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Offline cisda83

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #320 on: October 12, 2013, 05:21:54 PM »
Yeah.. U bring out kojiyuu soon

Eh... Atsumina is back..

Though Minami still has problem to act on her feeling

What's going to happen?

Yeah Mayu and her father get back together

What kind of plan Kato is going to use Atsuko on?

Would Atsuko be able to trick Kato?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen with minami's revenge?

Thank you for the update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #321 on: October 12, 2013, 06:57:49 PM »
Kojiyuu!!!!! I'm summoning them!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #322 on: October 12, 2013, 07:27:09 PM »
finally!minami knows what happen..
i hope she will regain her (memories of acchan) soon :oops:
chiqin~~
update soon and thank u for the update :on gay:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #323 on: October 12, 2013, 08:18:13 PM »
It was sooo funny when Acchan said "Oh God" when she saw Minami, that was really hilarious, I can totally see her expression XD

I'm glad Minami doesn't dislike Atsuko as much anymore and that she even starts feeling more for Atsuko. The kiss was just sooo  :shy2: I love it

I hope you can update soon  :kneelbow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #324 on: October 12, 2013, 09:11:04 PM »
Kojiyuu!! I choose you!! appear in this fanfic! *pokemon music*

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #325 on: October 15, 2013, 04:20:41 PM »
mayu and yuki blessed!!!

 just wait their marriage LOL


wmatsui want more wmatsui

thank by the way


takamina look so cool...short hair LOL


RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #326 on: October 29, 2013, 12:51:33 PM »
i missed you chiqinna-an



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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #327 on: October 29, 2013, 02:00:34 PM »
hahaha...

acchan just do what takamina did to her before..

sweeeet...  :wub:

continue please..  :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #328 on: October 29, 2013, 02:16:11 PM »
Terragen-san, I know, I miss Chiqinna too...  :(

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #329 on: November 04, 2013, 04:53:26 PM »
continues

what does the Kato plan to do, I'm curious.

Atsumina forever :heart:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #330 on: November 04, 2013, 05:38:40 PM »
Im so curios what Kenzo plaining

Hope it not bad

Mayuki and Takacchan forever :inlove:

Please update the next ch i can't wait

It my third time reading this fanfic

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #331 on: November 09, 2013, 09:36:08 AM »
My sunshine where are you buddy?

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 28 12/10/13
« Reply #332 on: November 19, 2013, 10:48:18 AM »
I'm back!  XD
Sorry for the late~
Sunshine is here~~~  :lol:


Chapter 29 Part 1



Inside the no3b’s secret building
They held the second meeting to discuss about a plan to destroyed Kato. This time, several members of Rapappa join together in the meeting. They are Yuki, Rena, and Sasshi.

It’s been almost 15 minutes of talking when the door opened revealing a new recruited member of Rapappa.

“Sorry! I’m late!” Sae said panting as she leaning on the door.

All eyes turn to look at the new arriving figure.

Some have a questioning look on their face.

“Take your seat.” Mariko told her as Sae nodded then took a seat beside Acchan.

“This is my new member, Sae.” Mariko introducing her to them. The other members of Rapappa already knows her.

“Hi, Sae desu. Yoroshiku!” Sae greeted to them smiling.

“I still haven’t forgotten what you do…” Miichan who sitting beside Sasshi said narrowing her eyes at Sae.

“What did she do?” Acchan asked looking at the tomboy girl beside her. Acchan is the only
person who doesn’t know who Sae is.

Mariko was about to stop Miichan from saying anything but she’s a second late.

“She’s the one inside the smurf mascot that stopping you from chasing after Takamina.”
Miichan said smirking at Sae.

Sae suddenly felt a sudden killing aura coming from her side so she slowly moves
her chair a bit far from the person without looking at her.

“Okay, forget about the past. Since everyone is here, let’s think about our plan.”
Takamina said in serious tone as she stands at the front.

“Y-yeah…let’s forget the past things…hehe” Sae scratching the back of her head.

Sensing the glare from the girl beside her, Sae decided to change sit as she now sitting
beside Yuki as Rena at the other side.

After finished meeting, everyone left except Sae and Mariko as Mariko wants to have a talk with Sae for a while.

“So…how’s your friend?” Mariko asked her.

“Sayaka is getting better now. Thanks for your help Mariko-sama~ thank you so much for helping me…even though I’ve been burdening your group.” Sae sincerely said bowing to her leader.

“I already paid all your debts including for your friend’s medicine. As a payback, you must work with me.”

“I know. I will not betray you. I promised.” Sae said.

“Don’t mess with those loan sharks again after this.” Mariko last words before she walk out of the room.

Sae feels relieved that all her problem has been solved thanks to Mariko.
Sayaka is her friend that was sick. She got beaten by loan sharks for not paying their money.
That’s why Sae working hard to find money to pay them back and for Sayaka’s treatment.
She’s badly hurt.
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“Remember Minami, if ever we encounter with each other when I was with Kato’s members, fight me for real.”
Acchan tells her as she walks Minami home.

“It’s me who should say that to you…”Minami chuckled looking at her remembering that she would
avoid her punch when they fight last time.

“Hmm…but this time I will fight you seriously. Since I know you’re quite strong now~” Smirked Acchan.

“Let’s see…”

As they arrived at Minami’s place, Acchan bid a goodbye to her.

Minami turn around and was about to walk when she felt a tap on her shoulder.

She turned around only to meet a pair of lips on her again.

Unlike last time, this time it last for a few seconds.

Minami was too stunned to even react or maybe she likes it and her hearts beating faster.

Acchan slowly pull away from hers but their face still close to each other.

“Good night~” whispered Acchan looking deeply in her eyes with a blushing face.

Then she turned around and walks away.

Minami still looking at Acchan as she also can see the happy shy smile from the taller girl as she walks.

‘You sure know how to make my heart beating faster…’ said Minami in her mind smiling.

“Oho~ someone is in love~~” A voice said coming from behind.

Minami who was startled by the voice turned around and saw Miichan at the front door with a big grin on her face.

“Wait, h-how long have you been there?” Minami asked shocked.

“Exactly when you two…uhmm…making out~” Teased Miichan.

“We’re not making out!!” she shouted ignoring Miichan as she enters the house.

Her face started to glow bright red.

“Ohohohoho~~~ Takamina is in love!!!” shouted Miichan as she closed the front door.

“Shut up Miichan!” Takamina was totally red.

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The next day

After school~

Mayu was walking towards Yuki when Jurina suddenly hug her from behind.”Mayuyu!!!”

Mayu can see a jealousy from Yuki’s eyes. Yuki turns her eyes away from them.

“What?!”

“Hmmm…I-I think I need your help…” Jurina looks shy.

“You think?” Mayu asked with a blank face.

“Y-yea…since…you and Yuki now…” Jurina tries to hint something to her as she looks at Mayu then at Yuki.

‘Me and Yuki?’ thought Mayu as she also looking at Yuki who was waiting her at the school gate.

“Love?” Smirked Mayu at Jurina.

“Ermm…y-yeah…but I have problem…” Jurina pouted.

‘I wonder who it...that Jurina loves is.’

Mayu was waiting for Jurina to continue.

“It’s Rena…” mumbled Jurina.

Mayu turn her head to Jurina with a shocked expression.

“You’re crazy!!!” Mayu fasten her walk leaving Jurina behind.

“H-hey! Mayu! You must help me!” Jurina shouted frustrated.

“Come on Yuki” Mayu walk without looking back at Jurina as Yuki followed her.

“What’s wrong with Jurina?” Asked Yuki as she is now walking side by side with Mayu.

“She falls in love with her own sister~” Mayu frankly answered.

Yuki stopped walking. “Rena?”

“And Yuki, next weekend I will be going to my mom’s grave with my father.”
Mayu tells her not really minding about Jurina’s problem.

“Do you want to come with us?”

“No, I don’t want to disturb your family’s moments. Besides I have works to do.” Yuki smiled.

“Fine~” Mayu coldly say as she walks ahead.

Mayu felt pair of arms around her shoulders from behind.

“It’s just for two days. After that you’ll see me every day...” Whispered Yuki to Mayu’s ear making Mayu blushed.




Miichan’s bakery~


Takamina helped Miichan at her bakery since she has nothing to do during the day.

“Takamina, why don’t you ask Acchan out?” Miichan suddenly asked.

They were having a break.

Takamina almost spit out her hot chocolate when she hears that.

“Why would I?!!” Takamina raise her voice glaring at Miichan.

“Because you’re the ‘man’ now~” Grinned Miichan.

“Ughhh! Miichan, stop this will you?!”

“Fine~~ but at least you could ask her for a lunch or something~” Miichan still grinning at her.

“She’s not here…She said she’s out of town for three days.” A frown can be seen from Takamina’s face.

“Aaahhh~ no wonder you looks somewhat sad today…” Miichan says teasing her.

Takamina was about to deny her statement when her phone vibrates.

A new message, from Acchan.

Reading the short message, Takamina already smiling from ear to ear.

I miss you already~’ that short message from Acchan really making her day.

Still smiling looking at the text message from the taller girl, Takamina did not realize
that someone in the room also peeking at what she read that making her suddenly smiles.

Finally realizing someone’s head near her shoulder, Takamina quickly close her phone and put it in her pocket.

“Ohohohoho~~~ someone is missing you~~~” Miichan poke her shoulder.

“Shut up!”




Author-san, where is Wmatsui moments?  :?

[Hmmm? Wmatsui? :doh: Y-yeah…I rarely put their moments in here isn’t?  :sweatdrop: *sigh* I’m sorry…but I’m trying my best. *bow*]

You said this fic is going to end soon…when is the ‘soon’?

[Uh…soon enough? I don’t know~  :lol:]

Can you please continue the next part?
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A few days has passed.


Jurina decided to confess her feelings to Rena.
Mayu is the one who told her to do it. Since Yuki told her about Rena and Jurina is not real sibling.

Flashback

Yuki were walking home with Rena that night after finish their work.

“Rena…” Yuki called her.

“Hmm?” Rena tilted her head looking at Yuki.

“What do you think about Jurina?” Asked Yuki.

“She’s a good girl.” Smiled Rena remembering her sister.

“I mean…are you thinking of her as a sister? I know…you two are not real sibling.” Yuki says.

Rena was thinking for a while.

“I don’t know…I just…love her…” Rena replies with a confused looks.

“Jurina fall in love with you Rena…” Yuki says straightforward.

Rena stopped walking.

‘W-why is my heart suddenly beating so fast now?’ thought Rena when she hears what Yuki said.

Yuki looking at Rena who stopped walking.

“Maybe it’s time for you to tell her the truth…” Rena looks at Yuki.

“It’s not easy Yuki…” Rena started to walk again.

“What if she confessed to you one day?” Yuki asked her.

Rena slowly walks while thinking about it.

She doesn’t know what to answer so she just ignores Yuki.

Yuki sigh silently.

The next day, Yuki told everything to Mayu that Jurina is not Rena’s real sister.

End of flashback


“R-Rena-Chan~ “Jurina called her sister.

They were walking around the small lake.

“Yes?” Rena looked at her.

Jurina stopped walking as she holding Rena’s hand shyly.

“I-I…” ‘Come on Jurina, you can do it!’ Jurina said in her mind.

“What is it Jurina?” Rena chuckled at her.

Jurina closed her eyes for a while.

She took a deep breath then opened her eyes looking directly at Rena’s eyes.

“Rena-Chan, I…I love you.” Jurina finally let out what she feels towards the other girl.

Rena was shocked for a second but she then smile.

“I love you too Jurina.” Rena laughed lightly at her while patting her head.

“N-no…I mean…I think...I have falling for you…not as a sister.” Jurina said looking down afraid that Rena will reject her.


Rena remembered what Yuki told her that night.

“Jurina…” mumbled Rena looking at Jurina.


“I…I’m sorry…Jurina…I-“

“I-it’s okay Rena-Chan...I understand…what am I saying?! Y-you’re my sister!” Jurina laughed awkwardly.
She doesn’t want Rena to feel bad and so does Rena.

‘I think I hurt her…’

“Ah, R-Rena-Chan…I have to go now…I-I will see you tomorrow!” Jurina quickly said then ran away.

“Jurina!” Rena called her but Jurina did not turn to look at her.

As Jurina was running, tears falling down.


After that day, Jurina rarely talk to Rena, she always made herself busy with extra classes.

Rena felt guilty. She tried to talk to Jurina but Jurina always avoiding her.

Rena also has been missing Jurina. It seems that Jurina has changed after the awkward confession.



“Thinking about Jurina?” Yuki says seeing Rena’s troubled looks.

“Un…she’s been avoiding me…” frowned Rena.

“There’s only one way to find out your true feelings…*Rena look at Yuki confused* Kiss her~” Yuki said.

“Ehh??”

Yuki chuckled at her reaction.

“Well that’s my advice~” Smiled Yuki then leaving Rena alone with her thought.

 


*Night

“You guys again?!!” Takamina accidentally meet Kato’s underlings as she
was walking through the dark alley to ‘hunt’ mafia.

They all start to surround her preventing her from escaping.

“Why don’t you guys stopped doing this stupid useless thing and just lives a normal life?” Whined Takamina.

“Maybe WE should say that to you~” One of them said smirking at her.

Because she’s alone…and they are now more than 10 people so they think they have advantage to beat her easily.

‘*sigh* I hate them!’ thought Takamina glaring at each of them while preparing her fighting gesture.

“Bring it on!” They all were trying to attack her at the same time.

Quickly, Takamina dodges every of their attack as her body is small so it’s easy
for her to escape from their punch and kick.

‘Ughhh! I’m too tired right now!’ Takamina groaned as one of the guy giving a sudden punch on her face.

She stepped back.

“Oi~ I heard that you’re really strong that almost all of mafia quit because of you huh~”
They smirked at her.

“Am I?” Takamina smirked back at them making them mad and attack her again.

She fights back with all her strength since they are quite active now.

Someone was trying to attack her from behind. Takamina did not see it coming
as she just focused on her front only.

Suddenly she heard a pain groan from the guy behind her.

Finishing the guy that she’s beating currently, she looks behind.

That guy was holding his nose as it starts to bleed. A woman standing there near them.

“Huh? Who are you?!” Takamina asked since the woman probably the one who did it to him.

She turned around revealing herself to Takamina.

 “W-wait…Yu...Yuko?!”

“Behind you!!” Yuko shouted to Takamina.

Takamina turn her head around but she received a punch on her face making her fall.

Before the guy continues to hit her, another woman appeared and kicks his butt
from behind making his face landed on the ground.

With her hand on her bruise face, Takamina looks at the other person then her eyes widen.


“Takamina, are you okay?” She quickly rushed towards Takamina as Yuko finished all
the guys and making them running away.

“Y-you…”



T.B.C~
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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #333 on: November 19, 2013, 11:25:59 AM »
Rena...please tell Juju the truth...

Poor Juju... :cry:

Kojiyuu finally appear !!!

Yeahhh !!!

Next update, please... :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #334 on: November 19, 2013, 11:42:35 AM »
chiqin your back :on woohoo:
atsumina kissu  :wriggly: love it
poor juju :frustrated: rena why o why?? XD
thank for the update  :wub:,, and chiqin.. update soon :on gay:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #335 on: November 19, 2013, 12:30:31 PM »
wohoo chiqinna welcome back and thanks for update ~~ I love you

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #336 on: November 19, 2013, 12:48:13 PM »
Yeah... Kojiyuu is here now...

Takamina is very weak nowadays

Wmatsui is coming together soon...

How are they going to be together?

How are they going to fight Kato now?

Can't wait to see the showdown between them?

Thank you for the update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #337 on: November 19, 2013, 12:52:18 PM »
FINNALLY YOU UPDATE IT CHIQINAAAAA  :onioncheer: :wigglypanda:

LOL, i know what sae feel's when she near mad acchan  :badluck:

and atsumina momment  :luvluv2:

i want more than kiss atsumina scene  :wriggly:

i feel bad for jurina, i hope jurina stop avoiding rena and rena will confess to her :3

and kojiyuu is backkkkk  :onionwhip:


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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #338 on: November 19, 2013, 02:01:40 PM »
Yes! Update

Takamina finally fell in love with Acchan for real this time

Jurina confess to Rena...but she got rejected

Will Rena except Jurina??

Thank you for update, please update soon :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine Chapter 29 part 1 19/11/13
« Reply #339 on: November 19, 2013, 02:37:35 PM »
oh god! I honestly want more there are moments atsumina.
oh yeah, what about yuko and haruna? why yuko could suddenly be in place and help takamina? then what if takamina reunited with haruna? how acchan fate? aahh! too many "ifs" that came to my mind today after reading this chapter hehehe ~ thank heavens after such a long wait you finally continued. thank you! spirit! :peace: :twothumbs

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