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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #100 on: October 07, 2012, 07:02:47 AM »
Thanks for the update,, wow another Hyper-Sae scene,, wtf Yuuki? What can she do to everyone here? Careful Miyumi-san, maybe she can kill u too if u mess with her :D
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #101 on: October 07, 2012, 07:03:27 AM »
Thanks for the update,, wow another Hyper-Sae scene,, wtf Yuuki? What can she do to everyone here? Careful Miyumi-san, maybe she can kill u too if u mess with her :D
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #102 on: October 07, 2012, 07:33:43 AM »
well, well Miyumi san, it's great!! haha genking!!  and Yuuki oh my baby you are so scary  :lol: it's great!!

and for the poll, Sawako vs Ken seems interesting  :D

thanks for the update Miyumi-san!!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #103 on: October 07, 2012, 09:32:43 AM »
OMG!!! Yuuki is so scary! How a child can be that scary? Lol

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #104 on: October 07, 2012, 10:49:18 AM »
Am I that bad?

huum~ how would I have liked to kill everyone~*innocent smile*
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #105 on: October 07, 2012, 02:58:36 PM »
Nice update, Sawako's multiple personality continue to impress and surprise me  :D and Genking getting high on sugar  XD
Also really interested to see how the poll goes, I voted Jurina vs Airin and Ken vs Sawako since I doubt either of these would be a straight forward brawl but still be just as exciting :)

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #106 on: October 07, 2012, 11:59:16 PM »
hauhaahuah Sayaka always know what to do XD

Can't wait to see what you had planned to the characters^^

Yuuki is creepy ><

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 9
« Reply #107 on: October 08, 2012, 08:34:11 AM »
Yeah~! Sae Sugar rush~!
Wow.. didnt think Yuuki is so scary,
Mariko better careful~!
Yuuki sometimes cute but sometimes scary,
looking forward for the next update,

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #108 on: October 09, 2012, 05:03:22 AM »
@ichikawa: Thanks! I knew how much you've been dying to see Sae's sugar craze.  :P

@fael_c00l: Yuuki is like me when I was little. Very dangerous...  :twisted:

@JuRikki: I hope you enjoy the fight scene. It seems everyone wants Jurina and Airin to fight so I'm sorry!  :cry:

@kahem: You'd be surprised how scary children can get. I know first hand.  :shocked

@yuukimoko: You can be very dangerous at times may I remind you?  XD

@nori: Well I hope you enjoy the battle. It's a 2 parter so things are really going to get heated up!  :lol:

@BbSis: Yuuki can be scary when she wants but other times she's adorable. I have much in stored to look forward to it!  :)

@m00nchild: I'm glad you like the update. I hope you like the fight scene as well. I think everyone will.  :twisted:

Ok everyone as you know, 10 is always a 2 parter and this time I'm going to add the results of the the poll winners who were Jurina and Airin! So then let's see what crazy things happen that cause these two to break out in a fight.
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Chapter 10 part 1

Today was a special day. Today was the day everyone at the facility gets to go on their annual trip. This time everyone was going to the mountains on a camping trip. Now Mariko wasn't the type who was an outdoors person. But the director claimed that it would be great bonding time for everyone is forcing everyone to go. Mariko had no choice but to go.

"Mou are we there yet?"

"Just a little up ahead."

"Takamina can't you carry me?"

"No Acchan we're here so quit complaining."

While Takamina and Acchan were debating, Mariko was busy wathcing the others in front of her. Mariko was in the middle front of the line and the ones in front of her were Rena, Airin, Jurina and Kumi. Mariko was mainly concerned about Kumi considereing the fact she wasn't looking where she was going.

"Hey look a bird!"

"Kumi look out!"

BAM!

Kumi slammed face first into a tree. Everyone stopped and looked at Kumi who just remained silent with her face still in the tree. Then when she pulled back there was a bark imprint on her face.

"I look like beef jerky don't I?"

Mariko just face palmed herself while everyone else laughed. Then they continued their hike. About half way, they stopped to take a break.

"Nee Jurina I have to use the bathroom will you come with me?"

"Of course."

Rena and Jurina ran to the side while everyone else was resting. Mariko didn't notice it but Airin somehow walked away and followed Rena and Jurina. There she tried to peek on Rena going to the bathroom. But Jurina saw and stopped Airin.

"What do you think you're doing?"

Before Airin could answer, Jurina flipped Airin over and got on top of her.

"If you try to do anything funny to Rena I'll kill you. You got that?"

Airin just nodded her head silently.

"Good."

Jurina got off and ran over to Rena.

"Let's head back to the others." Jurina said.

"Ok!"

Jurina looked back at Airin and gave her a death glare. Then she focused on Rena again.

"Where did you guys go?" Mayuyu asked.

"Bathroom." Rena said.

"Where's Airin?" Acchan asked.

"She's around...."

Jurina looked away so now one would find her guilty. Then suddenly Airin came out of the blue.

"Ahh there you are!" Churi said.

"Sorry I was busy doing something. Somthing important..."

After a long half hour hike up the mountain, everyone finally makes it to the camping ground. It was mainly a wide open field surrounded by woods. It actually looked really nice and way better than in the pictures.

"Alright everyone gather around!"

Everyone crowded around Sayaka.

"We can fit four to a tent so here's how things are going to be done. Churi, Sawako, Airin, and Kanon will all be in one tent while Mariko, Jurina, Rena, and Kumi will be in another. Sae, Yuko, Haruna and I will be in one and then Mayu, Yukirin, Acchan and Takamina will be in one as well. Any questions? No then let's set up the tents!"

Mariko walked over to Jurina and Rena who were trying to set up the tent while Kumi was staring at a rock for some reason. Jurina was getting frustrated because she couldn't figure out the instructions and Rena was trying to calm her down.

"Ahhh stupid tent!"

Jurina threw the instructions on the ground and stepped on them.

"Hey don't do that! Maybe I can help."

Mariko picked up the instructions and tried to figure them out. But even she couldn't figure it out. As she was trying to figure out the instructions, she suddenly hears a clicking sound.

"Done!"

Mariko looked up and saw the tent was already set up. Standing next to it was Kumi with an air headed smile. 

"Kumi did you do all of this?" Mariko asked.

"Yep!"

"How?"

"I just looked at the picture and then put things together." Kumi said.

"Ok well great. Let's get our stuff inside and then meet up with the others."

Mariko unloaded her things into the tent and then sealed it all up. Then she walked over to Sayaka's tent and saw movement inside. Mariko opened the tent and found Yuko on top of Haruna trying to rip her shirt off.

"Yuko!"

"What?"

Mariko grabbed Yuko and threw her out of the tent and off of Haruna.

"What was that for?" Yuko said.

"No raping Haurna! Save it for night."

"Oh great idea! That way she's asleep and won't see it coming."

"I said nothing."

Mariko walked away and over to Yukirin's tent. Mariko opened the flap and saw Acchan reading a magazine and doing her nails while Mayuyu was playing one of her video games.

"Didn't Sayaka say no video games?"

"Yeah but do you think I'd listen to the gorilla?"

Mariko laughed a little even though she shouldn't She left the others and went to Churi's tent. When she opened it, she saw Churi and Sawako passed out on Kanon's lap. Meanwhile, Airin was in the corner drawing the whole thing. As Mariko watched the scene she suddenly felt something pull her back.

"Hey Mariko I need you to come with me and get fire wood." Sayaka said.   

"Sure but what about the others?" Mariko asked.

"It'll only be a second. I just need you to come with me for a while."

"Ok."

Mariko and Sayaka go out into the woods to gather fire wood. They go far enough so they can find wood but not too far so that they won't be able to reach the camp in timm if something bad happened. While those two were gathering wood, things were going on back at the campsite.

"Jurina I'm going to go get some water. I'll be right back ok?"

"Ok be back soon."

Rena got out of the tent and started walking toward the cooler where the drinks were. Little did she know, there was a nearby stalker lurking in the shadows. Rena got some water and started to head back when someone suddenly jumped on top of her.

"Kya!"

The one on top of her was Airin who had a mad look in her eyes.

"Let me see it! Let me see your beauty!"

Airin started to tear away Rena's shirt exposing the girl's bra and stomach.

"Jurina!"

Jurina came out and saw what was happening. She ran over and tackled Airin to the ground.

"Stay away from her!"

Jurina started punching Airin in the face and Airin only tired to defend herself. However Jurina was strong and managed to bust Airin's lip open. As the two were fighting, the others started to come out.

"Jurina stop!"

Takamina tried to get Jurina off of Airin but had no luck as Jurina tossed Takamina like she was nothing. Yukirin didn't want to get involved and Churi was still passed out. It was just the two of them and no one was going to get involved. But then Airin suddenly threw Jurina off her and pulled out two pencils. She aimed them right at Jurina's eyes and said,

"Don't try to stop me..."

"Who said I was!"

Jurina kicked Airin in the stomach making her get off and Jurina move out of the way and grab a rock. She hit Airin in the head knocking her out cold.

"I win...."

"For now~"

Jurina looked over and saw Sawako looking at her.

"You just knocked her out. When Airin wakes up she won't be the same anymore."

"What do you mean?"

Suddenly a hand reached out and grabbed Jurinan's neck. It squeezed her neck tightly to the point Jurina's eye balls were going to pop out. But then Jurina punched the things back making it let go of Jurina. Jurina stepped back and gasped for breath. Then she looked over at Airin who was now standing with blood dripping from her head.

"I see it..."

Airin held up her hands and started shaking.

"I see it!"

"See what?"

Before Jurina could get and answer, Airin suddenly grabbed Jurina by the ankle and dragged her deep into the woods.

"Jurina!"

When Mariko came back and saw the others she asked,

"What happened?"

"Airin and Jurina got in to a fight." Acchand said.

"Then Airin went nuts and dragged Jurina away!" Takamina said.

"What!"

"We have to stop her."

Mariko looked over and now see a fully awake Churi.

"We have to stop Airin. If we don't Jurina could be in danger." she said.

"How so?" Mariko asked.

"Airin is actually very strong. Jurina just angered her making her unleash the anger I had her put away. If we don't stop her Jurina could die."

"Oh snap."

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Jurina was on the ground panting trying to breathe. Her vision was blurred and her head was pounding. She looked over and saw Airin hunched over staring at her hands again.

"It's all there..."

"What?"

"The blood. The- the children... all fo them gone!"

"Airin what are you talking about?"

"You took them! You took them away from me!"

"Wha- ahhh!"

Airin jumped on top of Jurina and started punching Jurina in the face. Jurina tried to fight back but Airin was a lot stronger this time and very hard to shake off.

"It's all your fault. It's all your fault they're dead!"

Airin picked Jurina up and threw her slamming her body into a nearby tree. Jurina hit the ground hard and got the air knocked out of her. Her body was weak and needed rest. But as soon as she looked up there was Airin standing holding a rock above her head.

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Oh no what's going to happen to Jurina! Find out in part 2!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #109 on: October 09, 2012, 05:53:00 AM »
Huaahuahau it's already time for travel o/

Mariko always giving ideas to Yuko xD

Oh! Now I wonder what makes Airin gone mad ... she got. Really creepy "fighting" ><

Missed the Gachapin nurse xp but it's Okay..

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #110 on: October 09, 2012, 02:01:48 PM »
Airin is really full of surprises lol
But where is Miichan?

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #111 on: October 09, 2012, 05:35:13 PM »
nice updated,
so airin have a fearful past huh,
and kumi past is a mystery also,
wonder what will happen to Rena do,
due Jurina is having a DANGER,
Gekikara coming out?

about the poll i was wondering Sayaka & Mariko,
the interested too, another i think i will choose for it and Kanon vs Rena,

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #112 on: October 09, 2012, 05:46:56 PM »
Omg! This part of the chapter is really exciting! ARGHH, Airin is so scary ... :panic: thanks for the update!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #113 on: October 09, 2012, 07:02:18 PM »
Oh my God, Airin is really scary!! She sounds like those people from the horror movies! But, I love how Mariko's response to this whole thing is just 'oh snap' lol.  I can't wait to find out what'll happen to Jurina.

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #114 on: October 10, 2012, 02:06:37 AM »
NO! Jurina is gonna be killed by Airin :O
Though the credibility of this hospital is questioned again  XD (annual trips letting the patients loose, doctors and patient relationships... what next??)
Really good update though and looking forward to part 2

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #115 on: October 10, 2012, 07:58:52 AM »
. . .kumi's actions always makes me smile. . .i like her character. . .and airin vs. jurina. . sugoi..!can't help but react on every scenes!...just got carried away. .hehe..still waiting for the next.
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #116 on: October 10, 2012, 03:29:34 PM »
hello there ^o^
i had read your fanfic mad house season 1 and the sae cop's too :D i love them all.. but i had never leave any comment because i'm new here, and i just made this account.. sorry m(_ _)m
AND sooo mad house season 2 eh? i definitly jump like crazy when the first time i see it XD glad you made the another sequel of m.a.d ~ hoping sugar rush will come again then! go sae kun! go!! thanks for this wonderful fanfic and please update soon
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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 1
« Reply #117 on: October 10, 2012, 05:02:41 PM »
Noooooooo!! Jurina ;___; Airin!I won't let you to kill my dear Jurina! Gekikara, please save your dearest sister!! ;__; Airin is so scary! Ow Jurina come on! Thanks for the update, Miyumi-san!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #118 on: October 11, 2012, 03:37:01 AM »
@BbSis: Don't worry Gachapin will be arriving shortly. I have a little surprise for her.  :)

@kahem: Miichan is on her way! I have something planned for her.  :P

@m00nchild: Let's see what Airin does to Jurina. I hope you like the update!  :P

@Srawberri: I'm glad you like the fight scene! I hope you enjoy the epic conclusion!  XD

@nori: No one is going to die! I don't do that. They're just going to beat the crud out of each other that's all.  :)

@Sasshii: Thank you for liking the chapter. I hope you like the sequel as well!  :lol:

@Dreamstalker: Well I'm glad that my story makes you react. I want readers to feel the story you know?  :?

@fuu_kun: Ahh welcome to the forum. I hope I see some fics from you! I'm glad you like the story and I hope you enjoy the rest. Again, welcome to the forum! Oh and don't worry your English is pretty good. :welcome

@JuRikki: I don't know if Gekikara will come out but I know a certain someone is~ Read more to find out!  XD

Alright everyone it's time for part 2! But before we start, I feel like two parts isn't enough. I was thinking about adding one more... I don't know so you guys tell me! Should I add a 3rd part or just move on? You're choice! Anyways, back to the fight!
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Chapter 10 part 2

Airin was ready to drop the rock on Jurina's head but Jurina was quick and managed to get out of the way. She grabbed a near by branch and hit Airin in the head. Blood dripped down but Airin seemed unfazed. She grabbed Jurina by the leg and tripped her over. Then she got on top of her and had the rock again. Right as she brought the rock down, Jurina got her hands out in time and stopped it. Airin tried to push as hard as she could Jurina wasn't budging. She then decided to start slamming it on top of Jurina. However Jurina used her arms as shields and blocked every blow.

"Why can't you just die!"

Airin threw the rock aside and aimed straight for Jurina's neck. She reached out and held a tight grip on it. Airin began to squeeze the air out of Jurina and no matter how hard she tried Jurina couldn't get Airin off. Jurina thought she was done for but then she felt something near her. She grabbed it and swung it right at Airin's head. Airin rolled off Jurina and Jurina sat up to catch her breath. But she didn't have a long time because Airin was back and was carrying a huge stick.

"What the heck!"

Jurina ducked as Airin swung the massive stick and barley managed to get out of the way to avoid another strike. However Jurina was backed all the way to a tree and couldn't get around. Airin was ready to impale Jurina with the large stick but Jurina remembered something she learned from Yuko a while back. Right when Airin was going to strike, Jurina jumped high and the stick ended up empaling the tree. Jurina flew into the air and then landed on the stick.

"Catch me if you can~"

Jurina gave a cocky smile and then started climbing the tree like a squirrel. She climbed all the way to the top and at this point Jurina thought she was safe. But then the tree started to move. Jurina looked down and saw Airin actually pushing the tree out of the ground making it tilt sideways. Jurina started going down and if she didn't jump off soon then she would fall and hurt herself badly. Right as the tree hit the ground, Jurina jumped high and dropped kicked Airin in the shoulder.

"Haha!"

But it was only a moment of victory before Airin grabbed Jurina's ankle and swung her around like a merry go round. She kept spinning and spinning until finally, Airin launched Jurina and she flew all the way into a stream. When Jurina hit the water she was shot with a blast of cold water. Jurina managed to get out in time right before Airin came out this time with a pointed bamboo shoot. Jurina wondered where she got the bamboo but didn't have time to worry because Airin was charging straight for her.

"Die!"

Airin lunged forward but missed. Jurina picked up a rock and slammed it into Airin's leg. Airin howled in pain and Jurina took this as an advantage and punched her hard in the stomach and twice as hard in the chest. Airin stepped back but wasn't done yet. She attacked again and this time when Jurina dodged she tripped over a rock. The bamboo missed her chest but managed to slice her arm open and blood began pouring out. Pain shot throughout Jurina's arm and was having a hard time stopping the bleeding. But she couldn't because Airin came again but instead of dodging it Jurina stopped it with her other good hand. She held a tight grip on it not moving an inch. Airin pushed closer and Jurina could see the fire in her eyes. It was wild and uncontrolled.

"Why won't you just die!" she shouted.

"Because I have something keeping me alive!" Jurina shouted back.

The two were at it neck and neck. Neither one was going to give in. Jurina was gripping the bamboo so hard that it was actually starting to crack. With one final crack, the bamboo shattered and pieces lodged themselves into Jurina's hand. Jurina backed away and Airin took this advantage and tackled Jurina into the stream. She managed to get on top of Jurina and was now pushing her head into the water. Jurina tried to fight back but her one arm was no good and her hand wasn't either. Jurina was staying above water on pure abdominal strength. But then Jurina slowly started to go lower and lower until she was completely submerged. Airin wasn't letting up any time soon and Jurina was running out of air. Her sight began to darken and her heart began to slow. Was this the end for Jurina?

"Rena... I'm sorry..."

(Back at camp...)

"So how to do stop Airin?" Yukirin asked.

"Well we're going to need someone strong." Churi said.

"Me?" Sayaka said.

"No stronger."

"Kanon?"

"Stronger."

"Who?"

"Her."

Churi pointed straight at Rena.

"Me?"

"No behind you."

Rena stepped to the side revealing Sawako.

"Sawako?" everyone said.

"Well not Sawako exactly. We need Sasshii." Churi said.

"Can you bring her out?" Mariko asked.

"Yes but I need to be knocked out." Sawako said.

"I got it!"

Kumi ran and grabbed a frying pan.

"Wait you're not gonna-"

"Good night Sawako!"

BAM!!!!

Sawako fell to the ground out like a light. Then a couple seconds later she got back up. Mariko thought it had worked but turns out no. Sawako had a perverted smile on her face. It was Ken.

"Hey there ladies."

"It didn't work. Hit her again Kumi."

"Wait no-"

BAM!!!

Sawako was out again. A couple seconds later she got back up again and this time she had a teary eyed look.

"Who hit me in the head? That hurt!"

"Kumi now we have Yuuki. Again."

"No don't!"

BAM!!!!

Sawako was out and this time she didn't get back up. Everyone was silent waiting for Sawako to move but still no movement.

"Want me to hit her again?"

"Go ahead?"

Kumi was about to hit Sawako again but then she reached out and stopped it. She was holding on so tightly that she actually bent the pan.

"Who the hell keeps hitting me with a frying pan?"

Sasshii was out and she was a little mad. Who wouldn't be after being hit in the head with a frying pan three times. Sasshii got up and stretched out her back and shoulder hearing a loud crack.

"What's up?"

"Airin's lost it again and we need you to put bring her back." Churi said.

"Where did they go?"

"Somewhere in the woods. We don't know where though."

"I'll go find them. But I need back up. Mariko and Sayaka come with me as well."

Mariko and Sayaka only nodded their heads and began following Sasshii. They eventually came across an area of the woods that seemed like a fight happened. There rocks everywhere and even a tree had fallen. There was some blood on some near by trees heading a certain direction. They followed it to an open stream and found them. Airin was on top of Jurina drowning her in the water.

"Airin!"

Sasshii ran over and tackled Airin while Sayaka and Jurina ran over and pulled Jurina out of the water. They dragged her to shore and set her down. Mariko leaned in to check for a pulse and breath.

"She's not breathing. I'm going to perform CPR."

Sayaka started to do mouth to mouth and pumped Jurina's chest. Mariko could only watch in horror as she watched her patient dying and wondered why she wasn't the one performing CPR. But the she looked over at Sasshii and Airin and couldn't believe what she was seeing. Sasshii was quick and precise with her movement. Every punch Airin threw at her Sasshii dodged and hit Airin right back. When Airin tried getting on top Sasshii moved and let Airin stumble. Before she fell, Sasshii grabbed Airin's wrist and flung her towards a large boulder.

"Airin wake up! This isn't you. Forget the past and wake up."

"You don't understand Sasshii so shut up!"

Airin came at Sasshii with a sharp rock but when she attacked, Sasshii easily dodged it and with two quick movements, she flipped Sasshii over and delivered the final blow to her stomach.

"Shhh sleep Airin. When you wake up all your anger and hate will be gone."

Then Airin passed out in Sasshii's arms. Mariko was frozen not believing what she had just witnessed. But then Sayaka said,

"I still can't get a pulse!"

Mariko rushed over and saw Sayaka furiously trying to bring Jurina back to life. But it looked like it was all gone. Her arm was covered in blood and it looked like she had lost a lot. Her skin was paper white and her body dead still. To Mariko it looked like Jurina had left the Earth.

"Sayaka that's enough."

"No we can still save her!"

"That's enough!"

Mariko pushed Sayaka back up fell over and hit her head. She sat back up and slapped Mariko in the face.

"She's your patient dammit! You should be trying to save her life!"

The anger in Mariko began to boil but then stopped when she heard the sound of foot steps.

"Jurina!"

The two looked over and saw Rena running towards them as fast as she could. She ran over to Jurina's seemingly lifeless body and cried.

"No don't tell me she-"

"I'm sorry Jurina but there's nothing we can do." Mariko said.

"We tried our best. Well I tried at least." Sayaka said as she patted Rena's shoulder.

"No Jurina can't die right? You can't right!"

Tears were pouring from her eyes as she stared at her sister's dead body.

"Jurina wake up...."

Rena started shaking Jurina like she was waking her up from sleep.

"Wake up Jurina. Weren't we going to eat Melon pan together. You need to wake up."

Rena's hand was trembling and she felt Jurina's cold body.

"Nee... Jurina you can't leave me. You promised you never would..."

"Rena I think it's time to give up. She's gone." Mariko said.

"NOOO!"

Rena slammed her fist hard on Jurina's chest. She screamed in sadness and let the tears pour out. The monster was crying over her beloved. But then Rena's expression turned dark and eyes grew small. A scary smile cracked on her face and her body twitched.  Rena stood up and started walking over to Sasshii.

"Ne... okottetru?"

"Rena no!!"

"I'm going to make you pay. I'm going to rip your body to shreds!"

Rena was going to charge at the unconscious Airin but then Mariko started to feel movement. Followed after, Jurina's body jerked up and coughed up water.

"Jurina!"

Mariko sat Jurina up and helped her get the water out.

"Jurina you're alive!" Mariko said.

"Rena you can stop! Jurina is alive!" Sayaka said.

"LIES! Don't tell me lies!"

Rena was about to attack and Sasshii was ready to fight. But then Jurina shouted,

"RENA!"
 
Hearing Jurina's voice, Rena stopped everything. She turned around and saw Jurina with a weak smile.

"Rena... that's enough."

Rena's whole expression changed. Tears started to pour again and she ran to Jurina.

"Jurina!"

Rena wrapped her arms around Jurina and held her tightly.

"I thought you left me!" Rena cried.

"Baka... I'm never going to leave you remember?" Jurina said.

"Don't ever leave me you hear!"

"I hear you. It's ok now so stop crying."

Jurina started to rub Rena's back trying to soothe the poor girl's scared heart. Meanwhile Sasshii came over carrying Airin.

"We should probably head back to the others. We need to treat Jurina's wounds."

"Right. Let's go."

Mariko stood up and brushed off her clothes. Then she held out her hand to Sayaka. Sayaka took it and sat up.

"What happened?" Mariko asked.

"That hit Rena gave Jurina must have been powerful enough to start Jurina's heart again. It's a miracle really." Sayaka said.

"It sure is."

"Mariko listen to me. No matter what you do not give up on your patients do you hear me?"

Sayaka stared at Mariko with a serious gaze. Mariko only nodded her head and Sayaka backed off.

"Ok then help me carry Jurina."

Together, Mariko and Sayaka carried Jurina back to the camp where the others were waiting. They treated both Jurina and Airin's wounds and had them both resting. It had been a long day and Mariko was tired. She was so glad that no one died. But she also realized that Sayaka was right. Mariko shouldn't give up on her patients so quickly. There still maybe a chance. At that moment Mariko promised that she would work hard when she got back to the facility.

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Well there's part 2! I hope you guys liked it! Man my hands are tired from all the typing! Now the question is should I make a part 3 or not? It's up to your guys! Please tell me what you think!

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Re: Mad House 2 update Chapter 10 part 2
« Reply #119 on: October 11, 2012, 04:10:37 AM »
this part really amazing. Jurina almost die and rena save jurina's life with her hit!

 you should make part 3. Two parts isn't enough!
please please pleaseee
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