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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #80 on: April 26, 2013, 12:44:51 PM »
so inlove with this fam :jerk:
finally rena and takamina is a couple
wow kuminon XD

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #81 on: April 26, 2013, 01:02:04 PM »
@sakura_drop_: it's a quick reply  :grin:  thank you for the praise  :cow:


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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #82 on: April 26, 2013, 01:27:01 PM »
@ptrd3009:  :welcome  to BAKA Family story. please, enjoy yourself with baka story  :grin:  and thank you for reading  :cow:

@sakura_drop_: I have a secret stalker  :w00t:  it would be nice. thanks for your time for reading all baka things from me  :bow:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #83 on: April 26, 2013, 02:46:01 PM »
*hugs and cries*  :mon cry: :gmon tears: :pig cry:

This was so awesome  :mon thumb:

TakaRena~  :nya: :wriggly:

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Nice update as always  :mon thumb:

Update soon I can't wait  :luvuluvu:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #84 on: April 26, 2013, 02:53:38 PM »
 XD i like pairing rena & takamina :thumbsup

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.8.2 (Sae/Yuki/Rena/Yuko/Mayu/Jurina)
« Reply #85 on: April 27, 2013, 07:03:59 PM »
@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: don't cry  :pleeease:

@Kazan(bai): thank you  :cow:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #86 on: April 30, 2013, 07:36:43 PM »
Okay, this is a story about Saeyuki before they getting married.  :grin:
                                         


July, 1994, 7 am.
“Oi Sae, hurry up!! I should be in the office on time”, said midlife man.
“Alright! Alright!”, a teenager out of from house to garage. And then, the car are moving to school and office.
“How could you oversleep, huh? Today I should leaving earlier than usual because I have a meeting, and you know that!”, The midlife man protest.
“I’m sorry, dad! It’s my bad”, Sae replied with bread in his mouth.
“So, what are you doing last night, huh?”, the midlife asked.
“Nothing!!”
“Don’t lie to me, kid!! I know your habit very well, Sae”

“Sorry, last night I was watching a DVD that I borrowed from Akimoto. It’s a horror movie, and I ended up with no sleep until 3 am”, Sae regret.
“You know you're the coward with horror stuff, but why you can still watch that movie, huh?”
“I don’t know that was a horror movie, dad. Akimoto just give it to me without explain it’s a horror movie or not”
“And congratulations, you has become the target of his joke. Hahaha…”
“Dad!!”,
Sae sulked.
Sae and his dad has reached the school…
“Alright, dad! Thanks for the ride and good luck with your meeting”, Sae dropped out of the car and say goodbye.
“Oi, Sae.. You want me to pick up later?”, the midlife shouted.
“Thanks, dad. I will go home with Akimoto. So, you don’t need to pick up me”, Sae waving his hand.
His dad move to the office…

Came from back, “Morning, my man!”, Akimoto greeting – hit Sae’s shoulders.
“Bakaero! Don't surprise me like that! It's your fault, gorilla. Because movie that you gave it to me, I can’t sleep until 3 am”, Sae pinch Akimoto’s shoulders.
“Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. Because you’re coward with horror stuff, it’s so fun to do that”, Akimoto laugh.
When walking on corridor, Sae accidentally hit a girl. That girl fall down and her books are messy. Then, Sae try to help her.
Sae: “I-I’m sorry. Are you okay? Did you hurt?” (collecting books)
Yuki: (shake her had) “I’m okay. I should apologize because I can’t see you in front of”
Sae: “It’s okay. Can you stand up?” (help Yuki to stand up)
Yuki: “Thanks” (smile)
Sae: “Since your books are heavy, let me take it”
Yuki: “Don’t! I can myself”
Sae: “It’s okay! I don’t mind” (smile) – “So, what’s your name?”
Yuki: “Yuki, Kashiwagi Yuki”
Sae: “Sae, Miyazawa Sae. Nice to meet you, Yuki”
Akimoto, Sae, Yuki: (walking to class – silence)
Akimoto: “Seems we have a Romeo and Juliette here” (laugh)
Sae: “Akimoto!” (stare Akimoto) – “I’m sorry, he always like that.
Yuki: (smile – blushing)
Akimoto: (lend his hand) “Akimoto, Akimoto Reyden. Nice to meet you, Yuki chan” (smile)
Yuki: “Nice to meet you too, Akimoto san”
Sae: “So, where’s your class, Yuki?”
Yuki: “Right here!”
Akimoto: “Aah, class 2-2, right?”
Yuki: “Yeah…”
Sae: “Okay, here is your books” (give the books)
Yuki: “Thank you, Sae san, Akimoto san” (bow)

Sae and Akimoto continued walked to their class, 2-3 (2nd Years, class 3).
“She’s beautiful, right?”, Akimoto asked.
Sae pensive and replied, “Huh?”
“Kashiwagi Yuki, a girl that you hit earlier. She’s beautiful, right?”, Akimoto chuckled.
“Yeah..”
“C’mon, my man. You’re more quiet after the incident earlier. Don’t tell me that you’re….”
“Me what?”
“You’re in love with her?”,

“Bakaero! That’s impossible! We just meet today. How can you tell that I’m falling in love with her, huh?”
“Don’t you ever hear about falling in love in first sight?”
“Falling in love in first sight? Baka! I don’t believe that!”
“Be careful, Sae. Your word is your prayer, man”

A teacher came and the lessons has started…

12 pm, The bells was ringing, and they have a break time for lunch. Sae and Akimoto went to the cafeteria.
“Aaahh.. Thanks goodness the bells was ringing. Takahashi sensei lessons was boring like usual”, said Akimoto.
“But you sleep well in the class, gorilla”, answer Sae.
“That was… Forget it! Haha.. I want eat some ramen now. What do you want, Sae?”
“Go ahead, Akimoto. I should gotta go now!”
“Where you’re going?”,
Akimoto shouted.
“A toilet!!”, Sae replied.
“Sae man, Sae man”, Akimoto shake his head.

Out of from a toilet, Sae meet Yuki for second time (it’s okay, Sae was clean)..  :grin:
“Aah, Yuki..”, greeting Sae.
“Sae san..”, she smile.
“Drop the San, please”, he laugh. “Just call me Sae, okay?”
“Okay..”
“Are you going to lunch? You can go out with me to cafeteria”
“Alright!”

While walking to cafeteria, there’s someone took Yuki away from Sae..
“Nabe san?”, Yuki shocked.
“Hey, what are you doing, man?”, Sae let go off Nabe’s hand from Yuki.
“It’s not your business, so stay away!”, Nabe threaten.
“Let me go, Nabe san!”, Yuki try to let her hand off from Nabe.
“No, you should go out with me, Yuki! You still have to explain why you broke me up”, Nabe pull Yuki’s hand forceful.
“Everything was clear. I don’t want to be with you anymore. I am not like your stash girl, Nabe san”
Nabe stopped, “My stash girl? What do you mean, huh?”
“Sashihara told me everything. She told me that you are being together with other girls in the hotel  last night. But you know, that day we should going out to cinema, and you had promise with me”, Yuki is crying. “This is the second time you did it to me, you have destroyed my faith on you, Nabe san”, Yuki leaving Nabe and go out with Sae.
Nabe stare Sae deeper, “Who the hell are you, bastard?!”

Yuki bring Sae away to rooftop, a place where Yuki could feel calm and also stay away from Nabe. (in other words, a rooftop is a secret place of Yuki)
Sae: “Ano, Yuki, are you alright?”
Yuki: (wipe her tears) “I’m okay, Sae”
Sae: “Here..” (give handkerchief to Yuki)
Yuki: “Thanks”
Sae: “He’s your boyfriend?”
Yuki: “EX-, he’s my ex-boyfriend”
Sae: “Right!!”
Sae sent a message to Akimoto,

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To: Akimoto
Sub: Help me!!
Hey, Gorilla. Please buy me 2 mineral water and 2 bread. I was on the rooftop now.

Yuki: “I don’t understand why boys always cheating when he already had a girlfriend”
Sae: “Hey, I’m not like that”
Yuki: (stare Sae)
Sae: “Sorry!”
Silence…
Yuki: “What do you mean with you’re not like them?”
Akimoto: “Because he never have a girlfriend, Yuki chan” (suddenly appear)
Yuki: “Akimoto san? How do you know here?” (confused)
Akimoto: “That boy was telling me” (pointing Sae)
Sae: “I’m sorry, Yuki. But don’t worry, he can keep a secret! Right, Akimoto?”
Akimoto: “Yup! You can counting me, Yuki chan” (give a mineral water and bread to Yuki) “Here!”
Yuki: “Thanks, Akimoto san”
Akimoto: “And here is for you” (throw a mineral water and bread to Sae)
Sae: “Hey, gorilla!”
Akimoto: “What’s wrong?”
Sae: “Can you give it slowly to me without throw it?” (protest)
Yuki: (laugh)
Akimoto: “Sorry, my hands slip. Ha.. Ha.. Ha..” :grin:
Sae, Yuki: (eat their bread)
Akimoto: “So, what happened to you both?”
Yuki: “Just a little problem” (smile)
Akimoto: “Problem? Because of he?” (pointing Sae)
Sae: “Oi.. Oi.. What do you mean because of me?”
Akimoto: “Yuki chan told that she has a little problem, and you’re with her now, right?”
Sae: “Yeah, but it’s nothing to do with me, gorilla”
Finally, Yuki was cheered because they both. And they back to the class…

3 pm, school activites was over. Time for Sae and Akimoto go home. They took a train. When they walking, there was a man who obstruct them. Right, Watanabe, Yuki ex-boyfriend.
“Hey, you!”, Nabe called Sae.
“Who is he?”, Akimoto asked.
“Kashiwagi ex-boyfriend. Stay here, okay?!”, Sae explain.
“Alright!”, Akimoto confused. ‘Kashiwagi ex-boyfriend? Hm, aah, Yuki chan ex-boyfriend, huh?’, he thought.
Sae came closer, “What’s wrong?”
“Here!”, Nabe pinch Sae’s face and Sae was fall.
“Sae!!”, Akimoto shouted.
“Stay away, Akimoto! (Sae shouted) I’m okay!”, Sae stand up. “What’s your problem, huh?”
“That’s for steal my girlfriend”,
replied Nabe with angry face.
“Your girlfriend? You mean Kashiwagi?”
“Yeah..”
“But she told me that you’re her ex-boyfriend, so she isn’t your girlfriend anymore, Nabe kun”
“She’s still my girlfriend!”
“Not for a man who cheating her twice”

Nabe looks so angry, but Sae told, “I don’t have a business with you, Nabe kun. Moreover, I’m not steal your girlfriend. We just meet today. If you want to looking for foe, find it somewhere else”, Sae leaving Nabe.
“Let’s go, Akimoto!”
“Alright! But are you okay? What’s that man problem?”
“He said that I steal Kashiwagi from him”
“Steal? Are you robber, Sae man?”
“Don’t give a joke, Akimoto”


They reached Akihabara station and suddenly meet Yuki there.
Yuki came closer to Sae and Akimoto, “Konichiwa”, she bow.
“Ah, Yuki chan. Konichiwa”, Akimoto replied. “Konichiwa..”, Sae replied too.
“You took a train too, Yuki chan?”, Akimoto asked.
“Yes, Akimoto san. I took a train to Hibiya”, Yuki answer. “Saechan? What happen to your face?”, Yuki asked and touch Sae’s face.
“Ah, nothing! I just hit a door when out from class”, he laugh.
“Mou, Saechan. You need be careful later, okay?”
“Okay!”
, he smile.

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A local train headed for Hibiya is approaching on line three.
Please stand behind the yellow line.

“Ah, that’s my train. Then, Akimoto san, Saechan, good day”, Yuki say goodbye.
“Bye bye, Yuki chan”, Akimoto greeting back.
“Let’s go, Akimoto! Our train has come”, Sae talk.

On the train..
Akimoto: “Oi, Sae..”
Sae: “Huh?”
Akimoto: “Why you didn’t tell her about that man?”
Sae: “For what?”
Akimoto: “For.. Remind her, maybe”
Sae: “Baka!”
Akimoto: “By the way, why she call you Saechan?”
Sae: “I don’t know”
Akimoto: “Don’t tell me if she…”
Sae: “Not again, gorilla”
Akimoto: “Ha.. Ha.. Ha..”  :grin:

At the house, when Sae just come home..
Dad: “Oi.. Oi.. Hold on!”
Sae: “What’s wrong, dad?”
Dad: “What happened to your face, huh? Are you fighting?”
Sae: “It’s nothing, dad! I wanna take a shower” (move inside)
Dad: “If you fighting for a girl that you loved, keep her!” (shouted)
Sae: “Yes sir”

8 pm, time for doing homework..
‘Aah, it’s really hurt (he touch his cheek). That man!! What’s his problem? I just meet her girlfriend today, and he accusing me stealing his girlfriend’, thought Sae.
“But Akimoto was right, Kashiwagi are beautiful. I never seen her before”, talking alone – smile while imagine Yuki. There was an incoming message from unknown number to Sae’s phone.

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From: Unknown
Sub: Good Night
Good night, Saechan. Are you busy right now?

“Saechan? I don’t have any nickname with Saechan”, he talking alone.

Quote
To: Unknown
Sub: Re-Good Night
Good night, too. I’m not busy right now. But, who are you?

“Wait a minute! The one who called me Saechan was…”
Yuki: “I’m sorry if disturb you, Saechan. It’s me, Kashiwagi”
Sae: “Kashiwagi?” (shouted – not replied the SMS) “Oh my God! I just thinking of her few minute, and now she’s sent me a message” (jump on the bed – happy) “Wait, how do you know my number, Yuki?” (he asked now)
Yuki: “Akimoto san give your number to me”
Sae: “Akimoto?”
Yuki: “Yeah, I was on phone with Kana chan, she said she know Akimoto. And then, she give me Akimoto’s number and I asking your number to Akimoto. Sorry, Saechan.
Sae: “No, no, it’s okay, Yuki. You don’t need to apologize to me. So, what are you doing now?”
Yuki: “Nothing! Just relax while watching TV. And you?”
Sae: “I just finished doing homework, he.. he.. he..”
Yuki: “Nee, Saechan..”
Sae: “What’s wrong, Yuki?”
Yuki: “That bruise on your cheeks was from Nabe san, right?”
Sae: “No, it’s not”
Yuki: “Don’t lie to me, Saechan”
Sae: “I’m sorry!”
Yuki: “What he does to you?”
Sae: “He just pinch my face, that’s all”
Yuki: “He didn’t say anything?”
Sae: “He told me that I stole you from him”
Yuki: “He said that?”
Sae: “Yeah..”
Yuki: “I’m sorry, Saechan. I didn’t mean to get you in my problem”
Sae: “It’s okay, Yuki. You don’t need to worry about me”
Yuki: “How could I not be worried about you. You’re were hit because of me”
Sae: “I said, it’s okay, Yuki. This hurt isn’t seriously”
Yuki: “Really?”
Sae: “Yeah.. It’s over 10 now. You should sleep now, Yuki”
Yuki: “Alright, you should sleep soon too, Saechan”
Sae: “Oyasumi, Yuki”
Yuki: “Oyasumi, Saechan”  ♥♥

“What’s wrong with the heart sign in the end?”, he smile. “Don’t tell me that she was….”, he laugh.
“But wait.. Where's she know that Nabe kun hit me? Ah, gorilla. It was you, right!”
« Last Edit: April 30, 2013, 07:53:53 PM by adentoh »

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #87 on: April 30, 2013, 08:00:44 PM »
UWA~~ sorry for nt commenting much, but god this was sweet~ Need moar~ How bout their first date, kiss, confession?  :deco: :wub:
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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #88 on: April 30, 2013, 08:03:34 PM »
UWA~~ sorry for nt commenting much, but god this was sweet~ Need moar~ How bout their first date, kiss, confession?  :deco: :wub:
just waiting, please  :grin: :cow:

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #89 on: April 30, 2013, 09:39:12 PM »
 :twothumbs Oh so sweet
I can't wait for the next

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #90 on: May 01, 2013, 02:04:55 AM »
I think my heart just skipped a beat ♥ i love this extra~!

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #91 on: May 01, 2013, 03:14:43 AM »
Ohh saeyuki!!

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #92 on: May 01, 2013, 04:13:08 AM »
 :heart: Saeyuki!!!!
Thank you!!!! >w<

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« Reply #93 on: May 01, 2013, 05:44:17 AM »
Gomen for lurking too loong~ actually I read TheM aLL, but im lazy for comment coz I was in buz.. :bow: and when I read this, THIS! I must comment this! Pwease go on saeyuki pwease, pwease.. Thanks adentoh san..

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #94 on: May 01, 2013, 04:09:19 PM »
So i guess the love at 1st sight  :deco: was mutual for Saeyuki...

Rena + Takamina = a rare pairing!
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« Reply #95 on: May 02, 2013, 03:37:00 PM »
More TakaRena please  :cow:
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« Reply #96 on: May 02, 2013, 04:37:44 PM »
Oh I forgot to ask. How old are all the character? You don't have to answer, but I was just curious hehe  :sweatdrop:


Ps. Thanks for making this awesome fic, me gusta it really much  :twothumbs
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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 1) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #97 on: May 02, 2013, 05:31:07 PM »
@POPCAT: for Baka Family story, we have Rena chan (15 y/o), Yuko chan (14 y/o), Mayu chan (8 y/o), Jurina (7 y/o), Haruna (15 y/o), and Takamina (14 y/o) :grin: and for the adult, I can't describe it  :grin: for Saeyuki SP story, between 17-19 y/o :huhuh

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #98 on: May 03, 2013, 08:52:54 AM »
a few days later

It’s lunch time, Sae asked Akimoto about that night. (night when Sae and Yuki talk via messaging)
“Oi, gorilla. Are you talking to Yuki that Nabe san the one who punch my face?”, asked Sae.
“Huh? No way, Sae man”, Akimoto replied. “Besides, I don’t know that man’s name”
“But Yuki said, you gave her my number, right?”
“Ah, that’s correct! Yuki chan sent me a message and she told me that she know my number from Kana chan. And then, she asked me about your number. Is it something wrong, my man?”
“No, Akimoto. Nothing”
“Then, let's go to cafeteria?”,
asked Akimoto.
“Alright!!”, Sae replied.
When they were heading to the cafeteria, Yuki was come out of class and meet their both.
“Ah, Saechan! Akimoto san!”, greeting Yuki.
“Yuki chan! Are you heading to cafetaria too?”, asked Akimoto.
“Yeah..”
“I and Saechan also heading to the cafeteria, do you want to join?”,
invite Akimoto.
“Oi.. Why you call me Saechan?”, Sae protest.
“Because Saechan is sounds cute, ha.. ha.. ha..”, Akimoto laugh out loud.
“Plaakk…”,
Sae hit Akimoto’s head.
“Hey!!”
“Problem, gorilla?”,
he laugh.

At the cafeteria..
“What do you want, Yuki chan?”, Akimoto asked.
“I want some watermelon juice and melonpan, Akimoto san”, Yuki replied.
“And you, Saechan?”
“Just a mineral water and yakisoba”
“Alright!”,
Akimoto gave the order to the cashier.
“Did your cheeks still hurt, Saechan?”, Yuki asked and touch Sae’s cheeks – Nabe is watching them from a far.
“It’s fine. It didn’t hurt anymore”, Sae smile – accidentally touched Yuki’s hand on his cheeks.
A silence occurred during a minute between them, and Akimoto break the silence at last.
“Yo! There’s an angel fly away in your eyes, my man”, Akimoto hit Sae’s shoulders.
“Huh?”
“Ha… Ha… Ha… Here’s your order”
“Thank you, Akimoto san”
, Yuki drink her juice.
“So, Yuki chan. Is that your boyfriend over there?”, Akimoto pointing Nabe with his eyes.
“Huh?”, Yuki turn around. “No, he’s my ex-boyfriend!”
Sae eat his bread, and Nabe try to come closer.
“We have to talk, Yuki”, Nabe started.
“There is nothing to be discussed anymore, Nabe san”, Yuki eat her melonpan – Nabe stare Sae.
“I’m sorry, man. Kashiwagi san have a lunch with us. So, can you leave her alone?”, Akimoto talk.
“Who are you, huh?”, Nabe replied. “I don’t want to break up with you, Yuki”
“I’m sorry, Nabe san. I had a new boyfriend”
“What? A new boyfriend? Who?”

Yuki holds Sae’s arms, “He is, Sae kun!”
Sae and Akimoto shocked, “What?”, Akimoto asked.
“I-I..”, Sae shake his head.
“It was you, huh?!”, Nabe punch Sae’s face again. “You said to me you never stolen Yuki, but what I heard today, you bastard!!”, Nabe punch and punch Sae’s face again.
“Nabe san! Enough!”, Yuki push away Nabe from Sae. “That’s one of my reason to break up with you! You’re rude!”, Yuki angry. “If you keep bothering us, I will tell you to a teacher!”, Yuki, Sae and Akimoto leaving Nabe and take Sae to infirmary..
Sensei: “What happened to you, Miyazawa san?”
Akimoto: “He was…” (Sae cut the conversation)
Sae: “I was slip in the bathroom and I hit the door, Sensei”
Sensei: “Next time, you should be careful, okay?” (put on bandage on Sae’s cheeks)
Sae: “Yes, Sensei”

While walking to the class…
“Ano, Saechan. I’m-I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean to hurt you like this”, Yuki apologize with face down.
“Listen girl! This pain came with you”, Akimoto mad.
“Akimoto, don’t!”, Sae try to calm Akimoto.
“You came to our life, and you give this pain to my best friend because your crazy ex-boyfriend, whatever!”
“Akimoto!”
“Don’t asked me to chill out, Sae. This girl was bad for you. And you, Kashiwagi san. Don’t ever came to our life, again”,
he pulled Sae’s hand – leaving Yuki alone in corridor – and she’s crying.
“You shouldn’t do that, Akimoto”, Sae started the conversation.
“What? You even protect that girl than heard what I'm saying as your best friend, huh?”, Akimoto protest. “Look at yourself, Sae! You never been like this, right before you meet her”
“I know, but you’re rude, Akimoto”
“I can rude to other because you! Because I want to protect you from that crazy Nabe kun or something”, his voice getting louder.
“Alright, chill out! We’re in the school right now. I don’t want the others pay attention to us”

3 pm, on the way home, there was an incoming message to Sae’s phone.
Quote
From: Yuki
Sub: -
Can we talk two of us? I’ll be waiting you at the park near station.

‘Yuki?’, Sae thought. “Hey, gorilla. You can go home without me. I have to go to somewhere else”, he lying.
“Where will you go?”, asked Akimoto.
“A convenience store”, Sae shouted.
Akimoto took a train alone, and Sae find Yuki sit under the tree.
Sae touch Yuki shoulders, “Hey, had a long time?”, he sit beside Yuki.
“No..”, Yuki shake her head. “Saechan, I’m really sorry about what happened to you”
“It’s okay, you don’t have to sorry, Yuki”
“But, Akimoto san was really mad with me”,
Yuki sobbed.
“Don’t hear that gorilla saying. I’m pretty sure, he just wanted to protect me”
“Yeah, protect you from a girl like me, who can only make you hurt”
“Hey, it’s not true. You’re not hurting me at all. And this (pointing a bandage on his cheeks), it’s nothing”,
he smile.
“What do you mean by nothing, Saechan?”, asked Yuki.
“I’ll be fine even Nabe kun want to punch me again”
“What do you mean?”
“I just want to protect you, same as Akimoto doing to me. I don’t want you getting hurt by Nabe anymore. I-I don’t know what happened to me. Lately, since we meet at corridor, I always thinking about you”,
he hold Yuki’s hand. “It’s like, I will doing anything for you, for make you happy”
“Saechan..”
“Yeah, I know-I know it’s a little bit early but I like you, Yuki”, he stare Yuki.
“Saechan..”
“You don’t have to tell me soon, I know you’re just broke up with Nabe kun”
“Hey..”,
Yuki hold Sae’s arms. “Nabe san just my memories. And now, I have a man who wants to protect me even he willing getting hurt to protect me. Really you’re just like a prince of my dream”, she smile. “But, I’m afraid that Akimoto san will be hate me more because I stolen his best friend”, she laugh.
“Don’t worry! I know how to calm the gorilla”, Sae laugh.
“Hey, don’t call him a gorilla, Saechan”, she hit Sae’s arms.
“But he is..”, Sae laugh. “Hey, Yuki. Do you want an ice cream? There’s an ice cream stand over there”
“Sure, I want a strawberry ice cream”, Yuki smile.
“So, let’s go!”

Sae and yuki spent the afternoon together…

At night, in Akimoto’s backyard…
Sae: “Oi, Akimoto…”
Akimoto: “What?”
Sae: “I want to apologize”
Akimoto: “For what?”
Sae: “For Yuki”
Akimoto: “Yuki? You still remember that girl?” (he getting mad but not angry yet)
Sae: “Everything is wasn’t her fault”
Akimoto: “Why you still protect her, huh?”
Sae: “Really, Akimoto. I’m ready if Nabe kun punch me more just to protect her”
Akimoto: “Are you lose your mind, Sae? She made you like this”
Sae: “You still remember what are you talking about when we meet her at first time?”
Akimoto: “Which one? I have told you a lot” :huhuh
Sae: (stare Akimoto) “I take this seriously but you give me a joke, gorilla”
Akimoto: “That’s not a joke, Sae man. I just forgot the words” (laugh)
Sae: “Because you’re old man”
Akimoto: “No!”
Sae: “Yes, you are! You remember when you said, it might be love at first sight, right?”
Akimoto: “Ah, I remember that. So? Don’t tell me that you are …”
Sae: “Right, Akimoto! Maybe that’s a love at first sight. Today, when I told you to go home alone, I meet Yuki at the park near station”
Akimoto: “Bakaero!!” (hit Sae’s legs) “I had a suspect that you will see her at that time”
Sae: (laugh) “Sorry, my friend”
Akimoto: “So, what are you doing?”
Sae: “Nothing. She just apologize about what happen to me. And she said, she was afraid that you will getting mad if she would be stolen your best friend” (laugh)
Akimoto: “Then?”
Sae: “Then, I tell her that I like her”
Akimoto: “Hohoho… My man. You’re really something, right?” (laugh)
Sae: “What do you mean?” (confused)
Akimoto: “You ever told me that you not going to like her”
Sae: “Am I?”
Akimoto: “So, so.. But at last, you’re going too, right?” (laugh)
Sae: “Then, you would get mad if I was going out with her, Akimoto?”
Akimoto: “Mad? With you? Ba-ka! Of course, not. I’m not a gay, Sae”
Sae: “Thanks goodness!! Thank you, my best friend”

At Sae’s bedroom…
Quote
To: Yuki
Sub: Night
Hi, are you sleep yet, Yuki?

Quote
From: Yuki
Sub: Re-Night
Hi, Saechan. Not yet, I’m still doing my homework. How about you?

Sae: “I just had finished a shower right now. I just came back from Akimoto’s house”
Yuki: “You must be more handsome after shower, right?” (emoticon laugh) “And what are you doing to Akimoto’s house, Saechan?”
Sae: “Thank you for praise me” (laugh) “Just talking about something with him. Like, what I’m doing with you today. And also asked him about today in the school”
Yuki: “So? What does he said?”
Sae: “He said, he doesn’t mad with you. That mad reaction just suddenly”
Yuki: “Thank goodness”
Sae: “Ano, Yuki.. Do you have a free time tomorrow night?”
Yuki: “Yes, I have. What’s wrong?”
Sae: “Do you want to go amusement park with me?” (nervous)
Yuki: “Sure!! I wil go out with you, Saechan” (smile)
Sae: ‘Ah, she wants!! Thanks God!’ (Sae thought) “Alright, we meet at the park near station, okay?” (because Sae didn’t know Yuki’s home, so he can not pick up Yuki)
Yuki: “Alright”
Sae: “Then, good luck to your homework, Yuki”
Yuki: “Thank you, Saechan” (emoticon kiss)
“She kiss me? She give me an emoticon kissing!!”, Sae shouted happy.
“Oi, Sae. Urusai!!”, his dad shouted.
“Sorry, dad…”
                                                 

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Re: (D.O.S) - BAKA Family ch.0 (part 2) Saeyuki Special
« Reply #99 on: May 03, 2013, 09:50:22 AM »
@Rukaeru: thank you :cow: you're right, Sae is gentleman and soft :grin:

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