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The Devil Lady - chapter 1 [WMatsui] 04/04/2013
« on: March 30, 2013, 03:17:53 AM »


DEVIL LADY

Prologue

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In a very cold alley, there was a naked girl lying in the ground, she only starring at the sky particular in the full moon.

Suddenly, there are four drunken men that saw the girl and immediately went to her.

“Oh! Were lucky! Guys! Look!” One of the man said with long hair

“Let’s go! This will be fun!” The other one said with no hair in the head

They grab the naked girl who didn’t either struggling to them and they only happy for that because they don’t have a problem to rape the poor girl. When the third man will suck the girl’s nipple someone kick him in his precious thing between his thigh.
“Arghh! Who the hell do that to me?!” He said in an angry voice and touch his pants

“I do it! Is there a problem?!” The tall girl said and smirked

“Oh! Another Babe! We were lucky today!”

“You wished” She said and attack the four men. She jumped and punch the guy who have a long hair and she grab the hair and twist it. She do the same to the other three men.

After a few minutes, the four unconsciously lying in the ground with a deep bruises in their ugly faces and body.

“Tsk. So weak....” She murmured and look at the girl with have no emotion in her face.

“Stand up” She said annoyed and she didn’t realized that the girl was naked and she blushed at that sighted and she immediately took his cardigan jacket and gave to the girl

“Here” She said blushingly. She can tell that this girl have a beautiful face that look like an angel and have delectable body.

“What’s your name? Where’s your house? I will escort you.” She said but it seems the girl will not answer her

“Answer me!”

“M-a-s-t-e-r.....” Finally she talked

“W-what?!” She angrily confused to this pretty weird girl

“Thank you! Your alive!” The girl said and to my horror she embrace me and I can feel her soft body and two soft mounds?

W-What?! Arghh! I hate myself for being a big pervert! I think I should limit joining the oshiri sister. I only sighed and to my horror again, she passed out! I realized now that she is bleeding! For Pete’s sake! What I am going to do to her?!


TBC....

« Last Edit: October 24, 2017, 02:29:46 PM by sophcaro »
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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2013, 07:15:17 AM »
hello! :hand:

woaw, an interesting prologue. :)

i guess the girl who beat those guy is jurina and the other girl is rena right?

i really love this pairing, they are my favourite. :wub:

please update soon, i can't wait to know what will happen next  :bow:

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2013, 09:08:13 AM »
............

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS

I LOVE THIS

OOOOOHHH JURINA SO COOL

OMGOMGOGMOG GAAH

SO INTERESTING <3

i'll be waiting for an update, can't wait :DDD

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2013, 04:41:12 PM »
Great new story you have there....

The naked girl is Rena and the rescuer is Jurina...

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely Prologue

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #4 on: March 31, 2013, 06:48:58 AM »
Great new story you have there....

The naked girl is Rena and the rescuer is Jurina...

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely Prologue

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yeah! I think that!

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2013, 07:42:37 AM »
Devil Lady



A/N: Hi. Thank you for the comments. I really appreciate it. Thank you also for the readers who gave a review
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Chapter 1

“Who’s that naked girl you lift in bridal style?” Yuko asked

“I think, another girlfriend of her” Mayu answered

“Both of you, shut up! If you just helping me instead of annoying me by your naughty rumours”

“Oh, our little puppy here is in a bad mood!” a girl who look alike a squirrel said to a girl who is have a cyborg face

“We should give them a Oshiri Hug!” The two squealed in delight while Jurina eye’s twitching

*Smack

*Slap

“Ah! Blackirin! It hurts!”

“Ah! Nyan-nyan! Why did you slap me? It’s better if you smacked me!”

*Smack

“Ouch! It’s really hurts Nyan-nyan” Yuko pout

“How is she, Jurina?” Black asked

“She’s bleeding....” Jurina answered sadly


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Three Days After...

“Hmm...” moaned the naked girl

“Eh? Is she a pervert?” Jurina thought

“Torigoya-san!” Jurina shouted

“What is it?”

“Eh? She... moaned?” Jurina said as she blushed

“REALLY?” The Oshiri said as their eyes are sparkling

“Oh no! Black! Come here!” Torigoya shout

“She have a tremendous fever...”

“We need to get an antidote at that virus before it’s too late” Black said as she go outside in a very fast way

“But Torigoya-san, is her fever is a bit common? Why are you are being in panicked state?” jurina asked curiously

“No, it’s not a simple fever” Torigoya said

“Eh? What was that? Tell me!”

“I will tell you later but for now, you get a chain. Hurry!”

“U-Uh okay” Jurina hurriedly run to the basement

“Mayu, I want you to check the data in our computer. Okay?”

“Yuko, help me to chained her”

“Roger that”

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After 10 minutes that they chained the girl. They surround the girl and when the girl opened her eyes. It was her turning into a beast?! What the---

“Mayu. Electric shock! The antidote seems no effect in a very fast way”

“Arghhh!” Sounds of the Electric shock

“Hey! Guys! Stop that! She’s badly hurt and we just torture her?!” Jurina shouted frustrated and the electric shock turns off by Mayu

“You don’t understand, Jurina she’s a---“ Haruna got cut off when she is send flying and her body went to the wall that is now broken and the three
frozen by their spot when they saw the pale girl who transformed like a beast. She have a two horns in her head, her claws are sharp and long, her arms got a hair and her face got two red lines and she is barely naked but she have a muscle in every part of her body

“Nyan-Nyan!” Yuko shouted and she gets really mad. No one hurt her beloved Nyan-Nyan and she run towards the beast so fast and she punched it
but it seemed the beast can’t feel anything instead she let a growl and punched Yuko in the stomach and send her flying to the ground

“Yuko-san!” I shouted

“Mayu”

“Yuki”

“Let’s go!” The two in charge but they also send flying in the ground and the only left is me

“GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

“Hey! Stop it! We help you so you don’t have right to hurt my friends like that!” I shouted while my both fist is clenching. I got angry and take charge of her. I punched her to the spot where she have been stabbed and she growl and send me flying but I didn’t hit the ground because I draw my sword to the ground but my breath becoming heavy. I can hear her growl again but it looks like she turn in to her human form. I saw again her beautiful body but in her right corner of her stomach seems bleeding and I got suddenly felt guilty and before she collapsed I caught her.

“How is she?” Yuko asked me while she lift Haruna in a bridal way and Mayu also did it to blushing Yuki

“I don’t know” I answered sadly

“We should call Mariko-sama to treat her”

“Okay and were heading to our infirmary room

--
“What's your name?” I asked as she happily ate the fourth melon pan I gave to her. Do you asked why I know she likes melon pan? I will give you an answer. Firsts, Yuki eat it while she is in the room with this girl and when she saw it, she gave us a very angelic pleading eyes that no one can resists and so we decided to give her melon pan but the problem is, she didn’t eat anything except for the sweet melon pan. When I try to snatch it from her, she moves very fast, she is faster than Yuki was. And the scary thing is, she give me a damn looked

“DON’T YOU DARE SNATCH MY MELON PAN OR YOU WILL MEET HELL IN A SECOND”

I immediately surrender when I waved my two hands in front of her and I say nervously that I will do it again. It seems that she calmed down and she’s smiling beautifully and happy eating her damn sweet melon pan and the Oshiri sister are laughing at me

"Can you talked?" Torigoya asked the girl and the girl nodded in a cute way

"So, what's is your name?" Yukirin asked

"Gekikara" the girl answered

"Eh? Spicy?" the five of us asked her

"Why? I like spicy foods and also sweet foods"

“Ah, okay” I answered and she resumed eating

“Gekikara” I consciously said and smiled at that thought and I gazed at her

--

“It seems, our little puppy found her puppy love” Mariko-sama said while grinning evilly

“The Oshiri are both definitely agree with you!” Oshiri sister said and pose

“But we also need to control her, right. Sado-san?” Torigoya asked

“Yes, Torigoya. We need her to save the humanity”



TBC...



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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2013, 10:19:05 AM »
woah! o:

Rena transformation in demon form so cool!

LOL, omg Oshiri sister are so perverted i die of laughter xD

nice chapter!

Thanks for the update !

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #7 on: April 04, 2013, 10:58:34 AM »
dish is shooow cute~

Rena eating melonpans *cries in a corner* THIS IS SOOOO CUTE, I CAN'T ANYMORE!!!

*hugs Rena to death* *fangirls to death* *rolls on the floor*

And just the image of Rena watching Yuki eating melonpan makes me wanna hug her forever!!

Nyaaaan~!! *takes out a melonpan and gives it to Rena* *pats Rena*

Nice update *thumbs up*

Update soon~

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2013, 04:52:36 PM »
Rena and her changes really interest me

Melon pan and her love for it :lol: :lol:
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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #9 on: April 05, 2013, 05:28:34 AM »
Wah... interesting.. like a mix of MG but not really....

Just the naming probably....

Ah... Rena is a devil... and they need her to save humanity...

Interesting concept...

Wondering what's going to happen next

Thank you for the lovely update

Can't wait to find out more

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #10 on: April 21, 2013, 06:23:51 PM »
whew~~ Geki is soo KAWAII~~
Melon-pan~~~~~
Mayuyu and Yuko OShiri Sisters!!

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #11 on: May 03, 2013, 11:52:54 AM »
Update please, I wanna know what going to happen next :)
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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #12 on: August 29, 2013, 12:49:24 AM »
This fic is so cool  :hee:

how they will control gekikara  :dunno:

please continue  :onioncheer:

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2013, 02:18:20 AM »
Please continue the story please....

Can't wait to find out the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #14 on: August 29, 2013, 03:28:40 AM »
Ah a Wmatsui fic. Nice  :)
Loving it already. Especially Gekikara mode

Please continue and stay awesome  8)

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #15 on: August 08, 2015, 06:45:57 AM »
Why  didn't you continue!!!

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #16 on: August 08, 2015, 10:20:51 AM »
This gonna be interesting!^o^/

I'll wait for the update, author-san~
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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #17 on: August 08, 2015, 11:41:00 AM »
Ara ara, Gekikara saving the world?
This I gotta see
Thank you for the chapter, author-san~ ^^

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #18 on: August 08, 2015, 03:56:06 PM »
it's really interesting!! i love it ♡♡♡

please continue this story!!

give me MORE WMATSUI!!!!

i'm dying here!!!
☆LIVING IN DREAMLAND WITH PAPA JURINA AND MAMA RENA☆

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Re: The Devil Lady [WMatsui]
« Reply #19 on: August 29, 2015, 01:24:47 PM »
your idea of Rena san so interesting. Innocent but dangerous (beast) in the same time.
MaYuki part I'm very not enjoy it.. Sorry I'm SaeYuki fans actually.. Keep writing.

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