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The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 3 Part 2: Seductive Waitress
« on: December 04, 2013, 02:49:52 AM »
Hello guys! I decided to make a new story :)

Entirely, this fanfic will be in chapters, so be patient if I ever update later than I predicted. Because I'm a troubled writer and with school ending, I have to improve my lower grades (preferably in science, cause I suck it *sulks*) (._.)

Anyways, enjoy the prologue!

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The Thin Line (Prologue)

"Have you ever heard of Oshima Yuko before?"

Haruna raised an eyebrow, as she deeply thought of the name. She nodded her head once she remembered hearing the name from other people.

"Yeah I've heard about her. What about Oshima-san?"

Her friend scooted over a little closer to Haruna and lowered her tone into a whisper. "I heard that she's a prostitute."

Haruna nearly choked on her orange juice as she finished hearing her friend's new gossip. Whatever it was, she doesn't know if it was true.

"Eh? Really?"

Her friend, who has short curly hair and a fairly known student of their school because of her trollness, shrugged her shoulders. "I don't know. One of my friend is in the same class with Oshima, but I don't know where she get that from."

Haruna raised her eyebrow in confusion. "How can you be so sure that Oshima-san is a prostitute."

Mariko, who was the friend sitting beside her, thought for a moment and made a face of realization. "Oh, I remembered! Her friend was walking home last night and saw Oshima with a guy inside a love hotel. Don't know which love hotel though, but it isn't far from here."

Haruna nodded her head. "Souka." It wasn't that she believed the rumors, because it might not be true. Although the rumors of Oshima Yuko being a pervert was definitely true due to the fact that the latter loved to grope other girl's breasts.

"Look, their she is now." Mariko whispered to Haruna's ear.

Haruna looked to where her friend was pointing at, and saw the girl herself. Short, curly brown hair, and a somewhat squirrel-like face. Her face was looking down at the ground while everyone surrounding her give her weird glaces and whispers.

"She seems innocent." Haruna gave her opinion.

"How can you be sure?" Mariko asked.

"I'm definitely sure. She's not what all you guys think she is."
« Last Edit: December 27, 2013, 02:14:02 PM by AryaMachdi »
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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2013, 03:15:18 AM »
Hi Arya,
I'm really happy that you decided to make a new fanfic.  :)

About Yuko as a prostitute... 'Give me five' PV popped in my head.  :cry:
Is it really her job? I can't wait to figure it out.

Umm... I wanna ask about the pairing, is it only KojiYuu? or... many characters will be added too.

I'll wait your 1st chap.  :D

PS: Don't worry about your grades, just enjoy your holiday. :lol:

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2013, 04:26:15 AM »
Hi Arya,
I'm really happy that you decided to make a new fanfic.  :)

About Yuko as a prostitute... 'Give me five' PV popped in my head.  :cry:
Is it really her job? I can't wait to figure it out.

Umm... I wanna ask about the pairing, is it only KojiYuu? or... many characters will be added too.

I'll wait your 1st chap.  :D

PS: Don't worry about your grades, just enjoy your holiday. :lol:

Me too

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2013, 07:02:21 AM »
yuko is prostitute?
wow it's so new in fic
can't wait for next chapter

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #4 on: December 04, 2013, 08:18:47 AM »
Yuko a prostitute???

Interesting..

Update soon, please.. :bow:

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #5 on: December 04, 2013, 09:09:01 AM »
Wow  :shocked:

I love it already  :wub: will these be a romantic drama?

Update when you can  ;)

Milky: “With Sayaka… I’ve been wondering what she thinks of me.“It’s not that type of relationship, but I wanted to figure out what she thought of me so… I kind of tried to seduce her. And she blushed.”

Sayanee: “I did not!” || Milky: “You did.”

Sayaka: “I actually wasn’t though! I didn’t know what she was trying to convey with that in the first place.” || Milky: “She was kind of shifting around in her seat and looking really puzzled so it was fun.”

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2013, 09:45:17 AM »
interesting...

waiting for update  :twothumbs

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #7 on: December 04, 2013, 11:16:59 AM »
and my kojiyuu radar brought me here!!! yayy kojiyuu  :heart: :thumbsup
continue continue  :wth :bow:



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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #8 on: December 04, 2013, 05:04:01 PM »
Finally, arya-san!
Eh I thought your upcoming fic title is 'All Mine', is that a different story?
Anyway, thankyou for new kojiyuu story :D

I agree with anakpanti-san, reading yuko as prostitute makes GM5 pv popped out in my mind (I don't really like it though, but I'd love to read how this story will be) :D

I'm waiting patiently for chap 1~
(Scratch that, I can't wait!) XD lol
And goodluck for your study~

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Prologue
« Reply #9 on: December 04, 2013, 05:11:40 PM »
I want to read more :grin:
Thank you.

Yuko and prostitite? WOW
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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #10 on: December 05, 2013, 12:02:05 PM »
@anakpanti: Hey Putri-san! There will be other pairings as well, not just KojiYuu so it will be much more interesting ;)

@olive29: Maybe... maybe not :)

@anonymousstalker: Yes! Romantic drama is indeed the genre! :D

@FoxKing: And here is the update ;)

@Tam_atsu: I'm glad you like the prologue, Tamaki-san =3

@atsukojiyuu_C: All Mine is another story with a different plot, I will post that maybe tomorrow but thank you so much for reading the prologue! :heart:

@Zita: Surprised? Hehe, no, thank you Zita-chan for reading the prologue ;)


I finished school today, and tomorrow's a day off! I instantly thought of updating this story so I here I am now~

Enjoy the first chapter guys, and thank you for waiting! And please follow me on Twitter and Tumblr (links below!)

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The Thin Line - Chapter 1: The Assignment

I heard the school bell ring, signaling everyone to go to their respectful classes. Luckily this was the last class of the day, which means after going home I could get some rest and maybe play with my pet puppy afterwards.

"See you later, Nyan Nyan!" Mariko exclaimed as she waved her hand at me while walking out of the classroom I was in, which was Human Sociology. It was a new class that was assigned not a few months ago to encouraged students towards their social life and activities. It was actually useful. For most people.

I smiled back and waved my hand. And not so long before Mariko left the class, a very familiar figure entered the class.

And everyone went silent. Their eyes staring at the person in the doorway. Oshima Yuko.

There was something weird about her. During recess, she looked completely fine but her expression was barely readable. Was it sadness, pain? I'm not sure. I looked at her thoroughly, noticing her eyes were all red. It doesn't take a scientist to know that she had been crying. A lot, from the looks of it.

Seeing her in a situation where people's suspicion was directly towards her, made me feel guilty. I never knew her, but it felt like we had been friends for a long time.

But her attention decreased when the teacher soon arrived. Then everyone sat down, including Yuko who sat by the left of me.

"Hello everyone. Now, I just want to make things quick because my wife is expecting to come home early for a special surprise." The teacher said in front, following by dozens of whistles and shouts from the students preferably male. Perverts.

"Not that kind of special surprise." The teacher glared at them menacingly, then hold out a stack of paper in his hand. "These will be instructions for your assignments, where most of you will choose your partners by yourselves."

Most of the students cheered. Well, expect me and Yuko.

"Now, everyone must choose their partners, CALMLY and quietly. Don't repeat the same mistake like yesterday. Okay, that will be all. I leave it all to you, Takamina." With a nod from the short girl who was also a close friend of mine besides Mariko, the teacher then left the class.

In an instant, everyone got out of their seats and sat with their partners. In record time.

My mind quickly thought of Takamina being my partner, but when I was about to sat up and walk towards her seat, I noticed her sitting with Acchan whom again was a close friend of mine as well. They act all affectionate as usual. Couples. I cringed.

That's when I noticed... Yuko hasn't found a partner yet.

She had her head down, hands folded on top of her lap. And judging by the surroundings, no one noticed her. Or even acknowledge her presence.

I sighed. Maybe it's time I should talk to her. I mean, like I said to Mariko, she isn't as bad as she looks.

I sat up and walk slowly towards her seat so that I won't disturb her. My arm stretched out and nudged her shoulder as gently as possible.

A quick response from her. She instantly jerked her head to the right and noticed me. With a surprised look.

"K-Kojima-san?" She stuttered very nervously. See, not as bad as she looked. I smiled at her, she looked fairly cute to be honest.

"Hi Yuko-san. Did I get your name right?" I tilted my head to the side, while giving her a warm welcoming smile. It certainly worked on her, because she was blushing. Very hard.

"Y-Yes you did..." Her voice was soft and barely loud as a whisper.

I giggled. I nudged her shoulder. And when her eyes looked up towards me, I immediately asked her the question.

"Do you wanna be partners?"

I never saw someone so surprised in my life, until now. She looked so shocked that her mouth was centimeters apart. Maybe she rarely got asked by questions like these. Or maybe she doesn't have any friends to hang out with. Maybe. I'm just speaking out.

"W-What...?"

"Do you wanna be partners? With me? In this assignment? Together?" I asked, motioning both of my hands to her and myself to show the word 'together'.

She looked very pleased and excited, but in just a moment, her frown returned.

"I don't want to be a bother to you. You could just pick your friends, don't worry. I could do this by myself."

I frowned as well. To be honest, I wanted to help her. It's alright to trust me, Yuko. You just had to believe in that.

"Come on, Yuko-san. You won't be a bother to me, I promise. Pleaseee...." Pulling my pouting face, I looked to see her reaction.

She couldn't resist them. I smirked on the inside. Everyone falls for it.

I heard her sigh, and gave me a painful smile. "Alright. If that's what Kojima-san wants, then I won't decline it!"

I smiled widely and pulled her into a tight hug. "Thank you~" I felt her arms trying to get pull me away and saw a few students looking our way, but I didn't care. Because I was actually happy that I'm partnered with Yuko.

Maybe it's a chance I could get to know her better. And show everyone that she isn't what they thinkt she was.

I could change her life.

And maybe, she could change mine's.

"K-Kojima-san... I can't.. breath..."

"Ah! Gomen ne, gomen ne!"

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Sorry if it's way short. I'll make it longer in the next chap! ^^
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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #11 on: December 05, 2013, 01:18:31 PM »
I would like to know if that prostitute thing is a lie or truth. :sweatdrop:
This is going to be interesting.
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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #12 on: December 05, 2013, 01:46:55 PM »
haruna doing the first move... I think i gonna love this fic XD

Update soon :on gay:

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #13 on: December 05, 2013, 01:48:31 PM »
Kojiharu initiating the hug, and yuko blushing ??? Need more of this !!

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #14 on: December 05, 2013, 06:47:53 PM »
Oh I see :D
I'm waiting for 'all mine' before, but now I'm craving for both with this story!
Yuko in all gloomy and nyannyan with 'the one who want to attached' is just soooo good! XD

Want to know the truth about prostitute thing, and can't wait for their time to be close friend :D
Thankyou arya-san~

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 1: The Assignment
« Reply #15 on: December 06, 2013, 08:01:34 AM »
haruna hugging yuko  :P

update soon  :bow:  :bow:  :bow:

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 2: A Friend In Need
« Reply #16 on: December 07, 2013, 06:44:01 AM »
@Zita: All will be revealed in later chapters, so patience my friend ;)

@Chicay12: You don't see that everyday huh? I wanted her to make the first move, just to add a little fun! Thank you for reading this chap!  :heart:

@Senelcar: There will be more coming... *winks*

@atsukojiyuu_C: Thank youuu~ All Mine isn't abandoned, I just have some hard time posting it :P

@FoxKing: And here's the update! :D


Thank you for everyone who read and thanked my last chapter, as a reward, I give you the next chapter!

I hope you guys enjoy! And links are down below~

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The Thin Line - Chapter 2: A Friend In Need

"Wait, are you serious?"

I rolled my eyes in annoyance. "I told you. I asked her to be my partner for this assignment, and she thankfully accepted it."

"Thankfully? You mean, you're glad that she accepted your request?"

There are plenty of reason why I don't like talking about personal things to Mariko, and one of them was this. She kept asking me if what I said was true, if she was having hearing problems, and so forth. It was fine at first, but it gets quite annoying every time she denies everything I said. I sighed in frustration, closing my locker with a little force. In the corner of my eye, I could see Mariko flinched in surprise.

"Look," I faced her, looking at her with annoyance. "If you don't want to believe me, that's none of my business. All I wanted to say was Yuko and I partners for this assignment. If there's something wrong about it, be my guest."

I looked at the clock on the wall that displayed the current time. I should be going home now, my mom would start to wonder about where I am by now. "I gotta go home now. I'll see you tomorrow." I didn't wait for her reply as I quickly left my locker.

I wished people would just stop with these rumors and gossip. They aren't very good to hear, and will leave the victim with most of the pain. In this case, the victim was Yuko.

She doesn't look like she did anything wrong. But since the rumor continued to spread (I knew because I heard most of the girls talked about how 'slutty' Yuko was), it left Yuko with the shame and embarrassment. I didn't think she deserved it, though. She can be a pervert at times since I sometimes saw her playing with her friends and knew how she grope their breasts, but I don't think she would sell her body just like that. Or was it just me being sympathetic?

I didn't know. I just felt bad for her. She looked harmless... and fragile.

I finally made it out of the school main entrance, and was on my way to the front gate. But as I was halfway there, I saw a girl kneeling down to the ground while grabbing some books and papers on the ground.

And judging by her height and hair, I knew it was Yuko.

I quickly came after her, and I knelt down in front of her with my bag laying down beside me. "Here, let me help."

Yuko's head shot up when she heard my voice, her eyes widening in shock. "Kojima-san!"

I smiled while I was still grabbing the notes and sheets of Yuko's books. "You don't need to call me by an honorific, really. It's fine if you call me Haruna..." I stood up and gave her a playful wink. "Or Nyan Nyan if you want to."

She looked away, her cheeks showing a hint of red on them. "I think I'll call you Haruna for now on." She then looked at her books in my hand, and realized that I helped her just now. "O-Oh! Thank you so much for helping me!"

Flashing me a dimpled smile, I somehow couldn't help but admire it.

Taking me the books from me, she noticed that I haven't left the very spot. "Why aren't you going home?" Her voice made me shook out of my thoughts.

"Huh?" I looked at her dumbfounded, and then remembered that my bag was still on the ground. I knelt down to pick it up, and slung it over my shoulder. "Oh, I was just on my way until I spotted you. What about you?"

"I was on my way too, until a group of girls walked up to me and one of them pushed me while I was holding my books." She explained, a slight glimmer of anger was seen in her eyes. I could see her hands clenching tightly onto her books in hand.

"Really? Are you okay? Did you get hurt or something?" I started to get worried, and quickly checked on her face and neck. She chuckled at my weird antics and shook her head.

"Nah, I'm fine. Besides, I hate them so if they get too far..." She put down her books and made a defense pose, her face scrunched up so she looked like a fighter. "I can kick their asses pretty damn easily."

I would be lying if I didn't start laughing very hard and didn't attract other student's attention. I saw Yuko gaining her composure once she saw a few students looking at us with weird looks. Meanwhile, I didn't stop laughing.

"Mou, what's so funny?" She started to pout, which was so adorable. I loved to see this side of her more whenever we meet again. I felt very comfortable with her. I hope she does feel about it the same way.

I wiped the tears in my eyes after my laughing died down.

"This is a really interesting side of you, Yuko. Or should I say, Yuuchan..." I winked at her playfully.

She smiled, almost as if she's thanking me.

"Thanks. I tend to make things interesting for people."

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"Haru-chan, dinner's ready!"

"I'll be down in a moment!"

I couldn't help but wonder what kind of dinner will we have tonight. My mom was always the excellent cook in the family, the second best was my grandfather. But he died five years ago, so I always missed his cooking. Both of them were very close and had cooking running up their veins since God knows when.

Maybe she could teach me how to cook a proper meal someday. I remembered how I always messed up while I was cooking chicken curry for Mariko whenever I was in her house.

"Who was that, Nyan Nyan?"

Yuko finally agreed to call me Nyan Nyan, since she found my little 'Nyaa~' sound oddly cute. In fact, I waited for the day where she will call me by that nickname I came up with. Well, Mariko helped me pick which nickname suited me.

"Oh, it was my mom. She told me it's dinner time. So, I guess we could continue this later?" I said, holding my phone in my hand.

I heard her giggle, making me wonder why until she spoke up.  "Haru-chan, huh?"

"Shut up, she come up with that when I was still little." I was so thankful that we were having a conversation through phone, other wise she would've seen how red my cheeks were.

"I was just joking. Pretty good nickname, actually." I could hear her smile when she said that, even though I couldn't see her. "Thanks again for helping me today. I really appreciated it."

"What can I say?" Now it's my turn to smile. "A friend in need is a friend indeed."
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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 2: A Friend In Need
« Reply #17 on: December 07, 2013, 07:32:33 AM »
go nyannyan!go get your yuuchan XD
^This sounds so wrong but i like it :D
I really enjoy this fic,i hope you update soon :on gay:

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 2: A Friend In Need
« Reply #18 on: December 07, 2013, 08:07:19 AM »
They're getting closer. :wub:

You update quite fast. :twothumbs I salute you for that.

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Re: [Machdi-san's Fanfic] The Thin Line (KojiYuu) - Chapter 2: A Friend In Need
« Reply #19 on: December 07, 2013, 08:19:07 AM »
So cute ;A;

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