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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #140 on: October 30, 2012, 06:00:31 AM »
hehe you know one of the writer here ? Arisa ? shes from Ph too. and i saw her !!

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #141 on: October 30, 2012, 06:02:24 AM »
really.. cool :thumbsup
i think we chat later... i'm hungry.. i go eat now XD
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #142 on: October 30, 2012, 08:01:31 AM »
Yeah kinda like that but some of them are bitches (the way they act)  :nervous

so it's kinda annoying  :grin:

i rather MM!  :cow:

till i find someone i really like because MM is "platonic" :oops:


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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #143 on: October 30, 2012, 08:03:35 AM »
Yeah kinda like that but some of them are bitches (the way they act)  :nervous

so it's kinda annoying  :grin:

i rather MM!  :cow:

till i find someone i really like because MM is "platonic" :oops:
hey i don't get your comments...

anyway, i have a poll in my ahem ahem thread... please kindly lay me your vote  XD

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #144 on: October 30, 2012, 08:09:23 AM »
It's Maikeatoot because she said in Venezula there are cute girls...  :nervous

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #145 on: October 30, 2012, 08:12:50 AM »
It's Maikeatoot because she said in Venezula there are cute girls...  :nervous
o ic...
anyway, some girls in singapore also not better...

btw you are not interested in my upcoming shot on TakaGaki rabu rabu?   :sweatdrop:
if you do, please give me the vote... :nervous

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #146 on: October 30, 2012, 08:41:10 AM »
i already did! :)

pleade update soon!!  :otomerika:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #147 on: October 30, 2012, 08:49:02 AM »
i know... i am getting a bit dizzy now... chatting with you from thread to thread...

yup, how you want me to do it so that you can forget about that crush of maikeatoot to resemble aichan  :nervous

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #148 on: October 30, 2012, 10:09:50 AM »
I woke up to drink watee but i'm glad i ooened this

don't oreasure yourself do it as if flows on you..

i'll be happy just with the fact you're trying!  :cow:

really i'm not that hard to get!!  :grin:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.12
« Reply #149 on: October 30, 2012, 10:16:49 AM »
hahaha~ ok, i think i should go offline too for today  :P
(please look forward... i think i just do it what i intend to :thumbup)
good nite and sweet dreamz~ but please don't dream about the sinful scene that i have written :P anyways, just kidding
good nite and sweet dreamz~  :on roll: :mon wakey: :sleep:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
« Reply #150 on: November 01, 2012, 04:17:25 AM »

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
« Reply #151 on: November 01, 2012, 04:20:08 AM »
Chapter 13 xD Enjoy!

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34181.0
i take note of it  :P now i am sick so i don't think i want to read those stuffs and get myself heated up.
i will give the response some other time some other day when i am better and have read it  :P

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
« Reply #152 on: November 01, 2012, 04:28:07 AM »
cmze i really enjoy reading ur smexy scene!!!hoho

 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
« Reply #153 on: November 01, 2012, 04:29:42 AM »
so many smexy scene ! oh i need tissue !

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.13
« Reply #154 on: November 01, 2012, 04:41:23 AM »
thanks cmze... yellow now is burned so have to go for cold shower now  :mon fire:
and i have to tell you are getting better than your past attempt  :thumbsup

i'm burned  :mon mad:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
« Reply #155 on: November 04, 2012, 11:00:01 AM »
                      ~Don't judge by the covers~
                                         14

sorry for being MIA just life got in the way! 

~A couple fighting in the hall~

"Because i know you been acting weird since we got here! there's something you're not telling me?" JunJun asks  

c'mon don't make a scene in the hall! Reina says looking at everyone that was staring at them 

you know what i'm going home! JunJun says as she turns around 

Reina was about to stop JunJun but someone grabbed her hand 

"Honey!" Reina's mom says happy

"mom! dad!" Reina says pretending to be excited

"Come here baby!" Her mom says as she hugs her 

"shit.. JunJun" She thought as she hugs her mom 

"Reina we have a big surprise for you!" Her dad says smiling 

"no, i hate surprises..I want JunJun!"  Reina thought

~Meanwhile~ 

Sayumi was staring at her girlfriend sleeping on bed "Kamei Eri is so hot!" she thought as she slowly removes the blanket that was covering her naked body 

Sayumi smirked till someone knocked her door and interrupt her 

Sayu covered again Eri's body with the blanket again and opened the door,she was sbout to yell the person that interupt her "sexy Eri time" but then when she saw the food she remembered that she ordered it 

Sayumi enters the food gives the guy his tip and closes the door 

Eri woke up cause the noise of the door 

Sayumi smirks "Good morning sexy Eri!" she says as she jumps on bed and hugs the shy girl 

Eri smiles and hugs the bunny back "Good morning cute bunny!" she says squeezing Sayu's butt  then gets up 

Sayu pouts "you turn me on and then off!" she says as she sits on bed

Eri smiles

~Meanwhile~

Ai and Risa were walking on the beach holding hands 

(Note: there wasn't many people in the beach)

From the distance for them...

They looked like boyfriend and girlfriend because Ai was wearing a not slips red shirt and some pants to her knee while Risa was  wearing a white dress 

"So you don't like me.." Aichan says 

Risa looked other way 

"then shouldn't be holding your hand and i should go back to Miki.." Aichan says as she let go Risa's hand and turns around 

"hey!" Risa says and grabs her by her shirt from behind 

"then say at least you like me.." Ai says pouting 

Risa sighed "Fine..*sigh again* i.. like.. you" she says in a low tone 

"i didn't hear you.." Aichan says teasing and tries to walk 

"i said it take it or leave it!" Risa says and let go Aichan's shirt causing her to slip with her face on the sand

"Aichan!" Risa says worried and grabs the girl 

"My face hurts.. why you let me go?" Aichan with her face with sand while she sits on the sand

Risa wanted to laugh but instead she was cleaning Aichan's face 

"Now kiss mee!!" Aichan says and pulls Risa for a kiss 

"stop Aichan!" Risa says laughing 

"i'm the sand kisser monster!" Aichan says playfully trying to kiss Risa 

Risa laughs even more "you're so silly Aichan!"  

Aichan kissed Risa on her lips

Risa broke the kiss "you taste like sand!" she says smiling 

~Meanwhile~ -Lunch time-

Riho waited for her girlfriend at the terrace but she didn't came during the whole lunch time 

She wondered why as she walks to her classroom but then a familiar voice called her attention 

"Don't worry i would tell my mom you're coming!"Ayumi says with a smile

"okay see you later!" The cute boy say with a smile then walked away 

*Ayumi sighed*

"who was that?why he's going to your home?" Riho asked kinda jealous.. okay jealous 

Ayumi turned around "Riho chan,he was Haruka kun and wants me to teach him maths!" she says as she takes Riho's hand who was pouting 

"You can come too, i know your maths aren't good too and that's great because i don't want to be alone with him and rather teach you than him! Ayumi says with smile 

fine i'll go to your home after school but i'm still mad because you didn't eat with me! Riho says as she walks to their classroom 

Ayumo sighed and followed her girlfriend 

~After school~

Ayumi got free first from her student council things so she waited for Riho who was on her cheerleader practice

Ayumi couldn't herlp to admire her girlfriend dancing skills "Her dancing is clean.. i guess i'm fan now" she thought

After a few minutes the practice was over,everyone went to shower 

Soon the two schoolers walked to Ayumi's home hand in hand 

(Once there)

Ayumi saw a note on the fridge..

*Went shopping!! your food is in the fridge love u mom!* 

Ayumi devided her food with Riho then both sitted on the couch while watching tv,She was feeding Riho till the knock on the door distracted them

Ayumi got up and  opened the door 

"hello there Ayumi chan!" Haruka says giving her chocolates 

Riho got up trying to not make obvious that she was pissed off 

"Oh Riho chan!" Haruka says with a smile 

Riho faked a smile while Ayumi invited him in 

"i didn't know you guys were friends.." Haruka says with a smile 

"well, we don't!" Ayumi answers fast

"she's teaching me mad because i asked her.." Riho says with a smile 

"oh so you also asked her.." Haruka says trying to not sound dissapoint he wanted to study with Ayumi only 

Ayumi took her books and by seeing the look on Riho and Haruka eyes she knew it would be a long afternoon

~Meanwhile At Tokyo~

At the coffee were Kamei Eri always drink..

JunJun sitted alone in a table and drinks her coffee sad "you haven't even call.. stupid cat!" she says as she looks a picture of her and Rena in halloween kissing 

"JunJun!" Someone says 

JunJun stopped looking at her phone "LinLin" she murmured looking at the chinesse girl 

TO BE CONTINUED!! 

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
« Reply #156 on: November 04, 2012, 11:26:34 AM »
okay ! Junjun ! you know .. make your cat get jealous !! oh feels so excited to read the next chapter ! and cmze we missed you ! haha.

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
« Reply #157 on: November 04, 2012, 01:51:20 PM »
first of all, cmze... not only you MIA... I also have joined in this action :gmon ringu: :nervous

back about the fic:  :P2
how come i sense the possibility of JunLin  :huhuh ... anyway, Jun... you should know your girl after all these years together... :pimp:
for kameshige...  :lol: i really didn't know that sayu's button is secured on her buttock  XD
for aigaki,  :lol: still the continuation the bf and gf thing   :thumbsup ... and yuckz~ about the sand kiss... but i believe that kiss is flavoured with the some sweet flavouring for the bean so the taste would not be that bad after all?! :roll:

ok, i will go back down into my "submarine"now...  :byebye::mon dive: :on freeze: :hee: :pen_read:

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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
« Reply #158 on: November 04, 2012, 06:13:09 PM »
Interesting chapter with Reina and Jun
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Re: ~Don't judge by the covers~ CH.14
« Reply #159 on: November 05, 2012, 02:42:32 AM »
first of all, cmze... not only you MIA... I also have joined in this action :gmon ringu: :nervous

back about the fic:  :P2
how come i sense the possibility of JunLin  :huhuh ... anyway, Jun... you should know your girl after all these years together... :pimp:
for kameshige...  :lol: i really didn't know that sayu's button is secured on her buttock  XD
for aigaki,  :lol: still the continuation the bf and gf thing   :thumbsup ... and yuckz~ about the sand kiss... but i believe that kiss is flavoured with the some sweet flavouring for the bean so the taste would not be that bad after all?! :roll:

ok, i will go back down into my "submarine"now...  :byebye::mon dive: :on freeze: :hee: :pen_read:
i accidentally left out my comment for the the little ones previously :P
here it is:
i really like the part on ayuyu feeding riho... and the little war between riho and haruka in fighting for ayuyu... :lol: it's kinda fun XD
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