Author Topic: Forward Love AtsuMina Chapter 25 6/10/2013 (Read 11670 times)

kuro808 · « **on:** May 21, 2013, 01:20:30 PM »

So I started another one because I realize the previous one I'm stuck without updates

http://atsumina2.blogspot.com/

I'll leave it here for people to comment on

cisda83 · « **Reply #1 on:** May 21, 2013, 02:08:46 PM »

Interesting

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

den_takacchan · « **Reply #2 on:** May 21, 2013, 02:34:13 PM »

i'll for your nxt update cuz ive already been hooked by ur story

please update fast if you can

kuro808 · « **Reply #3 on:** May 21, 2013, 06:44:21 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 21, 2013, 02:08:46 PM

Interesting

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

Thank you

Quote from: den_takacchan on May 21, 2013, 02:34:13 PM

i'll for your nxt update cuz ive already been hooked by ur story please update fast if you can

I'll try to but cannot guarantee anything

Updated with two more chapters

kuro808 · « **Reply #4 on:** May 23, 2013, 06:20:30 PM »

Chapter 8 is up.

I feel it may be weird with this fic and it seems why Takamina is alone after the first chapter... to be honest this is the whole fic until she meets her again.

Yes the short chapters are just a way to fish you guys

cisda83 · « **Reply #5 on:** May 24, 2013, 05:02:45 AM »

Getting.. shot...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #6 on:** May 24, 2013, 07:30:50 AM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 05:02:45 AM

Getting.. shot...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

Chapter 9 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #7 on:** May 24, 2013, 08:59:52 AM »

Ah... Sayaka's partner got killed...

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #8 on:** May 24, 2013, 05:53:36 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 24, 2013, 08:59:52 AM

Ah... Sayaka's partner got killed...

What's going to happen next...

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

Simply it has been done but the overall thing is the psyche of Sayaka which comes into mind

Chapter 10 is up

kuro808 · « **Reply #9 on:** May 26, 2013, 10:04:15 PM »

Chapter 11 is up.

cisda83 · « **Reply #10 on:** May 27, 2013, 05:17:29 AM »

kurosawa87-san...

Sorry that I didn't comment anything on previous chapter...

I had problem going into the website where you put your fic...

So I could not read it at all... not until just now..

Great updates as usual...

Ah... Poor Sayaka, Yuko and Takamina... and also the others

The ones that were sent and to fight in this war...

They fought only to died...

That's so sad...

Really... is there really nothing they can do to aviod the death... after the war id over?

Can't wait to find out the next chapter

Thank you for the updates

kuro808 · « **Reply #11 on:** May 27, 2013, 01:25:13 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 05:17:29 AM

kurosawa87-san...

Sorry that I didn't comment anything on previous chapter...

I had problem going into the website where you put your fic...

So I could not read it at all... not until just now..

Great updates as usual...

Ah... Poor Sayaka, Yuko and Takamina... and also the others

The ones that were sent and to fight in this war...

They fought only to died...

That's so sad...

Really... is there really nothing they can do to aviod the death... after the war id over?

Can't wait to find out the next chapter

Thank you for the updates

No problem about it, kinda wishing for more but this is what I expect for no pairings love until much later although it is a long confusing story about them separated

Chapter 12 is up.

cisda83 · « **Reply #12 on:** May 27, 2013, 02:15:24 PM »

Lucky Sayaka notice the trap...

If not they would have been destroyed to bits...

What are they going to find out in the north?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #13 on:** May 27, 2013, 09:46:34 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 27, 2013, 02:15:24 PM

Lucky Sayaka notice the trap...

If not they would have been destroyed to bits...

What are they going to find out in the north?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

I like Sayaka in this fic more than anything else because what she provides and she is pretty much the strength behind everyone

Chapter 13 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #14 on:** May 28, 2013, 10:49:22 AM »

So they are going to the safe zone soon...

Would they be shot too from entering the zone?

Would Minami be able to see Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #15 on:** May 28, 2013, 06:28:42 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 28, 2013, 10:49:22 AM

So they are going to the safe zone soon...

Would they be shot too from entering the zone?

Would Minami be able to see Atsuko?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

Slowly they are getting there and the second question

Chapter 14 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #16 on:** May 29, 2013, 03:14:26 AM »

Oh... So Atsuko able to escape before the rebel coming...

But not Minami... she was being forced to join if she didn't want to die or being raped...

I could see that Minami didn't have any choice in this matter...

How about Yuko and Sayaka...?

What are their stories...?

So this fight was just a fight to gain the authority....

Like the all of the sectors wanted to be the king...

Poor Minami to catch into this kind of pointless battle...

What's going to happen to them after the storm...?

Would they be able to go into the safe zone...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #17 on:** May 29, 2013, 01:44:55 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 03:14:26 AM

Oh... So Atsuko able to escape before the rebel coming...

But not Minami... she was being forced to join if she didn't want to die or being raped...

I could see that Minami didn't have any choice in this matter...

How about Yuko and Sayaka...?

What are their stories...?

So this fight was just a fight to gain the authority....

Like the all of the sectors wanted to be the king...

Poor Minami to catch into this kind of pointless battle...

What's going to happen to them after the storm...?

Would they be able to go into the safe zone...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

Okay this part I knew was vague but it won't be explained in any part of the story so the whole gist of it is the battle between the officials. Civil war but Takamina was sheltered to the point that the war only affected until she saw it for herself rather than the whole picture so the big details won't come until it has been realized

Chapter 15 is up

cisda83 · « **Reply #18 on:** May 29, 2013, 02:14:17 PM »

Thank you for the explanation about the civil war...

Ah... so they were nearer to the safe zone already...

Eh.. who was that pointing their gun at them?

Are they the civilians from the safe zone or their enemies?

Would they be able to safe themselves from this unfortunate situation...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

kuro808 · « **Reply #19 on:** May 30, 2013, 06:29:46 PM »

Quote from: cisda83 on May 29, 2013, 02:14:17 PM

Thank you for the explanation about the civil war...

Ah... so they were nearer to the safe zone already...

Eh.. who was that pointing their gun at them?

Are they the civilians from the safe zone or their enemies?

Would they be able to safe themselves from this unfortunate situation...?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

You'll find out soon

Chapter 16 is up