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Chapter 3 part 2

 When everybody was there, we entered to the plane. Everybody was shocked when they saw us but we already accostumed to it. In the plane, my seat was next to Haruna, but i changed with Yuko so i ended up sitting in the seat next to Acchan .
" Hi Takamina" She said when i sat close to her.
" Hi Acchan, did you have a good night?"
" Yes, i had a weird dream but i don't want to talk about it, and you?"
" I had a weird dream too..." i said.
I dreamed of her, that we hugged each other, that dream seemed so real, i could feel her in my arms, hear her heart beating, i could feel her sweet sense...
" Ne Takamina, have you got brothers or sisters?" she asked.
" Yeah, one brother and you?"
" I don't have any brothers or sisters, what's the name of your brother?"
" Takahashi Riku, i don't know nothing about him, i just know that he got 20 years old"
" I'm sorry" She said.
" No, it's okey... I don't know him, i don't miss him... My childhood friend was like a brother to me so i never needed him" i said.
" Who is your childhood friend?" she asked.
" You don't know him, Kai is his name, i don't know his last name" i said " i miss him so much..."
" Passengers, We are about to start our trip, please want to put your seatbelts and turn off all your electronic equipment. The ANA wish you a good trip"
" Here we go! I love travel!" i said, i looked to her, she was very pale and tense " Acchan are you okey?"
" Yeah... Is just, this is my first trip on a plane..."
I smiled.
" Don't worry, everything will be fine" i said.
" C-can i grab you h-hand?" she asked
" O-of course"
I grab her hand and said:
" It's all alright, okey? Nothing will happend, it's fun travel by plane, you'll see" i said.
" Thank you Takamina" she said with a smile.
The plane stoped and started the engines.
I felt her hand squeezing mine.
" It's normal the plane do that sound?" she asked
" Yes, it's the engines, don't worry"
The plane started to move, he was accelerating more and more, and then he was already flying.
" Aah..." She said" What a beatiful sensation!"
" See? It's fun isn't it? "
" Yes!!"
" Acchan" i said getting more closed to her " look" i said point to the window.
" Sugoiiii..." she murmured.
We can see the intire city getting more small.
Suddently, the plane started shaking with the turbulence and she quickly hugged me. My heart was beating like crazy.
" Minami your heart is beating so fast!" She said forgetting the turbulence of the plane.
" Takamina" called Yuko, she was looking for me and when she saw Acchan hugging me she asked:
" Sorry, i'm i interrupting something?"
She was still hugging me, her head was on my chest.
" Ah, i'm sorry" she said letting me go.
" Yuko it's not what you think!" i said.
" So what it is?" she asked with a pervert look.
" She never travelled on plane, she got scared of the turbulence and hugged me, JUST that!" i said.
" Yeah, of course was just that" she said.
" Yes Yuko, it was just that" said Acchan.
" Yuuchan!" called Haruna.
" I'm coming NyanNyan!" she said.
We both sighed.
" Really, that girl kills me!" i murmured.
" You're right..."

***

" Tomochin what's wrong?" asked Chiyuu.
" I can't see Takamina with Acchan!" i said " The first kiss of Takamina was with Acchan! It should be with me and now look at her! Hugging MY Minami! Aaarg i hate her!"
" Tomochin don't think that way please, i know that you love Takamina, but she's nit everything! You've got many friends that adores you and want you to be fine" she said
I smiled.
" Thank you Chiyuu"

Tbc...



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Ah Saeyaka hate each other, it's original hehe

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Eh... Minami has an older brother... that seem not so close and don't know anything about him...

And Kai... as her best friend...

Ah... Minami moment with Atsuko was so great and sweet...

Minami was so nervous being closed to Atsuko... her heart beating so fast...

Ah... Yuko, you were disturbing their intimate time...

Yeah... Yuko and Haruna still closed to each other...

Poor Tomochin... from being jealous of the closeness of Atsuko and Minami...

At least Chiyuu was there to take care and worry about Tomochin....

What's going to happen in the trip...?

Would Minami be seeing her brother and childhood friend...?

Can't wait to see any drama that going on with the members...?

Thank you for the update

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me too im an atsumina/kojiyuu shipper but another couple is fine for make more drama..

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The trip didn’t last much, when we arrived there, we were to the hotel when we’re gonna stay for a week.
The distribution of the rooms was:
Me with Kojipa, Acchan with Yuko, Sayaka with Sae, Jurina with Yukirin, Mayuyu with Rena, Tomochin with Chiyuu, Asuka with Rino and Miichan with Mariko.
Me and Kojipa went to our room, we have all day off.
” Nyan, which bed do you want?” i asked.
” Anyone Taka ” she answered.
I choosed the bed which are more cloose to the window.
” Takamina, Yuko is asking if you want to go with us at the aquatic park” she said.
” Okey”
We dressed the bikini with shorts and a t-shirt on top.
Just Yuko, Kojipa, Acchan, Jurina, Rena, Mariko, Micchan, Tomochin, Sae and i went to the aquatic part, the others stayed at the hotel.
” Let’s go in that slide!” said Yuko” I heard that it have the size of seven floors!”
” Let’s go!” said Acchan.
I looked at Acchan. My eyes were stucked in her sexy body, with just a white bikiny. She’s so beatifull…
” Takamina!” said Tomochin grabing my arm ” I’m scared it’s to high!”
” Don’t worry, i’m with you nothing’s gonna happend” i said.
After that we decided to go to the roller coaster.
” Ieiiii let’s go!” said Yuko.
” Takamina can you stay by my side?” asked Tomochin.
” Yeah… Why not?”
We went to the roller coaster and after that we went to the slides again. Tomochin didn’t let me go, even for a sec!
” Let’s go there!” Said Sae.
” You go, i’m going to rest ” said Acchan.
” I stay here with you” i said.
We sat on the next seat.
” You don’t have to stay here, go have fun with Tomochin!” she said.
” Eh? She don’t let me go, and sometimes is a bit annoying” i said.
” Yeah…”
” Acchan what’s wrong with you?” i asked ” You’re diferent…”
” Nothing…”
” Sure? But you…”
” Takahashi stop! I have nothing!” She said in a angry voice.
I shut my mouth, why my chest hurt this much? I felt one tear rolling by my face and i murmured:
” I’m going to have a walk…”
I went to the entry and i pick up my bag with my clothes. I dressed it up and i left the aquatic park.
Tears didn’t want to stop rolling, how can she made me cry with a pair of words? My chest hurts, i feel so sad and what makes me more confuse is the fact of don’t know what is this feeling… Why i have this preocupation for a person who never talk with me and just wanted to know about me in the other day?
I sighed.
Wait, where i’m i? Ah! i get lost! And now? what i do? The battery of my phone is dead and i don’t know the name of the hotel!

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” Acchan!” called Yuko” Let’s back to the hotel!”
” Okey…”
” Where’s Takamina?” asked tomochin.
” I don’t know, she said that she’s going to have a walk and still don’t come back”
” Let’s find her!” said Kojipa.
“Hai!”
We parted and went looking for her in the park.
I never spoke to her because i’ve discovered, in the year that we both entered to Akb, i love her. I was just a little girl and i didn’t know what to do so i’ve dicided to ignore my feelings for her during all those years, but they “woke up” when we kissed, in that day i’ve decided to don’t ignore my feelings anymore.
I wanted to be with her today but Tomochin didn’t let her go and when i was finally alone with her i let my jealous control me.
How could i be so bad to her? I felt my heartbreak when i saw one tear falling in her face.
I search her everywhere but i couldn’t found her.
I’ve received a message from Yuko:
” Minna come to the entry” I went there faster has possible with hope that they found her, but she wasn’t there.
” What we’re going to do now?” asked Jurina.
” Did you already sent her a message?” i asked.
” Yes but her phone is off” said tomochin.
” And now?” asked Rena.
” Let’s go back to the Hotel maybe she’s already there” said Sae.
On the way, i pray that she was there. But…
“Sayaka!” called Yuko.
” You’re already here, so it was fun?” she asked.
” Yeah but that doesn’t matter, did you saw Takamina?” she asked.
” No, she’s not here, i was always here since you all go to the park” She said.
No… My tears started to fall.
” Calm down Acchan” Said Haruna.
” How can i be calm Haruna? She desappeared! And it’s all my fault!” i said.
” What do you mean by it’s your fault?” asked Tomochin.
” That doesn’t matter now Tomomi, you have to calm down, she’s going to be here in a few minutes” said Rena.
” It’s already night Rena” said Jurina poiting outside.
If something happend to her i’ll never forgive myself, Takamina please come back! I can’t take this!

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Takahashi Minami POV

It’s already night and i was cold, it passed a long time since i left the park.
Walked around the city, there was nobody on the street.
” Atchim!” i sneezed.
Hope i’m not getting sick.
A few meters from me i started to see a huge building with slides behind.
I was sure that is the hotel so i started to run.
For my happyness they were all there in the entry.
” Takamina” said Acchan.
She run at my direction and hugged me tiggly.
” Minami…” she said ” I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to say that! I was mad because of a stupid thing and i dumped on you, i’m so sorry Minami!”
Somehow her embrace confort me so much, she can make me forget what just had happend.
” That doesn’t matter anymore Acchan” i said ” It’s all right now”
” Where have you been Takamina?” asked Yuko.
” I left the park and when i notticed i was lost” i explained.
” I’m sorry” Acchan said again.
” Don’t worry Acchan, i’m ok-atchim!” i sneezed again.
” Sure you’re okey?” she asked.
” Yeah, i just need a hot shower” i said.
After that we all went to our room.
I asked Haruna to have a shower first while i prepare my things to dress after the shower.
” A-tchim!” i sneezed.
” What a big sneeze Takamina” joked Haruna ” I’m going to the Yuko and Acchan room, go there after you have a shower okey?”
” Don’t worry NyanNyan” i said.
I picked up my things and i went to the bathroom.
During the shower i started to feel dizzy and tired but i though that was normal, i never stopped since i arrived in Guam.
It feels so great being under hot water, i didn’t want to left the shower.
I’ve decided dress the night-suit and rest for a while.
I sent a message to Haruna:
” Harunyan, i’m dizzy and tired, i’m going to stay here, have fun”
” Okey, i go back before the dinner, have a god rest”
I lyied on bed and i fell asleep.

Maeda Atsuko POV

” Takamina don’t come” said Haruna.
” Why?” asked Yuko.
” She’s not feeling well” said Haruna
I sighed, if she’s get sick, it’s my fault.
” Acchan, can you tell us what happened beetwin you and Takamina?” asked Yuko.
“Since we entered in the park, Tomochin was always with her and when i was alone with her i dumped on her all jealous accumulated” i explained.
” Ahh…”
” But haven’t you decided to ignore your feelings?” asked Yuko.
” I stopped doing since the party at your house, I realized that it was useless to ignore a feeling that lives inside me for several years” i said.
” Do you know that Takamina likes you?” asked Haruna.
” How do you know that?” i asked.
” She said to me what she felt when she kissed you and asked me what was the feeling she felt inside her chest” said Haruna.
” She asked me that too” said Yuko.
” For what she said to me, what she feel for you it’s love” said Kojipa.
” But she don’t know what is love” said Yuko.
” You have to help her Acchan” said Haruna.
” She’s going to discover what she feel sooner or later” said Yuko.
I hope so… i can’t hide my feelings forever.

Takahashi Minami POV

I have the same dream, Acchan comes to me and tells me something I could not figure out.
After that she hug me, and tells me something in the ear, but i can’t hear what she’s saying.
She pulled away and pressed her lips on mine.
” Takamina!” Haruna woke me up.
” Hmmm?”
” It’s dinner time”
” I’m not hungry”
” Takamina, sure you don’t want to eat nothing?
” Hum..”
” Okey, I bring you a sandwich if you’re hungry at night” she said ” If you need something, call me”
That was the last thing i heard before i fell asleep again.
I woke up with Yuko talking.
” NyanNyan woke up! Please don’t die!”
” I’m not dying idiot!” said haruna with sleepy voice.
” Yuko leave her alone!” Said Acchan.
I opened my eyes and Acchan was by my side.
” Ohayoo Minami” she whispered.
” Ohayoo” i whispered too.
I sat and i started to caugh. I was still very tired, it seems my head was about to explode.
” Takamina are you okey?” asked Acchan.
” Yeah…”
” Sure? Since yesterday you’re like this” said kojipa.
” I’m okey, don’t worry” i said ” we have to be in the entry at eleven o’clock, so let’s have breakfast “
I got up, but i felt like i was about to blackout so i sat again.
” Sure you’re okey?” Acchan whispered in my ear.
” Yeah, i’ve to be, today we’re going to practice for the stage” i said.
” Please Minami don’t force you’re self to go practice if you’re not okey” she said.
” I can do this, don’t worry”
She kissed my forehead.
” Allright, but if you blackout or something i’m going to put you on bed and i won’t let you go!” she said.
And we both laugh.
” Okey, let’s go girls!” said Yuko

Tbc…


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ohhh takamina is sick... need a maeda nurse now

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Poor Takamina being scold by Atsuko because she was jealous of Tomochin...

Ah... Takamina was so sick now... she caught a flu I guess...

What's going to happen to Takamina at the practice?

Would she be able to be in practice at all anyway?

Can't wait to find out

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Chapter 4
 The music echoed in my head, causing increased pain. We were practicing about 3 hours straight and my body was desperately asking for a bed.
One two three four, one two three, four.
“Sashihara, after this step you have to exchange with Sayaka" i shouted. “Hai!"
“Jurina you have to be faster!" i shouted.
“Ha-hai!"
“Come on! Again!" i shouted again. One two three four, one two three four.
And while dancing, i made a sudden movement that made me dizzy and I ended up falling on the floor. “Takamina!" Said Acchan running in my direction.
“Takamina are you okey?" Asked someone.
“Yes" said raising me.
“Are you sure?"
“Ye…" I could not even finish the word, it was all black and the last thing I remember is the worried look of Acchan.
When I awoke, I was lying in my bed in the hotel room and, through my window, I could see the moon shining in the darkness.
I looked at my body, was dressed with pajama. I was confused until I remembered what happened. “Minami …" someone murmured.
I looked at the bed that was on the side and there was Acchan.
Has she been taking care of me all this time? She must be tired …
I was starving, so I decided to go to the machine with food that was in the hotel lobby. It took me a few coins I had in my desk.
I bought a sandwich, with an aspect delicious, and I sat on the sofa that it had. I heard footsteps, were increasingly next to me and suddenly a pair of arms embraced me.
I was about to start screaming if weren’t that gentle fragrance that i felt.
“Acchan …"
“Don’t leave me worried like this…" she whispered.
“Sorry, didn’t mean to worry you," said hugging her too.
“You’re still hot, you better go rest a bit more," she said. She took my hand and we walked slowly to the room.
I feel so right beside her, and her hand is so warm … Every move it delights me, every trace of her body attracts me,
completely out of me, when I’m next to her I feel someone else, she transforms me into a better person. What is this? What force is this which leads me to you? How strange … Right now, I want more … I not only want to feel the gentle touch of your hand …
We arrive to the room and she closed the door.
I want to feel your body burn in my hands …
“Takamina are you okey?" she asked.
“I…"
I pushed her against the wall:
“I want more!"
Without thinking through what I was doing, I pressed my lips to her and my hands aventured into her body, and just her voice woke me up:
“Mi-minami …" I walked away immediately.
“Aaah! Sorry I didn’t-" she didn’t let me finish, pushed my body to the bed and lay on top of me, kissing me with as much or more desire than me.
She whispered my name in small moans that released between kisses. However, it started to hurt my head and it made me stop and she began to understand what was happening stopped also.
“Sorry, I shouldn’t  have advanced" she said “you’re sick and you should rest"
She got up to go to her bed but I grabbed her arm and pulled her to me.
“Can you sleep with me, please?" asked.
“Sure"
She lay down beside me, put her arm under my neck and hugged me and so we fall asleep.

***

When we arrived at the hotel all I Miyazawa and went to our room. We don’t talk since we left from Japan.
She entered the room first and got a few things I had left messy.I was full of sleep, I thanked God for give me the idea to take a bath there in the practice.
- Itaaaaaaai! - Miyazawa cried.
I turned back and saw many broken glasses on the floor and blood on her hand.
- Are you okey? - I asked taking her hand to examine the wound.
- Don’t pretend you worry about me - she murmured.
- I’m not pretending, I’m really worried - said.
- Sure, if you say so …
- Come with me - I said.
I lead her to the bathroom and i washed her hand with water, i wiped her hand very gently with a towel and then, from the small first aid kit, I took the tweezers and started taking small glasses that were in her hand.
Then, i put bit of alcohol on a piece of cotton and passed on her hand.
- Itee! - She complained to feel the touch of cotton in her hand.
- Sorry … - i said. Finished what I was doing and said:
- I’m done now, be carefull.
- Th-thank you … - she whispered. Her face was slightly blushed which made me blush too.
I never had looked directly into her face, and now I’m looking at, I must admit that she’s very beautiful.
- It’s okey…
We were looking to each other for a while until I get up to put my pajama. I noticed the accelerated beat of my heart, i didn’t understand this reaction of him, am I starting to have some kind of feelings for her? Its not impossible … But I hate her…

***

I just got to the room , I landed my stuff on the floor and lay down on the bed .
" Aaaaaah i’m so tired,"i said.
She let out a small laugh .
" You’re so cute " she said .
Oh no …
She started to approach me and I distance myself from her until I felt the wall behind me .
" G- get away from me! "  muttered .
" Don’t say it jurichan , you know what I want … "  she said .
She spent her hands in my face , went through my chest and continued to descend until getting to my ‘private place ’ .
" Ah … Rena … "
I could see her eyes alert by a wild reindeer , seductive , with desires for pleasure me until dawn .
We always have this kind of games ,  we are like ’ sex friends ’ .
She started kissing me passionatly but full of desire. I tried to get away but my arms haven’t had strength, my body was so obsessed with that touch of her hands .
" Rena … Rena … Rena … "  was the only word I could pronounce amid the groans .
She seemed to be very fun with the situation .  What the hell !  If i didn’t enjoy this moment so much i should say that I’m being raped …
She pushed me into the bed and looked to me with a sexy look.
If nosebleeds were real , I would have a pretty big now …
She sat with her legs open on my waist and started with kisses .
" Rena … not tonight … "  i murmured .
" Why ? Don’you like it ? "  she asked .
" It’s not that! I’m enjoying it but I’m very tired , and can not stand a night full of madness and pleasure," i said.
" I understand, but you have to sleep in my bed ! "  she said .
I smiled .
" Okay "
                               
***
" Harunyaaaaaan ! " i shouted when she went into my room “you’ll pass the night here right? "
" I already told that yes , Takamina is sick and Acchan asked me to change room with me " she replied .
I hugged her:
“I love you "
She corresponded to my embrace .
" Let’s have a shower"
" Okeeey , i’ll go first !  - I said taking everything that i needed to go to the bathroom .
I wanted to be quick as possible , because I wanted to be with Harunyan .
- You can go now NyanNyan - i said when leave the bathroom .
She was showering and I was dressing.
I heard her mobile phone vibrate , out of curiosity I took it and saw the message she had.
" Hello my love , the practice went well ? Then I want to be with you to hug and kiss you … like last time :) I love you <3 by : Takeru "
I felt my whole body freeze, an enormous emptiness began to emerge in my heart and quickly expanded across my chest , tears ran nonstop on my face .
- Yuuchan i will … - but said she stopped seeing me in that state - Yuu what happend ?
I said nothing , threw the mobile phone to the other side of the bed , near where she was and i leave the room running.
                
TBC…

 

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Thank you for the update..  :grin:

Yay...Atsumina  :inlove:

Haruna is cheating on Yuko ???  :panic:

Can't wait for the next chapter..

Update soon, please..  :bow:

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plaese update  :panic:
i want to know what happen to kojiyuu

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omfg our kojiyuu </3 update soon please :(( we need to know what happen  :panic: :panic:
we need kojiyuu back!!! :bow: :bow: :cry: :angry:



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Atsumina near to be a couple  :deco:
Will wait for you update taka atsu sannn :cathappy:
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Chapter 5

I ran down the hallway that seemed to have no end, I needed someone to hold me and tell me that all this is  nothing but a horrible nightmare.  I thought to go to Takamina , but she is sick and Acchan is with her, did’nt know who to turn to , I felt completely lost and how I didn’t see where I was running, I was a person and ended up falling on the floor .
" Ite … " 
" Oh, sorry young girl " a deep voice said " are you okay? "  he asked, extending his hand .
" Yes I’m fine , thank you … "  i said accepting his help.
" Ah , you’re the Oshima Yuko from idol group AKB48 , isn’t it?" he asked .
" Yes I am "
" Oshima - san , a person so beautiful as the lady, is even prettier with a smile on face , please don’t cry " he said .
Not knowing how I started to smile .
" Thanks, call me Yuko please and what’s your name? "  i asked .
" Ah , excuse my bad education ,  treat me Kai  please " he said .
" Okay then, Kai " I said and we both laughed .
" So Yuko , why is a beautiful woman like you crying ? "
" Let’s go get some air, and then i tell you"
We went to the hotel garden and sat on a bench .
" Well, actually , I like a person," I admitted.
" And that person likes you ? "
" Yeah, I mean , at least I thought so , we had a ’ case ‘, and that person spent her life telling me she loved me … "
" But that’s good isn’t it? "
" Yes , but the problem is that I discovered that this person was betraying me … "
He was silent for a few moments .
" But you already speak with that person ? "
“No … I found out through the one message that this person had on the mobile phone ," I replied .
" I understand , but you love that person and that person say so many times that love you , don't you think all this maybe can be all a misunderstanding ? "
“I read the message very well , it ‘s not possible  be a misunderstanding… "
" Yuko , you have to be calm , how about you go rest to your room ? "  he asked .
" I wanted to do that , but I ‘m sharing my room with her "
" Hmm I have an idea , how about we go get a room for you? I paid ," he said .
" Aah but-" I said .
" No but, it’s pleasure to help you ," he said .
" Th-thank you Kai "

***

I woke up the next day and we were still embraced .  She was sleeping like an angel , her face is so cute .
I snuggled more in her embrace , the sweet fragrance of her body was so addictive , her arms were very comfortable and welcoming.
She began to move, seemed to wake up, she turned around and ended up pulling me on top of her .
I didn’t complain or get off it , I lay my head on her chest and stood there for some time .
" Minami … "  she murmured " Good morning"
" Good morning Acchan " I murmured.
" Are you okay ? "  she asked, putting her lips on my forehead " hum, you’re still a bit warm" she said .
I sat on top of her, her body was between my legs .
“I ‘m better , don’t worry " I said .
We were looking at each other for some time .
" Minami , if I asked you something ,  would you do that thing ? “she asked .
" Depends what that thing is ," I replied .
" If I ask you to kiss me , would you do that?" "
We were interrupted with someone knocking the door and enter without permission .
" Girls I ne- " said Haruna coming but stopped talking when she saw us that way " Sorry am I interrupting something ? "
" No, forget that , what ‘s up? "  asked Acchan .
She walked in and closed the door .
“Sit here," I said.
We both sat on the bed next to Haruna .
" I don’t know what to do , I really need your help " she said .
" What happend NyanNyan ?"I asked.
" It’s Yuko … She thinks I betrayed her" she said .
" What ?"  both shouted .
" But how? " I asked.
" It was Takeru , isn’t it? “asked Acchan.
" Yes "
“Who’s Takeru ? "  I asked .
“It’s a guy we met at a party , he was delighted with Haruna and since that day he forces her to be with him and  he already kiss her " explained Acchan .
" But how he forces you to do that?"  I asked .
" If i don’t do what he say, he kill Yuko"
I was completely shocked by what she said .
" We have to warn Aki-p!"  I said getting up from bed to go pick up my phone , but i felt pair of arms around me, and she pulled me to her, causing me to sit up on her.
" Minami let her finish speaking "
" Last night he sent me a message saying he loved me and was eager to kiss me and she read the message , and then she left the room and now I don’t know where she is "
" Did you already ask to the others?"  asked Acchan .
" Yes ,  they don’t know where she is"
“It could have happened something! "  I said getting up , but I felt dizzy and sat immediately on the ground .
" Minami "  Acchan said sitting by my side " You’re not going anywhere , you’re sick! "
" But Acchan … "
" Acchan’s right Takamina " said Haruna .
" Aaarg okey ! But , if she doesn’t appear until  afternoon , I’m going to call Aki-p " I said .
" Okay , but meanwhile you’ll be lying here " she said helping me up and laid me on the bed .
" Can I stay here ? "  Haruna asked .
“Of course ! "  we both said .

***

I opened my eyes and I felt confused, didn’t recognize the room but then I remembered what had happened .
I felt a huge pain in the chest , so big that I felt dizzy.
It wasn’t a nightmare , it was all true… Haruna betrayed me ?
I’m sure she already ask the others for me …  or not …  I don’t know …
I grabbed my phone and texted to Takamina :
" Takamina ,I don’t know if Haruna  was there asking for me , but if she was tell her that I ‘m fine .
                                                         Yuko "
" Yes she already told us what happened , are you sure that you’re okay? Where are you ?
                                                   Takamina "
“I ‘m okay seriously , I want to be alone but don’t worry , I ‘m in the hotel
                                                            Yuko "
" Okay , but if you need anything call me !
                                                   Takamina "
" Don’t worry Takamina and thank you = )
                                                           Yuko "
" That’s what friends are for ^^
                                                   Takamina "
I decided to dress something to go for a walk.  When I was leaving the room, I found Kai .
" Good morning Yuko " he said with a smile .
" Good morning Kai "
" I wanted to ask you if you wanted to go out with me , you were so sad yesterday, and I though that a walk was going to put you better… "
" You’re very kind Kai … "  I said smiling .
" Is that a yes ? "
" You could say so"
" Cool! Did you already have breakfeast? "
" Well , not really "
“Good ! I know the perfect place to go ! "

***

" Tomochin a letter came for you " said Chiyuu .
" Who is ? " i asked .
" It says here that it is a secret admirer " she said .
" Eeeh ?!?" She handed me the letter and I began to read :
’ Dear Tomomi , I admire you so much since I met you , and yes, we know each other , you know a lot about me too , just don’t know that I love you very much.  I hope one day I could tell you face to face how much I love you, but for now I have no courage .  I will continue to send you letters ,
  Your secret admirer . "
" I have a secret admirer ? "  i asked .
" Looks like it " said Chiyuu with a smile on his face .
“I really want to know who is... "  i murmured.

***

I had breakfast , when i was returning to the room i saw Rena with Sayaka , I noticed that lately they've been very together.  They are always talking, yesterday during the break of the practice i saw they hugging each other.
I ignored that, went to my room and lay down on the bed.
Why Rena?

                         
Tbc...

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Offline Kochiki

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Ahh~~ I didn't notice this!!~
-So there is AtsuMina and KojiYuu...My fav!
-Oh...Kai appear!! And was treating Yuko well...I wonder~
-Wait!! My KojiYuu?!?! I won't let that...*evil aura* (JK)
-Oh no...So Yuko thought that Haruna is betraying her..
-But actually no...Agh!! KojiYuu! KojiYuu!!

>Plz update soon, i hope to see your update again~

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Re: It started with a kiss ( Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyaka...)chapter5
« Reply #58 on: July 17, 2013, 08:25:30 AM »
atsuminaaaaa  :inlove:

pls update soon :3

Offline Takahashi Atsuko

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Re: It started with a kiss: Author's message (19-07-13)
« Reply #59 on: July 19, 2013, 04:07:22 PM »
Hi guys, I wanted to apologize :kneelbow: , my last chapters have been small and uninteresting .  I had some personal problems and it took me inspiration and patience to write.  I'm really sorry , I'm already better and promise to bring you a fanfic interesting with large chapters. 
Thank you for your attention.   :twothumbs
   

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