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« Reply #160 on: January 09, 2007, 07:23:02 AM »
i never read fanfics, but this got my attention. you should be proud. lol.
you've captured cheesyness to its limits :P in a good way.. j/k XD
great job!
can't wait for the upcoming chapters :P
*stays tuned in*

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« Reply #161 on: January 16, 2007, 03:59:04 PM »
I got sick a few days before the New Year so there's nothing to write about it really. I wanted to ask her out after Christmas but thanks to my flu, I had to plan it for another day. It was alright though, because she called me and said that she'd be busy for a few days so she we might not be able to talk for quite a while. She called me when she got the letter I sent her last Christmas. She said that she won't open it because she already knows what's written inside.

I feel fine now. As a matter of fact, I went out yesterday to check out what's new in the mall. Wii, PS3, some new phones and a lot of other stuff but they're expensive. I can do without them anyway. I have Sugaya. And she's all I need.

By the way, my sister gave me a Berryz Koubou 2007 Calendar for Christmas. That's one of the few times she actually gave me something or Christmas. But it was like, four weeks late.

"What's this for?"
"So you can see Risako-san even if you’re not in school."
"Yeah right. You're being nice to me so I'd bring her here so you can see her. And the other girls appear more times than her. It's like I'm gonna see her after every two months in this calendar."
"Boo! Don't you want to see the others too? They're just as cute as Risako-san. You're so mean! I wonder what Risako-san saw in you that made you like her. You're too ordinary."
"Maybe that's what girls like her like. Ordinary guys."
"Nah, that's impossible."
"How would you know?"
"I believe that idols like her are supposed to have good taste when it comes to boys."
"And she just proved you wrong, didn't she?"
"Yeah. I don't get it, onii-chan. You must have done something to her. You must've used some kind of magic spell to trick her. What did you do? Huh? Huh?"
"Haha. That's some kind of imagination you have there, Shizuka-chan. Why don't you ask her that when you meet her?"
"I will, I will! Later, onii-chan. I'm going to my piano lessons."
"Bye. And thanks for the calendar."
"Nyaaa~!!!" she said as she stuck out her tongue and ran out of my room.

Looking at Sugaya's picture in the calendar reminded me how I can't wait to talk to her again. Just when I was thinking of that, I got a message from her.

- CALL ME!

I went up to my room and dialed her number on the phone. It was ringing but she wasn't picking it up. I was about to hang up so I can try calling her using my cell phone but she eventually picked up.

"Hello! How are y..."
"What's the meaning of this?"
"What are you talking about?"
"Don't pretend you don't know anything!"
"About what? Why are you shouting at me?"
"This letter..."
"Letter? What letter?"
"Yurina-chan..."

Yurina-chan?

***

Now I think I'm starting to get it. I forgot to tell you, but Kumai-san asked me to meet her yesterday. I was already in the mall when I got her message so it wouldn't hurt if I meet up with her. But I was a bit hesitant because, the last time we saw each other, it didn't really end well. She didn't talk to me for a while but we were able to talk though SMS and it seemed that she's forgotten about what happened earlier between us. I haven't seen her personally again but she has probably become prettier. She asked me to meet her at the same cake shop she asked me to meet her the first time she asked me out. I saw her sitting on the same table as before and I was right. She was indeed prettier this time.

Her long hair which was straight the last time I saw it, now was a bit wavy. She looked hotter. But don't Sugaya I told you that. I also told you before too that long haired girls were my weakness. Seeing Kumai-san again just reminded me why.

"Hello! What took you so long? Here, have a seat."
"Hello Kumai-san. It's been a while, huh? You look, how should I say it, fabulous?"
"Really? Thank you then. What about you? How are you doing?"
"I'm fine. I feel a lot better because I just recovered from flu."
"That's nice. Anyway, let's order something?" she said as she called the waiter.
"Orange juice will do."
"Okay. Wow, that's a nasty scar."
"Yeah. So you can see it too."
"Of course. I remember your face. It wasn't there before. Can I touch it?"
"Umm, sure?"

She stood up and moved closer to me. She then ran her index finger through my scar twice. Then she returned to her seat.

"That's a deep cut. It must've been long for that to heal."
"Yeah. Just like my hand."
"So, you really got into trouble with those old guys."
"I guess all you girls know about it already."
"I didn't thought that it was that serious."
"Why'd you want meet me Kumai-san?"
"Is there a problem? Didn't you ask Risako-chan for permission?"
"Haha. I don't think there's a need for that. I don't think she minds me seeing her friends."
"Really? So she won't mind if we go out more, will she?"

Here she goes again. I didn't answer her question. She told me that she likes me but I wasn't sure if she was serious. Honestly, I like her too. If I met her earlier, then I think that everything would be different.She would be the one I'm going out with, she would have another bracelet on her wrist, and I wouldn't have gotten into trouble with those men. But asking for something else when you have a girl like Sugaya is greedy. I'm happy with how the things right now are.

"So, why'd you call me?"
"Can I ask you a favor?"
"As long as it's not something like the one you asked me to do before, I'll do it." I was expecting her to get mad after I said this but she just shook her head and smiled.
"Don't worry, it's a harmless request." she said as she took out something from her bag. "Could you write this letter for me? I'm going to give it to someone but I want you to write it so that it would be impossible to determine that it came from me." she said as she handed it to me.

I read the letter. It was long and it took a few minutes before I could finish it. But I had to read it again. Why? Because it was a beautiful letter. It's like it was done by someone who's deeply in love. The words, the message, everything. It was brilliant. It puts the letter I gave to Sugaya into shame. And Kumai-san was the one who wrote it. I know because I recognize her handwriting.

"This...This is a nice letter."
"Of course. I had a hard time making that and it would be a waste if the person I'm planning to give it to wouldn't receive it. So, will you write it for me or do I have to ask you again?"
"I'll write it."
"Good. I thought you were gonna ask me for a kiss before you write it." she said as she handed me some stationery.

I started copying the letter on the blank stationery. Writing it made me realize again how beautiful the letter was. A few minutes later, my glass of juice and her cake arrived.

"Hey, maybe you should take a break." she said. "I don't want your handwriting to get sloppy."
"Okay" I said as I sipped my orange juice. "I have a question, Kumai-san."
"Yes, go ahead."
"Since I have to rewrite everything, won't that guy think that the letter came from another guy?"
"Hahaha. Sorry, but I can't really answer that. Who knows, maybe some girls could write as good as you."
"You're saying that my handwriting is like a girl's handwriting?"
"Haha. I never said that."
"So, who's the lucky guy?"
"You'll know him soon enough..."

I had no idea what she meant by that.

After I finished rewriting the letter, she placed it inside an envelope, sealed it and kept it inside her bag. After we paid for the stuff we ordered we walked out of the shop. It was still early afternoon, the sun was still high. I really felt bad the last time when she didn't want me to walk her home. I thought that this was a good opportunity to make up for that.

"Hey, I can walk you home if you want."
"No thanks. Writing that letter was enough. I was really surprised. I didn't think you'd show up but you did. That's the kind of boys I'm looking for. Boys who have guts. And I'm not yet going home."
"Okay. So, could I walk you to the train station or bus station?"
"Why not?"

We headed towards the train station. She bought a ticket and waved at me as she entered. I waved back. I waited for to board the train and after that, I left the station with my chest feeling a bit lighter. I guess she's didn't get mad at me after all.

***

"What the meaning of this letter?!" Sugaya asked me.
"What letter?"
"Yurina-chan showed it to me!"

I didn't want to think about it but could it be that Kumai-san told Sugaya that she got that letter from me? Is that the reason why she asked me to write that letter? What was she thinking? What does she want? Is she really trying to break us apart? Does she really have feelings for me?

"Tell me..."
What should I tell her?

I didn't get mad at her before when she told Sugaya that I agreed to kiss her, but if something happens because of this, I don't know if I'll be able to face her without saying or doing something bad to her.

"Why do you keep doing this to me?"
"I...I can explain..."
"No. You don't have to explain anything."
"Risako...wait...I..."
"Why can't you tell this to me personally? Why do you have to always put your feelings into writing?"
"Huh?"
"I appreciate getting letters from you, but you know, I'd like it better if you tell it to me face to face."
"Whaat? I'm getting confused."
"Hahaha. Yurina-chan told me that you asked her to give me this letter."
"Really?"
"Come on, stop acting like you didn't know."
"Yeah. I think that's what happened."
"Silly prince! This is a nice letter. But you know, I still like the letter you gave me for Christmas more. This new one is a bit long."
"I thought that you weren't gonna open it?"
"Yeah. But I'm glad that I did. So, how are you doing?"
"Fine? Better? Relieved? I don't know."
"Haha. I missed you."
"I missed you too..."

We were finally able to talk each other again. And to think it started like a fight. She sounded really happy when we talked, probably because of the letter. And I have to thank Kumai-san for that.

Kumai-san.

She's really an unpredictable girl.  I was wrong. I hope someone would smack me in the head for thinking about those bad things about her. I reached for my cell phone to thank her but I saw that I had a new message. And it was from her.

"Take good care of my friend."

I started to compose a message but then I received a new one again from her.

"Don't reply to my first message. I might change my mind."

I did what she told me. I didn't reply to her anymore.

And I will do what she's asking me to do. I will take care of her friend.
« Last Edit: March 04, 2007, 08:43:14 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #162 on: January 16, 2007, 04:25:56 PM »
sweet! first post! It got me confused over what had happened.

Let's see, our main guy wrote a second letter to Risako if I'm not mistaken. It took me a few minutes to realize that Kumai wanted to give it to Risako.

anyhoo, just curious, you weren't really sick the same time our hero was, right?;)

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« Reply #163 on: January 16, 2007, 04:39:31 PM »
^ I wasn't sick. I had to do more work since my boss resigned last December :P

And I had a bit of writer's block.:ONhee:

He wrote a letter because he thought that Yurina was supposed to give it to someone. He wasn't aware of her plan.

But that was not Yurina's original plan anyway... :ONglasses:
« Last Edit: January 16, 2007, 04:51:22 PM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #164 on: January 16, 2007, 05:00:51 PM »
Holy crap i thought i was going to have a heart attack !!!

you are good !! you are the best !!!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

i should calm down...omg !!!
if i like it ????? wth i love it !!!!

i knew yurina and chinami's plan was coming but nothing like that !!!

seriously ...BRAVO

you made my day !!!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa



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I got sick a few days before the New Year so there's nothing to write about it really.
I feel fine now. As a matter of fact, I went out yesterday to check out what's new in the mall. Wii, PS3, some new phones and a lot of other stuff but they're expensive. I can do without them anyway.
that's what you meant by "i put myself in the shoes of pretty boy" ? haha

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I have Sugaya. And she's all I need.
aaa...

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"Yeah right. You're being nice to me so I'd bring her here so you can see her.

perspicacious !

 
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And the other girls appear more times than her. It's like I'm gonna see her after every two months in this calendar."
:lol:
 
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I wonder what Risako-san saw in you that made you like her. You're too ordinary."
ahahahaha....that's a good question but...isn't she supposed to be happy ? :p or she is jealous ? XD
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"I believe that idols like her are supposed to have good taste when it comes to boys."
either way...Sugaya has bad taste...or ...well i believe that if all berryz like him it must have a reason for that...

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You must've used some kind of magic spell to trick her. What did you do? Huh? Huh?"
magic spell XD aaaa...this is too cute...

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- CALL ME!
wooo what an order XD
and it's funny...'cause she wants to be called...she could have called him herself but noo...she wants him to call her...hu hu hu hu

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"Hello! How are y..."
"What's the meaning of this?"
"What are you talking about?"
"Don't pretend you don't know anything!"
"About what? Why are you shouting at me?"
"That letter..."
"Letter? What letter?"
"Yurina-chan..."
there i was so exicted wooooo....i really thought everything is going to be screw up...what's inside the letter ?!


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She looked hotter. But don't Sugaya I told you that. I also told you before too that long haired girls were my weakness. Seeing Kumai-san again just reminded me why.
he he he he h....

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Can I touch it?"
"Umm, sure?"
....
....hum...may i say "matches girl"... XD

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"Is there a problem? Didn't you ask Risako-chan for permission?"
"Haha. I don't think there's a need for that. I don't think she minds me seeing her friends."
"Really? So she won't mind if we go out more, will she?"
 Yurina....hu hu hu hu....

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Honestly, I like her too. If I met her earlier, then I think that everything would be different.She would be the one I'm going out with, she would have another bracelet on her wrist, and I wouldn't have gotten into trouble with those men.
and if...and if...aaaa...

but true...if he went out with Yurina he wouldn't have got into that fight...wow...seriously...wow...

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"So, why'd you call me?"
"Can I ask you a favor?"
"As long as it's not something like the one you asked me to do before, I'll do it."
:lol:

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"Don't worry, it's a harmless request."
harmless ??? harmless ??? woooooot Yurina you are so mean....

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I read the letter. It was long [...]it was a beautiful letter. It's like it was done by someone who's deeply in love. The words, the message, everything. It was brilliant.
what's inside ?!!!!!

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It puts the letter I gave to Sugaya into shame.

:lmao:

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"So, who's the lucky guy?"
"You'll know him soon enough..."
uh uh uh uh oh...

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"What the meaning of this letter?!" Sugaya asked me.
"What letter?"
"Yurina-chan showed it to me!"


:ONshock:

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I didn't want to think about it but could it be that Kumai-san told Sugaya that she got that letter from me? Is that the reason why she asked me to write that letter? What was she thinking? What does she want? Is she really trying to break us apart? Does she really have feelings for me?

:ONomg: :ONomg: :ONomg:
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"Why do you keep doing this to me?"
"I...I can explain..."
"No. You don't have to explain anything."
"Risako...wait...I..."
"Why can't you tell this to me personally? Why do you have to always put your feelings into writing?"
"Huh?"
"I appreciate getting letters from you, but you know, I'd like it better if you tell it to me face to face."
"Whaat? I'm getting confused."
"Hahaha. Yurina-chan told me that you asked her to give me this letter."
"Really?"
"Come on, stop acting like you didn't know."


seriously it killed me...

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... really unexpected !!!


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"Yeah. But I'm glad that I did. So, how are you doing?"
"Fine? Better? Relieved? I don't know."
:lol: he can be !!!

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She's really an unpredictable girl.
i really don't know how to say it better XD

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I was wrong. I hope someone would smack me in the head for thinking about those bad things about her.

well...you weren't wrong...she really did want to break you guys...but i wonder what made her think otherwise...
interesting....

 
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"Don't reply to my first message. I might change my mind."
rofl...girls...girls....mystery of life...

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And I will do what she's asking me to do. I will take care of her friend.


aaaaaa that's why...she wants to have pretty boy undercontrol...maybe she is planning something more interesting ..hu hu hu

seriously i love this fic...

thank you again wordsworth

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« Reply #165 on: January 16, 2007, 09:35:50 PM »
wah you rule wordsworth, I'm glad it didn't turn out like Kumai originally planned, lets hope there won't be any of such plans from her.


  Awesome story, please keep up the great work, I love this story

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« Reply #166 on: January 16, 2007, 10:09:26 PM »
Yay, new chapter!!

I realize when I'm reading that I love "Shizuka" as her sister name.. It sound sweet and somehow intended to a girl full with manner.. ( random babbling) Look like she kinda jealous with her brother ? Damn, I'm jealous with him too..
XD

Write a letter for yurina? I really assume that this pretty boy will fall into yurina's trap. So, it isn't really a trap?
 
Risako is lovely. I wonder if she really just accept the letter from yurina without something going in her mind..

*shrug*

This chapter is scary, because I don't know to where this love will turn to.. And thinking what really is yurina's plan even makes it scarier.. Arghh...

Thanks for providing another awesome chapter!

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« Reply #167 on: January 18, 2007, 09:05:22 AM »
For a moment there I was like Yurina how could you??
Later I was all :MKsniffle: cuz of what she did. Awww she's great after all :baa60776:

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« Reply #168 on: January 24, 2007, 04:31:31 AM »
wow, definately a good piece of writing
seems like all you guys in here have great literary skill and experience

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« Reply #169 on: February 12, 2007, 02:30:32 PM »
Sugaya asked me to go out with her a few days back. She told me that she needs to get a haircut again.

"Didn't you get one the last time we went out?"
"That was almost four months ago."
"Really? It's been that long? I thought that it was just last month."
"No it wasn't. I didn't get a haircut that time. We ate curry the last time we went out. Not counting the time we went out to see Maiha-chan."
"Time flies really fast, doesn't it?"
"Yeah. Next thing you know is we're going to have our anniversary and stuff."
"Huh?"
"Nothing. So, you're going with me or not?"
"Is that a trick question?"
"No. It's a threat. Meet you here at 2 PM."

She didn't give me time to answer anymore. Maybe she knew what my answer would be anyway.

I arrived at her place on time, no need for her to wait this time. I didn't recognize her when she walked out of the gate. Why you ask? She was wearing dark, gloomy clothes. There were even small skulls printed. If she didn't wear the bracelet I gave her, I wouldn't have known it was her.

"Uhhh..."
"What?"
"Nothing."
"You don't like it?"
"Not really."
"Want me to change?"
"Nah. It's just the first time I saw you wearing something in that color."
"Better get used to it then."

We went to the same parlor as before. Even though I've been there, I still didn't feel comfortable being surrounded by a lot of girls. She told me to wait for her. I sat on the couch and looked around for a bit. There were some girly magazines on the table. I recognized some of them since my sister also buy some. Her haircut was taking longer than last time and I think some of the other girls are getting irritated at me looking at them so I picked up one of the magazines.

Pichi Lemon. That's the name of the magazine. It was my first time reading that kind of mag and I didn't know where to start. I skimmed through some of the pages. Most of them have girls wearing different kinds of clothes. This is probably where girls get the latest fashion trends though I didn't see any skull prints. Cute and colorful. What can you expect from a magazine aimed for girls? The girls were pretty, but not as cute as Sugaya. I stopped at a particular page and chuckled a bit. Because one of the girls kinda looks like her.





HEY...





WAIT A MINUTE...





It is her! I almost asked the girl sitting beside if what I was seeing was real but she gave me a cold stare before I could speak.

How come she didn't tell me about this? I forgot. It's my job to find out about it. Maybe this was what Shizuka-chan's been telling me a few days back. She's saying that she knows something I don't an she won't tell me. I sent an SMS to her, telling her that I saw Sugaya in Pichi Lemon. She answered back and said that she'll be appearing there starting this month.

"I buy a copy of this magazine regularly but I'm not going to let you borrow it. Nyaa~!!!"

Wow. The girl I'm going out now appears in a magazine and I didn't even know about it. How dense can I get?

When she was done, I asked her where she wanted to eat.

"Is that a trick question?" she asked.
"No. And it's not a threat either."
"Okay. Maybe we can have some ramen and some ice cream. How's that?"
"No problem. Err..."
"What is it?"
"Let's celebrate. I didn't know that you're a model now. You looked great in that magazine"
"Really? Thanks. I felt that I had too much makeup when they took that."
"How does it feel to be one? To be a model?"
"Not that different really. I've appeared with Yurina-chan and the others in other magazines too so I'm used to it."
"So being famous is easy huh?"
"No it's not. There's a lot of things that I want to do but I can't."
"Like what?"
She held my hand and said "Like this."
"Now you're gonna get more attention."
"Yeah. I better be ready for it."
"And you're going to be busier too."
"But that doesn't mean that we can't go out anymore." she said as she clung to my arm.

We went to a restaurant and ate some ramen. After that, we bought some ice cream before we started to walk to her house. We stopped for a while when we reached her place.

"Ummm...."
"Yes?" I asked her.
"Do you like sweets?"
"Sweets? I've heard of them but I haven't listened to their songs. I heard that they disbanded already..." she was laughing even before I was finished. "What's funny about what I said?"
"I'm not talking about them, silly. I was talking about sweets. You know, candy, chocolate? Do you like that kind of stuff?"
"Oh. Of course. Who doesn't?"
"Okay. Hey, there's still some ice cream on your lips."
"Whe...."

She kissed me then she went inside. "Don't miss class this week." I heard her say.

"I won't."

As I walked home, I was still trying to understand what she meant by that. And also that stuff about sweets. But I have a feeling that something's going to happen this week.

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« Reply #170 on: February 12, 2007, 03:07:17 PM »
Aaaaa....wordsworth...

i'm feeling so weird...
i was smiling all along...it's just so....cute:tfr9a7wg:

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"Time flies really fast, doesn't it?"
"Yeah. Next thing you know is we're going to have our anniversary and stuff."
"Huh?"
weeeee you have somthing in mind don't you :D
now that makes me wonder if he knows her bday ...probably not concidering how ignorant about her he is...

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She was wearing dark, gloomy clothes. There were even small skulls printed. If she didn't wear the bracelet I gave her, I wouldn't have known it was her.
witch freak !! :lol:

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"Want me to change?"
it's a trick question if he answered yes she would have gone mad ! XD
and goes like "do you only like me for what i wear ? you prefere this sexy clothes ?" :ROFL (heard it from Chinami last year...don't slap me...)

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Pichi Lemon. That's the name of the magazine. It was my first time reading that kind of mag
uh oh...

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The girls were pretty, but not as cute as Sugaya.
does that mean he think Risako is only cute and not pretty ? :lol:

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I stopped at a particular page and chuckled a bit. Because one of the girls kinda looks like her.





HEY...





WAIT A MINUTE...





It is her! I almost asked the girl sitting beside if what I was seeing was real but she gave me a cold stare before I could speak.
:lol::lol::lol:
aaaa...poor Pretty Boy...i feel his shock XD

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It's my job to find out about it.
you failed:ROFL
well, at least youa re a kind little boy and not a stalker or a maniac :lol:  
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"I buy a copy of this magazine regularly but I'm not going to let you borrow it. Nyaa~!!!"
his sis is so ...............cute :lol:

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"Okay. Maybe we can have some ramen and some ice cream. How's that?"
:MKramen:

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"Really? Thanks. I felt that I had too much makeup when they took that."
does girl always have to complain on details when we say they look great on one pic even if they are gorgeous :lol:

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"No it's not. There's a lot of things that I want to do but I can't."
"Like what?"
She held my hand and said "Like this."
(where is that smiley that goes like "hi hi".....oh well):ONhee:

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"Now you're gonna get more attention."
define MORe >_>
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"Do you like sweets?"
"Sweets? I've heard of them but I haven't listened to their songs. I heard that they disbanded already..." she was laughing even before I was finished. "What's funny about what I said?"
"I'm not talking about them, silly. I was talking about sweets. You know, candy, chocolate? Do you like that kind of stuff?"
"Oh. "
:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

oh wait....he knows stuff about Sweets but not his girlfriend's Berryz koubou ?!!!

BAD PRETTY BOY !!!

oh wait...he didn't listened to their song...ok ..then it's ok...i guess....hum...

(slap me please)

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"Okay. Hey, there's still some ice cream on your lips."
"Whe...."
She kissed me then she went inside.







:ONshock: :ONshock: :ONshock: :ONshock: :panda_omg: :panda_omg:
Risako youa re such a....
where did she learn that from XD

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I was still trying to understand what she meant by that. And also that stuff about sweets. But I have a feeling that something's going to happen this week.
Maybe something starting with V ?:ONbingo:

really nice sweet chapter
thks a lot :)

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« Reply #171 on: February 13, 2007, 03:52:09 AM »
that was the overly uber cute sugarness overload >w<...
I almost had cavaties because of the huge amount of sugary sweetness =)
Now post another one GO!

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« Reply #172 on: February 15, 2007, 07:22:03 AM »
I don't realize that there is a new chapter! Arghh.. now I found it!

As everyone said, cute chapter indeed.. and such cuteness is infectious if not threaten properly! :D

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« Reply #173 on: February 16, 2007, 03:08:47 AM »
lol...I just had a thought...if they're speaking in Japanese, that "SweetS" misunderstanding wouldn't have happened... Risako would say "okashi". ehehe...just my own two bits. XD

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« Reply #174 on: February 16, 2007, 05:05:17 AM »
Hahaha that SweetS reference was kinda funny :MKevil:
I'm beginning to like Shizuka more, the kid's got spunk XD

Lemme imagine Risako in gloomy clothes....*brain working* Hmmmm looks pretty good :inlove:

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« Reply #175 on: February 23, 2007, 07:37:31 PM »
February 12

"I hope this year will be better than last year." Yurina-chan told me on the phone. She called me as I was about to leave for school.
"Yeah. Maybe this time we'll be able to make it right. It'll be hard to shop on that day itself. Prices will be unreasonable."
"As long as Momo-chan can control herself, we can do it."
"Haha. Better tell that to Shimi-chan too."
"Right. So, how many are you will you give out this year?"
"Just a few. What about you?"
"Same as you."
"Same as me?"
"Just a few."
"Okay."
"Alright, meet you girls in my house after class."

I didn't tell him that I was going to Yurina-chan's place. He asked if he could walk me to where I was going but I told him that I'd be fine.

"Sure?"
"Sure."
"I don't have to do anything this afternoon."
"Why don't you borrow this month's issue of Pichi Lemon from your sister?"
"That gives me an idea. She has piano lessons today. Maybe I can sneak into her room and read that issue. She doesn't let me borrow her stuff."
"Sneaking into a girl's room is naughty, you know."
"You're the one who gave me that idea."
"Never mind. Just study or watch TV."
"Okay. Maybe I'll just hang around the manga store. I'm going to look for new titles to read."
"Fine. But I better not hear anything about you reading some dirty magazines. Maimi-chan told me that they caught you reading those stuff."
"What? That was a photobook! It was Goto-san's! It was Foxy Fungo! I don't read or touch dirty mags!"
"I was just kidding. My, my. You're too defensive. Hahaha. It's funny you still remember the name of Goto-senpai's photobook."
"Of course."
"What about my photobook? Still remember it's name."
"Wait...Wait..............Wait..."
"You don't remember?"
"I..."
"Hmph! Talk to me when you remember it."
"It's..."
"Don't bother. I'm not talking to you."
"But..."

I didn't talk to him after that. He kept hounding me but I ignored him. He didn't give up until the final bell rang. I just smirked at him before I headed to Yurina-chan's house. By doing this, I thought that maybe he'll be more surprised when I give him chocolates. I didn't tell him what I was going to do at her house. Actually, this is only the second time we're going to do this. You know, make chocolate for Valentine's day.

Last year, the others and I made the chocolate for Valentine's day in Miya-chan's house. But we weren't able to make a lot because Momo-chan and Shimi-chan kept on tasting it like every minute. They both got toothaches after.

I didn't take that much from what we made. I just took some for my Dad, my brother and Tsunku-san. But this time. it will be different. Because I have him. By giving him something on that day, maybe he'll be more open to me and express his feelings easier.

I'm not sure if he got any chocolates for Valentine's Day last year but I'm sure of one thing. I didn't give him any.

"Risako-chan! Wait up!" I looked behind and it was Chinami-chan and Maasa-chan.
"Is there something wrong?" Maasa-chan asked me.
"Huh?"
"You looked liked you weren't comfortable walking alone."
"You were walking in zigzags, like you're a drunk cat." Chinami-chan added.
"Maybe I'm too used to walking with him beside me."
"Awww."
"Haha. He must be walking in zigzags too right now."

Miya-chan, Shimi-chan and Momo-chan were already there when we arrived. We saw that there were already some chocolate on Shimi-chan and Momo-chan's cheeks.

"We just tasted it." Momo-chan said.
"Right." we said in unison.
"Don't worry everyone. This is not going to be a repeat of last year. Why? Momo-chan told me that she really has someone special in mind this yea..." Shimi-chan didn't finish what she was saying because Momo-chan tried to cover her mouth.
"I told you to be quiet!"
"Ooooh! Momo-chan has a boyfriend?" Maasa-chan exclaimed.
"He's not yet my boyfriend."
"Who is it, who is it?" Chinami-chan asked as she hopped around them.
"Err...It's the cousin of Risako-chan's classmate."
"Eeeeh?" we all said.
"How come he didn't tell me about that?" I asked.
"I dunno. Maybe you don't tell him about some things too." she answered. And she was right.

I didn't tell him that I was going to be in Pichi Lemon. I didn't tell him about Munasawagi Scarlet. But he found about them. I felt really happy when he told me about it though. Perhaps he didn't tell me this so that he'll be happy when I'm the one telling him about this.

"We've been classmates for quite a while but we've only gotten to know each other lately."
"Is he cute?" I asked.
"Hello? He's you're classmate's cousin. So they have some things in common. Yeah, he's cute and tall too."
"I bet he hasn't noticed that thing with your pinky yet." Maasa-chan said.
"Of course he has. He said that it's cute when my pinky sticks out when I hold things."
"Does he have good handwriting?" Yurina-chan asked.
"Are you kidding me? My sloppy handwriting is better than his normal handwriting. But it's readable."
"You and that fetish of yours, Yurina-chan."Chinami-chan joked.
"Who made the first move?" Miya-chan asked.
"I....forgot.Maybe it was him."
"Momo-chan?!!!"
"I can't remember." she said. I've never seen her blush this way before.
"Wait a minute, how come I'm in the hot seat? I think Captain's seeing someone too."
We turned our eyes to Shimi-chan
"Me? I'm not seeing anyone. Boys can wait."
"What about you two, Maasa-chan, Chinami-chan?" asked Momo-chan.
"None."
"Ditto."
"Miyabi-chan?"
"Same as them."
"Yurina-chan?"
"Still waiting."
"Hey, let's get this started." Miya-chan said. "If we don't we might not get boys unlike Momo and Risako-chan."

We finished at around 10 PM.

We made a lot and we even had some leftovers. Momo-chan and Shimi-chan took care of them.

Yep. It was different this year.

It was better.


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February 13

We still didn't talk to each other. He didn't try to talk to me. Could it be that he really believes that I'm still mad at him? Maybe I shouldn't have frowned at him when he greeted me 'ohayo'. Haha. He's in for a surprise tomorrow.


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February 14

The first thing I did when I woke up was send him a message. He didn't reply.

I greeted him when I got to the classroom but he just nodded at me. He received some chocolates from girls, girls from other sections. Some of them were even older than us. He just thanked and smiled at them. He hasn't smiled at me yet.  I talked to him when we had breaks but all he said was, 'yeah', 'okay', 'right'.  Now I wasn't sure if he's playing me or if he's mad at me. I felt a bit scared. I decided not to talk to him until it was time to go home. He walked with me as I went out of the classroom and we headed for my house.

"Did you get my message earlier?"
"Yes."
"So, what did you do the other day?"
"Nothing."
"Did you sneak up into your sister's room?"
"No."
"Hey, until when are you going to answer me with one word sentences?"
"Dunno."
"Are you thinking that I'm mad at you?"
"Yeah."
"There you go again, answering me with one word! If you don't stop, I'm really going to get mad!"
"I didn't forget the title..."
"I know. And even if you did, it doesn't really matter. It won't change the way I look at you."
"But if I did, I wouldn't forgive myself. Because it's your name..."
"I know. That's why you're my boyfriend, remember?"
"Right. Oops, that's another one word answer."
"Haha. Don't worry about it. We shouldn't be fighting on a day like today anyway. But Momo-chan and your cousin are probably fighting over chocolate."

He smiled at me. For the first time. Today. Valentine's Day.

"There. You look a lot better when you smile."
"Sorry if I made you feel uneasy."
"Don't worry." I said. "I was the one who started it anyway. We're here."

I told him to wait for me downstairs. When I got down, I went to the kitchen to get what I was supposed to give him.
 
"Umm...isn't that a bit too much?"
"Nonesense. Here's something from them." I said as I handed him the first box. I wasn't surprised with his reaction. It was a big box, like one for a pizza or something. They decided to make the chocolate pizza-like. It was round and could be cut into slices. Haha. Maasa-chan and her weird ideas.
"Please tell them I said thank you."
"No problem. Now here's something for your sister."
"Haha. She's going to be surprised."
"And this is from me." It was a small heart-shaped box. Of course, it was chocolate inside.  
"Thanks."
"Can you taste it? I want to know if I made it right."

He opened it carefully. Looks like he wants to keep the box. He took and ate a piece of it.

"It's sweet." he said.
"Really?"
"Yes. Thanks a lot for this."
"It's my way of saying thanks to you. For everything."
"Risako..."
"I didn't ask for the title of my photobook."
"That's not the name of a photobook. That's the name of the girl who owns my heart."

Then he smiled at me. Again. Today. Valentine's Day.
« Last Edit: February 23, 2007, 08:05:05 PM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #176 on: February 23, 2007, 07:57:43 PM »
Wow, valentine day! I wish I had a girlfriend like captain :3

Yay, diary. Lol, risako and pretty boy got a quarrel. They're both cute. While pretty boy try to explain, risako keep avoiding him.. Poor boy.. Well, she's really the devil right ? ;)

So, captain and momo both an eating while cooking type? lol. Nice idea maasa. I never heard one about pizza-like chocolate before.

The last part of the diary really sweet. You write that part nicely and romantic. Good job as always wordsworth! Thanks for the new chapter and hope to see the next one soon. Arigatou!

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« Reply #177 on: February 25, 2007, 08:57:53 PM »
i love this fic

i don't know how many time i said that, but this is not the last :lol:


Quote from: wordsworth;315449
February 12

"I hope this year will be better than last year." Yurina-chan told me on the phone.
what happened last year ? :lol:

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It'll be hard to shop on that day itself. Prices will be unreasonable."
"As long as Momo-chan can control herself, we can do it."
"Haha. Better tell that to Shimi-chan too."
XD
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"Sneaking into a girl's room is naughty, you know."
"You're the one who gave me that idea."
:lol:
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"Fine. But I better not hear anything about you reading some dirty magazines. Maimi-chan told me that they caught you reading those stuff."
XD XD XD XD XD
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"I was just kidding. My, my. You're too defensive. Hahaha. I
haha...funny...it reminds me someone....><
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"What about my photobook? Still remember it's name."
"Wait...Wait..............Wait..."
"You don't remember?"
"I..."
"Hmph! Talk to me when you remember it."
"It's..."
"Don't bother. I'm not talking to you."
"But..."
hu oh hahaha how to make her mad in one word
shame on you Prety boy...sometimes i really feel bad for him XD

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By doing this, I thought that maybe he'll be more surprised when I give him chocolates.
Aaaaaaa....that was nice then XD XD XD you girls are so ...evil :p

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Last year, the others and I made the chocolate for Valentine's day in Miya-chan's house. But we weren't able to make a lot because Momo-chan and Shimi-chan kept on tasting it like every minute. They both got toothaches after.
:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:  tottaly can see it XD XD XD XD

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I'm not sure if he got any chocolates for Valentine's Day last year but I'm sure of one thing. I didn't give him any.
awww

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"You were walking in zigzags, like you're a drunk cat." Chinami-chan added.
"Maybe I'm too used to walking with him beside me."
"Awww."
"Haha. He must be walking in zigzags too right now."
Rofl...

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We saw that there were already some chocolate on Shimi-chan and Momo-chan's cheeks.
:lol: maybe i should draw it...this is too cute

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"Don't worry everyone. This is not going to be a repeat of last year.
what happened last year ?! XD

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"Ooooh! Momo-chan has a boyfriend?"
ths is going to be so complicate :lol:
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"Err...It's the cousin of Risako-chan's classmate."
"Eeeeh?" we all said.
Eeeeeh ? :lol:
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"How come he didn't tell me about that?" I asked.
"I dunno. Maybe you don't tell him about some things too." she answered. And she was right.
well, he met them when he fought with the bad guys...as he didn't want to tell her about this i understand...

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"Is he cute?" I asked.
"Hello? He's you're classmate's cousin. So they have some things in common. Yeah, he's cute and tall too."
"I bet he hasn't noticed that thing with your pinky yet." Maasa-chan said.
"Of course he has. He said that it's cute when my pinky sticks out when I hold things."
"Does he have good handwriting?" Yurina-chan asked.
"Are you kidding me? My sloppy handwriting is better than his normal handwriting. But it's readable."
:ROTFLMAO:
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someone too."
We turned our eyes to Shimi-chan
:o :o :o :o :o
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"Me? I'm not seeing anyone. Boys can wait."
feww....well, i guess she won't tell anyone about liking Pretty boy right...
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We made a lot and we even had some leftovers. Momo-chan and Shimi-chan took care of them.
:lol:

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February 13

We still didn't talk to each other. He didn't try to talk to me. Could it be that he really believes that I'm still mad at him? Maybe I shouldn't have frowned at him when he greeted me 'ohayo'. Haha. He's in for a surprise tomorrow.
aaaa....

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February 14

The first thing I did when I woke up was send him a message. He didn't reply.
I greeted him when I got to the classroom but he just nodded at me. He received some chocolates from girls, girls from other sections. Some of them were even older than us. He just thanked and smiled at them. He hasn't smiled at me yet.
jealous ? :D
 
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"Hey, until when are you going to answer me with one word sentences?"
"Dunno."
"Are you thinking that I'm mad at you?"
"Yeah."
:lol:
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"But if I did, I wouldn't forgive myself. Because it's your name..."
"I know. That's why you're my boyfriend, remember?"
aawwwwww.....
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It was a big box, like one for a pizza or something. They decided to make the chocolate pizza-like. It was round and could be cut into slices. Haha. Maasa-chan and her weird ideas.
XD XD XD XD
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"And this is from me." It was a small heart-shaped box.
ofcourse, heart shape haha

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"It's my way of saying thanks to you. For everything."
"Risako..."
"I didn't ask for the title of my photobook."
"That's not the name of a photobook. That's the name of the girl who owns my heart."

....

don't know how to react here..i feel like laughing and going awww.....roflawwwwwwwwwwww XD

aaa....so sweet...thks for the nice chapter again wordsworth

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« Reply #178 on: February 26, 2007, 10:51:30 AM »
That last part was so sweet. OMG I think I won't need any sugar for the rest of the day :MKevil: But still it was very enjoyable. The girls talking about Momo's boyfriend was exceptionally funny :lol:

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« Reply #179 on: March 11, 2007, 04:47:22 AM »
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