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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #20 on: June 13, 2013, 06:58:54 PM »
The engagement and the school's fighting were shockers for me.
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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #21 on: June 13, 2013, 07:28:43 PM »
Taka papa and Acchan papa totally just ignored their daughters XD


Awww...Taka just say you are happy to marry Acchan~~


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Re: The Burden To Love You Chapter 2 -Engagement and War- (13/6/13)
« Reply #22 on: June 14, 2013, 03:06:35 AM »
wait what.. that happen here... o.o

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Bwahhhh!! For those who look forward for the war, i'm really sorry!!!  :( :bow:

~I don't wanna rush it...So that's why i'm not gonna do it first... :doh: :sweatdrop:

~But still, i don't know if i'm gonna make it or not, well...just wait for it anyway.. :) :)2

~Plus i have no motivation and idea to make the next chap!!! Sorry!! :yawn: :banghead:

~About the update, think it'll be the day after tomorrow?? pls forgive me if i didn't update it on that day..i'm still hiatus. :smhid :banghead:

~Well, I hope you guys enjoy it..and as always, comment is still welcome..free to comment about this, or chap 2 or even chap 1.. :twothumbs :bow:

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Yohoo!!~It's me~!~!~And...I just finished chapter 3...and part 1...part 1 for KojiYuu..well only a little bit of KojiYuu though..Ahahah~But all of this part is KojiYuu~ I hope you'll enjoy it guys!~Onegaishimasu~And bout' the joke...You'll know if you ever seen them~~ :D

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Chapter 3: Love start before war start


-On her way home, Yuko stretch her tired body, she yawn and everything. Then, she saw a girl feeding a cat with something. Yuko approach the girl who is still busy feeding the cat, the girl seems to hear Yuko’s footsteps and change her eyes view to Yuko’s figure. Yuko for some reason is shock seeing her, actually the girl that is feeding the cat is actually Kojima Haruna, NyanNyan and Yuko still remember that NyanNyan is the girl at the lake.


“Waa!! You’re that girl!! The one from da’ lake!!”-Yuko who is aware of her being part of the Akihabara Gakuen student.

“What? Who are you again?”-NyanNyan ask not remembering Yuko.

“Eh!? I’m the one from the lak-“-Yuko stop her words when something cross her mind.

*Wait…She didn’t remember me, I’ll take this chance to flirt her..Ehehe*-Yuko think making a smirk on her face.

“Ahh…I must got da’ wrong person..What’s your name by the way?”-Yuko ask with a smile.

“It’s…Kojima Haruna, you?”-NyanNyan said while turning her head to see the cat again.

“Maa…Oshima Yuko, Yuko..call me that.”-Yuko said while her sharp tooth is showing from the smile.

“Hnn..Nice to meet you, but I have to go, bye.”-NyanNyan said, walking away from Yuko.

*Ehh!!?? I got rejected so fast!!*-Yuko scream in her heart but still control her coolness.

“Unn…Well, I can go flirt with other girls, more boobies, more hotties~”-Yuko said with a low tone while parting way with NyanNyan.


-As Yuko giving up on flirting NyanNyan, she turn her back again to see if NyanNyan is already gone, but instead she collapse, lying on the ground, her face which is white brownish before has become completely pale, Yuko is shocked and she immediately rush and approach NyanNyan to check her condition. After trying several time to wake her up, Yuko failed to do so. She decide to take her to the hospital just in case, but then NyanNyan said something.


“Su…gar!! I need sugar!!”-NyanNyan said with a die pose.

“The hell are you taking about!? Sugar!?”-Yuko ask, confused.

“Just feed me sugar you freaking idiot squirrel face like!!”-NyanNyan said striking Yuko’s heart.

“Damn you…Thanks god I have a candy with me!!”-Yuko said while handing the candy to NyanNyan.


-After finish eating, her face turn normal again, red and brownish. Then, she glare at Yuko who is still confused with her behavior and why did she need a sugar.


“Bwahaha!! Are you a 4 years old kid!? Still bringing a candy with you?”-NyanNyan laughing.

“Dammit!! I just saved your ass there!!”-said Yuko with an annoying face.

“OMG!! I just eat a candy from a stranger!! What should I do!?”-NyanNyan suddenly said.

“Are ya’ stupid!! Asking advice from stranger is more risky!!”-Yuko said as her head want to explode already.

“Aghh!! I need more sugar!! If not I’ll die!! Please helph mehh!!”-NyanNyan said acting crazy, again.

*Wait…Even though she’s crazy, I might get a chance to flirt with her!! With sugar!!*-Yuko think.

“Ahh! I’ll treat you to an ice-cream, you need sugar right? Let’s go!”-Yuko said, flirting NyanNyan.


-And NyanNyan would surely agree with that if she want to eat sugar for unknown reason. After a minute searching for a stall that sells ice-cream, they’ve find one. As Yuko said, she’ll treat NyanNyan for an ice-cream, she bought two ice-cream with chocolate flavor, extra sugar, extra chocolate plus milo and extra everything that involve sweets and sugar. They seat on the bench and began to eat their ice-cream, with just a blink of an eye, NyanNyan finished her ice-cream making Yuko shock, but then she ask a question.


“Etto…Haruna-chan right? Why do you need…urm…sweets stuff?”-Yuko ask while licking her ice-cream.

“I need them to live…If no, my head will grow horn on it and I might kill people while smiling.”-NyanNyan said giving a big grin to Yuko.

“Holy cow…I’ve never heard such things like that!!”-Yuko said.

“Hmm…Yeah, that old hag..um..i mean the doctor said that this kind of things only occurs to 1 in a trillion, billion and then million, it just increasing.”-NyanNyan said.

“It’s not increasing, it’s decreasing!! Glad there’s someone dumber than me~”-Yuko said with a relief face.

“Anyway, thanks for the ice-cream, I owe you Shuko.”-NyanNyan said thanking to…Shuko?

“Damn you!! It’s Yuko!! But you’re welcome anyway…”-Yuko said while sighing.

 “Ahh…You remind me of someone I know~I miss him~~”-NyanNyan said revealing that she has a boy?

*Ehh…She is already taken, huh…Such a waste to treat her.*-Yuko think, sighing again.

“But yeah…He disappeared after that...Oh! Maybe he died!! LOL”-NyanNyan said, laughing.

“How cruel are you actually!?”-Yuko said.

“Oh yeah, you heard the rumor? That Majisuka and Akihabara is having a war declaration?”-NyanNyan ask.

“…You know that I’m one of the Majisuka Gakuen student, and I notice that you’re from the AG.”-Yuko said, confuse with NyanNyan.

“Oh really!? But we can’t fight cuz’ you’re just a normal student, not the dual fang.”-NyanNyan said with a disappointed face.
“Ahh…Y-yeah, the dual fang…I wonder where are there…ahah.”-Yuko said trying to hide the truth.

“Hnn..yeah, I just know the other one named…Takahashi Minami, but who is the other one?”-NyanNyan wonder.

*Agh!! Someone…I mean any car that pass by!! Please hit her!! She only know Takamina!?*-Yuko scream at her heart.


-Chatting with the mysterious NyanNyan, Yuko manage to follow her ridiculous topic and chit chatting, in the same time, Yuko feel something similarity of NyanNyan with someone who Yuko has forgotten a long long time ago, but Yuko try to deny it, every piece of her childhood memory is full of someone, someone from her past life. Yuko who was currently dazing about NyanNyan’s similarity to this so-called someone from her past, Yuko accidently ask NyanNyan a question that is paying in her head right now.


“Haruna-chan, do you know me?”-Yuko ask, expressionless.

“Yoko? Why are you asking me that? At least we know our basics background.”-NyanNyan ask, stopping her topic.

“Uhh…Nothing...oh nothing!! I’m just spacing out…Ahaha~Souwee~”-Yuko said trying to cover things up.

*Did she juz call me Yoko!? Who is YOKO!? Huh…Calm down me.*-Yuko said in her heart, trying to calm herself down.

“Yuku? Are you alright? Did your soul just leave your body? Where did it go?”-NyanNyan said while waving her hand straight on Yuko’s face.
“Hahah!! Nothi…Did you just call me Yuku!? Just damn!!”-Yuko said trying to endure her trolling, more like her air headed behavior is bothering Yuko.

“You really are reminding me of him, both of you have the same trait…Ahaha.”-Saying that, the song from NyanNyan’s phone is interrupting their little chit chat.

“Ahh…Acchan massage me…”-NyanNyan said after looking at her phone screen.


[Displayed screen/phone]

 
Acchan-“Yo, air headed…Are ya free right now? Give me a hand here!!”

NyanNyan-“Nope, can’t do it~~JK…Anyway, hai~~ \ (^~^) / ”

Acchan-“Could you pls search a penis and a paper?”

NyanNyan-“Uhh…Where can I found one? At the strip club?”

Acchan- ?!?!?!? o.O’’’

Acchan-“OMFG!! It’s PENCIL!! Damn stupid freaking auto correct!!” >///<

NyanNyan-“LOFL!! I got it!! I’ve one but I don’t have a pe~nis~~ XP”

Acchan-“Shut the freaking up!! Stop teasing me!!”

NyanNyan-“So…What do ya’ want me to do? ;D

Acchan-“You know right the dealer from before? Ask him to give me a deadly poison!”

NyanNyan-“Ohh..For who? You fiancée? The one from da dual fang right?”

Acchan-“Yeah, that’s her. Now buy it!! I’m going to send him money later! GoGo!”

NyanNyan-“Haii~~See ya tomorrow! BuBye~~ ^^



----End of conversation----


“Haruna-chan? Who’s that? Just now you’re laughing you’re ass off!!”-Yuko ask NyanNyan.

“I’m going to some place right now…Thanks for the treat, now I have enough sugar~”-NyanNyan said thanking Yuko again.

“A-Ah!! Sure…Phone, I want your number phone!! Give me as an exchange for da’ treat”-Yuko ask NyanNyan her number phone.

“O-Okay~ Here you go, gonna leave now, bye Yuto!!”-NyanNyan waving at Yuko, Yuko wave her hand back and thanks her.

*And I’m not YUTO!! It’s Yuko damn it!!*-Yuko said in her heart, but still smiling because of the phone number.


TBC…

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Acchan's epic fail O.O

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Haruna keeps messing with Yuko's name! Ahahaha :lol:

:shocked Acchan don't poison your husband! Maa! I wonder what Takamina's planning for Acchan? What will happen to MG and AG? Can't wait! :fap

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Haruna and Yuko knew each other when they were younger... but Haruna seemed to remember Yuko as a boy... why?

very hilarious, Haruna kept saying Yuko's name wrongly...

Yuko really really did not know what to do with Haruna's airheaded...

Haruna needed sugar to service... she got anemic or something...?

Yeah... very funny as to how Haruna only knew Takamina name but not Yuko's name

I thought the two fangs were very popular...

And Atsuko wanted Haruna to buy poison... just because she was upset with Minami... from being engaged to her?!

And Yuko seemed very happy from getting Haruna's phone no.

What's going to happen with the fight between the aces of each school...?

Who would win...?

Would Minami get poison before, during or after?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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lol, haruna can have horn  :lol:
acchan scary lol

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poor yuko..you need to change your flirt methods..

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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 1[AtsuMina & Other](17/6/13)
« Reply #33 on: June 23, 2013, 03:21:59 PM »
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AshuraX: Pftt...I don't know which one but...If THAT...epic fail indeed~Tnx for comment n' reading!~ :roll:
kenjoy12: Bwahahah...Poison, everyone worried about it...Who knows~~Tnx for reading and commenting :twisted:
cisda83: Well, NyanNyan's case is...a little bit weird, unknown symptoms~~LOL Tnx for commenting~ :lol:
blakwhite: Yeah! Pls do look forward for the next update...Tnx for reading and stay tune!!~ :D
kurosawa87: Pftt...I don't know but it pop up in my head and use that kind of dirty joke~ Tnx anyway~~Actually there's a joke like that somewhere...but i'm not telling~~ :twothumbs
Haruko: Totally!! There's no way she can flirt the mysterious NyanNyan! Anyway, thanks for commenting~ :w00t:



Guys, i've used my HIATUS mode...And i don't know if i'll use it again...i hope i didn't though.. :smhid
Well, monday....i'm lazy on that day...but i'll update the next part on monday, tomorrow~ :D
And hey, gonna give a warning for you guys, pls prepare a tissue beside you, in case something happen~ :roll:
LOL..Just kidding, it's not too direct anyway~~But pls do wait for the next chapter~~ :twisted:
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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 1[AtsuMina & Other](17/6/13)
« Reply #34 on: June 23, 2013, 04:00:36 PM »
*Takes a chair, sit on it, and wait* Hehehe

Can't wait for the next up! :fap

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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 1[AtsuMina & Other](17/6/13)
« Reply #35 on: June 24, 2013, 04:38:53 AM »
Just update it when ever you have time

I'll be waiting...

Thank you

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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 2[AtsuMina & Other](24/6/13)
« Reply #36 on: June 24, 2013, 10:18:50 AM »
First of all, here's chapter 3 part 2!! Hope you guys enjoy it...And about that 'part'...I'm really sorry if i was bad in that, and as you guys may know, i'm fast forwarding this story a little because i find that...It'll be a very long story...Ahahah, and i don't wanna confuse myself with it~~ Tnx for commenting guys~~ Hope you truly enjoy this chapter!~!~ And also, i want to touch about logic, this story is not logic at all!! LOL :w00t: :D

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Chapter: Love start before war start-Part 2



-The girl footsteps can be heard in the silent street, as she walk along the dark and silent street, she can see some people lying down, more like they’re sick because of the drug. NyanNyan just walk as if she has watch the horrible view before, then she reach in front of the steel door. A man appears from her behind but she didn’t startle at all. The man smile and ask what did NyanNyanwant, poison that can paralyzing poison isNyanNyan’s answer. The man nod and lead NyanNyan to a room where there are many tiny bottle, the poison. NyanNyan walk around the room until she reached the next room. In there, the shape of the bottle is more beautiful to see and that has attract NyanNyan’s eyes and make her want to take it, so she take it and buy it using Acchan’s money as promised. Then she sends it to the Maeda’s resident where Acchan lives, and Takamina too after the engagement.


“This is for Maeda-san...”-The postman said, holding the package.

*Wait what?! A poison is sent through the postman?! Agh, I’ll just sign it.*-Acchan said.

“Ah, yes. It’s me, lemme’ sign it.”-Acchan said while signing the paper.

“Yes, thank you Maeda-san, here is your package.”-The postman then excuse himself.

“Heh, NyanNyan good job, I’ll make her sick and then she can’t fight in the war, and victory is for the AG.”-Acchan said, chuckling by herself with her evil intention.

*If her body did not move for half of the day, it’ll be a pain in the ass if she fight with her muscle after that.*-She thinks.

“Now, where’s the water...”-Acchan ask herself and search a water to cover the poison up.


-Acchan mixes the poison with colored water so that it’ll be unnoticeable. Then Acchan bought the poisoned water to their room and there, she can see Takamina’s pouting face, arguing to the two fathers who force them to engage. Acchan stop her step and wait the two fathers to step out from the house, Acchan just observing the poor Takamina.


“No no, dad! Yeah, I can stay in this freaking big house but not in the same room as her!”-Takamina said.

“Boo, you’re boring Takamina, if I were in your situation, leaving in a big house, having a girl sharing the same room as you is heaven.”-Takamina’s papa said.

“Ah, you need to take care of my daughter. Your dad and I gonna have a date, take care Takamina.”-Acchan’s papa said.

“Bye Takamina! See you around...3 a.m? Yeah... Bye!~”-Takamina’s papa said while leaving with Acchan’s papa.

“Hey dad! I’m not sure if I can stay up that late but enjoy your date! Bye my ass!!”-Takamina shout.

“Damn those father...”-Takamina said to herself.

“Takamina, you want drink? It’s delicious.”-Acchan said giving Takamina the poisoned water as she enter after those father gone.

*Eh?! Since when did she being nice to me? But right now I really need water, good timing Atsuko.*-Takamina think and take the glass.


-Takaminatake a slip to taste the water and it’s true, it is actually delicious. Takamina then gulp all the water, leaving the empty glass. She release a sigh of satisfaction because the taste is just perfect. She wanted to thanks Acchan but her lips can’t move, she wanted to move  her body but now, her body didn’t respond, in other word, she is paralyze. Now, her body  starts to tremble on its own, Acchan smirk by herself because her plan worked but then, Takamina’s trembled body stop for some reason, Acchan can also see that Takamina’s chest did not move at all, it mean she’s not breathing at all. Acchan start to panic because she didn’t expect the whole situation to be like this, she went to the living room to take her phone to call NyanNyan because for now, she is the one Acchan can relies on. Suddenly, Acchan feels that her waist is being touch by someone.


“Acchan...Mind if I kiss you on the neck?”-A voice startles Acchan.

“T-Takamina?!How?!”-Acchan ask as she turn her head back.

“How? I don’t know how, but I want you tonight.”-Takamina said whispering to Acchan.

“T-Tonight?! What are you talking about?!”-Acchan said while blushing.

“Yeah, tonight I want you.”-Takamina said and starts kissing Acchan’s neck.

“No wait! T-Takamina! What are you doi-“-Without finishing it, Takamina shut Acchan’s lips.

“Mpff...No...”-Acchan only manages to say that after Takamina kiss her.


-As the kiss last long, Takamina who is somehow not being herself deepen the kiss by inserting her tongue toAcchan’s mouth. Acchan surprisingly didn’t fight back but let her tongue being touch and roamed by Takamina’s, she is being weak after the kiss on the neck, she can only wait until Takamina stop, and gladly, she stop for real but it’s only because they both need air to breath. Both of them breathe heavily especially Acchan who didn’t expect THIS kind of things coming and happened. She then fix her blurry eyes and was shock after seeing Takamina, smirking with a pleasure face, as if she is a different person, not the Takamina she knows even though only several days with her.


“Ha…Ha…What’s this suppose to mean? I thought you’re…dead?”-Acchan ask still catching her breathe.

“I wish I can stop…But I can’t…I don’t know why, but I can’t.”-Takamina said, still smirking but her eyes show a different meaning behind the smirk.

*Eh...Her eyes…Why is her e-ahhhh!!*-Acchan thinking is interrupt by the kiss again.


-The kiss continue again, start with the tongue pushing  Acchan’stongue, not before long, Takamina hand start to roam all over Acchan’s body, her warm hand is deceiving Acchan. The gentleness of her hand makes Acchan relax but in the same time, it’s mix with pleasure, her hand start to move on its own, touching Takamina’s shoulder and all without Acchan herself knowing it. Takamina then start to moves her leg followed by Acchan to the couch behind Acchan. Takamina push Acchan gently, her body land safely but her lips has been completely stole by her. In a desperate situation, Acchan didn’t know what to do with it, she just lock Takamina’s waist with her leg and for Takamina, it is a signal to carry her partner to their bed. With Acchan’s leg still locking her waist, she lifts Acchan’s leg to support her body to be carried until the bedroom. In the bedroom, still kissing, Takamina release Acchan’s body and land it on the soft bed. Acchan break the kiss by struggling because she needs air to relax and to breathe.


“Ah…Ah…Taka…mina…please stop it…”-Acchan said when Takamina suddenly unbuttoning her shirt.

“Shhh…”-Takamina said while placing her lips on Acchan’s collarbone, and kiss it.


-By kissing and licking the scared girl’s collarbone, she has finish unbuttoning her shirt and now, her soft and smooth skin is revealed to be touch by Takamina, with just one finger, she move it downward slowly by following the line of the abdomen. A silent moan can be heard, it was from Acchan, trying her best to shut her mouth from moaning any further. Stop her finger movement, she rub Acchan’s stomach slowly. Before, Takamina who is the one trembling to death, now, Acchan experience the same things as Takamina. The moan grew even louder, but still with a silent sounds. Those naughty hand of her now go downward again and reach the spot which makes Acchan grip the pillow beside her even harder, but she can’t resist it at all. She bit her lips, trying to call for help and trying to stop Takamina, but all of that useless as the finger playing on that spot, but then its stop. Acchan who is feeling relief for a sec, she look at her top, where Takamina is. There, she could see Takamina blushing like crazy, but is sleeping tiredly. Acchan that time just feel relief.


“Ah...Stupid Takamina...Why did you do that?”-Acchantalk to herself.

“Eh? Somehow...I give up to her gentleness...I can still feel her warmth.”-She said again.

“I’m glad that...Eh? What poison is that actually?”-Acchanask herself and search the bottle in her pocket.

“V-Vi...a...gra? Viagra?!?! F-For men?!?!”-Acchan shout after reading the bottle’s label.

“You good for nothing NyanNyan...This is an erotic poison...”-Acchan said, blushing.

“Ah...I th-“-Without finishing her words, she fell asleep until morning.


-As the morning rise, the sparkling sunlight wake the refreshed girl, the girl who lose control last night, the girl who make her wife-to-be feel good, the one that make her enemy fall in love with her gentleness. She wake up, didn’t even notice that she is half naked from last night, didn’t even notice the smiling girl beside her. She turn her head after she felt something heavy pressing her left arm. She turn her head to see it, she widen her eyes when she saw a girl smiling, blushing and having a satisfied expression plastered on her face plus her sexy skin that is showing. She was shock until she jump out from the bed and start panicking making the other girl wake up.


“Ahh!! Why are you half naked?!?! Why me too?!?!”-Takaminashout while covering her showing skin with her hand.

“You don’t really remember last night right? Huh...”-Acchan said, chuckling.

“Wah-What did I do?!?!L-Last night?”-Takaminaask , still panicking.   

“Then I shall keep it a secret then~”-Said Acchan while blushing a little.

“I know it by looking at you that I do that but I’m not sure if I do that with you which is I don’t know what did I do to you last night!”-Takamina said with one breathe.

“I...Didn’t even know what are you saying but...Whatever you do, we’re still enemy, that fact will never change.”-Acchan said with a serious expression.

“Yeah, you’re still my enemy...But I’m still curious on what did I do to you...more like how its feel~”-Takamina said, with her perverted side showing.

“I’m going to school, to crush you guys...and to hold the tittle eiko no ranku.”-Acchan said, putting her cloth on.

“Heh, don’t get too cocky girl...eiko no ranku is our current tittle. Not even a chance.”-Takamina said.

“Hard work will always be paid off!!”-Acchan said it and leave the room to take a shower.

“Hard work...will always be paid off...Nice one Atsuko, let’s see how it goes.”-Takamina said.

“But wait...How did I lose control last night? Nah...I’m just going to school.”-Takamina said, waiting for her turn to take shower.


-As the two couple leave the house, both of them separated, taking the different route to go to school. Takamina just walk, spacing out about last night but behind her, another midget stalking her from behind, also wondering what happened to Takamina. Still, Takamina didn’t notice it because she let her perverted side showing again, thinking some perverted fantasy.


“Wow Takamina! Nice perverted fantasy you have there!”-Yuko shout from behind.

“Ugh! How did ya’ know?! Are you an esper?!”-Ask Takamina.

“Uwa! It’s true then?! Woah, I’m just guessing it! I can’t believe it! It’s rare to see you like this!”-Yuko said, smiling pervertedly for some reason.

“Who did you dream with? Is it good?~”-Yuko tease Takamina who is blushing.

“Shut the f**k up! Agh! Since you show up I’ve been a perverted already!”-Takamina scold Yuko.

“Aw...Wanna see my porn magazine? It’s good than your dream~”-Said Yuko, elbowing Takamina.

“Not that, better watch someone getting her ass kicked...How bout’ we kick some ass first?”-Takamina said.

“Can’t do that Takamina, I heard that today, the Rappapa is coming.Today.”-Yuko said seriously.

“Then, s-should we greet them? This is our first time meeting the Rappapa right?”-Takamina ask as she gulp.

“Yeah crazy, even the hell greets them nicely.”-Yuko said while gulping.

”J-Jya...Let us go now, being first year is scary.”-Takamina said while gulping, again.

“Y-Yeah...The worst is we’re known as the dual fang, a new sub-unit, we might have attract their attention...Damn it.”-Yuko said and gulp.

“And hey, could we not gulping anymore? I’m tired.”-Said Takamina.

“Oh yeah, you’re right. Let’s go anyway; we’ll wait for the Rappapa to come.”-Yuko said.


-The WMidget, also known as the dual fang waited for the Rappapa to come, the reason that they’re nervous is...They’re the one who rules the whole MajisukaGakuen, the strongest one among the student in MG. The so-called Rappapa was divided into four member, each of them have their own special abilities, personalities and way of thinking, but just two things that keep them together, that is their pride, the MajisukaGakuen and the desire to protect their leader’s name, even though the leader is nowhere to be found, missing.  After waiting for long, the dual fang eyes widen as they see a black car stopping in front of the school gate, one by one, the girls step out from the car. First, a tall girl with a short hair and wearing a furry jacket. Second…Finished? Only the vice-president who step out from the car, the dual fang is confused.


“Etto…Why is it? Only one of them is coming?”-Takamina ask Yuko.

“No idea…Maybe she is being bullied by the other? Pftt…”-Yuko said, jokingly.

“Yuko, no way in the hell that’ll happen, that’s the vice-president…”-Said Takamina.

“Yeah, yeah, I’m just kidding alright? But why alone?”-Yuko ask back.

“And that’s why I asked you…”-Takamina continue.

“Well, let’s just watch…and greet her…”-Yuko said, watching the vice-president’s steps.

“Bwahahaha!! She tripped her own leg!!”-Both the dual fang laugh.

“Ah…She’s acting cool even though almost of the student witnessed it.”-Yuko said.

“The vice president has arrived, she is waiting for you guys in the council student room.”-One of the student said.

“Ah, yes, wow…so fast.”-They both say.


-As wanted, the dual fang has arrived at the council student room. As they open the door, with a nervous feelings, there, they can already see the vice president from before, waiting for the.


“Ano…Calling for us?”-Yuko ask.

“Um…Yes, please sit down first.”-The vice president with cool aura ask them to sit down.

“So, may be rude but…Where the other member? We was inform that…Another three will come.”-Takamina said.

“Uh…Urm…They push me to come alone because they’re too lazy to go to school.”-The vice president said.

“Ah...By the way, the name is Takahashi Minami and she’s Oshima Yuko.”-Takamina continue.

“Yeah…Nice to meet you guys, mine is Shinoda Mariko, the vice president of this school, and also the vice president of Rappapa.”-Said Mariko.

“Yes, Mariko-sama right? Yes, we should be happy to serve under you.”-Takamina said.

“Ahahaha…”-Mariko let out an awkward smile while the two midget thinks.

*Oh damn it! She’s not cool at all even though she has a cool aura!”-Takamina thinks.

*Shit…I was right, from her smile she is being bullied by the other member!*-Thinks Yuko.

*What in the world will happen to MG with a vice president this weak?!?!*-Both of them think.


TBC...

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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 2[AtsuMina & Other](24/6/13)
« Reply #37 on: June 24, 2013, 10:28:53 AM »
Well I guess the erotic poison did its job XD
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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 2[AtsuMina & Other](24/6/13)
« Reply #38 on: June 24, 2013, 10:48:07 AM »
Haruna bought the wrong kind of poison...

But Atsuko seemed to be weak over Minami's assualt...

Well the poison was working alright... but did not give the effect that Atsuko wanted...

Yeah... Why did the MG become so weak...?

Who was suppose to be the leader...?

Why did Mariko seem to be so weak...?

What's going to happen to Wmidget now...?

Would they be the top...?

How about Atsuko and Haruna...?

How are they going to fight?

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

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Re: The Burden To Love You~Chapter 3-Part 2[AtsuMina & Other](24/6/13)
« Reply #39 on: June 24, 2013, 10:49:42 AM »
Nyan-nyan gave a wrong poison! :banghead: Ohwell that just so Nyan-nyan! Ahaha XD

Takaboy SCORE! :fap But she forgot what happened last night or not? :twisted: Hohoho

Uwaaa~ What will happen next? What will happen to MG and AG? Will Acchan and Takamina realize their feelings for each other? I can't wait.. And the war going.to start soon.. Kyaa~ I cant wait to see more AtsuMina.and KojiYuu moments! :wub:

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