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Offline kahem

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I like this game in fic hehe
And Takamina is so cool!!!

Offline KojiYuu44

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Atsumina!!
I like how this story started :)
Playing truth or consequence haha
Kojiyuu is so sweet
Takamina and Acchan's first kiss... so good
Thank you for the story

Offline cisda83

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Yeah.... Atsuko and Minami are each other 1st kiss....

Yuko and Haruna also each other 1st kiss

Eh... as usual... Minami is pretty dense about her feeling...

Ah... Luckily Minami wants to go back earlier if not Atsuko...

Yeah... Minami is very good at fighting...

Minami is so cool... a knight in shining armor huh...?!

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait

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i must say. that was so manly of takamina. haha fighting against a guy. and beating them up.! haha

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“oh Minami” she said hugging me tighly.
” Calm down Acchan, i’m here with you and i won’t let anybody hurt you, i promess!” i said hugging her too.
I tried my best to calm her down ” Come to my house, i take care of you”
She dress up her shirt, i take her hand and i took her to my house, she didn’t do anything to stop me. Her delicated and soft hand was hot, just the fact that we are holding hands let me with that hot feeling inside my chest.
When we got to my house, i led her into, i turn on the lights and said: ” Acchan, i want you to be in your house ”
” Takamina you’re bleeding!” she said. I didn’t noticed the blood that runs down in the corner of my mouth.
” Let me take care of that” she said.
” Don’t worry, i’ll take care of this” i said picking up the first aid box that i have on a small wardrob in the entry. ” I insist! It’s my fault so let me take care of that” she said in a angry tone and take the first aid box of my hands ” Sit down please”.
I sat on my sofa, she sat in front of me and taked of the first aid box the necessary things to desinfect my wound.
She’s to close, i letted my self carried away by her bright eyes, i could see my reflex in them.
” Ouch! ”
” Oh, sorry i didn’t mean to hurt you” she said.
Her face is so beautiful, she looks like an angel! Just though of her without t-shirt almost being… Gosh, i’m regretted of haven’t killed those stupid jerks.
” I’ve already finished” she said with a smile.
Her smile warms my icy body. That smile was too cute.
” T-t-t-thank y-you ” i murmured blushing.
” No, thanks i, if you’re not there… I don’t know what would happend to me” she said.
I smiled.
” Etto… Takamina can i use your bathroom?” she asked.
” Sure, up the stairs first door on the right” i said.
” Thank you” She up the stairs slowly, i noticed that her legs were trembling. Although she showed me the most radiant smile, she’s still scared.
I up stairs too and i went to my room pick up one night-suit for her. I pick my phone and call her parents,although we’re not a good friendship, i have the number of her parents for an emergency case.
” Mochi mochi?” said her mother.
” Hi Maeda-san, it’s Takahashi”
” Hi Takahashi-san, what’s wrong?” asked her mother.
” Etto, we just left yuko’s house now, and i invited your daughter to stay in my house tonight, she can?”
” Yes, of course” she said ” Take care of my daughter”
” Hai, don’t worry”
” Have fun” and she hung up the call. I put the phone on the bed, i went to the bathroom and asked:
” Acchan, are you alright?”
She opened the door. ” Yes…”
I noticed the fear in her voice, automatically, i took a step and hugged her. She was surprise with my act but she didn’t reject me, contrariwise, she hugged me back.
” Acchan, i know you’re scared, i know we’re never talk, we never do nothing together, but i want you to know that from now i will always by your side protecting you from everybody and everything” i said.
I can’t belive what i just said, i think that words came out from my heart and not from my head.
” Thank you…Minami” I looked at her. ” Oh, sorry… I didn’t mean to call you by the first name…”
” I don’t care… You can call me by my first name, i like it” i said.
” Ahah, really? If i can do that, i want you to call me by the first name too!” she said
” I-i-i-i-i c-c—ca-can-can’t ”
” C’mon Minami, call me by the first name”
” A-a-a-a”
” Atsuko!”
” I know i just can’t!”
” Why?” she asked confuse.
” I don’t know…” i said blushing.
” Ahah you’re blushing Minami, you’re soooooo cute”
” No i’m not!” i grumble.
” Yes you are ahahah” she laughed.
” Moou! No i’m not!” She continued to laugh.
” Let’s sleep, i’m tired…” i said.
I take her to my room and said:
” This is my room, i want you to sleep here, i’m going to sleep on the living room” i said giving her the night-suit ” if you need something, please, call me”
I started to leave my room, but i felt her hand on my arm.
” M-minami can you s-sleep with m-m-me?” she murmured.
I was extremely blushed with her request, it took me some time to understand if my hears heard right.
” Okey… ” I finally answered.
I closed he door and started to put my night-suit. She’s already on the bed trying to sleep.
” Acchan i forgot to tell you” i said while i lay in bed ” i call your mother telling your gonna stay here tonight” ” Oh, i forgot to tell her… Thank you again…”
” It’s ok, goodnight” i said.
” Good night…” I turn of the lights and triyed to sleep. It comes to my head everything that happened today, the party, the kiss,what they done to Acchan, and… What i felt when i kissed her…
In this moment i was at one side of the bed and she’s in the other.
” Ne Minami…”
” Hmm?”
” You live alone?” she asked.
” Yes…”
” Were are your parents?” “
They’re… Dead”
” Oh i’m sorry… I didn’t know that…” she said.
” It’s ok, i understand ”
She aproacched and sudently hugged me.
” Didn’t you felt alone?” she asked me.
” Yeah, sometimes… But that ended when i entered to AKB, i’ve done so much friends that supported me when i needed…”
” I’m sorry for not be one of those friends” it was the last thing that i’ve heard from her.
I’ve stayed some time awake thinking about what she sayied, what she meant by that? Is she regretting not having spoked to me during years? It took me some time to fall asleep, but i admit that i liked that moment, it’s impressive the way her arms can conffort me. During the night, i wake up, not for having a nightmare but for preocupation. I wanted to be sure that she’s alright. I were still under her embrace and she semeed to having a good dream. Her angelical face was so beautiful as she slept, not that isn’t during the day, because it is, but at night she had a own charm that makes me melt. I snuggled in her embrace and fell asleep again.
” Ta-ka-mi-na wake up! We have an enterview today” she said.
” Hmmmm” i murmured.
” Ahaha you’re so lazy” she laughed. She semeed to be happy this morning.
” Ohayoo ” She said and gave me an kiss on cheek.
” Eh? What was that? ” i asked.
” Your good morning kiss ” she said ” why? You what it to be on other side?” she asked.
” Acchan don’t tease me please… ” i said.
” Ahah but it’s fun, you should see your face when i kiss you ”
I got up from the bed, pushed her to the bed and i put me over her hands and knees. I approached my face of her and kissed.
It was just a simple kiss, i got up and said: ” Sorry, i… Sometimes i can’t control my self… When it comes to you…” i said.
She got up too and started to kiss me again.
Again that feeling inside my chest, i didn’t want to stop, her kisses is like drug to me.
She pushed me to the bed, i was down and she’s on top. We kissed each other so deeply like it was the last day together.
It feels so good when her lips touch mine and the way she kiss drives me crazy.
We stoped a lot of times to breath but we started over again.
” Sorry…” i said when we stoped.
” I’m sorry too… I don’t know what happened to me.
” It doesn’t matter, let’s have breakfeast i’m hungry” i said.

***
( Last night, Yuko’s place)

After Miichan leaves, me and Yuko decided to watch the movie that she bought. We’re on a romantic part of the movie and i looked discretly to her. The truth is, i wanted be with her like that… Hugging her, share passionately kisses, stroking her hair, feel her wonderful frangrance…
” NyanNyan” she said waking me up of my thoughs.
” What’s the matter? ” i asked ” Aren’t you enjoy the film?
” It’s not that…”
”tb So what is it?” i asked.
” This”
She kissed my lips. Her smooth lips on mine, my hands her neck, her hands on my waist, little moans came out of her mouth.
She pushed me softly, making me lying on the sofa with her on top.
Her kisses were increasingly intense, i love this wild Yuko.
” NyanNyan ” she said in a moan.
” What’s wrong Yuuchan?”
She kissed me again but this time more softly.
” It true that you don’t love me?” she asked.
At first i didn’t understand her question, but sudently i remembered the game that we played this afternoon.
"Yuuchan" i murmured "that's not true, you know what? I usually aks my self everyday, how  it's possible i love you so much?
She smiled with my answer and hugged me .
" I love you too Nyannyan..."
« Last Edit: May 08, 2013, 03:37:05 AM by Takahashi Atsuko »

Offline cisda83

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Oh... Minami promised to always protect Atsuko... So cool...  :inlove:

Minami is so manly... just implying that she only suffer a small injury...  :wub:

and also shy when Atsuko help dressing her injury... so cute...  :love:

Ara... again with the promise to protect... and she could not say Atsuko's 1st name without blushing... so cute...  :heart:

Poor Minami for not having any parents... but at least she has some friends from AKB

Ah... Minami is being shower with kisses from Atsuko...

And they don't know why they are doing that... Yeah right... they develop feeling and don't want to recognize them yet...

Ah... Yuko and Haruna are kissing... Yeah... Eh... '" It true that yo'.... What????  :?

Takahashi Atsuko-san, I don't think you have finished the story yet... the last part on Yuko's have a bit of a cut there...

Anyhow... very interesting story up until now...

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next chapter to see how Atsumina is developing and to know what's going on with Kojiyuu

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Oh... Minami promised to always protect Atsuko... So cool...  :inlove:

Minami is so manly... just implying that she only suffer a small injury...  :wub:

and also shy when Atsuko help dressing her injury... so cute...  :love:

Ara... again with the promise to protect... and she could not say Atsuko's 1st name without blushing... so cute...  :heart:

Poor Minami for not having any parents... but at least she has some friends from AKB

Ah... Minami is being shower with kisses from Atsuko...

And they don't know why they are doing that... Yeah right... they develop feeling and don't want to recognize them yet...

Ah... Yuko and Haruna are kissing... Yeah... Eh... '" It true that yo'.... What????  :?

Takahashi Atsuko-san, I don't think you have finished the story yet... the last part on Yuko's have a bit of a cut there...

Anyhow... very interesting story up until now...

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to see the next chapter to see how Atsumina is developing and to know what's going on with Kojiyuu

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Me too.. Im love kakkoi minami

Offline Elo

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yosh you updated minami and atsuko start to love each other

I love minami kakoiii too hehe

update soon
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                                           ~MariMii~
                           ~Wmatsui~
             ~MaYuki~

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Offline BbSis

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Takamina is too dense hehehe I liked this chapter, specially kojiyuu moment *.*

I already commented "there", if you know what I mean ;p (lá em portugues huehehue)

Let's see where the update will appear first*.* I'l try to comment both places o/

Can't wait next chapter

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Minami and Atsuko are getting cute together  :wub:
Kojiyuu moment was so great!
Thanks for the update!!

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Kojiyuu's scene is short but that was really great xD  :thumbsup :thumbsup :inlove:



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Atsuko-chan ganbate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :D

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Some days passed by, i didn’t see Acchan since that day.
Today, we have practice and i received a sms from Akimoto-sensei saying that we’re going to have a stage in Guam.
I arrived in Akb theater, and the first person i saw was Yuko.
” Yuko, ohayoo” i sai but she didn’t answered me.
“Yuko?” i asked ” Are you okay?” She didn’t answer again.
” Look…” she murmured.
I looked at the direction of her finger and saw Haruna with a guy, she was laughing and hugging him. I was shocked, who the hell is that guy?
I grab Yuko’s hand and led her into the theater.
” I don’t know who is that guy” she murmured ” I arrived here with Haruna and suddently he apeared and kissed her” she said.
I hugged her.
” Calm down Yuko… Haruna can’t have a boyfriend” i tried to calm her.
” But she can fall in love with him…” she murmured starting to crying.
” There’s no way that she could fall in love with that bastard! You’re better than him and she know that! You’re always by her side supporting her, giving her your shoulder to cry, always making her laugh and more other things! Yuko, she seems so happy by your side, even if you try to do something pervert, she grumble but inside she’s happy!” I said.
She smiled.
” Thank you Takamina, for everything”
I smiled and hugged her tiggly.
After that, we went to the practice room. Acchan was there, with Sae, Sayaka and Tomochin.
” Ohayoo minna” i said.
” Minami!” Said Acchan hugging me tiggly.
” Eh? Minami?” Asked Yuko ” Takamina, she can call you Minami and i can’t?!”
” I’m more important to her than you squirrel!” said Acchan.
” No you’re not!” said Yuko.
” Yes she is” i let scape from my mouth, everybody looked at me ” Uups”
” I love you too Minami” Joked Acchan.
The days passed, just sixteen of us go to Guam:
- Akimoto Sayaka;
- Matsui Jurina;
- Matsui Rena;
- Miyazawa Sae;
- Maeda Atsuko;
- Takahashi Minami;
- Oshima Yuko;
- Kashiwagi Yuki;
- Wstanabe Mayu;
- Kojima Haruna;
- Itano Tomomi;
- Kasai Tomomi;
- Kuramochi Asuka;
- Minegishi Minami;
- Shinoda Mariko;
- Sashihara Rino;
I prepared everything to go, and right now i’m going to the airport. When i arrived, i saw they close to the bar.
” Ohayoo minna” i said.
” Ohayoo captain” Said Sayaka the only on that heard me.
” Where’s Miichan and the others?” i asked when i noticed that was some members missing.
” Miichan and Acchan went to the bathroom, Sashihara and Yuko didn’t arrived yet, and i think that Miyazawa didn’t arrivet yet too” she said.
” What i have?” Asked Sae when she heard her name.
” Nothing, Sayaka though that you didn’t where here yet” i said.
” Sure? Was just that?” she asked.
” Tch… Of course that was just that, stupid persons like you don’t appear in my convertations” Grumbled Sayaka.
” What did you say?” Said Sae with angry voice.
” Have i offend you? Sorry it was on purpose” Said Sayaka.
” You…”
” Enough!” I shouted ” Sae go get some air!”
She obeyed me.
” I’m sorry Takamina” Sayed Sayaka.
” It’s okey…”
Sae and Sayaka hate each other, they don't like to be called twin towers.

End of the first part.


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Haruna what are you doing to my YUko how can you kiss someone else

awww yuko dont cry

Eeeeeeee the twin towers hate each other


I hope I didnt frighten you hehe
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Awwwww..... dont cry yuko  :( yeah your better then that guy y'know  :on GJ:

fix that argument fast twin towers!!!!!  :smhid

thanks for the update  :cow: and update soon  :bow:

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Ah... Who was the guy with Haruna...?

Poor Yuko... was so jealous and worry that Haruna would be with a guy and left her

Yeah.. Minami was such a good friend... trying to calm Yuko down and erase Yuko doubt over Haruna love for Yuko...

Yeah.. Minami admitted that Atsuko was more important....  :inlove: 

Really this is the 1st time I heard that Sayaka and Sae didn't like to be called 'Twin Tower'   :shocked

And also they hated each other... Really  :?

Interesting twist there...

Can't wait to see what's going to happen to everyone in Guam...

Thank you for the update

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Ehhh!.........saeyaka hate each other  ..........  but  at last they will be a couple . :w00t:
kojipa with a guy!   :smhid that guy is gay.  XD right?
Atsumina want more please author sann   :bow:
I love AKB !
I love AKB fanfic !
I love the most Atsuminaaa!
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aww, atsumina :3

love takamina boy side lol  :lol:
looking forward for update :3

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aww poor yuuchan

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What will happen to kojiyuu  :cry: :cry:



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