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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1]
« Reply #20 on: April 30, 2013, 10:48:34 AM »
Poor Sae XD

Jurina is a punching bag for her youth but WMatsui <3
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1]
« Reply #21 on: April 30, 2013, 01:55:35 PM »
taboo taBOO TABOOO  XD

Such an interesting story about "taboo" love

Rena had a 12 years old son  :( so their last meeting was 12 years ago, am I right?

Not a MJ fan but I love their relationship, two best friends pretend to be their lovers
But Rena knew it so how can she love Jurina???




I'm so glad that Rena's husband died  :lol:
Hope Natsu will like Jurina like his father...


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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1] + [Reply to Comment in Prologue]
« Reply #22 on: May 01, 2013, 05:35:23 AM »
Sisterly Complex [Reply to Comments] [Prologue]

A/N: Hello readers, I am so sorry for late reply in your comments in Prologue of Sisterly Complex. Here’s my reply. I hope you read it and like it. Thank You.

~SPECIAL MENTIONS~

@Mayuki_Daisuki: Thank you for loving the plot of my story :D I am really happy for that. Mayu here is so loveless, poor Mayuyu  :cry:

@Elo: Thank you for the review  :D I really appreciate it.

@Lost Heaven: Thank you for the comment. Yes it is WMatsui and slight JuriMayu :D Thanks also for the compliment. I really appreciate it.

@Cisda83: Thank you Cisda-san for the comment and review!  :D I am glad that you read my another new work. Hmm... Yes, Jurina’s books was based on her life.  Anyway, let’s what will happened.

@Dreamstalker: Thank you for reading and commenting :D

@DC2805: “what if mayu also has a sister and she loves her sister too? Complexity!!!   ” Thanks for the comment and I also smile on your comment!:D

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: Thanks for the nice comment. Jurina is a bit playgirl (hehe) She has a sexy pretend girlfriend and she has s damn pretty sister

@Qweakb: Thanks for comment. I think  Yuki is not blood related to Mayu! So it’s legal to have a relationship to yuki

@Kurosawa87:  Thanks for the nice review ;D

@KojiYuu44: Thanks for comment. It’s my first time to see you comment in my work. I am glad.

@Ryenagryu: Thanks for nice comment! :D It is WMatsui & MaYuki. My favourite pairing
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1] + [Reply to Comment in Prologue]
« Reply #23 on: May 01, 2013, 12:09:20 PM »
No prob :P

I hope you will update soon hehe

and I think we all want to know what happened between mayu and yuki

soooo updatee
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1] + [Reply to Comment in Prologue]
« Reply #24 on: May 01, 2013, 02:32:16 PM »
Erm... Mayu was looking for Rena for Jurina... wasn't she or she went and did it out of her own account?

AH... So Rena had a husband....

EH... what made Jurina thought of herself that low in regard to Rena's...?

What was the things that made them falling out anyway?

Ah... Rena always rejected Jurina's offer to go out because she was in a relationship that she did want to tell Jurina or something else?

Rena didn't seem to want to see Jurina at all... why?

And Why did Rena live in very not nice environment...when as Jurina said the husband was from a wealthy family?

Ah.. Poor Yuki... losing Mayu... or not? More like Missing her.. feeling very lonely...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1] + [Reply to Comment in Prologue]
« Reply #25 on: May 01, 2013, 11:26:35 PM »
.............Rena has kids?
that makes it even more complex.......
......what happened to make them nervous to meet each other I wonder??
Lol, Sae is afraid of Sayaka....
I'm writing these things in the wrong order......

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 1] + [Reply to Comment in Prologue]
« Reply #26 on: May 02, 2013, 01:32:33 AM »
JuriMayu is cute even if they are pretending
Rena is married with a kid!?
Her husband is dead?? That's so sad :(
But still... I want my WMatsui
Looking forward to the update

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Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #27 on: May 02, 2013, 08:14:44 AM »
Sisterly Complex



Chapter 2


Yuki POV

As I walked to the not so dark alley because there is still light in the posts although it’s blinking but I shrugged it off and continue to walked as my mind is full of memories of someone. If only I can turn back the time, I will do right thing. I didn’t feel that there is someone behind me and dragged me in the dark corner, I keep struggling but he/she is stronger than me. I also scream for help but he/she put a cloth with a foul odor  and my body collapsed and my vision becomes blurry

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Jurina POV

“How---“ I was  cut-off by the sudden shout of Rena’s son from the kitchen

“M-Mom!” Natsu shout

“Excuse me” Rena only said and leave us in the living room. I stand up and look at the picture frames in the side of the table. My eyes widen because.... I can’t see our pictures in our childhood. I know that all the frames is she get when she leave our house. But now, I didn’t see it

“Looking for our pictures?” Rena said behind my back and I dropped the picture of her and her passed husband. When it dropped in the ground, I saw our picture but my face is full of pen marks that who did is...somewhat hate me. When I will get it, Rena immediately get the pictures before I touched it and leave the living room again. I only grimaced. Mayu tapped my shoulder and motion to leave the house but I only shook my head and Mayu understand that while she leave the house and wait for me to the car

“R-Rena-c-h-an” Damn! Why do I stutter. I am a grown up girl now!

“Don’t call that..” She said coldy and my heart bit stop for a second

“Who she is, mom?” Natsu asked her mom while looking at me

“She’s a ---“

“She’s a friend of your mom. A dear friend” Someone from behind said and it’s a girl with long black hair

“Papa Airi!” Natsu said excitedly and hug the so-called Papa although she’s a girl

“If your nothing to say to my wife. You can leave our house.” The woman named Airi said coldly to me and motion the door while Rena is also looked at me with no emotion. My mind is confused, full of questions. Good to me, my body coordinates as I leave the hell house of Rena but I can clearly  hear what she said before I closed the door

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Yuki POV

I slowly open my eyes to see that I am lying in the bed but it’s not my bed and not even my room and suddenly someone spoke that is very familiar
“Ah! You’re  finally awake!” Kizaki said as he smirked. I know him, he’s the one of the soccer player that I talked when I and Minegashi-san went to party.

“W-Why did you do this? I will go now!” I shouted to him making him laughed

“Why are you laughing?!” I angrily shouts

“What do you think you’re doing? If the reporters see you walking in my apartment, they will think that you spend the night here and your princess image will ultimately destroy!” Kizaki said as he laughed again

“.....” My widen eyes and if my fans know it...my career will turn in to ash. And especially, what will Mayu think to me? She will hate me again...I cried myself

“W-What do you want?” I asked him while I am crying

“I want your body” He directly said to me
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“What happened?” Mayu innocently asked

“Drive...” Jurina only said and Mayu obediently follow her best friend. She knows something happened based on Jurina’s expression

“Is this place is okay?” Mayu asked Jurina but instead of replying. Jurina hug Mayu tenderly and she cried

*Sob *Sob

“M-Mayu...It hurts..”

[Rena said “I hate you Jurina. I never love you in first place. You know why? I envy you”]

“She said that?  Seriously” Mayu asked and she feel annoyed on what her sister says to her best friend

“Move on..Jurina...” Mayu whisper until Jurina fall asleep

“If I we can teach our heart to love each other, but someone else get our hearts and broke it into pices” Mayuyu said remembering his best friend and first girlfriend

“Why did you do that Yukirin” Mayu said to no one as tears are flowing in her cheeks

TBC...

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #28 on: May 02, 2013, 08:23:49 AM »
Jurina realized the truth from Rena and Mayu has to be the support for now
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #29 on: May 02, 2013, 08:50:31 AM »
OMG! The story is so complex
even though it still only prologue+2 chap
so many drama already happen
and i bet there''ll be a lot more drama coming

nice update anyway
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #30 on: May 02, 2013, 09:06:33 AM »
NO! PLEASE SAVE YUKI FROM THAT JERK!!

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #31 on: May 02, 2013, 09:54:40 AM »
Wmatsui22-san, could you give me the address of that Kizaki jerk? :mon cweepy: :mon fire: :mon worklate:
Mayu or someone help Yuki :mon whine:
It's more and more interesting :mon XD:
Why Rena said that to Jurina :mon spit:
Why Rena hate and envy her :mon waterworks:
What happened with the Mayuki? :mon hanky:
Who is Mayu's best friend? :mon huh2: It seems that Mayu's best friend'd done something bad on Yuki :mon dunno:
Too many questions appear in my head :mon tantrum:
Update soon, please :mon pray2:
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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #32 on: May 02, 2013, 10:23:06 AM »
YOU.DID.NOT. REPLY. TO. ME.

poor Yuki, hope she will be fine .... while Mayu stayed with Jurina  :shocked

So Rena loves Airin now, she said she hated Jurina...

Why Rena, why?


The end: Yukirin married Kizaki, Mayu started loving Jurina, Rena regreted for losing her twin-sister!

Okay dont throw me out of the window, just reply to me as soon as you can.




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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #33 on: May 02, 2013, 10:28:46 AM »
Mayu's bestfriend and first girlfriend......hmmmm... I think its Yukirin
Yuki what have you done to Mayu to make her hate you?
Ohh mayu and jurina want to teach their hearts to love someone else but their heart are already captured by yuki and rena.
Rena envy Jurina, okay that's normal for sibling
But to hate each other and don't want them to see you. That's just rude
Their family right. Rena is just being plain rude to jurina.
Ohh yeah that Kizaki dude he's crazy
He kidnap yuki then scare her,
Yukirin should sue that dude for kidnaping or rape
Fans will understand if she do that
She will not betray her fans and not fall for that dude plans....
So many question need to be answer to this fiction
And I like it
Thanks for the update
Looking forward fortthennextupdate.

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #34 on: May 02, 2013, 10:30:56 AM »
OMG... some kidnap Yuki... Who did that and Why?

Eh... Rena hates Jurina so much...

And She is married with Airi... a girl?

I thought Rena's husband just died

Eh... Rena hated Jurina because she envied her... why?

Jurina always love Rena, always think about her...

I want to know why Rena can hate Jurina like that...

What's the heck... Kizaki is a rapist... but like to use black mail...

What's going to happen with Yuki...?

Please somebody help Yuki...

Ah.. Yuki and Mayu also have very bad past... even if Yuki still in love with her.

What's going to happen with Yuki, Rena, Mayu and Jurina...?

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: Sisterly Complex [Chapter 2]
« Reply #35 on: May 03, 2013, 01:46:01 AM »
Yuki got kidnapped... somebody save her
Rena's situation confuses me
I thought her husband just died...
but she's married to Airi... switched one so fast!!
She really hates Jurina doesn't she
Please don't break Jurina's heart
Mayu needs to help Jurina through this

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