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Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« on: November 15, 2012, 07:09:56 AM »
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A girl from 100 years ago, who accidentally got sucked into the mysterious  black hole appearing in the middle of the sky when she was leisurely fishing in a lake in the wood and time travel to a modern world, where she ended herself in the body of a girl who resemble her and was in coma.

During the time in coma, she met the soul of the owner of the body. They exchanged their story with each other and this girl was deeply touched over the great fatherly love of Professor Takahashi for his unconscious daughter and decided to took over the body and lives the life as the girl.

In the process of adapting her new life, she met her "old" friends and found her love…

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Pairing(s):
TakaGaki, GakiKame, KameShige, TanaShige, JunRei
(a little) AiEri, TanaGaki

(may have amendments...)
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Chapter list
Chapter1

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« Last Edit: December 03, 2012, 04:06:45 AM by weird »

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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2012, 09:40:26 AM »
COOL!! COOL!!  :inlove:

i wanna read this.. SOO BADDD!!  :bow:

Omg this is so good!  :w00t:

Pleaseee update soon!  :banghead:

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Are u trying to kill me? what do u mean with a little AiEri and TanaGaki  * i can't think of them as a pairing but i'll wait to yoh update to see how it goes!! ;)


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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2012, 09:43:25 AM »
Interesting aspect for a fic
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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2012, 09:53:22 AM »
@cmze
i'm very sad to tell you i still have no idea how could i start it with... but i promise i will update very soon after my exam next week.  :thumbup
i will really give a deep thought for it on how could i better begin it with...  :thumbsup be patient and wait for the update  :peace:

some more, i have to prepare your appearance for the MEH... and i still remember i own you girls (and guy) 2 ahem shots on TakaGaki... so gonna busy after exam for a few days to write those out...

just be patient and wait for my update   :thumbup

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there is part of the plots... i can't reveal or else, no more fun... anyway, i can tell you it will end up as TakaGaki, KameShige and JunRei.

@kuro:
really... haha... maybe i have gotten too crazy over some love story on timetravellers  until now i wish to write one XD
« Last Edit: November 15, 2012, 10:04:05 AM by yellow »

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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2012, 10:06:40 AM »
Totally!  :thumbsup

don't worry i'll be patient!!  :grin:

There's no need to put me in!!  :nervous

~Anyway good luck with urs exams!! :twothumbs~

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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #5 on: November 15, 2012, 10:11:28 AM »
i wrote about time traveling once XD  that was tough because I knew what was going to happen but to get there was hard
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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #6 on: November 15, 2012, 10:24:06 AM »
@cmze:
thanks  :D
but i have it ready plotted... don't waste my effort please  :thumbsup or i will "kill" you further with AiEri and TanaGaki here  :twisted: (just kidding only)

@kuro:
yup... this i have to agree with you... so that's why i do not know how to begin the story now  :catglare: but i will try to think a way out to start the story  :yep:
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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #7 on: November 15, 2012, 10:32:49 AM »
my best advice is to build around the past and then suck her into the future
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Re: Love of Time - Peek Into [14-Nov-2012]
« Reply #8 on: November 15, 2012, 10:36:52 AM »
actually a bit complicated when to think about it... but thanks for the recommendation  :thumbup

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Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« Reply #9 on: December 01, 2012, 10:05:24 AM »

i think i have taken so long to get this chapter up for your reading :nervous

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Chapter1

One fine afternoon, there is a man sitting by himself on the grassy ground near the lake, throwing stones into the lake to vent his unhappiness. Soon his companion joined him on grassy ground and elbowed him when he came settled down beside him.

“Gaki, our groom-to-be, tomorrow is your big day. Why are you seemed so unhappy? Come on, cheer up.”

“Ah, Kame. I am just worry.”

“Worry?! Worry about your bride will run away tomorrow? Hahaha~ Gaki, you are so funny.” Eric teased at his best pal, Riku being a worrywart.

“How I wish she could just ran away tomorrow.” Riku thought to himself.

“Hey stupid turtle, stop cursing me. I have something on. Bye” Riku got up from where he was and walked away, leaving his buddy by the lake.

“Hai~ How I wish you are not married too? How possibly could I bear to see you to marry another person.” Eric came laid back down on the grassy ground with his head supported by his arms and sighed as he watched over the blue sky for a while and napped.

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At the eastside of the lake was Eric’s fiancée, Ai, the elder daughter of the Takashige, was fishing to beat her free time since her little sister, Sayumi was dragged by the bride-to-be, their cousin, Reina  to be her company and her fiancé, Eric was nowhere to be found.

Then suddenly the sky started turning dark and there is a formation of eclipse. When the eclipse was formed, there is a whirlpool in black hole and started to become bigger and bigger and started to suck whatever in front of it. Hence fore, Ai who is in front of that mysterious black hole, no able to hold herself back in the situation, got helplessly sucked into it and soon after, the black hole grew smaller and smaller and disappear into the sky.

All this happened, just in a split second.

to be continued...
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sorry that it is short... as I really don't know how i can better start it  :nervous
and i promise i will definitely try harder to make it more lengthy next time  :sweatdrop:
anyway, hope you guys like it. :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: December 03, 2012, 04:07:08 AM by weird »

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [01-Dec-2012]
« Reply #10 on: December 01, 2012, 10:10:14 AM »
interesting start :thumbsup
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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [01-Dec-2012]
« Reply #11 on: December 01, 2012, 10:15:25 AM »
really, i'm so touched that you stated so because i really have a hard time to better start it :nervous

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [01-Dec-2012]
« Reply #12 on: December 01, 2012, 04:28:38 PM »
 O0 :peace:   Verry nice first chapter, its hooked me alright XD u juss got urself and eager reader who wants to read more :thumbup keep up the good work :thumbsup

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [01-Dec-2012]
« Reply #13 on: December 01, 2012, 09:22:54 PM »
Interesting!  :thumbsup

what the hell? where the hell is Ai?  :shocked

i wanna know next!  :grin:

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [01-Dec-2012]
« Reply #14 on: December 02, 2012, 02:18:20 AM »
@darkacex99:
really :oops: thanks.
thanks for looking forward but i will only update at monthly basis. :nervous
and since you like it, i will keep you in my pm list and send you the alert when I update again  :thumbsup

@cmze:
make your guess  first XD
i will reveal the answer in a month time :twisted:

for this time being, please give me more drama in that fiction and/or an update in the other 2. :P
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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« Reply #15 on: December 23, 2012, 06:54:13 AM »
 hmm   :shocked: i remember my favorite anime~fushigi yuugi :)  :otomerika:

 when will you update again  :lol: please Kameshige !!!!! TakaGaki please !!!  :cool2: :on speedy: i can't live without kameshige :) haha btw this is an interesting story :) please update soon.

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« Reply #16 on: December 23, 2012, 07:25:14 AM »
I really want to read this fic, update!!  XD

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« Reply #17 on: December 23, 2012, 09:56:57 AM »
@maikea:
kameshige? maybe later part in the fiction... definitely not so soon... please be patient and wait  :twisted:

@Rachel431:
can i call you rachel?
thank for liking this fiction of mine.
i will alert you when i update again.  :)
hope what would to happen will not disappoint you.

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Re: Love Across Time - Chapter1 [1-Dec-2012]
« Reply #18 on: January 05, 2013, 03:13:30 PM »
Announcement:

I will be MIA until end of May due to my personal engagement in my busy schedules between work and school. I am quite tied up with my own time due to travelling from place to place everyday. For this time being, I will temporarily paused my updates on fictions.

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