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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 19
« Reply #160 on: February 09, 2014, 06:06:41 PM »


What on Earth just happened here?
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 19
« Reply #161 on: February 10, 2014, 05:49:27 AM »
It means takamino was a gay XD


Takamina pls help atsuko I don't want her to die


Update
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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #162 on: February 17, 2014, 05:53:29 AM »
Yosh minna sorry it took me a while to update i've been really busy. Anyways enjoy the update!
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Chapter 20 part 1

We got back to Tokyo and everything was back to normal. I told Yuko what Takamina had said and she was surprised but also upset because she refused to come back. Yuko said she would try to find Takamina herself and bring her back in order to save her child. Meanwhile I went back to the house where Yuki and Rena were baking something together and when I looked over I saw they were making cookies. These weren't ordinary cookies though for these were heart shaped cookies and that could only mean one thing.

"Yabai.."

I check my phone and saw today was the 14th which mean Valentine's Day the day of love. I hadn't realized that today was they day let alone it had come up so quickly. I had a huge thing planned for today but it required days of planning so I had to scratch that idea and come up with something new. Rena said her and Yuki were going to hand the cookies out at the end of the day and so I had time therefore I was going to have to go to the next best person who can help me. Pulling into Jurina's driveway I knocked on the door that was later answered by one of her maids. She lead me up to Jurina's room where she was at her desk surrounded by scraps of paper. I picked up one and saw there was something written on it.

"Roses are red, violets are blue, my heart is only for you-"

That was all that was written before it was crumbled up and thrown to the side. I looked up at Jurina and saw she was writing but would then stop and throw it away. Based on seeing all the paper thrown to the side I would say that she's gone through at least two notebooks. I walked over to her and lightly tapped on her shoulder getting no response so I shook her and she looked over at me.

"When did you get here?" she asked.

"A while ago." I said.

"What do you want?"

"I need help doing something for Yuki for Valentine."

"Well I'm trying to think of something for Rena."

"What are you making?"

"I was gonna make a poem that would take her away."

"Well maybe that's a bit too difficult. How about you help me make a cake or something?"

"That's perfect!"

Jurina and I went down to the kitchen where we pulled up how to make a cake since neither one of us was a good cook. We first started off with making the batter so Jurina poured in the flower while I adde the baking powder. Then she added the eggs while I put in some sugar to make it sweet. We were going to do layers of cake so we took a mixer and mixed the batter up in the bowl. It looked like we were doing it right comparing ours to the one in the video seeing how things were going pretty good. We poured the batter into a pan and then set it in the oven for a certain time and degree. While it was cooking Jurina and I started to make the icing that would go on it so we pulled out the cans of icing Jurina had bought and then added a ton of red food dye to it. We made a dark red color and then we also made some pink and white. We put the frosting into the refrigerator to keep it cool and then while that was happening the oven went off. We pulled the pan out and saw a nice golden color indicating we did it just right. We set the first pan to the side to let cake cool off a little and then made the second layer repeating the same process as before.

"Nee Mayu do you think they'll like it?" Jurina asked.

"I'm sure they will I mean it's better than just buying things. It's the thought that counts you know?" I responded.

"Good point! Mayu you're getting good at this."

We finished the second later and then added it into the oven. By then the first one was done so Jurina and I started the magic part where we hallowed it out a little and then filled it with some cream. I chopped up the strawberries into wedges and mixed it with the cream making a strawberry cream center. We had a nice even cover and then we covered the rest of the first layer nice and neatly. The second layer was done so we pulled it out and let it cool down then we started to decorate the cake. The entire cake was white but then Jurina and I put on red ribbons on the side with the icing. We put some strawberries on it as well and then Jurina and I took turns writing on the cake. "Happy Valentine's Day Rena" is what she wrote and I wrote "Happy Valentine's Day Yuki." It was plain and simple but we had something else planned that involved a party so Jurina told me to go tell the girls while she made the arrangements. I went back over to my place and found Rena and Yuki wrapping the cookies into bags tying them with ribbons.

"What's going on here?" I asked.

"We're going to hand these cookies out to all our friends." Yuki said.   

"Would you mind helping?" Rena asked.

"Sure how can I help?"

Yuki and Rena grinned and then grabbed me pulling me into another room. They handed me a bag and told me to put it on then shut the door. I didn't know what was going on but when I looked into the bag I saw what was happening and I wanted to punch Yuki at that moment. Seeing how I had no choice I put the costume on and then when I came back out both Rena and Yuki smiled and giggled. I was wearing cat costume with hearts all over it that made me want to puke. Yuki and Rena handed me the bag that was holding the cookies and then told me to go out and give the cookies to the others. I sighed and did what they said but before leaving I told them about the party and told them to get ready. Then I went out wearing the ridiculous outfit where I first went to Yuko's place. I knocked on the door and when it opened there was Atsuko who gasped and said,

"Dare?!"

"It's me Atsuko."

"Mayu? What are you doing in that?"

"Giving you these."

I gave Atsuko the bags of cookies and then said,

"Happy Valentine's day from Rena and Yuki and oh there's a party tonight so you and Yuko are invited."

"Ah thanks Mayu. Happy Valentine's Day~"

I left Yuko's place and then went to Mariko's who wasn't there so I left the cookies and then ran off before anyone saw me. I saw I had extra bags of cookies so I thought I might as well give them out to someone. I went to a playground where there were kids playing around and parents talking. When I walked over all the kids stopped and stared at me wondering what the heck was I. The mothers were also giving me suspicious looks thinking I was going to steal one of their kids when I really had no intention. In a cute high pitch voice I said,

"Happy Valentine's Day kids!"

I handed out the bags and the kids swarmed me wanting the cookies once they realized how good they were. Even the mothers wanted some so I gave out as many as I could before I had run out. I apologized to the kids and then left on my way back to the house before more people showed up and tried to kill me or something. When I walked inside I saw Yuki and her sisters making hearts out of paper and other crafts.

"Nee-chan look I made a heart!"

"That's great~"

"Nee-chan I made a heart too!"

"That's great you two keep going!"

"What are you doing running a sweat shop?" I asked.

"No Mayu we're making decorations for the party." Yuki said.

"I wanna help."

"Here."

Yuki handed me some papers and some scissors so I got to work and started to cut out hearts. It was pretty fun to watch the kids too because I was making them pretty good and their's looked a little off. Someone would have bigger halves or jagged edges or just be shaped weird. I had to teach the two how I did them so they'd come out right and then I continued to make more hearts. I made them all kinds of colors and sizes and then when we finished the girls were going to go around the house and start decorating. Rena told me that the party was being held here so I had to make sure things were clean here and whatnot. Yuki had gone out to get some things for the party and Jurina told me she was going to be bringing over the cake soon. I decided to take this as an opportunity to take a bath and get ready so I went up to my room where I had cleaned up and then wore a nice outfit to go along with today's festivities. When I went downstairs I saw Yuko and Atsuko had already arrived and Jurina had brought in the cake that was covered with a box. Yuki had just come back as well and had an assortment of snacks and other things. Rena turned on some music and the party was now in full swing. I walked down and saw Yuki talking to Atsuko so I walked over as well and dropped in on the conversation.

"Are you getting excited Atsuko?" Yuki asked.

"Un! I can't wait for my baby to be born. I bet she'll be just as cute as her father~"

"I'm sure she will be. Are you ready to be a mother?"

"I've been dreaming of it since I was in high school."

"Then I wish you the best of luck."

Atsuko smiled as she ate a cookie and then Yuko came over with a glass of juice.

"Here you go honey." she said as she handed Atsuko the cup.

"Thank you Yuu-chan~"

"I'm telling you Mayu Atsuko has been having the strangest cravings for anything sweet."

"What kinds of things?" I asked.

"Everything from candy to pop to just pure sugar."

I couldn't believe Atsuko would just eat pure sugar but then again I've seen stranger things. The two love birds walked away leaving just me and Yuki together. We stood in silence staring at each other before suddenly there was a knock at the door. I walked over and answered it only to see Mariko standing there holding a case of flowers.

"Am I too late to join the party?" Mariko asked.

"You're just in time."

I let Mariko in who set the flowers down and then instantly made her way over to Atsuko and Yuko for some odd reason. I was expecting her to go towards Yuki but she didn't so I was surprised. They were talking about something but I couldn't tell what so I just decided to ignore it and try to find Rena and Jurina. I found the two cuddling up together on the couch holding hands and giggling like high school kids. It was actually kind of cute to see the two together but I had to get out so walked over to Yuki and said,

"Nee Yuki."

"Hai?" she responded.

"What are you going to do this Valentine?"

"Probably spend it with the kids once the party ends. You?"

"Well usually I sit in my bed with a tub of ice cream and watch dramas all night."

Yuki giggled and then said,

"Now we can't have that. How about I join you up in the bed tonight and we can share the ice cream together?"

"That would be great~"

Yuki and I giggled having a good time until Jurina tapped me and told me it was time to show the cake. I went to the kitchen with her and together we brought out the cake where we set it on the table. We had Yuki and Rena step forward where Jurina then said,

"To honor today Mayu and I made a cake for our Valentines. Jan~"

She pulled off the box revealing the cake and both Rena and Yuki gasped. They were amazed at the master piece Jurina and I had created and so we mentally high fived each other through eye contact. We served a piece to the two and watched to see their reaction. Rena took a bite and her eyes grew two sizes sparkling brighter than a star. Yuki took a bite and she suddenly became very relaxed and had a big smile on her face. They both looked at us and said,

"Oishi~"

With that everyone had a piece of cake including myself and I had to admit it was pretty good. Jurina and I had outdone ourselves and I was proud of it though for Yuki had walked over to me and said,

"Thank you for the cake. It was delicious."

"It was nothing I just wanted to make you something special."

"Well I have something special for you."

"Nani?"

"Close your eyes."

I did what she said and closed my eyes thinking that she was going to put something in my hands or something. To my astonishment though I felt her get really close to me and then whispered into my ear,

"Arigatou~"

She placed something into my hands and then backed away telling me I could open my eyes. I opened my eyes and looked down to see a cookie in my hand with an M on it. I took a bite of it and smiled seeing how good it tasted. A bit sad that I didn't get something spectacular from Yuki, I was still happy with just my plain cookie. The party was still going though and we were having all kinds of fun. The kids were playing games with Yuko and Mariko while Jurina and Rena had been with each other most of the time. Yuki and Atsuko had been talking about things and as for me well I was just sitting in the corner watching everyone. I was always like this at social gatherings where I would be the wallflower and just stand here watching everyone. It's always been like this for as long as I could remember. As everyone was having fun I watched Atsuko walk off into another room so Yuki came over to me and we chatted.

"Why are you standing here all alone?" she asked.

"I always do. I like to keep an eye on things you know?" I said.

"Well that's not fun. Come on Mayu it's a party! Have some fun~"

"I'd rather quietly watch from the sidelines."

I looked over at Yuki and saw she had some cream on her face so I thought it would be funny if I leaned in and licked it off. Moving in I got ready to lick it off but then Yuki turned and our lips made contact. Realizing what I had just done I quickly pulled back with a slight blush on my face. Yuki herself was also blushing and taken back a little at my accidental movement. I told her there was cream on her face and I was going to lick it off her but she then moved. Yuki just giggled a little and then wiped the cream off. There was an awkward moment of silence before Yuko came over and asked if we had seen Atsuko. I told her I did and so I left to go check on her. The hall she took lead to the bathroom so maybe that's where she was headed therefore I walked down the hall and over to the door. I knocked on the door and saw I got no answer and so I was about to walk in but then I noticed there was a wet stain on the carpet. The stain formed a trail and so I followed it to another room where Atsuko was there panting with her legs spread open.

"Atsuko are you alright?!"

"M-Mayu.. My water broke!"

"Yabai I'll get Yuko!"

I ran back into the main room and shouted,

"Yuko Atsuko is going into labor!"

Everyone rushed to Atsuko who was now screaming and panting. Mariko went to call an ambulance but there was no time and so we all kicked in to help Atsuko get into the car. Yuki and I rode with Yuko while Rena and the others rode with Mariko. We all went to the hospital where Atsuko was taken and the labor process began. We all had to sit outside the waiting room for what seemed like an eternity. Everyone was waiting for the result of the baby and the mothers as well considering the fact that the baby was being born very early. Yuko was pacing back and forth muttering things to herself looking like she was going crazy. I had to calm her down so she wouldn't have an episode in the middle of the hospital. Minutes went by and there was still no answer form the doctors in the OB. Yuko was getting ready to charge in there herself if I didn't hold her back. The waiting was killing all of us to the point where we were ready to jump out of our seats. Then a nurse came out where Yuko talked to her and then she came back over to us with the biggest smile on her face. With a sigh of relief and excitement she said,

"It's a girl!"

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The baby is born! But what happens now? Find out next time~

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #163 on: February 17, 2014, 07:25:53 AM »
Thanks for the update :twothumbs

Hmm what will happen to Atsuko and her baby.. and Takamina~

Update Soon~~
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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #164 on: February 17, 2014, 11:38:21 AM »
Mayuki kiss!!!!!!!



Atsuko gave birth!!!

And it's a girl!!!!


Update
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mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #165 on: February 17, 2014, 02:24:12 PM »
Mayuki kiss

Jurina and Mayu idea are so sweet

Atsuko give birth and it a girl!!

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #166 on: February 17, 2014, 04:10:28 PM »
Kyaaaa!! Sweetness, happiness, bliss!!

I love this!!! :heart:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #167 on: February 18, 2014, 12:42:00 AM »
...I don't really comment here much do I~?
Yay!
Doki doki! :D Valentines~
And...
IT'S A GIRL!!
Yay!!
*confetti*
Looking forward to the next~

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #168 on: February 18, 2014, 05:03:40 PM »
Leaving a comment~ Will read later

Edit: Uuu Valentine Chapter~
MaYuki kissed!!!!! >.<

ok, so the baby is born...
Thanks for the update :D
Waiting for next update!~
« Last Edit: February 19, 2014, 07:05:11 PM by Furumizawa »

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #169 on: February 19, 2014, 02:15:54 PM »
hm hm!! I want the next!!

Kissuuuuu!  :twothumbs

OMG the child come!

Thank for that update!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



Married?!-Mayuki fanfic (maybe it will have another pair)

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #170 on: February 24, 2014, 01:17:21 AM »
Hey sorry I've been slow but here's the next update! Enjoy~
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Chapter 20 part 2

"It's a girl!"

As soon as we heard the news we all cheered with joy happy for Yuko and Atsuko on their newborn girl. We weren't allowed to go in until they had finished up but when they were ready we all entered the room and saw Atsuko sitting in the bed alone. We wondered where the baby was and Atsuko said she was in the incubator since she was a premature birth and would need to be monitored for a while. Yuko went down to the room where the babies were held and we all looked through the glass. There were several other babies in the room so we had to read the tags and eventually we were able to find her. In the corner of the room there was a baby with a pink flower on the tag and there was Yuko's baby. On the name tag it said,

"Oshima Mai."

That must be the name that Atsuko gave the baby and by the looks of Yuko she seemed happy. There was a wide smile on her face but also tears of joy leaking from her eyes. She walked back into Atsuko's room where she was resting comfortably leaned back on the bed. Yuko walked over to her and said,

"She's beautiful."

"I know Yuuchan. She's going to be such a beautiful~"

"Just like her mother~"

The two started to get lovey dovey so the rest of us took this as our cue to leave. Mariko, Jurina and Rena all left but Yuki and I stayed to talk to Yuko about the thing with Takamina now that the baby is born. When Yuko had left to let Atsuko sleep, we took her to another room with a doctor where we discussed what was going to happen. The doctor said that if the baby shows signs of the disease then the baby will have two days to live. However if we're lucky we either have a cure or the baby doesn't have the disease at all. The signs don't show up for the first couple of hours so we'd have to wait until then. The thought of the disease scared Yuko to death because I could see it on her face. She was scared and I'm sure if Atsuko knew she would be terrified. We were all hoping that the baby wouldn't show signs of the disease but all we could do was wait. Therefore we all went home and I decided to spend the night with Yuko to keep her comfy since Atsuko wasn't going to be there. I had just finished changing and I walked in seeing Yuko sitting at her table drinking a glass of alcohol. I walked over and pulled the glass away from her saying,

"What are you doing?"

"Having a drink. What does it look like?"

"You should stop now Yuko. Do you want your daughter seeing this?"

"I may not have a daughter Mayu so what's the point?"

"Yuko don't you dare give up on your child. There's still hope she couldn't have the disease at all."

"Yeah a 32% chance."

Yuko was still pretty upset and I could see it in her eyes the way she stared at the alcohol in her glass. She was thinking of the future she may never have if their little girl doesn't live. I admit I felt bad for Yuko so I simply patted her back and tried to get her mind off the negative things. I decided to ask her questions about what she was going to do with the baby like what kind of clothes she got her and what kind of toys. What kind of games they would play together and places they would go to together. What kind of school she would go to as well growing up. I got Yuko to imagine her baby's first steps and her first word. Her first time in the rain and in the snow or her first pet. Meeting new friends and growing up into a beautiful young lady one day. I had to keep her mind on the positive side because I felt if I didn't then she would just give up completely. We stayed up most of the night talking about things but then Yuko said she wanted to sleep so we got ready for bed and I said goodnight to Yuko before heading to my room. I really did hope Yuko was going to be alright after all the madness that she has to put up with. The fear of losing her child is definitely going to effect her sleep tonight if anything. However I couldn't let that stop me so I took the negative thoughts out of my head and then went to bed.

I was sleeping in my bed quietly when suddenly I heard a shout and a crash. I ran into Yuko's room to see what was going on. Inside Yuko was jumping up and down with a huge smile on her face shouting cheers of joy and excitement. When she saw me she rushed over to me and grabbed me by my shoulders. She shook me hard nearly popping my arm out of socket saying,

"She doesn't have it Mayu! She doesn't have it!"

"Eh?"

"The doctor just called me and said my baby doesn't have the disease!"

"Really? That's great Yuko!"

"I'm so happy!"

Yuko stared running around the room jumping with joy happy that such good thing had happened to her. The happiness was overwhelming and Yuko was really getting into it until suddenly we got a call from the hospital again. Yuko's expression of happiness turned into a face of shock and horror. She said little words and then she hung up. She turned around and screamed in agony as if she was in pain and then she started crying. I asked her what was going on but she ignored me and started get dressed getting ready to head out to the hospital. She turned to me and said,

"It's Atsuko..."

We made it to the hospital and were confronted by one of the doctors. She came over to us and asked who was Yuko. Yuko stepped forward and the doctor took her to another room where they had talked for about a half hour and then Yuko came out with tears in her eyes. She told me that Atsuko had the disease and she wasn't going to have much time to live since it spreads faster in the adults. We didn't know how this could have happened but now all Yuko was worried about was the fact that she was going to lose her wife if she didn't do anything. Yuko rushed to Atsuko's room and held her hand trying to fight back her tears. Atsuko was passed out but she had a breathing mask on and she had a heart monitor along with a couple IV's. It wasn't looking good for Atsuko not knowing how much time she was going to have. I felt terrible for Yuko and wanted to do something to try to help her. Then I remembered Takamina was still in Osaka and there was still a chance to get a cure. I ran out the hospital and went to my house to get my fastest car. I got in and sped down to Osaka going 90 miles an hour speeding past people and driving like a mad man. I managed to make it to Osaka in two hours flat and I walked over to Takamina's house. I didn't even knock I just busted into the house and Takamina shouted at me.

"Mayu what the hell?!"

"Takamina listen you need to come back with me to Tokyo."

"I told you already Mayu I'm not going now get the hell out before I call the police."

"Takamina the baby was born and it's a girl."

"That's great what else is new?"

"Atsuko is sick Takamina.. she's going to die within in the next couple hours."

Takamina stopped and looked at me with a solid stare not even blinking. The air seemed to grow colder and time had stopped between the two of us. Takamina then said,

"You're lying..."

I couldn't believe what she had just said to me and so I responded saying,

"Takamina I'm not lying. Atsuko is in the hospital dying."

"You're lying!"

Takamina came at me with fists and tried to punch me but I dodged and avoided it. However Takamina tried to attack me again and managed to hit me good. I had forgotten how strong Takamina was despite the change in the body. I ducked and then tackled Takamina to the ground getting on top of her. I tried to pin her back but she punched me hard in the stomach knocking the air out of me. Luckily though I managed to pin Takamina's head down and I said to her,

"Why would I be lying about the woman you love?!"

"Because she's an evil lying bitch!"

"How could you say that about her?!"

"Because she banged me then left like I was nothing before I even had a chance to tell her how I felt. She didn't care about me at all!"

"Minami do you even know what she named her child?"

"No and I don't care!"

"Oshima Mai!!!"

"Mai?"

Takamina calmed down and I got off her helping her back up. She seemed shocked and surprised to hear that name and I didn't exactly know what that name meant to her but it seemed to have settled her down.

"Mai was my mother's name.. She died when I was young and I always told Atsuko that I would name my daughter that when I had a child.."

"See Takamina? She does care about you so please come back with me before it's too late."

Takamina was silent for a while but then she said,

"Take me to her."

I drove Takamina back to Toyko to the hospital where she talked to the doctors about the treatment option for Atsuko. They would need some of her blood and tissue samples but that was all. Takamina agreed to help and so they took her somewhere else while I went to go talk to Yuko. I walked in and saw her holding Atsuko's hand who was barely hanging on to life. I told Yuko that I managed to bring Takamina back and she was willing to give a cure. Yuko nearly collapsed right there and then when she heard the good news about Atsuko and Takamina. They were making a cure right now for her and so we were all excited and hoping they would hurry. An hour later they came out and said they had a cure and so they were going to administer it right away. We had to leave though so Yuko, Takamina and I all went out to Mariko's bar to sit down and have a drink. We all sat down at the bench and when Mariko saw Takamina she was very surprised as well.

"It's good to see you Takamina." Mariko said.

"Same to you Mariko. I've seen you on TV a lot lately."

"So how have you been?"

"Good. I get by with the fishing market and make a decent buck."

As the two chatted I looked over at Yuko who was sitting quietly drinking her beverage. I noticed she wasn't drinking alcohol but instead she was drinking soda. Looks like Yuko took my advice when I told her not to drink alcohol anymore. However I think tonight is an exception for her so I bought her a good glass and we had fun. We had all the right to be happy and celebrate for Atsuko and Takamina. That night we managed to convince Takamina to stay in Tokyo and she would stay with Mariko until she can find a new job and get a new place. We offered her money but she refused it and said she was going to make her own. We were all happy to have Takamina back and most of the gang was now here. Things were getting better now and hopfully that's all we need to worry about it and everything else has passed.

The next day I went to see how Atsuko was doing and I saw her and Yuko with their baby girl sleeping peacefully in her mother's arms. She looked so tiny since she was a premature birth and that also meant that she was going to be short. I made a joke with Yuko about it and she whacked me one but hey it was funny. Atsuko said I could hold out my finger and the baby would hold it so I did it and watched her tiny hand wrap around my finger. It was just a precious moment that I didn't want to end. However there was a knock on the door and in came Takamina holding a thing of flowers. She walked over slowly and placed the flowers in a vase. She then turned to Atsuko and said,

"Hello.. Atsuko."

"Takamino?"

"It's Takamina now. Long time no see nee?"

"You really have changed Takamina. It's good to see you again and thank you for everything."

"It's good to see you as well Atsuko."

"So you named the baby after my mother?"

"Un I remembered your goal Takamina I just made it real."

"Arigatou."

Takamina smiled and then said her goodbyes before leaving. With everything settled, I went back to the house to see how Rena and Yuki were doing since I haven't been home in a while. I walked inside and I was shocked to see Rena on top of Yuki and they were both half dressed. My face turned a different shade of red and I was speechless seeing Yuki's breasts pressed against Rena's and Rena's leg between Yuki's just touching that sensitive spot. I thought they were going to get it on so I apologized for stepping in and then quietly got ready to leave. However I felt myself get pulled back and then pulled onto the couch. Rena rushed over to me covering her chest saying,

"It's not what you think!"

"Don't get anything wrong ideas." Yuki said.

"T-then what happened?"

Rena explained to me how she was changing a lightbulb and was trying to get to it but she was too short even with the ladder so she had Yuki help her. Yuki wasn't tall enough either so Yuki got on the ladder and then she had Rena stand on top of her shoulders to try to replace the lightbulb. They managed to change it but then Rena had fallen and on the way down she grabbed Yuki's shirt pulling it down. Yuki on the other hand tried to catch her so she grabbed Rena's shirt and pulled it up actually pulling it off. They had fallen on top of each other and that was when I had walked in. So they weren't doing anything pervy as far as I know of but still it was quite a sight to see. I told Yuki and Rena the good news and the two squealed with joy. Everyone was happy and so we would have a big dinner tonight so Rena got ready to start cooking along with the help of the kids. In the meantime I went up to my room so I could lay down and relax after such a long day of rushing and fighting. I just wanted to lay down and take a nice nap so as soon as I plopped onto my bed I laid down and shut my eyes. I was about to fall asleep but then I felt the weight shift on my bed. I was going to turn around but I felt a pair of arms wrap themselves around my waist. They pulled me into a warm body and then a sweet voice said,

"I'm so proud of you Mayu."

"For what?"

"You did all that for Yuko driving down to Osaka and getting Takamina to come back. It must have been a lot of work."

"Well it wasn't easy." I said sighing.

"Then how about I give you a reward."

"Hmmm?"

Yuki flipped me over and then pulled me in closer to her body. I could feel her heart beating a calm and steady pace giving me a relaxed feeling. I was pleased where I was now but then Yuki suddenly took my chin and lifted it up making me stare at her eyes. She had a smile on her face and a sparkle in her eyes as she stared down on me. Then she pulled me in and kissed me on the lips again just like last time. I felt a spark between our lips and my heart started to beat rapidly as I felt the warm and soft texture of Yuki's lips against mine. I had actually forgotten what it felt like to kiss Yuki but I liked the feeling. We held for a long time before Yuki pulled back and licked her lips giving me a sexy look. I could see it in her eyes with what she was trying to lead on but I wouldn't let her so I quickly turned around before she could do anything. I heard her giggle and then wrap herself around me once more smiling and stroking my sides. I told her I wasn't in the mood and she knew but she liked holding my sides. Honestly Yuki could be such a child sometimes but I guess that was one of the many things I adored about Yuki. I have to admit the feeling of her body next to mine felt really good and her scent reminded me of the flowers I used to pick when I was a child. Everything about Yuki was lovely to me and I want more of Yuki but I have to wait and be patient since we are still in a bet after all. If only we weren't in a bet then maybe.. maybe we could actually be together. 

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #171 on: February 24, 2014, 02:35:45 AM »
Yay Atsuko and the baby is safe

Update soon~


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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #172 on: February 24, 2014, 02:47:56 AM »
KYAAAAA!!! Atsumina!

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KYAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! This is so AWESOME!!!

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #173 on: February 24, 2014, 04:49:55 PM »
this bet is so damn harsh ;____;
I feel bad for Mayu... She's kind of in disvantage right now, since Yuki does whatever she pleases.
Waiting for upload! ;D

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 20 part 2
« Reply #174 on: February 26, 2014, 11:49:23 PM »
I just read this story today
and it took me a half day till ch20

The story is amazing plot
And I like playgirl fall to yuki ,,
RenaMayu I never think this ship before
but you part Is SO CUTEE
(my main ships Is mayuki by the wey :'> )

it's cause' the bet So Mayu still wait and Yuki still pride...
wonder when yuki accept her feeling,, and wonder is mayu still want to play with yuki heart like she think at first?

Can't wait XD
Looking forward to next update .
Thank you very much for this fanfic!

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 21
« Reply #175 on: March 02, 2014, 05:18:32 PM »
Here is the next update guys! Sorry it took me a while but with school and all I think I'll mainly be updating on the weekends. Anyways enjoy the update!
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Chapter 21

It's been a couple weeks now and Atsuko and Yuko seem to be happier than ever. Their baby girl is happy and healthy with her new family and I'm sure they'll be a good family together. Takamina was still living with Mariko but they had managed to find her a job as a construction hand in projects. As for me well I have some other things to take care of. A couple days ago I got a letter from a familiar person telling me to meet them back at the old house. I hadn't been back at that hell hole for years now and I didn't intend going back there in a long time. However the letter said that they had some money they wanted to give to me that was left by my parents. I thought there was no way that my parents had actually left me any money at all but they showed me a copy of the document stating my parents intended plans and everything seemed legit. The only thing that bothers me is why now of all times do they decide to give me the money? I thought it was a joke at first but I even got a call from one of the old butlers at the estate and so I had no choice but to go since they knew my number and probably knew where I lived. The man who owns the mansion is a powerful man and I wouldn't want Yuki or anyone else to get hurt. This is my own problem so I have to take care of it myself.

"Nee Yuki I'm going out on a trip for a while. You're in charge of the house while I'm gone ok?"

"Where are you going?"

"I'm going to go play poker with a couple of old buddies of mine. I'll be back in a couple days."

"Well alright just be safe and call me when you get there."

"Hai hai~ Oh and Yuki if anything happens there's a button in my room under the dresser of the right side. Press it if anything bad happens ok?"

"Ok Mayu I'll see you later."

"Ja nee."

I left the house and then got into my car where I drove onto the main highway. I then pulled out my phone and dialed a number that was written on the paper. It rang a couple times before someone finally picked up.

"Ah Mayu-chan. I'm guessing you're on your way now?"

"Yeah so have my money ready."

"Yes yes just let me know when you're almost here."

The call ended and I just continued to drive along the road following the flow of traffic. Thinking of the old house started to bring back memories of the place when I was a kid. I remember working there early mornings and late nights like a slave bound by chains. I couldn't do anything but work and work until I collapsed from exhaustion and yet I still had to work. The owner of the mansion was a cruel man who enjoyed seeing me suffer along with the rest of his staff. Not to mention some of the sexual harassment I would get from him time to time. He wouldn't touch me but I could see him staring at me when I wasn't looking. He would stare at me with a hungry look in his eyes as if he was going to eat me. He tried to touch me once but I managed to escape by winning that poker game that bought me my freedom. I was ten at the time and ever since I've been gambling making millions from some of the money that I would pull in. Honestly because of that day I've done nothing but gambling and I couldn't be happier. I mean I'm making lots of money so that's definitely a win for me in a way but it also robbed me of my childhood. I never had friends until high school and even then I didn't have many. I was always quiet and didn't say much where most kids my age would go out and hang out. Me on the other hand well at the time I would go out and gamble making my way up the charts. It's been quite a life and I intend on living it to the fullest extent.

I had guessed that the money thing was going to be a scam so I came prepared with a couple of weapons. Although knowing him he'll probably search me and remove any weapons I got on me. Well maybe not all of them but we'll see however a gambler's golden rule is always have a weapon on you incase things get messy. I have a special one that I had restored from the early 1900's and it works beautifully. I just hope his goons don't detect it and I'm left defenseless. I had been driving for some time now and I was getting close to the place. I pulled out my phone and called again telling them that I would be arriving shortly. He sounded pleased to hear the news and said he would have the gate open for me shortly. Hearing his voice started to make my blood boil just a little but I had to keep my cool and calm down. I hung up and then drove silently getting close and closer to my goal. As the distance shortened, I saw the big house in the distance. It casted a shadow that was at least a hundred meter long it was so big. I remember getting so lost in that place I thought it was one giant maze. I drove up to the front gate where it was open like he said and slowly made my way up to the front drive. I parked my car and then stepped out where I was greeted by two guards who were more than happy to search me. They didn't find anything on me and so I followed them to the front door into the house.

Just like I remembered it the entrance was grand with marble and granite decor and foreign things all around. This spot brought back so many memories for me but now wasn't the time to walk down memory lane. Things were going to get serious and so I focused on where I was going now. We walked up the huge stairs and then down the hall all the way to two large red doors. Two maids opened them and I walked into the main room. There sitting in his big chair was the man that had owned me for five years of my life.

"Hello Mayu-chan~"

"EH?!" 

(Yuki's POV) 

Mayu said she was going to be gone for a couple days so I had the place all to myself. I couldn't believe that Mayu had trusted me with her entire house but hey I have it now. I told Rena I wouldn't be needing her help for the next couple of days so she left to go stay at Jurina's place for the time being. The kids were off to visit their grandparents in Hokkaido so I was truly alone in the house with no one else. Since I had no plans I thought now was the perfect time to get some relaxation time. I went into the main room where I turned on the TV to see what was on if anything new was up. So far all the TV stations were boring and there was nothing good on so I decided to go online and do some stuff. Maybe watch a couple videos or something interesting. The boredom was unbearable and I wanted to go out and do something but I felt so lazy at the same time. Maybe this is what Mayu feels all the time when she's home alone and there's nothing better to do. Now I finally understand when I see her and think she's nothing but a lazy bum. It must get very lonely in this big house as well since no one else lived here before except Mayu. I still have no idea how she does it living on her own like this.

"Mou!"

I threw a pillow across my room and sat up from the bed tired of doing nothing. There had to be something to do all I had to do was think. I wanted to go outside but I really didn't feel like going out so I was going to have to think of something else to do. I remembered that Mayu had some video games down stairs. Maybe I could try playing some of them if I gave it a try so I went down stairs and looked at the games she had. She had a variety of games from war games to other ones. I didn't know which one to pick so I just randomly selected one called "Dead Island" and went with it. I put in the disk and waited for the screen to load and once it was done I was shocked by a nasty zombie with half its face torn off. I nearly screamed if I hadn't covered my mouth but I had to admit the sight was frightening. I took out the game and decided to plug in another one called "Minecraft" when it loaded there was nothing scary on it. All I had to do was destroy and build with blocks. I had to admit it was boring at first but then suddenly another zombie popped out and this one wasn't as scary as the one before but the noises it made creeped me out so I took out the game.  Seeing how video games weren't really my thing I decided to do something else. I went up to Mayu's room and I knew it was bad but I was curious about Mayu so I decided to look around.

"Wah sugoi!"

Opening one of Mayu's drawers I found a ton of nice watches and classes all neatly organized in a certain order. I had to admit Mayu's choice in watches were very nice and stylish. Looking through her closet I saw there were many suits and dress shirts that she must have hid from me when we were cleaning out the closet. I also noticed way in the back there was a sailor uniform. At first I thought it was part of some cosplay thing but when I pulled it out I saw that it had Mayu's name sewn onto it. This was Mayu's high school uniform when she was in school years ago. I started to imagine what Mayu had looked like in this uniform and I started to blush thinking about it. I thought she was unbelievably cute and adorable thinking of her as the adorable high school Mayu. Under her uniform I saw a box that I had not seen before. Tempted I opened it and found an old year book from Mayu's high school. I searched the pictures and there she was in the very corner. She looked so geeky in the photo along with some other features that I noticed today. Honestly she hasn't changed much since then thinking about it now.

As I was sitting there I heard the door open so I thought maybe Mayu had come in early. I popped my head down stairs and instead saw a group of masked men with guns walking into the house. I had no idea who they were or what they were doing but I wasn't on planning on finding out so I ran back up to Mayu's door and locked it. I thought about calling for help but my phone was down stairs and there were no other phones in the room. I could hear them coming up the stairs so I knew I had to think fast. Then I remembered the thing Mayu told me about there being a red button under her dresser. I went over and found it where I pressed the button and then suddenly there was a loud siren and red lights started to flash. Metal walls came down covering the doors and windows and then an audio recorded message of Mayu came on.

"Attention trespassers, you are in my home and shouldn't be there so you have exactly five seconds to leave before you are killed. 5.."

Guns started to appear out of the walls aiming at the door and window. Shots could be heard from outside followed by screams. There was a continuous gun fire until it suddenly all stopped. I wasn't sure if it was safe or not to leave so I looked out and saw that there was a screen on the wall showing who was all in the house. Looking at it I saw there were three dead bodies but I didn't know how many had come in. The camera rotated searching the room and didn't see anything which meant it must have been safe to come out. The guns disarmed and then the doors opened. I couldn't believe Mayu had this kind of security system but I had to admit it worked pretty well. The question now was who were these guys and why did they come here?

(Mayu's POV)

I was surprised not to see the usual old man but instead was some random girl. I had no idea who she was but for some reason she had called me here. She beckoned me to sit and so I did so in the chair across from her and then her butler brought in some tea. He also brought out some other snacks but I really didn't want to eat anything. However she insisted I at least have a sip of tea and so I took a sip and it wasn't bad. I set my cup down and then returned to my original intent in which I only came for business so I asked the girl,

"Where's the old guy?"

"He's been dead for five years now."

"I see.. then who are you?"

"I'm his daughter Ota Akia but you can call me Rabutan."

"It's nice to meet you and I'm sorry for you loss."

"It's fine Mayu-chan~"

"Um just Mayu is fine. Anyways why did you call me here? You said you had money for me."

"Yes I do."

Akia snapped her fingers and the butler brought over a  brief case full of money. There was plenty of money but I was surprised that my parents had left all this money. Something was up and I needed to find out what. I took the money and then thanked her for letting me come over. I started to get ready to leave but then I started to feel really really sleepy. My head felt dizzy and my body started to feel weak. Then out of nowhere chains came out of the ground and pulled my arms back. They pulled me down back onto the chair and Akia started to laugh with a very creepy tone. I looked over at her and she said to me,

"You when I first met you I found myself very fond of you. Watching you work around the house all day and night must have been very tiring. I admired your strength and perseverance through all the tough times and I soon found myself in love with you. I was planning on making you mine taking you away from my father and making you my personal servant but then.. then you had to gamble your freedom and you left the house. I was young then so I couldn't just go after you so I waited. I waited for my father to die and then I inherited his fortune. I used his money to spy on you and watch your every movement seeing everything you did. Your luck is amazing Mayu-chan!"

"So you're basically a stalker?"

"NO! I AM NOT A STALKER! I just really like you Mayu and now that you're here you're never leaving my side again." 

"Eh?!"

Aki stood up and walked behind me wrapping her arms around my chest and squeezing me tightly.

"I love you Mayu-chan~"

I tried to fight but I was too weak to move for whatever she put in that tea was really strong. I didn't even recognize this girl let alone knew she existed. The old guy never mentioned the fact that he had a daughter let alone a wife in general. There were many things I don't know about the old guy and now I have to deal with his crazy daughter. Things couldn't get any worse but I was wrong when Akia then put something around my neck pulling it tight to the point where I could barely breathe. The butler brought over a mirror and there around my neck was a collar. It was black with red crystals and a silver tag that has my name on it. Aika giggled and then said,

"Don't you look just adorable Mayu! You can try to take it off but every time you touch it the collar will shock you so you can try to run but I wouldn't suggest it~"

"You've got to be kidding me.."

"I never play games Mayu-chan~ Well sometimes I can but right now I'm not. Oh Mayu-chan we're gonna have so much fun playing! We can play tea party and royalty and oh oh my favorite is doctor! I have the perfect outfit for Doctor Watanabe~ This is going to be so much fun Mayu and the best part is you'll never be alone again!"

"I never was alone you crazy bitch. I have friends I have Yuki."

Aki seemed angry and so she pulled my collar tight and then said,

"Ah you don't need to worry about Yuki anymore. I've already taken care of her."

She had a wicked look on her face making me think the worse things possible for Yuki. I really did hope she was ok along with the others but still I was very afraid. Before I could think of anything else Akia pulled my collar more and said,

"Get ready for some fun Mayu-chan~"

 At that moment all I could think of is screaming for Yuki. Oh God I hope she's ok.
 
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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 21
« Reply #176 on: March 02, 2014, 05:45:46 PM »
Well, this is quite something eh...
Rabutan...is...aaaah~ it's hard to explain,
but a yandere character is here!!
I wonder what will happen to Mayu and Yuki now...
*doki doki*

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 21
« Reply #177 on: March 02, 2014, 09:29:34 PM »
Omg Rabutan is yandere

Mayu don't worry Yuki is fine

Someone need to help Mayu from Rabutan

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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 21
« Reply #178 on: March 04, 2014, 07:12:51 PM »
No worries, Yuki will save Mayu.
She is more dangerous than Rabutan. :sweatdrop:
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Re: Mayuki: Gambler's Luck update chapter 21
« Reply #179 on: March 04, 2014, 07:37:52 PM »
Rabutan's normally known as the princess of the tsundere kingdom, right? But, yandere is totally different! It surprised me! :shocked: Still... somehow, I get the feeling she suits it...

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