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Offline TakaminaBG

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Too SHORT!  :mon cry:
TakaTomo upcoming?!?!   :mon star:
I get the feeling that the ones (I'm assuming it's more then one person) are Takamina's fans. But what will happen when Acchan finds out that Takamina is the "Kaichou" of Kami 7?
I'm looking forward to Danso! (Takamina's DANSO!!!)
Please update ASAP!!

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You're right  atsuki san i'm just too obsess about them  :nya:
Thx for your update :on asmo:
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Thanks for the update :D Loved chap 3 and loved chapter 4 as well :D Acchan and Miichans convo was entertaining lol. & lol at Minami continously trying to ask acchan about the marriage thing with miichan, she seemed very concerned about that haha :)

lastly, poor Atsuko in the end getting that note :( Can't wait to find out what happens next! Thanks again for the update and looking forward to your next chapter ^^

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I'm so worried with Acchan. I hope there's no something bad will happen. And.. Takamina is cool...

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Poor Acchan

I hope you do not get into a fight.

thanks for chapter is really good  :twothumbs

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@TakaminaBG I know...  :cry: i should've putted some more scene in that chapter, but i'll just put it in chapter 5  :cow: The revelation of Takamina being the kaichou and one of the kami 7 will come soon i wonder what will happen to our beloved pairing then  :twisted: And somewhat TakaTomo on the nexxxt chapter.
@Tiptip thanks for reading the fic  :deco: obsessed ?  :nervous
@arrow27 No Problem !  :lol: Chapter 3 and 4 is like for the opening of MariMii's somewhat relation somewhat ship  XD And yeah.. TKMN asking about the marriage haha ! she seemed to be bothered by it LOL  XD the start of TKMN's curiosity over AtsuMi's friendship. The note... we'll get to that, yeah.. i was trying to find the right words but i think not being welcome in something is the worst  :sweat:
@chemicalstar Something will happen  :twisted: Yup, TKMN sure is cool  :deco: :deco: :deco:
@stepk Yeah poor her, but if ever something happens, like a fight, i'm sure she'll get over it  :peace: with the help of tkmn of coursee

Sorry for the short chapter everyone  :cry: And chapter 5 is coming soon  :nervous and the danso is still... next next chapter  XD
Once again, i'm always open for suggestions, comments and criticisms forgot to write this in the chapter 4 update orz

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U're welcome ... Yes  :on gay:

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 I smell  war coming up. And I agree Takamina isn't exclusive to a girl :inlove:, she's everyone's unless that girl is Acchan XD

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I knew that!! Takamina fans club are crazy!!... jejej micchan what kind of questions are that about the lover thing... jejej

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Poor acchan.....
Why takamina is so oblvious about what happen with acchan?
I mean she's a kaichou, even yuko notice something

This chapter kinda short but stil nice
Especially when takamina can't accept the marriage thing  :wub:

Thanx for the update ^^

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Could u please make acchan one of those girls doing danso?

Offline FlameHazeKatsu

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Awwww man I kinda have a bad feeling about next chapter... Seems like something BIG will happen  :frustrated:
Anyways waiting for next chapter and arigatou goizamasu for ur hard work :mon thumb:

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eeehh??? Where's TakaTomo??? I want to know what relationship they kinda have. hehehehhehe. I dont know why, i but I wonder the who sent that message to Acchan is Tomochin. huehehehe. Oh i fall in love with this fic, Please Update soon!!!  :twothumbs

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Miichan gave something important to Mariko? l wanna what is it!!!! Lol
I can sense jealous Takamina hehe

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Takamina is the Kaichou so she's one of the Kami7.

Atsuko is being bully because she's too close to Takamina.

I like the way Mari and Miichan arguing with one another... but what happened that made them fall out.

Well it's very good fic here... fresh atmosphere... Thank you

Can't wait to see your update

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Danso Cafe~!!! I imagine top Takamina,Sasshi,Mariko & Sae to easily lure Girls hearts in their hands!  :thumbup keep it up~!!

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@Tanchan War ? Hmm  :whistle: Yup, Takamina is for us too ~ hehe
@Haruka Thanks for reading my fanfic ~ Takamina is so dense isn't she ?  :heart:
@takamae Jealous captain is jealous  XD thanks for reading my fic  :deco:
@khryz0421 I'll think about it  :hee:
@FlameHazeKatsu Something big will surely happen  :peace: Wait for ittt ~  :deco:
@Amachan48 :prayers: TakaTomo  somewhat in this chapter  :cow:
@Kahem Yup, We'll know about it on the next chapters  :yep:
@chisda83 thanks for the comment  :deco:  I really wanted it to have a fresh atmosphere and hmm, i guess i did it  :nya:
@mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 your username is so long lolololol  XD Thanks for reading my fic  :deco: They sure will , those damn ikemens.



Chapter 5

PART1

"Is there something wrong?" Takamina asked, pulling her chair into the front of Acchan's table, facing the girl who has the word 'gloom' written all over her face. Acchan didn't say a word and just faced the table, avoiding the gaze of the midget.

"Exams?" Takamina asked again, Acchan didn't look grade conscious though.

"School festival?" Takamina guessed, still confused with what's going on. Acchan is still silent, now looking at the nearest window.

"you know if it's about the marriage thing, you two can just divorce." Takamina suggested. She thought that this might be the reason of the gloom in Acchan's face. Well, the truth is, Takamina is the one being bothered by it, with no reason at all. It's just that.. Acchan is so young to get married! Especially with Miichan. With Mariko and stuff, Acchan may be involved in the two's fight right ?

"Not really," Acchan finally said, now currently looking at the midget in front of her.

"Then?" Takamina asked.

"Nothing," Acchan replied, not wanting to open up about the letter she received yesterday. She didn't want to bother Takamina, this midget have already did many things for her, and Miichan got a problem on her own - with the Mariko thing, so she should just keep things to herself. 

"Don’t ‘nothing’ me Acchan," Takamina said fixing her gaze to Acchan.

"O-okay then.." Acchan started, "You know about the bad lucks i'm having..."

"They keep on coming. and maybe you should keep distance for a while. i don't want to transfer them to you." She lied.  It's half true though, Takamina may be the next target of bullying if she kept on being with her. Now that it's clear that A LOT of students here doesn't like Acchan. But Why ?

"heh, i don't believe in bad lucks, it's just coincidence so don't worry about it." Takamina reassured Acchan. "Besides, we're friends right? Let me help you in stopping the nonexistent bad lucks."

Acchan looked at the midget's eye. She hates this. Takamina's reassurances and words feel so real. It felt that she can say anything to Takamina and Takamina for sure will find a way. She hesitated for a moment, but no. She won't say that the bad lucks is not bad luck anymore, it's bullying.

"Right! I know a fortune teller," Takamina exclaimed. "We can go to her this weekend."

"Huh? Fortune teller?" Acchan asked, confused. "I thought you didn't believe in bad lucks."

"of course i don't. but i believe in fortune tellers." Takamina explained.

"We will just be wasting our time there, you know. And i still have to make the fliers for the school festival."

"How about i treat you katsudon after ? And i can help you with the fliers." Takamina suggested. With the days that have passed, Takamina knew Acchan's weakness. Food.

"R-really?”

"Of course,"

Acchan smiled, closing their deal. They'll go to a fortune teller later and eat food. However, Takamina knows that there's more with Acchan's gloomness. The fortune teller is just an excuse to know more about the 'bad lucks' the girl is talking about. Surely, bad lucks can't exist in this school. Bad lucks are made by people. And, she misses Acchan. Lately, the girl is hanging out with the other Minami more.

“ATSUKOOOOOO !” A loud familiar voice was heard.  Miichan came rushing into Atsuko’s table having a melonpan in her hands.

Takamina’s eyebrows met each other, Atsuko ? So, this Miichan who just met Acchan is already calling Acchan by her first name?

“Good morning,” Acchan said, greeting the gachapin.

“Good morning, here, have some melon bread ~ Ah, Ohayou Takamina.” Miichan greeted, feeling a bit awkward with the midget girl.

“thanks.” Acchan said as she started munching the bread, she looked at Takamina who’s also looking at her, and made a gesture of sharing in which Takamina happily agreed. Takamina was about to eat when Miichan intervened.

“I almost forgot, Takamina, some of your underlings are waiting for you at the school grounds.”

“huh?” Acchan asked, confused.

“You know, the watarirouka.”

With that said, Takamina bided goodbye to Acchan and went to her ‘underlings’ waiting for her.

ヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノ

“Where’re you going?” Tomomi Itano asked upon seeing Takamina rushing to nowhere, Tomochin is heading to the midget’s classroom when she saw the midget running to the opposite direction. Takamina stopped running and turned to pretty girl.

“Ohayou Tomochin,” Takamina greeted, “Some people said they miss me.”

Tomochin raised an eyebrow; the ‘some people’ who misses her may not be ‘some’

“ahhh ~ come with me.” Takamina said as she grabbed Tomochin’s hands and continued running.

After running non-stop they finally reached Takamina’s beloved school grounds, and as she expected five kouhais are cleaning the grounds with a happy look in their faces.

“Takamina-senpai ! Itano-senpai ! ohayou gozaimasu,” They greeted in unison,

“Ohayou minna,” Takamina smiled getting two broomstick, giving the other one to Tomochin. Tomochin just gave an awkward smile,

“Takamina and her cleaning fetish.” She mumbled.

“Ahh, It’s so nice to clean the grounds with you again ~” Takamina said making the five jump for happiness.

“It’s rare to see Itano-senpai clean the grounds too,” The girl called Wasamin replied.

“I didn’t volunteer for this, some midget grabbed my hand.” Tomochin defended,

“You could’ve said no! It’s just that you couldn’t resist me,” Takamina teased making Tomochin look the other way.

“Takamina-senpai, stop bullying Itano-senpai look she’s red.” Rabutan said pointing at Tomochin.

“Hey I’m not ! The school grounds need more cleaning. Seriously, students this days needs more discipline with their trashes. Ne, Tomochin ?” Takamina looked at Tomochin, unsurprised that the fashion queen is not cleaning anymore and instead sitting at the nearest bench looking at them. Tomochin is not the girl for cleaning anyway, but at least she helped for a short period of time that is.

 “By the way, Minegeshi said you’re looking for me.” Takamina added, surely her kouhais must have something very important to say.

The six looked at each other unable to say a word. Tomochin, who’s currently sitting on the bench looking at them, looked amused.

“Eto..” Rabutan started. “Ayarin said she—“


“Oy oy oy !” Ayarin said, cutting Rabutan off. “I-isn’t it Komori ?”

“Eh ? Me ?!” Komorin said, in state of shock.

“Don’t tell me it’s me.” Wasamin said.

“T-That..” Naachan said unable to complete her sentence.

Takamina looked at her arguing kouhais with a confused face, She looked at Tomochin who’s currently smirking.

“I think they just want to spend time with you.” Tomochin finally said, chuckling at the sight of the five arguing.

 The five lowered their heads and turned to Takamina. “Itano-senpai is right.”

“You’re so busy these past few days…”

“And we kind of miss you.”

Takamina’s face turned red, really, her kouhais can’t get more adorable than this. And yeah, She’s been busy, being the student president and all, the school festival is hosted and managed by the student council after all. It’s a miracle that she can still find time to be with Acchan. Eh- Wait ! Acchan ? She can find time to spend with Acchan. But Why not with Watarirouka ? or the Kami 7 – though she still spends time with them due to student council, with Yuko and other hanging outs.

“G-gomenasai.” Takamina apologized, bowing her head. ”I have been so busy with the student council and all.”

“We understand Senpai, Even if it’s just one times a week, or once every two weeks to see you, it’s okay.” Komori said, as they all hugged their beloved midget senpai.

“You guys.” Takamina chuckled, “If you want we can go out together and eat katsudon this coming weekend.”

“HONTOU?” they said together, jumping off their feets.

“Yeah, I’ll go with Acchan later and I think you guys can go to.”

“hai !” The five said, not minding the other person that will go with them. As long as their beloved Kaichou-Senpai is there, then they’ll go. On the other hand, Tomochin flinched from her seat upon hearing the transferee’s nickname.

“Tomochin can go to.” Takamina said happily, in which Tomochin declined.

“sorry, I don’t like people.” Tomochin is the kind who doesn’t like people. It’s a wonder that she’s friends with Kami7. She doesn’t open up unless you’re sincere and mingling that is. 

Takamina’s face became down with Tomochin’s answer, maybe she’ll just spend time with the kami7 on lunch time.

After their talking, the bell rang signaling that class will soon start, they bid goodbye to each other. Watarirouka went to their room while Takamina and Tomochin went back together. Upon reaching the hallway that separates their classroom, Tomochin grabbed Takamina’s hands, stopping the girl.

“If you’re not busy, join us on lunch.”

ヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノヽ(∀゜ )人( ゜∀)ノ

“I think Tomochin should stop being a tsundere.” Takamina suggested while eating a katsudon. Since Tomochin somewhat requested for her appearance in Kami 7’s lunch, she hurried to their usual spot at the cafeteria and found six girls smiling at her, with a bit of surprise in their face. Now they’re discussing non-sense things again. Why the hell are they named kami 7 again?

“I’m not,” Tomochin said casually, hiding happiness in her voice. She’s glad that Takamina actually went to eat with them since the midget is ‘busy’ with the transferee and the student council.

“Really?” Mariko smirked, “I wonder who keeps on whining about Taka----“

Before Mariko can finish her sentence, Tomochin putted a bread in her mouth making the tall girl stop talking.

“Hey that’s rude!” Mariko said while munching the bread, the other girls just chuckled at the sight.

“Yeah right.” Tomochin said.

“HENTAI!” Haruna suddenly yelled making the girls focus their eyes on Haruna who’s currently being harassed by a perverted squirrel.

“It’s not NyanNyan ! It’s Skinship. S-K-I-N-S-H-I-P.” Yuko defended.

“s-stop touching me you pervert.” Haruna said, pushing Yuko away. Apparently, the squirrel girl keeps on touching and making weird grins to her making her shiver. Ever since Yuko met Haruna, the squirrel kept on touching the other girl, but things have changed recently, the skinships the squirrel makes have increased, making the defenses of Haruna increase too.

“Stop PDA-ing. We’re eating.” Yukirin said plainly. Mayuyu who’s on her side nodded in agreement.
 
“You’re just jealous, you can’t do this with Oshiri-chan. You’ll go to jail.” Yuko teased.

Yukirin sighed, accepting defeat. It’s not that she’s jealous, she doesn’t have an intention to do what Yuko’s doing too. Yuck. It’s just that, It’s Yuko. Her reasoning will never win.

“Yukirin, maybe you can after you graduate. At that time, I’ll be a senior and legal.” Mayu winked jokingly. Yukirin is her bestfriend after all.

“Yeah right,” Yukirin answered.

“Couples, couples everywhere.” Mariko said trolling.

“You know I got tickets this weekend and –“ Kojima said but was cutted by Yuko’s cellphone.

One two three foo ~ I want you, I need you ~

Yuko stood up and went to an isolated place to answer the call, It was a girl from a school near Akihabara Gakuen. Watanabe Miyuki. She’s inviting Yuko to go fishing with her this coming weekend. Since Yuko have no plans and all, Yuko agreed. 

After answering the call, Yuko went back to kami 7’s table, each girl giving her the look of curiosity.

“Hey what’s with that look?” Yuko asked,

“Nothing, just curious. New girl eh ?” Mariko answered, looking at Haruna first before eyeing Yuko.

“Yup, but she’s not new, It’s Milky-chan.” Yuko replied, “Ah, did I miss something important?”

 “Haruna’s asking if we want to go to the cinema this weekend.” Tomochin said, feeling a bit of sympathy to Haruna. Yuko is forever a dumb perverted squirrel who loves chasing after girls who chases her too, Tomochin thinks that Haruna’s heart may just get broken if Yuko will continue her playgirl-ness. Even though Haruna doesn’t admit it, there’s this 5% chance that Haruna likes Yuko, more than as a friend.

“EHHH?!” Yuko said, shocked. “I already said yes to Milky-chan this coming weekend.”

“How about I just bring Milky-chan with me ?”

All the girls out there except for Haruna mentally face palmed.

“Speaking of which, I can’t go. Sorry,” Takamina apologized, “I have plans.”

“As usual.” Tomochin mumbled,

“Hey, It’s just that I have already promised Acchan-“

“The transferee?” Mayu asked.

“Yeah,” Takamina answered, “She’s feeling down lately.”

“Geez, kaichou being so protective like a mom.” Mayu said teasing the midget girl.

“And Yuko and I have some things to prepare for the school festival, schedule is hectic.” Takamina defended,

“Speaking of School Festival. What’re your plans ?” Mariko asked.

“Nothing really. Gonna give off prizes to the winners like usual. But it’s quite different this year, the prize are ‘wishes’,  and the student council will be the genies.”



Been slacking off lately  XD The school Festival is coming soon ~ maybe after Part 2 but everything is tentative. So yeah. And i decided to cut Chapter 5 into two, since it's all about break ups and what not before the school festival  :twisted: Btw, i'm quite busy this week, exams are coming soon orz, i'll try to update part 2 after our examinations ~

And, i've been wondering... Is my writing style okay ? And grammar too ? because i don't re-read and recheck my posts lazy ass.

I'm Forever oepn for suggestions, comments and criticisms  :cow:

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THANKS FOR THE UPDATE!!! Loved this chapter :D Lol at Takamina taking the marraige thing seriously & lol at Tomochin being a Tsundere. Also, Takamina's kouhais are so cute to be wanting to spend time with her :)
& Yuko's actions def deserved mental face palming from all members lol.
Also, hopefully Atsuko will open up about her problem to someone! Thanks again, as always I look forward to the next chapter of this awesome fic.
Oh, & I love your writing style, its well organized and easy to follow :)

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FIANLLY!! You updated!!
I was waiting for this update (more for the TakaTomo moments). :D
But..... That's not enough!! Not enough skinship between Takamina and Tomochin.
All I want is a kiss (maybe) and some touching here and there *perv mode ON*
Update SOON!! And good luck for the exams. :)

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Thank you for the update...

I feel bad for Atsuko to be bully but don't understand why...

And also Tomochin for feeling one side love all this time

About Haruna feeling is still unclear...

Well can't wait to see the next

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