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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 3
« Reply #180 on: June 19, 2013, 11:08:10 AM »
I think it's interesting now that we don't know what Mayu thinks since we read from Yuki's POV now.
We don't know what's behind Mayu's "blank face" so there might be something behind the scenes with Jurina that made Jurina so possessive of Mayu right now. Though they still seem quite lovey dovey :deco:


More please :bow:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 3
« Reply #181 on: June 19, 2013, 04:42:40 PM »
Ow you right! I just notice,now with yuki pov i could feel mayu blank face more.because yuki dont really get what mayu think

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 3
« Reply #182 on: June 19, 2013, 09:05:04 PM »
Chapter 4




“At last work is finish”

Akicha said while flash a smile at me, I just look at her then I felt my phone vibrated, so I look it up

to: Yuki <3
from: Sae
Subject: Yuki T^T

Yuki I need to go out of town, I need to go to this stupid meeting now. I will be gone in three days. Please call me if you got home, or something happen. I love you <3

 I just smile at her childish message, but Akicha notice me and ask me

“What was that?”

I just smile, and look at her

“Hmm.. nothing, Sae gonna be gone for a while”

I said, then Akicha calp her hand and smile at me

“Nee Yuki-san, Let go out, let’s have dinner together huh?”

She asked, I just nodded my head as an approval to her, beside I’m not really a good cook myself, Rena or Sae sometimes cooks for me

“Ahh!! Great my friend recommend me to this western-japanese style restaurant near her workplace, let go there “

Akicha said then hop into my car, I just drive to the restaurant and  we have a dinner there, Akicha talks to me about some random stuff or sometimes work related stuff. While we were having dinner I saw a girl entered the same restaurant and the staff bow their heads to her. I look closely to the girl and realize it is Mayu, But she wore a glasses and kinda look serious, I think she didn’t notice us. She sat down in one of the chairs that have reserve sign and the Manager of the restaurant also sat down with her. They seems talking about something serious, this is my first time seeing Mayu having that kind of look. She look so serious, and have that kind of bossy type of aura around her.

“Nee Yuki-san are you still listening to me?”

Akicha said while pouting,  I just look at her and bow my head

“Gomen hahaha, where are we again?”

I said, then we continue our meal, but then Akicha receive a call from work, she said our boss need her to finish some reports, so we call the waiter and to get the bill, But seems like Mayu notice us and come near us

“Ahh Yuki you’re here”

Mayu said, then show me her new smile to me, I just nodded my head and introduce my friend and co-worker to her

“ahh!!, were about to get the bill, ahh and Mayu this is Akicha my friend and co-worker”

I said, then Mayu bow to Akicha and introduce her herself, also did Akicha. Then the waiter come and show us the bill, but Mayu snatch the bill from us, and smile

“hehehe it’s on the house tonight?”

Mayu said then call the waiter and said something to him

“Ehh!! Really?”

Akicha said, while I just watch “What’s Mayu doing?” I asked myself

“Yep don’t worry about it, It’s on me”

Mayu said, then smile at us, Akicha then get up and say her thank’s to Mayu and leave, for her report, I just look at Mayu

“Mayu I will pay you”

I said, I was about to open my wallet but Mayu stopped me, and smile at me

“Yuki don’t worry about it, it’s nothing”

Mayu said, while smile at me,  But I still refuse

“Mayu, please accept this I know how hard  to gain money these days, it’s not like you own this place right?”

I said, then get some cash from my wallet and handed it to her, But she just smile at me and return me the money

“Yeah Yuki I own this place, so don’t worry about it”

She said, then smile at me, I just look at her

“Ehh?!”

Is all the word I can say,  Mayu just laugh at me, and tap my back

“Yuki you’re reaction are still funny”

She said while laughing, I just pouted at her and give her some money and leave

“Ehh!!  Yuki gomen, gomen It’s just you’re funny and here, Like I said you don’t have to worry about it”

Mayu said then trying to return my money again

“Mayu I will pay for my meals”

I said, then look at her, she just removed her glasses and look at me and smile

“Nee Yuki I wont accept this money, but can you do me a favor instead , huh as a payment?”

She said while giving me that smile she used to give me back then in highschool, I just look at her and I felt my heatbeat speed up because of that

“What is it?”

I asked while trying to look away from her, then she smile at me

“Can you accompany me for my shopping?”

She said then bow at me, I just widen my eyes and shock about her request

“EHH!!?”

I said obviously showing my over reaction face, She just smile at me and laugh

“Nee Yuki I just need to buy something, don’t worry it won’t take long”

She said, then we walked to the jewelry shop near the restaurant, we look around for a bit, then she come to the counter and buy something

“Mayu what did you buy?”

I asked her, then she just smile at me and show me the pair of necklace that she just brought, the necklace is a lock and a key, and have a initial of M&J to it , I just smile at her

“Nee Mayu what was that for?”

I asked but Mayu look softly at the pair of necklace and smile

“I order it, I asked them to make this for me, this is my present for Jurina in our anniversary, I hope she will like it”

She said, I felt a little pain in my chest when she said that

“Mayu since when did you and Jurina start dating?”

I asked, she look at me and smile and grab my hand and started to walk

“Hmm before we graduate highschool I guess, After we finish college we moved in together here in Tokyo, but she still  never change, she's still like to be by my side”

She said, I felt uneasy now, I don’t know why I’m feeling this way. I’m her friend I should be happy for her, But there’s something inside of me that want her to stop talking.

“I choose this lock and a key, because she is the key to my heart.  My heart has been broken back then, so I kept it lock in deep within my heart, but I guess she found me and unlock my broken heart and fix it, I’m happy with her, and I don’t want to lose her”

Mayu said, while looking to the necklace, she gave a small little smile and that look that she used to give me, I felt time just stop when I look at her, she look so beautiful while looking  at the necklace, but the same time I felt sad, and I don’t know why

“Yuki do you think she will like it?”

she ask me, I just nodded my head, and she smile at me

“Thank’s Yuki for accompanying me”

she said then kiss my cheek. And wave her hand to say goodbye, and go to her car

“Why I’m feeling this way?”

I asked myself while  touching my cheeks and looking at her driving.


........................TBC

well i'm kinda, let say writers block hehehe :banghead:
I made this chapter since some of you want Mayu and Yuki hangout but I guess I kinda field on that one

Thank you for reading my fiction and for all the comments

and yet another boring chapter  :sweatdrop: :doh: sorry minna




« Last Edit: June 20, 2013, 05:45:12 AM by -gibson-mayulover »

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #183 on: June 19, 2013, 09:38:18 PM »
Well Yuki is having guilt over the past and seeing Mayu with another woman kills her a lot more than it actually should :nervous
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #184 on: June 19, 2013, 09:48:51 PM »
No, it's not boring at all. I love seeing bossy Mayu here lol.
And it's nice to know that Mayu really loves and cares about Jurina. She deserves it. I know it will be difficult since we're hearing from Yuki's POV now but I want cute JuriMayu time too :deco:


Tho I feel bad for Yuki now :(
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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #185 on: June 19, 2013, 11:32:27 PM »
aww, poor Yuki, but i'm happy for Mayu and Jurina.
at the begining i thank that maybe Mayu really never get over Yuki, but know i think that she did it ~ so lovely with her gift to Juri <3
i0m still curious about Jurina and her family, and how Mayu own a restaurant xDD

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #186 on: June 20, 2013, 12:28:56 AM »
yuki  :on cloudeye:
what the hell why Mayu is keeping kissing Yuki on her cheek do someone kiss her friend so much on the cheek  :on shady:
don't confuse me with your kisses Mayu!!  :on_plug:
I think you should change the name of the fic to "I love you but I can't be with you"  :hiakhiakhiak:

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #187 on: June 20, 2013, 04:06:37 AM »
3 DAY FREE FROM SAE!!!
YUKI PLEASAE SPEND YOUR TIME WITH MAYUYU!
AH YUKI STILL DENSE,STILL CONFUSING ABOUT HER FEELING, ITS LOVE YUKI...ITS LOVE WHAT YOU FELT!! HEHEHE
MAYU ITS SO SWEET,SHE SAID JURINA IS HER KEY AWW
 MAYU HEART HAD BEEN BROKEN,DOESNT YUKI WANT TO KNOW BROKEN FROM WHO??


HOPE MORE DEVELOPMENT AS SAE GONE KEKEKE MAYBE LIKE YUKI FINALLY REALISE HER FEELING TOWARD MAYUYU AWW THAT WOULD BE A GREAT PAIN FOR HER

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #188 on: June 20, 2013, 07:39:03 AM »
@ rochilu
remember my chapter one

Because I'm getting tired to moved every 5 months just because of my mom and dad's work. Their business man and women every year they open a resto in all over Japan that's why they couldn't stay in one place. They maintain our business and make sure that they won't go bankrupt.

and this

Once I finally graduated, my father let me handle some of our family business. I handle 3 restaurant here in Tokyo, two western style and one western-japanese style restaurant. I just need to make sure our business won’t go bankrupt. After that I can do whatever I want.


well in my fiction Mayuyu is a kinda rich, because of their business hehehe, so basically she's a owns and handle three restaurants hehehehe


@ mo-chan
well great idea but i'm gonna stick with my original title hehehe thank's and about the kiss. I think it's normal for a friend to kiss their cheek, (because I do that in my close friends)

@ gek geki
about the development of my fiction... hmmm it's kinda hard for me... i'm having a writers block? I dunno. I think I'm watching too much SHINGEKI NO KYOJIN  :nervous I need to clear my mind about that damn titan.

@jell_o_jello
ohh bossy Mayu I love it  :heart:
well yeah she love Jurina and, I  hope for a better love story for Mayu.
don't worry about Yuki she have Sae right?
unless she do something stupid

@ kurosawa87
well you're right. simple yet true

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #189 on: June 20, 2013, 07:44:08 AM »
EH YOU WATCH THAT TOO??? SHINGEKI NO KYOJIN??? ME TOO!!! KEKEKEKE

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #190 on: June 20, 2013, 08:22:31 AM »
I'm glad that see Mayu cares about J so much~ ♪( ´▽`)


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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #191 on: June 20, 2013, 10:00:39 AM »
aaah because you do that with your intimate friends  :lol: I thought how can I explain this I thought because you are using japanese characters then they will do as what japanese do I don't know If you will understand what I mean if no sorry I confused you  :nervous
But reading your Fanfic made me think of a new ver song of taylor swift for mayuki  :cathappy:
But theeeeey are never ever will get to be together~  :catglare:
sorry I'm joking  :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
by the way I'm watching Shingeki no kyojin too :P

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #192 on: June 20, 2013, 10:24:43 AM »
Mayu was the owner of a nice cafe restaurant...

Mayu bought a lock and a key necklace...

Mayu really really loved Jurina now...

Poor Yuki... she's going to relies her feeling for Mayu soon enough...

But is Yuki really love Mayu or regret for not being with Mayu when she could?

Can't wait to see what's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #193 on: June 20, 2013, 05:45:58 PM »
Nooo! Mayu is sadistic and evil! I hope Yuki realizes this and stays with Sae. Then we can continue to enjoy JuriMayu. Hehe! :D

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #194 on: June 21, 2013, 01:28:38 PM »
hmm take your time if you feels dont have an idea....yeah sometime that happen....

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #195 on: June 21, 2013, 01:58:34 PM »
YEAH GAMBAREEE GIBSON SAN

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #196 on: June 21, 2013, 09:22:51 PM »
waa thanks! i forget that xDD ah, in my country is common too to give kiss in the cheek.

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 4
« Reply #197 on: June 23, 2013, 08:39:27 PM »
Chapter 5



I was sleeping quietly, when my peaceful rest been disturbed, I felt like somebody got beside me and pulled the blanket away from me. And when I looked it up, it’s Mayu and she reeks, the smell of alcohol overwhelmed me. So I got closer to her and ask her “Where were you? Where did you stay?” but when I look it up, looks like you already fall asleep liked a baby.

“m-my chest hurt, please make it stop”

she said, then a see a little tears came out from her eyes. “sleep talking?” I asked myself, and got a little more closer to her. “Yeah she’s asleep” I mumble myself and hug her, I don’t really care if she smell like alcohol, she’s sad, I’m her roommate for this vacation and yet she doesn’t tell her problems. I just hugged her until I fall asleep again.

“Yuki do you love me?”

Mayu asked, I was confused, I’m seeing Mayu and myself talking in my old house. I’m seem shock but then hug her.

“Of course Mayu, I love you, you’re my best friend”

Yuki said, wait I’m talking to like I’m a third person here. But then Mayu suddenly pinned me down on the sofa, I saw my eyes grew bigger. “Is that my reaction looks like?” I asked myself

“Ehh! Mayu what are you doing?”

Yuki asked, but Mayu didn’t answered, she just kissed me all over my face  and even my neck, I just blush seeing myself being pinned down by Mayu in the sofa and kissing me. But I just giggled, smile and said

“Mayu that tickles”

Mayu just get up and look at me, my other me. And gave her that smile, that beautiful smile, I remember the first time I saw it. It was back then under the sakura tree in our school garden in highschool, you was just reading a manga when I suddenly disturb you. You were so cold back then, but my image of you change when I saw that smile, It feels warm and honest.

Then I saw you heading for the door, I tried to move my body, but I can’t, my body seems in a frozen state. But my other self suddenly get up and grab Mayu’s arm and pinned her against the wall

“Where are you going?”

I asked, I mean my other self asked. Mayu just widen her eyes and try to say something. But can’t, because I was getting closer to her until our lips meet each other. I just blushed seeing myself and Mayu kissed.

“Riiiing”

I, no I mean my other self lick Mayu’s lips, Mayu showing a expression that I’ve never seen before and her face totally red now. My other self just smile and start to get lower and kissed, lick and bite  Mayu’s neck

“Y-Yuki w-what are doing?”

Mayu asked in a rugged voice and still trying to get away, but my other self just tighten her hold on Mayu, and started to roam her hands on Mayu’s body. Mayu just shivered from my other self action and release a small moan

“Riiiiiiiiiiing!!!
I felt really hot watching myself and Mayu making out and felt really embarrass seeing this. But I can’t take my eyes from it. My heartbeats beating like a drum now,  I felt my sweat from my face slowly dripping away. But then I felt like something pulling me away

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

“RRRiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnngggggg!!!”

I open my eyes and saw my phone ringing beside me, I checked it out and saw Sae’s calling me, so I answer it

“Morning Yuki!!”

she said, I just rubbed my eyes and look at my clock

“Sae it’s 7:30 am it’s too early!!”

I shout at her

“hehehe sorry about that, it just that I missed you so much, and I don’t want you to be late again from work,. Any way I’m coming home tomorrow do you want me to buy you something?”

Sae asked, I just smile at her

“No, you don’t need to buy me anything, I’ll just call you later, I’m going back to sleep” I said

“Hahahaha okay, don’t sleep to much baby or you will be late at work again. Bye I love you”

she said, I just smile

“Hmmm… okay, Bye”

I said, then lay on my bed, But I remember some image or flashes of my dream in my head. I just blush and hug my pillow “What is that dream all about?” I  asked myself and close my eyes thinking of Mayu





………………………..TBC


Okay minna I got some few Ideas now but I’m too lazy to write it down hehehehe

anyway Thank you for reading my fic and all the comments

hope you like this chapter hehehehe

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #198 on: June 23, 2013, 11:41:00 PM »
the beggining of this chapter is also a dream, right?
waa Yukiii, if you would have realized before about Mayuyu and her feelings u.u maybe it's too late now? D: She seems so happy with Jurina :/
nice chapter! :3

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Re: Blank face ( Yuki's POV ) season 2 Chapter 5
« Reply #199 on: June 24, 2013, 12:44:02 AM »
Yeah if yuki realize back in high school maybe it wont this difficult
Separated mayu from jurina is cruel and black keke

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