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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.9 03/31/14 Update!
« Reply #80 on: March 31, 2014, 04:08:44 PM »
Author-san  :shocked :shocked why ? why? why do you do that?  :pleeease:

after reading chapter 9, i think tomochin is hurting because what she saw and what she thought but....  :nervous :nervous it's just my thought, I just think something, other side:
 - If Tomo~mi saw Tomochin with Shotaro at a park, how's her feeling? She saw tomochin with other guy, she called tomochin to check her maybe because she hoped tomochin said that she was being with Shotaro at park, she hoped that tomochin will say a truth to her but ... tomochin lied, at that time tomo~mi must be very hurt. After that, she went to tomochin's cafe, try to nomal, and did what she wanted before but she saw tomochin's expression and what tomochin said  :panic: :panic: :panic: it's very very very hurt  :smoke:

the thing i mention above is just my thought  :sweat: :sweat: , i hope it doesn't happen, because .... if not, poor my tomo~mi  :on speedy: :on speedy: she was very hurt when seeing the girl she loves with other guy who is her first love (although one-side  :sweatdrop: ), talked to him, carried and invited him cafe that she made herself (actually it's for tomo~mi  :on drink: ) , lied her and hugged him and final refused her spare key and said things make her hurt  :on kimbo:

 :hiakhiakhiak: :hiakhiakhiak: maybe i'm imagining too much

I hope you'll update soon  :heart: :heart:

p/s : Is Tomo~mi the one daughter of Kasai? She has no sister,hasn't she?
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.9 03/31/14 Update!
« Reply #81 on: March 31, 2014, 04:33:37 PM »
hi songbac!
i don't usually post replies but when i saw your comment, i can't help but to sympathize with you.. you see as what i've said earlier, i'm also getting emotional here.. so i just wanna say.. just hang on there buddy.. 'cause everything's gonna be fine between them i promise! there are things in life that go in a rough way.. but that what makes people strong. :)

thanks for a very touching comment!  :bow:

oh by the way! you're clever my friend hehe.. and i'm a fan of kojiyuu too! :heart:
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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.9 03/31/14 Update!
« Reply #82 on: March 31, 2014, 04:38:36 PM »
Wahhh Tomochin is confusing now

I hope Tomochin trust Kasai

Update soon

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.9 03/31/14 Update!
« Reply #83 on: April 01, 2014, 12:55:06 AM »
WAIT, TOMO~MI DON- TOMOCHIN SAY SOMETHING, STOP YOUR GIRL FROM WALKING AWAY! :pleeease:
TOMO~MIIIIIIII, WHAT ARE YOU HIDING?! :frustrated:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.9 03/31/14 Update!
« Reply #84 on: April 02, 2014, 01:24:49 PM »
hello guys!  :D
let's take a break from the drama, shall we?
enjoy reading! :)

The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 9.5 Saeyaka Special Plus


November just passed, many things happened in a short span of time. The weather's pretty cold already. I wonder why she brought me here.

"Sae! I thought you trust Tomo~mi? So what are we doing here outside her building?" I asked.

"Ofcourse, I trust her! I just have a feeling that those two will continue being stubborn and will just keep things on themselves. We have to do something for our friends, you know."

I know Sae's such a good friend, she's really concern with the two Tomomi's.

"You think Tomochin can handle everything alone in the cafe?"

"Sayaka, don't worry! She'll be fine there."

"What's the excuse you told her, by the way?"

"I said we're on a date!"

"Whaattt?! Y-You're kidding right??"
Tomochin doesn't know anything about Sae and me, or does she?

"Well, she easily believed me. She even smiled and said have fun."

"I'm going back to the cafe!!"
I tried to take a step back but she stopped me.

"You're not going anywhere! You're now already an accomplice!"

Sae you baka... Well, I really have no choice now.

"This building is huuuge! I bet there are lots of car models inside!"
She was talking out loud.

"Hey! Is that the real reason why you dragged me all the way here?"

"Ofcourse not! This is for TomoTomo! But since I'm here, I'll grab the chance to also look around hehe.."

I knew it.. there's something more going in her mind. I'm starting to take back what I said about her earlier.

We looked for Tomo~mi's office. When we arrived, we only saw a girl who seems to work there.
"Excuse us, Miss. Is Tomo~mi here?" I asked.

"She's not coming today, she told me she's not feeling well. I'm her secretary, and you guys are?"
She looks like around same age as Tomo~mi.

"We're her friends." I answered.

"Oh, so she has friends. This is the first time she had visitors."
She sounds really surprised.

"So do you know when she'll come back?"
Tomo~mi's not feeling well, maybe she's really over-working herself.

"I'm not sure. That girl doesn't follow her schedules sometimes. Like again yesterday, she just suddenly disappeared."

She was at the cafe yesterday, so it means Tomo~mi went to the cafe during her working hours.

"Oh, nice car designs!" Sae is now having her own world.
She noticed the miniature car models displayed in the room.

"You like cars?" The secretary asked her.

"I've been interested since I saw and got in Tomo~mi's car." She explained.

"I see.. if you want I can tour you around. I can show you our new models, since you're Kasai-san's friends."

"Really? Yes please!" Sae's so excited.
I think she's forgetting the real reason why we're here. Well, whatever makes her happy...

We went to another floor where the new car models are being displayed.

"Sugoi!!!" Sae ran around like a kid.
"So how do you call this model?"
She asked the secretary as she points at one of the cars.

"Uhm, that one I think is.. CBR1000RR."
She answered with an unsure tone in her voice.

"That is model MB1000RV."
A guy confidently spoke from behind her.

"I know that! I was just confused.. and who are you?" She asked him.

"I'm just looking around here. I think you should be careful in discussing these with clients." He advised.

"Oh, it's you! We meet again!" Sae was surprised to see him.
We recognized the guy, he's one of Philip's friends we saw in the bar and in the cafe.

"Hi there! I knew you're interested in cars." He said to Sae.

"You knew each other?" The secretary asked.

"Not really, but it's the third time that I've seen both of them." He answered her.
"So let me finally introduce myself. I'm Terui Ryu. But call me Ryu, please drop the formality. I'm a car collector that's why I'm familiar with everything about cars.

"I'm Miyazawa Sae! And this is Akimoto Sayaka."
Sae introduced us.

"And who's this girl beside me?" He asked.

"I'm Narumi Akiko. I work here so I know these models better than you."
She answered him back.

"Oh, really? So what's your position here?"

"I'm the Director's secretary."

"So that explains it!" He laughed at her.

It's their first meeting yet they're already fighting each other. And where did just Sae go again? Arrghh.. there she is! She's more interested in those cars than me? And she calls this our date?

"Please stop the fighting, the two of you." I told them.
"Since Narumi-san works for Tomo~mi and Ryu is Philip's friend, I'll ask you both straight to the point. Can you confirm if they're engaged?"

"Philip you mean Sonozaki-san? Oh, that good looking guy! He's always around lately, but I never heard of the engagement thing. Maybe it's confidential." She answered.

"You have a crush on Philip? Forget it, he'll never fall for someone like you."
She just ignored what he said.
"Anyways, I don't know either. I just heard that engagement news from my friends. They weren't sure about it too." He responded.

I sighed. This is useless. I thought.

"May we know why you are asking this?"

"It's a long story. We're doing this for our friend who care so much for Tomo~mi. Well technically, they like each other." I tried to explain.

"So Kasai-san is in love, that explains why she looks happier than before. I work with her everyday that's why I can tell if she's changed. She treats me nice, so I think it's not a bad idea if I help her."

"Philip is a good friend, too. Arranged marriage really sucks. It's better for him to marry a girl who can love him back. Hmm, this is interesting. Wait, is your friend really with us?" He's talking about Sae who's busy looking at the car models.

"This is actually her plan, she's just a little disturbed at the moment." I said.
"Sae! I thought you're going to investigate! So what the heck are you still doing there?!" I called her.

"Look, Sayaka! These cars are so amazing!" She just continued on what she's doing. She's hopeless.

"Maybe I know how to get her attention." Ryu seems to have an idea.
"Hey Miyazawa-san! I told you I can let you test drive my car!"

Sae immediately came back to our place when she heard what Ryu said.
"Really?!"She asked and he nodded.

"Sayaka, can I? Can I?"
She asked my permission like I'm her mother.

"Okay, let's go somewhere else to discuss things." I agreed.

"How about you chief? Are you coming?"
Ryu asked Narumi-san.

"Chief? Are you talking to me?"

"Yes! It suits you well, 'cause you sounded like you're the boss here!" He teased her.

"Whatever! Since the real boss isn't around and I'm not doing anything right now.. Okay, count me in." She joined us.

We went down the building where Ryu's car is parked.

"We gain new friends, isn't it amazing, Sayaka! So this calls for a double date!"

"Double date? So who are partners then?" Ryu asked.

"Me and Sayaka ofcourse!"

"Are you two..." He is about ask something.

"Yes we are!" But Sae interrupted him.

"Sae, he's still not finished with what he's asking!" I said.

"Ryu, your car is amazing!" She just ignored me when she saw his car.
"So how do you call it?" Sae asked curiously.

"Diablossa." He answered.

"Cool name!" Then she gets on the driver's seat.

"So, if they're already partners. It leaves the two of us then, chief."
Ryu is talking to Narumi-san.

"Stop calling me that you Mr-knows-it-all!" She shouted back at him.
"He's handsome but he's so full of himself.. what a waste.."
She mumbled to herself in a very low voice.

"Did you say something? I think heard you talked." He asked.

"Nothing!!!" Then she got inside the car too.

"I have a feeling that I'll be frequently visiting Kasai Co. Ltd. from now on." He smiled.

"You seem pretty interested with Narumi-san. Just an advice, don't be too harsh on her." I told him.

"I'm just concern with their clients! She might ruin the name of their company, you know!" He laughed.
"How about Miyazawa-san? You like her too, right? I caught you glare back at me in the cafe before." He grinned.

I felt I blush in that moment. He can actually read me.
"I also have an advice for you, Akimoto-san." He said.
"Don't just wait and let the cars win her heart over you." He smiled.

I didn't answer him. Maybe he's right, because I'm starting to get jealous of Sae's new interest now. I get in his car.

"Miyazawa-san, you know how to drive right?"
He sits infront beside Sae.

"I drive in car racing games. It's my first time to drive a real car!"
Sae answered as she started the car engine.

"Whaaaaatt???!!" We all shouted.

"Chotto matte yo... ABUNAI!!!"

TBC

hope they're all still alive for the next chapters!
thanks for reading! :)

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 Saeyaka Special Plus!
« Reply #85 on: April 02, 2014, 01:41:11 PM »
Lolololol hope they're not dead.

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 Saeyaka Special Plus!
« Reply #86 on: April 02, 2014, 02:14:42 PM »
 :luvluv2: Sae and Sayaka on a date

Narumi and Ryu interaction was relly fun

Hope they survive with Sae driving

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 Saeyaka Special Plus!
« Reply #87 on: April 02, 2014, 08:47:34 PM »
Even though they're dating, Sayaka seems like the mother to Sae's hyperactive kid...  :hiakhiakhiak:
The SaeYaka extras soothe the soul from all this drama. :nya:
It's interesting how hush hush this engagement is... :dunno:
Poor Tomo~mi, she must be heartbroken with what happened at the cafe...  :on cloudeye:
TomoTomo needs to stop being stubborn and just be honest with each other!  :frustrated:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 Saeyaka Special Plus!
« Reply #88 on: April 03, 2014, 04:16:23 PM »
LOL!!! Sae is actually going to drive the expensive car just by 'learning' from racing games?!  :cool2: :grr: Good Luck to those on board!  :prayers:

SaeYaka are too cute together?! Is Sae actually pretending to be dense to Sayaka's questionings to their'date'?

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 04/02/14 Saeyaka Plus!
« Reply #89 on: April 05, 2014, 04:12:08 AM »
Saeyak is dating >////<!!!!

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch 9.5 04/02/14 Saeyaka Plus!
« Reply #90 on: April 06, 2014, 10:00:34 AM »
hi guys! thank you again for your comments!  :bow:
i'm starting to think of posting stories about the other pairings too :?
well, i'm still thinking about it though :)

The Sweetest Taste
Chapter 10


“Thank you! Please come back again!”
I said as the cafe customers left.

The cafe’s boring without those two around. I sighed. I reached for my pocket and put out the key Tomo gave me. I'm staring at it while rubbing it with my thumb. I think it's not a bad idea if I use you today. I'll just close the cafe early since only few customers are coming.

Before going straight to her apartment, I went to the grocery first to buy something to cook for her. I'm planning to surprise her tonight when she goes home from work. I'll prepare her a special dinner to make it up for what I have said yesterday.

I arrived at her place and opened the door using the spare key she gave me. Her apartment is really spacious. I put down the groceries I bought on the kitchen table. I was about to start my cooking when I heard someone coughing. The sound is coming from Tomo's room. I looked inside and I was surprised to see her lying on her bed.

T-Tomo? Why is she still here? She didn't go to her work today? I came near her, she's sweating. I touched her, she's burning! She has a fever. Why is it no one's taking care of her?

“Tomochin? You're here... I'm happy.”
She smiled as she opened her eyes and saw me. Then she coughed.

“Tomo, you baka! Why didn't you call me? You should have told me you're sick!”
I yelled at her, but I'm not mad. I'm just so worried.

“I'm already sick and yet you’re still scolding me, chiyuu..” She pouted.
She’s still charming even though she's burning with fever.

“It’s alright if you didn’t tell me, but at least you should have told anyone else."
I said in a lower voice.
"You’re all alone here, what if something worse happens to you?"

“I told my secretary that I can’t to go work today because I don’t feel well.” She answered.

“You still worry about your work. What I mean is your parents, I thought they've arrived?”

“They’re doing some important business matter, I don’t want to disturb them.”
She coughed again.

“Oh, Tomo...” This girl makes me worry so much.
I noticed her clothes is the same as what she was wearing yesterday.
"You need to change clothes." I said as I look for warm and comfortable clothes. It's already cold season that's why people can catch cold easily. I turned up the room heater.

I helped her change. I took off her clothes and wiped the sweat on her body using a towel drenched with warm water. I blushed, this is the first time I see her bare curves... and she's so... Arrrgghh! What am I thinking? She's sick for God's sake! I tried to distract myself. I put new clothes on her and laid her back again on her bed.

“I need to get some medicines. You also need to eat something to have your energy back."
I was about to leave her bed when she grabbed my hand.
“Tomo... I'm not going anywhere, okay?” I touched her hair and kissed her forehead.
“Just stay here, I'll be back.” I whispered.

I went to the kitchen, thank God I bought some soup to cook from the grocery earlier. I quickly prepared the soup and also found medicines from her medicine kit.

I came back to her.
“Here... can you sit up? Have some soup.”
I blew on it first to cool it down then gave her a spoonful on her mouth.

“Oishii... Tomochin, thank you." She said as she eats the soup I made for her.
"It feels more homey when you're here. I feel safe and secured."
I'm happy to hear those words from her. I want her to feel better.

"After you finish your soup, drink your medicines next."
I told her as I was gently rubbing her back, and she nodded.

"Are you cold?" I asked as I checked her temperature.
Her fever went down a little. She laid back on her bed. I took off my sweater and lay beside her. I offered her a hug.

"What are doing, chiyuu?" She was startled.

"I'm keeping you warm." I answered.

"But you might get my cold." I saw her blushed.
I know she's just concern about me.

"Ssshh, I don't care..."
I put my arms around her, her head lying on my chest. I hugged her tightly.

"Tomochin is warm..." She said.

I don't care too, even if I get hurt in the end. As long as I can be with her like this. I can't ask her about the engagement thing now. Maybe next time when she's feeling okay.

"Tomo... I'm so sorry about how I reacted yesterday."
I apologized to her.

"I understand, chiyuu.." She answered.

It feels so much good to hug her like this. I want to be the one who'll take care of her. I want to protect her always.

“Tomochin...“ She spoke again.

“Hmm?”

“…do you love me too?”

I was surprised with her sudden question. But I know in my heart I so much do.
“I'll answer that when you're already well.” I responded.

“That's unfair, chiyuu...”
She's so cute, I want to cuddle her more.

“So, go to sleep now and take a rest. I'll still be here, when you wake up.”
I kissed her hair and hugged her tighter.

“I love you…” She said before she sleeps.

I know Tomo... I know.

-

“Achoo!!!” I sneezed for the nth time.

"Hey Tomochin, you don't feel well? Did you do something else yesterday?"
Sayaka asked with concern.

"The weather's just cold, that's all." I answered.
"And you guys, what did you do yesterday?"

"Nothing much..." Sayaka answered as she looked at Sae.
"We just spent the day in an arcade center, playing car racing games."

"Oh, that was... cute."
Her answer was actually something I never thought of.

I bring out my phone to check up on Tomo. I sent her a message.

-

To: Tomo
How are you feeling now?
From: Tomochin

To: Tomochin
Much better than yesterday (^^)
Don't forget, you owe me an answer! (^_-)
From: Tomo

-

I smiled as I read her reply. I want her to know my feelings. I don't care anymore of what lies ahead of us. I now know why the love I have for her is different, because this time I won't be giving up. I will fight for her... For us.

-

To: Tomo
Then I'll give you my answer tomorrow.
From: Tomochin

TBC

tomochin, why become sooo sweet here?
that's why i love tsundere people :heart:
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« Last Edit: April 07, 2014, 03:29:28 AM by ainivel »

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #91 on: April 06, 2014, 10:55:55 AM »
Aaaah~ Tomochin's soooo sweet! How she acted around sick Chiyuu~
But... I'm curious... Is Chiyuu really going to marry Philip? Or it's someone else and Chiyuu just helping? :dunno:
Hahah, Sae and cars! I'd laughed hard!
Sayaka's jealous~~~ :heart:
Thank you for the update! I'm looking for more! :heart:

P.S. Gomen, I didn't comment the last two chapters :bow:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #92 on: April 06, 2014, 11:24:24 AM »
Quote
To: Tomo
Then I'll give you my answer tomorrow.
From: Tomochin

humm... I don't think you will let love story has an easy way unless you want to end it in next one or two chapters   :smoke:

Thank for updating  :)




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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #93 on: April 06, 2014, 11:32:07 AM »
yay tomochin taking care of tomo-mi  :P

wonder how tomo-mi's parents are gonna like her and tomochin...

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #94 on: April 06, 2014, 03:12:28 PM »
Awww so sweet Tomo take care of Kasai

Kyaaa cant wait for the confess scence

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #95 on: April 06, 2014, 09:23:19 PM »
Tomochin went to go see Tomo~mi!  :luvluv2:
I wonder, will Tomochin will get to give her an answer or...  :on_plug:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #96 on: April 06, 2014, 11:56:11 PM »
Tomochin so sweet  :nya:

TomoTomo moment  :shy1:

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #97 on: April 07, 2014, 01:08:41 AM »
be strong tomochin ~

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #98 on: April 08, 2014, 03:14:38 AM »
Hi!!! What a good ff thanks so much for this tomotomo I love this couple as well thanks again!!! ☆ ~('▽^人)

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Re: [TomoTomo] The Sweetest Taste Ch.10 04/06/14 Update!
« Reply #99 on: April 08, 2014, 02:57:10 PM »
Tomochin, you are too sweet!!! OMG!!! :luvluv1: :luvluv2:

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