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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #40 on: April 18, 2013, 08:02:02 PM »
Ano,, are this supose to be saerenamayuki fic right? O_ O me got confuse.. First, rena and yuki tell about writer life, then change to yankee ones.. .-. Hemm are this really are saerenamayuki fic? Hemm.. Hontouni gomenasai :bow:

yup, it's the same. You see, Rena was just friends with Sae and she had no interest in the drama which happened between Sae and Mayu, just to the extent where she felt Sae was hurt and she wanted things to get better. While she cared a lot mostly about Yuki. In this story I think we need Sae's and Yuki's points of view so to understand the story... We're still waiting for collaborating authors to update...
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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #41 on: April 18, 2013, 08:17:13 PM »
^umm.......uhhh.....Do I have any saying in this actually? You know I only told you Rukaeru 'you can post anything you want' just cuz you made me very mad. And when was I actually asked....?......*sigh* what ever, post what you want.....Ill go back to my soft sheel.......Can't wait to read them then
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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #42 on: April 18, 2013, 08:19:33 PM »
^umm.......uhhh.....Do I have any saying in this actually? You know I only told you Rukaeru 'you can post anything you want' just cuz you made me very mad. And when was I actually asked....?......*sigh* what ever, post what you want.....Ill go back to my soft sheel.......Can't wait to read them then

I think it's okay for her to post coz then people will get clearer view of this, nee?
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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #43 on: April 18, 2013, 08:24:30 PM »
^ it feels like you are using my own words on myself but whatever. Ok, they can post them. I'll be waiting to read them.
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

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Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #44 on: April 19, 2013, 01:21:05 PM »
I want mayu pov~ then sae~ lastly yuki pov~

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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #45 on: April 19, 2013, 01:50:20 PM »
I'm weird

Yuki's POV

I'm weird. I'm weird and that's all I am. I'm nothing special but I'm not a total loser. I'm just weird. One of the many things about being weird is that you see a lot of interesting things and a lot of interesting people. You also do things that most people wouldn't do. For example, somehow along the way I started to write fanfiction. I don't know how but I found it interesting when I came across some fics that I liked. After a while I decided to write and I found it really fun. I was happy just being a simple writer writing whatever came to my crazy mind. Soon after though I started branching out to other authors. My first friends were Takamina and Acchan and I was really nervous at first but after a while I got used to them. However there was one thing about me they didn't know. I wasn't actually who I was.

I lied about my identity when I signed up for the fanfic account. I was afraid I'd meet creeps on the internet so I wanted to stay hidden. There were times where Takamina and Acchan wanted to know what I looked like and I just showed them a pic of someone else and not the real me. I had gotten used to lying and it was something that I had done for years. I could look at someone straight in the eyes and lie to them and not care at all. Then one day I wanted to write a fic with someone else. I found someone who I thought would be the perfect partner so I contacted them and we started a fic.

When we weren't writing we were getting to know each other. Of course I told her the fake me and surprisingly she told me her real self. Her name was Mayu and she was around my age at the time. We had a lot of things in common and I thought it was really cool. As time went by and the more time we spent together I found myself becoming attracted to Mayu. There was something about her that made my heart race and body tense. I had the strongest urges to hug her and kiss her and never let her go. I always wanted to be by her side and let no one else have her.

One day I finally decided to tell her the truth about who I really was. I was afraid that she would hate me and I told her if she did it was fine. I told her I would leave but she told me to stay. I was really shocked but she said it was ok and understood why I lied about my identity. Ever since then things were fine and we even became an official couple. 

Being with Mayu was something new to me. I had never been in any previous relationships so she was my first love. It was really something special and I thought we had a really strong connection. We would laugh and tease each other and do all kinds of fun things. We would tell stories of what we would do when we're older and together. Mayu would always tease me and sometimes be a major pervert. I would always blush and just wonder how she could be so cheeky with that grin on her face. Mayu was a baka to me but I loved her and she was my baka.

There was a time where Mayu and I wanted to separate and so we did. The alone time hurt me a lot because well I think I'm the type of person who likes to cling on to someone. I become needy and when the person leaves I get desperate. Flash backs of my past reminded me of how lonely I truly was and I didn't really deserve someone like Mayu who still accepted me even after the lie. When we got back together things were back to normal and I was happy. Then one day Takamina asked us to join a group gathering of all the writers. Mayu and I attended and we had lots of fun. There were a lot of people I never knew existed until I went to the gathering. There were two people though that stuck out among all the writers. Little did I know that these two would change my life forever.

Sae was one of the writers I met and she was an interesting person. Tough and funny like a tomboy and I really liked her. She was a down to Earth girl and was really fun to hang around. She was always there to listen to you if you ever had any problems and would give you helpful advice that I've used countless times. Then there was another one named Rena. Rena was really something else. At first she liked fighting a lot and I did too so me and her fought a lot in the most bloodiest battles ever! Then when we sat down and actually talked, I found Rena to be a really sweet and caring girl. She took a lot of interest in me and I liked her but as a friend. I mean I had Mayu and that's all I needed because Mayu was everything to me.

Mayu and I broke up again and it was at that time that things started to change. Sae, Rena, Mayu and I all met up in out own little chat. Things started to get interesting when I saw Sae and Mayu go play off. I wanted to go after them because I felt jealousy towards Sae. No one touches my Mayu but me! However I couldn't do anything so I went with Rena and believe it or not the girl is actually quite fun to be with. We had lots of fun and I found myself growing closer to her but I still belonged to Mayu. My heart was only for her and I wasn't going to let anyone else take it. I may sound cheesy or crazy but hey I was in love what else do you expect? People do crazy things when they're in love. For example I had a special necklace made that said,

 "Property of Mayu."

I wore it everyday showing to everyone that I belonged to Mayu only and she was very happy with that. I was happy as well being with Mayu because we got along great and even though we had our fights, we still managed to solve it and get back together. We got back together and I told Rena I couldn't be with her. She was sad but understood and left me alone. Rena was gone but I noticed that Mayu was still talking to Sae. Inside I was just boiling ready to explode and both of them but my personality wouldn't let me and I had to keep it inside. Holding it in isn't good but it's better than exploding and hurting than others.

As time went on though we felt that things weren't going well. Whenever we talked we had awkward chats and or we got into fights. Neither one of us liked it so we decided to end it once and for all. It's been a long time and we've been apart ever since then and I've moved on. I've been single now and I like it that way. I've been going around seeing other people and making new friends. I was actually pretty happy and I like it the way things are. Every once in a while I talk to Sae and Rena and we still have fun. I even started talking to Mayu for once and we had a normal chat. I was good hearing from her and knowing things were well. She's struggling with school so I told her to work hard and I hope she does.

Now I'm happy where I am. I'm smiling more and laughing more. I've been getting more involved with the people around me and I've learned to balance between friends and family. Things are good this way and I think it's really nice that we've come to this peaceful conclusion. There are some who still hang on but they are slowly letting go as well. Sae told me she's found someone else and has moved on and I'm happy for her. Rena has also moved on and decided to stay out of all the drama and move on with her life. I was happy to hear the two were doing fine and it was good to chat with them.

If one were too look at our story, there would be many things they would see. They would see the laughs and good times we had. The sorrows and pains as well. There were times where we were falling and things were collapsing and there were times where we all felt like and actual family there for one another in times of sadness or anger. Even though we are apart, we will always be there for each other and that is what I admire about them. Through the hardest and darkest times, we managed to get through them and now we're just left with the scraps. What happened in the past stays in the past and talking about only brings back painful memories. There is a brighter light now and I think it's going to stay there as long as we all keep moving forward.   

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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #46 on: April 19, 2013, 02:04:08 PM »
Is it me or Yuki's POV is clearly showing Yuki ignores/is not ready to accept Rena's feelings towards her?
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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #47 on: April 19, 2013, 02:15:35 PM »
^ maybe Yuki didn't want to talk about Rena for she felt she didn't want to say everything? Not every little detail has to be mention you know?

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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #48 on: April 19, 2013, 02:21:40 PM »
^ maybe Yuki didn't want to talk about Rena for she felt she didn't want to say everything? Not every little detail has to be mention you know?


oh, I see now what you did here :grin:

Good move indeed  :twothumbs
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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #49 on: April 19, 2013, 02:27:00 PM »
I dunno.. But me cryin' for real .-. Waiting sae pov~

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Re: Truth - Rena's POV Then I realized -Mayu's POV
« Reply #50 on: April 19, 2013, 03:56:08 PM »
^ You wrote it exactly the way we all imagined it!!! It is so good!!

Thank you, Ruka!!!  :deco:
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« Reply #51 on: April 19, 2013, 05:10:23 PM »
That's it, how the world spins round and round.



                                                                  Because every end has a new beggining, when you close a door, you open another one




In this 'teather' we all play a fictional character. May it be in our family, in games, in stories. They all can be named a play. Only the strong survive? That was never completly true.


In this strange love story, one opened the door, and others followed after.

It was a beggining, it had been something different from all we had experienced before for us all. And we all had a different end.

We might have started because we wanted a friend, someone would accept us with everything, and we might have ended happy with our life changing. We might be happy, strong and we will thank for all that had happened, and to everyone that was with us. (Yuki)

We might have seen it as an interesting drama, but we might have not changed that much. Love might have bloomed inside us and now that become our stregth and happiness. (Rena)

We might have been hurt again and again and again. We might have fallen in wrong with the wrong person in the wrong time but we can move on happy now.We might have become stronger. (Sae)

But some....some of us aren't the same. Some of us might regret it with everything, feeling guilt, hate and disgust. We might have wanted all of it to never happen but now we can't change the past even if we really could. Something like 'I wish I never meet you then...' Its such an old and boring phrase.

Some might live in this memory after a lot of years. Because some of us don't accept reality, or we don't accept ourself. But that's just life, it all moves round and round.

And because I can't change myself back, because I can't forget anything from all that happened. Because I am too weak, because I despite you all a little, all of you that are reading this.

I smirk at this, because now you might feel a little more freaked out.

But that's just me, because this is who I am.

You all have seen a teather in this, but someone, somewhere might have actually lived this. And because of that, someone like me might exist.

And if someone like me exists, you better keep your eyes open. Don't lets anyone in so easy, and if you do then take good, really good care of that person, so it wont become me.

Some of us change, some don't.

Some leave the teather, some don't.

Some are happy, some may regret it every time they will remember it.

Because this is what love is, this is what life is.

You all can leave the teather, both spectators and the ones playing.

We all have a different way of seeing all stories and everything. Never doubt the other's way of seeing, it is true from where he/she sits.
Whatever it is. Life goes on, the earth is moving.

                                                                                    Thank you .
« Last Edit: April 19, 2013, 05:18:01 PM by yuukimoko »
“If you don’t go after what you want, you’ll never have it. If you don’t ask, the answer is always no.”

I'm glad I'm not popular.I'm already a bitch, no need to make my ego bigger.

You were always my favorite, no one loved me as much as you did.-Alison DiLaurentis.

Your first kiss isnt always the first person you kiss, or the first person you date.Your first love is the person that you will always compare everyone to.The person that you will never truly get over, even when you have convinced yourself that you have moved on.

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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #52 on: April 20, 2013, 03:07:12 AM »
...i'm bad at commenting on sad emotional fanfics....
this was really good.....
i feel really sad about Mayuyu.....
crying...... crying lots today.......
............well, it's actually a bit hard on my eyes
when I read with my laptop...
but if I read with my DSi
I can't comment

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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #53 on: April 20, 2013, 10:36:49 PM »
I love this fic!! although it's a little sad but still!  :lol:
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Can't wait for more!!!  XD


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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #54 on: April 21, 2013, 01:30:05 AM »
Waw! Now I know the truth behind it, so Sae and Yuki are in love with Mayu right? And Rena loves Yuki. Looks like Mayu and Yuki are cheating at the same time, but correct me if I'm wrong, Yuki seems know about Mayu and Sae but Mayu doesn't know about Yuki and Rena. Quite interesting here. And Sae found new lovely friend Sayaka and seems want to move on. I can tell that Sayaka actually really loves Sae and same with Sae that slowly is falling in love with Sayaka. Please continue more, I really like this story. I agree it's sad, but I want to know more about Sae with Sayaka and Yuki stories. Same with Mayu and Rena stories. Yuki and Sae love story are so .... I don't know how to describe here, both of it is so sweet, except Sae love story because she's been tricked/lied by Mayu. Poor Sae. By the way, it's really good story here..  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #55 on: April 21, 2013, 01:44:54 AM »
Great story....bittersweet and dark, but in a good way  8). Why is Mayu so manipulative? Its as if she enjoys hurting other but yet doesn't. She doesn't seem to know what she really wants (except for Yuki...somewhat)  :frustrated:. I feel soooo bad for Sae in the last POV chapter. She wears her heart on her sleeve and gets hurt way too easily :farofflook:. Well can't wait for the next update you got me really hooked :hee:!


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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #56 on: April 21, 2013, 02:19:37 AM »
I love that saemayu pict <3 somehow now i like saemayu than saeyuki.. /dunnodunno/ x3 but, in the end i love sae with everyone.. Becoz she's my kami oshi, my inspirator, and also my buddies (onmydaydream) xD want to see another update from this.. ^^ hope you glad to make it another one.. Thanks.. :bow: you all 4 are greats author for me :)

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Re: I'm weird- Yuki's POV Friends or lovers?- Sae's POV
« Reply #57 on: April 21, 2013, 05:29:22 PM »
NO!!! BECAUSE IM THE WEIRD ONE HERE~

MAYU,YUKI,SAE,RENA AND OTHE DOESN'T WEIRD,BU IM! BECAUSE  I LOVE THEM SOO SOO SOOOO MUCH AND ALL THE FIC AND THE AUTHOR IN THIS FORUM

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Re: Love problems! Yuki,Mayu,Sae,Rena'POV!DISCONTINUED
« Reply #58 on: April 22, 2013, 04:20:38 PM »
I think it will be interesting

please update more
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