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Re: PJ48 Gakuen Poll+Weapons 8/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #160 on: November 08, 2012, 06:45:17 PM »
Wow cool weapons!
I like all of them expecially Jurina, Mayu and Rena's ones. :thumbsup


In any case, I've voted for Airin, 'cause I think that it will be interesting if she will be in the story, but it's only my opinion :P

Also, I'd like to say something about your story :)
For begin I want to say that I follow your story since you started it.
Since the beginning it captured me!
I think it is a really good job. Really.
Good story, never boring, good characters, good writing (also fantastic pairs~ eheh :twothumbs )
I've never put my opinion until now (sorry for this XD )
But, again, really good job. I respect it.  :)
Continue in this way  :wink:
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Re: PJ48 Gakuen Poll+Weapons 8/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #161 on: November 08, 2012, 09:00:35 PM »
Damn Nice Weapon,
I dun know how to express my climax love to those weapon,
except using to rude words,
I f**king like those weapon,
somehow there are some weapon remind me some game,
Kumi's weapon remind me of Final Fantasy VIII squall gunblade,
Yuko's weapon remind me of Ragnarok Online Assasin cross weapon,
Acchan's weapon remind me of Gundam Seed Anime Freedom & Justice gundam combine light saber.
Yukirin's weapon remind me of Black Cat Anime Black Cat's gun named Hades,
Kanon's weapon remind me of Devil May Cry Dante's Ebony & Ivory, just that Kanon's is 2 also black colour,
Sae's weapon is classic~!!!

There also Mayu, Takamina, Jurina & Rena weapon damn nice too,
Takamina Dual Blade somehow like a guardian, if include some breast Aura It will be the best,
Mayu White Sword normal but if combine to Mayu, it's suit so well,
Jurina Black Sword can see the sharp will some evil power,
If try to imagine Jurina Left taken Mayu's white sword and right take her own sword, is totally prefect...
Rena's Katana well made, is very different from what I imagine,
I thought that her katana will somehow like Final Fantasy VII Sephiroth's Masamune.

Looking forward for the next character and weapon~!!

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen Poll+Weapons 8/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #162 on: November 10, 2012, 05:28:54 PM »
i love the weapons, it indeed helped with my imagination on the story ^^

also, i would like to see more kuminon... they are so cute  :cathappy:

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen Poll+Weapons 8/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #163 on: November 11, 2012, 01:12:39 PM »
First of all, I thank all of you readers for supporting my story ; ^ ; I was so happy when I saw 34 thanks for a chapter!!! It's new record, isn't it? LOL Anyways, I'm very happy that you enjoy reading my fic ; ^ ; I love you guys, especially who have been following this story from the beginning  :heart:

So before i announce the real result of the poll (well since it's made just for fun, not to decide who would appear next :P), here is a short update of Chapter 8, part 1. I hope you guys enjoy this. :)




Chapter 8 [Part 1]


At this moment, we were all in Yui’s hidden place. It was a huge cave in a hill outside the city of Kyoto. The entrance was covered by many large leaves from the surrounding trees so it was pretty hard to find this hideout. I found out that vampires really love choosing caves as their hideouts since I remembered that Takamina’s hideout was also a cave in Mount Fuji. Even it was like the rock age, the place was very comfortable and warm. Torches and candles were everywhere in the cave so it was lightened enough for reading and other activities. Well, it was someone’s home anyway.

Enough with describing the house. After Yui treated the injured people, Takamina and Kumi had already woke up since they were vampires while Mayu and Kanon were still out cold. Kanon was hit pretty hard on her head so she would be out for at least 2 days. But in Mayu’s case...

Currently, Yui was still treating Kuumi’s wounds while Minami was lying on a bed with her forehead bandaged. Jurina was siting on a chair near the entrance and sleeping soundly since her energy was drained out in the mission. Acchan was right beside her, scolding her for being stupid and many things else. They were like a typical married couple. Not so far from Minami’s bed was Mayu’s with Yuki sitting next to the bed. The cyborg girl was still lying there like a statue since the time Yuko took away her soul.

Yes, the blue light ball I saw before, from what Yui told me, was her soul. According to her, every creature had a soul, which was represented as a small light ball, controlling their emotions and actions. The color of the soul told us which kind the person were. For example, vampires had their souls blue while human’s soul was light yellow. The brighter the light ball, the purer the soul. So basically, Mayu was like a puppet without her strings. She was still alive but she would never be able to do anything without her soul.

But I thought it was a good time for her so she wouldn’t see Yuki’s face right now. Her face was filled with pain, concern and anger, which was not a good mixture of emotions. In short term, Yuki was a time bomb, waiting to explode.

“Anou Yuihan...” I quietly called the girl. Yui turned around to face me while her hands were still working on Kumi’s broken one.

“What is it, Rena?”

“... Nothing really.” I wanted to ask her about Mayu’s condition but then I changed my mind. It wasn’t a good idea to talk about it in front of Yuki right now. I turned away and supported my chin with my hand.

“There is something bothering you and you don’t want to talk about it out loud, do you?” Suddenly, I heard Yui’s voice inside my mind. I turned back to look at her. A smile formed on her lips. Then she continued her task with her back facing me. “There are only me and Takamina can telepathize but she is currently busy so no one is going to interrupt our conversation. Use your thought to talk to me.”

“Erm... Like this?” I thought.

“Yes. So now, what did you want to ask me earlier?”

“About Mayu. What will happen to her?”

“...Well, she’s still alive, like a doll...”


Suddenly, Yui stayed silent for awhile. I looked at her beck with concern. She was hesitating on something.

“Yuihan? What’s wrong? Is there something that you haven’t told us?”

“... Actually, yes. It’s just because I don’t want to worry Yuki-san so I hide it...”

“... Can you tell me what it is? I want to know and see what I can do.”

“... I guess it’s fine to tell you then. Well, honestly, Mayu’s in a very bad condition now. It’s true that she’s still alive but without her soul, she won’t be in this world for more than 24 hours.”

“What?”
I gasped surprisingly. Suddenly I realised that we were having a secret conversation so I looked around. Luckily, everyone was already occupied to notice my reaction. “What do you mean by that Yuihan?”

“Biologically, her body still functions. But without soul, her body like loses its central control system so it works on its own wildly, which means soon or later, the messy body will destroy itself. And that soon is 24 hours.”

“Why didn’t you tell us about this before? We don’t have much time left! We have to do something or else Mayu will die!”
I thought angrily.

“Calm down Rena. This is the reason why I didn’t want to tell the truth, especially to Yuki-san. I knew she would just storm out and find her own death at the enemy’s place after she was told about this. We’re already lacking of members so we can’t stand losing anyone.”

“Then what do you think we should do now? Watching her dying?”

“... I’ll exchange myself for her soul like what they offered.”


“WHAT?!?!” This time, I couldn’t hold back my emotion anymore. I shouted out loud, which shocked everyone in their places and forced their attentions on me.

“Woah, what’s wrong Rena?” Minami asked me surprisingly.

“Yuihan is planning to hand in herself in order to save Mayu.”

“WHAT?!?” Now it was conscious people’s turn to shout, except for Yuki though. She just stared at Yui with a disbelief look.

“What are you thinking Yuihan?” Minami shouted but then immediately held her belly since she hurt it again.

“I’m thinking of saving her life.” Yui answered calmly.

“But we can’t lose you Yuihan! You know what he will do to you if you come with him!” Minami said in pain.

“You know Mayu is a genius and your right hand, Takamina. You’ll lose this war immediately if Mayu is gone.”

“I know but... We can’t lose you too. We’ll find some ways else to save her and you!”

“We don’t have much time for that...”

When Yui finished her sentence, the atmosphere went cold. Yui let out a loud sigh before continued.

“And you know, even when you managed to steal Mayu’s soul back, there is no way we could return her soul back to her body.”

“Why is it?” Yuki asked in mono tone.

“Because controlling souls is a rare skill of vampires like my telekinesis. We can see ourselves souls but can’t control them without that skill. And the person that we know to have such a skill like that is Yuko. To make it short, if you want to save Mayu without handing in me, you have to kidnap Yuko as well and somehow make Yuko return Mayu’s soul back to her body.”

“...” Again, awkward silence covered the atmosphere.

“I think we can.” Suddenly Minami spoke up, which received herself everyone’s attention. “Even Yuko is brainwashed but somewhere in her mind remains her good memory. If she’s completely evil, she would have left me in the explosion, not saved me out of that and returned me to you.”

“... You have a good point there, Takamina.” Yui scratched her chin. “In that case, maybe I could help her to gain back her good memory and return to her good side. But still, how can we kidnap her when she’s so strong?”

We all closed our eyes and thought for a moment before an idea swept over our minds. We all opened our eyes almost at the same time and looked in the same direction. And of course, the person who received all the attention knew what we were thinking about.

“Why are you all staring at me like that?” Jurina raised an eyebrow . “I can’t beat her! I’m half human, remember?”

“Of course you can’t...” Minami smiled. “But the other you can... it’s proved in the last battle with Yuko.”

“Wait... Are you saying that you want to release that monster? I almost killed her in the last battle, for God’s sake!”

“We’re not going to release the monster. We’re just borrowing its power.”

“Huh?” This time, not only Jurina but also me, Yuki and Atsuko that looked at Minami and Yui in disbelief.

“Mayu’s new seal. It’s not just a simple seal that controls the monster. It also allows you to use its power. But you have to be strong enough to control it or else it will control you.” Minami explained.

“OK... That’s something new to me...” Jurina slowly said. “How can I do that?”

“Well... Rena needs to weaken the seal to release some of dark spirit and you will have to control that. When you succeed, you’ll have your new power that even stronger than anyone in this vampire world.” Yui replied.

“Doing it is harder than saying it.” Jurina hissed.

“We don’t know until we try. How long ago was your last drink from Rena?” Minami asked.

“3 days ago, i think?”

“Good enough. Yuihan, can you guide them how to do it?”

“Sure. Rena, Jurina, come here.” Yui gestured us to go with her.

Both of us followed her and went out of the room. We walked on the rocky hallway until we reached another room, which was completely empty. There were only torches on the wall and a strange large circle on the ground in the middle of the room.

“While I’m getting ready, Jurina, you should have some of Rena’s blood. Just in case, you know.” Yui said then leave us alone outside when she entered the room and closed the room behind her back.

And then, an awkward silence covered us. Even though we had done this several times already but somehow I still felt shy around her. It wasn’t bad that she drank my blood. The problem was I couldn’t control myself when her gentleness during each time was irresistible. I couldn’t my heart from beating so fast and... Oh God! I couldn’t stop myself form wanting her lips on mine.... Oh snap out of your fantasies already Rena!

“Um... Rena-chan?” Suddenly her voice startled me. I quickly hid my flush face before answered her.

“Y-Yes Jurina?”

“I don’t think Yuihan will wait for us forever...” She said, not even dared look at me. I saw her cheeks turned red. Was she shy?

“Ehh... Yeah... I know...” Slowly, I pulled my right sleeve up and raised my wrist to her lips level.

She took my hand gently and held it up before her lips. I blushed at the sight of her kissing my wrist before growing her fangs. Her eyes changed into gold color and in a second, she inserted her fangs into my skin. I let out a painful gasp before her tongue did its good job in soothing my pain. She drank my blood in a few seconds before cleaning the bite with her wet flesh and then pulled out.

“Yuihan said I just needs some.” I heard her mumble. I pulled down my sleeve to hide the bite mark while watching her wipe away my blood on her lips. Somehow, I couldn’t take my eyes off her.

Startling me again, the door opened and Yui peaked her head out with an amused smile on her face.

“I guess you’re ready. Come in.”

I and Jurina entered the room. The circle on the ground was glowing in white light. Yui then told Jurina to stand inside the circle while I stood next to the Kyoto girl.

“OK, Jurina. When we release the dark spirit, you have to fight against your killing desire OK?”

“Got it.” Jurina nodded.

“Rena.” Yui turned to me then offered for my left hand.

I gave her my hand. She looked at the palm then mumbled an ancient language, pretty much like what Mayu used to say. Then the seal slowly appeared on my palm.

“Ready Jurina?”

The young girl nodded. Yui ran a finger on my palm, across the seal. Then, the seal was faded a little. At the same time, Jurina looked weird. Her breaths were fast and her eyes changed to red. She sweat a lot and her hair started to change into white.

“S-Stop.. Y-yuihan.” She tried to say in between her breaths.

Immediately, Yui chanted to strengthen the seal on my palm again. I saw the young girl turned back to her normal and fell donw on her knees, catching her breath.

“I... I can’t do it...”

“You have to try harder Jurina. Tell me, what did you feel when it came to you?” Yui calmly said.

“I...” Jurina hesitated. “I felt awful... guilty... hurt... desperate... depressed... and lonely...”

“That’s what you feel right now. Your sorrow and fear just help the dark side in you grow stronger. If you want to control it, you have to control yourself first. Don’t use your pain as your strength. Use your happiness.”

“Happiness?” Jurina’s eyes went wide when Yui mentioned about her happiness.

“Yes, your happiness. Don’t tell me you don’t have one.”

I watched Jurina thinking. Why did I know that? Because her eyebrows furrowed, which made her look like a confused puppy. All of sudden, her gaze turned to me. I was surprised to see how soft and caring her eyes were when they locked on me. It felt like she was melting me just by the look of her beautiful dark eyes.

“OK... I think I can do this. Let’s give it another try.”

Jurina stood up and said to Yui, who just smiled that the statement.

“Good. Now Rena, do it by yourself. I have showed you how to do that already. You’re the key to open Jurina’s pandora box. Gambatte ne.”

Yui took a steeped back away from me. I looked at Jurina in hesitation, not sure about what I was going to do. But an urge pushed me to do it, for everyone’s sake. So I prepared to open the seal by touching my left palm with my finger in the edge of the black seal. Then, I turned to look at Jurina.

“Are you ready, Jurina?”

“Anytime, Rena-chan.”

She gave me her sweetest cat smile that I fell in love with it. I gulped then moved my hand across the seal. Jurina once again in her fighting mode. Her eyes and hair changed again, sweat rolling on her pale cheeks. But this time, veins were seen on her face. She ground her teeth and curled up her hands into fists. She fell on her knees again and groans in pain.

I watched her fighting with her own dark side in concern but I didn’t know what else to do. I looked at Yui but Yui shook her head like she was telling me to leave Jurina alone. I turned back to look at the girl again. Her hair was completely white and it was growing longer. Her nails were turning into claws. She couldn’t hold back anymore. I wanted to seal her but it wouldn’t help. If she couldn’t fight then it was useless to keep repeating this.

From the bottom of my heart, I gave her all of my strength to help her enlightening her soul.

“JURINA! GAMBATTE!”

Hearing my voice, Jurina’s body moved. She let out a scream then punched her fist hard on the ground, sending smoke and dust cover all the room. I immediately covered my eyes from the dust and coughed. Smoke was everywhere so I couldn’t see anything beside myself and Yui who was standing next to me. I couldn’t hear anything from Jurina and that worried me.

“Jurina? Jurina! Are you OK?” I called for her, hoping she was still alive.

Then, a blurry black shadow appeared on the blanket of smoke. I looked at that direction in shock and surprise. The smoke was dispersed, slowly showing us a clear view of a new person.

It was her, but a new Jurina. Her cat smile was still there, but her appearance had changed from what I remembered about a half-human vampire.

“Let’s go save Mayu now!”

She had succeed, in controlling her pain.


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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #164 on: November 11, 2012, 01:25:45 PM »
Damn you and your awesome fiction!!! I love wMatsui moment soooo much!!! I squealed aloud, and mom third time today came into my room and called me crazy... B...b...ut it's just that awesome, that i can't keep the emotions inside me!!

GO Jurina, bring Yuko-sama back, and save Mayu!! And oh, please, more wMatsui moments!!!  :bow:
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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #165 on: November 11, 2012, 02:28:09 PM »
I don't know what to write... I mean, it's just too awesome!

Sorry for this, I write more later. :)

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #166 on: November 11, 2012, 02:31:52 PM »
Wouah!! Jurina can control the monster inside her!!

Rena eheh! she have a fantasies with Jurina XD

Yay! go to save Mayu!!
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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #167 on: November 11, 2012, 02:32:25 PM »
Yes! Yes! Yes! It's really awesome chapter!

And yes, you gained 34 thank! That's was really awesome of you sayuki-san!

So chapter 8 part 1, aaaah this chapter is about how jurina control her evil power to save mayu..and maybe to bring yuko back to the group, the good side...LOL

I can't wait part 2,look's for an interesting battle between jurina and yuko,and how they know yuko place?
Hope they will succed this mission without fail, i can't bear anymore to look yuki in pain and hurt...she's so quite..and angry (why angry anyway?)

LOL thank for the update sayuki-san...can't wait the part when mayu's soul back!, because when it happen the mayuki lovey dovey will comeback too LOL


Again thank..thank..thank..thank..thank..
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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #168 on: November 11, 2012, 02:42:24 PM »
@kurogumi: She's angry at herself for doing nothing to save Mayu :P ahaha Maybe I'll amke a cheesy reunion of Mayuki? Maybe maybe~

I don't think i'm good enough to gain that many thanks though ^^a But thank you all anyway. I hope I won't disappoint you and others in the next part.

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #169 on: November 11, 2012, 02:43:23 PM »
Yay! Jurina go kidnap Yuko and save Mayu!! I wonder what does Jurina look like when she got the new power?  :?
Thank you for a great update, Sayuki-san! Your chapters should gain more than 34 thanks  :P I love your fic very much!!

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #170 on: November 11, 2012, 02:50:46 PM »
Save Mayu! (I just love how everybody is cheering on Jurina right now)
An not matter how much I love evil Yuko, it would be exciting to see her good side, so yay!
Another great update, Thank you so much!  :twothumbs

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #171 on: November 11, 2012, 03:17:03 PM »
After each chapter, I'm remember the prologue, and I'm more worried what will happen next. But I dont mind if this is gonna sad end. I really like this fic, and I am curious about the continuation.
And what is important to me, because of this fic, I began to like the vampire stories, thank you for this! :)

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« Reply #172 on: November 11, 2012, 04:54:34 PM »
Oh. God. Mnnn!!! You had me fangirling so much at the end! ;^; I don't know why! The moment I read "JURINA! GAMBATTE!" I fangirled. Really bad. And then Jurina. The good Jurina. ; w ; *sniffle* WITH WHITE HAIR. BADASSSSSSS...

Out of place to say this now but... I really hope in the next AKBINGO danso... 5 and 5 coupling... Jurina takes part in it. +w+ There are so many people who I want to take part in it, but they'll probably limit it to 4 depending on how many people like it in Japan... I actually desperately want to see KKS and Team 4 members danso. I've only seen Miorin, Haruu, and Oba danso...
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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #173 on: November 11, 2012, 05:40:08 PM »
many things happened
wmatsui as slow  as always
Jurina can cantrol her damon power 
don't die Mayu Jurina will save you and Yuki is waiting for you!!
thanks for the update Sayuki-san XD

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #174 on: November 11, 2012, 09:02:07 PM »
Whoaaa Jurina can control her darkness side!!

Ganbatte ne Jurina!! Rena is your happiness?
Go save Mayu! And help Yuki..

Nice Update Sayuki-san ^^

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #175 on: November 11, 2012, 09:49:12 PM »
Thank you so much for that chapter, absolutely loved it!  :w00t:
The amount of pure awesome wMatsui moments that was in there, just went crazy reading that  :inlove:
Kinda feel bad for Mayu and Yukirin are both in a bad way but now that Jurina can control her half vampire state they'll be saved in no time  XD
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"You’re the key to open Jurina’s pandora box."
This line from Yuihan worried me though, Pandora's box isn't meant to be opened, and like Kiri-el-san said the prologue foreshadows bad things happening later on...

Look forward to the next update and the introduction of the new character  :)

Also thanks for the pictures of the weapons, they all look so awesome (especially Jurina's sword)

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #176 on: November 12, 2012, 01:23:48 AM »
Jurina is so cool here!
It kinda remind me Naruto lol
Can't wait for Jurina vs Yuko

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #177 on: November 16, 2012, 06:54:24 PM »
nice update,
This chapter is great,
it remind me of Naruto and Bleach,
When Jurina wanted to get the new power it's like Naruto wanted to control back Kyubi,
And after Jurina have gain control the new power somehow remind me of Ichigo have masted the Getsuga Tenshou,
So next chapter is kidnap Yuko save Mayu?

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #178 on: November 18, 2012, 11:12:55 PM »
omg this fic just keeps getting better  :cathappy:
i was almost melting from all the wmatsui, awww rena is so cute when she wants to kiss jurina  :wub: :wub:

but i still want to see more kuminon :(

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Re: PJ48 Gakuen [Chapter 8 Part 1] 11/11 | Wmatsui, Mayuki, Atsumina, Kuminon
« Reply #179 on: November 19, 2012, 11:34:25 AM »
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Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the interesting supernatural fanfic

Nice weapons.... :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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