Author Topic: [Louise-sama] Breakeven | Prologue (Read 22824 times)

Louise-sama · « **on:** December 01, 2013, 08:47:29 AM »

This is a teaser for a story that has been haunting me for a while.
No, I won't abandon any of my series, but let me just vent on this one.

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Breakeven
Louise-sama

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I love you.

But I love her.

I will still love you.

But she will still love me.

She is your best friend.

But I betrayed you.

She never loved me.

We are the same.

You can just love me.

Or you can just wait for me.

We can love each other.

But I still love her.

I don't deserve them.

They don't deserve you.

I messed up everything.

You can still come to me.

I can still fight for you.

But you love her now.

We still love each other.

Do we?

In this war for love, deceits and lies are inevitable. Who can withstand the pain will take the blame. Either way, I won't cry, 'hearts don't break even.'

Characters:

Oshima Yuko
Kojima Haruna
Takahashi Minami
Maeda Atsuko
Shinoda Mariko

I'm sorry, you guys. I'm really sorry.

Konoe · « **Reply #1 on:** December 01, 2013, 08:59:25 AM »

Kojiyuu and Atsumina Forever!!!

I want to vote TakaYuu as third but... it's not there and I'm sure Atsuyuu will win.

Pandah · « **Reply #2 on:** December 01, 2013, 09:20:41 AM »

i was hoping for MariAtsu to be in there as well lol
but this is interesting

AshuraX · « **Reply #3 on:** December 01, 2013, 10:04:49 AM »

I agree with that panda guy.

MariAtsu~! MariAtsu~! MariAtsu~!

Wait, crack that ship.

ATSUYUU! ATSUYUU! ATSUYUU!

yanouchi · « **Reply #4 on:** December 01, 2013, 10:17:20 AM »

Well I hope that MariHaru will win...

Louise-sama · « **Reply #5 on:** December 01, 2013, 10:22:27 AM »

Lol I don't know, you guys. Let's see MariAtsu's luck then.

This fic is gonna be a heck of a rumbling gamble!!!

Forgive me 'cause I'm known for cliche and my poor writing skills. But I want to vent my gushing angst! So help me!

Vote for your mightiest ship!

sakura_drop_ · « **Reply #6 on:** December 01, 2013, 10:31:12 AM »

AtsuYuu FTW!!!!

imteedee · « **Reply #7 on:** December 01, 2013, 11:25:16 AM »

thy vote goes for AtsuYuu...

I solely voted for AtsuYuu

Tii votes for AtsuYuu! ooops no pressure

applelink · « **Reply #8 on:** December 01, 2013, 12:15:59 PM »

Atsuyuu Atsuyuu!!! Atsuyuu for this !!

I really wish the fics will be for Atsuyuu, but MariAtsu may interesting too

chichay12 · « **Reply #9 on:** December 01, 2013, 12:26:59 PM »

ATSUMINA

imteedee · « **Reply #10 on:** December 01, 2013, 01:18:34 PM »

thank you for this poll which made me realize I'm not alone in this humble ship with saku, Ashu and apple even if we only have a pair of paddles and thy great ships had cannons and machine guns...

I stand my ship and promise to protect it until I leave this fandom, thank you.

Yours,
TD

Louise-sama · « **Reply #11 on:** December 01, 2013, 02:09:22 PM »

Good for you, TD-san! It's great to develop such friendship amongst your fellow shippers.

Fortify your precious ship's walls, everyone! We have a tight fight among AtsuMina, AtsuYuu, and KojiYuu.
May the odds be ever in your favor!

Kazan · « **Reply #12 on:** December 01, 2013, 02:09:52 PM »

ATSUYUU

ZeriusLei · « **Reply #13 on:** December 01, 2013, 02:12:59 PM »

Forever, till eternity.
AtsuYuu!

Shinoki · « **Reply #14 on:** December 01, 2013, 03:22:16 PM »

...looks at battlefield????
well...
Atsuyuuuuu~~

AshuraX · « **Reply #15 on:** December 01, 2013, 04:10:32 PM »

Wait a sec. Why isn't there an option for AtsuHaru? O.O''

Sydney W · « **Reply #16 on:** December 01, 2013, 04:30:03 PM »

Atsumina all the way of course

AshuraX · « **Reply #17 on:** December 01, 2013, 04:50:24 PM »

We interrupt this war to bring you AtsuYuu on a friggin shark!

Now back to waiting anxiously.

sakura_drop_ · « **Reply #18 on:** December 01, 2013, 04:51:07 PM »

AtsuMina is too mainstream... And if you look at mah siggy, you can see why it's more worth to vote for AtsuYuu...

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #19 on:** December 01, 2013, 05:15:16 PM »

I'm appologize in advance to all AtsuYuu shippers.
AtsuMina is maistream because it's the most real looking couple!