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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #40 on: March 12, 2013, 06:30:48 PM »
Thank you for update ;)
Mariko is so sadist lol
Please update soon I can't wait for the next :)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #41 on: March 12, 2013, 06:42:09 PM »
thanks for this new chapter!!

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #42 on: March 12, 2013, 06:46:06 PM »
Yuko is way too pervy and tmi XD

Kuu/mari is an interesting couple dynamic

Kai man up and leave Ray already;D

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #43 on: March 12, 2013, 10:24:05 PM »
Ah.. so Kai took Ray's money... to pay for his rent and present for Atsuko.

Riku's and Kuu's reaction are a bit weird.... they don't care what Kai is doing... is going to hurt both girls... even though Ray knew she would not get Kai's love but at least not prolong her unrequited love it would be better for Ray and Kai.

And also for taking Ray's money... Kai is like an escort... he didn't have a pride at all.

If he did not have money... he should just stop his studies for a while to earn some money or getting some school support while he studies (pay later once he is in payroll) or even getting full scholarship by getting all 'A' grades for his courses.

Ah... Kuu and Mariko are so cute together...

Riku and Yuko is getting there... seem to be very interested with each other

Eh... Sato is going to be with Atsuko in a drama... is there going to be some gossip about them being together?

I do hope Kai clear his misunderstanding with Atsuko ASAP... if not he will lose his chance to be with Atsuko

And also Kai needs to give back all the money he took from Ray and give Ray advice as to find someone else...

Anyhow, great update as always

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #44 on: March 13, 2013, 02:44:29 AM »
Aw! No more kiss? :(
Look forward for morreeeee kiss in next chapter  :twothumbs
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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #45 on: March 13, 2013, 04:05:10 AM »
More misunderstanding/gap going between Atsuko & Kai. Oh my !!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #46 on: March 13, 2013, 04:50:45 AM »
triple update for me because i missed the last one(s)  :twothumbs
Riku is developing feelings for Yuko isn't he... i like
Kuu making his move so fast
I don't like the misunderstanding between Kai and Acchan
I feel like Ray is definitely plotting something big... no good
Thanks for the update

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 7 :))
« Reply #47 on: April 16, 2013, 02:48:43 PM »
Hello everyone!! :P I don't know if you even remember this fic because i'm too slow to update, I was on a journey... Sorry  :bow: :bow:
Well, this is about Kai, who works at the theater as a light technician and who is interested in Atsuko. But there is complications, Kai is with ray, and all...
So here this is the chapter 7 guys!!  :)


Chapter 7



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 I only have five days until the first day of the drama set and I desperatly need to know some basics about cooking. I don't know who to call beside from Mariko who is the most qualified in AKB but I don't think it's enough, I can cook too but what I need is professional advices. I don't have the choice, I need to ask Kuu. I have his number since he's always with Mariko now, offering her many lunchs. He's a great guy, I really like him, he's funny.
« Kuu ? Acchan desu. »
« Ah hello Acchan, how are you ? »
« Good. Hm, I would need your cooking knowledge for my new drama, could it be possible ? »
« Sure, what do you want to know ? »
« Just the basics, not to be a fool^^ »
« Alright, I would be honored to teach it to such a beautiful girl. What do you think of coming to the appartment this afternoon ? I have some freetime and all my stuff here. »
The appartment ? Where Kai lives... I don't have the choice, it's for work, and I can hide my face and be discreet, this is important.
« Okay, sure, see you at 1pm ! Thank you ! »

It was at the store that I saw Kai for the last time, until the I try my best not to see him because I feel uncomfortable. Maybe he will be at school today, there is no chance that he'd have some free time today...


I arrive at the appartment wearing a black hoodie and sunglasses. Kuu is laughing hard when he sees me.
« You're early, I like that. Maybe I will hire you then^^ »
« Thank you^^ And for helping me. »
« Naa, you're welcome ! »
Seems like no on is home...
« Riku is training and Kai is outside doing whatever... »
It's a relief, I can relax a little.

For about two hours, Kuu teaches me the gestures, the name of the stuff, vocabulary and other things that could help.
I enjoy it, he is a good teacher, funny and patient. He even cooks me something as a reward for my efforts. I need to speak to Mariko about this guy, she'd be a fool to ignore him.

I'm finally eating Kuu's « Charlotte aux poires » when the door opens and Riku and Kai comes in, all sweaty and laughing. I freeze seeing him, and it looks like the same.
« Ah, hello Acchan ! » says Riku with a smile. « Are you the one cooking ? »
« Hello, ano...I'm trying^^ »
« Hey » says Kai as he puts his sport bag down to the floor. « Riku, I'm showering first »
He leaves, taking off his hoodie on the way in, I can see his wet shirt sticking to his skin. Hot...
« We just did a great match with the boys, you should have seen it Kuu ! Kai is a reallygood player : »
« Great Riku, lucky you have him right ? » Kuu smirks.
« Yes, 'coz you suck at basketball^^ »
They smile and Riku crashes on the couch, checking his mails.
« Acchan, I'm ordering pizza, do you want some? »
« Ah really? I would love to!! »
« 'Kay, pick up the one you want » he says  giving me the flyer « Kuu, Indiana as always right? »
« Right! »
« So, Indiana, double steack and nothing for the healthy king Kai » smirks Riku.
« Maybe  he wants to be good-looking for his girlfriend... » I say with an hint of jealousy.
« Girlfriend? No, he only eats junk food on the great occasion, he's really healthy. And he doesn't have a girlfriend... »
« What...?!But Ray...?
Riku looks at Kuu and sighs.
« Shit... »
« What? What's going on? » I ask very curious.
« Oh no, Kai is gonna kill us if we tell you! »
They nod and pretend to be busy as I sit here like a fool. I need to know, it's time to be tricky.
« Riku... If you tell me, I will let you alone with Yuko in our appartment for one night. »
The tall guy drops his jaw as Kuu laughs at loud next to me.
« Girl... You're evil! »
I smirk and sit in front of him.
« Pff... Ray is not his real girlfriend... She's paying him for pretending. »
...What??!
« ...W-What do you mean? »
« She loves him but he doesn't. He's poor and needs money, so... »
I can't say a word, too shocked bby the news. Everybody is silent when Kai goes out of the bathroom and goes to his room, closing the door.
I get up and look at the two fools next to me.
« Riku, I want Indiania too » I say before quickly going to Kai's room.
I open the door abruptly and see Kai drying his hair with a towel. I close the door as he looks at me, surprised.
« Atsuko... »
« Don't Atsuko me! »
This is bad, I'm getting angry.
« This girl is paying you to be her boyfriend?! » I shout.
« What? How do you... Raah...I'm gonna... »
« DON'T MOVE! »
He freezes, I think he's scared now.
« I can't believe this...Who does that?! »
« ... »
« And you said yes to that? WHY? »
« ...I need money for school and rent » he says as he frowns.
« Isn't it why you work at the theater? »
« It's not enough, Atsuko. »
I look at him, still shocked.
« Do you love her?! »
«  No, or else she wouldn't have to pay me » he sighs.
« Do you kiss her?? »
« ...It happens... »
« YOU IDIOT!! »
I try to calm down but this is really hard.
« How much she pays you? Tell me, I will give the same if you stop this. »
« Now way, you can't buy me Atsuko! » he says, upset.
«  But she can?! Why don't you want my money but hers? »
« It's not the same!! I can't accept that from you! And why do you care? You don't have the time for me anymore and you didn't like the kiss SO WHAT??! »
I'm really shocked, I didn't expect that at all...Don't want to see him anymore...? Didn't like the kiss...?
« ...You're...such an idiot...and clueless...! »
I leave  the room, to sensible to talk with him.
« Kuu, thank you again for your help » I smile.
« Don't worry, it was fun! »
He comes close to me and smile kindly.
« And Acchan, don't worry . Kai is silly sometimes but he's a great guy. »
« Yeah...Good to know. »
I sigh and sit next to Riku who is already playing video games.
« Come here Acchan, pizzas will be there in 30 minutes. Why don't you play with me? »
I'm angry because of Kai but I don't want to leave, the guys are funny.
« I suck at video games... »
« Doesn't matter, we can play a tennis game okay? »
« Okay^^ »
Riku is giving me the move pad and we start a match. I like this, it's funny and I'm not bad at this.
« Wow Acchan, you're good! »
I laugh and try to win the match. Kuu is joining the game and it turns out he really sucks at it. I'm winning again when the doorbell rings.
« Kai!! Go! The money is in the bar! » screams Riku who tries to support Kuu.
Kai sighs, goes to the door and opens it. All of the sudden, Kai is pushed against the wall and a brown hair girl kisses him like crazy. I stop playing and stare at them.
« Hm.. Hello Kai, how are you? »
« ...H-Hello, Ray... » mumbles Kai.
The girl looks around and notices us.
« Oh, hello everyone! Maeda-san » she smiles. « Kai, I was around and I thought I could see you »
She caresses his cheeks, WHAT??! She's touching him all over!
« Can I play with you guys? »
« Hm, sure, why not? »smirks Riku.
The pizza man arrives as Kai was closing the door. While he pays him, I take Riku in a corner.
« Riku, I need your help! »
« Sure »
« Okay, I do you a favor, anything you want, if you help me making Kai jealous now » I whisper.
Riku opens wide eyes and blushes.
« W-What? You want me to... flirt with you right now?! »
« Sssh! Yes, that's what I want. Please! »
He looks at me and smirks.
« Deal! »
We return with the others.
« Acchan, take this piece » says Kuu giving me some pizza.
I take a bite and smile, Riku caresses my lips and smile.
« You had some pizza on it, Acchan. »
Damn, he's good at it! But I see that Kai didn't notice it.
« We need to be more obvious » I whisper to Riku's ear.
« Roger that. Okay, let's play guys! Acchan is with me, Ray, play with Kuu okay? »
« Okay! »
We start the game as Kai sits on the sofa to watch us play.
I miss two points and Riku comes behind me.
« Look, you need to do this movement okay? Use your hips » he says as he puts his hands on it to show me the move with his waist.
« Oh like that? Show me one more time please » I say with a husky voice.
As he does, Kai frowns.
« She knows how to play Riku, you don't to do that »
« Actually, yes Kai. It's helpful » I smile.
He mumbles and drinks some water.
« So, Ray, how is it with Kai? » I ask innocently.
« Oh, he's great! You know, he's really prevenant and protective... »
« Really? You're a lucky girl huh? » I say as I look at Kai.
« Yes, I know! And he kisses like a god... » she giggles.
I freeze and can't concentrate on the game anymore.
« Wow Riku, you're so muscular! » I say as I touch his chest.
« Well, you're pretty good too » he smirks.

We continue to play until Kuu and Ray are bored and only want to go eat pizza. Now Riku is alone against Kay and I. My heart is beating really fast just because he's standing next to me.
« Okay, go for it Atsuko » he smiles.
It's like no one is here anymore except us.
We start playing and I feel really great. I can smell his scent around me, this is intoxicating.
« You're good at it!^^ » Kay smiles.
When he plays the last ball and wins, I jump in his arms and hug him tight. Suddenly I feel like when I kissed him at the theater, I don't want to stop that...
As we step back, for one second our mouths are very close and I really want to kiss him...!
He looks at me and I'm almost sure at he wants the same thing.
« Kai!!Is there something you're bad at?^^ » she says as she hugs him again.
« Oh, it's getting late, I have to go » I say « Kuu, you can finish my pizza. Bye guys! »
I leave the appartment, skirmish between love and anger.
« Atsuko!! »
I'm still in the hall when Kai catches me, out of breathe.
« Atsuko... Sorry about earlier. I shouldn't have talk to you like that... »
«... No, it's okay. You can do what you want, you don't owe me anything. »
« I...You are...We could... »
He comes closer and touches my cheek with his palm. I'm uncappable of doing something, lost in his eyes.
« Do-Do you like Riku? » he asks, preoccupied.
« Hm... Not really, but Ray was all over you... »
« I-I don't understand. »
« yes, I see that » I sigh. « Maybe one day you will » I say as I kiss his cheek and leave.



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« Marikooo... I know I'm the only cook you know, but I have work, like everyday » sighs Kuu.
« Well, dear, you're not the only one I know, and you just called me Mariko. »
« So? »
« So, we're intimate because of you, and so you're hired! » I smirk

I need someone to do the buffet for the opening of my store in two weeks. I'm really excited, this is a big deal for me, and since I like Kuu and his food, I asked him to do it.
« Oh dear... » he sighs.
« Is it a yes?^^ »
« Guess so... I don't really have a choice... or else you could sneek into my room, take pictures of me sleeping naked and put it in internet! »
« Me? No^^ Why? Are you sleeping naked? » I smirk again.
He gives me his « killer look » and leaves, waving his hand in the hair.
« I'll call you tonight. You better pay well, evil oba-san! »

I could really fall for this guy...





KAI
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It's been two weeks since we ate pizza with Atsuko. She began her drama so I only saw her once and it was really hard not to speak to her.
Tonight I have a date with Ray, we're gonna eat dinner and maybe see a movie.
Kuu is busy cooking for Mariko and her store inauguration, and Riku has a really important match tonight.

« This is a nice restorant, Kai »
« Yes, and the meat really is good! »
I enjoy my meal, entrecote with salat and fries. I love meat and this is giving me strenght when I do some sport. Even if I try to watch my alimentation, I'm weak when it comes to food: I love junk food and soda,  but I don't want to be fat or lose my health.
« Ray, why are you studying at Coccoon tower?
« Hm...My father runs an important company in Osaka and he wants to work with me in the future. »
« Oh, so you don't like architecture so much? »
« It's just about getting a diploma and live with enough money to be free. I could have been a doctor^^ »
I look at her, disappointed. I never talked about this with her, and this is so sad to know that she's not a passionate.
« Souka... What do you like to do then? »
« Let me see... I love shopping!!^^ I usually do shopping at least four times a week with my friends... »
I look at her when she's talking, of course she's a pretty girl but... something is wrong.
« Tell me, what is your type of girl? » smiles Ray
« Ano... I like classy girls, with brown hair and a cute smile. She would be funny, smart and sexy... »
Wait, it looks like someone I know...
« A beautiful voice, amazing skin and cute teeth »
Shit... This is Atsuko... I'm screwed, I can think about someone else than her... This is one I want to be with, invite to dinner and love for the rest of my life...
« Looks like me^^ » giggles Ray.
« Y-You're blonde... » I pout.
« I know baka^^ You know, we could be married and you would build most of the project of my father in Tokyo. I could be a good wife, I just don't like alcohol and sex that much... »
« W-WHAT?!! » I ask, eyes wide open. « You don't like sex...?! »
« Not really...This is just a wild way to show interest to someone. But I love your kisses! »
« A-Ah, I see^^ Excuse me, I have to go to the bathroom.
I run into the room and take my phone.
« Moshi moshi! »
« Riku, this is Kai, I need your help! »
« Hm, what's up? »
« I'm with Ray and I just realized that I love Atsuko »
« No kidding^^ »
« Wait, I mean, I need money but I can't do this anymore...I-I don't like this girl and I can't pretend like this... »
« Okay Kai, it's okay, you don't have to do this...We'll figure out another way to have money pal. »
« Hm...You're right. Hm, Riku? One last thing. »
« Yes? »
« Did you know that some girls don't like sex? »
« What??!Did she say that? »
« Yes... »
« Wait!!Yuko?! Ray said to Kai that she doesn't like sex!! »
« You're with Yuko?! »
« Kai-kun, Oshima speaking! »
« H-Hello... » I blush
« This girl is not good for you, you know. And by the way, girls who don't like sex are boring. Riku-kun said you're a sex addict^^ »
« WHAT?! RIKU!! »
« Relax, midget^^ » laughs Yuko « Stop this with her and don't be late tomorrow at work! »
« Yes... » I sigh
« And Kai? »
« Huh? »
« Atsuko loves sex. Byyye!! »

I hang up, blushing like crazy. What's up with her?
So Acchan loves sex... What does it mean? Like, wants to do sexual things with different boys...? No, she's not like that. She must be amazing naked...WHAT? Don't think about that baka!!
I have to return to my table and put an end to this.

I sit and sigh, I hate being in this situation.
« ray... »
« Hm? Are you okay? »
« See... Il like you, you're a friend. But I don't think I can do this any longer, I'm sorry... »
She stops miling and seems sad right away.
« Oh...Is it because I'm not your type? »
« No... But this isn't good for me to do that. I thought that it was okay because you were happy, but I can't accpet your money pretending that I have feelings for you. This is bad... »
« But, if I'm okay with it? » she pouts.
« ...Why do you like me, Ray-chan? »
« B-Because you're smart and funny, honest and kind. »
« So, you see, i can't behave like that if I'm honest... You're a great girl, and I want you to be with a boy that you don't have to pay to love you. »
« I see... Thank you for being nice to me Kai. It was great being with you... »


« you should have seen her face... I felt like the worst bastard on earth... » I sigh.
« Yeah, this is always painful to do that... » says Riku.
« Riku-kun, don't speak about your older girlfriends anymore!! » frowns Yuko
« Midget, I only try to cheer Kai up »
We are crashed on the sofa, I just came home after dumping Ray, and Yuko stays with us to talk a little.
« It's always hard to see a girl sad »
I feel depressed, I didn't want to hurt her.
« Kai, I think I know how to make you happy^^ » smirks Yuko
« Really? »
« You need to know few things... For example, Acchan loves muscular boys, with abs. She's really sensible to that... »
I blush to hear such things, but I really want to know more!
« And... She always goes from the shower to her room only in a towel. Of course I've seen her naked a lot, she's gorgeous...! Soft skin, beautiful brest, long legs...I'm sure you would love to see that! »
« Stop! Please... »
« Why? » smirks the pervert « You don't like it? »
« Of course I do, but she's an idol, i'm not supposed to know that... »
« You know what's wrong with you? You're too respectful and wise. Well... I have to go, it's getting late. I'm going home, where there is probably Acchan, she's sad those days... »
She leans on my ear with a smirk.
«  Maybe I'll kiss her goodnight to make her make her happy. On the lips I mean » she whispers.
« Yuko!! »


I know this is short, but this is true, I will update this tomorrow, so you can read the next part and enjoy it, now I have time to do this :D Hope you like it!!! :nervous
 

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 7 :)) NEW
« Reply #48 on: April 16, 2013, 03:13:27 PM »
I can see that Atsuko would be angry...

But her anger was because she was jealous...

Different than what I was thinking about... (from my previous comments)

MarikoxKuu and RikuxYuko pairings are developing well enough...

Honestly.. these people here had very bad mind or head... they only cared about themselves..

I feel sorry for Ray... even though she knew that Kai being with her for her money...

Somehow.. somewhere... she wish and hope that Kai would like her in future

However, just because Kai knew who he liked than he wanted to end things...

After leading her on for a while...

If he indeed felt sorry for her... he supposed to make a clean break... by giving back all the money that she gave him all this time.

I guess he was a bastard... a gigolo...

What kind of thinking was this... just because she did not like sex... she was boring... or weird... There is nothing wrong with that... everyone is different...

There are people who like to express their love through physical relationship and others who like to express by reunited their minds and souls together

Anyhow... can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 7 :)) NEW
« Reply #49 on: April 16, 2013, 03:46:14 PM »
It seems obvious that Kai would like her and refuse the money but in a way he could have played around it (I read the chapters before XD)  Anyways Acchan heard what was happening and got angry but what else could have he done in the situation but that seems rather in hindsight :nervous

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« Reply #50 on: April 16, 2013, 06:14:03 PM »
Thank you for update  :mon firecrack: I really love this fic   :mon lovelaff:
Poor Kai with Yuko lol  :mon lmao:
Please update soon I can't wait  :mon fyeah:

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 7 :)) NEW
« Reply #51 on: April 16, 2013, 06:29:26 PM »
ahh..Kai i dont know you are a sex addict :) and Acchan too :lol:
finally, Kai break up with RAy
honestly, i dont like when Kai dating with her because of money
but now he free then go for Atsuko
thanks for update
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PS:I like this part when Yuko tease Kai :welcome
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« Reply #52 on: April 16, 2013, 11:55:01 PM »
woow it´s very nice chapter.
At least kai break up with ray, he is a good guy!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 7 :)) NEW
« Reply #53 on: April 17, 2013, 04:13:46 AM »
I miss this fic so much thanx for the update! love it!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #54 on: April 17, 2013, 08:28:35 PM »
Hey!! Thank you for your comments! :theking
@cisda83: I feel a little sad that you think characters are selfish, this is not what I wanted to create, and I wasn't realizing that they may appear that way... This is my fault about Ray, I have to admit that I'm an atsumina shipper so when i write a fic, I only see them, and somewhere I feel compelled to create tension and issues with others characters, leaving those characters on the side of the road... I don't really like Ray, so I thought I could put her in the story so it could be more interesting, but you're right, this is unfair for her. I just don't want Kai to appear as a bastard, sometimes we do mistakes without realizing right away that it's bad...
And for the sex thing, it was more like an humourous part, I can't deny that I like to put some sexual allusions in the atsumina fics, but Kai didn't want to say that he was leaving Ray because she didn't like sex because obviously he doesn't want to have sex with her, he's just surprised, and Yuko is a pervert, so she can't help but saying to Kai that atsuko loves it... :nervous
Sorry if you don't like how the story goes, this is hard for a writer to see that the characters are not loved... :nervous Thank you for taking the time to read it anyway  :bow:

@kurosawa87: Thank you, I like the Kuu/Mariko couple, but don't know yet how it will turn out^^

@mae: Thank you very much!! :)

@Hii-chan: Yes, I like to think that he is a sex addict :twisted: It gives me the right to write in pervy section :lol:

@Minami-chan: Thank you very much! ;)

@Haruko: Thank you very much for reading my fics all the time  ;) :bow: 



Chapter 8



KUU


Almost every customers had left when I start to clean the buffet. It's 23pm and I start to feel tired, I've cook all day for the inauguration, but I'm happy for Mariko. I watch her talking to the last customers and close the store.
« Are you okay? » I ask as she sits next to me at the table.
« Yes, just a little tired I guess »
« You did a great job, I'm not surprised if you have many sales tomorrow. And your clothes are great! »
« Too much compliments! What do you want?^^ »
« Nothing » I pout

I go in the room behind this one to pick up my stuff.
« Actually, I may ask you something in return » I say
She follows me at the back.
« Yeah? What could it be? Do you want a dress?^^ Or maybe... »
I gently push her against the door and kiss her lips. It's soft and has a really good taste...blueberry I think.
« That will be enough I think... » I say, looking into her eyes « I'll cook for you anytime, oba-san^^ »
« Don't call me like that, I could... »
I kiss her again, I really like that, especially when she answers it, my heart goes too fast and I lose my mind.
« You're right, you're too sexy to be an oba-san » I smirk
« Do you know that you're not suposed to kiss me? » she smiles
« Yaaah...what can I say, I couldn't resist... »
She blushes and smiles, looking at her feet.
« I have to go Shinoda-san, back to reality you know. Don't go too far, I could miss you » I say, leaving the store.

I've dated several girls before, but this is different this time. She makes me feel really weird, like a fool and a king at the same time.
Shit, I think this is serious this time...




ATSUKO


« Good morning! » I say to all the staff on set.
This is my third week playing in the drama and I'm really enjoying it, everyone is nice to me and Takeru-kun is always funny. At first I was a little shy with him but now we get along very well. He always brings me coffee before starting the scenes and he is kind and patient with me.
« Ah, Acchan, how are you? » he says smiling brightly.
« Good, thank you^^ »
« We're doing the kiss scene today, are you ready? »
« Y-Yes, I think so... » I blush
Yes, that's right, I have a short scene when Takeru says that he loves me and kiss me on the lips. I didn't sleep well because of that, I'm not comfortable with this kind of scene. Takeru is nice and he seems to be used to that, and I don't want to appear as an unprofessional actress so I pretend that it's okay.
« Don't worry, I'll be gentle » he smiles.
The last guy I kissed was Kai, nobody must know that, but it was real and pretty crazy. When I'm with him, I stop being shy because I feel like it's okay to do it, I have feelings for him and I really like to be in touch with him.


From: Kai
To: Atsuko
Content:
Good morning!
How are you?

I smile, I'm so happy he mailed me!

From; Atsuko
To: Kai
Content:
Hello!
I'm good, but the drama
is hard today...

From: Kai
To: Atsuko
Content:
Hard? Why?

From: Atsuko
To: Kai
Content:
Ano... I have a kiss
scene today.

From: Kai
To: Atsuko
Content:
Eeeh? Kiss scene?
With who?

He seems really jealous, and I have to admit that I like that. I talked about the kiss scene on purpose, to see if he cares about.

From: Atsuko
To: Kai
Content:
Yes, with Sato
Takeru. He's nice
actually. It should
be okay.

From: Kai
To: Atsuko
Content:
Hm... How is the kiss?
Serious?

From: Atsuko
To: Kai
Content:
Not like the one I
gave you; It's a light kiss,
Kai. Why?

From: Kai
To: Atsuko
Content:
Light kiss? Hum...
I don't like to know
you're kissing someone...
Sorry for that.


Yatta! He's jealous, I love that! So he care about me...


« So how was it, Acchan? » Asks Takeru after the kiss scene.
« Hm, okay, thank you » I blush.
We did it only twice and I barely touched his lips. I didn't feel the same explosion than with Kai, but it was nice too.
I'm done for the day, and tomorrow is my day off, so I'm in a good mood!


KAI

« Guys, I need a new idea to earn money. Like a really good one, to have enough to be safe.
« Okay, so let's think. »
We are all sit on the living room, trying to figure out something.
« Do you want me to see if you can work in the kitchen with me? » proposes Kuu.
« No... I don't think I can and it's not enough paid » I sigh
« You could sale your body to the old rich woman » smirks Riku.
« Yes, great idea, Riku, thank you! »
« What? You've already started!^^ »
« Bastard! » I hit him while he laughs hard with Kuu.
We sigh, what could I do...?
« Wait... I have something guys! » smiles Kuu.
« Oh shit... » sighs Riku.
« No,it's cool! Let's make a band! The three of us! »
« What?! »
We stare at him, this is not what I expected at all.
« Yeah, I can do drums, and Riku bass. Kai you will sing and have the guitar. We can do rock!! »
I drop my jaw, how could Kuu thought about something like that...?
« A rock band? But, I don't sing well, and why it will be a success? »
« Because we're young and hot! And you can sing! Riuku what do you say? »
I look at him, he thinks and smiles.
« It's tempting...And being a musician is always good with girls...^^ »
« What? But, we all work, so when would we have time for this? »
« Relax, being in a band means a lot of money! What do you want? And think about it, you, in a rockband...Girls fall for this... »
« I'm rusty with a guitar... »
I don't know what to think, it's a crazy idea... but so cool!!
« But why not... » I admit
« GREAT!! Oh man, I'm so excited! » screams Kuu.
We don't speak for few seconds, thinking about it.
« PERSONA!! This is a cool name right?! »
« Yeah, Kuu, you rock! This is great name, Kai, what do you think? »
« But guys... Do you realize what it means? I have school, you have basketball and Kuu has the restorant. And this is hard to do music! »
« Wait, Kuu and I were on a band in school, and sounds like fun, we could try something new. »
I pout, lost between excitment and reality.
« Listen Kai, why don't we try to audition with Akimoto-sensei, since you work here. And if it's not working, I won't talk about it anymore. Okay? »
« An audition with Akimoto-san?! But why he would listen to us? The man has a lot of things to do. »
« We'll figure out how^^ » smirks Riku.

We spend two hours talking about this new idea, where to get instruments and what to sing. My friends are really into this and I'm grateful for their help, but I'm still a bit doubful.
Turns out riku has a friend who could give us the instruments, Kuu as decided that we will be in black suit and I suggested that we could sing some AKB48 songs in a rock version (that I have arranged) for the day of the audition.
So, PERSONA is now created, and we all are over excited!
I have to figure out how to have a meeting with Aki-P...


ATSUKO

 It has been two weeks since my last stage at the theater. The drama takes me all my time and I really miss my friends and singing. So today, I spend the entire day at the theater because tonight I'm with the team!
I arrive in front of the theater and my attention is taken by a black motorbike coming. Kai... Wait, there is someone behind him, a girl! Must be this Ray again, but why is she here on the morning...?
The engine shops and Kai takes off his helmet with a smile when he sees me.
« Hello, Atsuko »
He's always so handsome, especially with his motorbike.
« Hey » I say, feeling dizzy.
« Acchan!! I missed you!! »
An energy ball jumps on me and hugs me tight while Kai is laughing hard.
« Jurina?! Wharre are you doing with Kai? »
« He drove me! I love motorbike!! And this guy is awesome! See you inside!! »
I'm still surprised as she runs inside the theater.
« So, Jurina huh? » I ask, feeling a little jealous.
« She's so great^^ We spend a lot of time together, she's like my little sister, always so excited » he smiles. « Always talking about Rena-chan... »
« Yeah, I think she's into her. »
« What? But she's too young for that! You should tell her. »
I smile, we sound like a couple talking about our kid. This is fun.
We walk inside, to the practice room where there already is Mariko, Jurina, Yuko and Tomochin. Team K must train to today.
« Acchan! » smiles Mariko has she hugs me. « Long time no see Ace, you even have wrinkles on your forehead^^ »
« Not true troll!! » I pout
« Yuko-san! What do I do if Rena doesn't want to kiss me? Kai said that I have to be romantic... »
« Go ask your mother Juriboy » says Yuko pointing a finger at me.
« Me? » I blush
« Yeah, since you were away and Jurina is a tough kid, kai is taking care of her so he's the father and you're the mom^^ »
I look at Kai who is also red.
« Well, Jurichan, Rena seems to be reluctant but in fact, if you tease her a little and show that you're confident, it's in the pocket » I smirk.
« Yatta! I'm gonna try! » says Jurina leaving.
« What? But you can't do that... » sighs Kai.
« Really? Come with me, I want to talk to you about something... »
I drag him into the room he used to work in his project. When the door is locked, I look at him head to toes.
« It's been two weeks... » I say with an husky voice.
« yes. How are you? »
« Good...I'm happy to comeback here, I've missed all this. »
« Hm...And your drama? »
« Going well, this is fun. »
« Good. » he nods
« And you? The school, Ray? »
« Oh...I'm almost done with my project, I have to present it monday morning; And I don't really know about Ray. »
« What? Why is that? »
« I broke the deal three weeks ago. »
« What?? B-But you didn't tell me! »
My heart is awake all of the sudden, I try not to smile and jump into the room.
« I didn't say think it mattered... And you, Sato-san is still great? »
« I didn't say that... But yes, he's nice. »
« I see... Well, I need to get back to work. Are you here all day? »
« Yes, plus Akimoto-sensei is coming to the theater this afternoon, I have to see him. »
He frowns and look weird;
« Cool, see you later! » he says before leaving.
Yeah, see you later, Kai.

When I come back into the room, Mariko is waiting for me, with her malicious face.
« What did you do to this poor boy, Acchan?^^ »
« Nothing. I've missed you!! »
« I've missed you too » she smiles. « I see that you have some good advices for Juriboy^^ »
« I have some for you too: Kuu is a great guy, don't lose him! »
She laughs, I think there is some red on her cheeks.
« Wow... Did he pay you for that?^^ »
« No, and be serious » I pinch her.
« Wait, I may possibly like him...okay? BUT, I can't think about guys... »
I pout, she's so serious, it makes e think that I should do the same.
« Mou... He's so sweet with you, be gentle okay? »
« Yes, mistress » she smirks
« Mari-sensei!! » screams Jurina running toward us « I kissed Rena-chan!! »
« Well done » she says patting the young girl « What did she say? »
« Mou, nothing but she blushed and called me baka! »
« Ah, that's good! Keep up the good work^^ »

We laugh watching this puppy jumping of excitation all over the room.


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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #55 on: April 17, 2013, 08:58:15 PM »
So Jurina gets her kiss in.

Kai/atsuko still panning out problems

Kuu/Mariko is like a chess match which the troll dominates regardless

Yet it feels like something else is coming up over the horizon :nervous
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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #56 on: April 17, 2013, 09:01:46 PM »
Thank you for update ;)
I wait all day for this
Please update soon :)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #57 on: April 17, 2013, 10:53:28 PM »
woow you are so fast!
Very good continuation of the chapter.
The introduction of Jurina has been super nice, I love that little girl. (although she hasn´t a kid, but always be our little girl)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #58 on: April 17, 2013, 10:57:33 PM »
two updates :)
Atsuko told Kai off well  :twothumbs
i like how both of them are sex addicts
good thing he broke off with Ray but i somehow sense future problems
Mariko and Kuu's relationship seem to be going in a good direction
im happy with the forming of Persona... can't wait to read to part where they talk to Aki-P
Thanks for the updates!!

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) CHAPTER 8 HERE!!
« Reply #59 on: April 18, 2013, 12:13:36 AM »
Please continue!!!!!  :bow: :bow:

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