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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #40 on: December 17, 2012, 01:03:59 PM »
 :on speedy: Splendid you caught my emotions here..
 :farofflook: Best sad OS I've red!

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #41 on: December 17, 2012, 06:54:50 PM »
the all history are really cute
but the last one is really sad

Takamina  :cry:

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #42 on: December 17, 2012, 07:06:21 PM »
It's sad but beautiful. I wanna cry T_T
The first one was awesome

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #43 on: December 17, 2012, 11:41:15 PM »
 :cry: :cry: :cry:

 :cry: :cry: :cry:

I cried a lot....

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #44 on: December 18, 2012, 07:47:18 AM »
 :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
i was drenched in tears~~~  :mon surr:
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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #45 on: December 18, 2012, 10:56:17 AM »
i was knew what will happen in your fic since the first time, but i cant help myself to not crying while read your fic :cry: :cry:
why you leave acchan like that takaminaa, whyyyyyyy :pleeease:

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #46 on: December 22, 2012, 12:23:12 PM »
Your story "What My Heart Wants to Say" makes me cry.... lots  :cry:

But it's very very good story.... very sad ending....

Thank you for the story...

Can't wait to see your other updates

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #47 on: December 22, 2012, 09:27:46 PM »
I cried  :k-sad:  so sad, I didn't want to finish reading it but I did.
I like kumi more because how you written her in ur story  :lol:

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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #48 on: December 23, 2012, 05:44:53 AM »
 :err: :err: 
I am so happy a while ago
But now  :cry:

Whenever im reading this kind of stories
I cant breath properly
Like hell i need to put much effort just to breath XD
LOL
Anyway thank you and thanks to your sisiter
Itss awesome
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Re: What My Heart Wants to Say (AtsuMina, KojiYuu)
« Reply #49 on: December 23, 2012, 10:06:36 AM »
i put the song ("What My Heart Wants to Say)" as my ringer tone. It just sad that Minami leaving Acchan behind.

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Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #50 on: May 12, 2013, 04:46:31 PM »
Well hello people!!! :cow: I'm back with another fic at last! Well actually it's not "me" who's back, it's actually my sister.. She's been writing this fic and I'm just helping her to post it, so basically I'm just a messenger. get it? 8)

This time it will be Atsumina because who doesn't love Atsumina really? and partly because they've been missed  :cry: enough with my rambling, so this fic tells pretty much a chronology of what had happened during Acchan's post-graduation period up until now (at least that's what my sister's imagined to have happened), because of that probably some past events at that time will be brought up as the story goes.. Yup yup, so she had her imagination going haywire and she ended conjuring up this fic  :nervous

Without further ado, enjoy the prologue!!!
A comment from you will be really well appreciated  :wub:




















Prologue






“The moment you walk out of the door, we’re over!” Her chest heaved up and down, out of breath, from all the yelling she’d been doing.

The other girl, the shorter one by figure, stopped on her track just as she turned the doorknob open. Takahashi Minami chuckled bitterly before turning around to face the brunette haired girl. She could see dried tears had made trails down the latter’s cheeks, and she couldn’t help but to spend a few seconds to study her girlfriend’s facial features. Her eyes finally made a stop on the taller girl’s eyes and locked her gaze with hers. Takamina could read everything from her girlfriend’s eyes, just like an open book. Her eyes were emitting anger, determination, and seriousness. Takamina let out a sigh before responding to what she had said.

“Look at what we have become. We’re not us anymore. It’s just you, and then there’s me” reasoned Takamina calmly. “face it, this is not working out.”

“And in case you haven’t realized it, I think we’re already over.” Added Takamina before stepping out of the door and slamming the door closed with a loud bang.

Maeda Atsuko was taken aback by the loud sound of her apartment door being closed. Anger rose within her.  Before she realized it, she had reached for the vase placed by the table near her and threw it against the entrance door.

“Minami I hate you! Just go! I don’t ever want to see your face again!” shouted Atsuko as the glass from the vase was shattered into pieces and scattered all over the floor.

Her lips parted, gasping for air to enter her lung.  She was startled by a sudden drop of water hit her hand.  She looked up to ceiling, trying to find the source only to apprehend that it was coming from her eyes. Realization struck her that she had been crying. She quickly wiped them away with her hands, wanting to rid of that sign of weakness, sign of regret.  After all the fights they’d been having the past few months, Atsuko thought that she’d had enough. Her girlfriend had changed, or so she thought. She’d become overly possessive, overly sensitive, and when they started yelling at each other eventually Minami would always bring up her selfishness to graduate from the group, putting the blame on her. If ending things with Minami was what she really wanted, she should be relieved that they finally broke up, right? Then why did her heart feel like it’d been pricked by hundreds of needles?

Atsuko covered her face with the palms of her hands and sobbed against them. She broke down and let herself drop onto the floor. She bawled her eyes out as she called for Minami’s name repeatedly.

“Minami please come back.”





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Dang, I didn't realize how short it was  :huhuh

Well, that's all I got for now... Get ready for Chapter 1 people!!!
Adios!!!

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #51 on: May 12, 2013, 04:55:14 PM »
deeds~~
your back with ATSUMINA fic!!
YATTA~~  :cow:
but but why a heart break..  :cry:
looking forward for more!! :on gay:

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #52 on: May 12, 2013, 04:58:31 PM »
I knew it drama  :cry:
but I like it :3
Superb author-san
Looking forward on your first chapter.

btw the poster is great  :thumbsup

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #53 on: May 12, 2013, 05:18:10 PM »
A heart breaking prologue...  :cry: :cry:

and I Like It!!!

Can't wait for zee First Chap.!

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #54 on: May 12, 2013, 05:28:15 PM »
Post-graduation fanfic is nice  :) And don't forget to tell your sister she make a good job  :twothumbs Now I'm excited for the next chapter  XD

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #55 on: May 12, 2013, 05:40:34 PM »
great job  :twothumbs
interesting prologue
please send your sister my thanks
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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #56 on: May 12, 2013, 08:09:23 PM »
Wah... another fic from you... Yeah...

I enjoyed the previous one...

Ah... Minami and Atsuko broke up after lots of fighting huh?

Minami seems to not care about their relationship anymore... She seems to be fed up over all the fighting...

Would Minami really not want to work on the relationship anymore?

Ah... Poor Atsuko... she seems to still want to be with Minami...

What's going to happen with Atsuko?

Who was at fault...? Minami or Atsuko or both?

What's going to happen with Atsumina?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the prologue

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #57 on: May 12, 2013, 09:51:29 PM »
wow it´s a very good prologue.
It´s a atsumina fic? or you will play with other couples ?

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #58 on: May 12, 2013, 10:17:26 PM »
I am looking forward to a new story! Can't wait for Chapter 1 :)

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Re: Stay - Prologue (05/12/13) (AtsuMina)
« Reply #59 on: May 13, 2013, 07:26:49 AM »
Interesting prologue. What's gonna happen to Atsumina?

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