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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #220 on: July 05, 2013, 08:23:51 AM »
YES! I want to see Takamina maly side :ding:
Acchan, you're in love with  Takamina :luvluv2:
Takamina just like a spoiled kid and Acchan is her mother :wahaha:
Now, Yuki and the others people know that Mayu's missing :stuffed:
OMG~~~ Mayu's in danger :on polter:
Beat Sae and save Mayu, YUKI!! :onioncheer:
Can't wait to see the action scene :nya:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #221 on: July 05, 2013, 08:57:55 AM »
I want to see Yuki in action..

Next time it's Yuki vs Sae, right ??

Update soon, pleasee... :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #222 on: July 05, 2013, 01:44:19 PM »
me me, i wanna see takamina manly side XD

next will be black vs sae, eh?
looking forward for next chap  :twothumbs

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #223 on: July 05, 2013, 03:27:58 PM »
I like the Astumina moment!!! so sweet  :wub: :wub:

OMG OMG!!! Cant wait for the next chapter for Mayuki  :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

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want to see Takamina's manly side ehhhh....

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #224 on: July 06, 2013, 05:06:46 PM »
Takamina manly side! YÒSH!!!

And mayuki moment!

The moment they develope their love


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Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #225 on: July 07, 2013, 08:36:17 AM »
hai hai hai i need the part 2 jezzz it's really frustrating now...mayuuuuuuu~


takamina manly side??? how come!!! LOL
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #226 on: July 07, 2013, 08:42:13 AM »
MI AMORE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #227 on: July 08, 2013, 01:29:44 AM »
Mayu!!!  :panic:
Yuki save Mayu  XD

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 1 update 05/07/2013
« Reply #228 on: July 19, 2013, 07:19:59 AM »
Chapter 20 part 2

Black's eyes widen when she saw the picture of unconscious Mayu being tied on a chair.
Then she got another message from the number.

'Come to this old building inside the big forest not far from the town if you want to save this cute little girl.
 P/s: you know the consequences if you call the police.'


After that, Black immediately went to the location stated.
Black run all the way to the big forest.
Long after, she saw a small road with a big trees surrounding on both side of the road.

'I never knew that there's a road in this forest.' Thought Black as she looks around.

Since it was night, and dark, full moon, creepy atmosphere can be felt as the sound of the crickets and also the blowing wind from the forest.  :on shady: [Am I making a ghost/horror story right now? Lol~ let's continue ~  :sweat: ]

She started searching for the old building.
On the right side of the small road, she saw a big white abandoned building from afar.
 It was located not far from the road.  It seems like there's a light from inside the building.

She quickly runs towards the building.
It looks like there were two big men outside the building. Maybe they were ordered to guard the outside.

Black calmly walks towards them.
When they saw black, one of them went inside the building.
He then come out and told Black to go inside.
So Black walk inside the room but still being careful as she walks and
looks around afraid that there is a trap made by them.
Once Black is inside the house, the front door closed and the black-coat man comes towards her.

"We need to check on you first." He said. They want to make sure that Black doesn’t bring any weapon.
"I'm harmless." Black says while putting her arms up to show them that she did not bring weapon.
"Really?" A voice could be heard from upstairs as the figure coming out from the room showing herself.
Black looks at Sae who have a grin on her face.
"I don’t think you are harmless, Black. Why would one of the top mafia like you is harmless?" Said Sae making Black slightly surprise that she knows about her true identity.
"Well, don’t be surprise that I know about you. Even Mayuyu doesn’t know about it am I right?" Said her smirked.
"Where is she?" Asked Black still calm.
"She's here. Follow me... and! Dont dare to do anything stupid." Warned Sae to her as she led Black to a room.
Inside the room, there is Mayu on the chair with both her hands and legs tied. Her head was looking down.
10 black-coat men were surrounding her so that Black could not do anything to save her.

Black rush towards Mayu and bend down to check if she is okay.

Suddenly Mayu's head look up a little enough to look at Black's concerned eyes.

"I....heard....it." Mayu said in low voice.

"You...heard what?" Asked Black curious.

"You...a mafia." Answered Mayu weakly.

Black was speechless.
There is nothing to say about the statement. It was true after all.

"Are you two done having a chit chat?" Sae walks around them.
Black stands up and looks at her.
"What do you want me to do?" Black asked. For now Mayu’s safety is more important than her identity.
"Hmmmm...I want you...to have a date with me!" Said Sae grinning then she earn a glare from Black.
"Wo~ wo~ easy there I’m just kidding okay~ you and Mayuyu really doesn’t like to take jokes huh..."

Then someone comes in.
He slowly walks towards them with a stick leg.
"I want...her father." Said him pointing at Mayu. Mayu look up surprised when she hears it.
"If you want her father then why you took her instead?" Black asked glaring at him.

"Tsk...When you go fishing, you need a bait to catch a fish. Get that? So...his beloved daughter is our bait." He explains.
“Why...you want...my father?” asked Mayuyu.
“Hmmm...Let’s just say, he’s my rival, and I need to get rid of him. Maybe you should ask your father instead...well, if you manage to see him before he...die.” He answered and then laughs loudly.

Mayuyu keep her face blank.

“Sae, your job is done here. Your payment will be sent to your account.” He added.
“Ummm...nah...I’m going to stay with them...just in case anything happen.” Said Sae as she smirked to the two girls.
“We will deal with them tomorrow, make sure they don’t try to escape.
Especially, that bodyguard.” He explains as he walks out o the room.

It’s already passed midnight.
And now the only left is Sae, Black and Mayuyu in the room.
Black also being tied on a chair beside Mayu while Sae was sitting in front of them watching at them.
It took a long time for them to tied Black, some got bruise on their face, and Black also got some beating from them.

It’s more like Black and Sae having a glaring contest.
The other bodyguard had been order by Sae to guard outside since both of them could not move.

“You know...it’s not my intention to do this to you, Mayuyu.” Said Sae breaking the silence.

Her statement making Mayuyu looking up at her.
“I’m just doing this for money~” she continued.

“Why are you telling this to us?” Asked Black.
Sae shrugged her shoulders. “Just because...I-“

“I’m hungry...” Said Mayuyu weakly as she lean her head on Black’s shoulder.
Black got startled by the action but she keeps herself calm.

“Hungry? I’ll get you some food!” Said Sae got up to the door and wink at them before she goes out.

“She’s really weird.” Mumbled Black.
“No, I think...She likes you.” Said Mayuyu in a low voice.
Black did not hear it.

Black was trying to take the rope off her hands but it was tied tightly.
Black sighed. “It’s useless.”

“Are you still mad?” Asked Mayuyu.
Black knows she’s asking about the wallet incident.
“Your father said to me...to be patient with you.” Black just looking at the floor.
“Regret...should...not...have...tricked...you...” Mayuyu was feeling regret and blame herself that they were in this situation right now.
“Don’t blame yourself. Soon or later they will get you for sure.” Black said.

“I know~ you are the one who’s at fault. You should not just leave me like that!” Said Mayuyu suddenly straighten up herself.

‘Is she a bipolar or something?’ thought Black.

Then Mayuyu lean her head back at Black’s shoulder.
“How...you become a mafia?” Asked Mayuyu to Black.

Black stays silent.

“Why?” Asked Mayuyu did not give up.
Still Black doesn’t answer her.

“You should use this time to escape shouldn’t you?” Asked Mayuyu.
“I can’t.” Answer Black finally.

“Then you want my father to die?”
Mayuyu’s statement making Black turn to look at her.

“No.”

“Then...” Mayuyu suddenly feeling something in her heart.
She feels like she wants to cry.
Black realized about Mayu’s sudden change. She looks pale.
“They will kill my father...” said Mayuyu as a drop of tear falling on her cheek. She remembers again what did the man before said to her.
“Mayu...” Black doesn’t know what to do to calm her.

“They will not have a chance to do that to your father. Trust me.” Said Black looking at her.
Mayuyu also looks at Black still with teary eyes.

“How?” Asked Mayu.

“Let’s just wait and see.” Said Black finally smile.

‘This is my first time seeing her smile like that.’ Said Mayu to herself.

Unconsciously, she herself smiles seeing Black smiling to her.

“Kashiwagi Yuki...” Mayu called her real name.
“Why are you so curious about my real name actually?” Asked Black curious.

“Just...because.” answered Mayuyu.

“Can I...call you...Yuki?”
Black was thinking for a while.

“In one condition, you can call me Yuki if I can call you Mayuyu.” Said Black to her.
Mayuyu smile again at her.

Somehow, seeing her smile warms Black’s heart.

Suddenly, they hear a laughing from the outside.
It’s not coming from the man for sure. It’s sound like a girl’s laugh. Creepy laugh that makes you Goosebumps.
Then they also heard a scream from the man.

“W-what was that?” whispered Mayuyu feeling scared.

“Finally...” Black sighed in relief. Mayuyu look at Black confused.

“It’s…Gekikara.”
 



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Hmmm...I don't have ideas actually so I just write what is on my mind since I felt like I need to update this.
Yuki vs. Sae? Hmmmmm...  :hehehe: I don't know..
Gomenasai~ for the late update..  :bow:
Hope you enjoy it...
Gekikara in action! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #229 on: July 19, 2013, 09:29:22 AM »
Finally...an update !!!

Thanks  :bow:

Gekikara to the rescue !!!  :grin:

Can't wait for the next chapter...  :grin:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #230 on: July 19, 2013, 12:49:27 PM »
Ah... Geki was following Black...

Would Geki be able to save Black and Mayu?

Would Black be able to prevent Mayu's dad from getting in danger?

What about Sae?

What's going to happen to the rest?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #231 on: July 19, 2013, 01:06:52 PM »
Gekikara~~!!!!! She makes me so happy for some reason...
Sae is weird....
Mayuyu thinks that Sae likes Black
Mayuki progresses...
Ah, the dad.... curious... though I don't really think that he'll get killed...

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #232 on: July 19, 2013, 11:11:27 PM »
OMG OMG OMG!!! Gekikara sama in action! YES!!  :twothumbs

Mayuki moment..sweet   :wub:

Mayu, you actually care about your dad  :)

okay...now waiting in progress for the fic   :banghead: :nervous
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #233 on: July 20, 2013, 02:00:32 AM »
Oh mayu is a goòd kid

How geki come?ithough black not contact any person

Yay mayu could called black by her real name,this two step to mayuki's

Mayu should take over her dad bussines
Thank for the update
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #234 on: July 20, 2013, 10:32:05 AM »
Wonder who's that man - the man who's Mayu's father rival :dunno:
Oho~ Thanks to him, Mayuki finally had some progress :farofflook:
Now, they call each other by their nickname or realname :on gay:
Yuki's a mafia :stoned:
And also Gekikara is going  to help them :shock:
How's she able to know where Yuki was? GPS? :wahaha:
Can't wait to see action scenes :on drink:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #235 on: July 20, 2013, 06:33:07 PM »
Geki to the rescue!  :thumbup :thumbup :thumbup
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #236 on: July 27, 2013, 03:17:49 AM »
GIVE ME LOVED GIVE US A KISSED

GIVE ME MAYUKI MORE

GIVE ME WMATSUI ON THIS FIC

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - chapter 20 part 2 update 19/07/2013
« Reply #237 on: August 17, 2013, 04:34:13 AM »
WHY???

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Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
« Reply #238 on: August 21, 2013, 09:56:05 AM »
HAI!  :D
Olive29, cisda83, Shinoki, qweakb, kurogumi, leEwẬy, DC2805, geki geki:
thanks for the comment.
and sorry for making you guys waiting for so looooong time....again.  :sweatdrop:
geki geki is right... i just realized that this fic lack of loves and kiss moment between the pairs...
sorry..hehe well...i realized that i'm slow in making the progress between their loves...
i tried...  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
do you still want me to continue? of course i need to! grrrr!!! :banghead: :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
blame this PROCRASTINATION~
again...Gekikara in action!!!! hahahahahaha!!!!
sorry for being playful author!  :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine REPLY!!! 21/08/13
« Reply #239 on: August 21, 2013, 05:45:30 PM »
Yeah... Please keep continue the story...

I like the story lots...

Thank you

Can't wait to see the next update

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