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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #40 on: March 10, 2014, 04:33:48 PM »
Wow, thanks for accepting my suggestion and kind of made my 'dream comes true'  :)

Hope it'll ultimately be "dream comes true for the lovely Mayuki as well!  :lol:
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #41 on: March 10, 2014, 09:18:26 PM »
This is freaking adorable ^^
They decided to ask themselves to be each other wife at the same time,isn't it a sign that they are made for each other?! ;)
I'm freaking happy about it.
Now,i'm already expecting the wedding,make it big and beautfiful like you feel it.

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #42 on: March 10, 2014, 09:30:29 PM »
If all this is a dream, then.................................................................... :shocked
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #43 on: March 10, 2014, 09:37:33 PM »
I still don't want to believe it was-/is a dream  :cry: but I think the things get more interesting in that way  8)
omg omg I can't waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait  :cathappy:
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #44 on: March 11, 2014, 08:49:29 AM »
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Zhen: Thank you for reading. I'm trying my best to be speedy. I hope I can keep up the pace. It's easy for me to write two chapters during the weekend, however it's tough to write with school. I'm basically occupied from 12AM-6PM with either sleeping or school hahaha. I hope I can make the Hawaii chapter quickly. Please continue to read and I hope you anticipate the next chapter  :cathappy: 

rhin: Thank you for reading. I'm sorry I revealed it was a dream in the author's note. I didn't want to reveal it but I also didn't want people getting confused with the story. I'm glad you feel happy about the lovey dovey parts, that's what I wanted readers to feel. I wanted to make the dream world seem far better than reality. Mayu will eventually wake up, you'll just have to wait and see when  :)

Kirozoro: Thank you for reading. They're getting married! I'm excited too hahaha. I haven't written the wedding chapter yet, but I'm stoked about it!

tfme3638: Thank you for reading. It'll be a little depressing. The dream world is nice isn't it? Unfortunately Mayu and Yuki aren't childhood friends in this story because I've already written the last chapter hahaha. That's a nice idea though.  :D

DC2805: Thank you for reading and thank you for the wonderful suggestion! I'm happy I was able to extend the story, it also gave me a different angle to approach the relationship (because I thought my fluffy date scenes were getting boring anyway lol  :nervous). Please continue to enjoy!

soolim: Thank you for reading. I'm so so so happy you think it's adorable. Mayuki are perfect for each other. I'm excited about the wedding scene. I chose Hawaii because I'm from Hawaii and I've only ever been to weddings here. Also, I see like 3 Japanese weddings a day when I go for morning jogs in the summer  :lol: I figured it would be the best source of inspiration (With Hawaii being such a popular wedding destination and all lol).

Ruka Kikuchi: Thank you for reading. Don't worry Kikuchi-san! Enjoy the dream world, embrace it  :inlove:

Koneki: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you think the dream thing is interesting. I feel it adds another layer to an otherwise standard fluff story haha. I'm glad you're excited, I am too!

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #45 on: March 12, 2014, 09:23:32 AM »
Marriage !!!!!!!!!

I hope you continue this story
Like they have a child or something



Update
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #46 on: March 19, 2014, 05:07:55 PM »
Can someone please  tell me how it is even possible that I found this story so late?  :doh:
Well anyway thank you :grin:
I look forward to another. XD
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #47 on: March 20, 2014, 10:41:30 AM »
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MayuxMatsuixMusic: Thank you for reading. Yes! Marriage! I totally would continue the story like that, but I already wrote the end.  :nervous I will surly consider it for future fics though.

Zita: Thank you for reading! Yay! I'm glad you found this story. I hope you continue to read!

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #48 on: March 20, 2014, 11:01:02 AM »
Author's Note

Hello readers, nishimura here. I'm sososososososo sorry this is late. Compared to the other chapters, this one arrived so much slower. This was actually supposed to be half of the wedding chapter but it didn't really fit well with the wedding. I want the wedding to be it's own chapter. I keep struggling, I want the wedding to be perfect. I constantly try to write the wedding chapter but my ideas have been a little stale lately (my brain must be on spring break mode).

I will say that the wedding chapter will be completed before Monday. In the mean time, I hope you all enjoy this chapter. It's not particularly fluffy, it's actually slightly serious. I kind of think it's boring but the events that happen are very important for the future chapters.

Chapter Seven

May 18th, 2015

It had been almost five months since Mayu and Yuki had become engaged. The couple had spent this time advancing their relationship while diligently planning their wedding to every last detail. While wedding planning, Mayu had also focused the past five months on her career. The doctor had a magnificent streak of successful surgeries. Despite her young age, she was considered one of the most elite cardiologists in Japan.

With the amount of surgeries increasing, Mayu often grew tired. Luckily, she still had most Sundays off and she enjoyed spending every minute of these days with Yuki. On this particular Sunday, the couple was comfortably sleeping in at Mayu's house.

While Mayu had a large bed, the couple took up less than half of it because they slept so close to each other. With her legs intertwined with Yuki's, the doctor's arms were comfortably wrapped around the weather girl's torso. Mayu's face was nuzzled closely to Yuki's chest while Yuki's fingers were loosely tangled in Mayu's hair. The weather girl must have been playing with her fiancé's hair before she fell asleep. Both girls were sound asleep in their comfortable state. They could probably lay in that position for hours.

"Ring Ring! Ring Ring!"

Mayu's phone suddenly rang loudly. At that moment the doctor detached herself from Yuki and quickly answered her phone.
"He-hello?"

"Good morning Dr. Watanabe. I'm sorry to bother you on your day off, but I have important news. The board of directors for the hospital is requesting your presence for a meeting. They want you in the conference room as soon as possible."

Mayu rolled her eyes. She really didn't want to head to work on her only day off. She looked down at the bed to observe her fiancé. After feeling Mayu get out of bed, Yuki had rolled the other way and fallen asleep again.

"What's this about?"

"I believe the information is classified, you'll have to attend the meeting."

"Okay. I'm on my way"

Mayu walked to the bathroom and freshened up. She returned to the bedroom and began changing into her work clothes. Yuki woke up and saw her fiancé buttoning up her work shirt.

"Mayu, where are you going? It's Sunday."

"I know babe, I'm sorry. They need me to come in for a meeting today" 

The doctor walked up to the bed and gave Yuki a peck on the lips before leaving.



Mayu arrived at the hospital and immediately walked to the conference room. The room had a large rectangular table positioned at the center. Several serious looking middle-aged men and women sat around the table. The only open chair was at the head of the table.

"Good morning Dr. Watanabe, please have a seat" said an older man at the other head of the table.

Mayu seated herself and acknowledged the board of directors.

"You're probably wondering why we called you to this meeting."

"I am slightly curious."

The man handed Mayu a medical file. The girl opened it and began to examine the information.

The old man began listing general information about the patient in the file.

"Oshita Mieko, 6 months old. Born with an extreme case of an atrial septal defect. Her opening near the upper chambers of her heart didn't close like they were supposed to and now blood is continually flowing around her lungs. In order to continue living, she needs an operation in the next month."

"Why are you showing me this in a meeting?" asked Mayu.

"This condition is extremely rare. The surgery will be one of the only cases in the country. The media is beginning to pick up the story and I wouldn't be surprised if the surgery becomes nationally covered. Based on your recent success, the baby's parents have selected you as the cardiologist to operate on their daughter. With your agreement to do the surgery of course."

"It sounds interesting, what are the risks?"

"The surgery will be extremely risky. There's less than a 50% survival rate. Also, the hospital board predicts that news of an unsuccessful surgery would be reported everywhere. If you fail, your reputation as a surgeon will be tarnished. However, if you succeed, you will be considered a national hero with an excellent reputation forever intact. Simply speaking, you are putting your career on the line to preform this surgery."

"I'll do it." Mayu stared across the table with strong affirmation.

"Are you sure, it's risky."

"If no one operates, the child will die. I will gladly risk my career to save a life."

"Very well. The operation is scheduled for June 6th. I suggest you research and prepare in the meantime"

"Wait! My wedding and honeymoon are scheduled from June 1st-7th. We have to reschedule!"

"We can push the operation back to June 9th at the latest. You'll have only have one rest day. I'm only making this exception because you're willingly taking such a huge risk."

"That's fine. Thank you."         

The old man stood up and addressed every person at the table.

"This concludes the board meeting, you're free to go Dr. Watanabe."

Mayu quickly stood up and grabbed the file from the table. She left the room with mixed emotions, contemplating whether the decision she made was the right one. It was morally correct but logically too risky.

Mayu returned to her apartment to see that Yuki ordered lunch. The couple sat at the couch and began eating. The doctor was really hungry because she had skipped breakfast. After eating at a fast pace, Mayu started explaining to her fiancé about the decision she made at the board meeting.

"I think you made the right decision Mayu. It's very honorable of you" stated Yuki.

Yuki inched closer to Mayu. She wrapped her arm around the doctor's shoulder and began lightly rubbing her arm. Mayu leaned her head on Yuki's shoulder and closed her eyes. She fell asleep in no time. Feeling her fiancé's steady breaths, Yuki shook Mayu's shoulder.
"You're tired, go take a nap."

"Okay"

Yuki helped Mayu stand up and walked her up the stairs to their bedroom. The weather girl tucked Mayu into bed and lightly kissed her forehead.


Mayu woke from her nap several hours later. She walked down the stairs and found Yuki relaxing in the living room.

"Oh hey you're awake."

"Hey Yuki. Are you hungry? I can start making dinner."

"Yeah that sounds great!"

Mayu walked to the kitchen and started cleaning vegetables to make a simple salad. Both girls had been trying to eat healthy dinners to enhance their bodies before the wedding. Mayu carried  two bowls of the salad to the living room where Yuki was sitting in front of the T.V. The pair began eating while watching the evening news.

"I can't believe the wedding's in two weeks" stated Mayu.

"I know! We'll be on a plane to Hawaii in no time!" Yuki had an excited reaction.

"Do we have any last minute planning that needs to be done?"

"Nope. Everything's been taken care of. The resort even notified that our dresses were carefully delivered and are waiting on the island."

"Perfect! I'm so excited!" yelled Mayu.


"And now it's time for our special program this evening."

Both girls looked away from each other and stared at the T.V. The image of the news anchor switched to a scene at a children's hospital. An indifferent narrator voice was played over the scene.

"Oshita Mieko is only 6 month old, yet she struggles with a rare heart condition"

 "Wow, the board of directors was right, the local media is already covering the girl's condition" Stated Mayu.

"Shh! I want to hear this!" whispered Yuki.

The program had gone on for several minutes, highlighting the daily hardships the family goes through. The story also explained the necessary surgery and the risks involved. As the program listed the medical problems and risks, Mayu grew more and more anxious. She didn't need the news discouraging her.

"I can't watch this."

Mayu briskly walked up the stairs to the bedroom and crashed her body on the bed. The girl curled up into a ball. Yuki continued to watch the rest of the program alone.

"Despite Oshita's rare condition, a young cardiologist, Dr. Watanabe Mayu, offers hope for the family. We will continue providing updates of the family's journey, please stay tuned. Goodnight!"

Yuki shut the television off and headed towards the bedroom. She found her fiancé in a fetal position in the middle of their large bed. Gently seating herself next to the anxious girl, Yuki rubbed the doctor's back in an attempt to offer comfort.

"I still think you made the right decision. You're going to save that baby's life"

"You don't know that. What if I screw the whole thing up." Mayu's voice was a weak whisper.

"You won't. I have confidence in you. You just need to have confidence in yourself. Just relax, stop worrying about the worst case scenario."

Yuki laid down next to Mayu and began tickling her.

"Hahahaha! Stop hahaha! You're making me laugh!" screamed Mayu.   

"You need to laugh, stop being so serious"

After several minutes of tickling from both parties, both girls laid in bed out of breath from excessive laughter. The sudden quietness caused them to think about their relationship. They had been through so much together. Their past was full of happy memories while their future seemed bright with a hint of uncertainty. The moment of silence compiled all of the memories, feelings, and emotions. The moment was exhausting, yet incredibly profound.

Mayu inched her face towards Yuki's. Their eyes were locked. The intensity of the previous moment had drained the energy from the girls. Mayu parted her lips and let out a faint whisper.

"Yuki...I still can't believe we're getting married." 

"Only two more weeks" whispered Yuki with a light smile.

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 7) 3/20/2014
« Reply #49 on: March 20, 2014, 02:36:11 PM »
Omg 2 more weeks is their wedding kyaaa~

Hope the surgery is find

Update soon

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 7) 3/20/2014
« Reply #50 on: March 20, 2014, 03:18:46 PM »
Somehow I don't think the surgery will be fine... It might also be pushed forward, interrupting Mayu's wedding... :badluck:

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 7) 3/20/2014
« Reply #51 on: March 21, 2014, 04:33:08 PM »
Mayu indeed took a very serious and important decision right here.....but she just couldn't not even try to do the surgery!
I'm of course hoping for it to be very successul but that's for you to decide hehehe  :D
For now i'm focused on the weeding which i'm looking forward to it a lot. I'm sure you'll make it wonderful like the rest of the story so far ^^

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 7) 3/20/2014
« Reply #52 on: April 09, 2014, 09:51:07 PM »
Update soon  still believe that this will have a lot of drama in the future but don't make the Mayuki couple suffer much...thanks

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Author Update) 5/20/2014
« Reply #53 on: May 21, 2014, 08:48:36 AM »
Hello readers!

This is just a quick update on my life (and also apologies and excuses as to why I haven't updated in forever)

I really wanted to develop a reputation for being really quick and speedy as a fanfic writer. I was doing so well, I even posted more than one chapter in one day before. Unfortunately I got caught up with school events. Between the last time I posted a chapter and now a lot has happened. First, I unintentionally led a controversial fundraiser at school (I had to refund and apologize to the school I felt terrible  :cry: ). Then I went to prom, then I went to another island for a state debate tournament (our team failed to defend our title  :angry: ) Then I played in a tennis tournament and did okay. After those events I finally told my best friend that I've liked them for a long time....it didn't work out, but at least we're still friends  :sweatdrop: . Then to end the year I had AP tests hahaha. I finally finished high school once and for all last Friday and I have a nice little gap in between now and graduation.


I'm really sorry I didn't fit in time to write. I was really into writing and I often lost track of time and struggled to work on school stuff and fics at the same time. Now that it's summer, I have all the time I want!


The plan for the next several days is to finish chapter 8, and rewrite chapter 9 (because I'm an idiot and I lost it). I'm setting a deadline for myself. The story will be finished by May 30th. I hope you all continue to read despite my absence, please anticipate the last two chapters.

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Author's Update) 5/20/2014
« Reply #54 on: June 25, 2014, 02:36:07 AM »
Author's Note: Hello readers. Wow....I'm a liar. I'm so sorry...this is really late. Please enjoy the wedding chapter!  :cathappy:


Chapter Eight

After a comfortable seven hour flight, the couple landed on the island of Hawaii (nishimura's home island). They would be spending the majority of their week on the island's west coast. The west side of the island, home to various luxury resorts, is known for year round warm weather and beautiful beaches.

Mayu and Yuki arrived at their hotel tired yet excited. Their wedding was scheduled  for tomorrow and the anticipation was killing them. For the first night in Hawaii, the girls decided to to get separate rooms to make the wedding and honeymoon feel more special. The girls were also expecting close friends and family members to fly in shortly. There was a nice dinner for the couple and their families planned for the evening. While the couple was looking forward to dinner, both Mayu and Yuki were exhausted from traveling. They decided to head up to their rooms and nap before their meal.

After her nap, Mayu laid in her bed comfortably. Mayu's hotel room was spacious. The front door opened to a large, modern room with earthy tones. The room contained a large bed  with soft sheets and abundant pillows. The room also had a bathroom with a large, marble tub. The doctor had opened a large glass door leading to the hotel room balcony. The warm sun and tropical breeze filled the room with a golden atmosphere. Mayu casually glanced at her phone and checked the time.

"Ah, I better get ready"

Mayu walked down the hall towards the elevator. She wore a cute, flowy, white dress that was perfect for the weather. The doctor arrived at the elevator and pressed the button.

BING

"Oh, hey!"

"Hey!"

The door opened to reveal Yuki standing in the elevator. She was wearing a strapless, floral maxi dress. She looked comfortable yet elegant. Mayu boarded the elevator and greeted her fiancé with a smile.

"How was your nap?" asked Yuki.

"Pretty good, yours?"

"I didn't sleep, I was too nervous."

"Why are you nervous?" asked Mayu.

"I was thinking about dinner tonight and I realized that it's going to be the first time we've met each other's parents." 

"Oh my god. I didn't even think about that" said Mayu with a worried expression.

"Right! Like what if your parents hate me! What if they don't want us to get married! What if my parents aren't happy about it too! What if..What"

“Shhh, I’m sure it’ll be fine.” whispered Mayu.

The girls embraced until the elevator came to a stop

BING


Mayu grabbed Yuki’s hand and briskly dragged her worried fiancé out of the elevator.

“Come on Yuki, we’re going to be late for dinner!”

“Wa-wait, no…I’m freaking out. I don’t think I can do this…wait.”

“We’re going!”

Eventually, the couple was standing at the entrance of a restaurant. Mayu opened the door and led Yuki inside. Once the weather girl felt the atmosphere of the restaurant, she put on a calm facade. All of the worry visibly left her face, yet her heart was beating rapidly. Mayu approached the hostess at the front desk.

“Hi, we’re here for the Watanabe and Kashiwagi pre-wedding dinner.”

“Ah, you must be the brides, we’ve been expecting you. The rest of your party is already in the dining room. Right this way!” The hostess signaled the couple to follow her.

Mayu and Yuki were escorted to a private dining room.

“Enjoy your dinner” said the hostess.

“Thank you”

The doors of the dining room opened to reveal the families of both Mayu and Yuki. All of the family members were mingling and casually talking. The couple’s entrance created a sudden silence.

“MAYU!”

A woman got up from her seat and ran to the doctor. She hugged Mayu tightly while swiveling from left to right.

“Hey mom.”

Mayu’s mother was thin and looked youthful. Her face was very similar to Mayu’s. She wore a sophisticated looking dress and her overall look was very refined. However, her personality was loud and warm. She cupped her daughters cheeks and began to ask dozens of questions.

“Ah you look older! Why haven’t you visited me? Are you eating enough? Why do you work all the time? You should take better care of yourself!….”

“Mom, you’re embarrassing me” whispered Mayu into her mother’s ear.

Yuki couldn’t help but chuckle at the scene of family commotion. She could tell Mayu’s mom had spoiled her daughter. Hearing the faint laughter, Mayu’s mother drew her attention to the girl standing next to her daughter.

“Ahhh you’re my future daughter-in-law! You’re so pretty! And tall!”

Mayu’s mom grabbed Yuki’s hands and squeezed them tightly.

“It’s nice to meet you, Mrs. Watanabe” said Yuki with a smile.

“It’s very nice to meet you too! And please, call me Mom”

“Okay…mom”

Mayu’s mother turned to face the rest of the table.

“I figured it would be good if these girls sat with the other’s family so we can all get to know each other better. So, Mayu, go sit with the Kashiwagis while Yuki can sit with your father and I”

“Wait…mom”

“Just do it!”

Mayu walked down to the end of the table where Yuki’s parents were calmly sitting. When Mayu approached the pair, they both stood up to properly greet their future daughter-in-law.

“I’m Watanabe Mayu, it’s very nice to meet you” said Mayu nervously.

Yuki’s mother gracefully walked up to Mayu and gently embraced her. The hug calmed Mayu’s nerves a little.

“I’m Yuki’s mother, it’s great to finally meet you”

A stern man approached the doctor and held out his hand.

“I’m Yuki’s father, nice to meet you”

Mayu shook his hand firmly in order to show fake confidence. The three sat down and began making small talk. Mayu observed Yuki’s parents, she was carefully examining their details to see the origin of her fiancé’s features and mannerisms.

Yuki’s mother had a very calm aura. Her face was very feminine and looked as if it were full is wisdom. Mayu could tell she cared for her daughter very much. After close examination, Mayu noticed that Yuki and her mother had very similar eyes.

Yuki’s father was a bigger man. He was very tall and had larger than average muscles for a man of his age. His face looked tough and experienced. Mayu knew that he must have been strict and protective of Yuki while she was growing up. While Mayu was in the middle of observing her future father-in-law, the intimidating man made direct eye contact with her and began to make conversation.

“So Mayu, tell me about your job. I heard you’re a doctor, you must be smart”

“Yeah..um..I’m a cardiologist and I operate on a range of different people.”

“So you work on hearts?”

“Yes sir”

“Is that how you were able to capture my daughter’s?”

Yuki’s dad’s statement made Mayu nervous. She didn’t know how to answer that blunt question.

“umm…well..i’m not exactly sure..”

“AHAHAHAHAHA HAHAAHAHA…I’m just messing with you. Stop getting all nervous HAHAHAHA” Yuki’s dad let out a loud, manly laugh.

“Stop it, you’re making her feel uncomfortable!” Yuki’s mom pinched her husband’s arm.

“No, it’s okay, really” Mayu tried to ease the mood while awkwardly chuckling.

Mayu wondered how Yuki was doing with her loud mother. The doctor glanced down the table to get a better look of her parents with her fiancé. Mayu could hear her mother laughing loudly.

“AHAHAHAHA, Yuki you’re so funny!” laughed Mayu’s Mother.

“Haha, thank you” said Yuki.

The weather girl was enjoying herself with Mayu’s parents. Mayu’s mother was loud and kept the conversation going, this made it a lot less awkward. Yuki was also enjoying Mayu’s father. He was much more quiet compared to his wife. He was a thin, clean cut looking man. He wore a light yellow cardigan over a white collard shirt. He had rectangular glasses and a feminine looking face. He spent the dinner shyly drinking coffee while listening to his wife and future daughter-in-law talk. Mayu’s parents perfectly balanced each other out with their personalities and Yuki noticed that her fiancé was the perfect blend between both parents.         

Eventually the dinner had come to an end. Yuki had effortlessly developed a nice relationship with Mayu’s parents while Mayu hoped she did her best at impressing Yuki’s father.

“It’s been great getting to know you sir” stated Mayu with confidence.

“You know, you’re alright.” said Yuki’s father with a hearty smile.

Mayu held out her hand in preparation for another tough handshake but she was suddenly surprised when Yuki’s father enveloped her in a large bear hug. Mayu felt so small in the large man’s embrace, yet she felt she was finally part of the family.

“Take care of me daughter”

“Yes sir”

After the bear hug, Yuki’s mother gracefully approached Mayu. She gently cupped Mayu’s cheeks in her hands.

“You’re going to be a wonderful wife to my daughter” whispered Yuki’s mother.

“Thank you” said Mayu.

Yuki’s mother hugged Mayu delicately, almost opposite of how her husband hugged her. While the hugs were different, Mayu felt the same familial bond.

At the other end of the table, Yuki was saying goodnight to Mayu’s parents. Mayu’s mother ran to Yuki and boldly kissed the weather girl on the cheek while tightly hugging her. Yuki let out a surprised reaction.
“Oh Yuki it was so nice getting to know you!” said Mayu’s mother.

“It was nice meeting you too” chuckled Yuki.

Yuki glanced to Mayu’s father.

“It was also nice getting to meed you.” stated Yuki.

Mayu’s father finally made his first bold move of the night and hugged his future daughter-in-law. Yuki’s reaction to this hug was even more surprised, given his usual shy nature.

“You’re part of the family now” stated Mayu’s father.

“Thank you!” said Yuki   

All of the family members said their goodnights and exited the restaurant. Mayu and Yuki boarded the elevator and headed off to their separate rooms.


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The Next Morning, Mayu’s Room

Mayu was sleeping comfortably in her bed. She had made a nice, warm blanket burrito and was throughly enjoying her cocoon.

BANG BANG BANG

The loud banging noise made Mayu suddenly wake up. She irritatidly scrunched up her face and ignored the noise.

BANG BANG BANG

“MAYU! IT’S ME! YOUR MOTHER”

BANG BANG BANG

“MAAAAYUUUUU”

Mayu knew the banging wouldn’t stop until she answered the door. Taking the blanket with her she slowly opened the hotel room door.

“Mom what do you want?”

“How can you not be awake yet!? It’s your wedding day and you’re sleeping? I need to start getting you ready now!”

Mayu’s mom barged into the room and began looking through her daughter’s clothes. While this commotion was going on, Mayu returned to her bed.

“Come on Mayu, we need to leave to get ready. I’m getting you dress now, okay?”

“Mom, lets just chill for like five minutes”

Mayu’s mother ripped the blanket burrito open and grabbed her grumpy daughter. She started removing Mayu’s pajamas and dressing her for the day.

“Mom! Stop! I’m not five I can do this myself!”

“Well you’re taking forever and we have to leave, so hurry it up!”

In a few moments, Mayu was ready to go. The girl’s mother grabbed her wrist the pulled her out the door.

“Mom, where are we going?”

“We have to get your nails, hair and makeup done! It’s your wedding day after all! Now hurry up!”

The mother and daughter pair ran down the hallway and headed down the elevator.

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Yuki’s Room   

Yuki was awake, she sat on the balcony and enjoyed some morning coffee.

Knock Knock

“Yuki, can I come in?”

Yuki recognized her mother’s voice and opened the door.

“Good morning mom.”

“Good morning”

“Here, I’ll make you some coffee”

Yuki handed her mom a warm mug and led her to the balcony. The mother and daughter sat and stared at the Hawaiian horizon.

“Today’s your big day, are you excited?” asked Yuki’s mother.

“Yeah, I’m a little nervous too.” chuckled Yuki.

“That’s normal…do you plan to do anything before the wedding?”

“Yeah, I was going to get my hair, nails and makeup done. Wanna come with me?”

“Sounds good” said Yuki’s mother in a cheerful voice.

Yuki and her mother finished their coffee and headed out the door.

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The day had gone by quickly. It was already almost sunset. The wedding was set up on a nice grassy hill overlooking the sea. The decorations were simple because the atmosphere was already breathtaking. A small group of seats were positioned facing a beautiful wooden arch. The girls would get married in front of this small crowd with the sea behind them. The guests began to arrive. Only very close friends and family members were invited.

Mayu and Yuki were in separate rooms nearby. They were with their fathers, preparing to walk down the aisle.

Mayu was fidgeting and looked nervous. Her dad walked up to her and hugged her.

“Everything will be fine” said Mayu’s dad in a gentle voice.


Yuki was calmly sitting while her father was pacing the room.

“Dad, stop pacing, you’re going to get all sweaty”

“I’m about to send my little girl off, let me do what I want!”

Yuki chuckled at her dad’s reaction.

Suddenly, the wedding organizer walked into Yuki’s room and signaled that it was time to go.

“Here we go dad” said Yuki with an excited voice.

Yuki linked arms with her father and walked outside.
Music began to play, the small crowd noticed Yuki walking down the aisle and stood up.

Yuki and her father walked gracefully. Her dad was wearing was wearing a black tux that made him look very manly. Yuki was wearing a beautiful dress. It was a princess style dress with a gorgeous silver ribbon around her waist. The weather girl had the biggest smile on her face as she walked towards the wooden arch. She eventually made it, unlinked arms with her father and took her position.

Next, Mayu was walking down the aisle with her father. May’s dad was also wearing a black suit. It fit his thin body well. Mayu wore a lacy dress with an empire silhouette. She and her father both looked elegant and pretty. Eventually Mayu made her way down to her place. The wedding immediately started.

The man who would marry the girls stood in the middle of the arch. He began the wedding.

“We gather here today to witness the marriage between Watanabe Mayu and Kashiwagi Yuki”

He gave a little speech about marriage. He planned on making the ceremony short and sweet.

“Do you, Mayu, take Yuki to be your partner in life, promising to love and cherish, through joy and sorrow, sickness and health, and whatever challenges you may face, for as long as you both shall live?”

“I do” stated Mayu with a smile.

“Do you, Yuki, take Mayu to be your partner in life, promising to love and cherish, through joy and sorrow, sickness and health, and whatever challenges you may face, for as long as you both shall live?”

“I do!” said Yuki excitedly.

“Okay, you may both kiss”

Both girls leaned in and kissed passionately in front of the sunset. The kiss reminded Mayu of their first kiss, on that grassy hill. The ceremony was shortly over. Mayu and Yuki linked arms and walked down the aisle to exit while the small crowd clapped with excitement. Mayu examined the crowd and found her mother sobbing out of happiness. Yuki look over to her father and noticed him shedding a single manly tear. Yuki began happily crying, she tightened her grip on Mayu’s arm. The couple exited while happily giggling.

The couple and the crowd traveled to a larger ballroom where the reception was held. There was delicious food, dancing, speeches and plenty of cake. The wedding guests were well taken care of while the newly weds throughly enjoyed their reception. After the celebration was over, Mayu and Yuki checked into their hotel suite. They boarded the elevator and headed to the top floor. Both girls rode the elevator in silence, mentally preparing themselves for the wild night they were about to have.

BING

The door opened and the girls approached the door to their suite. Mayu calmly opened the door but Yuki quickly shoved her inside. The sudden push surprised Mayu and caused her to fall down and drag Yuki with her. The door slammed, the only sound that could be heard from the other side was the couple’s laughter.   



 
 

Offline Kirozoro

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 8) 6/24/2014
« Reply #55 on: June 25, 2014, 03:29:58 AM »
Kyaaaa~~

They married

Omg i want to know the last scence

Update soon

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 8) 6/24/2014
« Reply #56 on: June 25, 2014, 07:45:48 AM »
Been silently reading this story.. And I'm loving it as always!!!

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 8) 6/24/2014
« Reply #57 on: June 25, 2014, 10:41:56 PM »
Yes! They married 8)
Update soon
Thanks

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 8) 6/24/2014
« Reply #58 on: June 28, 2014, 01:38:35 AM »
Response to Comments

Kirozoro: Yay they married! (It took me long enough  :banghead: ) Yeah that last scene would be nice  :cathappy:

chotei_sha: Thank you! It's awesome that you commented! I hope you continue to read.  :deco:

Archer1992: Yes! They finally married. I'm 3/4 done with the next chapter so I'll post it soon  :)

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Author's Update) 5/20/2014
« Reply #59 on: June 28, 2014, 04:15:13 AM »
yeay mayu & yuki married!
i want to know the next scene!
after married scene tehehe :hip smile:
so, update more, please! thank you :D
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