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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) 2.5 Destiny is a..
« Reply #20 on: November 10, 2013, 12:02:15 PM »
Tomochin fall in love with Kai instantly...  :sweatdrop:

What will Acchan do??  :grin:

Acchan get back your husband !!!

Can't wait for the next chapter...

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) 2.5 Destiny is a..
« Reply #21 on: November 10, 2013, 12:49:09 PM »
Why did Yuki kissed Mayu? I know there was someone coming but... :?

Kai finally made an impression on Acchan but Tomochin suddenly jumped into conclusions and now declares Kai as her boyfriend. :shocked My Atsumina!!!!! :cry:

Kojiyuu both sleep with only in their underwear. Nice move Yuko. :inlove:

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #22 on: November 11, 2013, 08:25:04 AM »
"To myself in the past, do your job and don't fall in love.. it's not going to work, you'll be only hurt, everything you do to her will hurt you twice so don't fall in love with her DON'T FORGET YOUR GOAL, now I'm just a walking dead, a stranger on her eyes who can't stop hating her, I promised I would torture her till my last breathing, no matter how many true lies I used to get here.. DON'T FALL IN LOVE YUKI"

"To myself in the past Dear Acchan... stay away from that blond guy, he's even worst than the guys who tried to use you at least they pretended to like you the way you are but he.. he tried to change you, his love wasn't truth no matter all the things he did to get you he wasn't in love with you but he was in love of your appearance, I was only his game the thing that he wanted and once he got it, tried to change it cause he didn't like it~ stay away from that blond guy who's worst than anyother trying to get to know you to not understand you~

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #23 on: November 11, 2013, 08:32:20 AM »
Those Letters always makes me scared of the future of the characters here. It feels like a warning for a dark event.

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #24 on: November 11, 2013, 09:00:52 AM »
Now that Atsuko felt something for Kai...

Kai was being claimed by Tomochin...

And Yuki and Mayu were kissing...

Jun was quite upset about the closeness between Yuki and Rena...

Same with Mayu....

Riku did not want others to see Yuko's body.

So great... what's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #25 on: November 11, 2013, 09:38:57 AM »
i hated it when yuki hurting mayu,

those letter were scaries thing

yuki seems tried to take revenge on mayu and he had a Goal,what kind of goal? to hurt mayu? there must be a missunderstanding,i'm sure

and looks like from letter#1 yuki finally could make it,whatever his goal it make mayu sad and...and...i don't know but looks like she gonna take her life...she will suicide....ahh hurt hurt



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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #26 on: November 12, 2013, 07:05:28 AM »
Author san  :farofflook: :farofflook: :farofflook: 
im really Thankful.
Im currently doing degree on a really heavy subject :on study: :on study: :on study: :on study:
reading this fic makes me happy and less stressed  :on gay: :on gay: :on gay:
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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) Letters#2
« Reply #27 on: November 13, 2013, 06:43:36 AM »
                                                                             ~ 3~

Tomochin insisted and made Kai sit next to her so the three were having breakfast together..

"More uncomfortable and I will die..." He thought nervous looking at his toasts. "What you're not going to eat?" Acchan asked with a charming smile which made Kai blush just by looking at her. "She's so beatiful" he thought stunned.

Both had eye contact for 2 seconds till...

"Honey taste this is delicious!" Tomochin said grabbing a toast and putting in on Kai' s mouth abruptly.

Acchan looked other way "Why me?" She wondered then sighed.

Mayu and Jun in other hand were looking at other table. "Did we kiss?" She wondered then realized that she was wearing yesterday's clothes and hair must look horrible.

"I don't know why Rena talks to that guy.." Her boyfriend said irritated and didn't pay attention to Mayu's looks.

Mayu was trying to fix her hair "If she wasn't cousin that jealousy would be weird" she said carelessly. Jun turned to look at her "Yeah.. totally" he said trying to not look obvious.

Once everyone ended they breakfast they heard another speech then went to have fun.

(During breakfast Kai introduced himself properly)

"Honey we're going to be at the beach So come with us once you change!" Tomochin said pulling Acchan with her to their room.

Yuko and Riku got closer to Kai.

"I thought you like Acchan, what you were doing with Tomochin?" Yuko asked pinching his cheek.

"Ouuchhh AHHHHHHHH nothing!" He replied in pain as he tries to go away.

Riku smiled separate the two.

"I gotta go to the beach and fix all this!" Kai said irritated then walked away.

Yuko and Riku watched him go.

"Do you want to see some beach drama?" Yuko asked looking at her best friend.

Riku yawned "No.. I rather play on my ds" he said not interested then walked ahead while Yuko pouted "Baka... anyways I'll go to the beach and I think I'll wear a black or maybe white swimsuit. What do you think suits me better?" She asked as she walks behind him.

Riku stopped walking. Yuko smiled

"Did you her Yuko will wear a Black swimsuit?" Some guys were whispering.

"This is my chance, she has a big chest!" They were murmuring.

Riku turned his head "I will go with you.." he said controlling his anger. "I know" she replied with the same smile and walked next to him.

"There he goes blocking us.." Some guys were whispering as they walk together.

During breakfast Jun texted Rena and said he wanted to talk to her after breakfast.

So Jun went after Rena while Yuki was buying more food for himself.

(Of course breakfast is payed by school but he wanted more so he had to pay)

Mayu was still on her seat thinking if she should go talk to him or not, once she gained courage she sat in front of him while he was eating.

Yuki stopped eating and looked at her.

Mayu took a deep breath.

"Want some?" He asked offering bread.

"Oh.. no thanks" she said nervous.

Yuki smirked "Must not be what you use to eat as breakfast... btw you look horrible!" He said then bite his bread.

Mayu pouted a little then got closer and whispered "Look at me *Yuki looked at her* that kiss didn't mean anything" She said trying to talk as low as possible.

"Oh it was a nice kiss! Your lips were really soft" Yuki said mocking and with a  normal tone of voice not caring if anyone finds out.

Mayu looked around if there was anyone from their classroom luckily there wasn't, she smiled a little then with her arm dropped Yuki's plate with bread and walked away.

Yuki saw his plate and his food on the floor as other customers looked at him. He payed for the damage and went after Mayu.

He reached her walking to her room close to the pool area then grabbed her by her arm and made her spin pulling her to his arms. "Be careful you can fall in the pool so early" he said squeezing Mayu on his arms.

"Why are you so annoying?" Mayu asked trying to break free and forcing with him.

"Why you think you can do whatever you want just because you're rich and pretty?" He asked.

Mayu stopped forcing and looking "What are you saying?" She asked concerned.

"Well it's time to remember!" Yuki said before pushing her to the pool with no mercy.

Mayu came out from the water and looked at him.

"Hope that helps!" Yuki said before walking away.

"WT...?" Mayu wondered as people around looks at her "THAT JERK!!!"  She said mad and hitting the water.

Walking together...

"I don't trust him Rena Chan!" Jun says worried as he walks next to Rena.

Rena sighed "Jun..." she said and stopped walking.

Jun also stopped and looked at her.

"I told million times I didn't like Mayu Chan but did you listen?" Rena asked kinda sad while Jun just moved his head side to side "It's different, this guy wears I don't know a mask... am I the only one who can see it? He's hidding something!" He said serious.

Rena looked at Jun then gave him a hug "I think you're hallucinating but if it makes you feel better, I'll try to ignore him!" She  sweetly as Jun puts his chin on her head.

"I wish Mayu was more like you.." Jun said while Rena just. Sighed then broke their hug.

~ After half an hour at the beach~

"Look Kai is sitting with the populars!" Yuko said pointing at Kai who was putting Sun blocker on Tomochin.

Riku smiled " I hope he doesn't get tangled" he said as he lays on a towel.

"You never speak?" Yuko asked to Yuki who was with them.

Yuki smiled "Just when it's necessary!" He said then started to read a magazine.

"Riku put me Sun blocker!" Yuko said noticing that Riku might fall sleep and won't appreciate her with swimsuit.

He didn't answer.

"Maybe I should ask Yuki kun" she said smirking.

Riku fast got up and putted sunblocker on her.

Yuki only smiled.

"Babe I'll go get us some ice creams!" Tomochin said as she gets up while Kai was watching Acchan who was sleeping on her towel and was wearing a pink Bikini.

Kai realized he wasn't the only one admiring her and couldn't  help to get jealous.

"What are you looking at? Bunch of jerks!" He said mad and throwing them sand.

Acchan Sat and looked at him "Cute!" She thought and smiled a little.

Those guys went away then Kai turned around and saw Acchan smiling at him, blushed for second time today.

"You're totally red, you should wear Sunblocker or later might hurt!" Acchan said grabbing the sunblocker next to her then got closer to Kai and started putting him on his face.

Kai was nervous as she puts it nicely with her finger.

"You're one of a kind aren't' t you?" She asked with the same charming smile.

Kai was lost in Acchanland.

Acchan was only smiling playfully "Done!" she said still with smirk plastered on her face then went to the sea "C'mon Kai it's very hot here!" She inviting him.

The two went to the sea to play.

Yuki got bored of his magazine and looked around then noticed Mayu and Jun with Rena.

He looked at Mayu perfect body and how Jun was putting sunblocker on her, she's holding her hair. He looked other before Mayu notice but too late she did notice.

Yuki got up and Mayu looked at him as he was coming.

"What the hell is he planning? Why's he's coming?" She thought nervous as he gets closer and closer.

Once in front of them.

"Let's go to the water!" He said with a dream boy smile.

Mayu blushed "Why would I?" She asked irritated.

"What are you doing here?" Jun asked getting closer to Yuki.

Yuki smirked "First I didn't ask you and second I hate when a guy gets to close to my face!" He replied annoyed.

Rena who was behind Mayu separate the two and went with Yuki.

"Bastard!" Jun said while Mayu was completely spacing out

"Why I thought he was asking me? Stupid jerk!" She thought looking at the two playing around.

Acchan and Kai came out of the water.

Tomochin dropped the ice creams "What happened to you?" She asked checking his face as Acchan smirks mischievously.

"What's wrong?" Kai asks desperate while Tomochin looks  Acchan.

"What? It's funny.. Kai will  be smiling for a while!" Acchan said still with a smirk.

"Don't worry babe your skin tone will be alright  couple days it won't noticed!" Tomochin said as Acchan smirks.

Kai only looked at Acchan...

(If you wonder what he had, he has a :) on his face it was really visible cause he was really tanned on his face) 







 







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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~3~
« Reply #28 on: November 13, 2013, 07:24:00 AM »
PLEASE don't tear the initial couple apart. Though I do ship KaiAcchan, tearing Tomo and Kai is kinda... ==''

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~3~
« Reply #29 on: November 13, 2013, 12:43:36 PM »
Riku is so overprotective to Yuko. :wub:

Is he even aware of that? :?

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~3~
« Reply #30 on: November 13, 2013, 01:15:59 PM »
Poor Kai being played and teased again by Atsuko...

Would Kai be able to clear the mess that he created unintentionally...?

Would he cause a riff between Atsuko and Tomochin?

Would he confess his feeling for Atsuko and dump Tomochin?

Yeah... Riku and Yuko are funny to see... with Riku being protective and all... with Yuko kept playing with Riku's jealousy

Yuki and Mayu are fun too... being a jerk and insulting each other all the time...

Also Jun and Rena... being jealous and protective... but unable to claim one another somehow...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~3~
« Reply #31 on: November 13, 2013, 01:24:44 PM »
Can't Wait for the Next One ~
Please Update More ~

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #32 on: November 17, 2013, 08:15:06 AM »
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After a long day in the beach everyone were preparing for a party at night (obviously the headmaster and teachers would be there)

Kai went to dress at Riku' s and Yuki's room...

"I thought you said fix and now you guys are the couple of the year!" Riku said as he buttons his shirt while Kai was looking at himself on the mirror then pouted.

"You know.. now I think Acchan is not how I thought she would be." He said kinda sad looking at the sink while Yuki was laying on his bed.

"Hmm.." Riku looked at his sad friend "What do you mean?" He asked.

Kai sighed "She likes to tease me play around and she's never serious about anything like if she's hiding her true self, she takes advantage of me cause she knows she's too pretty,I feel fooled all the time with her!" He said still sad.

Riku putted his hand on his shoulder, showing support "This is just the first day maybe she's not like that.. it's impossible to know someone in just one day!" He said cheering his friend.

Kai smiled a little "Yeah you're right..maybe she's not like that" he said more positive.

The two boys looked at Yuki "Aren't you coming?" They asked at the same time.

"Maybe later!" He said expressionless.

The two looked at eachother "Okay.." they replied then left.

Yuki pulled out something from under his pillow, it was a diary and started reading...

-At the pool area.. Party-

The two handsome boys looked around "This looks better than I expected!" Riku said happy looking at the tables,the lights in the pool and the DJ.

"Rikuuuuuu!" An squirrel girl says happy hugging him from behind.

Riku blushed because he could feel her assets on his back. "I told you don't need TO HUG ME LIKE THAT!" He said still embarrassed.

Kai ignored the two and looked around, he found with his eyes the one he was looking for.The two had eye contact Acchan smiled at him and when he was about to walk to her someone stopped him.

"Kai you're already here let's dance!" Tomochin said pulling him with her.

Riku pouted "Stop! Stop!" He said breaking their hug.

Yuko pouted a little "Okay you almost ruin my dress be nicer luckily I'm not your date!" She let out carelessly.

Riku was a little impressed "What? Who's your date? Why?" He asked.

"Well you didn't ask me so somebody else did and I agree because I want a boyfriend not a friend tonight!" Yuko said leaving while Riku was confused.

"Wow Rena Chan you're looking very pretty tonight!" Jun said behind her while Rena looked down "You're looking good too Jun" She said shyly.

Jun got next to her "What you dressed up like up for him?" He asked showing his discontent.

Rena looked at him "What..." she whispered confused.

"Have fun with him!" He said coldly then walked away to Atsuko and offered her a drink, Kai saw that as he dances with Tomochin.

Acchan noticed that and pretended to laugh.

~Walking the hall~

"Stupid Jun, you forgot about picking me up!" Mayu muttered to herself mad as she walks then she saw in the reception someone familiar.

"Well well.. What we have here?" Yuki said smirking.

Mayu pouted as Yuki Don't  her pass.

"Don't tell me your boyfriend forgot about you!" He said laughing still not letting her pass.

Mayu started punching him on his chest "What's your problem? Stop bothering me STUPID!" She said still punching him with her purse.

Yuki got mad an grabbed her arms hard to stop her.

"Let go you're hurting me..." Mayu said in pain while Yuki was still holding her tigher and looking at her in the eyes without saying a word.

Even though Mayu was scared couldn't help to think that there's something about him maybe a connection and she feels urges to kiss him.

Yuki blinked a few times then let go Mayu.The same thought run through Yuki's head at that moment but he rathered let go. "Too bad he forgot about you... You look very pretty!" He said before leaving.

Mayu was confused but still got to the party.

Everyone were looking at Kai' s face because it was funny and Kai was getting madder and madder when he as about to say something...

"Why you all keep looking at my boyfriend? He looks gorgeously amazing!" Tomochin said to everyone then everyone stopped looking.

"Thanks!" Kai said with a smile and Tomochin stole another kiss from him.

Kai was shocked while Tomochin was smirking at him then smiled also.

Acchan noticed then walked away, Kai noticed "Tomochin I'll go to the bathroom wait for me!" He said then walked away fast.

Yuko was having a good time with her date while Riku looks  them jealous.

The guy was trying to steal a kiss from Yuko but Yuko was playfully turning away.

"I had enough!" Riku said squeezing his cup then threw it away and walked to the two.

"Hey can you see? She doesn't want to kiss you!" He said grabbing Yuko by her arm and pulling her with him.

The guy was mad "Who are you?" He asked then punched him.

"I'm her BOYFRIEND!" He shouted then punched the other student.

Yuki fast grabbed the guy who was on the floor to not let him respond to Riku.

"Riku Nyan~you all heard he's  boyfriend" Yuko said happy hugging him.

Riku facepalmed himself "What did I do?" Then looked at how Happy Yuko was.

The teacher asked what happened but Riku and Yuki threat him so he didn't say anything.

After some minutes...

"Well our dear Rena Chan is in love!" A girl said putting her arm around her neck.

"What?" Rena said then sees the girl holding her diary "How did you get that?" She asked trying to snatch it .

The girl smiled "You suffer a lot Rena Chan, this great love of yours cause you a hard time... I'm going to read a little"  she said while other girls grab Rena.

Everyone were looking at them. (Except teachers and the headmaster who were eating at the caffetery)

Jun didn't do anything cause he planned it as revenge, he even told them where she hides her diary!!

Yuki snatched the diary from her "I truly dislike people like you.." he said serious looking at them.

The girls Let go Rena and Yuki gives her diary back. She looked down embarrased while Jun pouted.

"So you are the great love?" The first girl asked.

"That's not of your business but am I Rena Chan?" Yuki asked with a dream boy smile

Rena looked at him then looked at Jun for a second then turned to Yuki again. "Yes.." she said shyly.

"Don't be embarrassed..." he said then tucked her hair behind her ear and kissed softly on her lips.

While everyone did an "Awww!" Mayu and Jun were having a bad time.

Mayu looked away fast while Jun just walked away.

The two stopped kissing and held hands then walked next to Mayu.

Kai looked around for Acchan but it was useless she wasn't there.

"Where did she go?" Kai asked catching his breath he looked everywhere and now he was at the reception.

"Kai.." A voice said from behind, Kai turned around "Acchan!" He said happy once he saw her his smile faded "Where's the dress?" He  watching her Black jacket, boots and skirt.

Acchan smirked "I'm going out.." she  passing next to him But Kai grabbed her hand. "Don't go!" He said looking at her with worried face.

"Relax I'll be back later besides my friend is waiting outside" She said careless.

"Please don't..." He asked but Acchan let go his hand and walks outside to get on a car.

Kai went outside and saw the guy and Acchan waving at him then left.

Kai scratched his head mad then got back to the party feeling broken hearted and disappointed.












 

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #33 on: November 17, 2013, 12:27:32 PM »
Owhhh.. Kai just be brave to express your love to Acchan before it too late.

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #34 on: November 17, 2013, 12:41:23 PM »
Everyone seems to be jealous of one another....

Interesting development...

Now that Riku and Yuko were officially together... according to Riku's declaration

Mayu and Jun were jealous and not happy with the intimacy between Yuki and Rena

Atsuko was unhappy with the way Tomochin kept throwing herself toward Kai

Poor Kai, needed to see Atsuko going on a date with a guy in a sexy clothes

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #35 on: December 21, 2013, 03:01:33 AM »
Umm update? :D

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #36 on: March 27, 2014, 05:25:34 PM »
I want to now what will happen soon  :cry:

Update soon  :bow:

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Re: Just another high school fanfic :) ~4~
« Reply #37 on: March 30, 2014, 03:15:27 PM »
waaa!!! update pleaseee~

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