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Offline Zhen

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #20 on: March 07, 2014, 11:00:18 AM »
Nice~ wait this is not a dream right?  :huhuh
I like the kissing part~ :D so cute.  XD
Thanks for the update~  :) :cow:

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #21 on: March 07, 2014, 01:01:12 PM »
DON'T WORRY IS PERFECT!! TOO DAMN PERFECT!!
AND THE KISS!!! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *A*
I even get my face a little red lol

SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE <333333333333333333

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #22 on: March 07, 2014, 04:13:36 PM »
Omg Mayuki first date is so cute >///<!!

Please update soon

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #23 on: March 08, 2014, 03:59:43 AM »
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kenjoy12: Thank you for reading. Your comment made me more confident in my writing so I thank you for that.  :wub: . I'm really glad I added the sunset scene. I actually wrote it before I wrote the lunch scene but was unsure about it. I kind of write scenes jumbled around and fill in the gaps later. In terms of it being a dream or reality, we'll just wait and see  :cathappy:

Zhen: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked the kiss scene. I thought it sounded a bit cheesy but it turned out okay. Is Mayu awake? or dreaming? You'll have to read to find out.  :twisted:

Koneki: Thank you for reading. Ahh this comment made me smile when I read it this morning. Learning that my story made someone else blush makes me extremely happy. Thank you  :inlove:

Kirozoro: Thank you for reading. Yay! I'm glad you liked the date :) I'm going to try to write chapter 5 tonight. If all goes well, it'll be up before 10PM Hawaii Standard Time. 

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #24 on: March 08, 2014, 04:01:08 PM »
Oh my....sorry for the late comment

And i could not believe all of that was just a dream???

Wonder how mayu meet yuki in the real life


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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #25 on: March 08, 2014, 04:36:26 PM »
Mayu and Yuki should just get married! Even if it's only in Mayu's dream  8)
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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #26 on: March 08, 2014, 10:10:07 PM »
You wrote the perfect date here ^^
Those two can't get enough of each other and are so cute together!
And the kiss........OMG,my heart had melted right away  :peace:
Good job once again,keep up the good 'work' now i'm an official fan =D

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #27 on: March 09, 2014, 03:12:57 AM »
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Terragen: Thank you for reading. You don't have to be sorry, I totally appreciate all comments at any time. Don't worry, they'll meet. It'll happen at some point. I'm just trying to be a vague as possible so I don't spoil the rest of the story.

DC2805: Thank you for reading. Marriage, that's a pretty good idea. If I make the story longer they could get married. Maybe I'll ask the rest of the readers next chapter if they'd want Mayuki to get married.

soolim: Thank you for reading. Ah I'm so happy now! You're my first official fan. I'm really glad you liked the date and the kiss. I hope you continue to enjoy the future chapters.

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #28 on: March 09, 2014, 09:27:56 AM »
Sorry for the late comment, I usually don't have the time to make one but @^@!!!!
I like the date scene and the kiss so much!!!
I'm always looking forward to the next chapter nishimura-san, so keep up the good work and good luck at school.  :thumbup
Also, I second that vote for Mayu and Yuki getting married!!!  :nervous

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #29 on: March 09, 2014, 11:55:09 PM »
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risshu: Thank you for reading. Also, thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm really glad you liked the date and the kiss. Please continue to anticipate and enjoy the future chapters. (P.S. I really liked your yandere story).  :deco:

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 4) 3/7/2014
« Reply #30 on: March 10, 2014, 12:06:28 AM »
Author's Note

Hello readers, nishimura here. I'd first like to apologize for the lateness of this chapter. I said I would post it on Friday night but that unfortunately didn't happen. I was just too tired when I got home on Friday and I had a tennis match on Saturday. I've also been struggling to make a decision about which university I should attend this year. Well, enough about my personal life, back to the author's note.

I hope this chapter is cute. I tried my best to make is light-hearted. I've been struggling with how long I should make this story. I know exactly how it's going to end. I've actually already written the ending. I just need to connect the dots and fill in the gaps to make it a good story. DC2805 suggested in the comments that Mayuki should get married. While I never planned for the relationship to progress to that length, I'm playing with the idea. I want to ask the readers if they would also want that to happen. Adding the marriage would basically add an extra 1-2 chapters to fill in the gap between now and the ending. If the marriage interests you, please comment below.   

I should wrap this up, this is a long note and you guys probably want to just get to the story. Lastly, I'd like to thank everyone for the wonderful comments, they really motivate me to keep writing. I went into this process thinking there wouldn't be many people reading it, but, the community has accepted me and acknowledged my work. Thank you for reading, and enjoy the story.


Chapter Five
 

"Dr. you're needed in room four, it's an emergency"

"Okay"

Mayu rushed out of her office with a nurse following close behind her with a clipboard. They both walked down the hospital hallway at a brisk pace.

"Tell me about this patient" said Mayu in an assertive voice.

"Mr. Shigeru, 57 years old. He was on a far away hiking trip where he had a sudden heart attack and collapsed on the trail. It took hours for the rescue team to locate him. We ran some tests and he's going to need a triple angioplasty immediately."   

Mayu quickly ran into the prep room to change into her scrubs and disinfect her hands. She joined her fellow cardiologists in the operating room. Mayu looked at the monitor displaying Mr. Shigeru's arteries and began the operation.

After a few hours of operating, Mr. Shigeru's arteries were cleared. He was sent to recover from a successful operation. Mayu tiredly walked her her office and sat in her chair. Wile enjoying her moment of relaxation, the doctor got the sudden urge to call Yuki. She quickly reached for her phone.

"Hello?"

"Hey Yuki!...it's Mayu"

"Oh, hey what's up?"

Mayu's eyes drastically widened. She couldn't believe she just spontaneously called Yuki without having any sort of plan. She had no idea what she was going to say to her. She hadn't even spoken to her since the day they kissed.

"Are you busy tonight?" asked Mayu. She still didn't know where the conversation was headed.

"I don't have anything planned, did you want to get together and do something?"

"Yeah, I was wondering if you wanted to... get coffee"

"That sounds fun, but wait."

"Yeah?"

"I took the train to work today, can you pick me up at the news station?"

"Oh of course, I'll pick you up at 5:30 after I finish my shift"

"Sounds good,  bye"

"Bye Yuki"

Mayu hung up the phone with a smile on her face. She was surprised in her ability to spontaneously plan a date. The doctor began to playfully pack her things in preparation for leaving to pick Yuki up. Suddenly, Mayu remembered that her car was still a mess. She couldn't have Yuki seeing the horrifying clutter again.

Mayu dashed to the hospital parking lot and unlocked her car. The pile of garbage had grown since Yuki rode in Mayu's car. The doctor began to rapidly grab pieces of trash from the vehicle. She made multiple trips to the nearest trashcan, but, her work payed off. While the final product wasn't spotless, it was considerably cleaner than it was minutes ago. Mayu glanced at her watch and noticed it was almost 5:30 already. Quickly jumping in her newly clean car, Mayu sped out of the parking lot and headed to the news station Yuki worked at. 

The news station wasn't too far from the hospital. Mayu parked near the building and walked toward the front where she could meet Yuki. Mayu stood near the entrance for a few minutes, she became distracted by her phone as she waited outside.

"BOO!"

"AHH!"

Mayu suddenly jumped. Yuki had snuck around the doctor and scared her from behind.

"Aww Mayu, you're so cute when you're scared" teased Yuki.

"It's not fair, you snuck up behind me...anyway, let's just get in the car"

Mayu walked several feet ahead of Yuki with a blush and a slight pout on her face. Yuki trailed behind while giggling at the doctor's expression.

"Wow Mayu, your car is actually clean. Did you clean it because you were picking me up?"

"No!...I cleaned it a few days ago...Okay yeah I cleaned it for you"

"That's so nice of you, you're so cute Mayu."

The pair got in the car. Mayu began driving to their destination with a red face. She found the nearest cafe and parked there.

"I'll have a table for two."

"Right this way m'am."

The girls were placed in a table outside. The weather was pleasant. Some would call it the golden hour, the perfect moment before the sun starts to set where everything is surrounded in a golden hue. Mayu was still wearing her white doctor coat while Yuki was wearing her professional looking weather girl outfit. The pair looked tired after working all day, but they both looked happy to be with each other. They enjoyed just staring at each other without saying a word. The silence was broken when the waitress delivered their orders.

"I have two lattes"

"Thank you" 

Both girls picked their cups up and began to sip the much needed coffee. While they both previously enjoyed the silence, they knew something important needed to be talked about. Each girl continually drank their coffee while waiting for the other to initiate a conversation. After an awkward five minutes of silent staring, Mayu broke the ice.

"So...the other day at the park"

"Yeah about that"

Both girls were looking down while talking to each other. They couldn't bare to look each other in the eyes while thinking about that day. They simultaneously decided to look at the other after staring at the ground. The girls locked eyes for less than half and second and immediately looked away once again. Awkwardly laughing, they looked at everything around them but each other. Yuki knew something had to be said.

"Did you enjoy that time at the park?" said Yuki nervously.

"YEAH!..yeah I really liked it. Did you like it?"

"Yeah, I really liked it too."

Both girls locked eyes again. At this point they had drank their coffee, there was no excuse to not talk anymore. The pair had matching flushed faces.

"What are we?" asked Mayu with a stern voice.

"What do you mean?"

"Are we friends...or more like.." Mayu's voice was scattered and cut off by Yuki.
"More like girlfriends?" Stated Yuki in an embarrassingly loud voice.

The weather girl's face grew hot. She couldn't believe she cut Mayu off with a statement like that. It naturally came out, she didn't have self control at the time. Once Yuki said that, Mayu's face grew redder than it already was. She was also secretly glad that Yuki completed the statement for her. The doctor grew devious and decided to tease Yuki while she was still in an embarrassed state.

"Is that what you want? You sounded really excited when you said it" teased Mayu.

"I'd only want that if you do too" explained Yuki in a slightly defensive voice.

At that moment Mayu lost her devious attitude. She didn't want to play around anymore. The doctor surrendered her power and stated

"Yeah...I do want that" stated Mayu with little confidence.

The tables had turned. Yuki was now the more aggressive one in the conversation.

"So it's settled then?" asked Yuki in an aggressive voice.

"Yep, girlfriends."

Mayu was filled with a mixture of emotions. She was ecstatic, jittery and confused at the same time. She was happy that she and Yuki were now officially dating. However, the way it happened was unexpected and awkward. Nevertheless Mayu was overjoyed about their relationship.

"Hey Mayu, wanna come over tonight? We can eat dinner at my house." asked Yuki.

"Yeah that sounds fun."

The girls quickly got out of their chairs, payed the bill and walked to the car. The ride was relatively silent, both girls were coming to terms with their relationship status and were lost for words. Mayu pulled into Yuki's driveway. Yuki unlocked her door and held it open for Mayu.

The inside of Yuki's house was spacious and cutely decorated. It's interior was slightly more traditional than Mayu's with less minimalistic looking furniture. The front door opened to a warm looking living room with a couch and two comfortable chairs positioned in front of a fireplace. The living room was connected to a kitchen with modern appliances, however, the kitchen looked unused. The house was two stories; the second story had Yuki's bedroom and bathroom as well as a guest room. Yuki's room had a princess like style with mostly white colored furniture. She had a large bed with a nice television positioned on the wall. While the bedroom didn't have as great a view as Mayu's it still had a view of the surrounding neighborhood.

"Make yourself comfortable, I'm going to order dinner"

"Oh, we're not cooking?"

Yuki laughed at Mayu's question.

"You and I both know I can't cook"

"True" chuckled Mayu.   

While waiting for food to be delivered to the house, the girls sat together in front of the fire. Both looked slightly uncomfortable, they didn't know if their behavior should change because of their newly named relationship. Eventually they broke out of discomfort and began to act normally. They told each other about their day at work.

"Delivery"

"Coming!" Yuki briskly walked to the door and grabbed their food.

Yuki returned to the couch and handed Mayu a box. The weather girl had ordered Chinese. Both girls started vigorously eating, the emotional whirlwind at the cafe sparked their appetites. Dinner ended quickly because they basically inhaled their food. After cleaning up, the girls talked for several hours by the fire. They told stories, teased each other, talked about their families. There was never a dull moment when they were talking. Mayu glanced at the clock and noticed it was late.

"I'm so sorry, I completely overstayed my welcome. It's already 11:00 PM"

Mayu started grabbing her things in a rush when she felt a hand grab her wrist.

"Mayu, if it's that late you can just stay here tonight."

Mayu's face instantly turned pink. Her heart beat intensified while her stomach whirled. She wanted to stay the night, but she didn't know if it was appropriate because they just started dating. However, it felt like they had known each other for a long time.

"I'll stay over, only if you think it's okay" stated Mayu.

"Of corse it's okay! We're dating now. It's impossible for you to overstay your welcome."     
 
"Thanks Yuki" said Mayu with a smile.

"We should bathe, it's getting late. We can watch a movie in my room later" stated Yuki.

Yuki walked upstairs to her room. She grabbed a towel, washcloth and a set of pajamas from her room. She returned to the living room and handed them to Mayu.

"Here, I know you don't have extra clothes. You can borrow some of mine. The bathroom is upstairs."

"Thank you"

Mayu walked upstairs to Yuki's bathroom. She was happy she was able to shower after a long day. Mayu throughly enjoyed her shower, it was nice using different products from her own. She loved how her hair now smelled like Yuki. After a hot shower, Mayu slipped the borrowed pajamas on, these also smelled like Yuki. The doctor loved how the scent enveloped her body. She exited the bathroom and found Yuki in her bedroom.

"Thanks for letting me borrow"

"It's my pleasure. I'm going to shower now, you can dry your hair in here"

Yuki exited while smiling at Mayu. The doctor walked up to a vanity positioned next to Yuki's bed. She sat in front of it and grabbed the hairdryer. She carefully dried her hair, she wanted it to be completely dry so she didn't get Yuki's furniture wet.

Yuki had finished showering and had returned to her room. She observed Mayu drying her hair with admiration.

"Oh hey Yuki, how was your shower?"

"Good"

"Here, you can use the hairdryer now."

Mayu got up and allowed Yuki to sit in front of the vanity. The doctor sat herself on Yuki's large bed. The weather girl began to dry her long black hair. Mayu felt unproductive just sitting there watching her girlfriend dry her hair. Mayu got an idea, stood up and walked behind Yuki.

"Here, I'll dry it for you"

"Are you sure? Okay!" stated Yuki in an excited voice.

Mayu stood behind Yuki with the hairdryer in her hand. She delicately dried each section of hair with care. She payed attention to Yuki's scalp by gently pressing it each time she touched it, the doctor was giving Yuki a light massage. Yuki closed her eyes and enjoyed the massage. She loved how Mayu treated her like a princess. The weather girl began day dreaming of when Mayu fed her at the yakiniku place.       

"All done!"

"Thanks, that felt really nice" stated Yuki.

Yuki got up quickly and body slammed her bed. The wether girl was tired from her day at work. After groaning into her comforter for a few seconds, she lightly tapped her bed with her hand, signaling Mayu to join her. The doctor placed the hairdryer down and sat down on the mattress. Mayu looked at her new girlfriend sprawled out on the bed, she smiled while examining her get comfortable.

Yuki grabbed Mayu's shoulder and pulled her down next to her. The weather girl wrapped her arms around Mayu's torso and nuzzled her face into Mayu's hair. The doctor blushed at this action and enjoyed the newly found warmth next to her. While laying there for several minutes, Mayu took the time to throughly appreciate Yuki and their relationship. Soon, Mayu felt steady breaths on her neck, Yuki had fallen asleep. Mayu nudged her girlfriend.

"Hey Yuki, if you want to go to bed, we should get under the covers"

"Mmmmphnnn...I'm so lazy though"

"Come on"

Mayu got up and pulled the covers down as Yuki crawled underneath using the least amount of movement as possible.

"Wait, Mayu. We forgot about the movie!" Yuki got up and started searching for the television remote. She felt bad because she had told Mayu they would watch a movie.

"Yuki, it's okay. You're tired, I'm tired. Let's just go to sleep."

"Okay, I'm sorry about the movie, we can watch one next time"

Both girls returned under the covers of Yuki's large bed. The weather girl wiggled her way closer to Mayu and wrapped her arms around the doctor's torso again. Mayu placed her free arm around Yuki's body and began gently rubbing her back with her hand. Mayu's gentle massage soothed Yuki, she was about to fall asleep again. With her last bit of energy, Yuki inched her face next to Mayu's and kissed her on the cheek.

"Goodnight Mayu"

"Goodnight"


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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 5) 3/9/2014
« Reply #31 on: March 10, 2014, 01:22:37 AM »
I'm so for the wedding thing even if it would only happen in this dream life the both character seems to be in!
I don't know if what's hapening is the dream, this could mean Mayu is sleeping alot or...hmmm now that i think of it,i'll have to go through the first two chapters of the story
to get things clear.
Anyway,thank you for the update and the story itsef ;)
Yeah, a real real fan ♥

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 5) 3/9/2014
« Reply #32 on: March 10, 2014, 01:41:06 AM »
Wahhh, I want the marriage to happen!!! @^@
This chapter was good too!!!  So much fluff!!
I'm glad you like my yandere story.  Hopefully I make my next story (狐ノ嫁入リ ~A Fox's Wedding~) enjoyable for you when I finish it.

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« Reply #33 on: March 10, 2014, 03:18:21 AM »
Lol . Mayuki akward moment...didn't see Mayuki sleep together come in

U surprise me there

Update soon

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« Reply #34 on: March 10, 2014, 10:05:26 AM »
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soolim: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you support the wedding! I understand how you're unsure about whether Mayu is dreaming or not. I figured this would happen. The original plan was to make the dream sound so pleasant, that readers forgot it was a dream in the first place. However, that isn't what happened. I feel I chose a concept slightly too complicated for my storytelling abilities. I hope you continue to read despite the confusion I've caused.

risshu: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you support the marriage as well! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I was afraid people would start getting bored with all the fluff. Haha I've found writing fluff is hard. I don't really have personal experiences to draw from so I'm always wondering if the fluffy stuff sounds lame or not lol.

Kirozoro: Thank you for reading. I'm glad I was able to surprise you. I kind of thought it happened too fast but the story felt slow to me so I needed to speed it up a little. I'm just about to upload the next chapter so stay tuned!

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 5) 3/9/2014
« Reply #35 on: March 10, 2014, 10:14:58 AM »
Author's Note

Hello readers, nishimura here. I wrote this chapter the same day I wrote chapter five. I've started to notice that you all know that Mayu is dreaming this entire time. I as the author will acknowledge that this is true. This entire story takes place during one dream that last's around 20 hours. I understand that 20 hours is a considerably long time, Mayu's just a tired person hahaha.

I would call this chapter half important. I feel the beginning is filler that isn't particularly fluffy and the other half is a very important event.

I hope you all continue to read and comment. Thank you for reading.


Chapter Six

Bibibi bibibi bibibi

"Mayu! Mayu! This thing is beeping!"

Mayu was sound asleep in Yuki's bed. She was so comfortable and warm. Yuki had woken up early hoping to treat Mayu to breakfast in bed, however, a mysterious gadget in Mayu's purse started making noise.

"Wake up! How do you turn this thing off!"

Yuki shook Mayu awake. The doctor covered her eyes with her hands and groaned.

Bibibi bibibi bibibi

The beeping made Mayu spring to her feat.

"Yuki, how long has that been beeping?!?"

"A few minutes, what is it?"

"Ah, it's my pager. They need me for a surgery right now!"

Mayu dashed out of Yuki's room, grabbed her keys and started heading out the door.

"Wait, Mayu! What about breakfast? You're not even dressed."

"I'm sorry Yuki, I have to leave now, someone needs me. I'll stop buy later today okay."

Mayu raced in her car to the hospital. She was still pretty groggy but she needed to get there fast. Mayu parked and ran to change into her scrubs. She went in the operating room and began surgery.

Yuki sat in her house alone. She decided to not try to make breakfast and just go out somewhere. It was her day off, she chose to just eat by herself.

She walked upstairs, washed her face, brushed her teeth and got dressed. Shortly, she pulled out of her driveway and drove to one of her favorite cafés.

 While eating, Yuki got the idea to pick up some breakfast and coffee for Mayu. A waitress walked to Yuki's table and handed her the bill.

"Thank you, I hope you enjoyed your breakfast"

"Oh, can I order something else"

"Of course"

"Can I get a breakfast sandwich with a medium coffee"

"Certainly, I'll bring it over in a bit"

Yuki sat at the table and started thinking about the previous night. She worried that she over did it with cuddling up to Mayu because they just started dating. Even with her worrisome feelings, she couldn't deny that she slept considerably better while next to Mayu. The weather girl began to blush while thinking about Mayu's sleeping face.

"Here's the sandwich and coffee miss, thank you"

"Thank you"

Yuki grabbed the food and drove back home. Once she arrived home, she placed the breakfast on the counter and looked around the living room and noticed that Mayu forgot her purse. She also saw that she left her work clothes after showering. Thinking about how she could help her girlfriend, Yuki grabbed the clothes and washed them.

After washing and drying the clothes, Yuki grabbed the garments along with the breakfast and headed to the hospital. She purposefully left Mayu's purse in the living room so the doctor would have an excuse to come over after work.

Yuki parked at the hospital and approached the front desk.

"Hi, is Dr. Watanabe out of surgery? I have breakfast for her"

"I think she's still in the operating room, I can take you to her office to wait if you like"

"Thanks"

The receptionist led Yuki down a hallway.

"So how do you know Dr. Watanabe? She never really has people visit her during work"

"Oh, umm"

Yuki wondered if Mayu would be okay if she told the receptionist about their relationship. She decided to take a chance and tell the truth.

"Umm, we're dating" stated Yuki with a hesitant voice.

"Oh, that's nice. I never knew Dr. Watanabe was into girls. Well she certainly found a pretty one"

Yuki was flattered by the receptionist's comment.

"Here's the office, you can wait inside"

"Thank you"

Yuki stepped into the office and examined where Mayu spent time working. The office was relatively plain and cluttered with different papers and medical reports. Yuki sat in Mayu's chair and placed the breakfast and clothes on the desk. She tried to imagine the doctor being studious in the office but she could only imagine her joking around at home.

After about a half an hour, the office door opened and a scrub wearing Mayu walked in.

"Oh hey what are you doing here?"

"You left my house in such a rush, I figured you were hungry and needed some clothes"

"That's so sweet, thank you so much"

Mayu grabbed her breakfast and ate it quickly, both the coffee and sandwich were cold but the doctor still enjoyed it.

"Thanks for the breakfast, I have to get back to work, I'll see you sometime after 5:30"

"Okay sounds good"

Yuki walked up to the doctor and pecked her on the lips. It was the first time they had ever casually kissed so it was sort of strange. However, it felt completely natural like that had been a normal occurrence for years. The weather girl quietly stepped out of the office and waved goodbye. While exiting the hospital, Yuki waved to the receptionist. The girl then drove home and relaxed at her house.

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December 24, 2014

"Oh hey you're back" stated Mayu.

Yuki walked into her living room and saw her girlfriend sitting by the fire. They both greeted each other with a kiss. Yuki had just returned from last minute Christmas shopping.

At this point, the couple had been dating for nine months. Their relationship had greatly progressed to the point where they were living together. While both Yuki and Mayu still owned their separate places, they alternated houses together on a regular basis. On this particular night they were spending Christmas Eve at Yuki's place.

Yuki joined Mayu on the couch, they sat there and enjoyed the fire for a while. Both looked like they needed to say something important but were too afraid to say it.

"I can't believe we've been dating for nine months" stated Mayu.

"I know, so much has happened with our relationship and our careers. I'm at a bigger news station now, you're on the path to becoming one of Japan's best cardiologists, this entire year has just whizzed by" explained Yuki.

"The year has gone by so quickly, I can't even remember my life before I met you" said Mayu.

That statement made Yuki blush a little. Even though they had been dating for a while, the couple still made each other embarrassed from time to time. At that moment, Yuki stood up and faced Mayu who was still seated.

"Mayu, these past nine months have been the best in my life. I know this would be generally fast for most relationships but, it feels as if we've been dating for years."

The doctor's suddenly felt a lump in her throat. Her eyes started to feel puffy as tears started to form in the corners of her eyes. She knew what Yuki was about to say and she couldn't wait.

"Mayu, you're perfect for me and I want to stay with you forever. Will you marry me?"

Yuki pulled a small box from her coat pocket while blushing. The weather girl was certain Mayu would say yes, however, there was still a small percentage of doubt that made this moment nerve wracking.

"Damn it!" yelled Mayu.

"What!?"

"You beat me to it." stated Mayu in a sarcastic voice.

At that moment Mayu pulled a similar looking box from her pocket. Yuki immediately started crying once she saw the box.
 
"I was going to ask you the very same question, but you just had to ask first" teased Mayu.

"So I'm guessing your answer is yes" laughed Yuki.

"Yes!"

Both girls embraced in front of the fire. They also giggled at the fact that they both had the same plan for that night. After hugging, kissing and crying by the fire, the girls decided to open the small boxes and see the rings they picked out for each other.

Mayu opened her box and slid the ring on Yuki's finger. Yuki's ring was feminine and elegant. The band was a beautiful champagne color that was lined with smaller diamonds. The gemstone was an oval shaped diamond that was a nice size. Yuki then slid the ring she picked on Mayu's finger. Mayu's ring was classically beautiful. The band was platinum with a round diamond as the gemstone. Both rings fit perfectly.

"I love my ring" stated Yuki.

"I love mine too!"

Both girls sat on the couch cuddling while looking at their transformed fingers.

"So Yuki, any idea for where we should get married?"

"I'd like to go someplace warm and exotic...what do you think about Hawaii?"

"Are you serious?" said Mayu in a surprised voice.

"I'm serious."

"Okay then, Hawaii, here we come!" shouted Mayu.

The couple enjoyed the remaining hours of their Christmas Eve by drinking champagne to celebrate their new engagement. The room was filled with warmth from the fire as sell as warmth from their shared memories. 2014 was a great year and the couple couldn't wait to join together in the new year.     

Offline Zhen

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #36 on: March 10, 2014, 12:05:14 PM »
I seriously LOVE how you so fast updated your fanfic. LIKE SERIOUSLY  :nya: (Even though i said it before, STILL)
In the dream time passes so Fast  :stoned: blink of an eye already 9 months.  :shock:
Well~ Is a dream anything could happen  :on lol:
Anyway~ Love it~ KEEP IT UP THE GOOD JOB~  :cow:
Can't wait for the trip to hawaii~  :hehehe:

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #37 on: March 10, 2014, 12:49:17 PM »
I wish I can dream like Mayu  XD I hope to see some plot-twist or something, since you already revealed that Mayu's just dreaming. It kind of lessen the thrill for me( I felt that I shouldn't be glad about their lovey dovey cuz it's only just a dream  XD), though I'm still anticipating what will happen once she wakes up from her dream.  :panic: I prefer Mayu to wake up first before marrying Yuki.  :P

Thanks for the fast update, nishimura-san  :bow: more please  :cow:

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #38 on: March 10, 2014, 01:50:28 PM »
Kyaa~ they getting married

Cant wait

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Re: Only in Dreams [Mayuki] (Chapter 6) 3/10/2014
« Reply #39 on: March 10, 2014, 02:23:53 PM »
 :on woohoo: They are getting married!!! :on woohoo:
Its going to be depressing when the dream ends.... :on cloudeye:
Unless... Mayu knows Yuki when they were younger and this is how her subconscious is reminding her? ...  :smoke: :err:... Yeah right.  :depressed:

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