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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #60 on: August 03, 2013, 04:56:31 AM »
Evil Mayu~~
Will Rena turn to gekikara mode when she knew Mayu was just toying her?
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Playgirls Chapter 4 Mayuki Atsuyuu Tomotomo 09/04/14 FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #61 on: April 09, 2014, 01:07:13 PM »
Playgirls
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Chapter 4

Love.

The most pointless emotion of all.

Its something that only comes once in a life time.

Something so special that you should treasure every moment you experience it.

Some people say that there is a red piece of string that is attached at our pinkie and somewhere on the other end of that thin piece of string is our soulmate. The person that we have loved for a thousand life times. The person that we have searched for our entire lives. But if that was true then why do some people never find their perfect match? Why do some people never experience love? Why do some people die alone?

I myself have never had the chance to experince this apparently most fantastic feeling. I've never really seen the point. Why experince an emotion so wonderful when you know that one day it will eventually end?

I stick by the saying life is a bitch and then you die because I know all of the truth behind it as do my sisters. The only people I let close to my frozen heart.

Currently the girl before me Matsui Rena is playing with interwind hands that lie on the dinner table like it was the most natural thing in the world. A small smile on her face. I stay quiet and just watch not wanting to spoil the little moment she seems to be enjoying. Such a simple girl. Unlike her annoying  cousin. Kashiwagi Yuki. That girl should have a lease and a collar and she might as well bark. I can't see how the pair are related. Matsui Rena seems to be nice and kind while the other thing seems to be the child of the devil along with her evil little friends.

"Here is your food." Interrupted Yuko placing a two plates full of food infront of us. I thank her then with my free hand take my fork and began to eat. Rena manges to start a small converstion with me and as she is my date I entertain her by joining in. Occasionally stopping her from talking by placing my fork infront of her mouth to feed her. Her face turning red slightly embarrased.

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"Look at her taking my moves." Complained Yuko crossing her arms letting out a small sigh of annoyance. "Of course she steals your moves idiot we taught her." Said Tomochin taking off her coat and throwing it onto the counter beside her. "Still she needs her own." Said Yuko sitting down on a chair. Tomochin lets out a small laugh then sits by Yuko "She does remember if it wasnt for her you wouldnt of even got that girl the other week." said Tomochin stretching. Yuko turns to face her "No way we would have got them for sure." Argued Yuko blowing out her cheeks like a child. "Liar you are such a perv that I am suprised you get any girls." Said Tomochin.

"Oh that reminds me we need to do something spectacular to chase three girls away."

"You mean Kasai Maeda and Kashiwagi?"

"Yup."

"In school or is there something I don't know."

"There is alot you don't know so care to evaluate."

"Don't be mean Tomochin and I mean are they here?"

"Yup that Kasai followed me all the way to the place to pick up the orders. She said she happaned to be going the same way all the way to the freaking take away place and back so I am guessing that the other to idiots are here with her."

"Okay so what are you thinking?" Asks Yuko jumping up from her seat with excitement. "Follow me." Said Tomochin getting up from her seat and exiting the 'restaurant' through the back door with Yuko following quickly behind.

Once Tomochin explained her plan it was set into action. She turned left while Yuko went right only to see Yuki and Tomomi hid by one of the windows every now and then taking a quick look to see whats happening on the inside. Quietly Tomochin sneaks into a nearby bush and calls Yuko for the next part of the plan but she didnt answer. "What the hell Yuko!" Shouted Tomochin a little to loud catching Yuki's and Tomomi's attention. She mentally curses herself before being took by the collar and pulled out of the bushes. "Mayu was right you do like it rough Kashiwagi." Teased Tomochin pushing away Yuki's hand. "Look at that you crinkled my collar!" Screamed Tomochin her fashion diva self taking over. "Who cares your friend is going to break my friends heart." Said Yuki looking inside only to see Mayu and Rena having a lip lock session. "That is gross." Said Yuki going inside the 'restaurant' and before Tomochin could stop her Tomomi stood in her way.

"Finally the quiet little mouse comes out to play."

"I suppose that makes you the cat then."

"Hmmm I guess it does but then that makes you my prey."

Tomochin slowly steps foward a sly smile playing on her lips. With every step she takes Tomomi takes two back until finally hitting the wall. Tomochin places her left hand on Tomomi's waist and her right on the wall besides Tomomi's head trapping her. She edges her face foward slowly until finally their noses touch and their breath can be felt on eachothers lips.

"Don't resist." Whispers Tomomi and their lips touch.

TBC .........

A/N: I'm sorry that this has not been updated in so long. I have been ill with appendicitis plus my internet went down and a couple of things have happaned. I feel bad because at one point I lost interest in AKB and slowly I have began to gain intrest again but not as much as before so there will be updates but they will take a while. Next chapter you will find out what happaned when Yuki goes to Mayu and Rena and what happaned to Yuko. I'm sorry that its been a while and its short forgive me. Thanks for reading and please comment.

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #62 on: April 09, 2014, 01:21:13 PM »
Oh my god robyn your back! :shocked

XD im happy that your writing again...
Wooohooo :on gay:

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #63 on: April 09, 2014, 03:35:16 PM »
please more update!!  :tantrum:

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #64 on: April 09, 2014, 03:55:04 PM »
You will continue this fic  :on gay: :on gay: :on woohoo: :on woohoo: :farofflook: :farofflook: :onioncheer: :onioncheer:

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #65 on: April 09, 2014, 04:44:39 PM »
Lol Yuko is cute getting annoyed about her films and wonder what is going to happen in the chapter with their lips basically touching and lol its nmy pleasure to proof read :p update soon

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #66 on: April 09, 2014, 04:45:35 PM »
Good to see that this fic will be continued :)
I wanna see Yuki's reactions with Mayu annoying her a lot !

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #67 on: April 09, 2014, 04:47:44 PM »
Welcome back!! :twothumbs  :twothumbs

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #68 on: April 09, 2014, 05:10:59 PM »
uwahh i've been waiting for this~~~

lip lock session huh uwahhh  ~!! >///<


mayu and rena kissing wahh~~ >//<

my brains gonna explode


update!!!!!!
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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #69 on: April 09, 2014, 06:14:13 PM »
I haven't done anything in H!P for a while although I need to find time to write out an OS soon :nervous

Kasai took advantage of a prime situation :nervous
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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #70 on: April 10, 2014, 04:35:38 AM »
Please update soon

Yuki is going to stop Mayu and Rena date


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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #71 on: April 10, 2014, 10:10:27 AM »
finally you update  :w00t:
thank robyn  :thumbsup

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Re: Playgirls 09/4/14 Chapter 4 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu) FINALLY UPDATED!
« Reply #72 on: April 10, 2014, 04:05:25 PM »
Playgirls
By XxRoByNxX78

Chapter 5

It was all going perfectly fine. The date was going well. The girl was falling for me at record speed. Then it all had to end because of an annoying pest that goes by the name of Kashiwagi Yuki. She just had to come in and interrupt the kiss. Her huge screaching voice flying across the room shocking myself and her cousin. Then before I knew it I was on the floor because that idiot took hold of me by my shirt and thrown me down onto the floor shouting "Get off of my cousin!" this girls hobby must be making my life a living hell. I dont bother to sit up I just stay lieing on the ground looking up to the ceiling rolling my eyes. An argument breaks out and I decide it better not to get involved because I have learned from past experiences never to get involved an a girls fight especially when the reason they are fighting is because of you. I wait until the argument dies down and stand up trying not to bring attention to myself so that I can sneak out but much to my disappointment a hand wraps around my wrist and pulls me back. "And where do you think you are going?" Asks Kashiwagi but I dont answer I just pull my wrist out from her grip and turn on my heel to face her. "Tell me when did you fall for me?" I ask ignoring her question turning the conversation on her. "Excuse me." She says glaring at me but I stay with my usual blank face uneffected by it.

"Well you always seem to follow me you constantly tease me you interrupt my dates tell me are you jealous do you wish the girl I am with is you?" I question a smile playing on my lips and in the corner of my eye I see Rena looking at Kashiwagi intensely. Kashiwagi looks shocked by my question but soon stands her ground and answers back "I only do that because people like you break hearts people like you dont know the pain you cause and people like you have never been loved in your life I do not wish to love someone or something like you because you are just scum." I feel anger raging deep inside my body so strong that as much as I try to hold my tounge I can feel myself slowly losing control. The just as I am about to open my mouth Rena beats me to it. "You cant speak to her like that you have know idea what she has been through in life you dont even truly know her you are judging her off an image that people make up." Though I am suprised by this outburst and a little thankful because I am sure I would have said alot worse I all can think is how stupid this girl is. She doesnt know that she is just another toy. One that will be played with once or twice until thrown away broken. Kashiwagi has got me just right. she knows I am heartless hell she would even go as far to say I have no soul but the girl wasnt stupid. Well she is but not in the sense of being played by a player she knew what she was doing. Just like I did.

"This is the first time you have met her! You dont know her!" Shouted Kashiwagi and I cant help but think that if this was a cartoon she would have steam coming out from her ears. Sensing the argument would get bigger however I decide to take my leave walking to the door saying  "Call me when you dont need a babysitter." then I leave seeing something that I was not expecting on the other side of the door.

There stood Tomochin and Kasai in a heated kissing session. I try my best not to make a noise because once I see their eyes closed I instantly pop up behind Tomochin tapping her shoulder. "Come on." I say pulling her away from Kasai. She turns to face me and gives me a small glare but complies and follows me but not before leaving Kasai with another kiss saying "And here I thought you would be harder to get." she walks beside me a small smirk on her face. We do not exchange words we just go to look for Yuko.

I let Tomochin take the lead since she knows where Yuko went but just as we are about to turn we heard moaning. The two of us look at eachother curiously then just as we go to turn I stop in my tracks. "You first." I said staying still in my spot. "Why?" inquires Tomochin a slight tone on annoyance in her voice. "I am the youngest here you are meant to be my older sister what if I see something that ruins my innoncene." I explain leaning back against the wall. "Innocence and you since when did they go in the same sentence." Retorted Tomochin teasingly but turns the corner anyway and soon enough I hear a roar of laughter. Slowly I pop my head around the corner and for once a smile spreads on my face and I start to to chuckle. This had to be the best thing ever. There Yuko was handcuffed to one of the pipes attached to the building with a piece of cloth in her mouth and a sticky note on her forehead reading:

Stupid pervert

We dont question how it happaned instead Tomochin and I just stand there in fascination. Not wasting anytime I take my phone from my jacket pocket and take a quick picture then upload it onto facebook making sure to caption the image pervert got caught and tag Tomochin and Yuko init but it seems someone beat me to it.

Maeda Atsuko
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Tagged: Oshima Yuko, Itano Tomomi, Watanabe Mayu, Kashiwagi Yuki and Kasai Tomomi
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I stand there and laugh then realise we still havnt got Yuko uncuffed and still have not removed the cloth in her mouth. I remove the cloth from her mouth then before she can speak I place my finger over her lips. "Where is the key?" I ask and she lets out a small huff then shouts with anger "That Maeda took it." she answers and once I again I begin to laugh. I have to give that Maeda props this was pretty funny its the most I have laughed in a long time.

"I guess we should just leave her here."

"Agreed bye Yuko."

"Dont leave!"

"There is no key so bye!"

"Serves you right for being a pervert."

"How do you know I was being a pervert?"

"Yuko you are the biggest perv out of the three of us of."

"Okay granted but I didnt do anything this time."

"Oh really."

"Really so Maeda is lying in her comment when she says the pervert got caught by me when she started taking pictures under my skirt so I broke her phone and cuffed her to the pipe."

"Yup."

"Do not believe you but atleast that explains why your phone is in two bits anyway bye Yuko."

"WAITTTTTTTT!"

TBC ...........

A/N: So I am trying to update again to make up for the fact it took so long to update but thank you all for your comments and thankyou for reading and welcoming me back please comment to tell me what you think =) Sorry it is short again. Chapters will get longer but since I'm just starting this fic again please give me time =)
 
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@Adam: Films? And thanks for the comment also it obvious right lol

@Senelcar: Thanks for the comment and happy that you are glad the fic is being continued and do you like Yuki's reaction?
@Irgheto: Thanks for the comment and thanks for welcoming me back

@MayuxMatsuixMusic: Lol I updated as quick as I can thanks for the comment and yer plenty of lip lock sessions

@Kuro_808: Shame I loved your fics on H!P I might write one later =) care to join me? and thanks for the comment and lol yer i suppose she did

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Haha Yuko got handcuffed to the pipe for being a pervert sounds like you :p joke and by films I mean she got in a mood for her borrowing her films. Also why did thew cousin have to stop Rena kissing :( update soon!

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XD  Dammit Yuko and being handcuffed.  Geez too many broken up kisses.

Well I have a OS up ahead but I know that my fics in AKB is selective among the readers :nervous
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Poor Yuko

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Update soon

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TomoTomo :luvluv1:

And poor Yuko, I laugh so much when I read this part

I think Maeda's more pervet than yuko

Your fic is great  :on GJ:

More please

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This is great  :on GJ:
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Yuko is the best haha :lol: :lol:

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