clearly apparent in my tone of voice, and after I glared at her for a few more seconds, my eyes went back to the figure on the bed.

“Shibuya-san, is there something wrong with her family?” Akicha asked.

“Yeah,” Shaku butted in, “come to think of it, she has never invites us to her home.”

“And if I remember correctly, Kokabuki had said that she had never met her aneki`s parents.” Youran added.

I was only stood up and walked closer to the window without answering them. I moved my left hand up slowly and touched the window, hoping that the damn wall could just disappear so that I could be with her. Not being outside the ICU like this. They kept on pestering me and when I was about to snap at them, Mukuchi had beat me to it.

“Stop it. If Ookabuki want us to know, she’ll tell us. If she didn’t then at least we should respect her decision and not trying to dig out her secrets.”

It was the first time I heard her speak, I didn’t even know that she was that wise. The others were kept on talking, but I didn’t hear any of it. All that’s matter to me at that moment was… her. I watched her from the window, analyzing, studying, trying to find some indication to assure myself that she’ll be fine, that she’ll get better.

“You… Shibuya, right?” Ohori said hesitantly. “You… looked familiar somehow. Hmmm… Wait, you know her parents? Then could it be… Hey, Sachou what’s her real name again?”

“Itano Tomomi.” I heard Captain Takahashi said.

“Ah! You’re the other Tomo. Her childhood friend. Am I right? …. That’s why you looked familiar. Man, you’ve grown now, last time I saw you, you were only a kid. When did you get back? She was so sad when you moved out of Tokyo. I still remembered all the things she had said about you, or more like her admiration and love.” She snickered.  And when my silence greeted her, she said, “She’s right, you’re too silent.”

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*Because at the moment Shibuya put all of her attention on Ookabuki, I change it to third person POV.

“Meetan…,” the Captain chided her friend with a whisper, “stop your teasing this is not the time.”

“Yeah, don’t blame us if Shibuya over there,” Yuko said as she pointed at the said Shibuya with her thumb, “beat the hell out of you. She’s emotionally unstable right now. Even when she’s emotionally stable, she was always gets riled up easily.”

“And stop blurting out things from their childhood, if Shibuya wasn’t already distracted by Ookabuki`s condition, she’ll surely punch you out.” Torigoya added. “She is a very proud person and very private. She tends to keep all her feelings and emotions inside, … beside her temper of course.”

“Yeah, she has never even told us anything about her past, beside the fact that they,” Sado butted it while she tilted her head towards Shibuya, “were childhood friends. If she didn’t want us, her friends, to know, she surely wouldn’t want them,” she pointed at the current Rappappa, “to know any of it. Which is probably why Ookabuki had always keep her mouth shut about their relationship.”

“Is that the reason why that even Kokabuki doesn’t know anything? The Kabuki Sisters used to tell each other anything.” Youran said.

“Yeah, most likely. That tsundere… is too individualist.” Yuko answered. “Anyway… How’s Kokabuki? Any change?”

Youran grimace slightly and said, “she insisted to hop off her bed and look at her aneki. The nurse had to tie her on the bed, to prevent her injuries to re-open again… Other than that… fine.”

“I see…” Yuko-san said, “Have you able to contact her family?”

“Yeah, she called her dad earlier.” Wota said, “He’s on a tour with her teammates so, he asked her to ‘do as what the doctor has said to recover fast’, since he can’t visit her.”

“So… the only problem left is… how to contact Ookabuki`s family.” Yuko said, then she glanced at Shibuya. “I actually want to ask Shibuya to do it but…”

At the same time, the older ex-Rappappa was standing in a small circle a few feet away from their successor. “I just want to know her better, I used to heard a lot about her.” Meetan said in a defensive manner.

“As they said, Itano-san is very individualist and she has a very-short-temper.” Captain Takahashi said, “the only ones that can control her are Oshima-san and Kasai-san. Not only that, she’s also quite strong. As for you… it has been years since the last time you fought, right?”

“Oy, Baba,” Noro said as she flung her arm around Meetan`s shoulder, “I understand your… tendencies to tease younger-cute girls, but that girl over there,” she pointed at Shibuya, “don’t. Just don’t. At least not now.”

“Yeah, she looks like she is on the verge of breaking down into rubble.” Mai-mai said, “And yet, the way she glared at you earlier, sent the chill down on my spine.”

“I’ve told you they’re strong. Too strong. Thank God, at least they still got some sense on their skulls.” Captain Takahashi exclaimed. “And thank God that they’re Rappappa.”

“Fine, fine, I get it.” Ohori said. “You said Tomo-chan can control her, right? I’ll wait until she’s in a better condition and I’ll ‘play’ with her friend.”

“Girlfriend.” Captain Takahashi said and when she saw the bewildered looks her friends gave her, she added, “Itano-san and Kasai-san are ‘together’. Like most of them are.”

“Ah… so that’s why her glare was almost like a jealousy glare.” Mai-mai said as she snapped her fingers. “It was like ‘even though you used to be her neighbor, she is mine now, so shut the hell up’.”

“Well then, it’s all makes it more interesting, right?” Ohori added with a mischievous smirk, made her friends face-palmed at her ‘habit’.

All of a sudden a shrill sound of a phone could be heard from Yuko`s direction. All of the eyes in the hallway were directed at her, including the tsundere Queen`s, as Yuko put her hand on her pocket and pulled out a phone.

“Ah, God…,” she grimaced as she lifted her hand showed the phone screen to the other, the words ‘Okaa-san Calling’ flashed on the phone screen. Ookabuki’s phone. “Should I answer it?”

 Shibuya glanced at her watch and mumbled absent-mindedly, “It’s half past nine already. Her curfew has already passed. Just answer it.”

“Cap’n you answer it.” Yuko said as she gave the phone to the said Captain. “You’re a cop, she’ll believe you more.”

“Fine,” Captain Takahashi sighed in defeat and answered the phone. “Hello, I am Captain Takahashi from Tokyo Metro Police Department… Yes, this is your daughter`s phone…. I’m sorry, Kasai-san, but, the doctors have put your daughter is in a drug-induced sleep right now. She was…”

As Captain Takahashi on the phone, suddenly the tsundere said, “I’m going to the clinic,” with the same detached mask that she has been wearing ever since the curtains were lifted, surprising her friends with what she had said, “give me a call when something happens.” And she started to walked towards the elevator after gave one last look to the person in the ICU.

“Wait, Shibuya, I’m going with you.” Sado said after she was out from the shock from heard that the tsundere actually willing to see a doctor by her own will. Then Sado turned to her sachou before she left, “I have a night shift today, call me if there’s something happen or just go to the nurse office on the 2nd floor east corridor.”

“Yuu-chan… is Shibuya going to be alright?” Torigoya asked with a worried frown.

Yuko sighed while rubbed her forehead, “I hope so. That mask she’s wearing… it’s reminds me of how she was three years ago before ‘that’ happened.” A loud gasp from Dance answered her and she turned to looked at Shibuya`s follower while her Shitennou frowned. “You surely remembered that too, right, Dance?”

“She-she won’t do the same thing, right?” Dance asked worriedly.

“I-I’m going to check on her,” Torigoya said as she started walking towards the elevator, “we can’t let her to be alone on her own before Ookabuki awake.”

“What’s wrong? What’s that?” Shaku asked after Torigoya left.

“You don’t need to know that.” Yuko said. After that she sighed again and turned to looked at Rappappa members, “you guys, go home. It’s late already. Especially you, Black. Your son needs you.”

Black looked at her sachou with a contemplating look, “alright, give me a call if something happen. Anything.”

“I’ll escort you to home,” Geki said as she stood up, “after that, I’m coming back here.”

“I’m staying.” Youran said.

“Me too.” Shaku added.

“No… go home, all of you.” Yuko said, “Geki, you too. Stay over in Black`s apartment or go back to the orphanage or something.”

“But… what about you and Torigoya-san?” Wota asked.

“Two of Rappappa`s queens are hospitalize here. And one of the ex-queens is on the verge of mental break-down, and with my luck she is the hardest to handle amongst all of them. So, yeah, I’m staying.” Yuko said with a sarcastic tone. “You guys. Go. Home. And go to school tomorrow. Guard our base.”

“You three, go home too.” Captain Takahashi butted in after she finished with the phone call. “I’m staying here. They’re all under my cover. I have to stay, at least until Kasai-san wakes up.” She added after she saw the questioning expression her friends gave her.

“If Minami stay, I’m staying too.” Maeda said, made the others gaped or looked at her questioningly.

The said Minami also gaped at her and after a while, she let out a goofy smile, directed specially at Maeda, who’s hesitantly smiled back at her.  Noro leaned her head to her sachou`s ear and drawled, “nice one, sachou.”

“Wh-what!?” Captain Takahashi immediately came back from her own little-world with Maeda and glared at her friends who were all smirking teasingly, “You all… Just. Go. Home. NOW!!”

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*At the Hospital`s clinic, Shibuya`s POV

Some young doctor was currently checking my hand when I was waiting the X-ray result, which in my opinion really wasn’t needed, I meant, my hand was already X-ray-ed, right? Why should he check it again? Felt irritated by it, I pulled my hand from his grab.

He smiled his best smile, by the looks of it, and said, “is it still hurt?”

I gave a sarcastic smirk back at him, “no, I had been on a worse condition.”

Keeping his smile intact, he asked me again, “may I ask what made your hand became like this?”

“I punched a wall,” I said off-handedly while looking at the-oh-so-many-medical-pictures in the room, then I gave my best glare at him, a Rappappa`s Queens` glare, “and stop bothering me before I punch you out too.”

He gasped at me in shock and before he was able to speak again, the door was opened with a loud ‘bang!!’ by Torigoya who’s immediately attached herself to me after she saw me.

“ARGH!! Torigoya… Get! OFF!!” I shouted while trying to get away from her tight hug. “Why are you here anyway?!” I asked with a glare at her after she released me.

“Like before, I’m checking you up.” She said with her usual innocent grin.

I just only gaped at her in shock as a response, and after a few seconds, my mind finally finished with the rebooting process. “What am I!? FIVE?! I’m not a kid!”

And…. She was pouting… At me… At my response actually. “I was worried….”

I rolled my eyes at her and grumbled, “you don’t have too…”, and yet I was thankful she came, at least I wouldn’t have to be alone with this annoying doctor.

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After I got the damn result (thankfully, my hand`s condition wasn’t that worse, I didn’t have a fracture, only cracked, so the doctor told me to rest my hand for at least two weeks and not to used it too much for at least a month and now my hand was wrapped with a cast to prevent my hand from moving too much), I got back with Torigoya to the front of ICU room again, and now, I was stuck with this two couples. Damn….

The differences in how these two couples interacted with each other were just like day and night. Yuko-san and Torigoya were… as usual. They were snuggling together to find a better and more comfortable position in the hard bench and sometimes whispering something or throwing jokes at each other, bantering playfully. As for Maeda and Captain Takahashi, the two of them looked like they tried to imitate Black`s behavior and sometimes stealing glance at each other. What’s with the silence? And these two couples had been like that all night! ‘Hrm… damn! Why should I get stuck with them? Tomo… just wake up, please… I don’t want to stick with them longer…. They won’t go until you awake.’

I sighed while I looked at my watch, it was already seven in the morning, and they said they’ll move her to the ward in the morning, so why did nothing happen? Gosh… I felt like I was about to explode.

“Er….” Captain Takahashi suddenly spoke made us looked at her in response, “Itano-san, about Kasai-san`s family… I think you have to know, that her mother was… angry… during the phone call. She said things like… ‘had enough with all the yankees that bullying her daughter and want to move her to another school’ and also she said that she’ll come later today.”

“Bullying?” Torigoya said and she grabbed my upper arm to catch my attention. “Shibuya, her family…”

“Didn’t know she is also a yankee.” I finished the sentence for her while closing my eyes again, tired with all of this and… sleepy.

“How could that happen? I mean, she must’ve been a yankee at least before she came to Majijo, right? I still remembered the first time I saw her fought.” Yuko-san said in disbelieves. “She was only a freshman at that time and yet her stance and movement were better than half of the seniors in Majijo.”

“And now they want to move her to another school….” Maeda mumbled slowly.

“She won’t go, right? Shibuya?” Torigoya asked worriedly.

I only sighed as a response, because, honestly, I didn’t know who she would choose. Her family or Majijo. Her family or… me. Her family situation was different than mine. I was always been the lone kid, my parents never cared much about me. But her, she was used to have the perfect family. At least based on what she told me back then. And even though she never said anything about it, I knew, deep down, she was still hoping for her family, her parents, to go back to how they were before. And so, if her parents wanted her to move, if her parents wanted her to choose, then…

The sound of the door being opened pulled me out of my though. I immediately opened my eyes and there, in front of the ICU door, stood a nurse. She calmly smiled. “The patient has awake. She asked for someone named… Baka-Tsundere Queen?”  She said with a questioning expression, because of the strange title I guessed.  And when the other pointed at me with a smirk on their faces, she tried to hold her smile, stepped aside and made a gesture with her hand to let me in. “Don’t stay for too long though, she still need to rest.”

I stood up and tried to walked, but my feet felt like it was made of jelly. And when I felt like stumble, Yuko-san grabbed my arm and flung my arm around her shoulder to support me. “Brace yourself. Don’t make her worried just because you can’t control yourself.”

I gulped and said, “yes” and walked inside with the her support. After I passed the door, I saw her bed was covered from my view with the in-room curtain. I took my arm off from Yuko-san and opened the curtain slowly. The steady beeping sound from some machine made me nervous even more. And there she was, lying on the bed, with a bandage over her head, covering her nose and cheek, an IV drip connected to her left hand, a breathing mask covered her mouth and nose. The rest of her body was covered by a blanket. She glanced at my direction and slowly, painfully, tried to smile, although her smile was more like a grimace than a smile.

“…Hey…,” she slowly said, “sorry… for making you… worried…” Even for just said simple short sentence as that seemed to take a lot of her energy.

I hastily moved to the side of her bed and took her hand in mine carefully, and pecked her forehead. “No, it’s alright… just rest for now and recovers quickly. Don’t waste your energy.”

“Mmm…” She mumbled and then glanced at my hand. She instantly narrowed her eyes at me. “What… happened…?”

I quickly moved my right hand to my lap, hiding it from her view. “It’s nothing… just… um… cracked…”

“Hit… the wall… again?”

“Er… yeah.”

She rolled her eyes in exasperation and smiled at me again. “I’m… sorry…”

My throat started to clogged and my eyes were felt like burning. I don’t know how much time left until my mask cracked. Thankfully, the nurse came and told me to go out because, “The patient still needs to rest.”

“I’ll wait for you outside.” I said to her before I was out.

She shook her head slowly, and after I looked at her questioningly she added, “no… go home… rest… and… come back… here….”

I gave her a nod and walked out of the ICU. After I closed the door, I felt my strength left me, made me fall to sit the floor. The burning sensation in my eyes came back, so I squinted my eyes close and rubbed my forehead. Desperately trying to stop myself from break down sobbing in public and to ease the headache I was currently having due to lack of sleep.

“Hey, you okay?” Yuko-san asked me. Even though my eyes were closed, I knew she was crouched down near me. And at the same time, I felt a pair of hands massaging my back. It must be Torigoya.

“Yeah… just tired.” After a while, I stood up and grimly smiled. “She kicked me out. Said that I should go home and rest, so…”

Yuko-san smirked back, “Yeah, you should. Just go, we’ll go home too after the others came here.”
 
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Aish... finally this chapter finished.  :smhid  13,900 words in one chapter, it's breaking my own record of my longest chapter. I hope you all still read it though.  :nervous :nervous

Anyway, who can guess Takadeka`s Shitennou before I mentioned their names?  XD  Hmmm... a lot of pairings made a progress in this chapter. Maybe... it's time for another side-story? :? :? Ah, well, I'll wait until the inspiration strike me again.  :lol:



@haruko: thanks for still reading. Mmmm.. i won't abandon it, but perhaps...
               you have to wait longer for update, because a lot of things that's happened lately pretty much killed my muse :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: Argh!! I hate it!!

@minami-chan: it was pretty sentimental, wasn't it? :nervous :nervous
                       yep, that's the bad-effect of holiday, I was just received my type A too  :smhid

@kahem: yeah, poor her... (especially in her real-life, not the one in my fic  :cry: )

@songbac: sorry, for making you sad  :nervous and sorry that I was late by two days in updating this  :nervous
               
@BbSis: Yuko had fought 30 yabakune on her own, but, Kabuki Sisters fought the same amount of peoples... but their opponents use weapons.  :nervous
            Mm.. interrogation session in the next chapter (I hope so  :nervous )

@lollita90: yeah, you haven't come for a while. I thought you've graduated from the fandom  :nervous
                sorry for making you wait.  :nervous

@cisda83: for Shibuya, that's the effect of relationship :lol:
               as for the other pairs.... hmmm.... we'll see.... :nervous

And as always, thank you for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. I really appreciate it. And um... sorry for the miss-spellings and grammar errors, I was on a bad mood for weeks, so my writing quality was affected by it.  :nervous



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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 26-3
« Reply #242 on: January 12, 2013, 07:33:27 PM »
Thanks for the update! :D Really love this fic & finally managed to catch up to the latest chapter :) It was as awesome as always, really enjoyed reading it :) & Nice to see Atsuko & Minami warming up to eachother again!
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 26-3
« Reply #243 on: January 12, 2013, 09:59:31 PM »
Eh! of coursenot.. OMG atsumina!!! what happen?! atsuko forgive bakamina ....when?!

jajaja takadeka shitennou is amazing love it!! :B

omg all th epairings advnce are awesome... but my favorite this time is atsumina .B

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« Reply #244 on: January 13, 2013, 02:15:59 AM »
Atsumina!!!!!!!
T_T Chiyuu I wanna cry...
Ouch I punched a wall one day and it hurted several days

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« Reply #245 on: January 13, 2013, 08:58:32 AM »
read two updates at once!! :)
26-2: Tomo and Tomo's past was fun to read
26-3: could this be... the dawn of atsumina!? Is Atsuko forgiving the stupid midget??

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« Reply #246 on: January 13, 2013, 12:30:29 PM »
Yea.. Tomo-mi is okay... that's good for Tomochin

Atsuko is jealous huh... well yeah some of the graduate members of AKB are back just to become the past Shintenou... Great

Who is the last Shintenou the one that they don't want to discuss

Thank you for the great update

Can't wait to see the next one

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« Reply #247 on: January 14, 2013, 07:19:27 AM »
Very nice chapter o/

Nhyooown! Takamina is finally getting the attention she want from Acchan huehueh

Ookabuki is worse than I thought and Shibuya can't get in a fight for at least once month ><

These new characters seems funny heheh and I got quite curious about the one who is missing...

I only got Noro Kayo thuahUuah

Thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter o/

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« Reply #248 on: January 14, 2013, 12:06:28 PM »
transfer to other school?!
Uff!
It´s a very long chapter!!
Thanks for the it!

yeah!! Takamina and her Shitennou (great!)

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« Reply #249 on: January 19, 2013, 08:18:38 AM »
you  :on voodoo: :on voodoo:  you dare to put my little baby in bad condition :frustrated: :frustrated:


but she woke up  :sweat: :sweat: and I wonder how is her choice, shibuya or her family  :shifty: :shifty:

and... I'm here to wait for your updatate, and i hope i don't wait so long  :bored: :bored:

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« Reply #250 on: January 26, 2013, 07:07:12 AM »
Chapter 27 - 1




Currently, I was on my mother`s kick-ass yellow Hummer with Geki on the passenger`s seat beside me. Why am I here, you asked? Well, simple, that’s because the stupid-b**ch that happens to be my girlfriend`s mother kicked her out of the house and only gave her 24-hours to collect her stuff in her house before her parents throw it all in the garbage. And so, here I was with Geki, heading out to her parents` house after I picked my mother`s Hummer and went to my apartment to grabbed my traveling bags.

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*Flashback

After I got my rest, I immediately went back to the hospital in the afternoon and head straight to the ward that currently occupied by the Kabuki Sister. I heard from Sado-san, they had put her in the ward to recover. For now, no prep school for me. When I was still a few feet away from the door, I heard someone`s yelled. I frowned and walked closer. I was about to open the door when I heard a women’s voice yelled, “Do as I say or don’t call me Okaa-san again!”

My eyes widened from the shock, ‘no way… she ordered her to choose… no….’ The same feeling that has been a little bit too familiar for me lately came back. Fear and anxiety. And alongside with it, the rage also came back to me. I hastily opened the door and saw most of the Rappappa and Captain Takahashi inside, aside from Sado-san, Black and Team Hormone. And… her mom.

All eyes in the room drifted towards me after I closed the door soundly, a bit too hard actually. I almost slam the door due to my erratic emotion. I could felt my face scowled dangerously, that even made Youran and Shaku stepped back from their position in the middle of the room to near the window. Yuko-san and Torigoya warned me to control my rage with their stares. As for Tomo, she smiled slightly while half-sitting with the bed propped up slightly to support her. She looked better though, at least she didn’t used a breathing mask anymore.

“Great, you’re here too.” Her mom said. “Help me to convince her that it won’t do her good if she still stay with… with these… low-life-commoners!”

“You seemed to forget that I was from Majijo too.” I growled at her through my clenched teeth. When she finally got over with the shock of me being rude to her, she opened her mouth to say something, so I quickly added, “And those low-life-commoners ARE my FRIENDS!”

“What? I don’t understand how your family could let you befriend with… with these delinquents?!” She yelled scandalously while glaring at me

‘Heh, typical hi-class socialite.’ I glared back at her and slowly said, “Because I am also one,” with extra pressure in each words, “and besides, one of them is actually the daughter of the owner of Kojima Technologies Inc. I guess you have heard about that company, right?” My hands started to shook with anger while I was still in a glaring contest with her. I heard Yuko-san called me, reprimanded me, and I took a deep breath to control myself.

“It won’t do you any good to mingle with… society`s trash like them.” She said coldly, from the corner of my eyes I saw the others were scowling or throwing daggers at her with their eyes. And to make it even worse, she added, “They would end up in jail or in the road. You should go back to your mother and be a nice lady, like the one you suppose to be.”

My eyes widened, within seconds, my rage already came back, and I shouted, “LEAVE MY MOTHER OUT OF THIS!! AND THEY’RE NOT F***ING TRASH!!”

Some series of gasps could be heard, but one voice able to come into my ears despite all of the others` voices. And it was from my girlfriend. She called me, asked me without words to come closer to her, which I slowly did with the heavy and tense silence surrounded the room. I went to the side of her bed and leaned to half-sitting-half-standing there, with my scowl and my deathliest Queen`s glare intact. All of a sudden, a giggle could be heard, a giggle that sent the chill ran down my spine. Heard that, I knew Geki was on her limit. Why? Because this situation was similar to when Black`s family ordered her to choose, her family or her un-born baby.

“Geki… Stop.” Yuko-san said and when she looked at that b***h, all of a sudden she was showing off her aura, the one that shown why she was the greatest Rappappa`s Sachou ever, and calmly, confidently, she said, “Sorry, Kasai-san, can you stop insulting us any longer? They’re my family and I won’t let anyone put a disgrace over their names.” And when that b***h opened her mouth to retort back at her, she quickly added, “And about your daughter, I believe she is old enough to make her own decision.” Yuko-san turned to look at us and with a sympathetic smile she asked, “Well, Ookabuki?”
 
Tomo just sighed and grabbed my hand that was on top of the bed. The action that wasn’t went unnoticed by her mother who’s frowned at our linked hands.

Captain Takahashi moved forwards as she said, “Kasai-san, I can assure you that they won’t ends up in jail or in the road. Not a single one of them. Not if I can help it. They are a bunch of good kids actually. Sure, they’re not your normal everyday teenagers, and yes, they tend to use their fists first and think later. But, you won’t find any other groups of teenager with bond as deep and as strong as them.”

Her mother seemed convinced by the Captain and yet, when she looked back at us, her frown came back. “You two…” At this, I felt the hold of my hand tighten a bit. “All the ‘stay over in her place’ things… Is there something going on with the two of you!?” She almost spat out the question, “Were you really just have a sleep-over or… sleeping together?!”

Tomo winced at the question and sighed, “Do you really want me to answer that?” She slightly pulled my hand towards her, so I moved closer to her, my back was hitting her shoulder softly, “Can you just… accept me for who I am?” She asked to her mother as she leaned her head to my back.

Her mother looked at us with ice on her eyes, which I sent back immediately at her.  She raised her hand, in a motion to slap her daughter, but I blocked it with my arm. “You think I would let anyone harm her?!” I smirked smugly and with a low-threatening voice said, “No one. No one can harm her and get on without punishment from me. You included. She’s already injured; I won’t let you make her condition even worse.”

“She is my daughter.” She said with the same amount of venom in her voice.

“Yeah… and she’ll be my wife someday.” I said immediately, now fully standing in between the mother and daughter, a few gasps and “what!?” answered me, but I ignored it all. “So, there’s no way in hell I would let anyone harm her.”

Her mother was still on a glaring contest with me and all of a sudden she turned to looked at her daughter behind me. “You…,” she said in a cold rage, “so, this is your choice? Them over you own family?”

Tomo just sighed and smiled mockingly, Ookabuki`s smile, “After these past few years, I started to feel like an orphan. And now the only family I have is… her…,” she took my hand again as she said it and then she pointed at Kokabuki`s direction with a slight movement of her head, “and Kokabuki.”

“… Aneki…,” Kokabuki said with a tearful smile.

Her mother only glared at her and pursed her lips, and after a moment she said, “You have twenty four hours to take your belongings, after that I’ll throw it all.” And then she left, slammed the door on her way out.

“Um… sorry for her rude comments and insults.” Tomo said with a slight bow of her head.

“Nah, it’s alright.” Yuko-san said.

“I don’t understand how you can live with that woman for all these years.” Youran said as she shivered in disgust.

I looked at my girlfriend who’s only smiled in melancholy, her Ookabuki persona truly disappeared at the time, and she slowly said, “Back then… she… wasn’t like that….”

“Ah… enough of that…” Shaku suddenly said and she shivered too, “Shibuya-san was scarier than that woman.”

“Yeah, I thought you would punch her for sure.” Torigoya added, Geki nodded in agreement from her position behind her.

I frowned at them and lift both of my hand, my left hand was still linked with my girl`s hand, “I would if I could. I’m not that stupid to use my right hand right now and my other hand was… er… is occupied right now.”

“Good to hear that you actually used your brain first before your fists.” Yuko-san said as she nodded, made me scowled at her. “And… wife, huh?” she added while smirking mischievously.

“Sh-shut it… It’s just a sudden spur in a moment kind of thing... D-don’t think much of it.” I said as I moved to looked at the floor, hid my face from their view, since I knew I was blushing. ‘Thank God, I have a long hair…’

“Oh…, so you’re not serious when you said it?” my girlfriend said with voice full of hurt that made me instantly whipped my head to look at her.

“What I mean…,” my voice faltering as I looked at her smug smile and knowing, she was only teased me, made me growled in irritancies and looked down to floor again. ‘Dammit, she’s been hanging around Yuko-san too much lately.’

“Ah, by the way, where you’ll gonna live, Aneki?” Kokabuki asked and when her eyes met mine she was quick to added, “Or perhaps, I shouldn’t asked that since the answer is obvious enough,” while she was rolling her eyes.

Yuko-san snickered and grinned, “careful… even though the doctor said you can go home next week if everything went well, you can’t move around too much or you’ll rip the stitches.” And she looked at me pointedly, “or, should I say, don’t make her move around too much…”

I rolled my eyes in exasperation at our hentai-sachou. It’s not like I’m crazy enough to make her move too much. And Yuko-san laughed again while the others tried to mask their laugh after I glared at them. “At least I don’t have to buy take-out meal anymore, and I can have a home-cooked meal more often now.” I said in a bored tone. It’s not that I can’t, but I don’t like to cook that much.

Geki, Torigoya and Yuko-san looked at me in horror. “Don’t tell me you still go to that ramen restaurant.” Yuko-san said

“Wait… I think I know that ramen…” Kokabuki piped in.

“She brought you there too?” Yuko-san asked with mouth and eyes opened wide.

“Yeah… after one of our training.”

Yuko-san grinned evilly at her while the Youran, Shaku and Captain Takahashi was all looked at us back and forth inquiringly. “So, how was it? Still awful?”

“I’m lucky I’m still alive…”

I shot them a dirty look and growled, “You’re all exaggerating. It’s good.”

My hand was being pulled slightly and when I saw to the person who did that, she grimaced at me and said, “I’m sorry, but they are right. It is awful.” Made me scowled in response.

“Yeah… it is…,” Yuko-san piped in, “she doesn’t have any taste-bud. That’s why after that ramen, we won’t let her choose where to eat.”

“Oh, but whenever we’re… er… I mean, I had tried some of the restaurant she picked and it was quite good.” Tomo said hesitantly, clearly avoid the word ‘date’. Too bad Yuko-san still knew it.

“During your dates you mean? Well, consider yourself lucky then. You might not be so lucky next time. My suggestion, don’t let her pick where to eat next time.” Yuko-san said as she pointed at me.

“Oh, and if she takes you to a crepes parlor, no matter what she says, do not, do not try the nattou-coffee-crème crepes.” Torigoya added in a very-out-of-character-serious manner. “Or you might get a phobia to crepes later.”

“Or the sweet crème and fruits pasta in that one café…” Geki added while pretending to retch and shivered afterwards.

 “Ewwww…,” Youran said with a disgusted look.

“That’s… er… unique…,” Shaku retorted with a strange uptight expression.

“That’s Shibuya for you…,” Yuko-san said as she shrugged, “just be careful when she takes you to eat. Her taste in food is a little peculiar.”

“Yeah, I had always picked where to eat whenever we had our dinner or lunch dates, because I don’t want to get food-poisoning,” Torigoya said absent-mindedly, and two loud “WHAT?!” answering her.

“What? Dates? Nyan-Nyan… When!? How?!” Yuko-san whined with a crest-fallen expression as she looked back and forth at me and Torigoya sadly.

“Just friend, huh?” Tomo said as she glaring at me, “you had dated Torigoya-san before?”

‘Damn… Torigoya talked too much.’ My eyes widen in fear of her rage and I automatically glanced at Torigoya to ask for her help in explaining things, which was unlucky for me, she was off in her own world again. She wasn’t even noticed why Yuko-san latched at her.

“Torigoya-san and Shibuya-san?” Shaku asked with eyes wide opened, Youran and Kokabuki were also sporting the same looks. Even Geki looked surprised. As for Maeda, she was like usual, but Captain Takahashi beside her looked amused with the situation.

I rolled my eyes at them and growled in exasperation at their over-reaction, “It’s just an outing between friends, okay? Not ‘that’ kind of dates.” From the corner of my eyes I saw Yuko-san glared at me after she knew her Nyan-Nyan won’t give her the attention she wants so I added, “And besides, it’s not my fault that you all never came with us whenever we asked you to go out with us.”

“But you two always go shopping,” Yuko-san exclaimed and she shuddered, “and it takes hours too.”

“… boring…,” Geki added, “that one time we went with you two, we were all ended up like your bodyguards.”

“Yeah, and that’s exactly the reason why it was only the two of us.” I dead-panned, “well, mostly.”

“But the dinners… and lunches…” Yuko-san whined again.

‘What the hell is going on here? Why is she turning into a kid all of a sudden’ I said in my mind while I face-palmed myself, afterwards I glanced at my girlfriend, at least she seemed convinced with my explanation. ‘Damn, that Torigoya!! She talked too much and off she went zoning out and leaves me to explain things by myself!’ I sighed and said to Yuko-san, “Do you seriously think we won’t go somewhere to eat after hours and hours of shopping?”

“… oh…”

I rolled my eyes in exasperation again and glanced at my watch. Afterwards, I hopped off the bed and said to my girl, “I think I better go now to move your things to my apartments. And since it’s pretty much impossible to take all…,” I threw her a knowing look, seriously, she had lots of things stored in her room, “What do you want me to take?”

“For the clothes… I guess you already know what I like, just take what you want to…,” she sighed and looked up to the ceiling in deep thought, “um… my blanket…”

“The purple one?” I asked her just to make sure.

She nodded in response, “all the stuffs on top of my table…”

“Wait… ALL?!” I gaped at her. Why? Because as I said earlier, she had lots of stuffs in her room, and on top of her table there’re make-ups, perfumes, lotions, body butters, her accessories boxes, etc. She’s… er… like me actually. ‘God, I think I have to buy another vanity table and drawer for her.’ She glared at me as an answer and I slumped my shoulder and sighed again, “alright… all… geez how many bags should I take…”

She smiled slightly at my exasperation and continued, “and most importantly… the box under my bed…, and don’t you dare open it.” She glared at me to put emphasize on her words.

“Oooo… I smell secrets…,” Shaku said, and then she was jumping in excitement, “hey…hey… what’s inside?”
 
Tomo just smirked at her and slowly said, “just… stuffs….”

I sighed again and fought the urge to face-palm myself. “Alright, I’ll go now.” Then I scanned the room, “Geki, want to give me a hand? I’ll give you melon-pan.”

“Sure.”

And with that, we were walking towards the door, but before I was able to open the door, Captain Takahashi said, “Wait, I was about to ask them what happened yesterday. You don’t want to hear it?”

I was silent for a few seconds and I decided, “I pass, I rather not knowing the details.” Yep, because if I know the details, I can’t stop myself to not imagining the fight. I can’t stand of seeing her get hurt, and there’s nothing I can do to help her. Even if it was just in my imagination. I can’t. I just can’t.

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“DAMN IT!! SHIBUYA, WATCH THE ROAD!!”

A loud shout from Geki took me out of my mind and as I looked up, I quickly swiveled to avoid the crash with an incoming car from the other direction and went back on track again.

“Geez… I don’t want to die yet, you know. Not before I saw Ren grows up into an adult.” She said while clutching at her chest, to tame her raging heart I guessed.

“Ren? Black`s son? What’s with him?” I asked her and all of a sudden understanding begun to dawn on me. “Ah… so, the two of you are together now?”

She gave an out-of-character soft smile and shyly said, “you can say that… we’re not on the same level with you and Ookabuki or Yuko-san and Torigoya though.”

“Yet.” I said. And after I saw her frowned I added, “You’re not on ‘that level’ yet. But you will someday.”

“Should I borrow Yuko-san’s book? You know… for… er... study?”

“What book?”

“The kamasutra thing.”

I automatically press the brake when I heard her, made us almost jumped out of the seat if only we were not wearing the seatbelt. The car behind us honked us loudly and I continued to drive in normal speed again. “You don’t NEED to READ THAT BOOK!!!” I yelled at her afterwards.

“But… I don’t know anything about it. While Black is… is…,” Geki said sadly, “I don’t want to… when it comes to her, I don’t want to disappoint her.

I took pity at her so I said, “You don’t need to read that kind of book. When the time comes, you’ll know what to do. You won’t disappoint her.”

“You sure about that?”

“Yeah. The same thing happened to me.”

“But you already knew what to do!! Before with Ookabuki you…” I glared at her, stopped her from ever saying anything about my biggest mistake number 2.

“It’s different, okay…,” I growled at her. “With a guy and a girl… is different, so I guess Black is pretty much in the same level as you too…. Well, perhaps….”

“Okay then.”

“Seriously you don’t need to read that book or any kind of books that similar to it.” I warned her again. “Not when you don’t have any experience in that area. It might… traumatize you. Even I think some of the… er… suggestions there are a little… strange.” I automatically grimaced when I remembered some of the things there. ‘Who in hell would do a three-some?! Geez… I won’t even let anyone get too close to her. No sharing! What’s mine is mine alone!’

“That bad?”

“Yep.”

“Um….”

I waited for her to continue, but since she didn’t say anything again, I asked her, “What is it Geki?”

“Can you… keep this as a secret from the others? About me and Black? Especially Yuko-san and Sado-san. We’re still new so…”

Her voice trailed out as her embarrassment got the better of her. ‘She really likes Black, huh? I didn’t know she can be this shy if I didn’t see it myself. Heh…, cute…. That’s not the kind of word anyone would peg to Geki, but right now, she is. ’ I smirked at her and said, “Sure, though I think it’s kinda too late for that. They already noticed that there’s something between the two of you. They just don’t know it for sure.” Geki groaned and slumped her head on the dashboard, made me laughed at her defeated state, “Come on, it’s not that bad. I know, I’ve been through that.”

“Yeah, and they grilled you alive, even when our kouhai around!” she whined.

“Oh, they’ll do the same thing to you as well… Just wait and prepare yourself.” I laughed again. “Especially Yuko-san, she’ll tease you and troll you to death. About three days ago she emailed me at night just to tell me, ‘Torigoya is here, and I bet right now you’re alone in your apartment… Bwahahaha….’ And I don’t even know why she emailed me that.” I said while rolled my eyes in exasperation.

Geki giggled amusedly, “well, that’s our Yuko-san….”

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*It the front of Ookabuki’s Room

“That’s um… cute…?” Geki unsurely said while pointing at the sign-board in front of my girl`s room.

I just smirked at her, opened the door and walked inside. That b**ch opened the front door for us when we arrived, and afterwards, we immediately came here while carrying three big-and-empty-travelling-bags.

After we’re inside, Geki looked around the room with mouth agape. “This room is… so… girly… no wonder her family didn’t know anything about her being a yankee.”

“Yep… she’s good at hiding.” I said absent-mindedly while I opened her drawer and started to pick some of her clothes, folded it and put it in one of the bags.

“There’s so much pink in here.” She said in disgust.

“And…. What do you mean by that?”

She paused from moving the stuffs on the table to the other bag to grin sheepishly at me. “I don’t mean it as an insult…. It’s just that…. Hey… could it be… all of these pink in here… because it is your color?”

I frowned in thought and mumbled, “maybe….”

“And based from her Kabuki robe, her is purple, right?” She asked me even though it seemed like she didn’t need an answer, and she giggled afterwards. “No wonder there’s only pink and purple here…”

‘Hey… Geki’s right… I need to ask her later.’ I thought. “Mm… I’ll ask her later.” I said while zipping the first bag which was already loaded with clothes.

“Huh?” Geki mumbled as she folded the purple blanket. “You never asked her?”

“Never cross my mind before.”

“What did you do whenever you’re with her?”

I frowned at her and said in exasperation, “you seriously asking me that?”

“Um… no… forget it…, I don’t want to know… um… private stuffs.”

I rolled my eyes and crouched down on the floor to grab the box Tomo requested. It was a medium sized grey-metal-box that was locked by a code number.

“It’s not pink… nor purple….” Geki said while I was blowing some dust from it.

“Yeah… it’s… just an ordinary box, looks old though.” I put the box in another bag and after about half an hour, we’re finally finished.

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After we dropped the bags in my apartment, I took Geki to Black`s apartment, but before that, I bought five melon-pans for her in the mini-market on the ground floor of my apartment complex. After that, I went back to my apartment, took a shower, put some of her clothes, comfy clothes, to a backpack and I drove to the hospital afterwards. I decided to return the car the next day, since it was already late and I don’t want to meet my mom or worse, that guy.

Since it was already passed visiting time, I tried to sneak out to her room stealthily. And I was only need a few steps more and-

“Shibuya, what are you doing here?”

I got caught. I turned back to look at Sado-san whose looking back at me tiredly. I grinned sheepishly at her and she sighed. “I was just kicked out Youran and Shaku and now you come…. It’s already way pass visiting hours and you know it.”

“I can’t let her alone in here.” I protested.

“Technically, she’s not alone. Kokabuki is in the same room as she is.”

“Argh…. Fine! I want to be with her.”

Sado-san smirked triumphantly at me, “You should’ve said it sooner, tsundere.” I scowled at her in response. “You’re lucky I’m assigned to watch over in this area for tonight, if not, my co-workers might kick you out when they find you.” She said as she walked away from me. “Make sure you go home at seven in the morning, before other staffs find you inside her room.”

I grinned and stealthily, slowly opened the door, closed it and tip-toed to her bed in the dark room. The curtains surrounding both beds and in between were already drawn. I slowly opened the curtain, taking extra notice to not make any sounds. But I failed again. She immediately opened her eyes and scanned her surroundings, and gasped when she saw me.

“What are you doing here!?” She whispered and narrowing her eyes at me, despite the bandages on her face. I just grinned at her and she asked me again, “How could you get in?”

“I have my way,” I whispered back as I put the backpack on the floor, pulled off my shoes and sat on the bed, “now, move over.” Which she did, and afterwards I lay down on the bed by her side. We were snuggled together in the small bed, though it kinda hard since she has to lay on her back due to the stitches in her abs, and my hand automatically caressed her face, mindful to not touching the bandaged part. “Sorry I can’t be there when you need me…” She shook her head and held my hand, the one that was caressed her face. “Kokabuki…”

“Sleeping… I guess.”

“Hm…,” I mumbled out, and suddenly I got an inspiration. With a grin I put my hand on her stomach, gave a fleeting-innocent-caress and slowly but surely, I sneaked my hand inside her hospital gown and touched her, in the place that I knew could resulted in faster-pace of breathing and in normal condition, sleepless night.

“Are you crazy!?” She hissed to me after a gasp, “We’re in hospital, and Kokabuki is- mpph…”

I cut her by kissed her forcefully and sneaked my tongue inside her mouth, waging a tongues-war, both of my hands roamed on her body carefully because she’s injured and also because my right hand was on a cast. But nevertheless, she was still moaned because of it. After a while, the need to breathe forced me to pull back. “Come on…why not? It’s been more than two weeks already,” I said while still gasping for breath, trying to persuade her, “And besides, Kokabuki is already sleeping, right?”

“Am not…,” a voice from the other end of the room answered me.

“What?!”

“Kokabuki!? I thought you’re sleeping.” Tomo said with a red face due to embarrassment, and she glared at me afterwards, in which I could only smile sheepishly in return and I slowly retracted my hands off her.

 “I was sleeping, but you two are so loud.” Kokabuki said with exasperation apparent on her voice. “Do me a favor will you? Don’t do ‘that’ here!! Geeeezzz…. Can you two wait until you’re out of hospital? …Lovebirds… Horny lovebirds….”

“This is all your fault.” Tomo said as she huff-ed in irritancies.

I scowled and grumbled out, “It’s not my fault if you’re too sexy for your own good, even though you’re bandaged like that.”

“What?!,” she retort back at me angrily, “You-“

“Lovebirds, cut the flirty bantering will you? I want to sleep here.” Kokabuki`s cut in and she mumbled afterwards, “thank God, there’re these curtains here… or else….”

“… Sorry….” Tomo said to her with an amused smile plastered on her face.

I slumped my head on top of her and grumbled, “I think I have to move you to VIP room. And there are no visiting hours for VIP room.”

“Mmm.. no way… it’s lonely to be in a hospital alone.” She said cheekily, made me sighed in response and I sat up and reached down to the backpack, pulled out my phone and set the alarm. “Why do you set the alarm for?”

“Sado-san told me to go before the staff changing. And besides, I need to do other things before class started tomorrow.” I answered as I lay back down on the bed.

“Such as?”

“Returning the car, go back to my apartment for a quick shower…” I tried to stifle a yawn, but some of it still came out. Well, I didn’t get any sleep last night and today I was only slept for 3 hours.

“It’s late, we should sleep.” She said after she saw me yawned again.

“Yea-“

“FINALLY. Thank God.” Kokabuki loudly exclaimed, cut me out and made me glared at her direction, even though she couldn’t see it because of the curtains coverage and the darkness in the room.

Tomo laughed at our antics and pulled me down to the bed, “come on, let’s just sleep. What kind of luck that I have actually? For my sister and my girlfriend to have relationship similar to a cat and a dog.”

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@arrow27: hey :welcome  thanks for liking my fic  :)

@haruko: then you should've wait for next part xD

@kahem: sorry  :nervous :nervous Yeah, I had punched a wall too, and my hand bruised for almost a week  :nervous

@kojiyuu44: glad you like it :lol:   Hmm... forgiving the midget, huh? We'll see XD

@cisda83: yeah, i like the old akb ex-members, I want to put Yukarin in too, but she's already in Yabakune  :(

@BbSis: a lil' bit mystery that Takadeka will explain to Atsuko later on XD

@minami-chan: that won't happen, not if Shibuya and Yuko-san have a say in it :lol:

@songbac: er... sorry  :nervous   As I said,weekend  XD


Um... the tomo-kojiyuu MC in RH day 2 kinda inspired me for an OS but.... I'll scribble it first, if it's good enough, I'll post it here  :)  (PS: amai tomochin is  :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:)


Thanks for reading, commenting and the 'thank you's, guys. Till next update XD

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27 - 1
« Reply #251 on: January 26, 2013, 08:01:48 AM »
Oh... Tomo~mi's mum is so bad... keep insulting everyone... even some of them actually from rich family and also there is the Captain Takahashi in the room...

What kind of parents, she and also Black's parents.... I mean they need to support their children not... making them choose or even hit them or scold them...

The way you picture the situation it's like Tomo~mi is being neglected by the parents long before and these parents seem to be abusive... well may be not physically but emotionally.

Well great for Rena and Black to be going steady ever so slowly.. it's still good.

Tomochin is very horny... I mean Tomo~mi is still injured and she can't keep herself...

Thank you for the update... Can't wait to see the next one...

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27 - 1
« Reply #252 on: January 26, 2013, 08:40:28 AM »
JEje you always do this to me. When Im going to prepare for sleep .. I check for last time this page and BAM you update! righ now are 1:40 am.. too late.. but I need to read your fic i can´t wait..

OMG!! Chiyuu´s mom is a b!·$%&...

Jeje I love Yuko is alive!! and what about torigoya and Shibuya.. jejej yuko is jealous... :B

Aww geki and black.. so cute..

Yeah! Im still waiting for atsumina :B

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27 - 1
« Reply #253 on: January 26, 2013, 01:18:31 PM »
Hello! I'm new here. I'm fairly new to the AKB fandom (I got into it after watching AKB0048), and I've been ghosting around the fanfiction area of this forum for a while. But now I could not help but comment. Your fic is just so good. I really like it. I'm so glad that you made Yuko-sama live here in your fic. I wished she really lived in the real Majisuka series. I actually feel like you are writing the real sequel to majisuka gakuen 2. Kinda like a movie or OVA series special.

anyhoo, will you be making side stories? I'm interested in how Black and Geki got together. How about Atsumina? Will there be a side story for them?

I'm also wondering who Takamina's 4th tennou is? I'm imagining a former AKB who transferred to SDN.

Will be waiting for your next update.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27 - 1
« Reply #254 on: January 26, 2013, 05:50:01 PM »
Shibuya was so cool with Ookabuki's mother!!!
I couldn't avoid to smile at the Shibuya and Gekikara little talk lmao!
And I really feel sorry for Kokabuki but the Tomotomo was wooo!!!!

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« Reply #255 on: January 28, 2013, 01:52:02 AM »
woooooooooo tomoxtomo living together!!! SO EPIC!

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« Reply #256 on: January 28, 2013, 02:50:37 AM »
Thanks for the update, and... oh gawd shibuya still so tsundere and so horny  XD
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 27 - 1
« Reply #257 on: January 28, 2013, 06:30:38 PM »
Nhyaaa poor Ookabuki! I can't believ her mother did that to her >< I remember you said she wasn't nice. But this woman is awful >< well, at least Shibuya will make her happy o/

Heheuhe Shibuya as short tempered as ever ahuahuahuah but this time I think I would help her :x

And i got curious about what Ookabuki saves in that box ><

Thank you for the update o/ i can't wait for more o/

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« Reply #258 on: January 29, 2013, 05:34:42 AM »
Ookabuki's mom is actually such a bitch...  :smhid
good thing Shibuya is protective and super insistent
The ShibuGeki convo made my day...  :)
Thanks for the update

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« Reply #259 on: January 29, 2013, 10:07:15 AM »
poor my ookabuki, she was kicked out parent's house  :on drench:, but i'm happy when shibuya and her can live together  :luvluv2: :luvluv1:

and shibya is .... :glasses: :glasses: humm she wants to do "that" in hospital  :shock: :shock: :shock:

 :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha: :wahaha:

i hope it will have a lot of interesting. funny, amazing situations when they live together  :roll: :roll: :roll:

geki and black, their relationship is in a new level  :shy1: :shy1: , i hope they'll have a higher level  :lol:

and kojiyuu, ahhhhhhh, my kojiyuu, yuko was jealous, it's great, and hehehe,

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and i hope you'll update soon, before lunar new year  :byebye: :byebye:
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