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I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« on: August 19, 2012, 02:55:31 PM »
Hey Guys!!!.... I'm one of those readers who sometimes comment but can't write.... :nervous
so I decided to give it a Try... umm... this is My First Fanfic and of course it's Atsumina!!w/ some Kojiyuu...  :)
umm.. this is based of a Manga that i am currently reading so... yeah... :nervous
well enough of this stuff and here's a Prologue!!:

*No one's POV*

"At 13 yrs. old we met and fell in love
 
                 
                                                                   
                                                                  "At 15 yrs. old we Parted ways..."



                                                                                                                                "At 17 yrs. old I'm still looking for you..."


                                                                    "I miss you...Atsuko...."
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2013, 03:44:25 PM »
Oh I forgot...
Hope u guys could leave a comment...
i'm still not sure if I should continue this...
hehehehehe  :nervous
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2013, 03:47:38 PM »
only 4 lines and sounds good! I want to know more >w< I think you should try posting one cap :D

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2013, 03:54:38 PM »
continue :w00t:

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #4 on: April 22, 2013, 03:55:58 PM »
Yeay Atsumina

It really looks interesting
Pls. Continue

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2013, 05:09:28 PM »
 :cow: :cow:
Yay! Thats the magic word `Atsuko
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Thank you
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #6 on: April 22, 2013, 05:46:15 PM »
Go go go continue!!!

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #7 on: April 22, 2013, 06:39:10 PM »
 :welcome 7sam14
Me personally wants you to continue your story..
Looking forward on this  ;)

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2013, 10:25:35 AM »
Hey guys!!!
I'm sorry if this is not what you expected but...yeah...
Thanks for all the comments guys...I Appreciate it...
@Rukaeru: I never knew about that Rule!!!
anyway here's the First chap.!

Chapter 1

Takahashi Residence

        "Listen Hikaru...

                           Promise me you won't laugh and would just listen to what I say...Okay?"
 
                                                       "Even If I was to be Reborn...

                                                                                        I'll once again fall in Love with you"

                                                                                                            "I Love You...!!"                         

"Those Lines are so lame!!" Kai said "Why don't we just watch some sports or news?!" kai took the remote and started changing the channel...

"Oi!! Kai wait!! this is the most exciting part of the drama!!

"eh? this drama is so boring!!"

"Don't just change the channel without asking!!"

"Hey honey...Kai... please calm down..."

Outside the House

"They're arguing over changing the channel again...?"

"The Takahashi family really is noisy!"

The following Morning Kai's POV*

"I'm Leaving now!" Kai left with his Basketball in hand

The Name is Takahashi Kai,13 yrs. old,only son of the Takahashi Family, and will be attending 1st year of Junior High School...
Kai then saw a girl surrounded by a bunch of guys in the corner....

"Hey,wait a minute...isn't that..."

"I said...I'm going to the school's welcoming ceremony.."

Her name is Kojima Haruna, She's my Childhood friend

"Just forget about it, and just skip it and hang out with us instead we'll have lot's of fun" one of the guys said

"So unexpected...I never thought guys would actually be interested in you..." I said as i went in front of Haruna

"Kai?!" she said "She might look pretty and all, but she's an Airhead...and sometimes uses violence...You should just give up on her already..."

"Wait, What?! Kai your the one that resorts to violence!"

"No! your even worse than me!" "Don't You dare MIDGET!" "Ah! Stop Calling me a  Midget!!"

"Stop Ignoring our presence! Go to Hell Midget!!" the guy said as he was going to punch Kai in the face

but before he could even lay a hand on him, Kai started to dribble his ball and ran around the guys who were harassing Haruna

"heh... you better not mess around with a Midget!" "Hah! Slam Dunk, Slam dunk, and again Slam dunk" Kai said as he started hitting them with his ball hard on the head. "Damn this Midget!" "Don't call me a Midget!!"

5 minutes Later... the guys tried to catch up with him but got tired and fell to the ground

"Eh? Out of stamina already?" "of course they can't catch up with you, after all I did help you with all that speed and such..."

"Wrong! it's because i'm talented in sports!" "Hai~, Hai~"

"It's already this late!? If we don't hurry we'll be late" "Eh?"

"Come on, hop on my back, i'll give you a piggy back ride, we'll be faster this way" "O-o-okay" O//////O

"alright here we go~~..." "really...to think that I had to take care of you like my younger brother.. but now your so..."

"did you say something Haruna?" "ah!...N-n-nothing Kai" O//////O

At School

"Yo, Kai!! You didn't change at all!! your still so short!! Hahahahaha!!" "Shut Up!!"

"Did you check the Bulletin board? we're all in the same class!!" "Really?, Awesome!" "What's better is that we're in the same class as Haruna-chan, so Lucky!!"

"Kojima Haruna, She's so pretty! she's the prettiest among all the girls in the 1st year batch!" "She's a beauty and has such a carefree attitude. she was so popular with both boys and girls in our old school."

"It's way too unfair that your her Childhood friend, Kai!!" "Eh?, but she's just like a big sister to me!"

*Screech* what?...There's a Rolls Royce parked in the front of the school gate?

"Look over there- Kyaa~~!! It's Oshima Yuu-Kun!!" all the fan girls said...

"Hmph...you girls are really cute...you should really stop screaming after seeing my Charming good Looks..."
 
"Kyaa~~!!! Oshima-Sama!!! So Kakoii!!!

"Who's that pitiful shorty fellow?"

"Oh, I know him. though he was from the neighbouring school, he's pretty famous here. Oshima yuu. He comes from a rich family. I even heard that his parents control this area. though he is really prideful, he excels in sports, pretty good actually, being able to get national awards."

"I can't stand this... although we are both Midgets why the heck are we so different?! Girls never been fussing around me like that?!"

-End POV-

At the Welcoming Ceremony

"First Year students congratulations on entering this school work hard in your studies and sports, treasure friendship and lead a wonderful high school life!"

"Aaah... as I thought...I'm the only one from my school who entered here. Will I be able to make friends?

Her name is Maeda Atsuko, 13 yrs. old. A Shy Person.

"Well at least I gotta try not to cause trouble for anyone, I'll try to get through this by keeping a low profile..." she thought as she passes by some students.

"Kyaa~~!! Oshima-sama!!" some girls surrounding a guy said.

"Kyaa!!" *thud* "Itai"

A girl bumped her and she fell to the ground and her books scattered...

"Hey, You should watch where your going, your just an ugly girl who wears glasses." the girl who bumped her said.

A guy then went in front of Atsuko and said " Hey, I saw what happened, It was you who wasn't watching where you were going! you should apologize to her!" The girl just looked at the ground and was silent.

"Oi! Midget! You should control what those girls do!" the guy said as he pointed at Oshima.

"Who do you think you are? It wasn't my fault that she got bumped and fell, and don't call me a Midget you Midget!" Oshima said

"The name is Takahashi Kai, 1st year class 4, My Deceased Grandmother said that Guys should Always be Gentle to Girls."

"I don't care what your Old Lady says, Midget!" "Don't call me a Midget!!" and then they started Fighting...

A teacher then came "Oi!!, you two, stop fighting!!  they then both stopped with both of then holding each others collar preparing to punch each other's face. They then separated, the girls taking care of Oshima while Kai was going to Atsuko's direction.

"Sigh...Boys..."Haruna said as she was she was walking towards Atsuko.

"Are you Okay?" Haruna gave a helping hand to Atsuko.

"H-h-hai, I-i-i'm sorry..."

Kai then noticed her books on the floor. "Eh? Is this book yours? Do you do Acting?, oh! I know this one... It's the same TV Drama my mom was watching yesterday... I never knew it had a novel..."

Atsuko then noticed this, got the book and ran away with a shade of pink on her face...

"eh?...Did I say something bad?" Kai was left Dumbfounded

Atsuko ended up running until she reached the Rooftop.

"Ah!Mou~~~...I'm such an Idiot. I'm so shy that I ran away without saying my thanks...that boy...even though he saved me..."

"Yesterdays drama, the lead actress did a great job in expressing her feelings... will I ever be able to...Act like that?..."

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"Where are you going, Kai?" "Heh....I'm going to explore the School for a bit..."

Kai then reached the Roof..."Whoa! they got a Huge Roof!"

"Listen Hikaru...

                           Promise me you won't laugh and would just listen to what I say...Okay?"
 
"Eh?...Isn't that the line from yesterdays drama?" Kai thought... he then saw Atsuko at the top...
                                                       
"Even If I was to be Reborn...

                           I'll once again fall in Love with you"

                                                                    "I Love You...!!!"

Whoa... She is a completely different person from the girl I just met a while ago... and compared to the lead actress in yesterdays drama..
                                                                               She's so much better and bright...

"The time we lost can't be brought back...

                             but if I'm allowed to. Then, I want to live together with you one more time...

                                                                     and forever and ever...I LOVE YOU!!"

She then turns around "I LOV- eh?,huh?"  O////////O

KYAA~~~~~!!!!!!!

"I'm Sorry, Did I scare you?"

You must be Kidding! how long has he been there? how could I possibly not know? this is so Embarrassing!! he's going to think I'm a weirdo! Atsuko thought

"Hey!" "huh?" Kai then took hold of Atsuko's shoulders "You're Amazing!!"

"eh?" "The one you performed is that one! It's yesterday drama series! I thought yesterdays drama was bring... but I was completely entranced by your performance!! I was able witness an acting style which is different from the lead actress..I'm incredibly touched!!" Kai then lifted Atsuko up. "YOU'RE A GENUIS!!!!"

Then a strong gust of wind blew Atsuko's skirt up in front of Kai...

KYAA~~~!!!!

Kai then let go f her, both of them had a shade of pink in their faces as they look away from each other...

What the hell am i doing?...I lifted her up because I was Over-excited...Kai thought

"W-w-well, I-i-i'm sorry!! i didn't see anything!" "I didn't see your Pink-colored panties with ribbons and even less , I'm not thinking like 'I'm so Lucky' or something like that".....

Darn it....what am I saying!!! kai thought

Atsuko just chuckled which made Kai confused

"Really...where on earth is Kai?" Haruna thought as she was walking down the Hallway...she then saw both of them through the window on the Rooftop. "Ah!...There he is...ah..." she then saw both of them Laughing and blushing madly....

"Damn it!...that Midget!! he really pisses me off!! How should I get my revenge?" Oshima thought as he was in the hallway. He then saw Haruna near the Window. "Ah..That girl...she should know where that Midget went..." Oshima thought.

"Hey! Yo-" He then saw Haruna teary Eyed staring outside the of the Window...

*Gulp* Dokki... Dokki... Dokki... Dokki...

What's going on.... What's this feeling.... I suddenly feel like my heart's racing and i can barely Breath...

And that was the beginning of two Unrequited Love.....


 -TBC- .....

sorry...if I kinda made the characters...not usually how they are...like Yuu being a bit mean....Kai not being that Tempered.... Atsuko being Mega Shy...and stuff....but if I didn't it would have destroyed the story so....  :nervous :nervous I'm REALLY SORYY!!!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow:
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2013, 12:09:12 PM »
Please countinue the story 7sam14-san  :onionwhip:
I really happy that you want to make suki ............... Into atsumina and kojiyuu ver   :kneelbow:

*ps : i'm too lazy to update the untitledfict

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2013, 05:24:55 AM »
ohhh...

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #11 on: April 24, 2013, 09:35:16 AM »
Ah... you update it at last...

I like your update

Thank you...

Can't wait to see the next chapter....

Yeah... Mendol characters...

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #12 on: April 24, 2013, 11:10:58 AM »
 :shocked
Ahhhh I think Nyan-nyan loves Kai  :(
but well Yuu is here  :cow:
And that stupid girl who bumped my Acchan  :tama-mad:

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Thanks for the update  :thumbsup
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #13 on: April 24, 2013, 02:04:56 PM »
Suteki!  :heart:

nice plot you got there..
and yeah my fave KaixAcchan

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"The Takahashi family really is noisy!"
Kinda true :3

Looking forward on the next update  :bow:

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #14 on: April 25, 2013, 10:15:44 AM »
the plot in this chapter sounds like the manga "Suki Desu Suzuki-kun" xD I love that manga <3 so I like this <3

thanks for the chapter :D

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #15 on: April 25, 2013, 11:01:10 AM »
Interesting chapter although I find it rather intriguing with the changes in size :nervous
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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #16 on: April 26, 2013, 02:26:40 PM »
I enjoyed reading this! Hope the next chapter will have more KojiYuu! :heart:

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #17 on: April 28, 2013, 11:24:53 PM »
Interesting, please update soon It's great :)

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Re: I Will Always Love You (Atsumina with some Kojiyuu)
« Reply #18 on: April 29, 2013, 12:28:54 PM »
UUUWAAAA!!! INTERESTING ~  :thumbsup :thumbsup

You should make more chapter of this~please continue :bow: :heart:
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