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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-2
« Reply #400 on: July 03, 2013, 11:40:07 PM »
woow!!
Kanooon chaaaan! she is so cute... and Kumi I say! Dance too!!! I really like this couple.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-2
« Reply #401 on: July 07, 2013, 04:10:18 AM »
gotta love this site`s fanfics.
Im starting to read some of this.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #402 on: July 22, 2013, 04:39:16 PM »
Updates.... yey!!! *Threw confetti again*  :lol:


Chapter 29-3



After a few minutes of walking, we finally arrived in my apartment, after a brief visit to Dance’s home to take Kanon’s belongings there. I opened the front door and let her in before me, while I was locking the door back. The room was still empty and dark, which means my girlfriend hasn’t come home yet. No wonder actually, Rappappa’s meetings tend to dragged until late at night, especially after now that almost all of us were on legal age. Yuko-san has tendencies to bring some booze with her for after the meeting. When she did though…, it was almost guaranteed that some of us would get wasted if Black or Sado-san weren’t able to control it.

At the same time, Kanon was trying to find the lamp switch on the wall near the door in the dim-lighted corridor. When she found it and turned it on, her eyes instantly flew to the shoes rack, made her stop in motion from took off her shoes. And I knew the wheels on her head has started running in questions, especially about the increase of the number of shoes and slippers, and she was most definitely knew some of it were not mine. I watched as her face shown up a display of emotions from confusion to shock to puzzled expression, and as if she was on a trance, she abruptly shook her head and proceeded to took off her shoes, wore the indoor slippers and moved away so that I could change my shoes to indoor slippers too, and went inside right after.

I saw her sat on one of the couches while looking around with a puzzling expression, sometimes eyeing the flower vase with a few pink roses on the kitchen table nearby, a pink frilly apron hanging from the hook near the fridge, the new fluffy-soft-lavender-colored carpet in the middle of the living room and matching couch-pillows, adding some colors to my usually bland-all-white-apartment. I put my bag on the coffee table in the middle of the living room, went to sit beside her and I answered her even before she ask me, “I’ve a… room-mate now.”

“Oh… that’s explains all the changes,” she absentmindedly said, “well, it has been almost a year since the last time I was here too…” She sighed and leaned back to the couch deeper while rubbed her eyes, “I’m tired~~.”

“Go take a bath and then sleep.”

“Hm… yes…, I’ll do that.” She mumbled her response. Then in a flash, she suddenly sat straighter and asked, “if you have a room-mate now…, where should I sleep? With you?”

‘Crap… I forgot about that. Here’s to hoping she won’t get suspicious.’ I said in my mind while struggling with my answer, then I hurriedly said, “Nah, it’s alright. You can sleep in the guest’s bedroom.”

“Are you and your room-mate sleeping together in YOUR bedroom?” she gasped scandalously. Damn! And I thought she’s a baka. “Based on the shoes and all the additional items here, I knew your room-mate is a she…. Which is pretty normal, but… sleeping… in the same room…?”

Sigh…, so much for hoping. I ran my hand through my hair and growled, “what about it?”

“In the same… bed…? Nee-chan…., are you… ‘leaning’ that way?” She asked with a whisper, after she saw me growled and narrowed my eyes at her, she pouted and whined, “And you threaten Kumi to not doing weird stuff to me when you’re living together with your girlfriend?! That’s unfair!”

“It’s NOT unfair,” I loudly exclaimed in exasperation, “and I AM NOT THREATENING HER!”

“But I know you would kill her if we have done ‘that’.” She mumbled without looking at me.

I rolled my eyes and countered her, “Yeah, well, you are still underage. I’m not.” She stuck out her tongue at me in a childish manner because I knew she had nothing in her mind to counter attack me. Seriously this girl was…. Yuko-san was right about her being a good kid and all, and considering her Dad’s an ass, she turned out to be a nice and a fun person to be with, but of course, that was until the day I left the penthouse I used to live together with her. But sometimes she really irritates me. Like, right now.

Before the sisterly fight erupted though, the front door opened and not long after my girlfriend walked inside. I heard Kanon gasped and mumbled out a “that’s the Onee-san from earlier today”, not a surprise that she would recognize her instantly, “she… she’s actually Tomo-nee’s girlfriend?”

My girlfriend also let out a surprised gasp, and asked, “Why is she here?”

“She whined and whined until I let her stay over for the night because she doesn’t want to go home yet.” I answered in exasperated manner. I took a good look at her and noticed her a bit red face and ears and stated, “You drunk.”

“I’m not.” She said while she was walking to sit at the single couch near me. “Just one shot. It’s not enough to make me drunk.”

“One shot?” I asked with an eyebrow raised, I knew I’m not in a position to question her on this particular matter, considering I had done even worst that get wasted by alcoholic drinks, but I couldn’t stop myself. “One shot of what to be exact?”

“… Tequila…? I think that’s what it’s called.” She said with her head tilted to the side with a puzzled expression on her face, made her looked absolutely adorable and made me wanted to peck her cheek, pat her head and hug her, but because Kanon-chan was there, I couldn’t. Yep, she’s drunk alright. She usually wouldn’t drop down her defense when there are others around, even when that person is Kokabuki. And right about now, her Ookabuki persona was truly shattered down. And when this kind of things happen, she was back being the cute, innocent and naïve (and stubborn, and sometimes can be irritating as hell) little girl that I befriended with when we were just a child. And… tequila was it? No wonder she’s drunk with just one shot.

“You’re still underage to drink.” I calmly said.

“Wait a second, she’s still underage too?” Kanon asked.

“Said the one who had done even worse than getting drunk when she was still underage.” Tomo retorted back at me, at the same time with Kanon, “And besides, I’ll be 18 in less than two months.”

At this Kanon was just looking at us back and forth until I sighed, “Non-chan, go take a bath now.” And she hurriedly headed to the bathroom without further questioning, then I shifted my gaze to my girlfriend and said, “And you… bedroom. Now.”

She stood up and stomped childishly all the way to the bedroom with me following behind her and locked the door after we were inside. “I’ve told you I’m not drunk.” She exclaimed when I was locking the door, “I just had one shot. You’re worry too much for your own good, and beside Onee-san walked me home till the front gate.”

Actually, I had decided to dropped it down and want to talk about another issues, but when I heard the ‘Onee-san’ parts, I instantly whipped my head to look at her who was sitting down on the bed, while yelled, “She WHAT!?”

“What?” She asked back with a cross expression on her face.

“She walked you home!?”

“You don’t have the audacity to be mad at me for spending more time with my Onee-san when you’re busy with other people as well!” She yelled back at me.

“Kanon-chan is my step-sister,” I hissed through gritted teeth, I knew I shouldn’t get angry with her, especially right now when her mind was slightly disoriented because of the tequila, but… well…, “and Dance is-”

“And who do you think she is!? She was my neighbor for years for God’s sake. She was there to hold me when you were suddenly gone,” she said in a lower volume, but still louder than her usual talking volume with her eyes slowly but surely became redder, “she was there for me when my family started to drifted apart. And where were you?!”

I gulped my guilty feeling since she was being ridiculous. “You do know, unlike now, I couldn’t decide things on my own. I was just a kid back then, what do you want me to do?! Ran away from home!?” I growled at her and when I saw her tearing up, I knew, it was the alcohol speaking. And I felt… like an idiot. I let out a sigh and a low growl at the same time, and went to sit beside her on the bed to hug her. Aaaaand… just before I could wrap my arms around her, she had punched my shoulder. HARD. “OUCH!!! Hey! That’s hurt.” I hissed while rubbing my must’ve-bruised-by-now-shoulder, “I should just call the Cops to report some domestic violence.”

“Don’t be a sissy.” She huffed and blew her cheeks, made her looked like a cute blowfish. Sigh… she’s really drunk if she acted like a (cute) kid like this, and not to mention, the horrid mood-swings she currently had.

“Weeelll~~, that’s hurt…,” I started to whine, “you hit me with your palm….” If she started to act all childish and immature (even when that was because she was drunk), I could do the same things as well, right?

“You’re asking for it,” she huffed while crossed her arms in front of her chest, “there’s no need to get jealous with my Onee-san.”

“What!? How could you say that?! She’s always provoking me with her eyes whenever I had eye-contact with her.” I growled while still rubbing my shoulder, “and those occasional skin-ships she did with you…. And… and… you don’t like it too whenever I was alone with Dance.”

“That’s different. Onee-san was only playing around because you are always too easy to get jealous. Dance is in love with you!”

“Was.”

“Huh?!”

“She was in love with me,” I flatly said, “why do you think Kanon-chan was with her earlier today?”

“H-huh?!” she asked, flabbergasted, “She and your step-sister are….”

“Hooked up.”

She blinked repeatedly as a respond and after a few seconds, she asked, “How’s that happening?”

“How in hell should I know?” I answered with a shrug, “But, when I still lived with ‘them’, Dance was already following me around. And with that, she was often met Kanon-chan too. And… Kanon-chan now is in the junior high school that Dance and I attended to back then, which means, they were in the same school for a year.” I sighed and glanced at her menacingly, “While you and Ohori on the other hand…”

She let out a sigh too and mumbled in sarcasm, “Why… you dumb-ass… I’ve told you she’s just fooling around.”

“What kind of fooling around is that!? All those hugs and fleeting touches…” I yelled in irritancies, “You even let her played with your hair earlier. I saw that! … and every person in the Stadium that looking at your direction at that time. And I bet they think you and her are….”

“That’s her way to show that she cares! She’s always like that.” She yelled back, “And besides, since when you cared for what others thinking.” I opened my mouth to retort back at her but she beats me to it. “And don’t you even see the ring on her right hand?!” She asked in exasperation.

“… What ring…?”

She sighed and cupped my cheek, “if only you’re not blinded with jealousy whenever she’s around, you would surely noticed.” And she tapped my nose with her index finger and mumbled, “She’s already married, you idiot. And she loves her husband very much. Why do you think she moved out from her parents place? We’re both an only child, that’s why we’re close. Can’t you be happy for me, for being able to get close to my Onee-san again?”

I looked away, and started to felt like a total idiot, though that didn’t mean I wasn’t mad anymore. I sighed a little and growled, “I would if she refrain herself from skin-shipping you whenever she had the chance.”

“… Baka-tsundere….” She mumbled, then she hugged me and pushed me, made both of us were laying on the bed with her on top of me. “I’ll try to talk to her to lay low with the skin-ship if you don’t like it so much. But don’t hope she’ll stop from doing so too much.”

“She better be…,” I growled while starting to caress her hair, “or I’ll chop her hands off when she touches you again….”

She slipped her hand inside my shirt, pinched my abs teasingly while muttered, “Baka…,” and snuggled me even closer and sniffed my neck, made me took a sharp intake of breath and my mind went blank for a couple of seconds when I felt her lips grazing my neck. “You are really a baka when you let your rage blinded you. But why do I love you so much.” She mumbled out.

“Wh-what’s the meeting is all about?” I asked after my mind went back on track again. “What about Shaku?”

“Hm…, well…, since you were outside the Stadium, I don’t know if you heard the massive roar of protests before we ended the event today or not, but… After Shaku and Sado-san went back inside, Sado-san immediately announced some changes.”

“What changes?”

“That tomorrow match will be a 2 on 2 instead of 3 on 3.”

“… That means….”

“Shaku withdraw from the tournament.”

“She said so herself?”

“Nah…, it was all Sado-san.”

“How did Shaku react though?”

“…” She didn’t give me any answer for a while, then she propped herself up with one hand supporting her just a few inches beside my head and with an incredulous expression said, “Surprisingly she’s just stood there with a goofy grin on her face the whole time.”

“Huh?!” I asked, surprised. Why? Because Shaku was all maji the last time I saw her. “She did?” After she answered with a nod, I blinked for a few times before I mumbled out, “I wonder what had happened between her and Sado-san that made her lost all her maji in just a small amount of time?”

“Who knows?” She answered in mirth while dropped her body back on top of me, “And I’m sure we will never hear the truth anyways.”

“Hmmm….,” I mumbled while I was breathing in the scent of her hair, “and? What else?”

“Well, Shaku was kept on with her goofy grin throughout the meeting, even when Yuko-san gave her a lecture of a lifetime, which of course made our Sachou even more pissed off until Torigoya-san distracted her and Sado-san told her to ‘get on with the meeting and just ignore that spoiled brat for a while’ because she’ll deal with her alone later on.” She said with a chuckle afterwards, “I don’t know whether to congratulate Shaku or pity her actually.”

“And?”

“And… we talked about the ‘security’ plan. And by the way, if something happen, you and Geki are assigned to protect Yuko-san. So stay close to her all the time, alright?” She said with a more sober tone.

“What about you?”

“Hm… we all know that they’ll pick me, Kokabuki, or Youran. Though according to Yuko-san, the chances for them to pick me and Kokabuki are pretty slim since everybody knows we fight the best when we’re together. And with the match being a tag team match….”

“Hmm… right… it’s more likely they’ll split you up and pick Youran as the other opponent.”

“Yeah…”

“I would like to tell you to be careful, but… I don’t think it’s appropriate.”

She giggled at my comment and softly kissed me. I could still taste the alcohol in her mouth when I pushed my tongue inside her mouth to deepen the kiss. She let out a soft moan when our tongues met and battled for dominance. After I heard that, my hands, that were previously on her back, moved downward to grope her firm behind and gave it a light squeeze, made her yelped a little and breaking the kiss. The look she gave me made me shivered. It was full of lust and passion. And the alcohol in her blood helped a little. I was about to pull her for another kiss when the knock on the door disturbed us.

“Tomo-nee, I’ve finished with the bath,” Kanon voice could be heard from behind the door, “I’ll be going to sleep now.”

After a few second of awkward silence, she snorted and hopped off from the bed while said, “right… gotta take a bath now. I don’t wanna sleep late tonight.” And there goes my hope she’ll be willing to do that. I sighed, actually disappointed about it. But, just before she opens the door, she turned to look at me and with a teasing smirk she sexily asked, “you coming?” and left the door opened afterwards.

After I heard that question, I blinked rapidly for a few times. And after the rebooting process in my mind finished, I ran, literally, towards the bathroom to join her bath-time. Thank God she was drunk, or else she would not be willing to do that tonight. And in the bathroom too…. Seriously, I don’t believe much in higher beings and all, but…, thank you, God.

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As what the meeting’s result said, I immediately went to Yuko-san’s side ever since I saw her when I came to Majijo. I glanced over at my girlfriend who was standing at the side of one of the rings, talking with Kokabuki and Youran about some fighting strategies it seems because Center picked Kokabuki and Youran as their opponents. I desperately wanted to talk to her or just spent some time with her before the match started. Just to ask her to calm my nerves. I didn’t know why, but I felt anxious. Especially because, unlike usual morning after we started to live together, we didn’t have any ‘private time’ because Kanon-chan was there.


*Flashback, earlier this morning

When I walked out from my morning shower, the first thing I noticed was my girlfriend who was cooking our breakfast and Kanon-chan sat on one of the counter’s stools in the kitchen with an awkward feeling in the air. I raised one of my eyebrows in askance and asked, “so…. What the hell is going on?”

“Language.” My girlfriend reprimanded me.

“As I said before, I’m a yankee. You can't expect me to talk like some… highly-overly-polite-crap.” I growled while rolled my eyes in exasperation.

“If you do, I would be very surprised,” Kanon-chan quipped with a sly grin, “Ohayou, Onee-chan.”

“Smart ass kid… but you’re so dumb when it comes to school.” I muttered under my breath.

“Hm…, she’s right though, YOU…,” Tomo said while pointing at me with the spatula, “are not cut out for the overly polite things. Even when we were just a kid you already had your tough-independent-bad-ass vibe.”

“Yep… she did. She kinda scared me a little when the first time I met her.” Kanon quipped again.

I walked to the smart-ass step-sister of mine and knocked her head lightly while growled, “shut it. Or else I’ll accidentally talk to my Mom about you and Dance.”

Kanon’s eyes widen and then she pouted and whined, “Nooooo…. She’ll tell it to my Daddy…”

“Then shut it.”

“But…”

“Shut it.”

“It’s not an accident if you had already planned it out.”

“So? Want me to say it?”

“Oh, come on, Tomo-nee….”

“Then, shut it.”

“You two shut it.” My girlfriend cut our sisterly banter with a glare directed at me while she was serving some omurice in the dinner table. “Cut out your bantering. Breakfast’s ready.”

Kanon responded with a “yay!” and quickly sat in one of the chairs while I raised my eyebrows and while crossing my arms I growled, “What?! I was just-” suddenly my train of thoughts stopped when I saw the look she gave me. It was screaming lust and passion. Then she slowly walked towards me and touched my lips to shut me out.

She was leaning closer to me and whispered, “don’t get riled up easily. She’s still a kid while you’re not anymore,” while she was caressing my lips with her finger, then slowly moved down to my chin, my throat, then she poked my chest while huskily whispered, “I’ll treat you something good later tonight if you behave.”

“Oh…,” was my idiot response, couldn’t help it, really…, I’ve always lost my mind whenever she started to acted all sexy like that, “sure….”

“Wow… that’s works really good…. Maybe I should try that to Kumi whenever she disagrees with me…” I heard Kanon mumbled then my mind instantly went back to work.

I caught Tomo’s hand, then turned her and pushed her to sit on the other chair. Then I sat on the chair beside her while growled to Kanon, “Do that and I definitely tell my Mom about you and Dance.”

“That’s not fair! You’re also-”

“You’re still under-age.”

“But…”

“Yeah, well, unlike my Mom, your Dad won’t be okay with his daughter having a girlfriend. Should I tell her about you and Dance?” I said as a matter of fact, made Kanon shut her mouth and pouted, “and after all-”

“Wait…,” Tomo’s surprised gasp interrupted me, she was looking at me with eyes wide opened, “Your Mom knew about us?”

“Uh-huh…” I mumbled my answer while I was chewing a piece of chicken meat.

“And she’s okay with it?” She asked, unconvinced.

I shrugged and muttered, “more like she doesn’t care….”

“I hope Daddy could care less like that too.” Kanon-chan mumbled.

I snickered at that and teasingly said, “when hell freezes…”

“Yeah?” Kanon said challengingly, “wanna trade parents then?”

“No way.”

“I’m sick from being guarded all the time.”

“Yeah?” I said in the same tone of voice like what she had earlier, “say that to him then, not me.”

“Then I’ll be grounded…”

“Good then, might makes you less spoiled.”

“I’m not spoiled!” she growled.

“Now I see the similarities in the two of you…,” my girlfriend mumbled under her breath, while at the same time I was still on a bantering match with Kanon.

“You are.”

“Am not!”

“Are!”

“Not!”

“Are!”

"N-"

“Can we just eat in peace, please?” Tomo asked with a sigh and barely hidden annoyance, and then she muttered, “I feel like I have two kids.” Yikes, she’s sober now, which means her Ookabuki persona came back, and it’s seems like Kanon-chan also knew the reason why she was able to control me. And it’s not just her good looks. It’s the yankee’s side of her which can match mine. Though I’m still better in fighting. But the scary looks she gave us was… scary….

*Flashback end*


The rest of the morning was peaceful, at least as peaceful as you can get in a yankee’s home. Me and Kanon-chan tried to lay low with the bantering so that we wouldn’t irritates my girlfriend again and-

“Oy, what are you day-dreaming about?” I heard Yuko-san’s voice from beside me followed with a pain in my shoulder.

My hand automatically rubbed the sore-spot while hissing at the same time, “Dammit! That’s hurt.”

“Wha? I was just hit you lightly. Don’t tell me you’re going soft now.” Yuko-san said with one eyebrow raised.

“If you don’t hit me there, I won’t even feel it.” I growled, “You hit me in the same spot where I had been hit by To-Ookabuki last night.” I rubbed the spot some more, trying to ease the pain then I quickly added, “And she hit me with her palm in full force because she was drunk!”

Yuko-san smirked and teasingly said in a sing-song tone, “domestic violence was it?” She laughed and threw her arm around my shoulder to give me a side-hug when she saw me frowned at her and said, “Oh, come on, she only had one shot…. Wait, you didn’t get into a fight just because of that, right?”

“Nah…, it was… because of… various reasons.”

“Oh, good then. If it was because of that, I would feel a bit guilty since I was the one who’s shoved the tequila to her.”

“I knew it…,” I said with a sigh.

All of a sudden the stadium was filled with loud cheers and shouts, signaling the match was about to begin. Yuko-san and I shared a nod, agreed to watch the match first and continued our talk later, and not long after, then the match started.

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@Elo: wait for the shaku-sado sp then  :P

@Shinoki: :lol: Kanon has the ability to make Shibuya act like a kid

@BbSis: looks like Shibuya able to vent thanks to Yuko-san and the tequila :lol:
            ah... the tomotomo fic. On tumblr was it? Too bad I couldn't understand any of it  :banghead:
            erp.... actually... I... lost... the draft... :nervous

@kahem: it's cute, wasn't it?  XD

@haruko: hisashiburi!  :lol:
              Nah, it's okay, shippers of course would prefer their OTPs :)

@tfme3638: tomo~rage it is  :lol:

@cisda83: yeah, Shibuya is weak against cute girls :lol: the down-side of being in Yuko-s care, she was getting influenced by Yuko.
               In Shibuya's eyes, Dance is even closer to a sister than Kanon, so she can trust her step-sister to Dance.

@hikari_043083: well, I was influenced by Kata-fai  XD damn that kiss was hot....
                        when it comes to who has more power in Shibuya, there are Ookabuki, Yuko (whom Shibuya look-up to), Kanon, and the rest of Rappappa's gang.
                        I'd say the top 2 will be Ookabuki and Yuko, even though the power they have over her are in an entirely different matters  :lol:
                        no matter how cute Kanon was, she is no match against Ookabuki's weapon (or *cough*sex*cough*)  XD

@KojiYuu44: yeah, Shibuya can trust her step-sister in Dance's hands it was her own step-sister that she can't trust when it comes to that 'thing'  :lol:
                  as for the tournament.... *the author again evades action times and post-pone it into the next chapter*  :nervous

@minami-chan: glad you like  :D

@phkuro: hi  :welcome


As usual, sorry for the long delay  :nervous
And thanks for reading, comments and 'thank you's, guys. Till next chapter.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #403 on: July 22, 2013, 05:18:31 PM »
T^T
i need my SadoShaku flashback~~~ puwish!!!! :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #404 on: July 22, 2013, 05:48:28 PM »
Finally !!!

An update...

Thank you so much..  :bow:
 
Wonder what happen to Sado and Shaku...  :?

Can't wait for the next chapter...  :twothumbs

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #405 on: July 22, 2013, 07:29:30 PM »
Of course it was Yuko that gave Tomo the shot *sigh* she really is well ..... Yuko lol nice chapter I love how easy Tomomi can control Tomochin

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #406 on: July 22, 2013, 07:32:11 PM »
Yuko-sama  :twothumbs :rofl:

Tomochin venting out, nee?  :twisted: :w00t:

*looks around* Geki wa doko?  :?

*smirks* SadoShaku...  XD :twisted: *waits for their special to be written and posted*
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #407 on: July 23, 2013, 12:12:17 AM »
Shibuya!!!! <3
Tomo~mi~ Drunk version... hehehe....
Non-chan~~ Non-chan~~~
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #408 on: July 23, 2013, 12:28:29 AM »
Nhyaaaa update yeeeey! *.*

Good that Shibuya could vent hahah I wonder if Kanon heard... XD Ookabuki drunk is awesome hahaha

Hum, so Shaku had to withdraw. Stv-san pleeeeeeease Sado x Shaku neeeext *.*~

I'm also curious about the tournment....


No, the fic wasn't on tumblr, but I don't know if it is though xD it was only four chapters, but was nice.
Nhyaaa you lost the draft?! ;.; will I be able to read the continuation someday?


Thank you for the update o/

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #409 on: July 23, 2013, 04:11:19 AM »
I was re reading this fic yesterday who would have thought you be updating!!!  :cow: but anyways cant believe it still I really love the fact that dance finally has someone too! dow I would have been nice if that someone was shibuya ever since I saw MG I always thought there was like sexual tension with those two!  ;) but either way at least dance can move on im glad for her but still funny that it is shibuya's hermanita (little sister)  :rofl: dance really wants to die huh?  :doh: but either way she had the guts to stand up to shibuya and explain so I guess props to her  :thumbsup as for the main event as in what I wanted to read about sadoxshaku I hope that you put that up soon I wanna know how sado got shaku to drop out of the tournament  :wub: :twisted: 
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
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mano continuemos siempre asi
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pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #410 on: July 23, 2013, 10:04:56 AM »
i was thinking when u will update this....
And then~
Omg after i refresh it i saw ur trend on the first page!
I press the thank you right away even though im not even start reading ur update.. XD
But i forgot to comment...  :nervous
Anyways i just miss ur update and specially tomotomo   :banghead:
I want more smexy time! XD
Thank you for the update,
And looking forward for more :on gay:

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #411 on: July 23, 2013, 03:35:15 PM »
Ah... An update at last... Yeah

Interesting... What made Shaku change her mind...?

Hope u are making a short story about it or a flashback...

Ah... What about the match 2 vs 2 going to be like?

What about Kanon and Shibuya lives?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #412 on: July 23, 2013, 11:39:54 PM »
Very funny Ookabuki having drunk.
I'm wanting to know how they will develop the fights.

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #413 on: July 24, 2013, 02:07:48 PM »
Drunk tomo~mi is too cute!!!! :shy2: :shy2:
combine drunk tomo and tomo~rage = 1 palm courtesy of Ookabuki!!  :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #414 on: July 24, 2013, 05:33:22 PM »
Ookabuki being drunk was too entertaining  :lol:
Strange that Shaku dropped out...
Wonder it its something that Sado said  :?
Looking forward to the 2 on 2
Thanks for the update!!

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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Chap 29-3
« Reply #415 on: July 29, 2013, 09:22:40 AM »
First of all, I wanna say thanks for making this ff about MG :). What’s more epic about this, is that it’s a TOMOTOMO fanfic :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup. I couldn’t ask for moreeeee, but more TOMOTOMO overload. Gomen ne, I’m a TomoTomoholic te-heee XD. Anyways, I love the concept of your ff, esp. the closeness of Torigoya and Shibuya, more of that please. It’s kind of cute actually, I mean they’re friendship that is. And there’s Kanon too, I really like it that you made her Shibuya’s imouto rather than the craze girl who stabbed Geki. Thanks for the awesome fanfic  MG, update soon. :P

PS: If you don’t mind, I’d like to offer my help to beta this story. I’ve got a lot of free time right now, and as a fellow writer myself, I’m having a major writer’s block. Maybe by helping you I would hopefully get my muse back. Just PM me if you accept my offer, if not no harm done…ja.:) :peace: :hand:




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Re: my fanfics (MASK-MJGK world) TomoTomo + others - Side story
« Reply #416 on: August 06, 2013, 04:48:55 PM »
So.... who's asking for ShakuxSado side-story??? XD

Proof-read by love-wars-elizabeth. ((thanks, twin.))


*A few hours before Rappappa’s dinner-time at the end of Chapter 28.

“Why are you here?” Sado asked when she saw the young girl in front of the Nurses` Room. She was more anxious than usual, because earlier, she had received an email from Yuko about the meeting that would be held later that night. And Yuko typed ‘meeting’ not ‘meet-up’, which means, there’s something serious that she wanted to talk about.

The girl fidgeted nervously, but when she raised her gaze, the look in her eyes was so serious that it almost sent the chill down Sado’s spine. She slowly said, “I just remembered something. Shibuya-san told me that you’re six years older than me. Then… if that’s right… when I was eleven years old, you must have been seventeen, right?”

Inside, Sado was incredibly shocked, but she was able to mask her surprise just in time and non-chalantly ask, “Even if it’s true, then what?” as she was walking to the nearest vending machine while planning lots of ways to troll the gal-Queen in revenge, with the younger girl following her from behind.

Shaku sighed at the cold-treatment she was currently getting from Sado and while Sado was waiting for her canned drink, she asked, “Were you the kind onee-chan that protected me when I was attacked near the park in the next block?”

This time, Sado could not mask her surprise and with eyes opened wide, she choked out a “What?!”

“Was that you?” The younger girl asked with a frown plastered on her face, “When I first saw you… I thought that you were really similar to her…..the way you stood, your graceful ways of fighting…" she cut her own rambling and then looked at the older girl with eyes full of hope as she tried to remembered her-still-a-teenage-at-that-time savior’s figure, before she continued, “but I thought it can’t be you, because you’re only one year older than me. But now that I know your true age…”

With an exasperated sigh, Sado opened her canned drink and coldly asked, “Then, what?”, before she took a gulp from the can.

“If it were you… then I want to say thank you. Thank you for saving me that day.”

“…” Sado turned to look at her with eyes opened wide, clearly shocked with the turn of events. Her mind, which had been on other things before (or more like on what Yuko-san wanted to say), started to register what the younger girl had said. And her eyes opened wider when she recognized the little girl she had saved all those years ago was standing in front of her. Sure, she had always thought that there’s something familiar about Shaku, something that had always made her feel at ease whenever they were together. And that speaks for something, since only Yuko can make her feel that way. Her face slowly turned into a frown when she remembered about Yuko and… Torigoya. Yuko, the person she loves the most, and Torigoya whom she considered like a sister. She sighed inwardly at her own depressed thought, ‘And here I thought I am content by being her right-hand-man. But, still… Yuko-san….’

“She was you, wasn’t it?” Shaku asked with tears in her eyes after a few seconds of silence.

Sado could only nod her answer, as somehow, her throat clogged.

“I’ve heard they sent you to reform school. W-when I asked my parents what it means; they said… it’s a place for the bad people. But, you didn’t do anything wrong, you were protecting me. And… and…” Shaku rambled out.

“Forget it!” Sado cut out the younger girl’s rambling harshly while rubbing her temple, “It doesn’t matter anymore. What’s happened in the past stays in the past.” She glanced at the younger girl who was frowning sadly and felt a little guilty, so she decided to leave before she did any more damage to their already-fucked-up-relationship. With a sigh, she grumbled out, “I’ve got to go,” then walked away from Shaku without another word.

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*A few days in between dinner meeting and the sports’ festival.

One squirrel-look-alike girl walked inside the hospital building and casually walked towards the Nurse’s Office with hands on her jeans’ back pocket. When she saw what (or who) she had been looking for, she grinned and walked closer to her while cheerfully said, “Hey, there.”

Sado gaped at her ever cheerful and genki leader and asked, “Yuko-san? Why are you here?”

“Can’t I visit my right-hand-man slash best friend slash companion?” Yuko answered with another question, the cheeky grin still plastered on her face.

Sado snorted and with a grin answered, “Sure you can. But I can’t help but wondering.”

“Nah, just wanna know what you’ve been up to.”

“The usual… you know, working and stuffs an-”

“And… I want you to tell me what’s happened between you and Shaku…” Yuko cut out with a serious expression on her face.

Sado immediately frowned when she heard Yuko mentioned Shaku. She sighed loudly and said, “That’s-”

“If you want to tell me that’s it’s not my business then spare your breath. Because that’s an order.” Yuko cut out her vice again.

Sado grabbed her Sachou’s arm and lead her to one of the benches in the empty waiting room while remembering all the messages and phone-calls (that she didn’t pick) that one certain girl had sent to her these past days. All of that caused a mix of feeling to her. On one side, she was happy, delighted even, that the kid was still trying to court her so to speak. Because, if she’s being honest, she enjoys the kid’s company, she likes to be with her. On another hand though, her rational mind had always told her not to give the kid a chance. She sat beside Yuko and without even looking at Yuko’s direction, she mumbled, “Nothing’s happened. Just… just that kid being a… brat.”

“Don’t lie to me,” Yuko said, not in an accusing tone, but in a soft tone, full of understanding . The tone that can even melt the Tsundere Queen, make the Crazy Queen be sane again, create an affectionate-friendly response from the Silent Queen, the tone that makes the Airhead Queen to be herself after her other self took control of her each time. And now, she was using it to her ever-stubborn-and-have-an-even-thicker-skull-than-Shibuya’s best-friend, “I’ve told you to let her in…., Sado… what’s wrong?”

“Nothing’s wrong.” Sado stubbornly answered while crossing her arms in front of her chest.

“Don’t do that.” Yuko said with a straight expression and when Sado only responded by looking at her, she was quick to grin and added, “Your boobs are already small. If you keep on doing that often, your boobs will get even smaller. You don’t want that, do you?”

Sado growled and smacked Yuko’s head. She was one of the two people who can hit Yuko without getting killed right after. The other one is Torigoya. “I’ve no problem with my small boobs. Thanks for your concern,” she grumbled while rolling her eyes.

“Ow…, I was only joking you know…,” Yuko whined while rubbing the spot that Sado had hit before, but then she put on her maji expression again, “On the more serious note though…. You know…, I just want you to be happy.”

Sado sighed again and mumbled, “I know….”

For a moment, they let themselves be surrounded by silence- until Yuko broke it by asking her vice with a low whisper, as if afraid the other girl would hear it, “Do you still love me?”

Sado gasped when she heard the question, she could only responded by gaping at Yuko for a few seconds.

“You still do, don’t you?” Yuko sadly asked Sado after seeing the other girl was too shocked to answer her question.

“… No…, I mean… I know I still do….” Sado finaly answered while averting her gaze away from Yuko. She exhaled loudly and with a grim smile she added, “But…, I don’t know if it’s the same love that I felt back then or not. I don’t even know myself if I’m still in love with you… or… loving you in the similar ways as the others.”

Yuko sighed loudly. She then combed her hair back in frustration at their situation, she then apologetically whispered, “I’m sorry… but…”

“No…, it’s okay….” Sado whispered back, “I know Torigoya has stolen your heart from the first time you saw her. It used to make me sad, especially at how she would always run away from you back then. But, now that I had seen how happy the two of you were together…and add the fact that she’s like my sister…. now I can honestly say that I’m happy for you.”

“But… right now you’re not happy… And I don’t like that, Sado! You look so… lonely sometimes….” Yuko muttered with a slight hint of whines and irritation, “I have my Torinyan, Black and Geki are slowly progressing as a couple, while Shibuya… well…, we can say she looks like she’s happily married to Ookabuki now. While you on the other hand….”

“It’s okay, Yuko-san.” Sado said calmly, “I’ll manage.”

“But what about Shaku?” Yuko asked stubbornly, “I know this might sound… like I’m trying to push her to you, or you might think I’m a hypocrite but…,” Yuko snorted for a bit before continued, “She genuinely cares about you, Sado. She really adores you and… and….”

“I know that too…. But, to tell you the truth, I don’t know what to do about her.” Sado sighed.

“Sado…,” Yuko called her vice sadly and moved closer to give her a consoling hug, or so she hoped, “no matter how cheesy it sounds, what does your heart tell you? What do you feel when she’s around? Or when she’s not? If butterflies start to fly inside your stomach even from seeing her name flashing on your phone’s screen, then I think we know the answer.”

“Oh, they do fly,” Sado quipped sarcastically while rolling her eyes, “but I don’t think it was because of the reasons you think.”

Yuko gave a sarcastic laugh at that, followed by a pointed look at her vice, “Ha… ha… ha…,very funny. Don’t you dare change the subject.”

“I’m not.” Sado sighed, already accepting her fate, knowing that she couldn’t run away from this interrogation anymore. “I truly don’t know, Yuko-san.”

“You know, you’ve always looked calmer and livelier whenever she’s around. And I know you enjoy her company too. So…, what stop you from getting closer to her?”

“Aside from our connected past?” Sado asked tiredly, then she sighed, “…Her age….”

“What!? Seriously?! Her AGE?!” Yuko asked with incredulous expression. “What the…. Sado… looks at Shibuya, Ookabuki is still under age too. And besides-”

“They’re only one year apart.” Sado muttered while rolling her eyes, “as for me and Shaku…. I might get sent to jail for being a pedophile.”

Yuko exhaled her breath loudly in a tired manner and said, “She’ll be eighteen in less than two months for God’s sake. I don’t think anyone would jump to conclusions that you’re dating her if someone sees you two together in public places. It’s normal for two girls to have a friendly date or go shopping together, right? Even if you two holding hands, people would only thinks that the two of you are good friends. That’s the good side of for us, but then… the down-side is sometimes random men would go and try to flirt with you during your own dates and kinda ruin it a little. But! But, because of that you don’t have to be worried about it much. As long as you’re not banging her in public places, nobody would know that you’re… with her.”

“Yeah… but, still…”

“Oh, stop being so stubborn already! When will you stop running away from her and hurting her?” Yuko yelled at Sado, actually angry with her, “If you don’t even love her back even just a tiniest bit, we wouldn’t have this kind of talk and I would go and tell Shaku to forget about you already! But you do like her too. And I can’t stand seeing the two of you in this kind of situation. And especially now that I know your reasons,” Yuko said in exasperation, “which is pretty…no, REALLY stupid in my opinion. And I can see that you like her too.” Then, she patted Sado’s shoulder while softly whispering, “Don’t run away, Sado. Please. Before you lose her. Before you lose your chance at love. Please. I just want you to be happy.”

Sado sighed and when she saw the worried looks her leader gave her, she gave a nod as she said, “I’ll try, Yuko-san.”


*Shortly after the first day of the tournament ended, at the same time when Shibuya interrogated Kanon and Dance.

“What the hell do you think you’re doing!?” Sado barked angrily at Shaku shortly after they were in a secluded place near Majijo’s stadium.

Surprisingly (or not) Shaku barked back at her with a pissed looks on her face, “What?!”

“Why did you enter the tournament?! Where’s your pride and honor as a Rappappa!?” Sado asked through gritted teeth, barely able to restrain herself to not just punch the younger girl in frustration.

Shaku- who had been in a terribly exasperated state after the older girl started ignoring her- challenged the older girl by saying, “What’s wrong with that?! I want to test myself! Can’t I?!”

“What’s wrong?! You’re asking me what’s wrong!? Kid… are you dumb or are you stupid!?”

“As I said I want to test myself.”

Sado, who was at a loss at what to do or say at the time, only looked at her and in her heart, she felt like she wanted to beat the hell out of the other girl or kiss her senseless until she’s out of breath. She sighed and shook her head, trying to wipe the image of kissing Shaku from her mind. And after a few moments of silence, she asked, “By going against us?”

“No! I-“ Shaku countered, she actually wanted to says some more, but she hesitated.

“What?”

“I… never want to… fight you… but…. You had given me no choice.” Shaku added helplessly.

“Huh?!”

“You’ve told me to come back to you after I get stronger than you, remember?”

“Me…,” Sado slowly said as comprehension started to dawn on her, “You will pick me as your opponent for tomorrow.”

“… yes….” Shaku answered, still on a helpless state.

“That means you have a death-wish.” Sado said while narrowing her eyes at the younger girl.

“I know.” Shaku sadly said with a sigh. “But this is the only thing that I can think of.”

Sado turned to fully look at the younger girl’s face. She was giving her the very same look she had given her years ago when they first met, so full of adoration, amazement and… hope for love. Her round cheeks, long straight black hair that seemed to flow with the wind, with her perfect-shining-black eyes watching her every little move. The eyes that were now widened when she raised her hand and blinked in disbelief when she put her hand on top of the younger girl’s head to pat her head softly.

“Why… you idiot… you don’t need to do all of this to get my attention,” Sado said with a soft smile, finally stopping herself from running away and do as what Yuko had told her to do, knowing that Yuko always wants the best for her family. When Shaku smiled back at her, she smiled even wider, if that’s even possible. “you had made Yuko-san angry with your stupid action, you know?”

Shaku grimaced at the tought of Rappappa’s Sachou being mad at her and hesitantly asked, “eh… how angry do you think she is?”

“Very.” Sado answered with a sadist grin, but when she saw Shaku slumped her shoulders down in defeat, she took pity of her and added, “But don’t worry too much, I’ll talk to her to spare your life. And if I can’t, I’ll ask Torigoya to help me talk to her.”

“Thanks.” Shaku answered with a grimace, “Please tell my parents that I love them and they did nothing wrong in raising me and they are the best parents a daughter could have after I died. And tell them I’m sorry that I have to go before them.”

Sado knocked Shaku’s forehead while icily saying, “you wouldn’t die, Kid. Not if I can stop it.” Shaku could only smile at her, which made Sado automatically smile back and while she was pulling the younger girl for a hug, she mumbled, “Why did you do all this? Are you a masochist or what?”

“Perhaps…, and you’re the sadist. So we’re a perfect match, right?”

When she heard the cheeky remarks, Sado couldn’t help but pinch that round cheek in front of her.

“Ow-wo-wo-wo…” Shaku grumbled while her cheek was being pinched. “Itai!! That’s hurt, you know!” She said while rubbing her cheek after Sado released it.

Sado smirked in amusement at the younger girl then the looks in her eyes changed suddenly, made Shaku frown at the sudden change in her demeanor. Shaku’s eyes widened in surprise for a second time when Sado tilted Shaku’s head up with her finger and leaned closer to Shaku, forcefully kissing the younger girl to shut her up. Shaku’s eyes screamed looks of joy for a small amount of time before they closed in bliss.

Being the sadist she was, Sado was teasing Shaku even in their first kiss. At first, she was kissing her forcefully, then the kiss went slower, then she nipped at Shaku’s lower lip and licked it apologetically just before she slipped her tongue inside Shaku’s mouth and roamed inside, leaving the other girl in a moaning mess and all hot and bothered. Just when Shaku thought she couldn’t control herself anymore, Sado pulled herself back and smirked at her with one eyebrow raised cockily.

Shaku licked her lips and breathed out, “Th-that’s…. U-um…”

“Well?” Sado asked, still with one eyebrow raised.

Shaku inhaled and exhaled loudly and then pouted, “not fair….”

Sado laughed whole-heartedly and patted the younger girl’s head then fondly said, “All’s fair in love and war, Kid. And besides, as you said, I’m the sadist. Remember?” She laughed some more, then when she heard some noise coming from inside the stadium, her leader instinct came back. “We should go back inside.”

“Yea-”

Before Shaku could finish her answer, Sado had cut her out with a long and passionate kiss and left the poor girl in a breathless state. As she pulled back, Sado whispered throatily in the young girl’s ear, “And this time, no reckless and stupid actions. You hear me?”

“H-hai…”

“Good.” Sado pecked her one last time before going back inside the stadium with Shaku following her from behind with a goofy grin plastered on her face.





I think Shaku is a bit OOC here. But, what can she do? She's with the sadist :lol:

@xsilentreader, @theblueknight, @olive29, @cisda83: here you go XD I hope this answer your questions

@XxRoByNxX78 : well, Yuko is Yuko. Shibuya is whipped, no matter how much she thinks otherwise :lol:

@sakura_drop_: another awesome Yuko moment  :D Oh, she did vent :twisted:
                       Geki's there but it's not the time for her to appear yet.

@shinoki: Kanon is childishly cute in here

@BbSis: Hm? You've giving me some inspiration about what Kanon get to know while in Shibuya's apartment. I might used it if it connected to the story later on. :twisted:
            Yeah, I've seen some Tomotomo and Saeyuki fic with slight KaSae in it. But, it's in Spanish  :cry:
            I'll continue it again after Mask, because I forgot the storyline  :nervous

@Chichay12: Hem? Smexy times? He... I'll try....  :twisted:

@Minami-chan: Ookabuki is the sexy drunk XD

@tfme3638: it's mean bruised shoulder for Shibuya :lol:

@KojiYuu44: more like it's because of what Sado had done to her :lol:

@ayase909: Hai, Sensei (in terms of TomoTomo) I'll try my best in making a tomotomo fic 8)2

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« Reply #417 on: August 06, 2013, 05:11:56 PM »
let's just say.... that was great...
if nosebleeding was as easy as it is in anime when there's something super moe...
yeah... right now, I would be in a pool of nosebleed...
haha... the ending part... was doki doki

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« Reply #418 on: August 06, 2013, 05:21:56 PM »
Thank you for the update...  :bow:

It was so sweet..

Sado x Shaku moment...  :wub:  :inlove:  :twothumbs

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« Reply #419 on: August 06, 2013, 07:28:34 PM »
OMG YES!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!  :bow: :bow: :bow:

That was soooo perfect!!! I loved it~~ Shaku definitely is a masochist hauhauhau and maybe that's why Sado likes her hahahahahit was so great! I was totally needing this!


Really that I gave you ideas? =o xD

That sounds interesting. I guess I'll look for it =]

Ah these things happen, I mean forget the storyline >< I'll wait o/ Just to know you'll finish it is a great relieve^^ 

Thank you for the update o/

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